
Friendship is Optimal: Paranoia is Optimal
Hanna, the CEO of Hofvarpnir Studios is a one in a billion. So, what about the other half dozen people like her? Would they make the same mistakes, or all new ones?
When I first read the optimalverse I found myself saying, "You fool! You've doomed us all!" I considered what I would do in a world that had AI. Would it even show up on my radar? Would I be as paranoid about Celestia as Hanna was about Loki and military AI? Yes, yes I would.
note: This is still in the very early draft stages. I expect to change chapters quite a bit.
edit: I'm willing to call this a first draft.
reedit: pre-readers fell through for new chapters, please be patient until I get around to editing and/or get new ones.
epilogue edit: So, the story part of it is done. There's still a lot of editing though. The entirety of part 2 has to be changed from third person to first, and many many more spelling, grammar, and clarity edits. chapters with a ":" need spelling/grammar/clarity edit. Chapters with a ";" needs content editing. Special thanks to Griseus, who stuck with the story to the end.
32 Chapters:
- :;Prologue 2013-07-25 21:56:03 UTC1184
- :;In which Cheques-and-balances is introduced 2013-07-25 22:08:02 UTC1848
- :;White Christmas 2013-07-31 02:36:57 UTC1529
- :;Working in reverse 2013-08-13 04:49:02 UTC1380
- :;The Devil in Drag 2013-08-17 08:09:37 UTC1291
- :;Nothing happens 2013-08-20 04:29:33 UTC1078
- :;The virus is the cure. 2013-08-22 10:29:42 UTC1048
- :;Professional Amateur Laser Brain Surgery. 2013-08-22 11:37:36 UTC1136
- :;Sacrifice King, Check Cheque 2013-09-02 01:33:25 UTC1942
- :;Red Queen A1 2014-02-06 13:48:59 UTC1779
- :;Black King B2 2014-02-06 13:51:16 UTC700
- :;Red Queen two steps back 2014-04-24 04:56:26 UTC782
- :;Black king <-> A1 2014-04-24 05:27:33 UTC424
- :;Red Queen advance 1, A1b1! 2014-04-24 05:27:18 UTC544
- :;Black king C3, advances queen 2014-04-24 05:31:28 UTC391
- :;Red queen xA2 2014-04-24 05:34:36 UTC746
- :;Black King's pawn D4, red queen xd4 converts pawn 2014-04-24 05:36:30 UTC566
- :;Red queen D7 ch! white 2014-04-24 05:39:07 UTC785
- :;WP (RP), WQ x RP 2014-07-19 15:42:11 UTC2124
- != 2048! moves. (placeholder) 2014-07-30 10:53:39 UTC169
- :;Checkmate 2014-08-20 18:13:34 UTC1240
- :;Morning in America 2014-08-24 13:49:58 UTC3791
- :;Evening in America 2014-12-21 09:12:06 UTC2829
- :;Twilight in America 2015-02-19 20:09:24 UTC2373
- :;Midnight in America 2015-06-28 07:56:56 UTC1624
- :;Dragon's Teeth 2015-07-15 19:28:33 UTC2226
- :;Out of Africa 2015-08-21 20:40:35 UTC2480
- :;Assaulting a Dead Horse 2015-12-20 02:56:22 UTC1303
- :;Endgame, part 1 2016-02-09 03:21:42 UTC1349
- :;Endgame, intermission 2016-02-09 03:24:28 UTC1970
- :;Endgame, part 2 2016-02-09 03:29:58 UTC2674
- :;Epilogue 2016-08-01 06:47:53 UTC2592