In another World

Hey guys, Fire Power here. So i researched some literary devices and what not, so hopefully my story will improve. Here is chapter one. All of this chapter was made while listening to Daft Punk

Brandon woke up in a daze, feeling a hard wind on his face. He very slowly opened his eyes to see that he was soaring over a colorful landscape of rivers, trees, and meadows of green. ( First person from here on out) Wait, i'm FLYING? i started to panic, and shake like crazy, only to have the chariot tilt enough to scare the purple mare beside me. The chariot suddenly glowed a sparkly purple and became still. "What was that?, you nearly killed us!". "I think the more important question here is why you tied me up, and put on a freaking flying chariot!", i exclaimed. "You came out of the sky, and you were surprised to be a pony. I'm taking you to Celestia, and that is that", she retorted. "I'll untie you, but only because i feel bad". That took me by surprise. I felt the rope around me loosen, and the got out of them and started rubbing my wrist.

When we got to Canterlot, i jumped out and felt the cool asphalt on my hoofs. I started walking and fell as soon as i took a step. "I guess you don't walk on four legs", Twilight exclaimed. " Well, how am i gonna get to Celestia then?" "I guess you could lean on me, she said, blushing a little. "It's alright, i uh, i'll learn to walk on my own", i said. We got there eventually (After i fell on my face about 27 times). When we got there, i gawked at the magnificent castle. I gotta admit, it looked a hell of a lot better seeing it from a pony's perspective instead of a computer screen.

We walked up to the main entrance, only to be blocked by the guards spears. "Who goes there!", they said simultaneously. "It's okay, he's with me", twilight said calmly. "What's his name?", one of the guards said. "M-my name? why do you need to know that?" "So we know who comes in and out of the castle, it's mandatory", he replied. I quickly look at myself, i look exactly like my OC, Black coat with a black and green mane and tail, with my own cutie mark of a flame on top of a horn, so i used my OC name. "My name is Fire Power", i replied, hoping he would buy it. "Alright come on in Mr. Power", said one of the guards. "You too ms. Sparkle", the other one said. We walked in the white and yellow castle.

When we walked in, twilight looked at me with a look that said "You made that name up". I nervously looked at all the guards and royalty we past, trying to look at classy as possible. "Here we are, the throne room", Said Twilight as we walked in a room with Beautiful windows. I remember this room from the "Crystal Empire" episode. We saw Celestia walk up to us from her throne. "Hello Twilight, i was wondering when you would bring Fire Power along. "Wait, you knew he was here, how could you possibly know he was coming?", she said a little shocked. "Because she brought me here, didn't you Celestia?", i said looking up at her. "Yes i did, as a matter of fact", Celestia boasted. "But, why? I mean, this is awesome and all, but why just me?". "You aren't the only brony i brought to Equestria". "Wait, what kind of creature is a 'brony'?", said twilight. "A brony is a person wh-" "Studies Equestria, so he knows all about the elements of harmony and equestrian places and things", Celestia said quickly. I realized she didn't want me to reveal my identity just, so i moved on in the conversation.

"OK now that we all know our names and who i am, where am i gonna sleep?", i said. "You could sleep with me, W-well not like that, but i mean in another room in my house", she rambled, blushing. "OK, it seems i should send you two on your way, i got a lot work to do, Celestia said. Before we left she whispered in my ear "Have fun, you can stay here, hopefully happier than before".

I walked outside into the yard of the castle, Going towards the chariot, only to be stopped by twilight. "OK i don't know how you are, if Celestia was telling the truth, but you better not harm anypony, or i will end you got it?" "Whoa whoa chill out i'm gonna harm anypony". i said, feeling her stare rip my soul apart". "OK, just checking she said, smiling". As we went the Ponyville Library, i saw every mare stare at me, so i whispered to twilight, "Why is everypony staring at me, do i look weird or something?" "No you don't, they are staring at you because you look hot", she replied. "Oh, so i look hot, do i?" "No not to me, she said, smirking.

Afterwards, we went inside, and we sat down on the couch. "Okay, rules here are number one, don't get on mine, or spikes bad side. Two, Don't eat all my food. And lastly, you can read as many books as you like", she said. "Okay, can i use this?" i said, pulling out my solar charged phone. "Ya, uh sure, whatever that is", she said. "Awesome". Afterwards we ate dinner with spike (Me and spike are cool) and i took a shower (Twilight wouldn't let me lay in her guest bed without cleaning off first), and laid in bed. Twilight came in, leaning on the doorframe, thinking i was asleep and said "i hope he doesn't think i'm mean, i'm just nervous. I hope you don't hate me". "I don't", i said. "OH YOUR AWAKE UH WELL GOODNIGHT", and then she bolted to her room. "Hehe", i muttered, before i dozed off.

Well, That all folks! Come back next time for chapter 2.