Everypony, including her friends and family, were happy to see Twilight's new transformation and becoming a princess. But one thing isn't right. Twilight doesn't really look too happy. In fact, she looks really sad. I haven't even been here in Equestria for a year and I have never seen her so sad before.

But the question is: Why is she so sad?

First fan-fic I have ever written in a long time. So some strong criticism is needed so I'll learn from whatever mistakes I make in this story and make sure I'll never make the same mistake twice.
Also, sorry if the prologue is so long. I just had to get that out of the way.