Studying a Creature

by The Guy on Your Right

The Mysterious Creature [CLOP]

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The Mysterious Creature [CLOP]

"Maybe I should've gotten somepony to come with me," I said to myself as I walked through the Everfree Forest, surrounded by some strange-looking trees. "Somepony that could protect me from the..." I trailed off as I heard some weird rustlings in the background. "S-st-strange creatures that lu-lurk within these v-very woods," I stammered. Instead of just simply walking, I trotted. My breathing became faster. Beads of sweats dropped from my head. My heart started to pound as I looked at the trees that surrounded me.

"But why would you need one?" I asked myself, "You're a stallion. You could stand on your own hooves." I tried to regulate my breathing. "This is just a simple task for you. You're just going to make a short observation about the new creature that had been spotted, hovering above the Everfree Forest." I started to calm down. I wiped the sweat off of my head with my black necktie that matches my mane. My breathing became normal, and so did my heartbeat.

I stopped and then looked up into the blue sky, checking if the mysterious creature was airborne. "Still no sign of the creature yet," I murmured. I opened my saddle on my back, rummaging it carelessly, searching for my notebook and my pencil. I brought out my equipment. A journal on my left hoof and a pencil on my mouth. I gazed at my watch on my right foreleg. Knowing that the time was three in the afternoon, I listed my hourly report on the journal.

"Three twenty eight O' clock in the afternoon, still no sign of the creature," I said in my thoughts as I wrote it down on the notebook. I closed my pad, placing it back inside of my saddle. That also goes for my pencil. I closed my eyes for a moment and let out a sigh, before continuing to walk.


After four hours of searching, and avoiding some of the well-known – and also dangerous – creatures in the Everfree Forest I still had no sign of my target. The sky was now in dark blue. Stars shone in the sky along with Luna's moon. I decided to spend my night in the forest, just in case that the creature might show up. I took shelter in the nearest cave I could find. I brought out my carbide lamp, flickering it on, and illuminating the cave.

"Well." I let out a sigh, "at least no weird creatures are taking shelter in this cave tonight," I muttered. I rolled out my sleeping bags on the cold ground. "I guess I'm all set." I laid my saddle down beside my makeshift bed. I got in my sleeping bags and laid down on my belly. I brought out my journal and my pencil. With the pencil on my hoof, and my notebook opened in front of me, I started to write down my report.

"Seven O' clock in the night, I took shelter in a random cave, here in the Everfree Forest," I murmured as I listed it on my pad. I closed my journal, laying it beside my head with the pencil. I shifted in my sleeping bags, trying to get comfortable as much as possible. I gave out a short prayer, hoping that I would still see tomorrow's daylight. I closed my eyes, drifting off into a sleep.


I opened my eyes slowly as I heard some giggling. I rubbed my eyes, clearing out my blurred vision. I sat up, reaching out my forelegs, letting out a long yawn. I glanced over my shoulder, trying to check where the giggling was coming from. My eyes widen as I finally saw the reason why I came to the forest.

An equine-like creature stood in a distance, just outside of the cave. The creature smiled at me, looking at me with its green eyes. It's bat-like wings were showing. Its weird tail with a heart-shaped tip swished back and forth. There were two horns on its head, near its ears.

I quickly got out of my sleeping bags, and then reached for my camera inside of my saddle. I then, hurriedly mounted the camera on my shoulders. I slowly walked up to the creature, trying not to scare it away. As I got close enough to it, I noticed that the one standing in front of me was not the only one, but six.

"Interesting," I murmured. There was a flash as the camera took their picture. I gazed at the newly taken picture. "They travel in packs." I turned to the group in front of me. The pack, slowly surrounded me, forming a circle around me.

"Hey, what's goi-." I didn't get to finish as it felt like I lost control of my body. I stood up like a statue. My whole body felt numb. I was paralyzed. I tried to regain control of my body, but my efforts were nothing. The only thing I can move a bit was my head. I gazed at the creatures around me. Fear took over me as the pack looked at me with lust in their eyes.

In just a second, the one in front of me pinned me down on the ground, throwing my camera off of my shoulder. The camera flashed as it hits the ground, taking a quick snapshot. I could easily push the creature off, since the size of it is just like a mare's, but slightly smaller. Its purple coat brushed against my white coat. Death was on my mind as the creature lowered its head down to mine.

My eyes went wide as the muzzle of the creature met mine, locking me in a kiss. I was lost in my thoughts. Questions filled my mind, thinking if this was just a part of how they eat. I couldn't feel my body, yet the kiss I could feel, I could feel it very well. My body started to heat up, especially near my thighs, as the creature on top of me, started to lap on my tongue.

It only stopped until another of its kind pushed it off of me. The next one pulled me up as she lay down, bringing me on top of her. It wrapped its forelegs around my neck, pulling me in for a kiss. I laid motionless on top of her. I felt something wet, forming on my belly. I stayed on top of her as it fondled my tongue with hers.

I got off it as another one on my back, pulled me away from her. I laid back down on my back, on the ground. I looked up, and instead of meeting another muzzle. I met the creatures cunt. Its juices dripped down from it, and onto my cheeks.

"It's a mare!" I thought to myself. I gazed at the others and saw that they are all mares, noticing that they all have cunts. "Wait... they're all mares!" I gazed back up. The one on top of me, slowly descended,  burying my muzzle into her sex.

Weird musky scent had filled my nose. Her juices had also filled my mouth with its sweet taste. Being pushed by my own lust, I let out my tongue, twirling it inside of her, trying to squeeze more of her juices. I heard her yelp as my tongue, tickled her insides.

I suddenly felt something wet and spongy, down on my shaft, making its way from the tip and down on the base. I tried to look down, but the mare on top of me had blocked my field of vision. I then, felt another one touch my shaft, and then another, and another. It felt like five thick and wet cloth had wrapped my prick, making it stand on its own.  The heat on my flanks became even more intense as the feelings on my stallionhood had made me horny.

I wanted to rut all of these... whatever their race is called. They are also equines, but they're very unusual to us. The only thing usual to us was seeing one of our kinds with only two wings, or one horn, or maybe both if it's an alicorn. But this, this is not. They look like succubus from the adventure novels that I had read.

There is a part of the story that a protagonist has encountered a succubus as he tried to make his way down the depths of Tartarus. I don't know if the story is true or not, but the succubus from the story, and the creatures around me have a lot in common.

The two horns on their head. The bat-like wings. The heart-shaped tip of the tail. The curvy figure of their body. And last but not least, their hunger for sexual energies. They also seduce their victim to give them what they want. The only thing that's bothering me was that what would happen to me after this?

The mare on top of me had started to pant as she ground herself on my face. Her marehood started to tighten around on my muzzle, clenching it tightly. The only thing that I could see from my situation was her tail, swishing back and forth.

I felt my balls tightening, preparing a shot as I got closer to climax. I slowly regained control of my hind legs. But instead of standing up in bipedal and trying to get away from my attackers, I bucked my hips, raising my flanks and rubbing my stallionhood against whatever that is that was touching my shaft.

I lowered my flanks down again, and then repeated the process of raising it up. My mind was lost in bliss. All I could ever think of was penetrating them with my length. "Oh buck," I thought to myself, "th-their effects must've gotten inside of my head." If only I had control of my whole body that time, the things I would do to them. But since they had the upper hoof, I just have to wait for them to finish.

The mare on top of me had finally raised her flanks, along with her cunt. A thin trail of her juices had connected my muzzle to her dripping sex. I could finally find out what was the feeling down on my shaft. I looked down and saw the other members of the pack, surrounding my throbbing length. The one that was left out had joined the others, lowering her head down onto my stallionhood. Her tongue had added the sensation, making climax even more easier to reach.

I felt my orgasm building up. I bucked my hips even faster than before. "Oh sweet Celestia!!!" I yelled. I finally regained the ability to talk. I moaned in pure pleasure as my cum, slowly rose up to the tip. I tried to keep it in a bit longer, but they're making it more futile as I felt somepony fondling my balls with a hoof.

In a second, I finally released my semen, spraying it out like a fountain. I could see them letting out their tongue, trying to catch every drop of my falling cum. I felt exhausted, even though the only thing I did was lay down on my back and buck my hips.

"So," I called out, "Can... you... free... me... now?" I breathed heavily after each word that I say. The pack turned to me, giving me a confused look. Some of my cum had gotten onto their manes.  The looks on their faces was kind of cute, and at the same time, scary. "I'm... guessing... it's... a... no..."

One of the mares crawled up to me, and then laid down on her back beside me. She turned to me and then wrapped her forelegs around me, pulling me into her. It's an eye to eye look with the creature. One of her hoof on my shoulder had slowly made its way. down on my flanks, touching my pi cutiemark.

She slowly dragged my flanks onto her, pushing my stallionhood between her thighs. I let out a muffled moan as I felt her heat radiating marehood, just above my shaft. She pushed her lower part towards me, rubbing my length against the slit of her cunt.

The lustful mare, then backed away again, and then repeated, rubbing my prick against her slit in a slow pace. I tried to contain my moans as the pleasure had made its way, up to my spine. Her sex had started to water, coating my semi-hard cock.

The view of the mare's face had turned me on. Her cute, light purple cheeks had been topped of with blushing colors. Her eyes closed as she tried to focus on the pleasure down on her thighs. And also her cute little moans. I wouldn't be lying if I would say that it's not their spell anymore that's keeping me from running away from them.

Another one of them laid down at the back of my current partner. She caressed my cheeks with her hooves, before pulling me towards her, making me lean over the shoulder of my partner. She brought out her tongue, licking her lips before meeting my muzzle with hers.

She slowly slipped her tongue inside of me, trying to explore the new mouth that she had just found. I met her tongue with mine, trying to wrestle with it. I gave her tongue a short fight before lapping on it with pure lust.

I felt somepony grab one of my forelegs. I glanced over my shoulder and saw another one of the pack, laying down beside me. She slowly guided my hoof down to her waiting cunt, rubbing the tip of it onto her clitoris. The mare moaned as she played with her clit, using my hoof.

I felt something wet and hot, cling onto one of my hind legs. I tried to look down, even with a mare trying to kiss me. I saw another member of the pack, grinding her sex on my leg.

That was it. I was surrounded by lustful mares inside of a cave here in the Everfree Forest, at the middle of the night. The only thing left to worry about now was that where's the other one.

I shifted my eyes, searching for the sixth member. But she was no where to be found, Guess she already got enough, I thought to myself.

The smell of our mixed sweat had spread through the midnight air, inside of the cave. My body was covered in sweat and juices from the cunts of all of the six mares. Their moaning had echoed through the cave. It even got louder as the moments pass, signaling that they're close to their climax.

I too, was close to climax. The mare in front of me had sped up her thrusting, trying to rub my shaft against her wet sex a little bit more rougher. My balls started to tighten, as it prepared to load another shot. My cum, slowly rose up throughout. I felt a hoof on the tip of my shaft, waiting for me to shoot my load onto it.

I then, finally met my climax, screaming out in pure ectasy inside of the mare's mouth, who's been kissing me throughout the whole session. I released my thick strand of semen onto the hoof of one of the lustful mares. The mare then, brought her hoof closer to her mouth, giving it a lick.

The other members of the pack had rushed towards the mare with cum-covered hoof, licking her hoof hungrily for my semen. I grunted as my body ached. It felt like a ran from Ponyville to Canterlot without any resting. I laid motionless, trying to recover my lost energy.

After the creatures had finished their second meal, they slowly turned to me. "For the sake of Celestia, I can't do this anymore!!!" I yelled. They looked at me with blank expressions. They stood up on the ground, and then walked towards me. They formed a circle around me. I slowly regained control of my whole body again. "Thanks Celestia." I let out a sigh. I turned to the mares around me.

"What now?" I asked, raising an eyebrow at them. One of the mares had grabbed my right foreleg, trying to strip my watch off of my leg. "Hey, I bought this!" I yelled in defiance. I tried to keep her from snatching it away from me, but my body was too tired to even resist.

The mare got my watch, bringing it closer to her nose and giving it a sniff. The whole pack then, left me alone in the cave. I tried to stand up, but even though I got control of my body again, it's still disagreeing with my decision.

"A pack of weird equine-like creatures had just taken my watch," I murmured. "They rutted me like a helpless sex toy and left me alone in the dark cave without any energy left." I let out a sigh. "Well at least I still have my..." I trailed off as soon as I saw that my black tie was missing. "NO!!!" I yelled at the top of my voice.

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