Flutter Quest

by Soundwave567

Chapter 1: The Shy pony gets a vision

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Chapter 1: The Shy pony gets a vision

"Oh, angel, aren't you just the cutest thing in a nice, homemade painting of you!" As Fluttershy was trying to rub blue paint off her wings, which she smeared, making her look like a butterfly, she started giving kind comments about the painting that the Cutie Mark Crusaders made for Angel, even though he looked more like a heap of snow with a bit of pink rubber for a nose, black streaks of paint for a mouth, and blue paintballs shot at the "head" for eyes in the painting. Which, somehow, it was.

Angel wasn't very amused, as black paint slowly started to seep into his JUST fluffed up tail, making it look like fluffy a pile of coal.

To this action, the C.M.C. sadly lowered their heads.

Depressingly, Sweetie Belle just said, attempting to wipe white paint out of her mane, "Oh, were sorry if we wasted our time, we just thought..."

"Now, Angel, don't be a little fun spoiler," Fluttershy had a feeling she would be able to calmly persuade Angel to like the painting, no matter how messy it was or how low quality it was, either.

Angel was just standing there, his eyes were starting to give hints of annoyance and almost anger.

Fluttershy had something inside her go 'click' and she got as angry as ever, so she gave angel The Stare.

Suddenly, Angel perked up and started smiling at the painting that the Cutie Mark Crusaders made for him.

Immediatly following Angel's action, the C.M.C.s checked their, as always, "blank flanks".

"Aww, I thought that would work," Whined Scootaloo, rubbing paint off her blank flank.

"We always have hay mending to try out, girls!" Exclamed Applebloom, as excited as ever, and she continued, trying keep paint out of her mouth, "I can bet it will be more fun then painting..."

Sweetie belle just replied to all of it, "I am always up to singing!" She took a deep breath and, "OOOH-"

Everyone immediatly said, and even Angel seemed to have tried to reply, "NO!!!"

"Well, girls-" Applelbloom happily exclaimed "- that hay wont mend it self!"

The C.M.C. then all chanted in unison, "Cutie Mark Crusaiders Hay tenders!" They then speeded out of the tavern saying, "Yaaay!"

Then images flashed through Fluttershy's eyes. "EEEP!!!" The one she was afraid of the most was the one where demon red eyes were staring at her through the everfree forest's darkness. "I have to go see Twilight!"


"Fluttershy, will you please get off me and slow down with this whole thing!" Twilight managed to push the yellow pegasus off her, and then when she tried to jump back on, Twilight just used her magic to strap her to a chair.

"Visions! Everfree forest! EYES!!!!" Fluttershy was acting like she was just forced to read both "Cupcakes" and "The Rainbow Factory" in a dark closet that was locked.

Rainbow Dash only said, "Hey, if I got those visions, I wouldn't be as scared! I would just check out the everfree forest. You know, get it over with."

Fluttershy then began to cry at the thought of not being as brave as the other ponies and still being forced to have such terrifying visions.

Rarity then yelled, "Rainbow Dash! Your not helping the situation with that talk what-so-ev-"

"okthenIwilltellyouthecutiemarkcrusaiderscameandmadeapictureofangelthentheywenttogomendhay-"

Applejack bursted out, "THE FARM!!" And sped out of the library.

"thenwhentheyleftIgotscaryvisionsandthenIcamehereandspiketoldyouthatiwashereterrifiedandyoucameand-"

"Fluttershy, just tell us what those visions were," Twilight interrupted her, and then-

"themostscaryonewas-"

"Fluttershy, I meant with spaces, and breathes!"

"Oh, ok, well the only ne I remember is scary red eyes watching me from the everfree forest."

"I think we will have to wait until tomorrow so I have some research time. Im sorry, but until then, there's nothing I can do, because I don't know what that means. Hopefully, one of my books will know," Twilight sadly apoligized, and almost immediatly after, books came flying off shelves in single file.

"awww," the other of the mane 6 replied in unison.

Except for Fluttershy, who just cried harder.


No matter how many times she did that night in bed, Fluttershy couldn't just stop staring at the everfree forest, feeling like those red eyes were in there somewhere, just watching her, when two red dots flashed inbetween two trees. Then inbetween a bush and a patch of considerably tall grass. Then inbetween the same two trees that the path the ponies use was under.

A sly, black figure slipped out of the forest, it's body looked like it was filled with holes, and its red eyes took more of a silvery green hue in the moon light. It then became a pony, all the holes filled up, but still with that odd green hue-

"A changeling?!" Fluttershy immediatly whispered in a trembling voice, which then became a quivering whimper as the figure headed straight for her little shack.

Knock! Knock! Knock!

Fluttershy, apparently in this particular situation, just happened to want to be more kind rather then shy, so she opened the door as slow as ever and the figure came rushing in.

"Nobody saw me?" It said in a sort of scaley voice.

"Wh-who are you, s-s-sir?" Fluttershy asked as she coweringly shut the door, preventing the moonlight from coming in, draping the room in darkness.

She regretted that the moment she heard the little bug buzz of changeling wings.

A green light flashed, then a candle light was lit, and Fluttershy almost screamed to the point where Cloudsdale could've heard her when the scaley, raspy voice said, "Shhhhh!"

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