A Second Chance

by Dark Obsidian

Date Night with a Dentist

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(A few Hours later, Torian`s POV)

I was at home preparing myself for the date Minuette and I were about to have soon while Jerry marveled at my mis-matched wings. I know they look cool, but it seems to a driven too much attention to Jerry.

"Jerry, I know you like them, but come on dude, Its getting a little creepy."

"Sorry dude, I just can`t help it, they are so cool that I want a pair of my own." Jerry replied finally breaking eye contact on my wings.

"Well anyways, since your gonna be here til you find your house, just make sure you dont break any of my stuff while Im gone on my date with Minuette."

I had told Jerry about my relationship with Minuette and he thought it was cool that he`d hope to have one for himself, I mean being in the military has its perks especially on girls who love a man in uniform.

But as the clock struck 7:00 I left the house and headed down to the lake to meet my lovely marefriend. The evening was brisk and felt cool, since winter is a mere few days away and the fact that all the animals went into hibernation. As I saw the lake I found Minuette with a nice picnic area setup with a fine dish of pasta and some fine apple cider.

"Hey you made it!" Minuette smiled as I approached.

"Wouldn`t miss a date for you." I said with a smile and sat down at the blanket.

Minuette sat next to me as she levitated the pasta over and we both chowed down and it certainly tastes like it was made from Italy. After a while she and I had the same noodle and as we sucked it into our mouths, we both kissed which was a reference to some old movie I used to watch as a kid, but it was magical to relive it in real life.

Minuette blushed at this but it still was magical to her as we continued passion filled kiss. After a couple minutes, we broke the kiss and stared at the sunset over the Equestrian horizon. Minuette laid on my lap as we watched as I stroked her mane.

"So beautiful, isn`t it?" Minuette said with a sigh.

"Just like you." I said not paying-much attention to the words I just said.

"Oh, such a charmer you are." Minuette happily said.

"I believe we both know how to make this night even better." I said as she had that lustful look on her face,

We packed up the picnic and headed back to my home and went up into my bedroom. As we lied down on the bed we looked into each others eyes once more and shared another kiss which I poured my love into as our tongues wrapped around one another. Wrapped my wings around her as one hand was at her cheek while the other was rubbing her back.

I could her her cooing at this action and simply melted as I continued, but once I hit her flanks, she began to moan lustfully. We broke the kiss after what seemed like an eternity and she used her magic to undo my pants as I took off my shirt and my erect manhood sprang from its prison as Minuette sat up upon me with her flanks facing me and exposing her glistening marehood as she took a nice lick and began bob her head as I felt the ever welcoming pleasure. While she continued to bob like a piston on a engine, I used my free hand to insert 2 fingers to tease her clit and making her go mad.

"Please, don`t tease me." Minuette said as I then put my fingers inside her.

I could hear her muffled moans while she she kept sucking on my rod as she stopped for a moment and cried out. "Sweet Celestia that feels good!" and goes back to pleasuring me. After a few minutes, we swapped positions with me on top of her and I inserted my rod inside her warm moist mare genitals as we made out and I pounded the lovely mare. As broke the kiss, her eyes seemed to be rolled into the back of her head and her mouth was open with her tongue sticking out while panting lustfully.

I then stopped as she got up and her flanks faced me and I once again inserted my love rod into her marehood and made love to the dentist I loved. She began to moan louder and telling me to go faster and harder, and her pussy began to contract as she neared her limit, I was close to mine as well.

"Please, fill me with your love!" Minuette cried with pleasure as she began to climax.

"Minuette!" I said back as I did too.
I fulfilled her wish and as we both climaxed and shot 2 bursts of my semen into her and another 2 squirts on her flanks. As the climax subsided, we both collasped on the bed and holding each other in a warm embrace.

"I love you, Torian." Minuette sighed.

"I love you too, Minuette." I replied as we both shared one more passion filled kiss under the moonlit night.

(Meanwhile in the Crystal Empire)

King Sombra sits upon his throne once more with Changelings keeping watch over the crystal ponies and the royals as some Crystal Guards tried to fight off the Changelings. Some guards and Changelings fell, but something had to change. Meanwhile in a small hut, 3 ponies were inside writing a letter.

"Dear Princess Celestia,

King Sombra has returned and reclaimed the Empire, But he didn`t come alone. He had an army of Changelings by his side and easily took control. We know that you can save us, please hurry, Time is at the utmost importance.

Sincerely, The Crystal Ponies

After the letter was written, a pony grabbed it by her mouth and crept through the Empire while staying undetected by the Changelings.


Author's Note

Hey ponies and bronies Golden here, I want to apologize for the late update of the story due to school, driving and parent fights (My Mom and Dad really.) So now with this out I hope you understand that I can`t update as much as I like to.

If you enjoyed, Like, Comment, Favorite, and Follow and still 2 follows away from the double update, I cant wait. Til next time, Ill see you all later.

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