...Marking...

In all my life I had dreamt and fantasized of what it would feel like to hear a mare tell me that she loved me, and now that I have heard it it feels like all of time has stopped.

Rainbow, the pony that now hovered with her back toward me in my living room, had just said those three little words, and in doing so had brought my entire world to a halt.

"You, love me?" I asked.

"Yes" Rainbow replied, still with her back toward me.

"For how long?" Asking now, hoping that she wasn't just playing one of her pranks on me.

"An hour," she responded, now nervously tapping the tips of her hooves together.

"An hour ago?" If thats the case then she must be joking.

"No, an hour after we first met."

Rainbow now turned herself around but still didn't look up at me, her face was bright red and she began to use a hoof to twiddle with a lock of her rainbow main.

As overwhelmed with joy as I was, I couldn't help but think of the negatives that a relationship between a pony and a human would bring about.

I know, but Cain your usually so positive. But in this case I had to be realistic, what would all the ponies in town say?

They all looked up to Rainbow so much I would hate to see her diminish in their eyes because she chose to love me.

And what about her friends? and her parents?

What would they think about this kind of un-heard of relationship?
The last thing I wanted was to have Rainbow loose her friends or be disowned by her mother and father.

I had to talk to her about all this, she had to know what she was getting into. Rainbow was always one to do things first without thinking about the consequences, I had to be the voice of reason.

Your doing it again Cain.............I know, but its the right thing to do, so shut up.

"Rainbow, hearing you say that makes me happier than you can ever know, but Im a human and your a pony.............I just don't think that it will work ou-OUFF!

Before I could finish Rainbow slammed herself into my chest knocking me backwards onto the couch.
I looked up to see a blue pegasus looking back down at me with half closed bed room eyes and a little smirk on her muzzle.

"I love you," she stated simply completely ignoring my earlier statement.

"But Rainbow I-," before I could reply Rainbow hushed me by bringing a hoof to my lips and pressing against them gently.

She then brought her face closer to mine as she took her hoof away from my lips and proceeded to lay her body flat on top of mine. She was warm and soft, I slowly rested my left hand on the small of her back and gently rubbed the soft plush blue fur of her coat.

Her face was red but she brought it closer to mine, she closed her eyes a little more as she held her lips only an inch or two away from my own waiting for me to meet her half way.

Ahhhhhh to hoof with the consequences! Its time I took what I wanted, and what I wanted was the beautiful mare that was throwing herself at me.

She's mine!

I quickly closed my eyes and closed the gap between Rainbows lips and my own.

It was soft and warm, Rainbow breathed gently through her nose as did I.

She tilted her head slightly to the side and let out a little "mmmmm" as I pressed my lips against hers a little harder, from her being so close I could smell how good she smelt, it was a delicate blend of sweat and sweetness, as if a fresh breeze was blowing through a field of wild flowers.

I had never kissed before (come to think of it I didn't know if Rainbow had ever kissed before) and from what I had read the first kiss was usually awkward and sloppy, but not this one.

This was smooth and romantic, Rainbow swished her tail from left to right and even though my eyes were closed I could feel from the placement of my hand on her back that her wings were slowly unfurling and beginning to stand up on their own.

I had heard of this before, when a pegasus ponies wings become rigid and stand up like that, "wing boner" they called it.

Now pegasus stallions getting it I knew of for sure, but until now I had had no idea that mares got it to.
Regardless though, it was nice to see that Rainbow was enjoying this kiss so much.

Maybe more than I thought.

I became aware that something wet and strong was now pressing against my lips, trying to pry them open to gain access to my mouth, it was Rainbows tongue and it was covering my lower lip with saliva, ordering me to open my mouth and let it in.

It seemed that my first kiss was soon turning into my first "prench" kiss.

I slowly opened my mouth as Rainbow let herself in, I met her tongue with mine and almost instantly heard Rainbow take in a sharp breath through her nose, as if our two organs touching had elicited a spark of excitement in her mind.

The taste of her saliva was indescribable, sweet and just a little sour at the same time.
Our tongues swirled around together and Rainbow began to gently move her head in rhythm with the soft pink that was now exploring my mouth.

With her forelegs draped over my shoulders she gently pulled herself into me as her breathing quickened along with her tongues movements.

She began to pull her mouth off of mine but before she did she grabbed my lower lip in between her teeth and pulled it a little before releasing.

Her face was flush red and she was breathing so hard that I could almost see it billowing as she exhaled, her eyes were at half mast and the portion that was open was glazed over.

"So huff any more huff complaints?" she asked sounding obviously a little out of breath.

" Well my lips a little sore from that bite," I whispered sarcastically.

Rainbow shot me a little smirk before she gave my lower lip a gentle nip.

"Soooo, I guess this means that were, together................now?" Rainbow asked with a shy expression.

"It would appear so," I said in reply running my hand over her rainbow main.

Rainbow closed her eyes and nuzzled her head into my hand with a warm smile.
Just then, her eyes shot open and she gave me a serious look that took me by surprise.

"Theirs just one thing," she said narrowing her eyes into a non threatening glare.

"If you ever cheat on me, Ill make sure that you get rained on, all day every day, got it? She pursed her lips at me with a look that demanded my immediate response.

It goes without saying that I would never even dream of it.

"Its a deal." Rainbows expression instantly melted into one of love, and her eyes returned to their earlier bed room appearance.

She gave me a soft kiss, her lips still moist from our earlier make out session.
She then closed her eyes and nuzzled the side of her head into my chest and I immediately began running my hand over her multi colored mane whilst resting the other on her right wing which had recovered from its earlier erection.

Her feathers were just as soft, if not softer than her coat. It was hard to believe that something that felt so soft was so strong.
I closed my eyes and felt the warmth of the mare that was now gently napping on my chest, this moment was one of the happiest I had had in..................well, ever.

It wasn't long before I joined my marefriend for a nice afternoon nap.

It was dark and comfortable, but something was prodding at me, it was soft, warm, and just a little bit moist, and it was coming from somewhere close.

I slowly cracked my eyes open, my vision was blurry but I could make out a lot of blue, like a midday sky.
As my vision cleared I opened my eyes a little more to behold a rainbow maned pegasus pony.

Her eyes were closed and her face was very close to mine, but something else, she was kissing me.
Ever so gently she would pull away before planting another one in a delicate manner.

She must think im still asleep, little minx.

Wait has she been kissing me ever since I fell asleep?

Either way I decided to let her continue for a minute more.

After a little longer of Rainbow planting kisses on me, I gently shifted my right hand which rested on her wing eliciting a sharp gasp from Rainbow followed by her opening her eyes and pulling her head away from mine.

"Cain! y-your awake, I-I was just trying to get a-a-a speck of uh, DIRT! thats it, you had a speck of dirt on your nose."
Rainbows face turned bright red so much it looked like steam was about to shoot out of her ears.

I smiled up at her with a smirk that told her that she had been caught in the act.

"If you wanted to kiss, all you had to do was ask Rainbow."

Rainbow opened her mouth as if she was about to shoot back a retort but nothing came out, her face soon looked as guilty as a filly with her hoof in the cookie jar.

"Well its not my fault, you just looked so cute sleeping and all, I couldn't hold back." Rainbow explained sounding very shy.

She can be so cute sometimes.

I held the side of her face in my hand and turned her head so I could see her eyes.

"I know the feeling," I replied, thinking back to when I had lain her in my bed and found myself giving Rainbow a good night kiss once she had fallen asleep.

Rainbow then surprised me when she narrowed her eyes and gave me a devilish smirk.

"I know you do.......perv."

She was awake, little minx.

Now I was the one blushing, I guess she had fooled me that day.

Ok, time to steer this conversation away from me.

"Rainbow theirs something that I need to tell you," my distraction was working, judging from her look of curiosity.

"What is it?" She asked me, shifting her weight on top of me a bit.

"Well, you see, Ive never had a marefriend before." A moment of dead silence fell upon my living room, Rainbow looked at me with a blank expression.

"Really?" She asked simply.

"Well, ya, being a different species dose make it hard finding a mare who's willing to date a human."

Rainbow looked a little bashful as she looked at me.

"Me too." Rainbow said under her breath.

"What was that?" I asked, not because I didn't hear her but because what she said took me a little by surprise.

"Ive never had a very special somepony before, so I guess that means that were each others first."

Rainbow began to blush as she dawned a sheepish smile.
I ran my fingers through her rainbow mane and we just looked at each other, as if we got some sort of great enjoyment from the act.

"Im sorry Cain, but Ive got some weather work to do in a little bit and if I dont get going soon Im going to be late."

Rainbow looked at me as if she was seriously considering blowing it off.

"Then you'd better get going young filly," Rainbow looked deflated as she realized that she did have to go to work, being so loyal must have its down sides sometimes.

"Ughhhh, ok, but don't forget what I said about the whole cheating on me thing, I once destroyed an entire barn with a rainbow explosion, remember that."

I gave Rainbow a smile and ran my hand down her back eliciting a small giggle from her.

"Got it"

I walked Rainbow to the door and before she left she wrapped her hooves around my head and gave me a strong kiss on the mouth before zooming off into the sky.

I looked out to see the mare that lived across the street, she was watering her flowers and now staring at me with a blank look, her mouth formed into an "o".
Apparently she had seen the whole scene of me and Rainbow kissing and was now visibly shocked at what she saw.

I stepped back into the house sighing.

I hope this docent end badly, I thought walking to the kitchen.

I need some coffee before I freak out at how awesome my life was turning out.

I had no idea what was in store for me next.

Three choices, three ways that my life hear in ponyville could end in poverty or prosperity.

Sorry let me explain.

I was sitting on my couch, in front of me were three want ads for three restaurants hear in town.
One was at sugar cube corner, the second was for a chef job at a restaurant as well as the third.

Hears the problem, being that ponyville was such a small town meant that if I go to one interview and they dont like me, its highly probable that they will spread word to the other businesses, and that would mean that my chances with the other two will go down greatly.

"Uhh, what to do what to do," I moaned.

I have a very special somepony now, and that means that I want to take her out and show her a good time.
But I cant do that if I don't have the bits to buy a single flower.

"Maybe Rainbow can help make some introductions," I mused to myself, but the thought of using Rainbow to help get me ahead in life just sounded wrong.

As if on cue a sudden knock came at my door.

I stood up and walked over to the door, opening it I beheld the flower of my affections, with an elated look in her eyes to see me.

She instantly leapt up grabbing me by my neck and rubbing her nose against mine in a show of affection.

"Happy to see me I take it?" I said with a bit of sarcasm.

Rainbow scrunched her nose at me and gave me a little huff.

"Keep that attitude up and maybe Ill just go back home," Rainbow threatened looking away from me.

"You would break my heart like that?" I asked sounding sad and pouty.

Rainbow looked back at me with her sultry eyes that she seemed to save just for me, and pulled me a little closer to her, resting her forehead against mine.

"Never," is all she said before she planted her soft lips to mine in an intimate kiss.

Celestias flank, why dose she have to be so hot?!

After our passionate greeting, Rainbow landed on the ground and I turned to clear the papers from the coffee table, my back towards her as I heard the door close.

"I was just in the middle of looking for a job and needed a break, by the way are you hungry?" I asked finishing my stacking and turning around to face Rainbow.

"I just got some fresh dandelions, I could make a soup from scr.........."

I turned around to see that Rainbow was now crouched down low in a pose that looked like a predator ready to pounce on a sheep, her eyes focused on me with hunger.

Before I could question it she was on me, knocking me backwards onto the couch with a thud.

Im starting to see a pattern hear.

On top of me now she looked down, not at me but at my body with bed room eyes.

"Why miss Dash, are you trying to seduce me?"

Rainbow rolled her eyes at me before licking her lips.

"Gee, what gave it away?"

Little minx

Rainbow closed her eyes and lowered her head to my chest, expertly she began to use her teeth to undo the buttons of my shirt starting from the top and working her way down.

Once she had un-done the forth button, she brought her head back up and smiled warmly down at me.
She then used her hoof to open my shirt reveling her target, but before, she used her mouth to grasp the thunder crystal and remove it from around my neck, gently placing it on the table next to us.

All of a sudden she opened her mouth and brought it down on the part where my shoulder and neck formed came together, sinking her teeth hard but not hard enough to draw blood.

I bit my lip and brought both hands up to hold the mare who was now feeding of my delicate flesh.

Rainbow moaned into my neck and the breath from her nose was cool and ticklish on my skin.
She then began to suck almost as hard as she was bitting and not long after that her tongue started drawing circles on the skin in her sucking mouth.

It felt so good I thought that I was going to pass out, but soon enough Rainbow started bitting down harder.
I dug my fingers into her back trying to fight both the pain and the urge to moan like a girl.
But soon it became to much for me and Rainbow was beginning to scare me a bit.

"R-Rainbow, your hurting me." I whispered up at the pegasus that was enjoying her first taste of human flesh ever.

She opened her eyes and took her mouth off my neck with a wet "pop" before her face turned scarlet red.

"Oh, uh, sorry about that, I couldn't help myself" Rainbow said turning even redder.

"Thats ok, just give me some warning next time."

Rainbow then took on a serious look as she sat up a bit on top of me.

"Uh, theirs something I need to tell you," I sat up a bit to now at the sound of Rainbows serious tone, a little worried about what she was going to tell me.

"Whats up, did something happen?"

Rainbow looked down a bit with a dejected look.

"Well, something happened in town today....."

This doesn't sound good I thought.

"I was on my way over to see you."

"Go on," I said, feeling more dread.

"This stallion came up to me...."

"And?"

"Well...he kind of asked me out."

ILL KILL HIM!!

"I see, what happened next?"

"I told him that I had a special somepony."

I placed my hands on Rainbows shoulders, I knew that Rainbow would never betray me, she wasn't that type of pony.

"Did he keep harassing you?" I asked her in a calm tone.

"No," she replied.

"Did he threaten you?"

"No," she replied again, I was now worried that the other possibility might of happened.

"Did he hurt you?!" I asked in a demanding tone.

"No, he didn't."

Was it possible that this soon to be dead stallion did something even worse?

"What did he do to you Rainbow?"

Rainbow looked at me with a hint of worry in her eyes.

"He apologized for bothering me and left."

..................................Huh?

"Um, Rainbow, sweetie, not to sound like I dont care, but whats the problem?"

Rainbow scrunched her nose as she shot me an irritated glare.

"The "problem" is that he asked me out in the first place, duh."

I gave Rainbow a little smile and rubbed her foreleg to try and calm her frustrations but to no avail.

"Well, that doesn't surprise me, you are a very attractive mare after all."

I expected Rainbow to blush or even give me a little jab with her hoof, but she just kept glaring at me with frustration.

"This is serious Cain, that stallion shouldn't have even asked me out in the first place, but he did, and do you know why?"

All I could do at this point was shrug my shoulders and wait for Rainbow to explain.

"Its because you haven't marked me yet."

Marked?

I cocked an eyebrow at Rainbows statement.

"Rainbow, what in the name of Celestia do you mean by "Marked"?

The mare on my chest now looked at me like I had just asked the most obvious question ever, but at the same time she began to blush at the prospect of explaining the answer to me.

"Seriously, you've never heard of marking?"

I was now more than a little intrigued to find out about this custom that apparently everypony knew about from the sound of it.

"Sorry, I must have missed that class in school."

Rainbows eyes shifted from side to side as she mustered the courage to go on with her explanation.

"Well it doesn't surprise me that you've never heard of it, what with you being a human and all."

Rainbow then took a deep breath, finding the resolve to proceed.

"Marking, its an old pony customs. You see, after a mare and a stallion enter a relationship the stallion will mark the mare with his scent, afterwards other stallions will smell the scent of the other stallion on the mare and will then know that she's spoken for."

Huh, that sounds simple enough

"Its also a tradition, both the mare and the stallion show their love for the other by doing it. The mare shows her love for the stallion by receiving his scent, and the stallion shows his by giving it to the mare."

Ok, im starting to get the picture now.

"So, in other words you want me to mark you so that other stallions will know that were together?" I asked feeling good about the idea of this whole "marking" thing.

Rainbow blushed and she started drawing circles on my chest with a hoof.

"Well.....if your cool with the idea that is, if not Ill totally understand, its kinda a silly custom anyways."

I grasped Rainbows shoulders causing her to look me in the eye, obviously this was a big deal to her, and I wasn't about to let down the mare that I loved.

"Rainbow, I love you, and I would be honored to give you my mark."

Rainbows face lit up like a light and she wrapped her forelegs around my neck giving me the hardest kiss yet.

I guess that means she's happy.

"Are you sure? We really don't have to if you don't want," she asked with a hint of worry.

"Sure im sure, so how dose this work, do I give you a bottle of my cologne, or do you use one of my shirts and whipe yourself with it?"

Rainbow averted her eyes upward and began to scratch the back of her head nervously with a hoof.

"Heh heh, well, not exactly, you kinda have to uh, mumble, on me."

"Didn't quite catch that sweet heart."

Rainbow took a deep breath, and then she said it.

"You have to cum on me........a lot."

I love marking.

"W-well, then, uh....Im uh, kinda new at this, so, uh, maybe you could, you know walk me through it?"

Rainbow gave me a sheepish smile and I could almost feel her body get warmer.

"Y-ya of course, Ill walk you through step by step, ok?"

I leaned up and gave the mare I loved a kiss on the mouth, followed by a warm gaze and a reassuring rub on her back.

"Ok"

Rainbow hopped off of me and I followed her toward my bedroom, before she went in she looked over her shoulder and flicked her tail to the side giving me the sexiest look I had seen yet.

"Come to your chambers, my stallion," she whispered to me with a wink.

Praise Celestia.

I stood shirtless gazing down at a vision, Rainbow was laid out on the end of my bed, her head resting just on the corner of the mattress.

This way I had access to both her side and her front.
She gazed at me dreamily, her eyes sultry and wanting.

"Why don't you take those off and well get started, my stallion."

My hands moved toward my jeans and I began to undo the belt.
I couldn't help but feel nervous at this point, Rainbow didn't know everything about humans, which probably meant that she was unaware that humans were lacking in comparison to stallions in the size department.

Now I'm no stallion for sure but I'm a good nine inches long with three inches width.
What if she didn't like it?

Too late to turn back now I thought as my jeans hit the floor, my length now on display to the pony on my bed.

Rainbow began to bite her lower lip and her face turned a shade of bright pink.
In addition her wings unfurled and stood erect in less than a minute.

"Come closer and let me tend to your, eh-hem, needs, my stallion."

Guess that means she likes it.

yay

I stepped up to Rainbow as instructed, she gently reached out a hoof and touched it to my shaft causing me to shudder from the contact.

Rainbow looked up at me with passion and love in her eyes.
She then leaned out and gave the head of my cock a little kiss.

"Ready?" she asked.

"Yes," was all I could manage.

Rainbow then let out her tongue and began to lap at the tip of my dick like a puppy, a small "mmmmmm" escaping her as she tasted me.

Placing the tip on her tongue now she began to sink her head onto my throbbing cock, causing me to clench my teeth to try and fight back the urge to cum into her mouth before I could stain her coat with my "scent".

Deeper and deeper my erection sank into her warm wet maw.
It was indescribable, to say the least, she gaged slightly as my dick touched the back of her throat, but she swallowed hard and overcame it.

She bobbed her head a bit with my shaft all the way inside making slurping sounds and moaning gently whilst applying suction.
Pulling back now she opened her eyes and looked up at me with an innocent expression that made me want to explode down her throat.

She kept the tip of my dick in her mouth and swirled her tongue around my head gently bitting, the result of which almost made me cry out but I steeled myself for fear of her thinking that I was to week to handle her fellatio.

She took my wet cock out of her mouth with an audible pop and began stroking the side of it with a soft hoof.
Looking up at me with a smile now she asked.

"Whats wrong my stallion, doesn't it feel good?" She asked in a sweet tone of voice.

I was breathing hard and sweat was beginning to form on my forehead.

"Yes huff it huff dose," I said gasping for air and realizing that at some point I was holding my breath.

"Then why are you so quiet?" Rainbow then let her tongue fall from her mouth and circle around the head of my dick.

"I want to hear you moan and cry out and say how much you like a ponies mouth on your dick." She said a bit muffled with her tongue working circles around the purple head of my cock.

She sank back down and began to suck in ernest now.
Rainbow applied suction both when she pulled back and when she went down, my cock head touching the back of her throat every time she went foreword.

I did just as she wanted, moaning and grunting with pleasure as she went to town on my shaft.

She then moaned on my dick causing vibrations to corse through my shaft causing me to approach the brink.

"R-Rainbow, im about to-."

Before I could finish Rainbow let me out of her mouth, her cheeks were red and she was breathing heavily as her mouth hung slack open, she turned her head to the side and gestured with a hoof.

"O...k....first, you need to cum on my cutie mark, to show me that you claim me as your own."

I moved to Rainbows side, I didn't even need to touch myself.
I pointed my dick at her flank and let loose with a torrent of cum, it landed in thick white ropes on and across her lightning bolt cutie mark forming exes and lines.

I grunted hard at the release, when I was done her cutie mark was nothing more than a pile of white seed.

But I still had a lot of area to cover, and I was eager to continue.

I moved back to Rainbows open mouth, with a hand on the back of her head I forced my shaft into her throat causing her to sputter around the base.

I pulled back and drove home again Rainbow with her eyes sealed shut moaned and sputtered as she gaged trying her hardest to bring me off again.

She looked so cute, she didn't fight me or try to resist my feeding technique, she was working hard chocking and gaging, drool falling from around her clamped lips.

I pushed the head of my dick into the side of her cheek causing it to bulge out as she looked up at me as if to ask "dose this feel good?"

It wasn't long until I was ready to pop again, I moved to her wings next and unloaded with just as much gusto as before shooting wad after wad of cum across her feathered appendages.

The cum hung from her wings like a thick spider web.

Rainbows jaw was loose now, allowing me to fuck her mouth as fast or slow as I pleased.

And I fucked it, fast and hard.

Her eyes began to water and she was sweating profusely but still she soldered on, moaning now like a bitch in heat.

My next shot was to be for her forelegs. I coated them in a thick coat of spunk that seemed to let off steam from the heat that emanated the room.

I quickly shoved my cock back into Rainbows slacked mouth finding that after only a couple of strokes I was ready for round three.

I blew all over her back, growling like a beast. My penis was starting to hurt from the constant barrage of pleasure it was receiving from the growingly cum drenched mare before me.

Rainbows mouth now let out drool freely like a fountain aiding my thrusts into her welcoming maw.

Once I was ready for what might be the last blast Rainbow propped her back legs up, raising her rump into the air and moving her tail to the side.

I didn't need any direction.

I moved behind her and aimed at my target, her plot hole.
As soon as I set my eyes on the tight doughnut anus I exploded an almost continues stream of cum.

It splashed off of the tight pink orifice, dripping down and over her now dripping slit mixing with her own secretions and falling together onto the bed below.

Rainbow let out a girlish moan as cum splashed and dripped onto her most private area.

If I didn't know better id say that she had just had a mini orgasm from the sensation of my semen splashing her plot hole.

Rainbow dropped her lower half down onto the bed, she was panting hard, her face was beet red and her mouth hung open as she sucked in breath after breath.

I was in a similar state as I looked at the art that I had wrought.

Rainbow looked like five stallions had emptied their loads onto her body, all I wanted to do at this point was fall to my bed and die for a while, but Rainbow had a little more instruction for me.

Wearily she looked up at me still gasping for air, her eyes glazed over with exhaustion and lust.

"All...that we need to do now.....is rub it in." she said through gasps of breath.

Slowly I moved to place my hands on her warm sticky body, using my palms to spread my cum over and around her coat until it was worked into her fur.

I paid extra attention to her rump, squeezing and needing the tight but soft flesh of her ass until it was as well coated as the rest of her, Rainbow moaning and let out little squeaks as I squeezed harder then softer on her plot.

Once I was done with my task Rainbow brought a foreleg to her muzzle, sniffing a few times.

She then moved her head to just under her wing and took another cursory sniff to make sure that my scent was indeed upon her body.

"I think were good, now we just let it set for a while." She sighed and laid her head on the edge of the bed

I too let out a deep sigh, placing my hands on my knees to try and regain my composure.

Rainbow scooted her way up onto the bed and laid sideways with her head on one of the pillows.
She looked at me with a warm smile before patting the spot next to her.

"Come to bed my stallion, you must be tired."

I was in no position to refuse, I weekly crawled onto my bed and laid next to my special somepony.
She curled herself next to me gently resting her head on my chest nuzzling into my pectoral with a purr.

"I love you," she whispered to me in a soft tone.

"I love you too," I said in reply.

Both me and Rainbow then settled in for the best sleep either of us had had ever.

Author's Note

side note: France, equestrian version, prance. french = prench

I hope you all enjoyed this chapter, I went full monk on it.

I woke up at 7am, went on a 4 mile run followed by half jacks and iron mikes until I puked.

I then took an ice cold shower followed by shaving my head with a bic razor.

After that I wrote a letter to Celestia asking her to help me wright a good chapter, but Ill leave it to you all to decide if I did

Well, its almost 4 am now, Im very tired but im going to read through it before I submit.
I hope that my first actual clop chapter goes over well.

Celestia bless you all

love C.H.