Evolution of a Gentleman
Chapter 11: Dear Journal Part 3: Training
Previous ChapterNext ChapterIt had been a few days since I had arrived here in Canterlot, and finally my hair started to return to a normal black, except when me and Morning got close. Most days I just hung out with Morning doing whatever she wanted, including her… And when we weren’t busy with each other, we talked about anything and everything, but today we were talking about the job I came here for. Morning Dart had explained everything to me; from physical exercise routines to mares in extreme heat. To be honest it was a lot to take in, almost too much.
“So if I agree to be one of these ‘Gentlemen’ I could be gone for days at a time?” I asked sitting upside down in Morning’s pillow covered living room.
“Well yes, unless a group or organization completely purchases your time; then you would be with them.” Morning replied while trying to mimic me.
“And I could quit whenever I wanted?” I asked.
“Yeah, it’s not like they can force you to stay, sort of… they do make you sign a contract preventing you from breaking contracts. Plus it would look bad on you if you quit from one day to the next.” Morning said as she toppled over.
“You okay?!” I said quickly getting to my feet and helping her.
“I’m fine… so James, are you in?” Morning asked with a bit of hesitation in her voice.
I began to think, ‘Could I really just go around and have sex with random ponies, was it okay…?’ I looked at Morning who was waiting for my answer. “I don’t know, it… to be honest it seems a little wrong.”
“Wrong… how?” Morning asked.
“Imagine having some random creature sweep you off your feet and having feelings for some species you just met but have always known… and…” I began to say as Morning started to give me a whimper. “Sorry Morning, I didn’t mean…” I said looking at Morning.
“What do you mean?” Morning said getting closer to me, putting a hoof on my chest.
“Well example, I have had more fun with you in the last few days than I had in almost my entire life…” I said grabbing her hoof and looking outside to the night sky. “And what if that was it? What if tomorrow I had to go back home or you had to leave? I wouldn’t want that.”
Morning licked my cheek, “But we did have those fun few days and the memories of those days will be with me forever. Even if I couldn’t keep you, I could keep the memories of us and I am a better pony for it.” Morning said wrapping her wings around me.
As I looked out the window, my eyes caught a shimmer of light, a star. “Star light, Star bright, first star I see tonight; I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I wish tonight. Let me never forget this moment, let it always be with me.” I said wrapping my arms around Morning.
I felt Morning give me a strange look as we sat there embracing each other, “What was that?” She asked.
“Earth custom for wishing…” I replied.
“You wish on stars?” Morning asked as we both stood up.
“Only the first star you see of the night, or a falling star.” I answered.
Morning turned and looked outside, and for a moment she closed her eyes. “James, why do you wish?” Morning asked as she opened her eyes.
“Well, I don’t know… it’s kind of like a prayer to me. I used to do it every night till… till I met you… well that and watch the moon.” I said as we both moved closer to the window in Morning’s apartment.
“Yeah, in our world the night sky is filled with legends and lore. Certain patterns of stars have names and meanings, the moon is the mysterious beauty that watches over us as we sleep and even sometimes spirits men away.” I said as we sat by the window.
“Spirits men away?” Morning asked while she got comfortable on my lap.
“Yes, there are legends that speak of the moon falling in love with the people who would watch her. So in the night she would come down and take them away so that she would not be so lonely… it’s kind of sad and romantic all at the same time…ahhh!” I said as Morning pushed me down and closed the window.
“I will not have Princess Luna take you away! So you are forbidden from ‘gazing’ at the moon, you hear me!” Morning demanded as she sat atop of me.
“I’ll…I’ll do it.” I replied.
“Do what?” Morning asked.
“The Gentlemen thing… I’ll do it.”
“Really, why?” Morning said and jumped on all four.
I nodded. “Well I can’t sit here and do nothing while here in Equestria, and I don’t want to return home and ask my parents for help. I owe them too much… so till I find my proper calling, I will be a Gentleman.” I said running my fingers through Morning’s mane.
“Well your parents would understand, right?” Morning said as she laid on top of me, “I mean they raised you, took care of you… Parents are parents.”
“I need to show them that they raised a good person, a strong individual who is capable of fixing his own life. I mean, as much as I love them and I would love to return home, I still feel like a stranger in their home.” I said.
“Why?” Morning asked.
“It’s a long story, maybe one for another day, but for now let me enjoy this.” I said.
“Okay, but we’ll head down to the office first thing in the morning and get you all signed up… but first, I wanna get some ice cream.” Morning said heading to the door.
I smiled and then quickly began to panic as I noticed I was only in a pair of boxers and a t-shirt as Morning began opening the door. “Morning, wait!”
I looked around the small room which felt like a mix of an insurance office and a doctor’s office. A set of simple chairs for ponies lined up against one wall, while on the other side, a sliding glass panel and door. I sat next to Morning in this small room when the glass panel slid open.
“Dar…t, Morning?” said a blue unicorn whose head popped out of the opening. Morning got up and trotted over, grabbed a clipboard from the unicorn and then trotted back over to me.
“Hey Aqua!” Morning said as she walked over to the window. “Here, we have to fill these out… well mostly me.” Morning said sitting right back down next to me. We sat there with her asking question after question and jotting down every answer I gave. An hour or so passed by as we worked through the questioner, butterflies filled my stomach as we answered the last set of questions. “Okay we’re done! Go tap on the glass over there and I will be waiting for you when you’re done.”
“Done? Done with what?” I asked.
“Training… Oops, I forgot to tell you?” Morning said with a squint in her eyes, “Sorry, today you’re going to learn how to start pleasing, well, mares. Good luck.” She said smacking my butt.
“Whaaa…” I gasped as I walked over to the glass panel and turned in the clipboard.
“Mr. Mishkin?” asked Aqua.
“James is fine.”
“This way.” said the blue unicorn gesturing to the door on her right. As I walked in, the first thing I noticed was a bunch of cubicles and a large set of stairs. “Just make your way up stairs, and knock on room 318. Then hand the pony this…” said the blue unicorn as she handed me another clipboard.
As I walked up the stairs I looked at the clipboard, everything was written in a language unknown to me. Making it to the top of the stairs I looked around to see 6 doors that rested in front of me, “318… there it is…” I then heard music and someone singing, it was the ‘Still’ by the Foo Fighters.
I knocked on the door, the music was lowered and was completely stunned when the door swung open, “Hey there! You must be…. Morning’s new Mr. Drifter, my name is Double Fudge.” said a very hip heavy brown earth pony with a light brown curly mane and tail. I stood in shock at the size of her flank; it was so wide that it looked like a pair of ponies stuck together at the hip. She then pulled the clipboard out of my hands with her mouth and placed it on a table in the corner of the room. “Okay, let’s take a look at you… you are a tall one, aren’t you? Now it says here you are very athletic… care to show me?”
I shook my head trying to focus on the question at hand, “Sorry… wha…athletic?”
“You were staring at my flank, weren’t you?” Double Fudge said, “I know it is unattractive, especially for an earth pony, but…”
I interrupted Fudge, “It’s nice, especially the cutie mark. A fudge brownie with chocolate syrup… it’s cute.”
She suddenly looked shocked to hear that answer, she gave me a kind smile as I took off the jacket I had on. I quickly lifted my legs into the air and stood on my hands, then shifted onto one hand and finally I lifted myself slightly with my fingers. Then I crunched up into a ball, putting my feet underneath me without them touching the ground.
“That was… how… wow…” She said standing in awe. “Where did you learn to do that?”
I smiled, “The circus!” I said as I extended my feet back into the air above me and placed both hands on the ground to launch myself into the air, landing a few inches in front of Double Fudge. “So why did you call me Mr. Drifter?” I said while keeping the smile on my face the entire time.
“Morning told me what happened between you two. I must say… taking the virginity of a mare like that isn’t easy. How did you do it?” Double Fudge asked.
“Well to be honest it was my first time too… or should I say, I lost my virginity to her as well!” I explained while turning bright red from embarrassment.
“What with the smile? Are we cocky?” Fudge said getting closer to me.
The smile dropped from my face, “Actually not at all, just an old habit… smile while performing… What are you doing?” I asked.
“Well I am supposed to evaluate you, check your appearance, smell… everything… orange mint?” Double Fudge said as she sniffed me through my shirt.
“What, do I smell bad?” I asked while standing as still as I could as she got closer to my stomach. I could feel her warm breath on my stomach, the fur on her muzzle slightly sliding across my abdomen, and without warning I felt a hot, warm sensation run up from my navel to my chest.
“You even taste like it…” Double Fudge said looking up at me, “Did you know that earth ponies smell like their cutie mark, some even taste like it…wait what are these?” Double Fudge said pulling my shirt open, “Oh my… I have never seen one of you guys with so many tattoos!”
“So you know about tattoos, huh?” I asked.
“Yes, I do, and I know that they are very painful… how you humans can put up with so much pain I will never know.” Double Fudge said pulling away from me.
“So what’s first?” I asked.
“Well I looked over you appearance and the only thing I would say is… long hair. Other than that you’re good. Next, a filly’s first reaction to a Gentleman will decide whether or not she’ll accept your company.” Fudge said sitting down a few feet from me. “Let us try a dry run with what information you have collected while in Equestria, then I will tell you what to improve or what not to do. I want you to greet me.”
“Okay…” I paced around for a few seconds before walking up to Fudge, I knelt down with one knee in front of her, one arm behind my back and the other one extend with my head tilted down and my eyes closed. “Good afternoon miss Double Fudge, my name is ‘Drifter’ and I will be accompanying you tonight.”
Fudge placed a hoof in my hand; slowly I gripped the hoof and gently pulled it to my lips giving it a soft kiss. “So, have you done this kind of work before?”
I looked up and shook my head, “No, I haven’t, why?”
“Well to be honest ya got me red… I think you might be a natural.” Fudge said. Looking up I noticed a red tint in her cheeks. She pulled her hoof out of my hand, “But you can fix a thing or two… first, do not hide your eyes it is our nature to look into each other’s eyes to gain trust, and second when you smile…” I began to smile but remembered what I was told, “That’s good, but more relaxed and gentle… yes like that.” Fudge said while flicking my hair. “Also keep the red in your hair… it makes you feel more pony-like.”
“Sure, it’s not like I can do anything about it.” I replied.
“Alright, time to learn about ponies, Drifter.” Fudge said as she tapped the floor urging me to sit down. “First you must learn how to differentiate between a normal mare who wants a fling and a mare in heat.”
“I think I know this one.”
“Really, explain…” Fudge said crossing her hooves.
“Smell… a mare in heat gives off this musky… even lusty smell. Also they have a tendency of flicking their tail into the air more often.” I replied getting a strange look from Fudge.
“Smell? You can smell it… But that only works if the fluids have been spread around the area or if you’re close enough, I am asking from a distance.” Fudge answered.
“But I ca…” I stopped myself from continuing. “Then I don’t know.”
“Well a normal mare in heat will flick her tail at a potential mate, their eyes are more watery, and their lips are wetter… other than that they are in control. Yet a pony who skips, or does not engage in any type of sexual relief during a phase will become more and more insatiable during their next phase, even uncontrollable.” Fudge said.
“I am a little confused on that… I noticed that Morning’s ‘toy’ shot out liquid, and she told me that it was necessary.” I asked while raising my hand.
Fudge let out a giggle, “Well we ponies haven’t gotten our urges under control. When we are in heat, our bodies won’t relax or calm down even with masturbation. Unless our bodies get a good helping of real jizz, it will remain craving it till the next cycle and it only builds after that.” Fudge replied getting red in the face.
I gave a nod, “So how has your kind not been flooded with foals already?”
Fudge began to explain, it had to deal with a magic potion. Afterwards we talked about how human semen was a perfect substitute and how the whole ‘Gentlemen for Mares’ got started. We even got on the subject of politics concerning the human aspect for calming mares down, even how some unicorns have been secretly trying to change humans into ponies for the sole purpose of mating.
“I honestly can’t stand the idea of trapping your kind for our needs… but to each their own, I guess.” Fudge replied. “So let’s talk about flirting…” Fudge continued. I sat there for about an hour or so as she talked about mares’ body language from licking their lips, twitching their ears or folding them back to tail flicking as to expose their marehood lips.
“Okay James, time to strip down and begin your physical training!” She said with a grin.
After arguing with the mare for a few minutes I stood completely naked in the room, my clothes tossed somewhere behind Double Fudge. “Double Fudge, could I at least wear my underwear?” I asked while trying to cover up my package with my hands.
“No, and you can call me Fudge…” Fudge said while snickering in my direction, “No matter how hard you try, you can’t hide that.” She said while pointing at my erection. “Now then, I am going to teach you the basics of sex with every type of pony you might encounter in Equestria; from us Earth ponies, to the mighty Alicorns.” Fudge said walking over to me. “Now I know you have already gotten better at kissing thanks to Morning but I still need to make sure.” Fudge said and quickly pinned me against the wall behind me. Her dark brown lips firmly pressed up against mine, her tongue forcing its way into my mouth, and out of instinct I lifted my head slightly above hers. Our tongues wrestled for a bit before she pulled away, “Very good James, you even corrected for my drool.”
“Yeah, I kind of learned that the hard way with Morning, I don’t want to choke on it and have her get all worried.” I replied.
“Okay now, moving on to earth pony weakness…” Fudge said while licking and lightly biting her lips and flicking her tail.
“Um Fudge you’re…” I began to say as Fudge interrupted me with a kiss on the lips.
“What is it James… Drifter, what is my body telling you that I am not.” Fudge said as she leaned in for another kiss. I raised my hand placing a pair of fingers upon her lips and with my other hand I ran my fingers up along the side of her face, behind her ear and down her neck. I felt her shutter while her lips began kissing my fingers.
“Your lips want comfort from mine, and your tail is telling me you want me to look at your flank… and the no-floor trotting your leg is doing is telling me that you are enjoying this.” I replied moving my fingers away from her lips and followed the same path my other hand took but on the opposite side of her face.
“Okay James, time to show you an earth pony’s physical weakness.” She said trying to turn her flank to me. At the moment I don’t know why I decided to do what I did next, maybe it was her comment from earlier about taste or that her lips looked so lonely. I gave her lips a gentle lick, which caused her back legs to buck out from right under her.
Heavily breathing Fudge looked up into my eyes, “How, why did you…?”
“You do taste like fudge.” I answered as I felt Fudge shutter in my hands.
“Back to get on track…” Fudge said turning her flank towards me. “Our weakness is literally straight down our flank, but more so the inside of our back legs. If you rub, caress, or in your case use your fingers… you can bring a full grown experienced mare like myself to her knees. Okay now I want you to try…”
I knelt down and ran my fingers up the back of Double Fudge’s leg, until the tips of my fingers were barely a few centimeters from her already wet folds. Fudge let out a heavy moan, “Was that okay?” I asked keeping my hand on her flank.
“It was good… just a little bit… ahhhhH!” Fudge started to say before she let out a heavy moan as I used what little of my fingernails I had to run down her inner thigh. She quickly collapsed pinning my hand under her wet mound, her clitoris bulging against my forearm. “No, don’t squeeze with your hand… mghhhh! Those are my nip… arhmmm…” Fudge was in full orgasms.
“I’m sorry I just want to see if my nails… get my hand out… geez. I’m sorry.” I said in a panic placing a hand down on Double Fudge’s ass.
“That was an accident!” Fudge said as her ass clamped down on my other hand. “I am supposed to teach you how to seduce us, not you bringing me to orgasm while trying to seduce me…” Fudge said squeezing my hand closer to her ass as she stood up. As she turned I saw a weird and wild look in her light brown eyes. I held my hand tightly in her ass cheeks as she walked over to a dresser and opened the first drawer which was filled with several glowing golden vials.
“What are those?” I asked with a tremble in my voice.
“An endurance sexual aid potion we developed for your kind.” She said as she pulled and then pushed me to the floor. Grabbing the vial with her hoof she pulled the top off it and fed me the vial. “First you’ll feel a chill, then you’ll become more sensitive all around, and finally your reproductive system will kick into ‘overdrive’.” Fudge said as she started waving her flank at me.
“Why…” I began to say as I collapsed to the floor, my body feeling like it was one fire.
“Well, to test how you’r…James? James?!” Oh, Celestia are you okay?” Fudge said as she put a hoof on my shoulder, “Oh, shit. You’re burning up! Cloud Dasher! Heart Song! Get in here!” Fudge yelled as two more ponies ran into the room; a pink coated unicorn, with a blue and purple mane and a light purple pegasus with an orange mane.
“Fudge, what happened?” The pegasus said as she walked up to me.
“Did you buck another one?” The unicorn said.
“No, he drank the potion and then collapsed with a fever!” Fudge said, keeping a hoof on me.
“Who is he?” The pegasus asked as she knelt down next to me.
“New trainee… umm, what’s with these markings?” The unicorn said tapping my back.
“Those are tattoos, Song!” Fudge said with an angry tone in her voice, “Now tell me, what should we do?”
“I know what tattoos are, but are they supposed to move and change like this?” Heart Song replied.
“Umm, guys, he’s getting hotter… guys!” said Cloud Dasher as she noticed my temperature rising. “Something’s not right.” Cloud Dasher then noticed a spark of fire flicker on my back, then again. She then jumped into the air knocking her friends down and forcing them to the ground. Fire erupted from my back, my tattoos shifting around my body as if directing the flame and fire.
“He’s exploding!” yelled Heart Song, as the other two yelled with her in panic.
After a few moments I was able to move again, I sat there, naked on the floor surrounded by black sot. I looked up at the three ponies who were hiding in the corner of the room, “Sorry about… maybe I should leave.”
Quickly Fudge’s head turned to me, “You’re alive!” She jumped to her feet, tossing her two pony friends into the air, her hooves poking and touching me everywhere to make sure I was alright. “I thought you exploded!”
“No, I’m fine.” I replied.
“Oh my, look at your hair and your eyes… how did this happen.” Fudge said, as she plopped herself on the floor besides me.
The other two ponies walked over to me carefully, “So is he okay?” asked Cloud Dasher.
“He says he’s okay but look at him…” Fudge replied.
“I don’t see anything wrong with him… but humans don’t normally react that way to magic.” said Heart Song. “James, was it? Has anything like this happened before?”
I nodded, “When I first arrived in Equestria, my eye and hair color changed…” I replied.
Heart Song looked over to Fudge, “Well, you heard him, thought I have to admit, you actually looks really hot with blonde hair.” said Heart Song.
“Yeah, and the red tips help too.” Cloud said as she also sat next to me, “Woh! And look at his gold eyes! They look awesome!”
Heart Song lifted my face with her hoof under my chin; I felt her shudder as she looked into my eyes. “Humans don’t have gold eyes… you think he’s a changeling or something?”
Fudge shook her head and she also grabbed my chin with her hoof to look into my eyes. “Nah, he’s been living with Morning… and Wild Haunt lives with her there.”
Both Cloud and Song nodded, “So what could have changed his appearance so much?” Song asked.
“Gold eyes… gold… something…” Fudge then released my face as she ran over to the dresser and looked inside. “The endurance potion! Before this happened I gave him the endurance potion…”
“James, how do you feel?” Cloud asked as she put her head against mine to feel my temperature. “He feels alright…” Suddenly Cloud who was hovering over me landed roughly, her wings completely extended. After standing in front of me for a few seconds she began to lick my face, before her tongue found my mouth. She forced her tongue inside, while pushing me down to the ground, her hips grinding against my knees.
“CLOUD!” yelled Fudge and Song.
Cloud pulled away for a second while kissing me, “Can’t help it… can’t control the urge…mghhhnn!”
“Fudge, is she in heat this week?” Song asked.
Fudge put her hoof to her lips, and began to think, “I don’t think so…” Her face went blank and she then walked over to Cloud bumping her rump aside with her massive hips as her mouth dove for my shaft.
“What the hay you two?!” Heart Song said, looking at her friends in confusion.
I squirmed as Fudge worked my shaft. As I tried to pull away, I felt Cloud’s hooves force me back down into submission. Heart Song looked at her friends trying to figure out what had happened as she looked over us.
“He’s still in control but why aren’t they…” Song lifted her hoof to muzzle and began to scratch the bridge of her nose when she caught the smell of orange mint and candela root. “No way… I can’t be…” Heart Song walked over to me and sniffed my chest, and without a second thought her tongue was running up my neck to my ears.
As I was pinned under these three ponies I began to wonder what was going on but without a moment to breathe properly or focus I was lost to their lust. My shaft then went cold for a second before I felt myself enter a warmer, tighter wet hole. I felt my entire shaft disappear into Fudge as her large flank engulfed my hips. Fudge rode me for a while before she switched places with her friend as they continued to ride me or suck me off.
As the sun settled on the horizon we all laid exhausted on the floor. I forced myself to sit up and look around the room. We had been going at it for hours, the room smelled of sex, sweat and musk.
“So is this how you girls train your new recruits?” I asked.
They all let out a giggle, before Heart Song began to talk, “James, you are dangerous… if you work here you’re forbidden from drinking any potions while on duty.”
“Wait, this is my fault?” I replied trying to get up.
“No, this is Fudge’s fault for giving you the endurance potion…” Song replied.
“Why me?” Fudge said lifting her head.
“Candela root.” Song said, “James was sweating out candela root, which is one of the ingredients in the endurance potion.”
“Isn’t that stuff banned for ponies to use?” Cloud asked.
“Yeah, but not for humans.” Heart Song replied.
I shook my head, “Wait, why is this stuffed banned? And why was I sweating it out?” I asked.
“It’s banned because it makes us mares go into a false heat…” Cloud said rolling around on the ground.
“Fudge fed it to you and your body rejected it. And the fastest way to do that was through your pores...” Heart Song answered.
“So am I safe?” I asked.
Heart Song nodded, “Yeah, I mean, I don’t feel the urge to jump your dick anymore, plus your hair is black again. So it’s safe to say you are clear.”
“Though his tips are still red!” Cloud Dasher interrupted.
“So this candela root, does it have another name?” Fudge asked.
“Mm-hmm. Blaze root…” Heart Song replied, “Why do you ask?”
“Well James does need a pony name…So I was thinking ‘Blaze Drifter’, I was originally going to go with ‘Candela Drifter’ but it didn’t sound cool.” Fudge said looking over to me. “Well, what do you think James?”
“Blaze Drifter… why Drifter?” I asked.
“Well Morning told me how you replaced her sex aid Drift… plus how she called you her little Drifter a few times during sex, I figured it was appropriate.” Fudge replied.
After a few good laughs and a long shower, I returned downstairs to the waiting room. Morning was sitting there waiting for me.
“So how did it go?” Morning asked with a smile.
“I have to come back tomorrow for more training.” I replied.
“Well that’s expected, it normally takes 3 months to get ready to be a ‘Gentleman’.” Morning said as she trotted out the door. As we began to head out, I heard someone call out to me.
“James! James, wait!” Fudge yelled.
I turned to the brown eyed earth pony, “What’s up Fudge?”
“Your work badge, you’ll need it to get into the building, if Morning can’t escort you here.” Fudge said handing me a plastic card. “See you tomorrow.”
As we left the building and headed back to the Morning’s apartment I looked over the ID card. On it was the logo from ‘Gentlemen for Mares’, my human name and my work name, in both English and Equestrian.
“So was Double Fudge your instructor today?” Morning asked.
I nodded as I snickering at the card.
“So did you learn a lot?” Morning asked while walking backwards in front of me.
“A few things… I even learned what my signature move is!” I replied excitedly.
“Well wha…mmmh!” Morning began to say as I placed a set of fingers gently over her lips. I gave Morning a soft smile, and the next thing I knew both of her wings expanded out.
“This is…” I said in a gentle soft voice.
Morning gave me a smile which quickly turned into a grin just as she swiped the badge from my other hand and flew into the air, “So your name is James Mishkin and your call sign is ‘Blaze Drifter’… Buahahahaha!” Morning said as she laughed herself to the ground. “So what did you do to earn the name Blaze Drifter?” Morning asked still laughing.
I swiped the card back and placed it in my pocket, “Well the Drifter part I have you to blame for.” I said huffing away from Morning.
“I’m sorry, Fudge is a good friend of mine…” Morning began to say before I interrupted her.
“The ‘Blaze’ part was from what happened today during training.” I said lifting an eyebrow with hesitation in my voice.
“What happened?” Morning said with a worried look on her face.
“Well, do you know what candela root is?” I said giving Morning a grin.
Author's Note
Once again I'd like to thank everyone who has read this far, also thank you to all those who have recently favorited this story. Normally I would reply on your homepage, but it's been a lot. So for now I will thank you here. Also this is the end of the Journal entries, we have one more flashback before we return to James's and Morning's date. Till then good hunting... hunting, I don't hunt.
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