Dedicated to my grandma who recently died…


I recently posted a story called Soulbound to Equestria and I didn't get very good feedback on it someone gave me a tip to clean up my writing.
I went to my ELA teacher for some tips to improve my writing and now I can almost say this is MUCH better than the last story.
I reused the title of soulbound to equestria BUT did not edit the story I just like soulbound as its title.

just to let you know INB4 mods say this is a rewrite of soulbound to equestria its not
It is a completely different story.

It has a much better story than the last one.
some better writing.
(I figured out how to use paragraphs and feel like an idiot)
Better character's.
A bit of comedy.

So anyways that's about it, hopefully this story wont disappoint me like the last story I did.