Chapters Ch:1 ( the attempt ( Keyota's POV unless said otherwise)View Online
Ch:1 ( the attempt ( Keyota's POV unless said otherwise)
I can't believe it's come to me actually doing this I thought to my self. what Is more unbelievable to me is why did I keep hope that it would get better for all this time. My entire life is just one big screw up, I should've known sooner that it wasn't going to get any better. "But...why?" I asked no pony in particular as I advanced along the path getting higher and higher with every step. " What did I do to deserve this?" "You've made me suffer through so much, I thought I was just a mistake." "A mistake to even have existed, I thought that was it for a long time until." "....Until this happened," i said gesturing a hoof to my now cutie Mark-less flank, as the ascent became a flat as it dropped off into the canyon below. "Now I know that it's true, i yelled as she reached the cliff edge, the last barrier between her and a near 40 story drop into the Rocky canyon bed."This world doesn't want me,... and I don't want to live in this world!" Small rocks fell down into the canyon below as my hooves placed themselves on the edge of the cliff. As I readied myself to jump I could hear a faint pair of hoof steps pounding into the dirt on the trail, and two familiar voices slowly growing louder were calling my name. wait a second.... those voices...Octavia?... and.. Vinyl? No don't come after me now! I turned back to the cliff face, the voices getting louder and louder, the hoof steps now pounding on rock instead of dirt. I crouched low, hind legs high, ready to jump.
"KEYOTA!!"
I lunged off of the cliff face slowly tumbling as i fell. A few seconds later I could feel a magical aura surrounding me, slowing me down- but not fast enough as I hit the ground.
Right before I blacked out, I saw a blinding blue flash, as three ponies appeared to my right.
I could only make out the unicorn because she spoke to me this. "Key..why- Vinyl said on the verge of tears,- i-i know life's been horrible to you but....
I couldn't make any more of what she said out as everything went black except for a small white light in the distance. But it seemed that the closer i got to it it seemed to get farther and farther away......Great life is making me work to be able to die.
As i regained conciousness i was met with searing pains all over my body. As i moaned in my pain, i felt a hoof reach out and place itself behind my head as it was slowly lifted up.
"K-key"- i felt myself get slowly shaken as i responded with a groan."Oh thank Celestia you're alive!"
""w-who-"
"It's me Storm, Vinyl and Octavia are also here, were in a hospital in Ponyville- of what was the name of it agian?"
""p-please" i could barely make out words i fell so hard.
"What, please what key?"
"p-please j-j-ust end it n-now"
"WHAT!?!?-Sorry Key i'm afraid i can't do that- and i'm not just saying that because Vinyl would Literally Kill me if i did, also i wouldn't be a good friend if i did."
A thumping sound from the supposed door caused Storm to head out the door- or so i was told. before he left he wished me good luck, and that if i die on him Octavia said she will never forgive herself.
......Great just great so if i die i will die miserably guilty, if i don't... i don't even want to think about what happens if i don't die.
So Keyota what will happen if you don't die?
... what the?
I'm waiting.
...The Buck is this?
You idiot what do you think i am?
...My concience?
Close but no i'm just a voice in your head
...well i near death so..what the hay- wait if your a voice inside my head..why don't you sound like me? ...I'm not your concience you stupid Blank Flank, miserable freak! ..wait-that voice...Rose-you piece of scum!at least i'm not the one who's drank it and then-well you know what happened I shivered heavily at the memory. Still i want to know- your life is a living nightmare- for you that is -If only i could stab you with my horn right now, but i don't actually know.
What will i do? I have no more life to want to come back to but....i stopped as a thought came into my mind.
Keyota so help me that if you die, i will never forgive myself- it will be all my fault. No scratch that it Is my fault.
No...i mustn't Let that happen...... I will not let another pony down again... not like......no........
Author's Note
Seems to me like a pretty good start off to this new story.
CH:0.1 (Other Characters info) ( some filler while i start finishing up chapter 2)View Online
CH:0.1 (Other Characters info) ( some filler while i start finishing up chapter 2)
This is just a description of some of the other characters you'll see later on in the story.
This is Storm Shock, a Pegasus stallion. He is Keyota's Best friend, and he is a nice pony who tries to get Key to see the brighter side of things, while looking past Keyota's...oddities of sorts. Storm is also the closest pony to Keyota, being with her often.
This is Sora, a Pegasus Mare, she is another one of Key's friends, with a love for flight. She can be a little hard to cope with when angry, but never too much to handle. She is also very competitive, which at times can lead to some...interesting situations.
This is Kai, a Pegasus stallion. He is also one of Keyota's friends, and was also Storms' roommate back at Uni. He is the one who competes with Sora the most. Although he sometimes finds it hard to overlook some of Key's oddities, they still remain friends. He is a usually kind and forgiving to everyone, tough he is a little bit timid himself.
Author's Note
If you've done your research you will know that the last two OC's are my co- workers's OC's, Sora actually wanted me to use hers and Kai....he just said ok....
I'm writing this not just because i need to get the OC Description down, but mainly because i'm writing this in a Comfort Inn at NYC, NY because i have a Dj'ing gig later today so i wont be able to work much on chapter 2 sooo....here's some filler.
Ch:2
Keyota suffered- luckily no serious injuries and after a few days was released from the hospital. Thus starting the adventure for Vinyl, and Octavia- along with Storm Shock, and the newly met Kai and Sora to get her life back on track.
"I just can't believe you would do such a thing Key." Storm started, him and Key were alone in the latter's house. It was around 9 pm, and Storm said he would stay with the mare until the next morning when the rest would be here.
"......."
"Keyota, i know life has been hard to you and all but this?"
"Just...Why- you've never been so like this before."
"Why you ask?...WHY?!"
"As if i even need to answer that....i'm not meant for life."
"Come on now Key thats just-"
"Look at me!" The sudden volume startled Storm a bit. He had never heard her be this loud before. As he took a good look at the mare before him, his perspective of her finally willing to see the mare by appearance.
Keyota's mane- still the two tone green, but no longer spiked straight. Instead it being a very messed up bed-mane of sorts- all while being able to hang down past her neck. Her normally white coat, now only pure white showing in certain areas, while the rest being a light-ish grey. She looked worn down as if she had slept in a pit. The most noticeable of her appearance was her now Cutie-Mark less flank. He hadn't tried to look at it before, for social akward-ness, even more so with Keyota so he hadn't noticed up until now.
"Key what-"
" I can't do anything right anymore, I can't even Dj anymore. I've stopped getting gigs and eventually lost my job after i bought the house. I'm guessing it's because of my now non exestant Cutie Mark. Cutie Marks don't normally disappear. Everything in my life, leading up to this....it means i'm not wanted in this world anymore!" "WHAT ELSE NEEDS TO HAPPEN FOR EVERYPONY TO UNDERSTAND THAT?!"
"STOP!"
"There has to be some explanation for this- other than what you said. Whatever it is, were going to find out what and why," He said as he glanced over to a clock. "Come on Keyota it's getting late, let's just get to bed k?" He sat down and thought for a bit as the mare went up to her bedroom.
How can a Cutie Mark just- just ...Vanish? It's just not possible...is it? Maybe- NO Keyota is Not right everypony has a reason to be alive, Everypony. "And we'll just have to find it- dare i say 'Celestia Give us strength'?" He asked as he looked towards the sky before starting for the bedroom.
Ever since the well.... 'incident' you could call it, Keyota had lost all but three of the few friends she had managed to gain. Storm was the only one left, because both Sora and Kai- her other two friends, were both off in Cloudsdale for the month. So besides him she was completely alone, she would usualy cry herself to sleep for the following nights. Thinking back to it now, it was lucky that Storm had come to check on her one night- amidst crying herself to sleep. He saw the tears and the look on her face and immediately came inside to comfort her. When the hours grew late and Luna's moon at it's peak, Storm had said he would say as long as she needed and went to bed. Only to be woken up a few minutes later by the sound of semi-suppressed sobbing, comming from the mare next room. He realized that the incident had also probably awoken old fears and incidents in the poor mare's dreams, and sat down beside the bed for a while. Untill realizing that, that wouldn't cut it so he - after only a moments' hesitation, got into the bed with her. Quickly feeling a pair of hooves around his side, their owner starting to subside the sobbing-but still shaking. That was until he turned her over and did the same, as the other mare slowly drifted into sleep.
That was one of the first and now few nights she had stopped the sobbing.
"The only night I felt safe." She said with tears of both joy and despair coming up as storm entered the room and climbed into the bed. Ever since that night Storm had kept his promise to be there, at anytime and do what was necessary to calm her down. At night that meant sleeping with her- JUST SLEEPING YOU PERVERTS. Something he gladly would do, if it meant being able help her out in any way. Now for Storm's POV on the event
It's getting late- Luna's moon just barely visible over the horizon, as i made my way to Keyota's house.
I can't even imagine a pony going through something like that and being that emotionally stable- let-alone Keyota. "What Rose did to you Key was Vile and Unforgivable- No matter what you might have done to her NOTHING is worth having...that done to somepony." Why i'm talking to No-pony in particular i don't know....."Ah there's her house," I said to myself as I knocked on the door.
"Keyota?" "You there?" Still no reply as I knocked again. "Keyota, it's me Storm."
Ah I hear hoof steps, she must be comming.
"Storm...i-is that you?" "That's what I said right?" I heard the door unlock, and a few moments later it opened inward as I stepped inside. The door closing quickly behind me, as I went and sat down on the couch, followed a few moments later by Key. Not much about her had changed since the recent 'incident'. Well save for her mane which was still the same two tone green-was now only spiked in some places, all while most of it fell down past her body.
"Key what's bothering you?" I said noticing the tears under her eyes.
"...."
"Key what Rose did to you was just....Vile and unforgivable No-pony deserves something like that."
"It's not just that- even before that everything that could screw me over did." "I mean what did I do to deserve any of this?" She said on the verge of tears.
"Nothing Key, you just gotta keep up hope- you still have us of course." "And we'll never desert you just because of what happens."
"y-you mean it?"
"Every word." I said as the dam broke- for once also with tears of joy, as I felt hooves wrap around me and her head on my shoulder.
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Eventually it grew late and Keyota went to bed. I had said I would stay with her as long as she needed me.
,it was about 11 o'clock when I tried to go to sleep on the couch in the living room. When I was woken up by a soft sobbing comming from the bedroom. "Poor mare- she's been through so much the past few days." I said as I walked into the bedroom.
The mare was of course sobbing- albeit suppressed in a way, but she was shaking heavily. I sat down by the bed for a minute before realizing that it had little effect. I eventually got into the bed and soon found myself held tightly by pair of hooves, she stopped sobbing over a few minutes. But the shaking continued, so I tried turning her over and did the same-luckily it worked and we both drifted off to sleep.
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"Don't worry Key tomorrow we get your life back" Storm said as he got into the bed with the mare who sighed before saying.
"That's what I'm afraid of." Storm responded with a pillow to the face.
"Just you wait Key just you wait.
Author's Note
I definitely think my writing ability is getting better.
Chapter 3 the journey begins
As Celestia's Sun rises over the horizion their journey begins.
All hail to the motherland!
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The sunlight seeping in through the blinds was what- with a slight groan, awoke Storm Shock from his slumber. He then left the bedroom to eat, to come back to Keyota curled up in a ball in the middle of the bed- still sleeping. "d'aww- I think i know where Vinyl gets it from....unless it's the other way around.... either way around it's shame to have to wake her up so early." " And i think i know how to do it- this time 'Vinyl Scratch Style!' He said with a small chuckle.
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Humility, timidity, somehow being pushed into a wall so fast you bounce back- or getting you horn stuck in the said wall by being thrown, despair, pain, fear. Not even in my dreams does the torment stop. No- Scratch that..Hey that would make a great name for a song-IF I COULD STILL MAKE And slash or remix one!....where was i...ah-Scratch that-Nightmares, i don't dream. Can't-Can't dream, life hates me soo much that it wont let me dream. I can't even Imagine how there even going to attempt to make thi- "WOAH-AHHH!!" Keyota's thoughts were interrupted as her body was suddenly hit by a tremendous reverberating force, and thereby flung off the bed- straight into the wall with speed even Rainbow Dash would be jealous of.
KEYOTA GET UP- IT'S BIG DAY FOR YOU TODAY!!!
"... Oh ponyfeathers- Sorry Key!, Didn't know Vinyl had the volume on...25!?!?! man didn't even know the Bass on this thing can go that loud." ".......Key?" The latter still teetering on the edge of consciousness.
"Oh great here i go trying to wake her up with Bass, and instead very nearly-either kill her. or at least give her a massive concussion." He said as he heard a knocking at the door. "Now what am i going to tell them; i was trying to wake her up using the power of bass but i may have killed her instead?" "Oh i am soo dead," he said as he went to answer it.
"YOU WHAT NOW!!!!???? that comming from sora- the only pegasus mare in the group, who very nearly just made everypony in the room deaf...well except for Vinyl. "Hey it was Vinyl's idea to use her Amp, not my fault if it for some reason has and was set to a volume level of 25!"
"....Vinyl why ever would you need that much bass?" "Duh isn't it obvious?" "You can NEAVER have too much BASS , besides- At least he didn't use my 'Bass Cannon' Now Mk2!"
Kai and Sora, lost it just as both Storm and Octavia face-hoofed.
"Can you at least fill us in on what you said you found out last night?" That comming from Kai after the two's laughter had died down.
"The main thing is that well...she lost her Cutie-Mark."
"....How can some Pony just lose a Cutie-Mark like that?" "I don't know, but the first thing were going to do is help Key get her Cutie-Mark...again." ".... What?"
"Uh shouldn't we try to get Key to regain consciousness first?" "...Oh...riiight." "She's still in the bedroom-i put her back down on the bed after i.... you know." "Yeah we know," Sora replied her voice hinting the slightest bit of venom.
"...Keyota-you ok buddy?" "....Key-Can-You-Hear-Me?" "Key-Oh thank Celestia, she's conscious- Key you feeling alright?"
"...I-I think so- Arug, W-What happened?" "Eh-heh heh, uh funny story; i was trying to get you excited for today by taking Vinyl's advice to use her uh... what was it agian?" "Bass Cannon Mk1 " Storm shuddered slightly when Key's eyes grew large at the words 'Bass Cannon' . "In hindsight i proabbably should've checked the volume level on it-But-But in my deafence i didn't know that it could and was set to a volume level of 25!" After a period of about 30 seconds, Key finally replied. "Well at least she didn't put the volume up to max." "...Max,what's the max then?"
"50" "....For Celestia sake Vinyl why 50?!"
"Well why not 50? Why in the Mk2 i think it can go all the way to 100!" "...Anyways-Keyota you feeling better?" "Yeah i think so, why?"
"Well the first step we're going to take involves finding your talent- if it's a new one so be it, but we're still gonna do it."
"Fine", she said sigh a sigh. "So where are WE going to begin?"
"Hmmm let's see now....." "Hey Storm what if we see if we can get Key able to Dj again?"
"...Good idea Kai....umm how exactly would we do that?" "Uh Key do you have any-uh... projects you were working on before-well that happened?" The Pegasus mare asked looking towards the digital turntables, which were placed around the room.
"Um I think I have a remix I was working on, let me check."she said walking over the computer and opening up what looked to be a Dj console of sorts.
Keyota soon found one and got to work on trying to finish it. Only herself, Sora and Octavia were left in the room-the others were off thinking what to do should this fail.
It was Octavia who first broke the silence in the room. "So Keyota, why do you use 'Sasukio' as your last name?" "I mean you were born in the Staccato family as a matter of fact." "То, что почему бы не пони знает об этом?" - "Мне, как принято, винил и ее родители нашли мне половина погибших на улице." "я даже не могу запомнить родителей- только в том, что я была штампов на улицах".
"What was that Key."
"Uhh...nothing..uh.... it-it..just sounded cooler.....I guess."
"I know she's lying.
"Russian."Sora whispered
"Come again?"
"She's speaking in Russian, born in staliongrad, fou-I-er ask Vinyl about it later ok?"
"Ok, How's it comming Key?"
"....Как вы думаете? !" "Я - диджей, кто никак не dj-то ужасное." "What-"
"GREAT-just great, ya прошлой неделе вы canterlot-Петр жвачку, путаются с другими пони жизнь- я уже более чем рад просто умирает когда Я питьевой шанс!" "Пусть же Клавиша Go, пусть он ко."
"Note to self; learn Russian."
"That would help, no?"
"Oh, ha-ha very funny Sora."
"We should probably give her some time alone, because you kinda don't wanna know what she just said."
"Wha-o-ok, Key well let you finish up we'll just wait out here for a bit." The two mare's quickly left the room, Octavia almost knocking over a mixer table in the process.
Author's Note
Had to stay up till 5 in the morning finishing up this chapter. That's a problem because I ad no sleep for two days because I was at a Dj'ing gig for the past two days non-stop....on the plus side I'm 2k richer *yay* decided to split this into two parts because of N³ every day a video rule......Go subscribe to him- he's a friking hilarious gamer.
Chapter:4 (1/2) Just how many things could go wrong in one mare's life?View Online
Chapter:4 (1/2) Just how many things could go wrong in one mare's life?
"Hey uh Vinyl, come here for a minute."
"Ok, what's up?"
"Can you explain to Octavia here, why Keyota's last name is 'Sasukio'?" "Sit down, this one's a long one." She said plopping down on the guest room bed.
"Well as you may or may have not noticed, Keyota has never told you about her parents right?" "Correct," Octavia said not quite sure where this was going.
"Well that's, because well he didn't have any." "They left him on the streets to die the day after he was born."
"Well that's no-..wait did you say he?"
"Yes, Keyota was a stallion."
"But i thought Keyota is a mare," she said confused again by what was going down. "She is a mare." "...But you-" "I said was tavi, was a stallion."
"What- h-how-" "Ever heard of a drink called the 'Gender Bender'? the pegasus asked." "...No, i don't think so."
"Well neither did Key- or any of us for that matter."
"But if she didn't know about it how-"
"Keyota didn't do it- hey um did Key ever mention anything about a pony named Rose?"
"I don't recall hearing anything like that," Octavia answered her brain still trying to fully understand what was going on.
"Well she's a flower pony with the big garden." "Well apparently Key did something along the lines of blowing up said garden with a 'Bass Cannon'." "So somehow she either swapped key's drink, or spiked her drink when me, key, and kai were at the park around 12 pm." "Norm-"
"Wait why in equestria were you at the park at that time of night?"
"Jeez did Keyota tell you nothing?" Even tough a rhetorical question Octavia still shook her head. "...Well i don't blame her much." "Well Keyota was born with some kind of muzzle disorder, which resulted in Key- still a stallion at the time- having a mare's muzzle." "She got made fun of her whole life up until then, since the muzzle was a disorder the drink didn't effect it." "Anyways the poor mare after the 'incident', she couldn't tell what would and wouldn't be considered colt-cuddling, or filly- fooling." "She still can't tell, and neither can we." "Anyways what stumped both us and a doctor is that the antidote for it wouldn't work on Key, for whatever reason it is."
"...Anyways again back to the original story Vinyl."
"Ok where was i...ah right." Well Key was born in Stalliongrad, and was there for most likely a week or so i would bet. "Well me and my family were on vacation to Stalliongrad, and as we passed by an alleyway me and my dad saw a flash of green comming from said alleyway." "We went to see what it was and it was then that we found Key." "It was also very lucky that we found him when we did, he was barely alive when we found him." "Remember that he wasn't even a week old, give or take one or two days." "We took him to our hotel room, and got him back to stable health." "When he woke up the poor stallion was terrified, and we didn't even realize that Key was a stallion until the third day when he was still unconscious."
"Was the muzzle enough for you not to be able to tell Key's gender?"
"Not just the muzzle, Key has also has a very long mane, longer than any stallion- and even longer than mine." "You still doubt me, here take a look." She said as Vinyl levitated a picture of the young colt, and as Vinyl had suggested without knowing that information first. It looked very much like a mare.
"I guess you're right, wait where did you get this picture from?"
"I keep it on my Bass Cannon."
how touching "Um if i may ask, how old were you at this time?"
"Umm.... can't remember but i know i am 5 years or so older than Keyota."
"The reason she prefers Sasukio is because it's a name that seems really familiar to her, soo that's pretty much the basics get it now?"
"For once yes and no."
Author's Note
i had something to say here......forgot it...darn....
Anyways this is bringing you pretty much up to speed with Keyota's past.
....wait i REMEMBERED!!YUS!!!
I had given the name Rose to the pony who well if you read- did that to Keyota after she 'apparently' Bass Cannoned her garden... now seems like a thing she might actually do cannon wise......didn't realize that she was already a background flower pony......worked out well with the bass cannon bit. :)
This is going to be a two part chapter because i got a gig later today and want to get something out sooo......here it is.
"Ok i think i get it now but, if you and your family found Key on the streets doesn't that make her your brother- i er sister- uhh..sibling?" Octavia asked, still with a bit of confusion.
"Yeah it would, except for the fact that well now were not sure if key's my brother or sister?" "So we just call her my cousin when we meet new ponies."
"Well that makes sense, I guess."
"So Storm, you really think Key has a chance to do again?" Kai asked skeptically, while looking in the direction of the bedroom.
"I have faith in key, I mean after all she did major in musical applications back at uni."
"Yeah-" Kai stopped briefly as they heard Keyota talking from the bedroom.
"Wait now what's the resonance slider do agian?" "Come on Key you majored this in uni." The music the the two stallions heard suddenly lost it's depth and lost it's audio quality. "Op-no that makes it worse in every single way."
"...I wouldn't count on it too much."
"Hey Vinyl!"
"Yeah Storm?"
"Go see if you can lend your sister a hoof."
"Mmk,"she replied heading into the bedroom.
I remember when Key was still a colt and used to watch me remix. Oh and the first time i asked him to have it a go. Those were the days...those were the days...now the roles are in reverse.
€Flashback£
I was sitting at my console setup. It consisted of a semi-digital dj console with two vinyl turntables. With two prototype bass cannons stacked on top of each other each side. My setup sat in the gigantic music studio- the one with a huge ceiling and soundproof walls and separate recording room. I have my signature shades resting on the base of my horn, and my custom headphones with my cutie Mark on the earpiece coverings around my neck. I set down a Vinyl and select a track on the digital console, and move it to track 1. I start the first vinyl spinning, and threw down an electronic dubstep beat. I start the song on track 1, and I put my headphones on as the sound of rapid electronic beats fills my head. I'm about 40 seconds in when i see something green out of the corner of my eye.
"Huh?" I say as i pause the song and take off my headphones. I turn around to find my little brother keyota, poking his head through the door to the studio. Me and my dad had found him in an alleyway- nearly dead, probably only a few days old at that. The little colt is still only about one or two years old now....still hard to tell that he's a colt.
"Oh, hi key what's up?" Key...i like that, it's catchy.... I'll have to remember that. The colt just looked around the room, his gaze stopping upon the console setup. "You don't talk much do you?" "...Oh this, this is what I use to Dj.....you can come in." I said realizing that Keyota was still in the doorway. The colt came and stood up on his hind legs, trying to be able to see over the mixer.
"Here let me help you." I said as I picked him up and gently put him down on a relatively empty part of the console. I watched as Key looked over the knobs and sliders, before stopping at one of the volume level scales. "....neat isn't it-wait...oop forgot to turn off the dubstep." I said as i turned the wubs off- much to the dismay of Keyota. "Don't worry it'll be back- hey wanna see it in action?" I was visually relieved when his eyes lighted up as i said the words. "Well then DROP THE BASS!"
I reset the track and hit play, as i gave both Vinyls a spin as the pounding bass set in. After the first few beats the colt-noticing the two spinning objects, jumped onto one as the vinyl reached it's max speed. "hehe, ohhh i used to do that when i was a filly, fun isn't it?" To my surprise Key actually said 'Yeah' it was the first time he spoke to me. After that day whenever i would work on a song he would most likely come in, sit down right next to me, and watch and listen.
Oh and you know that song i was working on, i waited until key could work a console ( which didn't take over 3-4 years) I asked key if he wanted to help me with it, and well that's why the song has the heavy wub sections. It was that day after me and Key remixed the song live, that Key got his cutie mark.
Author's Note
Once the Christmas season gets here one of the following should happen. I will have less Dj gigs and have more time to work on this story. Or two; I will have a few more gigs and then have not enough time because I have to prepare to go to Kursk for a snipe off.... either way I will try to work more on this story..... Also a N³ reference In this chapter. First one to find it..... gets a cookie and SAUSAGE! (Another N³ reference)
Also i'm more than likely going to start a mini series of sorts over Key's Foalhood which is why this is short.
Chapter: 5; Nightmare Night....what's that?
"Keyota, how ya-" Vinyl started as she entered the bedroom. Only to be asaulted by a mess of notes and off tune beats. "..Not so good eh?"
"Nope Я - DJ, которые не могу DJ, так что теперь что?"
"I dunno, and Key remember Octavia doesn't speak Russian."
".... что в прошлом месяце идею."
"Хорошо, тогда получите пашины здесь, жеребцов уже, вероятно, уже что-то."
"...Fine, can't imagine what they can come up with."
"I don't know, but it's getting late." Sora said to everypony in the living room.
"Yeah....Oh yeah Nightmare Night is tomorrow, and that means Free Candy!"
"Vinyl, you cannot possibly be serious." Octavia said with a slight annoyance.
"You can NEVER outgrow candy, especially free candy."
"Умм-ребята .... какой кошмар ночь?"
"WAIT YOU WHAT?" Vinyl and the Pegasi said simultaneously.
Oh for the love of-. Octavia's thoughts were interrupted by another outburst from Vinyl.
"EQUESTRIAN BROTHER, DO YOU SPEAK IT?!
"Sorry.....I said: what's Nightmare Night?"
"....you really don't know keyota?"
"Not a clue."
Kai turned to the unicorn sitting next to Octavia. "You've never taken her before?"
"....Ohhh-that might explain why we were wondering how Key got back before we did." "....Guess we must've left him at home....oops."
"So that's where you guys went."
".....Oook....well how about we take Key out to the festival tomorrow?"
"Well if Key's up for it, I'm game." "Anyways I got to go, see ya." The pegasus mare said as she trotted out the door.
"So Vinyl, Octavia you two want to stay here for the night, and help me explain Nightmare Night to Keyota?"
"Why not."
"So Key you ever heard of either; Princess Luna or Nightmare Moon?"
"I know about Luna....Nightmare Moon?"
«skip forward to the Nightmare Night festivals»
"Wow.....it's a big festival." Keyota said to Kai in amazement. The ponies were going in three groups. Vinyl and Octavia, Sora and Storm, and Kai and Keyota. The latter were
"Yep-" was all the Pegasus could get out before being interrupted by the unicorn.
"Hey-what the?" "Hang on Kai I thought I saw something." Keyota exclaimed as she neared an alley.
"Ok, just remember meet back at the house in 2 hours."
"Yeah yeah i k-urgh!" The unicorn was suddenly, apparently pulled into the alley with something red around her mouth.
"WHAT THE-" was what Kai got out before he got knocked out by something heavy slamming into his face.
Author's Note
Have to cut this short and into multiple parts because for the next chapter or two there will be excessive gore and moderate amounts of mature content including but not limited to sexual and physical rape. Viewer disscression is heavily advised.
This is your last warning......
.......- ok then yes i know it's short and no this isn't the only chapter i'm uploading today- Happy Nightmare Night by the way- i'm proabably going to upload- counting this one. 2-3 chapters tonight/today/ whenever it is when i publish this.
(P.s.) ah Shit woo busy watching the AMAZING ending to Phoenix right Turnabout Storm I forgot the time......eh heh heh.....don't know that that is........HOWWWWWWWW!!!X ILL PUT A LINK TO IT. Woo sorry for the late http://m.youtube.com/?reload=7&rdm=x7e587i7#/watch?v=yUDfoZGhLjE
Ch:6 Keyota's Darkest Hour (1/4)
Oh Celestia what's going on?! I cringed as a hoof slammed my muzzle and horn into a wall. "Let's start this party going." A mysterious male-sounding voice said. OH MOTHER OF FAUST WHAT IS HE DOING-WHA-NO NO- "ARAHHHHHH!" I screamed, but the gag blocked out most of not all of the cry. I was suddenly found from one wall to the opposite and as I hit, I felt a lot of magic leaving my body. Celestia kill me now!
"D-did anypony get the licence plate of that flying monolith?" Kai said to nopony in particular, as he was still a bit loopy from the near concussion. Finally regaining his senses and memory panic set in.
"K-key?!" "KEYOTA!" "Keyota-OH CELESTIA the alley!" He said as he rushed to the alley.
"Wha-" he said puzzled as he stopped and examined a pool of something near the entrance to the alley.
"What is-OH CELESTIA-i-it's blood!"
"Keyota-OH no!" "Mother. of. bucking. faust!"
There either dead or unconscious, in a pool of blood layed Keyota. She was full of cuts, and two long and deep gashes- one along the entire left side of her body, the other nearly wrapping around her entire right foreleg. All of which were still leaking blood, while a slightly curved plus-the southward part going farther than the rest, one under each eye were now scarred in permanently. That wasn't the worst injury by far. Keyota's horn...her horn....was....where is- over there. H-her. Horn.was.broken.off....yeah that's probably the worst then isn't.
"K-k-key...Key!" "Come on..anything-" ".....bad-this is very bad." He said as he lifted her onto his back and took off.
*near two hours later*
"Where are they?" Sora said, with concern only equal to that of Vinyl's.
"I don't know i am really starting to- huh?" The only earth pony in the group exclaimed looking to the skies suddenly.
"What are you- OH SHIT HIT THE BUCKING DECK!" Everypony complying, as shortly after a grey pegasus, apparently wearing several paper bags crashed into the ground.
"...Oh hey Derpy, nice costume." Vinyl said almost non-chalontly as she went over and helped the pegasus up.
"Thanks but guys Kai sent me to tell you that....Keyota is in the ER right now, and you need to come right away." Derpy exclaimed, and not longer than two seconds after- Octavia's knees decided that now is as good of time as ever to-colapse.
"Holy horsecrap on a sandwich-ah ok come on ponies let's move." "Derpy you wanna come?" Storm said still somehow maintaining a somewhat good mood.
"Sure, I can give her a get well muffin, now follow me." The wall eyed pegasus then took to they skies, staying low and slow enough for the two non-pegasi ponies could keep up.
ohhh...i hope Keyota is going to be alright......and where are they?! the Pegasus was pacing furiously, still awaiting the doctors diagnostics results. When the doors burst open and 5 ponies burst in. "What took you mares...and Storm?!" He added after the look he got from said pony.
"Sorry Kai, it took me a while for me and the Doctor-" she gasped, "Oh no he's still looking!" "Hold on I'll be right back." And with that she was gone.
"....Anyways," the earth pony said after brief pause. "How is she doing?"
"...Not good at all, I can't find a single place that's not bleeding that is massively bruised, or......." his voice trailed off at the end.
"Where is she?" "What happened?!" The unicorn practicality yelled into the pegasus's face.
"Room eleven, and well she kinda-sorta got raped.....physically and sexually-please don't kill me it was the flying monolith that knocked me out" the Pegasus barely got out as he was now cowering behind a chair.
Surprisingly Sora somehow beat Vinyl to him, pinning him against the wall, her voice dripping more venom than a snake. "WHAT THE BUCK DID YOU JUST SAY!!!" Ironically in the same instant Vinyl's well...everything gave out hereby falling face first into the floor. While Storm and Octavia were just barely succeeding in holding back Sora from very likely killing kai.
Author's Note
I promise more In the morn I just gotta get some sleepenbdb ndhrindiendkdjdidjdjdjdjdhdjdjdjdidjdnbdjndr
CH:7 Keyota's Darkest Hour (2/4)
"Arug- Somepony get a tranqualizer gun!" Storm shouted as he and Octavia struggled to keep Sora from at the very least, mauling Kai. When he thought he saw something glint and immediately after, noticed that Sora stopped struggling and go almost limp. "What the-" his voice trailed off as an other two voices spoke up.
"Vill zis dwo?"
"Doctor, the tranquilizer." Derpy said a bit annoyed as it would seem.
"Ight-" there was a quiet clattering sound as the gun hit the floor. "Sorry 'bout that, what I said was; will this do."
"Quite, I always wonder how you always get the timing right."
"Well, anyways mind if I go see the patient?"
"Sure-ah, Derpy mind staying with Sora till she wakes up?"
"Okey-dokey then."
"Ok, now how bad can it be?" The doctor said as he started off for the room.
About fifteen minutes or so later he returned.
"So how is she?" Vinyl asked slowly rising from the bench.
"Not good i'm afraid, here if you want i have some pictures of her condition when she got here" he said showing the pictures to the ponies.
"Dear Celestia almighty....ok two things, is her horn the worst injury?"
"I'm afraid so, you see- let me explain it to you." "As you know when a unicorn uses magic they use energy, use too much and they get tired. Use way too much and you collapse from exhaustion, or worse, so a unicorn has to have energy to live. Their horn contains and uses that energy. If you lose that the unicorn can't store much if any energy and will die if something drastic and short of a miracle happens. And Keyota here needs that miracle to survive, luckily Kai here brought her in soon enough to try and reattach the horn. Of if that fails either surgically cut it off, or re route the energy through the same was as an earth pony or a pegasus."
"Ok, the second thing is the markings under her eyes...what does that mean?"
"To be honest I've got no bloody idea as to what that means, I've only scene it one other time. But if this happened there's a good chance we can find him here."
"Who Doctor?"
"It's Doctor who."
"What?"
"Oh nothing, he goes by the name of; Kyoya Tategami."
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(The next morning)
"So what does this 'keyoya' fellow look like?" Sora asked the Doctor. The Doctor, Derpy whooves, Sora, Kai, Storm and Octavia were pretty much just wandering around ponyville. With the exception of Vinyl and obviously Keyota.
"No it's 'Kyoya' not 'Keyoya', as for what he looks like." "Let me just say that he, more less is the living incarnation of the word 'green'." The Doctor replied, as he started to squint to the left. "Ah I think that's him over there." He said pointing to a green earth pony, and walking up to him.
"Who the heck are you?" The earth pony replied.
"Wild Fang, you would've won if not for your injury."
The earth pony looked surprised for a few seconds before regaining his composure and replying. "Damn right I should've won, so it's really you is it."
Surprised you didn't remember me in the first place Kyoya, so any of your friends somehow came to be here as well?"
"Only one so far. Hey Tsubasa!" Kyoya called out.
"Yeah?" A voice from behind a tree came.
"C'mere for a minute."
"What is it this time 'yoya?"
"Grrrr-Stop calling me that!"
A light blue earth pony stepped out from behind the tree, and came up and affectionately nuzzled Kyoya before handing him a green object.
"H-hey stop it!"
"Aww you know you love it."
"N- no i don't!"
The blue earth pony turned to the Doctor. "Yeah he does."
"S-SHUT UP!"
Both the Doctor and the blue pony laughed at that.
"Oh for-gruh." Kyoya exclaimed as he facehoofed.
"Um, not to interrupt but who are these two?" Octavia asked sharing the confusion of the group.
Oh um yes this here is Kyoya Tategami."
"Hey."
"And over here we have...umm I don't believe we've met before."
"Tsubasa Otori nice to meet you."
"This here is Octavia."
"It's a pleasure to meet new mares here.
"I-ugh" both ponies sputtered simultaneously as the area around there eyes darkened.
"D-don't they have peo-er ponies with long hair here?"
"What?" Octavia asked confused about what was going on, till she caught it.
"OH I m-mean N-new stallions around here." She quickly corrected laughing nervously at the end, while the two ponies both facehoofed.
"....ookkk then....well this is Kai."
"Sup."
"And this is Sora."
"Hehehey." She said still laughing from that mishap.
"And finally this is Derpy whooves."
"Hiya, either of you want a muffin?"
"Sure, haven't had anything to eat in days, want one Tsubasa?"
"Ok, and nice name by the way," he said before biting down on a muffin.
"Thanks, uh Kyo what's that thing?"
"Kyo? man i think that nickname might be worse than Yui's"
"Heh, oh you mean Leone?" Kyoya asked pulling the object out of it's holster.
"Oooo Shiny."
"Ah uh you're not-" he was suddenly cut off by a nudge by Tsubasa. Who then made his eyes go how you might say 'Derpy style' and then shaking his head.
"What was that Kyo?"
"Oh nothing." he replied as he put the object back into it's holster.
"So you need me for something Doctor?"
"Actually yes, but i wish it was for a better cause."
(To be Continued)
Author's Note
and with this chapter we offically embark on a crossover with an anime. 10points to the first one to name the name of the anime.
if you find it out i want to say first that i got into the anime i was channel surfing and i thought i heard my name on one of them so i returned to the channel to be met with this.( ill put it in a comment).....and got hooked because there's no such thing as a bad anime.....mainly because i fricking love anime.
p.s. i was sick as F*** the last week or so so that's why this chapter is late. ( still kinda sick)
CH:8 Keyota's Darkest Hour (3/4)
(Meanwhile back at the hospital)
"Ok now hopefully she'll wake in a moment now." Dr.Zager said, removing the syringe from Keyota's chest.
Come on Key,been through so much. Please Celestia don't let him die now. Vinyl hoped as she sat anxiously awaiting if he-er she was gonna live.
The heart beat monitor suddenly increased. "She's going into shock, raise anesthetic to 3.3." The beats kept increasing, albeit at a slower rate. "Patient is trying to resume magic flow." "It should be working." As soon as the words left his mouth the heartbeat dropped massively. "What, patient is losing magic rapidly." The heart beat slowed to only around 3 beats every ten seconds.
The Doctor turned to Vinyl and said. "I'm sorry she's losing too much energy." "Nothing we can do now but hope she's able to find out how to regulate magic again."
"N-no keyota. I wasn't there for you....Damn him to hell." Vinyl said in a barely audible whisper, as a tear streaked down her face. She started remembering the good times they had,when she remembered from the stories her parents had read to her that the voice of somepony they loved could bring them back. Even tough it would only work if it was true love she was willing to try, no matter what may come of it. So she then stared to sing, quiet enough for only her and Keyota could hear, with the exception of somepony with acute senses.
"And then when you've bingled all your bangles and your loved ones have been mangled, listen to the jingle jangle of my gypsy tambourine." Vinyl sang the song slower and less cheerfully than it was usually sang at, all the while in Russian. "And these cords are hypnotising and while the world's harmonizing, so please children stop your crying and sing along with me"
After Vinyl's voice had faded the heartbeat monitor started to increase, until finally peaking at a normal rate.
"Oh thank Faust." Vinyl said breathing a sigh of relief. Russian was a language she more, less needed to learn to be able to understand Key early on. Up until they moved to ponyville, Supporting the idea that Key was born in staliongrad, she only spoke Russian. She still remembered the first few days after he started speaking to her and her parents.
(Flashback)
"Да!" Key said, still spinning on the vinyl.
"Yeah tha-wait wuh?" She stopped mid sentence, utterly confused. "Uh say that again."
"Да!" He repeated, hopping off of the vinyl.
"Ah..umm...h-hey dad!"
A tall blue Pegasus poked his head through the doorway. "Yeah vinyl?"
"What's he saying?" She said pointing her hoof at the little colt.
"Что это за место?" "... И что ты говоришь?"
The pegasus cocked his head. "Hmmm..." he looked back at vinyl. "He's not speaking Equestrian...think it might be Russian, would make sense because we found him in Staliongrad."
"...Russian?" She asked.
"Let me check.." he cleared his throat. "Вы говорите по-русски?"
"Вы правы." He replied, happy to finally understand something they said.
"Yep, Russian."
"О, нет, я не могу понять, что они говорят больше!"
"Guess you're going to have to learn Russian now."
"So it really does work" a voice said from behind and the dj. Who screamed while jumping nearly two feet into the air, before landing and turning around as she was dragged back to the present. She was met with a blue earth pony stallion with a light silver mane that went down to his hooves.
"W-who are you?!"
"Friend of the Doctor."
"O-ok...how long have you been standing there?"
"I'd say..since you began to sing."
"..How..-?"
"Very acute senses." "So it seems that your friend here has found true love." Moments after the words came out of his mouth, behind her purple shades Vinyl's eyes grew wide.
"Ohallmightyfaustmysisterisinlovewithme!"
"Well it-wait your sister?" Vinyl nodded quickly, still trying to process what this meant. "Huh we'll correct me if I'm wrong here but." "True love doesn't have to be the romance kind of love, it's most likely sisterly love, but I could be wrong." "Or it could be a little different."
"What do you mean?"
"You were the one who first found her right?" He paused for a moment as Vinyl nodded. "And she got into Dj'ing because of you." "And your her only sibling, one who's been by her side through good and bad, sick and well." "So when you think about it it's not that hard to believe where she's comming from about you is it?"
Vinyl looked down for a moment. "...i-i guess I get it." She said softly, looking back up.
"Or she could think of you as a motherly figure to her, since you're the first one she saw." The pony said with a slight hesitation.
"...that...also makes sense...in a way."
"One more thing, it's just going to get harder from now." "These are her worst injuries by far, and likely the most traumatizing." "Just be sure you're there for her, she needs you now more than ever." He said as he started for the door.
"Right...Hey I never got your name."
"You'll find out soon enough."
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(Back to ponyville' s outskirts)
"-and that's pretty much what happened so far." The Doctor said, finishing up. "Hey wait...where did Tsubasa go?" All five ponies looked around at the same time.
"Ahh, he'll turn up sooner or later like he always does." Kyoya said nonchalantly. Is it possible that in some form, he's here too? He thought. if he is...we might have a problem on our hands...er hooves.
...stupid puns..
Author's Note
Sorry I got this out so late, I've been busy with multi day gigs in places ranging from las Vegas Nevada, to Orlando Florida. Along with the fact that I'm now working on multiple stories now. I'll try and get back into the swing of things.
We're almost to the end of arc one, the chapter after the next one should kick off the second arc; codenamed (wip) Either; Knokin' on devil's door. Or; 'The Rehab Respite, or finally 'Tempest on the Horizon.'
While this arc is called; Calm before the Assault.
Also next chapter will be flashback heavy.
(Arc; 1 finale) Keyota's Darkest Hour (4/4)
"Ok she hopefully should be waking up in a few minutes or so." Dr. Zager said again taking a needle out of Key's left fore leg. The others had joined Vinyl at the hospital. More specifically the waiting room, while Vinyl was with key.
"Oh thank faust, now Zager is there anything else we need to know?" Octavia asked, as he came out from the room into the waiting room.
"Yes there is." "First of all she's undergone a major trauma, from the rape and physical abuse." "Her mental state will most likely be majority effected for a while, along with some of her sanity which we need to re gain." "This is more important in her than any other patient I've had. "Maily it's because she had little sanity to begin with this time." "Awaking up to realize you've been genderswaped takes a lot away from you." "Then there's the..Well incident you told me about, that took little if any away." "The real deal is being well 'violated' in that new body takes a huge portion away, enough to really mess with your head." "She will be very unstable for a long time so you need to do whatever you can to take her mind off that incident." "She will most likely not partake in the things she usually does, in exchange for something more calming or activities that require little to no thinking, or things around that sort." "This is good because it means her sanity will hopefully start to regain itself faster while doing that, so try and keep her away from straining activities for a while." "Her sanity is already nearing the 'red zone so we can't let it drop any more." "As for physical injuries go...I'm sorry to say but I haven't seen worse in my entire career." He said with a frown and slight hesitation. "Her horn was unfortunately unable to be reattached." "And she will have to undergo surgery to be able to have a horn transplant." "Even if the surgery is successful, she won't be using any magic whatsoever for a long while." "Her body will ache and hurt alot, and she's most likely going to be able to use either her front right or back left leg again." "-b-but there is a small chance she, with a lot of therapy and luck, just might be able to use them in a while." He quickly added nervously as Sora glared at him. "There is also an effect of the trauma which we've only seen twice now where the patient's eye color changes either permanently or temporarily." "The eye color also now has the ability to change color to a certain extent depending on emotions or physical or mental state." he concluded
"Worse than we expected." The Doctor said looking down.
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Key started to stir
"come on come on, wake up." Vinyl silently pleaded.
A few seconds after Keyota's eyes shot open and shot around the room, as her breathing quickened. Her irises pure white.
"Ah-P-p-пожалуйста-d-d-олигархи! " she squeaked out.
Vinyl went over and embraced the mare. Being extra careful not to touch any of the injured areas. "I'm here, he's gone it's gonna be ok." Her breathing eventually evened out, while her irises slowly turned magenta as Zager and Octavia entered.
"Is she conscious?" Octavia asked walking behind Zager.
"Yes and awake."
Keyota turned her head towards the two ponies entering, and immediately after ducked under her mane. "EEP-ah это только вам Octavia." She said poking her head back out of her mane.
"Keyota why do you hide your eyes like Vinyl? Magenta is such a wonderful color."
The mare turned to vinyl.
"W-что она сказать?"
She translated it for her, whereupon she turned her head down and away.
"Uh...was it some thing I said?" She asked looking confused.
"Well ya see tavi, magenta isn't actually her natural eye color." "Back when she was staying with you, like now her eye color was outta wack and a color no mare should be born with." "I'm most likely going to have to get her spare pair ajusted because apparently... looke here." She said pulling key's head back up and motioning to her right eye. "See this." Pointing to a off contrast area in the center of the pupil. "That my filly is an effect from the trauma, that effected her eyesight." "Either made her near or far sighted, right doc?" She said removing her hoof from her sister's chin.
"My, well I'm impressed."
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We were sitting in a blue box that had landed in a library of some sort, I think the Doctor said its called the T.A.R.D.I.S. After a quick explanation to the librarian she joined us, I think her name's Twilight. If this dimension has anything to do with that book...God help her. Well we dropped off Keyota at somepony named Fluttershy's cottage along with Tsubasa. Really shy mare, untill we explained what happened to her. After that well the shyness left, the wall eyed one says her talent' s with animals and she's the best fit to take care of key. Heh she literally was all over key once we told her...anyways that mare's somehow lost enough sanity to forget a lot....like how to speak English-or Equestrian as its called here, and that's why we left Otori to translate. Still didn't know that he knew how to speak Russian...or when he learned it. Otori or not I still have to know if he's here too. Grrr When I get my hooves on you you'll be nothin' but a fine red mist! You vile creature.
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On top of a building watching the group from above and out of sight a lone stallion stood. He was a indigo unicorn with a darker shade of indigo for his mane, with a black wolf cutie Mark with a red glow around the outline.
He chuckled slightly "So you're here too Doctor...and who's this." "I've never seen them before...it won't matter." "In due time...in due time." He said, failing to notice the light blue pony slowly sneaking up to him.
Author's Note
Happy New year's!
There are a total of 3 references in this chapter. One being fairly obvious.
And so with thus we move onto our second arc.
Arc II
Retribution
Author's Note
For those who're wondering the green in her eyes is just a placeholder color, untill I work the original color into the story.
(Arc II Begin) Dark Intentions
The unicorn Levitated a pair of binoculars to his eyes and looked to the right.
"Everything's here except wrong gender." He mused to himself. "Still might be him somehow."
Sora silently crept up and pressed herself up against a wall opposite to Tsubasa.
"If only it were that simple." The unicorn began again with a chuckle. "You were to become legendary, nothing able to possibly get in your way." "But he...stoped us." "We had tried to eliminate him earlier." "We had no more possible use to get out of him." "But he managed to escape...and stop the process and take you along." "We're still still hunting, it won't be much longer now." "Nowhere else he might possible be but somewhere in Equestria still." "The fool." "Once I find you and complete the process We will use you to such an extent that even Celestia herself will tremble in fear of Dark Nebula!" He turned around and started for the stair well.
Tsubasa nodded slightly and Sora flew into action. She quickly stood up reached around the wall and sucker punched the unicorn in the face. She followed up by quickly grabbing him around the neck by use of her fore legs and quickly pulling up and releasing. Sending the unicorn to the ground instantly. She then proceeded to grab him up zoom him over to the barrier of the building they were on and smashing his face on it hard, multiple times. She didn't stop untill the indigo pony stopped twitching, and with a final buck to the groin she dragged his unconscious body over to Tsubasa.
"Nice...remind me never to piss you off k." He said slinging the body over onto his back as Sora gave a smirk as the headed to deliver the news.
"Not good not good." "Bad bad very very bad- Twilight and Derpy look in these books."He said moving a hoof over all of the books in Golden Oaks Library. "And look for anything about or directly related to dark, or transformative and anything about amplifying power and strength." He was cut off as a colt near his tween years burst in and quickly started to barricade the door after a Pegasus flew in, flipped over a table and took cover behind it, as the colt noticed the occupants of the building. "Ah ah they finally found me ahhh quick gotta just ah this!" He shoved a shelf over the door. "AH Tsubasa Keyoya thank faust you're here!" He yelled as the Pegasus started pulling out several cylinders out of his saddlebags.
Both Keyoya and Tsubasa looked Suprised as Keyota ran over and slid behind the table and started taking with the tan Pegasus.
"Y-Yu!" Tsubasa yelled. "Why are you here, I thought you were running from Nebula!"
"They finally found me here there comming! There comming!" The small colt yelled back frantically.
"HEY TSUBASA YU FOUND DASHIAN!"
"Dashan!?" He asked a small smile comming to his face.
"Right here." The pegasus replied.
"Who are these?" Both Vinyl and Octavia asked the Doctor who seemed more worried than ever.
"This is Yu Tendo a friend of Both Otori And Tategami.
"And this is Dashan Wang, someone they competed against in the World Tournament.
There was a loud crack as the door blew inwards, blowing a hole in the wooden shelf as everypony in the room went for cover.
Keyoya motioned up with his hoof as he and Tsubasa both ran up a wall onto the ceiling waiting to pounce. Some 20 ponies with dark purple face masks lunged in through the hole.
"HEY!" dashan shouted as the ponies turned to look. "CATCH THIS BUCKERS- FLASHBANG AWAY!" A loud band and white light engulfed the room as the sound of heads being bashed grew louder as the light faded, showed that Key and Tsubasa had cleared the room.
"CLEAR!"
"CLEAR!"
"Ok were clear now everypony in." The Doctor said opening the doors to the T.A.R.D.I.S. and within minutes they were off.
"Ok do we have everypony?" The doctor asked.
"Me, vinyl, Sora, Kai, Keyoya, Tsubasa, Yu, Dashan, Derpy, Storm...Oh no....Where's Key?"
"...Still at Fluttershy's Cottage!" Storm answered.
"Doctor, do you have any sort of cameras?"
"Yes as a matter of fact I do." He said pressing a button revealing Fluttershy's cottage...With a burnt hole in the wall.
"One pony heat signature detected." "Either fluttershy's dead or more likely than not Keyota's gone."
"N-no Damn it I knew I shouldn't have left him." Yu mumbled looking down at the T.A.R.D.I.S. floor.
"It's ok you kept him safe for a lot longer than we thought possible." Tsubasa said putting his foreleg around the little colt.
"Um what the hay is going on here." Vinyl intruded
"The ponies who just attacked us are Dark Nebula a evil organization that specializes in dark and arcane magic. Keyota was kinda sorta created by them for the purpose of becoming super powerful, unstoppable weapon they would use to overthrow the royal sisters. Now Yu here was once part of them untill they betrayed him and tried to have him killed, and are still trying by the looks of it. Yu managed to escape and nap Keyota from their clutches mid-transformation process. Yu lost him somehow and apparently you picked him off from the streets. Now they're trying to finish what they begun and finish the process. He concluded. "Were here to end them before they can succeed." "Doctor set a course coordinates z-097 x-253 Y-749...Mark Ready aim....engage." and with that the group set off on a mission to destroy Dark Nebula once and for all.
Author's Note
Two new characters....yay. Sorry for late chapter...had something else planned but I decided to add some action and drama into the story.
Author's Note
Whoo boy this was a long one and In comes the plot and spirits.
Yay 3k+ word count never thought I would get this far major milestone for me, Thank you readers Sooo much. Ironically this is about 1/4 the total word count....ugh....
Yeah Key is a bad ass now, the end bit was just a pleasure to write (and daydream about it)...just like tex used to dish out. (RvB reference)
David Tennent is the best doctor (he is this story's doctor if you haven't noticed.)
So from me Keyota Sasukio and my now flatmate Sora Atasukai see ya round. Wub ya!
Evil Awakening
"Wait a moment." Octavia said. "The age difference in Keyota and Yu is well...big."
"That my Octavia is correct." Keyoya replied. "Yu wasn't the one who took him."
for Luna sakes why must everything be so complicated Octavia thought. "Well if not him then who did?"
"Try asking the pony with a mane longer than himself." He said with a slight smile, the first one she'd seen from him. Octavia walked over to Tsubasa who was frantically typing on a keyboard connected to a large monitor.
"Tsubasa tell me everything you know about Keyota here." "I know nothing of our situation since I met you." She said slightly coldly.
"Don't have the time now, trying to find out all I can by searching the databases on our 'friends here.'"
"Actually i'd also like to know what you have to do with her." Keyoya said walking over.
Otori sighed and replied. "Ok ok fine." "Keyoya you remember when I was sent in to infiltrate Dark Nebula?"
"Yeah."
"When I first saw him they were trying to activate some 'ultimate machine'."
"The u.b.d?"
"No we destroyed that." "I made my way to the generator room and shut off the power and deliberately set off an alarm." "Apparently I had stopped a creation process, and the result was your friend here." "In all the panic happening I grabbed him and made for an exit." "I lost him in the streets of stalliongrad thanks to a patrol of d.n. guards." "Which apparently a few days later you found him."
"So they're after him to try to complete the process." The doctor said, walking over to the group. "Easy solution we take their leader and... where did he go?" The four ponies looked around finding nothing.
"Oh no, I think we left him at the library."
"Well at any rate we're here."
The TARDIS materialized in a moderately sized valley. The second the TARDIS had fully materialized Deshian, Keyoya, Sora, and Storm burst out forming combat stances, only to be met with grass.
"Base is over the ridge." Tsubasa said as he calmly walked out.
"I don't know who, why, or how they did that to me...but It doesn't matter anymore." Doji said to himself as he made his way to the control center of the base.
"After all these years, I might finally have him-er her...I-argh."
"That thing is a damn fortress."
"How are we even going to get in?"
"Ok listen up." The Doctor said. "I have a plan."
"Actually Doctor if I may." Tsubasa said.
"Ok, whadda got Otori?"
"They may be good, but they aren't that smart and competent to invalidate me and Yu' s security codes from the databases." "That and the fact that me and probably Yu remembered the layout of the base means we can easily infiltrate it." "You do remember the layout right?" He asked the colt.
"Uh, yeah yeah I think so."
"We'll split into three teams." "Me, Vinyl, Deshian, and Octavia will infiltrate and see about getting our friend out." "Storm, Derpy, and Yu will go and see what information you can get from their archives." "Doctor, Keyoya you know what you have to do."
"Right."
"I'll do my best."
"I know you will, that's why you're with the Doctor." "I don't need you decimating the place just yet."
"Wh-ugh fine."
"Octavia you are the only pony here that they have seen before so you're going to infiltrate and hopefully be put with Key."
"How exactly?"
"Like this." Tsubasa said quickly said explaining the basics.
"Ah the old sort of Trojan pony thing good idea." The Doctor exclaimed
"Got that?"
"Yes I think I do."
"Everypony understand?"
There was a collective agreement.
"Alright good now, let's go
"Deliver her to her cell." "We will begin the test in two hours." "Solar Flare."
"Yes sir?" A yellow unicorn answered.
"Keep everyone in line and be prepared to start the second stage of our 'project', if our subject here." He said pointing to the sedated form of a green maned pony. "Proves to be the one."
"Yes sir, you won't be sorry."
"Yes I intend on it, do not disappoint me." "Your life depends on it." He said as he walked with the two guards, to the cell block.
Doji inserted a needle into the pony's side.
"We are so close to our goal but yet so far." "I hope you are the one, then I wouldn't have to kill you." "I really enjoyed my time with you." "Never the less, I'm in a good mood today." "So I think I'll pleasure you once more." He said, a wicked grin spreading.
"Sir test results are in, it's a match sir, save for the gender.
"What ever happened to him?"
"We don't know sir."
"I guess I'll have to ask her personally."He said as the two arrived at Keyota's cell.
"My Lord we had a little visitor here." Solar Flare said after a quick bow, moving to the side to show a charcoal earth pony being guarded by two elite Dark Nebula guards.
"Where did you find her?"
"She apparently happened to stumble upon our base here, didn't put up any resistance."
"Then why the elites?"
"Only guards we had free at the time sir.
"One second." Doji said opening the cell door and stepping inside. "Guard your life little one, you have a Destiny at last." Doji said.
"Ok now if I may have a moment with our 'guest here'"
"Yes of course my Lord." Solar said bowing again and motioning for the guards to leave.
"Come, sit." Doji said pointing a hoof at one of the benches in the hall opposite to the one he just sat down on, which she did.
"What is your name?" He asked the charcoal pony
"Octavia, and yours might be?"She replied.
"You can call me Doji."
"Now first of all what we're you doing?"
"Oh I was just looking around this town."
"So pretty much sightseeing."
"Quite actually."
"I'm guessing you're new here, and from canterlot are we not?"
"Why yes."
"So if you were just sightseeing why in Equestria would you be here."
"Well i had just come down from the ridge up there and I apparently stumbled upon your base here by complete chance." "And a very nice base at that."
"Yes, quite."
"You with the New Lunar Republic?"Octavia asked.
"No we are actually part of an independent organisation called Dark Nebula."
"What might your purpose be?"
"To end the foul reign of the royal sisters and give the the public a true leader, and make equestria the powerful empire this planet deserves." "No more pesky griffons or other nations, In short total world superiority."
"Sounds divine."
"Really?"
"Absolutely."
"One more thing have you heard of Otori or Tendo?"
"I actually think I have, those rotten beings."
"You've heard of them?"
"I know of many more like them who oppose superiority, think that world balance and peace will prevail."
"Hmm we could use somepony like you."Doji said a smile comming on.
"Exactly, I have a proposal to make."
"Go ahead."
"I provide leads and information, and in exchange I get to join your Dark Nebula."
"Sounds Devine." Doji said emphasizing on her words. "Now come with me, and welcome to Nebula, I think we're going to get along just fine." Doji finished with a smile.
'First I get Keyota, now I can finally get hold of Otori and Tendo, along with info and leads along with a new member. This is just the best day ever.' Doji thought.
"We're in, great work Octavia."
The colour drained from storms face.
"S-storm?" Derpy asked as she went over to him. "Y-you ok?"
"I-i-i can't believe it."
"Cant believe what?"
"She was right."
"What?"
"My Celestia, Derpy toss me a flash drive ." He said as she tossed him one, which he quickly plugged into the archive the data was on.
"Who's in there?"Octavia mused to herself as she looked inside of the cell. After her eyes adjusted to the darkness she could make out a pony shaped figure where she just was. Her eyes widened as she made out the pony. Keyota lay in the corner, slightly shaking. Some of her cuts had re opened, and a bleeding wolf shaped scar adorned her neck.
"My Celestia."
Two guards in full grey armor walked into the cell, one of which lifted Keyota onto his back, after which they left without a word.
"Hmmm."
"What do you tell somepony who shouldn't exist?" Storm said over the comnlink.
"We know that she was created by chance." Octavia said.
"Yes, but if they prove that it's her do you know what they're gonna do to her?!"
"What do you mean?"
"Me and Derpy found some files about Keyota here in one of the archive computers, take a look Otori transmitting now."
"Well can we see it?" Vinyl asked.
"Got it." Tsubasa said pushing a button on his comnlink, as the file got projected into the air.
"Coooool." Vinyl said.
"She was never supposed to exist reading over this makes it less and less plausible, about one in a billion chance."
"Wow we got lucky."
"But that's just it, Deshian on screen."
Deshian did the same with his projecting some a machine and its design specs as Tsubasa' s image changed to to a text log.
"This is what I believe the device that Key came from." "Looking at its specs It has one function." "Doctor you listening?"
"I hear ya loud and clear storm."
"You're a timelord with regenerative properties, what are two things that want and can properly use it?"
"Hmm...the skatefish and...no."
"Exactly Doctor."
"But what do they want with that?"
"This device only has one component that it uses...that."
"If Key was from that thing, if they get her they can finish what they started."
"The device appears to be some sort of transformation thing- much like the U.b.d, only more drastic. What ever this thing was built to do is big."
"But the only thing you could get by using that is l-OH nononono they can't be that determined."
"What? What are they set to do?" Octavia and Vinyl simultaneously asked.
"Well the golden stuff is what I use when i regenerate, it is extremely powerful so just think what they might do with it."
"Just tell me."
"Well if this machine works the way I think it does, it's used to artificially regenerate the subject."
"What's this Storm?"Derpy asked, pointing to something glowing on the side of the base.
"Analyzing....Ah so that's what they're up to, clever buggars.
"What did you find?"
"The main element of the U.B.D, it means when the subject regenerates they will grow up to 100 times stronger than ever."
"Are they mad!? No normal pony could take that trauma, let alone Keyota."
"Nice work Storm."
"Heh, actually Derpy figured most of that out."
"See Derpy this is why you're my companion, celestia I could just kiss you."
In the face cam part of the display, derpy sighed and sunk to the floor.
"So much better than rose."
"What?"
"A-a different rose."
"Ok, wait what happens if they use it on her?"
"Well theoretically on her I think she would go lose any remaining sanity and breakdown."
"So then we gotta stop them!"
"Were too late I'm afraid." Octavia said. "I saw them take her away."
"Vinyl I'm sorry but as much as I hate having to say this, we're just going to have to wait and see what comes of this."
Solar Flare gently rested the pony on a small platform and made his way back into the lab's observation chamber.
"Complete the process." Doji said.
"Yes sir."
The device started to hum, and a few seconds later a purple beam shot down from the emitter above the barely conscious Keyota. Thirty seconds later, with the lab now with a layer of fog, the beam ceased. Out from the fog a tall figure emerged.
An Alicorn the size of Luna, with wings which appeared to be made out of steel. Ethereal mane of fire, and tail of acid. Eyes burning a bright magenta. Most of the scars had gone except for under the eyes and neck. The horn had had grown to the size of Cadence's but oddly enough, was still broken off near the tip.
"Um sir."
"A minor hindrance, but nevertheless it will re grow."
"A-are you sure my Lord."
"Positive now begin the test." Doji said.
"As you wish."
Solar Flare tapped a button on an overhead panel, and several walls and half walls extended out from the floor as several fog machines hummed to life. After the visibility in the lab floor was low enough, two platoons of face masked guards along entered from four separate doors on each side of the lab. Followed by one extra pony equipped with thermal goggles and a riot shield from each door.
"Begin." The voice came over the intercom.
The guards split up and started searching, while the elites grouped together.
Keyota flew up onto one of the walls, and spotted two lone guards. She jumped up and zoomed down in front of them, smashing the front two ponies' s heads into the ground as she extended her wings slitting both of their throats. Not missing a a beat she pressed up against a half wall as a guard approached the other side. When the pony was directly behind the half wall, she gripped the floor as she shot her fore legs over the other side and wrapped around the pony's neck. She then rolled back, fore legs first smashing the pony's skull into the floor, as she started taking fire from the guard in front of the one she'd just taken out, drawing the attention of all the other guards in the lab.
"Aah shit biscuits." Keyota grumbled as she picked up the guard's SMG and started returning fire.
Doji was walking down the hallway to the lab when he spotted a brown pony just standing there.
"Hey!" He yelled "Identity your self!" But the pony was gone.
"What have you done with her!?"the voice came from behind him.
"Oh so you're with them, as for your 'friend' she is no more."
"Ooh you're gonna tell me." He said, pressing a button on his sonic, as he pinned doji against the wall.
"One way or another." He said, voice slightly changing as the TARDIS materialized behind him. The Doctor picked him up opened the doors and threw doji inside, and walked in after him.
The Doctor brought his hoof down smashing the crystalline object, as the music that the he had heard many times before started to play in his head.
"N-no! What have you done?!"
"Oh nothing, simply destroyed you're little demon spawn here.
"Who are you!?" Yelled a broken and beat up doji.
"WHO AM I? I AM THE LAST LIVING TIME LORD. THE GUARDIAN OF ALL LIVING THINGS IN THE MULTI-VERSE! VANQUISHER OF ALL THINGS EVIL! AND YOU ARE BY FAR ONE OF THE MOST VILE BEINGS I'VE EVER ENCOUNTERED." "I AM YOUR DEMISE!
"You really think you can stop me?" "You're all talk and smack until I get my hooves on you." "You're just like Keyoya and that other one." "At least the former put up a fight."
"DON'T YOU DARE TALK ABOUT THEM LIKE THAT YOU IGNORANT, SICK, BACKSTABBING, CHEATING SON OF A BUCKING B----!" He shouted face full of rage, as he pulled a lever and the doors of the TARDIS opened. Doji barely hanging on a railing.
"END OF THE ROAD DOJI!" "I WOULD NEVER WANT TO RESORT TO THIS, but you're too far gone! I'm sorry, remember this; you brought this upon yourself! the doctor yelled at the top of his lungs, as his hoof went for the metal ring which was all that was left of the object, as his eyes suddenly burned a bright red.
"BUT JUST FOR YOU DOJI ILL MAKE A BUCKING EXCEPTION!"
"I AM THE DOCTOR! THIS IS MY VENGEANCE NOW GO BURN IN HELL WITH SOMBRA AND NIGHTMARE MOON!" "WHILE YOU'RE THERE FOR ETERNITY, BUCKING TELL THE MASTER I SENT YOU HERE AND THAT I SAID HI!" He yelled his lungs out as he threw the blade edged ring, at stupidly fast velocity aimed at doji' s fore leg he was holding on the railing with. Very nearly cutting it off, but still disrupting his grip and sucking him into the time vortex.
"Oh God damn it master you had ONE JOB!" He shouted into the vortex as he closed the doors.
"You're surrounded!"
"Ангел тьмы, о Angel тьмы, приносит на нас, ип claloth Весы де Льва!"Key said as fast as she could.
"You think anything can save you now?"
Key twitched suddenly, as a dark haze formed around her body.
"Uh she's doing something."
"What?"
Keyota slowly stood up, horn glowing the same color as the haze.
"I-i thought they said it would glow lime."
"It shouldn't be glowing at all."
Suddenly one of the guards at the back got instantly flung into a wall.
Most of the remaining guards turned around.
A purple blur shot between every single pony that had turned and shot back to key in less than a second, after which all but 1/4th or the guards dropped dead at the exact same time.
The remaining guards-which were mostly elites- quickly looked back at the Alicorn, which had suddenly moved only inches from their faces. Key's eye lids finally shot open, revealing a blood red set of nightmare moon-ish eyes. Key then quickly, jump kicked the first elite in the face sending him into the lab wall. Jumped over another elite' s head, grabbing his head when she was directly above and smashing it down as they both landed flat on the floor. She then flipped over his body kicking two guards with her hind legs mid flip in quick succession, landing on both of them and burning the first and dissolving the second with her mane and tail, as she grabbed the last guard-an elite- by the shoulders.
"Ah-ah-p-please no no no!" He screamed as he squeezed his eyes shut, as the haze started to dissipate, and her eyes return to normal. Keyota giggled slightly and kissed the top of his head, as she then let him go and started walking calmly for an exit. Leaving the slightly blushing Elite massively confused.
"W-w-w-whhaat?"
End chapter fifteen.
CH:0 ( briefly explaining what happened in a nutshell)View Online
CH:0 ( briefly explaining what happened in a nutshell)
Ok let's begin shall we? Well after Vinyl Had gotten back from the tour, Vinyl had well... let's just say Vinyl had exclaimed her feelings for Octavia and the latter did the same and they soon afterwards were locked in a passionate kiss session, no more words on that matter thankfully. Keyota was, at the time was out visiting one of her few friends; Storm Shock- you'l learn about him later, and it was safe to say when she got back, she was well... devastated. After one very awkward explanation to Vinyl about what had happened, and one long search of Ponyville later. They finally found Keyota-who for some reason had chosen; the second level of 'Shugarcube corner to run off and hide to, either by choice or desperation. After a long, and heartfelt apology and explanation, Keyota exclaimed that she had just bought a new house in Ponyville to live closer to Octavia. After a semi- brief discussion between Vinyl and Octavia, they decided and told Key, that they would try to cover the costs of the home by splitting their earnings with the mare. In both mare's defense, Keyota had looked somewhat relieved at the time so the two mares also didn't think much of Keyota going to check the new house out a bit more. It was this mistake that very nearly cost Keyota her life.
Author's Note
this is just a brief explanation of what happened i know it's short, because it's meant to be that way as to not give many if any more spoilers as to what happens in the actual chapters.
Also still looking for some help in any way available.