Chapters Evening Glitter, often just shortened to Eve, smiled as she walked through Ponyville. It was the first time she'd actually been here, but she knew her destination. She was going to the library. More precisely, she was going to see her old classmate, Twilight Sparkle. An Element of Harmony and the Element of Magic. Sadly, the library didn't live up to its name. As she came closer, she could hear some loud yelling coming from inside, and much louder crying.
"I thought libraries were supposed to be silent... *sigh* then again, this is Twilight... A world of surprises maybe await." she sighed, entering. She stared at the scene before her.
"WAAAH! I'm sorry, Twilight! Really, really sorry! It was an accident!" cried a lavender pony, her blond mane and tail flying as she floated in the air. The same aura that held her also held a book that was whacking away at her rear end. And it was caused by a familiar unicorn.
"You spilled all the ink I have, and half of it has stained the books I have here! Do you know how hard it will be to clean them!?" Twilight scolded.
"Ooooh my~" Eve giggled, watching the scene. Twilight looked over, and then flushed bright red, the book and pony dropping, the young mare giving a yelp as she fell down, trying to rub her sore flank with her tail. "E-EVE! W-What are you doing here?!" she said in shock.
“Well, Princess Celestia told me you were here. Since I happen to be looking for a possible new home, I was coming here so thought I'd stop by."
"I-I haven't seen you forever! I can't believe you're here! I-" She paused as she heard the other pony whimper and blushed even more. "I-I-I can explain all of this, really!"
"To me it looks like the old naughty Twilight is giving a filly what was given to her when we were in school." Eve giggled
"I-I was never spanked in school!" Twilight said, blushing more.
"Twilight got spanked as a filly?" the mare asked, looking at the librarian
"Oooh yeah. Twilight, don't lie. You have NOT forgotten the chalk incident."
Twilight blushed. "T-That was an accident! And I was trying to impress Princess Celestia!" she said back. Well, it'd gotten her attention from the Princess alright...
"Well... It worked. I still say you deserve it. Every single swat." Eve said, smiling. She put a hoof on Twilight's head. "But look at you, all grown up! I feel like a big sister!"
“C-Cut it out!" Twilight said, blushing and pulling away. "And some big sis. You were a lot worse in school then me. Need I remind you of the torched final exams?" she added with a glare.
"That was totally an accident. But I didn't whine and make excuses I'm proud to say." Eve giggled.
"The Princess was going to paddle me! Do you know what it's like for your beloved mentor to spank you in front of all your peers?! I thought it was crazy for a filly like you to just walk up to your teacher and let her punish you." Twilight said.
"Hey, I grew up with Vinyl before I met you. Ya can't forget that. How else would be such a hardflank?" she said smiling.
Twilight gave her a bored look. "Ugh, whatever. School memories aside, it's nice to see you again." She then glanced over to their earth pony friend. "Oh, this is Spankie-"
"TWILIGHT!" she whined, blushing redder then her.
"Oops! Sorry. This is my friend Crimson Petal."
"Eh, Spankie?" Eve asked, confused.
"Uh, kind of a pet name for her. Some of my friends use it, but I try to call her correctly unless she's in trouble." Twilight said. As if to reinforce it, Crimson was still rubbing her flank with her tail.
"Hm, should be called Crimson Flank rather than Petal..." she muttered, eyeing her.
"Actually, Pinkie and Dash like to call her Spankie Flanks." Twilight corrected.
"TWILIGHT, THAT'S ENOUGH!" Crimson said, shoving her.
"Uh, right. Sorry." she said with a sheepish grin.
"Its okie. People called Twilight 'Moonshine' after she had to bend over the teacher's desk with her flank facing the class and--"
"ANYWAY!" Twilight interrupted. "This is Evening Glitter. She's a friend from school in Canterlot."
"Yeah, I kinda gathered." Crimson said.
"So what'd she do?" Eve asked.
Crimson blushed and looked aside as Twilight gave her a look. The librarian then sighed and used her magic to take out three shelves worth of books, all covered in some amount of black ink. "I'm afraid Crimson... spilled something." she said, obviously still sounding rather upset.
"Ah. Want me to get more?" Evening Glitter offered.
"Actually, no. I want to see if I can get this ink washed off or something." Twilight said. "Still, why don't you look after the library while I'm out?"
"Oh, I could-" Crimson spoke up but then paused as she saw a certain book floating again. "Um, never mind." she said with a nervous smile.
"Alright. That works too. Gonna take Red Cheeks with you?" Eve shrugged.
"It's Crimson!" she huffed, blushing.
"The last thing I want is her getting in more trouble and me needing to spank her again." Twilight said. "You mind looking after her?"
"M-m-me? Twi, I-I'm not good at looking after people if you've forgotten." Eve stuttered, nervous.
"I'm not asking you to babysit. I still remember when I let you borrow my Smarty Pants doll." Twilight said, glaring at the last line. "Just look after the library and make sure Crimson doesn't ruin anything while I'm out."
"Twi, don't you remember with Princess Celestia's bird?!"
"Um, what?" she asked, a bit surprised and not expecting her to know that.
".. Nothing, never mind." she said quickly, thinking of a different incident altogether. "Well, I guess I can watch her... She won't do anything weird will she?"
"No, she doesn't misbehave or anything. She just has some bad luck... or... always bad luck." Twilight said. "That's why Rarity made her that dress."
"O-Okay, Twilight! Why don't you get going now, before those books stain?" Crimson said, nudging her out the door.
"I'll be back later today." Twilight said, before the door closed.
"Later, Moonshine." Eve called after her, giggling. She looked at Crimson and sighed. "So... What now?"
“Um... what was your nickname in school?" she asked curiously.
"Heh... I had a few. Mean ones, nice ones. Which do you wanna hear?"
"What was your spanking nickname though?" Crimson asked her.
"Eh... Heh..." she blushed a bit.
"Come on, what was it? You heard mine." Crimson insisted.
"..... Summer Glow." she said, smiling though she was still blushing
"Really, how come?" Crimson asked, tilting her head.
"Well, my little ability had an... interesting twist whenever I got spanked."
"Oh yeah, what is your special talent?" she asked, moving for a better look at her cutie mark.
The torch on her rear end didn't give much info. "Anywhere dark in the library we can be in? I'll show you there."
“Uh, Twilight's basement?" she suggested, nodding towards a door.
"That works." she said, walking down. "We gotta be careful. I'm sure Twilight has some really important stuff down here that she'd be upset if we messed up."
"O-Okay, hang on." she said, guiding her through the door. "Uh... jump over these wires..... Big machine over there... Okay, this is an open spot." Crimson knew this place by heart because she'd tripped over (and broken and gotten in trouble for) most of the stuff in here.
"Impressive. Okay, here goes." she said, and then a light suddenly began shining off of her body, being a tanish color.
"Wow, I've never seen a unicorn do that kind of magic." Crimson said, staring.
"Yeah. Kinda my specialty. Thing is, I can mix it up a bit. Watch." she said, the glow turning purple, and an amazing scent swept over them. "I can make it smell sweet."
"It smells lovely." Crimson said with a smile. "What about that nickname, Summer Glow?"
"It has the area past my flank as red light." she said with a blush.
"Really? I wanna see that!" she said cheerfully.
"Not happening Spankie Flanks."
"Come on, please???" she begged.
"How would I show you that?"
"You can make yourself light up normally? Can't you just change the color back there anyway?" Crimson asked.
"No. I can't change the color without it causing something. It'll only be red if my flank is."
"Huh? So spankings make your flank glow red?" she asked.
"It's hard to explain, filly."
"That's what it sounds like though."
"Enough about my flank
"Fine." she said with groan.
"Let's head back up. And fast."
"Why? What's the rush?" Crimson asked.
"Well, cuz I don't want anything broken and a lot of this stuff looks like I can't afford to pay for it."
"Fine. Though I still think it'd be funny to see a pony's flank glow after a spanking." Crimson muttered.
"Oh really?!" she asked crossly.
"Yeah, I've never seen that before." she said plainly, forgetting how she memorized the basement.
"So you think watching me with a hot flank would be funny?!"
"Yeah. Everyone always teases me after I've gotten-" CRASH! There was the sound of something falling over, plus the sound of multiple things doing the same.
".................."
"Ow.... Uh, think that was the scanner. Can you turn on the light Eve?" Crimson asked, a bit nervously.
“You broke... YOU BROKE SOMETHING!!" She yelled.
"Y-Yeah... um, can you leave the light off actually?" she asked, a bit more concerned.
"Twilight is gonna kill me!"
"...Sorry." she said meekly.
"Oh man... Y'know what? Come upstairs."
"O-Okay." Crimson said, the sound of her crawling out of the wreckage she made being heard before she started going up the stairs.
"Follow. Me." Eve said, anger clear in her voice. Crimson swallowed nervously, and did so Eve went into the kitchen and suddenly a large spoon floated over. "This should work."
"S-Should work for what?" she asked, even more nervous.
"... I'm going to bake some pie." she answered sarcastically
Crimson didn't believe her and started backing away, her blonde tail over her flank. "E-Eve, before you do anything-"
Crimson suddenly began floating in the air. "Before nothin'!"
"EEP! W-Wait, wait! Twilight spanked me already!" she said, her tail still down.
"Not hard enough it seems!" she yelled, her tail rising as the spoon began to swat at her flank.
"OW! OWIE! Eve, that stings!" Crimson whined, kicking her hooves in the air. Eve sighed, just letting the spoon work. She was a bit better at magic than Twilight and didn't need to focus as much. "Ouch! I-I'm sorry! You just distracted me!" Crimson cried, though that probably wasn't a smart thing to say.
"Are you blaming me for it?!"
"N-No! I-I was just busy answering you so I didn't pay attention-" The spoon began swinging hard against her sitspots, cutting her off. "OWOWOWOWOW!!!!! Not there, anywhere but there!" she wailed.
"Even HERE?!" she asked the brush getting her actual cutie mark!
"YOW! EVE, THAT HURTS!" Crimson yelped.
"Oh really? Then something must be wrong, cuz it should do ALOT more than hurt!"
"I-It does hurt! Really! I mean it!" Crimson said, wiggling her backside to try and keep her from spanking there again.
"Stop squirming, Spankie Flanks! Or this will just get worse!"
"S-Shut up! I'm not Spankie Flanks!" Crimson said, her rear end already stinging really bad.
"Spankie, stop talking back to me, filly!"
"OWIE! B-But that's not my name! A-And I'm not a filly, I'm a young mare!" she sniffled.
"Crimson, LAST warning!"
"OW! OUCH! Eve, this isn't fair though!" she argued.
"That's it." she sighed suddenly a bigger, WOODEN spoon floated over and joined in. One spanked one cheek while the other spoon worked the other one.
"OW! OUCH! OWIE! OUCH! Eve, (OW!) that hurts! (YOUCH!)" Crimson was kicking harder than ever at the double spanking she was getting.
"Stop complaining and take it before I get a third!"
"NOOOO!!! TWO SPOONS ALREADY HURT! REALLY!" Crimson sobbed.
"Then no more complaining!"
Crimson tried to nod, but getting twice a spanking like that made her continue crying, plus she kept wiggling whichever side was getting the wooden spoon. Eve continued spanking her few a bit longer, just watching. Crimson was soon bawling at the top of her longs, her flank absolutely burning now. Eve then stopped and floated Crimson to her.
Crimson continued wailing even after she stopped. Eve put a hoof on her back and hugged her. "It's ok, Crimson. You're good now." Crimson buried her head into her neck and continued sobbing. Eve rubbed her back and kept holding her. Eventually, she started to calm down, just giving the occasional sniffle. "Now, what have you learned?"
"T-To be careful not to break things..." she sniffled.
"And?
"And to be respectful."
"Aaaaand?"
“Um... for saying it was your fault?"
"Good.
"I-I don't need to go in the corner or anything, right?" she asked tearily.
"Eh, nah. You got a pretty hard spanking. I think you've learned enough."
Crimson nodded and tried to gently rub with her tail. "Did you have to use another spoon?" she asked her.
"Yeah, I did. You stopped arguing didn't you?"
"B-But you smacked me over on my Cutie Mark too." she whined, looking at one of the red flowers.
"Well, would you have stopped complaining if I didn't?"
"...But it hurt." she said childishly.
Eve sighed. "C'mon, let's go wait for Twi."
"Um, what are we gonna do about the basement?" she asked.
"I'll explain it. I know how to handle her."
"Okay. You gave me two spankings already, plus what Twilight did before." she said, whimpering as she kept rubbing.
"Yeah, I know sweetie."
".....Would you really have used a third spoon?" she asked with a whimper.
"Yup. Sure woulda." she said with a grin
"B-But just one of them really hurt! Wouldn't that be too much?!" she said.
"Not to stop you from complaining."
"But that's three spankings at once!" she said.
"Are you complaining again? Maybe I SHOULD tell Twilight."
Crimson DOVE to her and wrapper her front legs around Eve's front hooves. "NO! YOU CAN'T! She'll give me a MAGIC spanking then!" she pleaded.
"Then no more complaining like a filly?" she asked, looking at Crimson.
"No! I'll be a good little pony, promise!" she said worriedly.
“Good." she said, looking at the door when she heard it open.
"Okay, I'm back." Twilight said. Crimson immediately got up and stood next to Eve so her flank was hidden.
"Welcome back. Get whatcha needed?" Eve asked casually
"Yes, I've got more ink, better cases, and the books are cleaned." Twilight said. "How did things go here?"
"Eh, I kinda went into your basement and accidently tripped over a wire. Sorry."
"Oh, is everything alright down there?" she asked, looking at her.
"Yeah. I dunno if its broken, though." she replied, glancing back
"Really? Well, let me go check." she said, heading downstairs.
"Uh, what now?" Crimson asked nervously.
"Oh, I'd say leave. I'll cover for you."
"Y-You sure? Won't she spank you?"
"Twi? Me? No chance, no how!" she laughed
"Well..."
"What happened down here?!" Twilight's voice echoed up the stairs.
"Okay,thankssomuch.Bye!" Crimson said, running out just before Twilight came stomping back up.
"I told ya. I tripped. Look at all the wires all over Twi!"
"Did you think to turn on the lights first?!" she pointed out.
"There are lights?"
"Yes Eve, there are! At the bottom of the stairs!"
"Well I didn't know. Look Twi, just calm down."
"I am not calming down! I said to look after Crimson Petal because I didn't want anything damaged! And yet you did that yourself!" Twilight said.
"Yeah... Sorry Twi. Look... H-here..." she sighed, a book levitating to Twilight as Eve turned. "There... Let's just do this like old times..."
"Alright then." Twilight said with a nod, taking the book with her power. "Though... I think Summer's Glow needs more than just a book." She then started using her magic. Crimson had felt bad for running out and went back to a window. Despite what Eve said, she was going to get spanked.
"Alright, alright... Sure thing Moonshine." she said with a smirk
"Oh, your name was always the more appropriate one." Twilight said back before smiling. "And I've learned some stuff since then." Crimson stared as the book she was holding took on a bright pink color like Twilight's magic. Eve was going to get a magic spanking like she feared.
"Oh c'mon. Magic? You're showing off."
"It's my special talent after all." Twilight said proudly before the book smacked Eve on the rear, her magic increasing the strength. Eve grunted but didn't make a move. Crimson stared with wide eyes as Twilight kept spanking.
"Ah... Ouch.... GAH!" Eve was actually hardly showing how much it hurt, though it was evident that it did
"So Summer, when do I get to see your glow?" Twilight teased with a smile.
"You're back there! You tell OW! You tell me!"
"Not sure! You never got a spanking like this. Still, I remember that whenever the teacher finished, there was a little red sun shining in the classroom." Twilight said, smacking her sitspots.
“OW! I remember that I wasn't crying then! And I won't cry now!" she replied, forcing tears back
"That's fine. We just have a dozen more anyway." Twilight said. Crimson couldn't believe Eve was taking all that without crying. Eve was panting hard throughout the entire thing. In the end, a single tear slid from her eye.
When she finished, Twilight put the book down and smiled. "And here's Summer's Glow, just like a lightning bug."
"Yeah, yeah. Sure thing. Now that I know you're here... I think Ponyville might just be the place for me to move to."
"Why not? This is a pretty nice place. And I can introduce you to my friends too." Twilight said.
"Sweet. Well... Mind if I stay here a bit? Don't wanna go out with my flank like this." she said, rubbing with her tail
"Yeah, most ponies here would be rather surprised to see a pony walking around with a glowing red flank." Twilight said.
"You can stay here in the guest room."
"Thanks. By the way, where's that dragon you got?"
"Spike? He's actually in Canterlot on royal business right now." she said. "But then, I doubt I'd have wanted him here for all this."
"Yeah. Gotta say the same. Well, I'm gonna be in... Where exactly is the guest room?"
"We used to, so no. It's just that I prefer not sleeping with people. I just get a weird feeling at the thought. Not sure why."
"Well, it's fine. You can use the guest room, and if you want, tomorrow I can give you a tour of Ponyville." Twilight told her.
"That sounds nice. Later Twi~" she said, waving as she went to her room
"Later Eve. Nice to see you again." Twilight said, waving goodnight.
Author's Note
Toron: This was originally an RP between the two users of this account. It took alot of editing work an after awhile, Zeno ended up getting lazy and just decided for us to post it like this. This was pretty much specifically for fun, feel free to comment if you want but honestly we're posting it so we don't lose it. Evening Glitter belongs to Zeno, Crimson Petal belongs to Toron. Enjoy if you want to read it. Might go back and decide to edit the rest of it so its good if Zeno stops being lazy.
Zeno: I'd complain, but that constitutes actually having to DO something. Read and Review if you want, ya'll!
Evening Glitter sighed as she looked at the 'map' that she was given by one of Twilight's friends. The one with the ridiculously long name that had been shortened to just "Pinkie Pie" had given her a hand drawn map. If one could call scribbles and randomly placed, poorly drawn buildings that.
"Okay, this time I'm sure to nail it." Dash said, grinning as she eyed the open sky in front of her. She shot forward starting to do forward loops that gradually brought her towards the ground in long circles.
Eve didn't see any of this, trying to read the images on the map. "Man... Twilight's got some unique friends... First the really quiet one and now a really loud one... That doesn't know that I can't make heads or tails of--"
Dash's eyes widened as when she was supposed to land on her hooves, she saw another pony on the road and crashed on top of her. "YEOW!" Eve cried out when Rainbow Dash impacted her. "Owie.." she groaned, then made her magic pick up the map and she dusted herself off with it. "Are you ok?" she asked Dash
"Yeah, think so." Dash groaned getting up. "Well, at least I didn't break my wing this time."
"What happened, exactly?" Eve asked
"Uh, was working on a new trick. Guess I should thank you since you broke my fall." Dash said, rubbing the back of her head sheepishly
"It’s cool. Maybe you should scope the area out a bit better next time though." she suggested politely
"Oh please! I'm the best flier in Equestria! I don't need to worry about stuff like that." she said, shrugging it off.
"Uh, you just crashed into me. What if it had been a filly?" she said, giving her a look
"I would've been able to dodge a filly. You're a bigger target." she said bluntly.
"Hey, you make it sound like I'm at fault!"
"No, just saying you’re hard to miss, literally." Dash said.
"Well you need to take your share of the blame. One of us could have been really hurt!"
"Eh, I survived last time." she said nonchalantly. "You almost done? I want to get back to my practice."
"You know, you didn't even say sorry." Eve said, glaring
"Oh yeah. My bad, uh... Actually, who are you anyway?" Dash asked.
"My name is Evening Glitter." she answered. "And you are?
"Rainbow Dash. I'm the weather manager for Ponyville, and fastest flier in Equestria." she said proudly.
"YOU'RE Rainbow Dash?!" she asked in shock. "Impossible!"
"Oh, you've heard of me?" she asked with a grin.
"Yes. From my friend Twilight Sparkle. But from what I've seen, you're rude, accusing and careless. Nothing like what she said. And manager of the weather? HAH! As if!"
"Oh, so you're another egghead." Dash said with a bored tone. "Wait, what did she say about me anyway?"
"A kind, and loyal though eccentric friend. Though, I don't see kindness from you at all yet. And I am NOT an egghead!"
"Hey, I'm the most loyal pony there is. And I am SO kind to others! You just caught me when I was a bit distracted." Dash said.
"Oh sure. And placing blame on everypony else is a kind thing to do?" she scoffed
"When did I ever blame you for anything!?" Dash asked, getting in her face.
"Get out of my face! And you tried to shift all blame for YOU-" at this, she poked Rainbow Dash in the chest with her hoof. "Crashing into me!"
"I said you're big and easy for me to crash into! I never said it wasn't my fault!" Dash snapped.
"That 's what it SOUNDED like!"
"Then listen more closely next time! That's what Twilight's good at." she said.
"Ugh... Whatever. Go... Pretend to monitor the weather or whatever it is you think you do." Eve said, turning and walking
"Hey, I'm a great weatherpony!" she said, flying after her.
"Of course you are. More like a Rainbow Dash fanpony who THINKS she can do that. Because I don't think Twilight's friends could be like you."
"Oh yeah? Tell me what to do and I'll prove it right now." Dash said, looking at her.
"Hmm... How about you make it rain for a few seconds."
"No prob!" Dash said, flying straight up and grabbing a cloud. She then put it over Eve and stomped on it to get out the rain.
"AH! Hey!" Eve yelped, jumping aside
"What? You said to make it rain! I was just following orders." Dash said, smiling and shrugging as she then sat on the cloud to relax.
"Why YOU!" Eve shouted, RD getting grabbed by magic
"H-Hey!" Dash yelped trying to grab the cloud. "Let go of me!"
"I don't think so! You need a good lesson in manners!" Eve said back, looking around.
"A what?! What does that mean?" she asked, still trying to fly away Eve stared at a tree, long branches stemming off. Suddenly, a large branch snapped off of it, being controlled by magic. "HEY!!! What are you doing with that?!" she asked, flying fast but not going anywhere.
"Oh just... THIS!" she yelled, the branch giving a hard slap to Rainbow Dash's flank.
"YOUCH! Hey, cut that out!" she said frantically.
"No! I think you deserve a good LOOONG spanking!" Eve scolded, the branch spanking hard and fast.
“OW OW OW! You can't spank me! I'm not a foal!!!" Dash yelled, kicking rapidly.
"I know! You act way to bad and rude to be one!"
"N-No! I'm too old for a spanking!" she lied.
"Oh? So you haven't been spanked recently by that Applejack friend of Twilight's?" she asked, raising an eyebrow
Dash looked back, blushing. "H-How did you-"
"Twilight and another friend I made here. Point is this. YOU. ARE. NOT. TOO. OLD!" she yelled, the branch giving a spank to her cutie mark with each word
"OWIE! OWIE! That's too hard, stop it!" Dash cried, expecting to see some more red on her cutiemark later.
"When you look more like the color of an apple on your flank, I'll chill out. For now, enjoy your spanking!"
"N-No, I don't want to!" she said, trying to cover her rear with her tail. The spanking stopped briefly as Eve glared.
"Move your tail."
"B-But it'll hurt." Dash whimpered, sniffling as she looked back.
"You know, I'm better at magic than Twilight. If you don't move your tail, I'll make this worse."
"Please... can't you just stop now?" Dash begged, looking at her.
Eve went behind rainbow to see the state her flank was in, not answering yet. Dash's flank had a number of red lines crossing it, but they were individual. Same could be said for her Cutie Marks, five red lines going through each. "... Nope, raise the tail."
"Please, no!!!!" Dash begged, kicking her hooves.
"Either raise the tail or get what Crimson got."
"W-What does that mean?" she asked, her voice trembling.
"Two implements at once. Look, just a few more and we'll be done. Wanna make it worse on yourself?"
".....No." Dash said quietly, raising her tail.
“Good." Eve said, then began landing harder spanks than before.
Dash started crying louder. "OWIE! I'm sorry, I'm sorry!" she wailed.
Eve gave three extra stinging swats to her sitspots and then slowly lowered Dash, but didn't let her go. "Now, why did you get spanked?"
"F-For being rude... and blaming you." Dash sobbed.
"Good." Eve said, letting her go and hugging her.
Dash hugged her back, still crying.
"Shhh.. It’s ok, it’s over now..." Dash continued hugging her and crying for a couple minutes before she calmed down. "You better now?" Eve asked, looking at her
"I-I guess." she sniffled, looking back at her flank.
"So, if you're really Rainbow Dash... Is it true that you're aspiring to join Spitfire's group?" she asked
"Heh... yeah. Even got to spend the day with them after winning the Young Flier's Competition." she said, managing a grin.
"Cool... I assume you don't know by this time, than you must not have been told." she mumbled. "Okay, well, I have to try to decipher this map Pinkie Pie made for me."
"What's that mean?" Dash asked.
Eve levitated the map in front of her, showing Pinkie's apparent view of the
"Uh, maybe you should let me show you around town. What'd you say before though?" she asked.
"... Oh! Oh nothing, just muttering to myself. Its totally nothing."
"Well, okay. So, anywhere you want to go? You're near Applejack's farm, but that's on the edge of town really." Dash said.
"Everywhere. So far, I know where Twilight's house is. And a bakery."
"Alright, well you probably should've just asked Pinkie to give you a tour, but I can show you Ponyville myself." Dash said.
"Just... don't tell anypony what happened. I've got a reputation to keep."
"Sure. If you can hide your flank then that's fine by me."
Sure." Eve said, following along on foot-- er, hoof. "Really... This will end up being one great experience..." she muttered to herself, smiling.
Author's Note
Zeno: Here's chapter 2. Edited solo by Toron. We worked together on chapter 1.
Toron: Yeah, all me. Next chapter will be all you, right?
Zeno: Yeah. Anyway, we were thinking of making a tumblr guys. But we don't exactly know how to draw MLP characters in vector or however its done.
Toron: Yeah, so mind giving us some tips? Greatly appreciated.
"So, your name is Fluttershy, right?" Eve asked, looking at the pony across from her.
Author's Note
Zeno: Alright! My time to shine, baby!
Toron: I don't like the title of this chapter.
Zeno: Well you were busy at the time I was posting it so I couldn't ask you for a better one. Not my fault.
Toron: Don't blame me for this. Be more creative.
Zeno: Meh, ignoring you. Hope you enjoy people!
