
Within The Mind: Errant Trigger
Please read full description - DO NOT EXPECT THIS TO BE A CLOPFIC!!!
Ivan Gared, a psychologist of some renown is all that stands in the way of all Tartarus breaking loose, yet Ivan is not perturbed or worried by the danger or the threat of what lies ahead, the discovery is what drives him forward, even as he wades directly into the heart of madness itself... Ponyville.
Sealed behind a Wall he must do all he can to discover the source of the madness, taking with him some whose minds are already broken by this curse, will they be able to aid him? Or will they be nothing but a hindrance? Not even Celestia knows... yet he does, and he could not care less.
Only time will tell, as a battle between light and dark will be fought by something in-between, armed only with confidence and a mind beyond that of normal means.
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Please leave a comment as to why you liked or disliked it, I would appreciate the feedback, any feedback, seriously, that's kinda the reason I'm doing this.
I usually write stories of an intense nature, with darkness, intrigue and ‘feels’... this story is no different, if you came here looking for a story set in the rules of MLP FIM you are in the wrong place, this is an intense story with a realistic quality even above the madness of magic and monsters.
Think of it akin to a mixture of Silence of the Lambs and Sherlock Holmes (the new one)
A Good Read For Serious And Avid Readers! This story has an odd but sad resolution.
Welcome to the first story I have ever put up on the interweb, or allowed anyone to read other than those I trust most.
This story will contain:
Humour and Comedy
Minor Gore
Violence
Psychology
Drug Use (Don’t take it the wrong way, its not abuse)
Dark Themes
Bad Language
Cruelty
Some Slight Horror
Sexual Moments (Not Clop)
Suggestions of Rape (Rape’s Already Happened)
Occult Methods
2/6 Twisted Main Six
And of course my personal favourite... Arrogance
Oh how I love writing stories!
Though there is no clop per se, there is a scene in which there is clop occurring, though it will not go into graphic detail, to be honest with you its more a comedy element, dark but still amusing, ignore the fact that there may be BDSM going on at the time, its all part of the comedy.
Also there is no Foalcon, none whatsoever.
Stygian359 don’t roll that way, not that I’m judging anyone that does.
I also apologise in advance for writing this in UK English, as it is the style to which I was raised.
I am at least willing to meet you halfway on this.
Wow so much dislike and no reason as to why? No matter I guess...
Cover Art was made by me, the ponies made with General ZOI's Pony Creator on Deviant Art, check it out if that interests you! Seriously, do, it is quite fun and simple to use.
All things belonging to Hasbro belong to Hasbro (duh)
All OC characters and Story itself belongs to me.
Twisted Pinkie Pie and Rarity belong to their respected owners.




6 Chapters:
- Prologue: A Day In The Life 2013-03-09 01:52:15 UTC978
- Chapter One: A Week Earlier 2013-03-09 01:53:55 UTC15025
- Chapter Two: His Name Is Qray 2013-03-11 08:06:27 UTC11720
- Chapter Three: Two Demands, No Choice 2013-03-13 09:11:25 UTC11319
- Chapter Four: At A Distance 2013-07-04 04:09:10 UTC10414
- Chapter Five: A Soulless Entity 2013-10-04 10:14:34 UTC11201