In another World

In another world – By Fire power

Hey guys, this is my first fimfic, so please, if you have any constructive criticism, please do tell. This is another Human in equestria story, soz. Ya. The prologue will be in 3rd person, the rest in 1st person. So enjoy.

Brandon James was walking down the hall, waiting for another day to go by, and another, and another, and another. Every day, he would get up, get ready for school, learn stuff, get bullied, come home, do this homework and chores, watch mlp, and then repeat. He wished he could just, go to equestria, and be happy for once.

“How was school”? Said his mom. “Fine” was his only reply. “Are you sure”? “Ya mom”. He decided to go outside, and climb his tree. As he was up on his tree, he noticed the side of his house was wavy. “That’s strange”, he thought.

He jumped down to see why the wall was wavy. Was it just a heat wave, it was the middle of summer, was he just seeing things? He didn’t think so. Brandon went up to it and waved his arm around in it, only to feel an immense pull in his arm. He was quickly trying to pull it out, but it wouldn’t budge. He felt his whole body be pulled into the wavy vortex.

5 MINUTES EARLIER…

Twilight was walking in the meadow, going to the edge of the everfree forest to meet the other elements of harmony for their weekly pet play day. “Hey girls, I brought Owlicious”

“I brought Winona”

“I brought Tank”

“I brought Gummy”

“I brought Angel Bunny, if that’s ok with you”

“And I brought Opalescence”

“Ok, is that everyo-“, is all she said before a pony fell from the sky, on top of her. “Uhhhh”, Brandon said as he rubbed his head, with his hoof. “Wait WHAT THE FUCK, WHY AM I A PONY, WAIT AM I IN EQUESTR-“, was all he could say before Twilight hit him with a knockout spell. “Who was that”? Rarity said. “I don’t know, but how did he get into the sky in the first place, he is a unicorn”, Fluttershy said. “And why was he surprised he was a pony”? Twilight thought, looking at the handsome stallion that lay before her. “Who are you”, she whisper.

So that’s the prologue, how did I do? Bad? Good? Leave your comments below on what should happen next, this is fire power, signing off.