It has come to my attention that I cannot reign in this story, and that both excites and scares me.

As the writer, I should be able to control it but alas, I cannot.

First off, allow me to say that Hot Charge? You are correct

When I originally started to read this I thought it was just going to be a Applebloom x Diamond Tiara fic, now I don't even know any more. I'm not even sure if MidnightFMare knows.

I do not have much of an idea of what is going on. And as this has been writing, the sub-plot have left me speechless and I wish that I could rework the story but to do so, I would have to start over from scratch and should it come to that, I hope that you all will forgive me for doing so.

I suppose I should elucidate on the character's personalities

Diamond: Unlike canon, she is quite an introvert and when she was younger, she was a very shy person and the only person rthat she could open up to was Silver but even then, she was closing off her heart. When she met Applebloom and then Sweetie and Scootaloo, she was overwhelmed by confusion at how they were going against what she considered to be the rules of society, and set out to "fix" the problem. Eventually, she focused on the leader of the group, Applebloom and after a while, she decided to better understand her mortal enemy the easiest way she knew how.

Things that espouse friendship and teamwork were the keys to finding that fault in Applebloom's armor. But what she did not realize that after the 5th series of Power Rangers was that she had become the thing that she had studied (Like how I became a fan in fact... why must all my characters be me?)

So this "research" became a lifestyle that on the outside, she was ashamed of and hid.

As with most people who hide their deepest selves behind books and screens, she became inundated in the messages and ideas of what she read, thus becoming a villain on the outside, when on the inside, she wanted to be a hero. the perversion of her mind and responses is an unfortunate result though

Applebloom: She is probably the main character in the story, in that it focuses around how she reacts and views the world and more importantly, her friends

She is the grounded, sensible one of the CMC and that shows in that she stops Scootaloo from getting in trouble, but also gets Sweetie to speak her mind and act. How she reacts to Diamond is similar to a mix of both of her management styles of her friends, she gets Diamond to do things that she is afraid of doing like apologizing to Ganthet and co. an d also stops her from doing something dangerous and stupid like over reacting when her perversion leaks through in public.

Applebloom is kind of the glue that hold all the characters together and also gets them to show more of their true personalities. But she herself is an amalgam of all girl-next-door southern girls who see everything that goes on and guides the non bit-players on the right track. She also underestimates the magnitude her "guiding" has on the world around her, and while probably brilliant in her own way, she is a very humble person and also won't go against the will of others unless it's in her best interests

Sweetie Belle: She is the light to Scootaloo's dark, the mascot of the CMC and also probably the smartest of the three but she is more content to join in someone else's fun than create her own. She is also seemingly two-dimensional but if you ask the right questions, you'll see that she is a progidy and an amazing person that is capable of either saving the world by accident or destroying it in the same manner. And while she is a bit insulated from nuances and the like, she could MacGyver a jetpack from a palm tree and some other raw materials but won't because she lacks the direction or needs to be told to do something because she is afraid that her actions would displease others so she'll just hum to herself until someone says something to her.

She is also, like Applebloom, an amalgam of the most extreme of archetypes; those being "White girl", "Insulated form the world", "Air-head", "Genius Savant", "Shy little girl with a crush" and "Unconsciously giving the world diabeetus just by existing and oh my goddess I need my insulin! Arrgblblrble..."

She is also in love with Scootaloo but due to her disposition, doesn't realize that she actually needs to say it

Scootaloo: Pervert. Athlete. Comic relief. Incapable of dying by actual bodily harm. Jack-of-all-questionable-trades-and-some-others-too. And she is kind of like Poppa Rocks (If you don't know who this is, that's cool)

It's mostly because even as an adult, Scootaloo looks like a guy, Flat chest, lean limbs, and a mouth that spews little intelligent things and more crude things, she's the one guy who always has the girly mags in his locker, knows how to sneak into all the clubs, knows all the gang heads on a first name basis, someone who can to get you the porn you want with no question asked, and the one who has hidden cameras in the sauna, girl's room, female changing room, and will punch you for saying that she's a punk.

Silver Spoon: The straight man to the craziness that her friends create and yet can't break off her friendships with them because being a serious person a lot, she is incapable of making friends easily and would probably go on with her life without friends

She is also an avid reader of older philosophies and book, thus why she spoke about "Chakra" and seems to quote any book or authority on a subject if someone needs assistance in sounding dumber by correcting them. She is kind of like Applebloom in that she keeps her friends out of trouble and has money set aside for paying bail and also knows how to patch up others from fire, gun shots, and broken bones because with Babs as a friend, you might need that kind of skill set to keep her alive long enough to pay rent. Also knows about as much about the street and firearms that Babs does.

Good at video games

Is also a cynic and tends to give up on others when the crazy is too much.

Does not believe something is possible until she either sees proof or experiences it first hand.

So, she is the Kyon of the group

Babs: Like Scootaloo, she is all that she is except with a thick Boston accent and has a wallet full of fake IDs and more money than she should. And carries several tools on her person

And by "Tools", I mean at least 2-3 handguns, enough ammo to kill all the livestock in Ponyville and still have enough to spare to intimidate anyone who gets in her way, butterfly, throwing, skinning, fishing, hunting, and chasing knives (At least 3-5 of each)

A pick-pocket but Silver often catches her and she rarely does so.

Has no respect for others until they prove themselves to her to be worth it

basic synopsis of story so far. separated by chapters:

Diamond gets her ass handed to her by Applebloom and has a wet dream about Applebloom where she discovers that she is much kinkier than she thought

Diamond informs Applebloom of her dream and after a series of texts between Silver on both ends. Diamond discovers that she has been in love with Applebloom the whole time. Applebloom is skeptical. Scootaloo and Sweetie appear and their personalities are outlined a little

Diamond and Applebloom meet for a date and we begin to see her nerdy side leak out as well as Applebloom's incredible strength. after that, they kiss and unfortunately, everyone sees them

Both girls explain what happened and then go to visit Rarity to prettify Scoots and Dash. Them Pinkie Pie happens. And then Spike reveals that a number of concerned people they knew were orchestrating either their love, or their funerals.

Sex.

Sweetie Belle's and Scootaloo's personalities are filled in a little more and we see how their relationship works

Star Sapphire, DT's Alter ego is introduced along with OA comics and the people within

Applebloom helps DT apologize to the people of OA comics and it is revealed that there is more to the shop than what meets the eye

Introducing Spin-off series and sex

No real plot, just me having fun I guess

Sweetie's genius is revealed and both Babs and Silver are introduced as supporting characters

Humor and an in depth explanation of what happened to DT, Sweetie, and Silver.

Explanation of story so far including an apology from me, character summery, and plot summary

"Holy crap, I've caught up to myself in real time" I said to myself, typing furiously on my computer.

Looking up at the screen and what I've written, I see that I am still writing in real time

Lyra walks over, a cabbage held in her magic "Hey, what's goin' on Midnight?"

"I've somehow ended up writing in real time" I say, looking at her dinner of choice "Do you want me to make you a salad or something?"

She shakes her head, taking a bite of the cabbage "Nah, I'm good" she takes a bite out of it "I like plain cabbage and junk. We're out of light beer too"

"And I'm not going to buy you any, that stuff takes up too much spacew and whenever I buy alcohol, you chug it all down unless it's Guinness or absinthe" I say, my arm starting to hurt from typing

"... okay, I'm going to take the keyboard away" she says, golden magic grabbing the key board from me

Hi there readers! Midnight was supposed to post an actual chapter today or work on it but I guess this works too.

And we still need more truth or dare ideas so please give us some! At this posting we only have one of each and to the one who wished for this to be done, Thanks for your tireless critiquing. Midnight would thank you but he's busy making dinner.

Sooo... bye bye!

Author's Note

Nopony here but us Scootaloos

An Applebloom a day keeps the Doctor away

I have a bit of a Sweetie tooth

Diamond Tiaras are a girl's best friend

She's a Babs Seed!

Lyra is best ~~pony~~human!!!