What In Equestria?

I have come to a conclusion that i am going to rewrite the first half of the story before i continue, and here is why.

1. i through the beginning together in like 10 mins.

2. chapter 7 is total garbage i have no idea why i decided to make a orgy scene, oh wait i know why, i was lazy and didn't want to do a separate scene for each one, i have literally turned off about 400 of my readers when they read that chapter so that is going to change chapter 7 is no longer going to exist unless you all want it to i will through it in as a bonus chapter or something but the orgy scene will be taken out and replaced with separate scenes in the chapter for each character that was in the orgy scene so instead of about 8k word it might be about 20k or more i'm not sure yet still working on it.

3.i had no idea what i was doing when i was writing the first half.

i hope to get this done as quick as possible for you all and i hope you can stay calm while i do this because it will make it a better story all around.

while i am working on this expect updates on my other story My Only Chance for i will be working on them both for awhile.

I'M SO SORRY for doing this but it has to be done

if you all have suggestion or any criticism what so ever i will take it all.

While you wait for this story check out my other and just wait for i promise that i will get everything in order and for Rainbowmissle 97 i'm sorry that you are prereading the entire story now but you might as well stop the first half and just work on from chapter 9 up. :.(