Apple scented love

by Fimbulvinter

Chapter 2 - The Clop

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Apple Scented Love
A ShinyMac Tale
Chapter 2

Big Mac’s eyes widened as he realised what was going on. His best friend was kissing him and had just told him that he wanted to be his first stallion. Mac didn’t know quite what to do and he froze up. Shining seemed to notice and he pulled away slightly to see the fear in Big Mac’s eyes. The older stallion was terrified of what was about to happen as this was the moment that would likely establish his sexual identify for a long time to come, if not the rest of his life.

Shining gave Mac a reassuring smile and ran one of his hooves down the side of his muzzle. Something prodded him down at his hips and Shining looked down to see as the tip of Mac’s shaft unsheathed itself from his body and began to grow between them. Big Mac’s mind may not be sure about this, but his body was more than eager. Mac tried to back away and he tried to cover himself with his hooves. Shining gently gripped Mac’s hooves in his magic and pulled them away, allowing Mac’s dick to come back into view. In the moonlight, Mac’s dick was an impressive sight, and Shining was sure that he would prove to be a superior specimen of the male form. Shining’s own dick began to rise up in response and the tips lightly touched for a moment, sending a jolt of feeling through Shining’s body.

“It’s okay. You don’t need to feel embarrassed,” Shining said as he noticed Mac’s face begin to burn with heat. “This is what we are here for.” Shining leaned in and gave Mac another light kiss, lingering slightly longer this time than he had a moment before. Big Mac still froze up, but he didn’t resist as Shining came in again, this time remaining joined to Mac’s lips.

Slowly, Shining felt Mac begin to relax into the embrace, and Shining brought his hooves up and wrapped them around Mac’s head, tentatively drawing him in closer, while still allowing Mac to pull away if he wanted to. Mac didn’t, but leaned in deeper before returning Shining’s kiss with more passion. Between them, their dicks had reached full mast and were pressed up between them as they intertwined their bodies.

Shining increased the urgency of his kisses, opening his mouth slightly and pressing his tongue up against Mac’s mouth. Big Mac opened his mouth slightly, and Shining quickly pressed forward and forced his tongue inside Mac, eagerly tasting Mac’s body. Big Mac tensed up as he felt Shining invade his mouth, but he quickly realised what was happening and copied the gesture, the two stallions tongues duelling for supremacy as they both got more into the mood.

Shining felt small wet patches begin to form on his belly and he broke away from Big Mac’s mouth and look down. His dick was seeping sticky pre-cum, as was Mac’s and it was rubbing into his fur. Shining smiled at the thought that it had been him who had managed to cause such a thing to happen.

Pulling himself off of Big Mac, Shining slowly kissed his way down Mac’s toned body, leaving small damp spots on his fur to match those from the splotches of pre-cum until he reached his goal. Mac’s stiff rod touched the bottom of his chin, and Shining gently rubbed the flare with his face, marvelling at how something could be both so hard and so soft at the same time. Slowly he rubbed one of his hooves along Mac’s length, eliciting a moan from the earth pony. A small bead of clear liquid began to well at the tip of Mac’s cock and Shining inhaled the musky scent, a combination of sweat, hard work and Mac’s masculinity. Without breaking eye contact with Mac, Shining Armour slowly extended his tongue and made a long, gently lick up the base of Mac’s cock until he reached the tip and engulfed the tool in his mouth. Big Mac moaned loudly as Shining took him into his mouth and one of his unshorn hooves came to rest on the back of Shining’s head. Shining took that as a sign that he was doing well and he tried to take more into himself.

As soon as he first licked the tip of Mac’s cock, Shining tasted the liquids that had been slowly seeping out from the flare. The clear pre-cum was sweet with a hint of salt. Shining wasn’t sure if he liked it or not, it was so different from anything else that he didn’t have a point to compare it to. Gingerly, he began to work the shaft into his mouth, swirling his tongue around the hard flesh. As he sucked on the shaft, Shining’s hooves moved to cup Mac’s balls and he squeezed the gently, eager to please his friend.

Big Mac was in heaven. Despite Shining’s inexperience, he was doing a first rate job. He shivered as he felt Shining’s hooves stroke his balls. Shining’s mouth was warm and inviting and all he could think was that this felt right. He could feel every bump and shift of Shining’s tongue as the white stallion flicked and twirled around his shaft. As much as he wanted to make this last, he could feel pressure building quickly and he knew that he would not be able to hang on for long. Shining was looking up at him, his eyes sparkling and eager as he opened up his throat and tried to swallow even more of Mac’s dick. It was a arousing sight and Big Mac’s hips gave a involuntary thrust off the ground.

Shining felt Mac’s cock hit the back of his throat and he held himself still. Big Mac’s penis throbbed inside his mouth and Shining sucked on what he had managed to swallow. All the while he was looking directly into Big Mac’s eyes, wanting the farmer to know just how much this was pleasing him as well. He wanted to keep lowering himself around Big Mac, but he gagged every time that he tried to go further. Instead, he pulled back until he was just suckling on the tip and the salty taste of Big Mac’s freely flowing pre-cum landed on his tongue again. Grinning to himself, he began bobbing up and down around the shaft, occasionally pausing to lick the underside or lightly scrape his teeth over the crown. He could feel Big Mac shudder with each pass and it urged him on.

“Uh, ah’m gonna… Shinin’ pull off,” Mac managed to get out between his moaning. Shining took that as a cue and pulled back from the base of Big Mac’s cock, but he didn’t take it all out of his mouth. He wanted to taste Mac’s cum. It was the natural conclusion to what he had been doing and he wasn’t about to disappoint. He could feel Big Mac swell in his mouth and he knew that he wouldn’t have to wait long.

“Ah’m commin’” Big Mac groaned and he released his seed. Shining’s eyes went wide as the first burst of searing semen hit the back of his throat. It was slimy and very salty on his tongue and he nearly gagged as a second blast followed the first. Big Mac’s balls jerked and twitched in his hooves and Shining redoubled his efforts on rubbing them, eager to tease out every drop of cum that he could manage. A third twitch of Mac’s cock and Shining’s mouth was full near to bursting. Having no other choice, he gulped down everything that was in his mouth, the cum being replaced by new ropes within moments.

Shining had to swallow twice more to keep up with the flood of seed filling his mouth, but finally the torrent came to an end and the last rope of cum squirted from Mac’s cock and it ceased twitching. Shining could feel it begin to soften in his mouth and he allowed it to slip from inside him. Giving it one last suck on the way up, he rose up and opened his half filled mouth to Big Mac, letting his lover see his pooled cum before swallowing down the last mouthful and smiling. Big Mac watched him before falling back to the ground and panting.

“That was tha sexiest thin’ ah have ever seen,” he muttered.

Shining nuzzled into Mac’s chest and he listened to the regular beating of Mac’s heart. Idly he stroked Mac’s half limp dick with one of his hooves, smearing the remains of Mac’s cum over his forehoof. Within a few moments, Shining felt Mac’s dick begin to rise up again and it was soon hard again. Shining marvelled at Mac’s power as it would have taken him easily twice as long to regain his hardness. His own cock was poking out and aching for some attention, but Shining ignored it as this moment was all about Mac.

Shining got up to his side and reached over to kiss Mac again. Mac eagerly returned the kiss and the pair just held each other for what seemed like hours.

Soon, Shining broke the kiss and leaned in to whisper to Mac. “I want to feel you inside me. I want you to push yourself within me and I want to feel you cum for me.

Shining Armour turned around and presented his plot to Big Mac. He felt Mac mount him and he prepared to feel Mac’s hard dick press up against him, to push forward and penetrate his body. Instead he heard Mac whisper in his ear “Turn around. Ah want ya to face me.” Shining turned back to face Big Mac and found him resting on his back. His hooves were holding his cock up and he gestured for shining to climb on top of him. Shining licked his lips and did so, coming to rest so that Mac’s cock pressed up into his butt grove.

Mac’s dick was still very slick with Shining’s spit and his own cum and Shining rose up and moved his ass until he felt the tip of Mac’s crown press up against his opening. It tickled and Shining had to wriggle around slightly. The motion spread Mac’s lubes around his pucker and Shining felt his ass twitch in anticipation of the coming penetration.

Leaning forward, Shining reached down and ran his free hoof down the side of Big Mac’s face. “You are a special stallion Mac, never doubt that,” he said before planting his lips back onto Mac’s own. As he felt Mac melt into the embrace, Shining pushed down with his hips and felt his sphincter stretch open as Big Mac’s member slid inside his ass.

Shining’s eyes snapped open as he felt the searing pain and strange sensation of being stretched beyond anything he had experienced before. For a moment he wasn’t sure that he would be able to contain Mac’s girth, but he didn’t want to quit just yet and he pushed down harder and allowed more of Mac’s dick to flow inside his body.

“Ahhh, yer so tight, ya feel so good,” Big Mac moaned, his words garbled as he didn’t break away from the kiss he was sharing with Shining. That was enough to convince Shining that he had to follow this through to the end. Big Mac was as solid as a tree branch inside him and he could make out every ridge and vein as it passed by his muscle ring and filled his body.

Shining sank down around Mac’s member, not allowing the pain to slow his advance. Pain wouldn’t prevent him from performing his duties in the guard corps and it was no different here. Down and down he lowered himself until he felt his butt press against Big Mac’s legs and he knew that he had bottomed out as far as he would be able to go. Giving Mac one more deep kiss, he pulled back and rose back onto his haunches, allowing his ass to take in the very last inches of Mac’s dick. Shining felt kinda proud that he had managed to take it all and he began to experiment with clenching his anal muscles around the hard rod. He could feel it in his belly, a hardness that hadn’t been present before and Shining sighed in joy as he rubbed his stomach with his hooves. Below him, he could see Big Mac’s face contort every time that he squeezed the dick within him and he figured that Mac must be enjoying this just as much as he was.

After a few moments, Shining felt that he was ready to begin with the main event and he rose up slowly, allowing Big Mac’s dick to withdraw from within him. It was a strange feeling, as it he was taking a very long and very pleasurable dump and the friction on his insides was nearly enough for him to blow his own load right there. He didn’t want to waste his first cum like that however and he focused his mind on several breathing exercises that he had been taught to focus his magic. As he concentrated on his breathing, the tingling in his balls receeded and Shining knew that he had managed to hang on a bit longer.

Eventually, Shining rose up to the point where he could feel Big Mac’s flare forming a plug against his sphincter and he knew that he was as high up as he could go without allowing Mac to exit him totally. With a manic grin, Shining dropped back down, hissing as he felt Big Mac’s fill his body a second time. His own cock was bobbing wildly between them, erratically spurting globs of pre-cum in every direction and Shining couldn’t care less about that. As soon as he hit the bottom on his stroke, Shining began to rise up again, Big Mac’s dick moving smoothly inside him. The initial pain had nearly vanished and he could feel only the pleasure as Big Mac prodded his prostate.

A pair of hooves touched his cock and Shining was distracted from his breathing exercises to see Big Mac’s hooves now gingerly jacking his length and stroking against his testicles. It looked like Big Mac was getting ready to return the favour and Shining slowed his pace to give the red stallion easier access to his junk. Big Mac’s movement were clumsy but Shining didn’t care, it just felt too good. His cock began to release a steady stream of clear pre-cum and Shining could feel the tingling return to his balls, signalling the start of what he could tell would be a massive orgasm.

Big Mac seemed to notice it as well as he increased the pace of his jacking, his hooves now well lubricated with Shining’s pre-cum and sliding easily over his hard length. Shining tried to focus down his breathing again, but the combination of Big Mac’s hooves sliding over his dick and the feeling of being fucked at the same time sent Shining over the edge.

“Uggghhhh,” He cried out as the first wave of his seed burst from his dick, sending a stream of off white cum arcing through the air to land on Big Mac’s face and mane. Big Mac instantly stopped his jacking and held Shining’s member in place while it spewed forth ropes of pearly liquid. Shining had to shut his eyes against the sparkling pleasure washing over him but he could feel his body clenching hard around Big Mac’s dick with every twitch of his own cock.

A sudden burst of wetness brought him out of his daze however, and Shining looked down to see Big Mac sucking on the tip of his dick. The larger stallion was a mess, semen now covered his chest and mane, the strands beginning to ooze into his fur. One strand had covered his face and forced him to shut his right eye. Shining thought that he looked sexier right then than he had ever done and he closed his eyes again as Mac continued to suck out the last of his sperm.

Experimentally, Shining leaned down over Mac and gave his face a quick lick, scooping up some of his own cum into his mouth and wiping Mac’s covered eye clean. At once, Shining could taste a slight difference between his own and Mac’s cum. Where Mac’s was thick and salty, with an almost loamy after taste, Shining’s own had a more tangy taste and made his tongue tingle like he had eaten fizzy rocks. Shining wasn’t sure if he liked the taste or not, but he was sure that he wanted to taste it again at some point.

Below him, he watched Big Mac give one more powerful suck on his deflating dick before pulling back. A sliver of his cum had escaped the stallions mouth and was joining up with the copious amounts already coating Big Mac’s chest. Shining sighed at the idea that a piece of him was now inside Big Mac and he focused his attention back on the cock working its way into his ass.

“Shining’, in or out?” Big Mac suddenly asked after swallowing. Shining wasn’t quite sure what he meant.

“Uh, in?” he replied to Big Mac. Big Mac grunted and thrust up with his hips, filling Shining to the hilt and holding himself still. Mac’s face tensed up and he grit his teeth together as the first signs of orgasm hit his body.

It was at that moment that Shining felt Big Mac’s dick swell inside him and a second later, a warm gooey feeling began to spread throughout his body. Shining realised what Mac had meant and he was now letting his seed fill Shining’s body. Big Mac’s flare was acting as a plug, so no cum escaped and Shining could feel the pressure building inside his rectum. It was an intense heat and pleasure and Shining didn’t want it to end; that Big Mac would just keep filling him further and further with his cum.

It had to end however, and to Shining’s disappointment he felt Big Mac’s dick begin to shrink inside him. The pleasurable pressure began to decrease and a few stray drops began to seep out his ass around Mac’s shrinking dick. With a soft tug, Mac came totally free and Shining felt his cum begin to bubble out after him. Shining rolled off of Mac and fell down to lay on his chest, heedless of the fact that he was resting in a puddle of their combined sweat and fluids.

“Was it good for you too?” he asked Mac as he rolled over to look up at the stars again. He felt content despite the fact that he was covered in dirt and sexual secretions. His ass still tingled and he knew that he would be sore in the morning, but it was totally worth it if it meant that Big Mac could finally come to terms with himself.

“Eeyup,” Big Mac confirmed. “This was a kind thin’ ya did fer me. Ah don’t know if ah would have ever had tha courage ta do this myself.”

“You deserve it and any stallion would be lucky to call you their own. I’m going to miss you. Roanbay just won’t be the same without you in it.

Big Mac gave Shining a long hug and the pair slowly drifted off to sleep wrapped up in each others hooves. As he did, Shining thought about when his next leave would be coming. Ponyville wasn’t all that far away.


Unbeknownst to either Shining Armour or Big Mac, they were not alone. From behind one of the various apple trees surrounding them, a mustard yellow mare was clopping herself furiously as she watched the carnality take place before her. Apple Fritter had planned on being the first Apple to get her hooves into the hunk of a stallion that was Shining Armour but she had quickly seen the signs of Shining’s deepening relationship with her cousin and she had stepped back. She had known that Big Mac was gay for a long time now, possibly longer that he himself had known and she had sensed that it was the royal guard recruit who held the key to allowing him to accept it, so she had stayed in the background and allowed nature to take its course. She hadn’t kept her hoof out totally however, and she was sure that Shining had noticed her teasing him over the last few weeks. He would be putty in her hooves once Mac left in the morning.

’A mare has needs after all. Sleep well cousin, I’ll make sure he is still has the taste of an Apple in his mouth when you return’ She thought as she rubbed her nub and a blinding orgasm rocked her body.


Author's Note

And there you have it, my return to the halls of gay clop, written over a few days as a short break from my human story.
This was just a short little piece to make up for the lack of ShiningXBig Mac stories. A quick search revealed only three to four stories of this nature, and only one of those rated well.

A few little things
1. This is not related to the Fathers Love series in any way, despite similar plot themes or characters.
2. Shining Armour is not going to turn totally gay or bi from this. This was a one time only gift to his friend who was in the closet, with some potential friends with benefits later on. As far as this story is concerned, all canon events in the actual show occur as normal from this point on.
3. The clop scenes were loosely inspired by the Sweet Apple Secrets tumblr as drawn by the talented Braeburned. If you enjoyed this story then go check out tumblr.