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Rejected

by Shikilicious
After being rejected by the mare she loves, there’s just one thing left to do: keep running, as far as somehow possible. Happy end eventually?

After being rejected by the mare she loves, there’s just one thing left to do: keep running, as far as somehow possible. Happy end eventually?

Edited by the awesome Alice from Planet Calypso Forum and Mrpunastic

This is some kind of warm-up writing for me before starting with the second arc of Unexpected Birth II as well as it's somewhat of experimental since I never tried writing anything in first person or simultaneously perspectives before.

After having it finished I'm a bit sad that it was concepted as rather short one-shot from the very beginning.
However, even if it's short, I hope you enjoy it; I'm sorry If you should happen to stumble across some grammar mishaps, I’m not natively speaking English (Finnish/German), but I think my editors took great care of everything; constructive Feedback (especially regarding the writing style) is very much appreciated :)

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Editing note (16-09-2013)
Changed the >ya're< to >you're< and the >wanna'< to >want to<; for details click here

Teen
Complete
Sad
Romance
 

4181 words: Estimated 21 minutes to read

2 Chapters:

  1. Rejected - The wrong end of the train 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1992
  2. Rejected - The other end of the train 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    2189