Abomination in Equestria

by King Xeno

Meeting the Elements

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The Abomination had been staring at the smaller animals with a strange expression, almost like a grin, but Fluttershy didn't notice this, she was in the other room, trying to find her medical supplies. The Abomination began to creep towards some of the mice, birds, and rabbits, it growled softly and its upper lip began to twitch, the animals were backed into a corner, and the Abomination prepared to strike. However, before it could sink its teeth into one of the smaller creature's flesh a set of tiny paws began to pound on his head. While it caused no harm, it was enough to annoy the monster, causing it to grab the source of this strange disturbance, which was a small white rabbit, Angel to be more exact. Angel glared at the Abomination and let out a series of squeaks, but the Abomination opened its mouth and the smaller set of jaws began to gnash their teeth. The Abomination prepared to kill the smaller rodent, but heard a gasp.

"Mr. Abomination! That is not how we treat our friends!" Fluttershy shouted, breaking her usually quiet character. The Abomination hissed and released his grip on the rabbit, causing Angel to fall onto his rear. "Thank you, now let's see if I can fix you up." She said, moving in with a special cast, she moved the leg to face the right direction, with a small amount of struggling and cursing in an alien language, and managed to place the cast onto his leg. The Abomination curiously tapped the object with a single claw and upon realizing it wasn't a threat, acted as if it wasn't there. She watched as he tried to rise onto his feet, and was successful, with a few wobbles he took a step forward, which amazed Fluttershy. Unknown to her, this creature shared the Xenomorph's ability to rapidly heal. The Abomination let out a gentle grunt and began to move towards Fluttershy, who grew fearful, for this creature was taller than Princess Celestia and was even taller than Discord. Standing up he was about ten feet tall, and seeing this creature approach made her fearful of what he may do. He stopped when he was a few inches away from her, and instead of attacking her, he slumped to the ground and wrapped his body loosely around her, almost like a kind of hug, this however was something he's seen humans do, mostly to show thanks or affection, and this was his reason for doing so.

"Mr. Abomination, I was wondering if you'd like to meet some of my friends..." Fluttershy asked, and he cocked his head in confusion. He let out a screech and her eyes widened. "You mean you don't know what a friend is...? Well a friend is somepony that you like to be around, you don't want to hurt them, or argue with them, but I happens sometimes... They're the ones you care about... You mean to tell me that you don't have any friends?" Fluttershy asked. The Abomination let out a quick hiss, and Fluttershy felt a twinge of sadness, from what he says nothing really wants to be around him, and from what else he describes he's a rare species, a predatory animal that was often avoided and hunted. "You have to promise not to hurt them... Please?" She asked and he nodded. Although it was normally in his nature to attack anything that moves, he was different, something was making him move past his extraordinarily violent ways... For the most part. While he still felt an impulse to kill the one who assisted him, it seems this place was doing something to him, to his mind, to his very patterns of thought. The Abomination didn't care, instead his mind was beginning to fill with rational thought, which was a new and confusing experience for him, but he accepted the change and realized that this could not be avoided. So he would wait for Fluttershy's friends to arrive, although he grew nervous of what they would think of him.


Twilight, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash waited outside of Fluttershy's home, and saw the door creak open, they moved to approach but gasped when they saw the shine of a black shelled creature which quickly ducked back inside. They rushed forward, ready to fight whatever monster threatened their friend, and they flung the door open as they entered, causing light to reveal the creature as it tried to hide in the shadows, it was low to the ground and appeared small, but still threatening.

"I don't know what you've done with Fluttershy, but you'll regret ever coming here!" Rainbow Dash shouted, as she flew at the beast, while it was able to run out of the way, it then went from being passive to being aggressive. The creature began to stand on its back legs, which revealed that it could use its arms as a second set of legs, it was much taller than any of them, it began to hiss and screech at them, with its mandibles clicking together. It roared and rushed at Rainbow Dash, grabbed her by the shoulders and slammed the mare onto the ground, its saliva dripped onto her face, and it lowered its mouth closer to hers, its upper lip began to quiver and it opened its mouth to reveal a second set of jaws, that seemed to be attached to its tongue. The creature made no move to finish the mare however, instead it ceased and let go of her, backing into the shadows of the house. They could hear it hissing as Fluttershy ran into the room.

"What's going on!?" She asked, worry evident in her eyes. The creature ran out from the darkness and bolted behind Fluttershy, whether it was scared or just happy to see her was unknown. "He didn't hurt you did he?" Fluttershy asked, while Rainbow Dash rose onto her hooves.

"No, he just slammed me onto your floor. What is that thing? Why is it here!?" Rainbow Dash asked, she glared at the monster suspiciously.

"I found him hurt, and he was hungry too." Fluttershy said, and they looked at her confused.

"How could you tell?" Twilight asked, and Fluttershy suddenly looked sad.

"Well, he ate two of my chickens... He as going to attack me, but then I used the stare, and I think I really scared him... He started to scratch himself, break through his exoskeleton with his claws, and even ripped out a few pieces, he's healed up pretty much though, only his leg is hurt." Fluttershy said, nuzzling the creature and it nuzzled her back.

"So you brought it into your house!?" Twilight asked, now both worried and furious at her friend.

"He couldn't walk, his leg was broken, it was twisted in the wrong direction... He wouldn't have survived long." Fluttershy responded, and Twilight groaned in frustration.

"He said that he's never had friends before... He's always been treated like a monster, nothing would want to go near him, he's the last of his species that I know of, he's a predator I know that much. He's been really nice after I helped him though." Fluttershy argued, and Rainbow Dash flew in front of the creature's face.

"Maybe its just waiting for you to lower your guard before it strikes!" She shouted, and the creature let out a quick angry hiss.

"Girls, I'd like for you to meet Mr. Abomination." Fluttershy said, which made Rarity frown.

"Fluttershy, why would you give him a name like that? It isn't very nice." Rarity said, but Fluttershy began to back away.

"He told me that's what he's called, he got kind of made when I suggested we call him something else." Fluttershy explained, and the Abomination looked at the five, if he had eyes they weren't visible and he seemed to be very strong too. The Abomination nodded and the rest of the Mane Six seemed uneasy, but otherwise willing to accept him, with the exception of Rainbow Dash.


The ship began to move towards the planet below, it activated its advanced cloaking technology and prepared to land in the dense forest, where it would most likely be ignored. It entered the atmosphere and landed without any problems, and it opened. Inside were hundreds of skulls, skeletons, stuffed corpses, and weapons. Each one was different and unique, but all were perfectly cleaned, and preserved. The Hunter then exited the ship, wearing a mesh suit with the same advanced cloaking technology, with the Bio-Mask worn by very one of his species that first killed one of the Serpents, his weapons were all polished, and sharpened. He was ready to begin the hunt.

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