
A Faraway Land.
James Cross is first up for a solo training exercise. It takes some time before he was able to build up the nerve, but some of his crew mates have a strange feeling about today. Minutes into his training run; a wall of strange fog blocks his path. Being forced into the strange fog; he experiences a massive engine failure. Seeing a possible way out, he takes it. After crashing in a strange forest. A small accident occurred leaving him unconscious. Plagued by strange dreams and waking up in a Hospital. A new chapter in his life begins.
This is a story rewrite of the original A Faraway Land. I rushed the first story and it dragged out. I will be slowing this story down to try and make it flow more natural. I will also be changing a lot of the story. For example, I used a Manticore. I quickly noticed a lot of storied used this, so I swapped it out for something a little more exciting. The first story is still up on my page and you can look at it, but I will be removing it soon. I will also be going the same route with this story. None of the ponies will die. This will become clear as the story progresses.





9 Chapters:
- Chapter 1. Routine Training Exercise. 2013-04-25 00:59:30 UTC4588
- Chapter 2. New Sounds in Ponyville. 2013-05-08 01:08:11 UTC2400
- Chapter 3. Dark Rooms, Voices and Hospitals. 2013-05-11 06:24:52 UTC4411
- Chapter 4. When I Dream the Dream. 2013-05-17 08:33:13 UTC8676
- Chapter 5. A Night With the Moon. 2013-05-19 03:44:20 UTC6495
- Chapter 6. Failed Attempts of Seclusion. 2013-05-22 20:35:20 UTC11323
- Chapter 7. Distractions. 2013-07-23 04:16:06 UTC11628
- Chapter 8. The Coming Storm 2013-07-26 17:34:28 UTC6259
- Chapter 9. The Apple Family Farm. 2013-07-28 23:21:48 UTC6651