Fly is a teenager who has a semi-good life. All of a sudden, his life takes a turn for the worse when he fails a really important test that could get him a great education. On his way home, he got hit by a car while deep in thought. He wakes up in a new yet familiar place with somepony he always wanted to see. Wait one sec… Some-Pony?

This is my first fan-fict. I would like some pointers on what to put in. I would like an editor to help me through.