Chapters Author's Note
Hi and welcome to my Comic adaptation of 'A Creative Tail' which is now known as 'Rise of the Creata.
The Beginning...
1st POV (Point of View)
Darkness and pain. That was what I was feeling. I felt like I couldn't move at all. How did I get here? Why I am in so much pain? All these questions were rushing into my head.
"Hello! Art thou awake?"
Who is that? Is someone there? I tried to open my eyes. It felt painful, like I was opening my eyes for the first time. I was still squinting, but what I saw was a blurry purplish or bluish figure looking at me. I really couldn't focus at all.
"Art thou dead?" the voice said again.
I was now certain that it was a female voice. My eyes were getting clearer, and it was coming into the focus. It was a blue horse talking? Maybe my eyes were not good after all.
“Ah, thou art alive.” The blue pony sighed in relief and smiled. “Art thou hurt anywhere? We were afraid that thou were dead. We are glad that you are alive.”
She kept talking and talking. She seemed so real and lifelike, plus her breath smelled. Wait, her breath smells, she seems real and I am feeling real pain. She IS real. Normally s would stay calm and observe the situation, but I freaked out, jumped and shouted.
“HOLY CRAP! THE BAD BREATH HORSE IS TALKING!”
I just blurted that out as I jumped and landed on my feet. Wait why am I on all fours? I was trying to figure that out. but then the blue pony looked at me with a pissed-off expression.
“How dare you mock me, you little commoner! You dare insult my royalty!?” the horse shouted.
Her voice got like 10 times louder and was blowing me back a bit. God, her breath smells. She kept shouting like that for a full ten minutes. She then calmed down and spoke to me at her regular volume.
“Now that my anger has subsided,” she said with a huff, “we shall take you to the castle.”
Suddenly, the pony’s horn glowed, which I hadn’t noticed until now. Next thing I knew, I was glowing the same color as her horn, and she picked me up. She then started flying with her wings. Wait, she has wings too. What do you call a horse with wings and a horn again? I don't remember.
“Unicorn, tellest me thine name,” the horse asked.
“Unicorn? What unicorn?” I replied, confused.
“You are a commoner. Thou dost not know what thou art?” the pony asked with a confused face.
When she said that, I recalled landing on all fours. Plus I couldn’t feel my han--
No way. I checked to see, and I saw that my hands were hooves. I really am a pony.
“ What the...I’m a pony? How? I'm a human, not a pony.”
“Hu-man?” she asked. “What is this Hu-man you speak of”
I was so confused, and I really had no idea what was going on. I really couldn’t move that much due to the energy from her horn that she was carrying me with.
“Hmm, thou thinkest something may have happened to thee. For now, I wished for thine name,” the horse asked once again.
I broke out of my trance as she asked again for my name.
“O-oh, right. My name is… is… Huh?”
That's weird... What IS my name? I can’t remember it. Now that you mention it, I don't remember anything up until I woke up here.
‘“Thy name is Huh?” Luna asked, holding in a laugh.
“N-No, I just can’t remember, nor anything from my past. But I know I am a human.”
Luna gave a weird look like I was crazy or something. To be honest, it sure sounded that way.
“We think that thou mayest amnesia. Thou art sure thou art this Human thing?”
I nodded at her. I just know I am human. For some reason, I know I remember being in a body of a human.
Luna gave a sigh and smiled once again. Her eyes also twinkled with determination. “So be it. I shall help you recover myself. This will be my first good deed after my 1000-year imprisonment. I swear on my life that I, Princess Luna, will help you be human again.”
I got a bad feeling about this. However, I also got some info on her. So she is a Princess named Luna, eh? Wow. Wait, I just realized that even though she’s a princess, I called her a bad breath horse. Oh crap.
“Princess Luna? I would bow, but I can’t. Also, sorry for calling you a bad breath horse. I was freaking out, ya know?” I said with a nervous smile.
Not that there is much of a difference. Still, I can’t believe I am talking to a royal.
Canterlot Castle
“Unicorn, this is my sister, Celestia. Thou mustest show thine respect and--”
Celestia interrupted Luna and gave her a disappointed look. “Luna, that way of speaking is over. I’ve told you a countless times to speak in today’s language,” Celestia said
Luna looked at her sister with a concerned face. “But-But we can’t just--”
Tia again gave her a more disappointed look, “Luna…”
They really are sisters. They’re bickering over Luna’s speak pattern. Though I can’t say I blame Celestia for saying to cut the old-timey speaking. Luna puffed up her cheeks and looked at me.
“ We--I mean, I told Celestia about thy--I mean, your condition,” Luna said, blushing.
This is just torture for her. I sorta feel bad for her. Suddenly, the rainbow-maned pony walked closer to me and had a weird look on her face. It was like she knew me or something. I must’ve been seeing things. After that small silence, she spoke.
“ As you already know, I am Princess Celestia. She told me that you were a human that was turned into a pony. I believe you.” She then gave a smile.
I was actually...shocked. Judging from Luna’s face she didn’t believe at all. Still, who would?
“W-wait, you believe me? W-why?”
Even Luna wanted to know.
“ A human DID come here before.” Celesta then quickly turned to Luna. “You remember that story that mother told us? About the female human that came from a different universe and actually helped the ponies of that time beat the Demon Lord Tirek?”
“I had actually forgotten about that story.” Luna said with her hoof to her chin.
Celestia quickly turned back to me. “ Maybe you are somepony--or in your case, somebody--was sent here for a reason.”
I should really ask her about that story since I’m gonna be hospitalized for awhile. She also looks like she has something else to say.
“You also said that you can’t remember anything. For now, how about I give you a name.” Celestia thought for a while, then a smile appeared on her face. “How about Leady Star?”
Luna quickly disagreed with that name. “TIA!”
“What? It's not sorta like that name.” Celestia laughed as she sticked her tongue out,
I… kinda like the name. It's nice. It also sounds familiar. Maybe it's something close to my real name?
“ I like the name. If, for some reason, Luna doesn’t want me to take it.”
Luna looked at me with an angry look but calmed down and muttered out something a bit.
“ Fine... Leady.” She gave a smile. “For now, please get some bedrest. Some sleep may help you remember something.”
I nodded in agreement, and they nodded back as well. The both of them left the room as I placed my head on this comfy pillow. Why was I sent here? I then lifted up my bandaged hand-I mean hoof. So many questions… Maybe Luna is right. Some sleep will do me good. Good night.
Friendship is NOT magic
Dear Twilight
Please can you return to Canterlot as soon as possible, I apologise for asking you to return so soon, but I am in need of your assistance. It is imperative that you do not tell anypony, not even the Elements of Harmony. This is between you and Spike only, my Sister has found a “Distinctive” Unicorn, to put it lightly. He will be staying with us for a while and during his stay he wishes to learn magic, unfortunately, I am unable to teach him like I used to teach you due to my Royal Duties, so I am leaving him in your care. I apologize if you don’t want to do this but I could do with a few extras hooves when it comes to assisting him, as you will hopefully find out.
Yours ever faithfully Princess Celestia
Twilight POV
So… I’m on the train to Canterlot... my estimated time of arrival is in approximately 40 seconds from now… it’s rather peculiar that the Princess Celestia needs my help in Canterlot, especially due to the fact that it hasn’t even been a day since the Gala ended… but… I’m actually happy that she needs me again, it’s so exciting, to think she needs me, her number one student to teach a fellow unicorn about magic.
The train finally stopped at platform 2 of the Canterlot Mane Line Train Station, so me and Spike departed the train, making sure to “mind the gap between the train and the platform” just as the dreary monotone conductor had instructed. Spike had only just made the gap due to his small stature and also the fact that he was carrying all of our luggage, aside from the small amount in my saddlebags.
“Twilight… Do we really need all this stuff?” Spike muttered with a sullen expression.
I smiled back at him “Yes we do, all of this are absolutely necessary, it’s a good thing I only packed the essentials.” I stopped smiling when I noticed he was struggling with three or four rather large boxes.
“Note to self:Maybe carry more equipment next time”
We were greeted by the Royal Guards as per usual and also (surprisingly) Celestia was waiting slightly further back from the guards. She must’ve been expecting us.
“Princess!!” I beamed at her and tossed Spike my saddlebag as I galloped to her, my saddlebag had caused my back to slightly ache from walking. As galloped, I think I may have heard a dull thud coming from behind me but I Ignored it, whatever it was, I’m sure Spike could handle it.
“Hello Twilight. “ She said with a smile.” I trust your trip here wasn’t too bad?”
“Oh no Princess, not at all, it was a smooth ride here.”
We started walking through the marble arch at the entrance, I glanced back to see if Spike was keeping up, only to receive what could only be described as a deadpan expression from him, I quickly turned my head to speak to Celestia.
“Sooooooo… about this ‘Distinctive’ Unicorn you wanted me personally teach?”
The Princess remained silent for another minute or so until she reached a door for one of the many rooms within the castle “Princess… is there something I should know?”
Celestia promptly swung open the door and out shot a unicorn “is this who I’m going to be teaching? I tried to ask myself, I say ‘tried’ because before I could think it all or even react, the unicorn crashed into me, normally this would have been an embarrassing scenario, what made it worse was how he had landed on me. He landed on top of me and booped noses. Of Course I was embarrassed a little .
I swiftly lifted the unicorn off before Spike’s innocence could be destroyed, but as I lifted him off of me, I noticed that he covered in bruises and cuts.
“Sweet Celestia, What happened to you?”
The brown pony just wiped his head and chuckled “Well… let's say my magic is Crazy.”
“Literally” Celestia added. “Twilight, this is Leady Star. The Unicorn you will be teaching Leady, this is my protégé, Twilight Sparkle, one of the most gifted ponies I’ve ever known” I blushed at the Princesses compliment.
“It’ll be a pleasure to be taught by one Tia’s Star pupil.” Leady Said with a Smile on his face.
Tia? Since when do people call the Princess Tia… unless...nope there’s no way it could be true. Suddenly Leady was staring at me hard.
“U-um is something the matter? Your pupils are so small they’re practically impossible to see”
“Twilight?” Spike asked, genuinely concerned for her.
Leady then Screamed in pain as he clenched his head. He looked to be in serious pain.
This snapped me out of her daze and she quickly cupped her hooves around Spike’s head to shield him from Leady’s suffering.
Princess Celestia aided him bed and spoke reassuringly with him.
“Leady, are you perhaps remembering something?” She queried.
Leady then slowly removed his hoofs away from his head. “Twi-light….Gw-Gwen?”
“Gwen? Who’s Gwen?” Twilight asked in a confused manner
Leady put his hoof back on his head “I-I don’t know. When I saw you and heard your voice, an image came in my mind, it looked like a person, but… it's still blurry.”
Celestia placed her hoof to her mouth and she seemed to be thinking rather hard about something, then after half a minute of long hard thinking, she glanced at me “Twilight, Can you come outside? I wish to talk to you about something and as for you Leady, it is imperative that you rest.”
Leady looked somewhat disappointed, seeing as he really wanted to do his lessons now, but he knew he was in a bad state.
“Fine. I am feeling a little tired anyway.” He begrudgingly agreed as he placed his head on the pillow.
Celestia then closed the door and sighed a bit “Twilight… Leady is a little more complicated than you think… but I can’t tell you, not here, let's head to my room.”
This really sounds serious. No matter the Task I’ll do it no matter what the story. Twilight thought as she, Spike and Celestia navigated the hallways of the Royal Palace.
Leady POV
That face… that face… Why does her face keep appearing? It's so fuzzy, almost like visual snow… I just can’t see… her?
I keep getting headaches because of her, is she REALLY that important? UGH why does this hurt so much?
[Leo…]
Wait that name...Leo. It sounds familiar.
[Leo, Hey Leo.]
I think I am remembering something.
*Flashback* (Leady is only remembering voices)
[Yo Brotaku Leo.]
{Gwen}
[Hey Leo. I’m gonna head on over to Mari’s house you want to come?]
{Oh no i'm okay}
[Seriously? This is the 3rd time you are declining. Your parents would’ve want you to do this. Hell they are coming to visit in a week. Look I know you have trust issues due to a lot of...incidents, but these are my friends. They’re nice and I think...one of them has a crush on you. You know that one girl that came to my party last time?]
{Gwen, just leave me alone. Please I don’t want your so called friends}
[...Okay. I’ll see you later]
{*Sigh*....I don’t want friends… Friends, Will always betray you.}
I just remembered something painful, that I hate friends, Friends bully you, trick you, and no matter how hard you try to get them to like you, they don’t even care. They even put the blame on me when I didn’t even do anything and that’s when one of them said to me…
“You're our friend right? Take the blame for us.”
That was the last time I stopped doing things for them and that’s when I started to get beaten up a lot. It was painful...very painful. I started to cry again when something came to mind.
What do those unicorns want with me? They say my magic is unstable but maybe they’re planning to use me, Oh god that must be it, maybe Luna even brought me here just so she can steal my magic, but one thing is for certain.
I have to get the hell outta here.
Author's Note
I Can assure you guys. There is NO OCxTwilight...Buuuttt Twilight will be in a Canon pairing. Can you guess which one XD
Awakening: Part 1
Chap 4 : Awakening Part 1
I had decided to wait until dark to plan my escape from the castle, I had told the Guards that I had a sweet tooth and heading out for some candy, what surprised me the most was the gullibility of the guards, it’s like they could let any of riff raff in and out of the castle. After I was out of earshot. I decided that this would be a good time to gallop, I speeded through the streets of Canterlot, trying my best to avoid any darkened streets, now would not be a good time to be mugged, it would be somewhat inconvenient.
I saw a large golden archway, signifying the exit from Canterlot, at this stage I was heavily fatigued and aching, but I needed to push on. After going through the archway and across a drawbridge that spanned a water filled moat, I was out, at this stage I needed a break and decided to stop on top of a large hill. I turned around and observed the sleeping city in the distance.
“Where can I go?” I asked myself
It had dawned on me that this world was alien in so many ways, I don’t understand this world. Nearly everything her defied everything I think I know about the world. I do not know this world, hell, I vaguely know Canterlot. If only I could Teleport home... Wait Teleporting?
That's it, I can Teleport, I’d already learned the theory on how I can do it in those Spell books, could it be possible that I can well teleport home? It’s a long shot but I have to try.
I tried to build up as Much magic as I could, so much so, that I unknowingly started to short circuit again as I tried to teleport. I was blinded by my magic and I suddenly ended up in a nondescript forest, but I was happy that I managed to Teleport, but now I had no idea where I was.
[Ugghh]
What was that? Did I just heard someone moan?
[Testing Testing 1, 2, 3. Can anypony here me?-Pico}
Maybe it was auditory hallucinations, but I just heard It again, a distinctly female voice, that sounded slightly on edge.
“Hello?”
[Oh somepony is here. Hello there, um I need a helping hoof to help get me outta this jam I’m in.]
Jam? As in trouble? Wait… No, it’s probably another trick, I’m not falling for it...But...I can’t just leave her.
“Okay then female voice. What do you need help with?”
[I was trapped in this Temple for a millennium , I’ve been cold, lonely and there’s been no decent food, whenever somepony passes, I’ve yelled for help me, but they just get spooked and run away.]
Damn that sounds like a bad week… or a lot of bad weeks, I suppose I can try to help her.
“Okay what should I do then?”
[Just hold still. I shall use my power to bring you here.]
Power? All of a sudden a portal open just beneath my feet. Only one thing came to mind.
“F-FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! “
Oh Crap I am done for, now I’M going to have a bad week, what next?
[Oops, I may have opened a portal a bit too high”
“NO SHIT SHERLOCK!!”
I started to see the ground, judging from how fast I was approaching it, I’d say I’m gonna become a freaking pancake, If either of us don’t do something, I’m fucked.
[Still, this should be easy for a Creata Pony, so form you claws and grab the space]
“….What?”
A Creata Pony? What the hell is that? Is that another Race for ponies?
[Wait...you’re not a beginner are you?]
“… yesIampleasehelpmeIdon’twanttodieandbecomeapancake” I blurted out without a single breath between words.
[BUCKING HELL, how could I be so careless? SWEET CELESTIA *deep breath*]
… It seems we’re in a predicament here, who am I kidding, I’m screwed.
[Okay, Okay, I can help once more but after that, I think I am going to be drained of all my magic. I can tell that you are a Creata Pony but you’re base form seems to be off, I am going to help you awaken just a little bit, you are going feel a little Sting.] She swiftly replied.
That was more than a ‘sting’, it was a freaking jolt of pain, but I felt a lot of power building up inside of me, this Felt familiar, like...like….
*Flashback* (leady is only remembering voices again)
*{Leo...this is gonna be your first Time using these new abilities, now in order to use your abilities you must say this Incantation to permanently awaken your Creata self, are you ready?}*
*[I was born ready Sensei.]*
*{Hehe alright little one, Now repeat after me…..}
Light and Darkness
Yin and Yang
Awaken my true self that Lives within me
Grant me the power
The power to Create
The power to Record
The power to Destroy.
The power…
TO PROTECT OTHERS!!!
AWAKEN OF THE STAR FAMILY
LEO/LEADY STAR!!!
[W-wow… that was…. AMAZING! I thought I had to Guide you but you did this so well-Pico, still, it’s only a partial awakening]
She’s right, it felt so natural doing it, and does this mean something? Actually, yes it does, it means that I AM one hundred percent human.
[AHEM, Well I would like to apologise for that, anyway, now I can guide you to me-Pico]
Oh yeah… that’s right I was supposed to help her.
“So, how are you supposed to guide me?”
[Look down-Pico]
I lowered my head and what I saw ….well… It’s ADORABLE...So I hugged her.
She is so….Tiny… and cute… Wait a minute?
“I thought you needed help being freed…? You’re literally as free as a bird”
The Blue bird jumped on my head and glanced down on me “Well, this isn’t really my body-Pico, I took over this Bird’s body a long time ago-Pico. I use him to travel around this small pocket dimension, I believe this species of bird are rare, they’re known as a Sapphire Dragon Phoenix-Pico, he is in his Infant Size though because they take many years to reach maturity-Pico.”
...I smell bullshit, but seeing that I am in a unknown world, anything is possible.
“Okay, thank you for the lesson, now can we get to you now, I’m technically in a hurry.”
Oh, right.” The Bluish bird Laughed,” follow me”
Where were we going? I had no Idea, but little did I know
...my life was going to change with this bird by my side.
Author's Note
SORRY SORRY SORRY I TOOK SO LONG!!!
My editor was having a Bad time so I had to wait on him. Anyway, you guys like my new title pic? Made it myself. Plus This is the first Pose That I had to draw without reference material. I guess its good....No.
As we entered a Large temple it got extremely dark, as we walked in to the dark, shadowy abyss, the body of my feathered companion lit up to help guide me, but it was still hard to see, it was so dark in fact that my eyes were straining to see anything aside from her.
“Dammit, I can barely see, so much for the lights coming in handy” she expressed in a frustrated voice
“Hey, bird?”
“Hmm?” she asked in a curious, yet playful manner.
“Those statues that we pass by the entrance, who were they?” I asked
“Them?” she asked while giggling “They are the guardians of time and space, the one on the left is Clockwork, The Guardian of Time and the one on the right is his sister, Nova Star-Pico”
Wow that’s remarkable… Guardians of Time and Space? This reminds me of Dialga and Palkia… Wait Dialga and Palkia? Who are those people? Just forget it, sometimes it’s better to not ask questions you don’t know the answer to, especially since I have amnesia, besides I have a question for my feathered friend… plus she’s looking at me like I’ve gone insane… Shit am I saying this out loud… no? Thank god, she must just be wondering why I’ve suddenly gone silent, for god sake man, JUST ASK THE QUESTION!
“I thought you need like to be an Alicorn to do something like this? … Like the two Royal Sisters who raise the Sun and the Moon, respectively”
“That's a common misconception.-Pico. You don’t have to be an Alicorn to do something like that, heck that also applies if you want to Rule a Kingdom as well.”
“Wait… ‘Rule a Kingdom?’… I don’t understand?” I asked with a confused look.
“Are you sure you didn’t hit your head on the way down? Pico. You’re in Equestria you butt.” she said with a playful smirk.
“I know that, but I don’t see what that has to do with not being an Alicorn to be a ruler” I said starting to get frustrated with what is going on.
“Didn’t you learn Geography in school?” She curiously asked and I looked way and put a hoof in my mane, making it look like I was just stupid, I don’t want her to think I’m crazy.
“I’m sorry-Pico… I didn’t know…” she said with a pained expression, I looked at her to continue
“You see, Equestria isn’t the only Kingdom on our planet-Pico, there’s a few, there’s also the Griffon Kingdom for example…”
I lost her after that one… GRIFFONS? REALLY? Wow, this world is just pure, unfiltered insanity, what’s next? Batponies? , pfffft, really, you couldn’t make it up if you tried.
“... and that’s when I say to him, of course you’re going to have to put those whores down… wait, what were we talking about again?, I got side-tracked-Pico” she asked with a dazed look
“Griffons, griffonsarenomalright? Imeanishouldknowbecauseimnomal hahaimnotcrazy” I said with a high pitched voice
“haha you silly butt, you’re funny-Pico” she said and playfully smiled
Wow… I thought I wouldn’t get away with that… Well I stand corrected.
“Now I get to ask you a question.-Pico. Forgive me for prying but why are you running away from your home?”
“I’m not running away from home, I’m going home, what lead you to that conclusion? I asked, once again confused, I’m making a habit out of this.
“I can look into your head and see what’s going on, why are you leaving?, also why are you lying” She asked, her playful demeanour had disappeared and was replaced with a look that I can only describe as a cross between concerned and annoyed, the kind of expression your Mother would pull…
“Why are you staring blankly at me, are you alone with your thoughts?” she once again said
Son of a Monkey, not only is she on to me, but she also realized I talk to myself too much… how did she do that? How did she read my thoughts, okay, that’s It, I should probably tell her.
I explained her what happened thus far… It was hard explaining it to her… I may have cried a little but she then wiped my tears and gave me a smile.
“My little pony, listen up, what you said may or may not be true, but either way, you must never give up on yourself, keep your head up high and besides human or not, you have another chance at life. Don’t miss that chance, okay?-Pico”
She’s...right. I never thought of it of that. I was so concerned that I would get hurt again. I may have set the bar too high. I may have to apologize to Luna and Tia.
“Oh look” She then jumped off me “We’re here”
Wait what? I got so focused on the story that I never realised where I was going.
“Wh-whoa Is this..”
She looked backed at me “Yup, that my other half.”
It was a bright open room and in the center there was two large pillars with giant torches on top. I observed that in the center was a Bright fire with a Crimson Feather engulfed within the flames.
“That feather contains my other half, I needed your help because I needed the help of a living Unicorn to pull it out.-Pico” She said in a serious tone.
I was now determined to help her out even more. “Okay let's do this.”
“Don’t worry, the flame won’t burn you, it can only burn people that have evil thoughts-Pico… well, we all have bad thoughts every now and then, I mean the world isn’t black and white, I mean sick and twisted thoughts” She corrected.
I gingerly touched it to see if the bird was correct, it felt warm, but nothing other than that, so did what was instructed and I tried to grab it, but it wouldn’t budge at all.
“”Stubborn little-”
I used both hoofs and pulled with all my might, but it seemed pretty insistent on being a stubborn sod, but I kept pulling without any remorse.
“GHAAAA COME OUT YOU FREAKING SON OF A BITCH!”
I kept pulling and pulling until the space around it started to distort and crack, this was when I finally pulled it out...
CRASH
The area around the feather shattered and pieces of it landed on the floor next to me, the feather was in my hoof as I got up, Pico ran to me to check if I was okay.
“Sweet Feathers, are you okay there?” She asked worried.
I nodded as I cracked my neck “I’m fine thanks, nothing to worry abo-ARGH!”
The feather then suddenly burst into flames and burned my neck and hoof, I used my magic to levitate it out of my hoof and throw it about five or six hoof steps away from me, the crimson fire turned into a large sphere and it was getting bigger by the second.
“It’s time…”
The blue bird then walked towards the large sphere. She then turned back to me.
“Thank you pony for freeing me, for over 1051 years I have been trapped down here and you managed to help free me, thank you so much.” She then gave me a smile.
I actually blushed at her. Is this the feeling of gratefulness
“Before I go, what is your name” She asked
Oh wait that's right, I haven't told her my name this entire time “Its Leo-I mean Leady Star”
“Leady Star, allow me to introduce myself, my name is Tana, The Phoenix Empress, thank you for all that you have done for me.”
Did she Say she was a Empress!? I was about to ask her but then the flames got too bright and I was blinded, when the light dimmed, I opened my eyes the first thing I saw was the exact same blue bird.
“Pico? Pico?” The bird started looking around then looked at me and got intimidated.
“Hey, hey, easy, I’m not going to hurt you.” I said as I walked up to it.
I was about to touch him but the flaming Crimson sphere lit up, when it shrunk again it left what appeared to be a necklace or a charm floating in the space.
This necklace or Charm or whatever started to descend, it then proceeded to attack me and latch on to me in all but 3 seconds, I tried to get it off but I couldn't.
“What the Hell? GET OFF!!” I kept pull and pulling but it wouldn't budge.
[Ugh!]
Wait that moan… I know that moan.
“Tana? Are you... are you in this thing?” I asked as I held it in my hoof
[W-Wait? HUH?! The hell? I was supposed to be reborn in a new body, not trapped in another prison, THAT Lying fucking Old son of a fucking Bitch, Starswirl the Fucking Bearded.]
“Hey watch it this is a teen rating Story. Our author is trying to not to have us use the F word much”
[Sorry, it wasn’t me, it was the editor.]
“Well the editor can go FU- I mean *BEEP* himself, WAIT, WHAT WAS THAT??” I asked in shock
[The Editor.] she said in a deadpan voice. [He’s has a habit of changing what people say.]
“How much has he changed?” I asked in confusion.
[Well you were going to be an Alicorn Princess, but he changed it.] she said with a snicker
“Awww” I said in disappointment
Anyway, she seemed really pissed off and rightly so, this Starswirl person really screwed her over.
“Well this massively sucks, can you transfer to the bird the again?’
[I can’t, it seems this charm forbids from leaving.] She said with a sigh [Though I will admit, this is quite roomy.]
Well, she adapted quickly. Speaking of which, the bird was near my hoof, it must’ve been scared this whole time.
“Hey little guy, don’t worry, nobody is gonna hurt you.” I said with a kind smile.
The dragon sapphire phoenix then opened his eyes, it was crying as it jumped on my head.
“Well I’ll call it Pico for now as for you Tana? Technically, you are still in a prison but unlike the old one, this one is mobile.”
We both laughed at that, we definitely need that after what happened, but she does seem like a nice person.
[Well then I guess it’s a good thing then, well, shall we open a portal to the other world?]
I nodded “Sure thing.”
GAAAAAHOOOOOOOHHHH
“What the hell?...”
[..Was that?]
We both heard a loud roar coming from the distorted space where the large fire once was.
GAAAAAHOOOOOOOHHHH!!!!!!!
[Oh crap, I just remembered something that Starswirl told me.]
I had a bad feeling about this. “Don’t tell me...Since I pull out the feather, a large boss monster is going to emerge from it and will kill us?”
[Wha-How did you-?”
I interrupted her “Just a hunch.”
A Large shadowy Black claw rose from the distorted space and swiftly came at us, I had to get out the way before it could land, it caused a crater forming the exact shape, the rest of his body came out and it looked as scary as you expected.
“U-Um Tana? Wh-What should we d-’
[RUN RUN RUNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!]
The monster roared at us, left with no options, I galloped as fast as I could; with Pico on my head and Tana on my chest.
As I glanced back, I saw the monster was chasing us!
“It’s getting closer, shit, I’m too slow.”
[Leady remember I said that I awakened you partly?]
I nodded “Yes, why?”
[Now that I have my full power again, I can fully awaken you, you will undergo a full transformation, I believe they call it Anthro, which is from the word ‘Anthropomorphic’, you will be able to change and revert back at will, this is our only option.]
This time I felt a lot of her power coursing through me, I felt my body growing and changing but as it changed, I felt more...human, It was too dark to see what I looked like, but I felt the changes. I felt faster and made it out of the temple. The first thing I wanted to do was check myself out.
GAAHHHHHOOOOOOOO
Shit its getting closer. We need to keep running. No wait-
“ Tana Open the portal!!”
[Oh shit Right!]
She opened a portal and we jumped into it, and all I saw was ground as I landed face first into it, dammit I should have watched that re-entry, it was a bit bumpy.
As I got up and as I got up I noticed something.
“We landed in the exact same spot I came from.” I smiled, a bit of blood running from my nose from where I hit it.
[HAH we outran it.]
I smiled as I started walking into the forest “We sure showed him, huh?”
[Yup… Wait, Leady? Um, did we forget something?]
GAAHHHHHOOOOOOOO
…..Shit [Shit]
We forgot to close the portal……
Author's Note
I have no idea why my drawing are looking more like a kid drew it. At it sorta gives out a description of whats going on.
I apologize that the art is lacking. I guess I was Running on fumes.Again sorry.Chap 6 will be out in a week or on Xmas eve with less pictures
Awakening: Final Part
“Aw nuggets...”
The Shadow monster attacked us with its tail and sent us hurtling out the forest at high speed, we flew high enough to actually see two towns across, it's a good thing that it's not going there and instead only focusing on us. It does make you wonder how high we actually are since I am once again lost in my thoughts, much like in the previous chapter, me, the Goddess and Pico crashed into a large boulder, causing an imprint on it.
‘“O-ow.”
I actually tried to force a smile, “Well…” I coughed up some blood”…You got your just desserts for not closing the portal.”
I managed peel myself off of the boulder and check myself for any sustained injuries, as soon as I left the boulder my body was burning and then I felt better. It appears I can regenerate every time I get an injury, what is this, a video game?
“Wait, I feel Fine, H-How? I got hit by that thing AND slammed into a boulder.”
[I don’t believe it... You have my abilities? This is getting more and more interesting.]
I could hear the monster roaring in the distance, it was getting closer but I had more pressing matters. “What abilities?”
[My people have a healing factor called Healing feather. It's a Passive ability that heals our wounds in seconds as long as stay away from damage as it heals us. The worst thing if you get damaged while getting healed, the result could be painful, plus we can’t do any type of dynamic movement or else the healing will stop.]
That sounds really bad, but at the same time useful. The charm must obviously be giving me her abilities, I wonder if I have gained anything else, but no matter, I was getting side-tracked. As the monster came out the forest, He? She? Roared and started to attack us, but this time I was ready and kept dodging with coordination, precision and timing.
[How are you dogging so easy?]
I shrugged “I don't know?Just Dance Revolution?”
[… The hell are you talking about?]
“No Idea”
I got hit again, unfortunately I was healing at the same time and as a result I was holding my side in pain. I got up once more and that's when it got real.
[I'm sensing an energy build up inside of him. IT’S A BEAM ATTACK!]
Oh shit I’m trapped here, I won’t be able to dodge in time, OH Sugar Honey Iced tea.
The monster fired a dark red beam at us, I closed my eyes thinking it was the end for me until…
LEADY!!
I opened my eyes to see Twilight AND Luna forming a shield barrier and blocking the attack, as the attack subsided, Twilight dropped to the ground.
She kept panting, “That… was... Difficult, but we managed to get here in time, Princess Luna are you okay?”
“Tis fine. Something like this is fillys play. “Luna said proudly, she then looked at me with a shocked face and started staring at me with a disappointed expression. “To think that thine trusted you.”
“Trusted me? What are you talking abou-”
“SILICENE SPY! Thy shalt deal with you later. Twilight Sparkle please stand aside. ”
S-Spy? Why am I labelled as a spy now?
[Well you did run away into the dark and brought a Dark demonic monster back with you.]
This is getting weirder and weirder by the second.
[This is going to be annoying news, but I now remember Princess Luna and that monster… being trapped in that prison makes you forget things.]
I wish she’d remembered earlier, this has ever so slightly peeved me, this would have come in handy earlier.
“Princess? You can’t possibly think of fighting that thing.” Twilight said worried.
Luna look at the monster as it roared at them. “That THING are known as Berserker Shadows, beings that are formed out of nothing, with a goal to destroy until there's nothing left. Thou won’t be able to destroy it... but a Creata Pony can, beside the Spy behind us you are looking at the most powerful Creata Pony in all of Equestria!”
[Yep, she's right on both.]
How do you know?
[Because she beat me once]
Suddenly a large burst of energy came out of Luna
“Let's see if I still have it.” She grinned
All of sudden, she started to say some type of incantation. \
Oh great mother from beyond the Stars
Grant me my Lunar Power to cleanse the world from darkness
The light is my moon
The moon is my power
It's TIME to shine.
Creata CHANGE
A large flash of Light Blinded us for a few second and well Luna’s full appearance changed
RANK A
Her hair was Pure white and that Armor gave a sapphire glow to it. Then there was that awesome Scythe that had this Angelic and Demonic Color to it. Which is weird in a sense .
She charged at him with full force and started slashing at it, cutting off its tail in the process and making the shadow scream in pain.
Twilight was very impressed “This is so amazing, she’s beating it with ease and elegance.”
[...Something’s not right.]
Hmm? What do you mean?
[I know Luna is strong, but when she changed, she said Rank A]
I was now getting concerned, so I asked Tana “what was her original Rank?”
[Before I was trapped we were the Same Rank, Rank S! The reason I am worried is because she is over exerting her power, if she was Rank S then that should be no problem, but this is different]
AGH!!
We both then saw Luna getting sloppy and getting hit even more, shit, what can I do? Actually it's what can I do? I ran straight for the monster with the mentality to attack.
[Whoa, whoa, are you Stupid?]
Maybe but I am not going to let her get badly beat up.
“Yo, Shadow!”
It then Looked at me as I jumped in the air and was about to kick it.
“WATAHH!!!!”
[You must be either Stupid or brave]
I then got slammed to the ground… hard… I never even stood a chance.
[No wait, scratch that, you’re stupid.]
Luna who is still injured use her scythe for support. “We don’t need help, I got this.” Luna said as she then dropped to the ground “D-Damn it, if I wasn't banished to the moon, I could've finished this quicker.”
[Wait, she was banished? Now it all makes sense, Leady if you don’t mind, I think Can take over your body.}
Wait, what… why?
[Look, I don’t have time to Explain, screw it, I’m taking over, NOW!]
All of a sudden, I felt my spirit being pulled away, and then...nothing.
Tana POV
So this is how it feels to have a body again, since Leady and I are connected, it still feels the same, Besides His body His hair Now has Flame colored highlights just like i used to have. it also seems that I have my red pigments. Wait now is not the time to be looking at yourself.I looked at Luna.
“Oh how the mighty have fallen” I said with a grin
Luna then looked at me with a shocked look on her face,”T-That voice. T-Tana? Is that you?”
I nodded “In the Flesh… well not technically” I Quickly punched the Berserker shadow as far as possible to give some distance between us. “I going to cut this short, Your new buddy here is not a spy, I actually just asked him to free me, he is as innocent as a newborn filly.”
Luna face went from shocked to serious “If you're free, then that means Starswirl Seal is on you now.” She then pointed at the Charm. “This means there is still a chance to stop you from taking over Equestria again.”
“Relax blueberry butt, during those years I have had a change of heart. So I decided to help you, even if I did want to take over Equestria or even the world, I am still too weak, due to my imprisonment as well.”
I went closer to her, so close in fact that I can feel her breath “I am going to have to take some power from you.”
I then kissed Luna. Heh she still wears the same Fruity lip Gloss after all these years in this form. It lasted for at least 10 seconds, during which time I felt Luna energy coming to me, Of course she was blushing but I didn't care. I felt my hooves burning with Luna’s energy as I generated my flames, they went from bright orange to an ice white color.
“Now I am going end this.”
The Shadow was searching for us since I punched it so far away, I gave it a whistle to signal that I was over here and it started to charge after me, I placed my hand when it got close enough and I then released all that power in one blast.
Holy Fiyah!!
With the Remaining power I had, I used one Of my Holy Flame attacks to Cleanse the Shadow. It Got disintegrated but Its soul is now free. Whats a Shadow you asl? I’ll save that for later.
Luna and twilight were speechless, I on the other hand, just used up all my remaining power I had stored for years within that father … I think I may have overdone it.
The last thing I remembered was falling, Luna was probably calling out to me, since that is the cliché thing that usually happens in these stories… heh… this world has changed so much, I think I may enjoy this.
Author's Note
Sorry I took So Long. Classes sprung outta nowhere. I hope you like this chapter. The next one is in progress.
The tale of the Creata and Tana
The tale of the Creata and Tana
...
…..
…...Ugh...wha?
I woke up clutching my head, ugh, it feels like a hangover without the bad consequences. After I glanced at my appendages, noticed that I am back to my original pony form.
[Leady? Are you okay?]
Tana? Oh good she's still here.
[Of course I’m still here…”]
Wait you can hear my thoughts?
[I guess so, it appears I can.]
Huh, well this is eerie... wait… something's off.
I got out of this bed and open the door to see steel black bars that blocked my entrance, and I immediately thought “Hostage”, upon close inspection, the bars emanated a soft gold glow, so I knew magic was involved… that was it, there was no escape, I was silently hoping for a man on the other side holding a camera and uttering the phrase “It’s just a prank bro”.
“This isn’t a prank video, is it?” I uttered
“Ah you're awake.” A familiar Guard was near the side of the Door.
“Wait, you’re the guard that gave me the letter correct?
He nodded, “Correct, Princess Luna told me to keep a strict eye on you, think of this as a house arrest”
“Guard is the prisoner awake?”
“Oh hush, he is no Prisoner.”
Those voices, yes it's Luna and Tia… and from the nature of Luna Voice, she sounds pretty damn pissed. The guard gave a Salute and opened the Prison bars on an invisible hinge as the royals entered my “cell”.
I gave a sigh of relief “You have no idea how glad I am to see a really familiar fa-”
I wanted to continue but when I saw Luna… she was....Tiny, she was approximately the size of a filly.
“You look so ADORABLE!” I gasped in awe “I just wanna Hu-”
“SILENCE!!!” Luna interjected, using the Canterlot Voice and blushing.
That was enough to scare the living daylights out of me, It was at that precise moment, I knew I was screwed..
“Tis-I mean, you are now charged with harbouring a deadly villain.” Luna Said angrily. “And… K-K-Ki…”
Celestia Continued “Ignore her. I think she's still fed up on the whole kissing thing.”
“Well sorry about th-Wait kissing?!”
I’m little confused here, when did I kiss Luna?
[Oh that was me, when I took over, I needed power so I absorbed her power, which is why I kissed her and also why she’s in that state of charging.}
State of charging? I’m a little confused with that as well?
[Do I have to explain everything to you? When a Creata uses too much power, they enter a forced charging state, meaning they shrink and temporally can’t access their Creata abilities until a certain amount of time has passed, then they are allowed to transform but they are still in the charging state]
I tasted my lips a little, I tasted some fruity lip gloss.
“Is that why my lips taste like blueberry fruit punch?”
Luna Blushed even harder “DAMMIT shut up!”
Oh man her getting even more ticked off. Celestia was watching her go off and She was just smiling throughout all this.
[Okay time to take over. Get out the way leady]
Wait no hold on a se………
Tana Pov
[Not Cool Tana]
Oh hush, let me deal with them.
“Oh Luna you don't know when to shut up, do you?”
Luna quickly hushes, while Celestia put her hoof to her mouth. “T-Tana. It really is you.?”
“Hey there Solar Flank, nice to see you once more” I said giving out a smile.
[W-Wow. Tia Seems really happy to see you]
Me and Celestia are buddies and share a good bond, Luna However…
“Tana. You freaking pervy pet phoenix, I will get you for what you did….” Luna shouting while flailing her hoof
I just grinned at her “Or what? Are you going to hit me with your tiny hooves? You know what, how about we play that game we always play when I’m bored.
Suddenly Luna got scared “No...Not that…”
[Tana...what are you doing….]
“Hey Luna you want to Ride the moon?”
She then started Screaming in annoyance while Tia just laughed.
[Crappy puns?]
All puns are “crappy”, but yes.
I grinned as I said more. “Did it hurt when you fell from the moon? Because your face is messed up.”
[THAT WASN’T EVEN A PUN!]
Tia was laughing up a storm as I said more and more puns. Heck the Guard Laughed as well.
Luna had enough as she was covering her ears “Just what do you want…”
“Simple, I want my new buddy here to be free”
Celestia Sat on the floor as she started to Speak “We would love to but the thing is, we don't know it that same event will happen again.”
Oh yeah...She’s right...That incident…
[You mind explaining that?]
I’ll tell that when I’m ready…
“I want to give you a chance, but it's up to Luna.” Tia said
Curses so close…
Luna now walked to me,” I WONT allow it. I am sending you back…”
[Gosh, what did you do to piss her off this much?]
I TOLD you, I’ll explain later. Besides I have a plan.
“Oh really?” I now gave a grin, “You DID swear to Leady that you will help him no matter what, and if I remember correctly, you always keep your word. So by banishing me again you are breaking your promise, the latter will tarnish your name as a Princess”
As per usual I was on the money as Luna got ticked, wow, I am the master of aggravating her.
“..Fine. I will allow you to stay, but only on one condition.” Luna said calmly
I nodded “What's the condition?”
Luna gave a menacing smile,” You and me...We’ll have a Creata Duel…”
Okay that technically scared me a little, I can’t beat her in this form because she can kick my feathery or in this case ‘furry’ ass in an instant….
“O-Oh...you can’t be serious…”
“I am serious, we are going to test your Power, we will go by our rules and you DO remember what happens to the underdog, correct?” Luna said as she gave a menacing yet flirty grin…
I gulped as I remembered all the crazy shit we did…”Y_Yeah..”
She then Smiled, “Good.” Luna then walked out with a smile on her face. Tia followed as well and then looked back at me and said.
“Good Luck Tana...”
...I am so dead.
[You can’t beat her?]
...Leady I’m going to tell you the story on how I was born. It will explain everything.
[Okay. I’m Listening Tana.]
Before I tell that Story, I should first tell you the Lore of the Creata Pony.
Creata Race
Meaning: Creation
The Original God of Creation vs the Demon God of Destruction. This war has been going on for Centuries. For so long in fact, that worlds were made in the Process. Out of the infinite number of worlds that were created, two of them contained a race of humans that shared the almighty power of God, and another world where demons that shared the destructive power of the demon, just like their almighty idols, they too fought and in the process made worlds of their own. Each world just kept fighting until instead of one world, one figure of each race were born and sent to different parts of the universe. Then, the power of the gods was reduced.
One Alicorn was born, she made the world we lived in and the Kingdom, known as Equestria. Making a World is very powerful task and by now she needed offspring. She was about to give birth when a demon type of Alicorn like her attacked her and gave her some deep wounds, it would take time for her to heal and to give birth as well so she made a race made in her image and called it Creata. These Creata ponies were created to protect her until she has recovered. She made this race weaker than herself so they won't rebel, they also helped finish making the world that she made. Because they couldn't create everything their cutie marks determine what they can create. If a pony has a tree CM, it means they either create trees, destroy them or both.
As the years went by, she had finally recovered and gave birth to two Alicorns named Celestia and Luna. They were as strong and powerful as her, so it took a very long time to make them. She also bestowed the Creata Power to one of the Said fillies. The Creata Race also gave birth to more Creata’s and even regular ponies with no type of Creta powers so on. Later on she needed to leave so she could find the Demon Pony that attacked her. She left her world in her daughter's care and gave a Special task to watch over her Sister and the ponies as well. As she left, the Creata’s disappeared and only came out when certain events happened. Some stayed hidden while some were out in the open to help the other ponies.
Time to time they Fought these shadow like ponies they called NeoCreata and Shadows because they almost have the same abilities. The battle between them continued it has said that The Creatas sealed this world and hid it away from the Neos but who knows when they will return. As of now the Creata race is dying out due to the race not giving birth to Creata ponies.
[So that's what you meant when I was a Creata. wow! Did this Alicorn ever come back?]
She would come back once every few years to see them, from what Luna and Tia told me, She was very beautiful, strong and caring.
[That’s amazing}
I know right? I wish I’d get the Chance to meet her….
[ So Tana now about your past now?]
Oh yeah that’s right… I’ll continue…
One thousand fifty years ago I was created by Starswirl the Bearded. He was the first pony that managed to create living breathing life with Creata magic…. I was a gift for Luna but back then I was just a normal Phoenix, but as time progressed I started changing and underwent a transformation and became… well… Anthropomorphic.
As time progressed, we slowly became closer until our first kiss.
Yup, I started to get romantic and Luna didn’t mind, It went from a friendship to a loving relationship, we were happy. More time Progressed and I started to gain magical abilities. Luna then helped me with my magic and that just strengthened our relationship. I would Always Lose in a Fight with Luna So I kept using Teasing methods to win some fights. We would then make the loser do some crazy shit. It was so fun...until ‘that’ day happened.
I don't know why but I started to hate everything. I was ridiculously powerful. In my eyes everything was red. I kept destroying things. I hurt Tia, Luna, Philomena, Everyone.. Until Starswirl defeated me. I remembered being sealed in the pocket Dimension with him still there.
There was something else he told me but I just can’t remember. It’s been too long.
[Sorry Tana. I’m just processing all of this and all I can say is...Wow]
It’s Okay Leady, during that imprisonment I learned a few things, It was lonely in there but now it’s not anymore, I only met you for a day and look at all the Shit we caused?
Leady started laughing uncontrollably
[Maybe so but we still have one more Obstacle. Luna and this Creata Duel, So how does that work?]
Basically it’s just two Creata Fighting to prove who’s stronger. It’s either that or to settle debates, we say an incantation to create an invisible field so we won't receive true damage to our bodies. We will feel the pain but when the battle is over, the only thing you will be feeling is fatigue and your power dropping or not.
[Hmm Interesting, well we have time can you explain some more?]
Sure thing Leady.
We talked for hours until the Guard unlocked the room and made us follow to the training field, It still hasn't changed after all these years.
We Then Saw Celestia, the Purple Pony from last night and Luna already transformed into her base form… So, her Power is not yet there it seems?. A Base Form Only consists of Clothing and Hers Just looks like Training Clothing.
“So, are you Ready Tana?” Luna Said with a serious tone.
I nodded back at her “I am Luna “
[Hey um go easy on my body okay]
No Promises.
[…shit.]
Since, Leady’s body is still adapting to Creata Power, I had to be careful, so I transformed as well and positioned myself. Celstia then walked straight to the outer centre of the field.
“Okay you two, I want a good fight, since technically Tana is In Leady’s body, Luna agreed to give herself a handicap. You only hit her four times to win but, she will attack you at full strength.
[That Sounds Simple enough]
Easy for you to say
“Now..” Celestia Raise her hoof high in the Sky “Both Challengers begin the Chant.”
“Creatas locked in battle.”
“Ready to prove who’s best”
“So we can challenge the Rest”
“Oh great mother protect the land”
“With your arcane magic to also protect your children”
“Field Of Battle: CREATE”
A large white Spell circle covered the field and probably spread across Canterlot. Since Creata like to move a lot, but now that the field is up...
LUNA Ready….
...Shit is Most definitely…
...Tana READY…
..Going to get Real…
Creataaaaas
DUEL!!
Author's Note
No drawing this chapter but there will be one next chap.
Chap 8 Luna vs Leady: Round 1
Tana P.O.V
Luna Is REALLY serious on whooping my butt. She wrapped her arm around my stomach and flung me into the nearest wall, causing a small impact crater.
[Holy crap. She’s quick. I didn't even see that coming.]
Same here, Luna’s way of fighting is based more on speed attacks. Her speed increased her attack power. Which is why I was hesitating a little when she landed a hit. I wanted to see if her style changed.
[So what's the verdict?]
Her attacks are definitely stronger, plus she’s even faster as well. I think I know why.
I remember when Luna fully transformed last night. Her wings were missing and they were compressed into power to form those 3 triangle objects. Without the wings, she won't have the extra weight.
Leady I’m transforming into my blaze form. It’s sort of like a Creata Change but mine’s on a time limit. Since I don't know the extent of your body, I am going to go all out to test the limits before I burn out. Once I burn out I am probably going be sent back in the charm and then you take control again so hopefully I’ll win by then.
[ Okay. Do what you gotta do but yeah like I said go easy on my body.]
[And again no promises.]
I managed to get out of the wall and dust myself off. “Geez LuLu you really got strong”
Luna gave a proud smile “Well I AM that strong.”
Heh but still too naive
Blaze Form: Peacock feathers.
While I’m transforming, I better tell you about my forms. I have a total of two forms with mode variants. In the Blaze form, I can use the three modes: Peacock feathers, BloodRuby and StarSwirl. In Blaze, I don't really transform because I'm already anthropomorphic. In Leady’s Body however, parts of his body gain feathers and turns bright orange.
“Oh is that supposed to be the Blaze Form: Peacock feathers? It looks weird when I see it on a pony.” Luna said bluntly
She attacked again suddenly but I was prepared to block it. As I blocked it, I only went back just an inch, the look on Luna face is funny as hell, but I don’t think that’s what surprised her.
“Those weapons...You still have them?” She said nervously.
What I have in my two hands are the weapons Luna made for me. Two battle fans imbedded with wind magic and my fire magic. .
“That’s right hun, I still have them, HEE-YAA!” I pushed her away with the fan and attacked with one of my skills.
“Blazing Gale” I then fanned the fans, which caused them to stir up then ignite, causing it to make a Small Fire Storm. Luna Got trapped in it and received some damage.
“That’s one hit hun, three more to go.” I said with a smirk.
“Don’t get too confident.” Luna started to attack once more. “Don’t you forget” She attacked with her right hoof to kick me but I still managed to guard it. “I am the one that taught you. “Shadow Slip”
Shadow Slip? Did she just said? Oh Shit. Due to that last attack, my eyes were closed. That attack allows her to literally blend with the shadows. She would mostly use that to…
I quickly turned around to block but Luna already appeared and punch my stomach. The pain was intense. Not even my regenerative abilities can keep up.
“Face it Tana, I am not as weak as I once was, I am on a whole new level” She said as she retreated back to her said to her side of the field…
[She pulled of a Shadow Sneak on us. Can you even beat her?]
I got back up clenching my stomach, she’s right, I can’t beat her. It seems I am going to have to resort to my usual way of beating her.
Don’t worry leady I have a plan. Trust me this is going to work.
I jumped and used my 2nd attack named Feather Dart. It’s an attack where I use my fans to shoot out small red peacock feathers that will explored if a Creata is near it. As usual, Luna would easily evade them, which is what I was going for.
“Please that puny attack is so old school as the new ponies say.” Luna said flying to my location.
That's just what I wanted you to do. Watch and learn Leady.
[Well I’m watching.]
“Heh well if I lose. I still get to have some super fun time with you again.” I gave a slight grin as i said that. Luna quickly blush as her speed dropped a little.
“W-W-What are you saying?” She said blushing.
“Aw don’t act all innocent. You gave me that flirty grin one Chapter ago. You definitely want to have your way your way with me again.”
Luna blushed even more as she started attacking randomly,” S-Shut up. I didn't meant it like that”
[Ah now I get it. You trying to embarrass her. The more embarrassed she is, the more she'll screw up.]
Yep. Just one more and she is bound to screw up.
“Well even so. It’s been a very so…I started to blush a little while putting on an embarrassed pose. “P-Please be gentle.”
And that was the hitter. Luna started flailing her arms around and even turned her back to tell Tia and the purple pony that it’s not what it looks like. But still this was my win.
“No hard feelings.” I gave her full power kick to her back, sending her back to ground. “That’s two and…” The feathers I placed on the floor exploded cause damage to her and me gaining another hit.”…That three and last but not least, Enlarge.
My fans increase four times their normal size, I then did a more powerful version of my Blazing Gale attack.
It had seemed to hit her but I didn’t feel that it did, I landed back to ground as the Gale was still engulfing Luna. All of a Sudden the Gale got sliced in two, I freaking knew it, Luna was able to summon her scythe, and I guess she was waiting for it.
“It was pretty smart to use that tactic against me as always I completely forgot you always did that. Now, Playtime’s over.” Luna said pissed.
[We’re fucked, aren’t we?]
No we're not we can still-
I got interrupted as my body or my soul in this being forced out of this body. Looks like I burned out too soon.
Leady Pov
…..Um Tana?
[Okay now we’re fucked.]
It seemed that Luna also noticed the change. “It seems that Tana burned out and Leady gained control again. Although I have nothing against you,” She gripped her Scythe and attacked with a full swing” A duel is a duel and we have to finish it!”
She REALLY wants to win this thing, you have no idea how freaking scared I was, as she was charging after me I, wanted to move back but I tripped after something, causing me to fall back and fall, I should be glad because her scythe nearly got me.
As Luna missed she quickly turned around and tried again “Stop dodging it and take the hit.”
I quickly got up I dogged again, this time not in time because she grazed me a little so I did winced in pain a little.
[This is not good. Leady you have to embarrass her or something.]
Easy for you to say Tana
‘Look Luna, let's just call it a tie?” I asked nicely
“No way in hell I am going to end this once and for all and NOTHING is going to stop me”
Luna scythe glowed a bright white and I can just feel the power from it, she starting to attack once more and I had no idea what to do.
[Leady you have to try SOMETHING!]
Tana what stupid thing can POSSIBLIE work in this situa-…. Ooh, I got it.
[Oh?]
This was going to be the one of the stupidest things I will ever say, but it’s worth a shot. I pointed at her and said two words.
When I said that Luna quickly stopped in her tracks.” W-What!? HOW DARE YOU INSULT THINE MOTHER?”
Celestia was just laughing up a storm, She doesn't seem offended by it which means…
Looks like Yo mama jokes are my go to. But some of my human versions won't go well in this world
[Hmmm hey tell me more of this yo mama stuff.]
I gave her a quick rundown on yo mama jokes on how they are supposed to be funny and sort of insulting.
[Oh this is juicy. Okay leady since you don't know much about this world Im gonna tell you some off of the top of my head. Ready leady?”
Let’s go.
I started the bombardment of Yo mama jokes in some poses.
[Number 1]
“Yo Mama is so fat, an Ursa Major doesn't even compare to it.” He said with a grin.
Luna was getting embarrassed a little “That is not true Mother had a decent weight”
[Numero Dos]
“Yo Mama so fat, that when she was left in space, she was classified as a new planet.”
Luna started stammering, “S-stop it. She is not fat at all.”
[Number three.]
‘... Yo Mama so ugly, she turned a cockatrice to stone.”
All I heard was Tia laughing as hard as possible and Luna telling her to shut up because they have the same mother, either way now is my chance, I ran as quickly as possible to land the final hit we need.
“Luna sorry about this.”
She quickly turned around but it was too late for her to even do anything as I did my *coughs* special 100 percent original technique *coughs*
LEADYUKEN( If You don’t know that reference, shame on you)
I hit her jaw and as she dropped to the ground, I raised My hoof hands in the air with excitement, “I WON!!”
Celestia clapped her hooves as the field spell suddenly glowed and then disappeared.
“Congratulations Leady, You did very well, I actually liked those Yo Mama jokes” Celestia smiled
I heated up a little when I saw that smile. “Aw Shucks, It was nothing, Just quick thinking is all.” I started rubbing the back of my head.
Hey Tana. Is Celestia always this Cute?
[Are you kidding? Of course she is? Warning if you try to date her or get in the royal britches, she can be a bit dominate]
I-I wasn’t asking about that. Geez
[I’m just saying, it’s a little ironic, considering how she always gets other people to do work for her]
I think you just upset some Celestia idolisers.
Luna got up holding her jaw and walked right next to her sister “That attack had quite some power to it. As promised...I’ll do whatever Tana wants, even if she is a massive cheat” She blushedat that last two statements.
[Hmmm Ya know. I have an idea. I dont want to be THAT mean like back in the day or just until I can get my own body so here’s what we’ll do.]
An hour later.
I was now doing some Lessons with Twilight Sparkle, She was teaching me everything about this world and some magic. The amount of homework I had, it’s insane. This is College all over again. Wait did I go to college? Meh something for later.
“And that’s why we don’t fight with Ursa Majors.” Twilight said as she closed her large book
“Wow...this world has some interesting history, I would love to learn more.”
Twilight had an extremely happy look on her face “Really? See Spike, I told you he would want to learn more.”
Spike was just sat on a stool in the corner of the room, eating a bowl of popcorn” Okay, Okay, you were right… aww, I’m out of popcorn.”
“Oh, hold on Spike, I’ll get you more.” Leady said
I clapped my hoofs and Rung a bell, All of a sudden, Luna in creata mode came in with a very sexy Maid dress on.” Is there anything you need...M-M-Master and M-Mistress?”
I tried to look away cause hot damn that dress is too revealing.” u-Um Can you get Spike some More Popcorn a-a-and some refreshments for us please?
“Very well.” She turned around and started to walk away.
“Sorry Luna.”I said with a frown.
“No need. I lost a bet and I must follow it...Even though Tana Knows I hate this.” She said with gritted teeth and walked away.
“How long does she have to stay like that?” Twilight asked.
Until the end of the day. Thankfully it’s only 2 more hours but Tana keeps ordering her nonstop.”
Spike started laughing,” Well then Maybe I should try that. A whole day of Twilight being my servant”
Twilight just gave him a glare that scary as hell. Even I was scared.
“I’m kidding, I’m kidding.” Spike said flailing his arms.
I started laugh “Ya know, my memory may be gone but it’s coming back piece by piece, Things like this reminds of times I played with that girl that keeps reappearing in my head. Could that girl be related to me? Or friend? Ugh I’m thinking too much. Whelp, back to learning.
Author's Note
Ya know I'm sorta thinking to making this a M rated Fic just to be safe. I mean there will some innuendos here and there so I'm still debating. Anyway hope you like the Chapter
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Be sure to wash your hoofs before doing magic
CHAP 2 Be sure to wash your hoofs before doing magic.
I woke up bright and early this morning. My body actually felt better than it was last night. Speaking of last night, I had a dream about a girl. If I remember correctly, she was giggling and called me Brotaku. I can’t even remember what that means. I’ll figure it out eventually. I took off the old bandages since I really didn't need them anymore. Walking on all four takes time to get used too. Plus, I went to go look in the mirror to actually take a long look at myself.
“And to think I am a Pony, a unicorn pony to be exact.”
Huh, to be honest I don't look too bad, I actually look adorable.
Suddenly, the door opened and it was one of those guards that were near the infirmary door the last time I came in.
“Master Leady.” The Guard Saluted me. “An envelope was sent to you by Princess Luna”
The guard gave me the envelope. Man, why is it so hard to grab stuff like this? Wait, actually I’m more concerned about something else.
“Why couldn't Luna come?” I asked
The guard quickly answered back, “She is the princess of the night, it's morning now and she is very tired so she is resting. If that is all, I must get back to my patrol.” The guard then left and shut the door behind him.
Well he was a bit… rude. Anyway I opened the letter and a few items came out. Some coins, a star shaped necklace and a note. I read the note first. It said:
Dear Leady,
I hope you had a good nap. I figured you may need to stretch your legs so, entailed in this envelope contains a few Bits, which is the currency of this world. That necklace is special, when you put that on, it now means that you are a special guest of mine and my sister living in the castle so no one won't mess with you. If you have any questions, my sister will help you.
Sincerely, Princess of the Night
Well that was kind of her to do. I put on the necklace and carried the bits with me. These look like gold coins if had these in my world, I think I can get a Small fortune. I left the infirmary to explore my surroundings. So far as I was taking a stroll through the castle, I walked passed a white pony with blue hair who looks to be training other ponies. I took a look at what they're doing. It looks really cool with all their tactics and whatnot.
I then left the castle and explored the city known as “Canterlot”. So far, the ponies here have been very nice to me.
“This place is amazing so far. I- *Sniff * *Sniff* what is that delicious smell?”
That smell, I know that smell anywhere. It’s Strawberries. I followed that delicious smell to a small shop where a female pony was selling pastries.
“Heh heh, your nose must’ve took a whiff of my Strawberry pastries eh?” The Female Unicorn said with a wink.
I nodded at her statement, “Yep. Strawberries are my favourite!”
Wait, they are? Hey I remember something. I love strawberries.
The Unicorn’s horn glowed and lifted one of the pastries and gave a small one to me, “Here ya go honey. Try one.”
I accepted her offer and took a bite. Only one thing came to mind as I tasted it.
DELICOUSSSSS!!!
The sugar, the strawberries, flour, everything was tasty. How can something like this taste so divine?
“Wow you really like ‘em?” The female unicorn said, “I’ll give ya 5 of ‘em for just ten bits.” She said with a smile.
“Deal”
I opened the pouch I got from Luna and gave her exactly ten bits for those tasty treats.
“You may have a returning customer soon… ummm?”
“Berry Nice. Berry Nice is my name. ” She smiled.
“Leady Star” I smiled as well as I gave her a hoof shake and headed off.
I ate at least two of these when I sat near a bench. I headed back to castle with one thing on my mind. I wanna learn what Luna and berry did with their horns. In the audience hall, Celestia was doing some paperwork. She was also doing the floating thing with her horn, she quickly notices me and calls me over.
“Oh Leady, over here.” Celestia called with a smile on her face.
I headed on over there as I sat next to her. Man that is a lot of paperwork. Must be tough being a princess and all.
“W-Whoa that is a lot of work? Don’t you ever get tired of just...doing it?”
Celestia gave a giggle as she continued her work,” I’ll be honest. Yes it does get tiring, but who am I to judge. I’m a princess. I have a lot of responsibilities and what not.”
So Celestia is fine with all work? I honestly don’t think I would last three days doing this, still, there is one thing that is bothering me.
“If you are a Princess, then who is the queen?”
“That title,” She looked away for a moment “...belongs to someone else.”
She gave a slight smile after that. Judging from her reaction it seems to be a touchy subject. I better change it. I’ve been meaning to ask her this anyway.
“How do you do that telekinesis thing with your horn?”
Her horn stopped glowing and looked at me again,” Oh yes, I forgot to mention this to you.” Celestia got up and told her guards that she will be taking a little break. She then told me to follow her. We walked for a while with a little chatter here and there, but then we reached to a school.
“I guess now would be a time to talk to you about your race Leady. Since you are Unicorn, you have the ability to use magic. Magic is everything for Unicorns at a young age, after that they move on to different studies. Well some do, the others continue to study and learn even more advanced magic” Celestia Said with a smile on her face.
I looked at her a smile as well,” I’m going to guess you know one of these ‘Advanced’ unicorns?”
She nodded,” Her name is Twilight Sparkle. “
We then started to walk right in where the young students and I’m guessing due to their clothes, Teacher's started bowing and whispering. Guess some ponies wear clothes.
Celestia continued, “ She is one my prized students this school ever produced, as of right now, I gave her a task that was struggling at first, but now she seems to be grasping it. It’ll be soon until she’s ready for her final Trials to become one of us.”
“Become one of you? I’m confused at what you meant?”
Suddenly celestia put her hoof to her mouth with a shocked face, “Oops I said too much. Well keep it a secret from Twilight if you ever meet her.” She then started to laugh.
Okay now I am really confused. Meh, just forget about it.
“ Psst who’s that next to Celestia?”
I don’t know it could be a new teacher.”
“Well she looks cute.”
“No way, I think it's a guy.”
“Now that you mention it his voice sounded masculine “
“Wait maybe it’s Celestia’s boyfriend”.
“It could be. Actually maybe you're right!’
I just overhearing that Conversation and it was enough to make me and Celestia blush a little. Well, I blushed more.
“Say um Celestia, Is it possible for someone my age to learn magic?”
Celestia smiled as she opened a door “Any Unicorn can use magic, it will be a little hard for you though. Normally, when you're young, Magic power Grows as you get older, but because of what you are, I don't think you have any magic at all. So we are gonna test this out.“
As I looked at the room, in the center were some bullseye target and a few objects.
“ These are used in our entrance exams so let's see if you are capable. Here is your first test.”
Celestia put a small medium and large object on the floor, “I want you to concentrate and use your magic to lift these up. The basic instructions is to concentrate on the object, I’ll admit will be hard for someone who is not used to magic. Actually I never asked,do you have magic in your world?”
“Not that I can remember, but i shall give it a shot.”
Celestia POV
I sat down next to the objects that leady was about to lift. He closed his eyes and then started making strange faces and noises. It looked like he was constipated. For 10 minutes he was trying and nothing happened. He then screamed out in anger
“Argh, this sucks! I can’t do it.” Leady said angrily as he stomped the floor.” I need my pastries.”
“Like I said, this was going to be tough. Maybe you really don’t have ma-”
I got interrupted because I shut up when I saw leady picked up his bag. He was using magic, and so well too. The way he was using it though, was...peculiar. Instead of his horn, his hoofs were doing the magic. This made me question his existence now. Is he really human, or is his world uses magic as well?
“Leady you're doing it you’re doing magic!”
It didn't took him long to process it. As he saw his red magical aura holding the bag, he flipped out. Then he started cheering and jumping.
“I did it. I did it. I’m using magic!” Leady Smiled.
I was happy for him but I wanted to see if he can release his magic.
Okay leady, I really wasn't expecting much, but you passed one test. This next one is a little more advance which is why i wanted to see if you were capable of using magic. I want you to release your magic into a beam and shoot this target.
Leady then Gave a grin,” Sure thing, I must be some type of prodigy. This should be easy”
Okay now you are just being cocky. Leady concentrated once more. He was doing well this time but something felt...off. Leady magic started short circuiting and was going all over the place. This overwhelming power source was pushing me back when suddenly, Leady fired the beam. This attack, gave leady some Recoil. Sending him flying to the wall. As for his beam, well it hit the target and it went through the wall. This is bringing more suspicion. I rushed to Leady’s aid to see if he was okay.
“Are you okay?”
He gave a cough, and smiled, “Heh, never better. Now I really want to learn more magic.”
This human is crazy. Are all human like this? Still if he wants to learn more magic, he can always learn here, but we don't how long he will be here. I can’t teach him like I did Twilight due to being even more loaded with work. Wait that’s it, Twilight! It seems I have a little task for you.
Author's Note
Hope you like the art. I think I may keep doing that for certain Chap.
