(REWRITING IN PROGRESS)


Ok everypony im going to be going back when im done writing the story and fixing grammer and spelling mistakes and other things as well.

this story it is about a human male named andrew at first his life is just going no where then he gets sucked into equestria. by who you guessed it but while he is there something strange starts to happen to all the mares but you have to read the story to find out.

i have caught onto what a mistake i made but for everypony only reading the first chapter it is more of a introductry than a chapter trust me the story will only get better as you go on.

but this is going to be a very long story i would imagein somewhere in the 100,000 word or more range and there are going to be alot of interresting things going on in the story and it is going to have a good background im going to be working on it every day i can till it is finished but i have already got a very interresting ending instore for you all!

but i hope you all enjoy and yes there are most likely going to be clop parts in a few chapters sorry about that
and be gentle with the rateings this is the first story i have ever writen in my life so feed back will be handy
thank you

dont look down here if you dont want a spoiler
SPOILER ALERT:!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

let me just say derpy has the best part in my story above all :)