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Everypony's Looking

by lethalogica
One visit from an Apple cousin leads Big Mac and Rainbow to some interesting situations. (AKA, The Epic Misadventures of One Apple Farmer and an Aspiring Wonderbolt and a Bunch of Bad Luck)

When Braeburn forgets something in his visit to Ponyville, Rainbow Dash goes flying after his train to give it back, only to find out Big Mac is on the trip with him. With the Appleloosan going to the restrooms, they argue- until their car, the last one of the train's line, is mysteriously cut off. Lost in the desert, they now have to survive a ghost town, a pair of ancient, cursed bracelets, Las Pegasus, one very mad scientist, so much more, and, most of all, each other. But there may also be more to their story, like three pairs of hooves looming over their destiny. First, though, they're gonna need to get back to Ponyville.
It's my first MLP fan fiction, but I do so appreciate feedback.

Teen
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Romance
Comedy
Random
Adventure
 
ORB

16316 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read

5 Chapters:

  1. Chapter One: Through the Grape Vine- Er, Apple Branch 2013-01-07 05:47:31 UTC
    2631
  2. Chapter Two: 3:10 to Appleloosa 2013-01-09 06:18:31 UTC
    2772
  3. Chapter Three: Bloody Marey 2013-01-18 05:55:09 UTC
    2617
  4. Chapter Four: Sweet Dreams Are Made of Bits 2013-01-20 06:21:47 UTC
    2932
  5. Chapter Five: Good Luck, Charley Horse 2013-02-02 02:14:15 UTC
    5364