Chapters Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter two-story start-
"OHSHITOHSHITOHSHITOHSHITOHSHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIT " I yelled as I ran through the forest, I had three... you know what I'm just gonna call them woodwolfs, they were gaining ground and there was nothing I could do to stop it. I then remembered something 'if I can use an aura then I can fly!' I thought as I tried to activate my aura. but I must slowed down because of my thought process. 'YES I knew I could think of'- I was tackled to the ground by one of the wolfs due to that thought slowing me down, as it bit down on my left shoulder. "GAH" I gasped as a little blood flew from my the wound. 'Nonononono this can't be happening I was so close to escaping!'
Just when I thought I was a goner someone appeared nocking the wolfs away with a light blue aura that formed a pink barrier, I could feel its strength it was... overwhelming... yet protective as if whatever attacked them was more inclined to defend than attack. Another one who had a white color grabbed me and took off to the sky as I fell unconscious.
It was sometime later when I woke up, I was in a... hospital? but it was different everything was off the smell was weirder then other hospitals I had been in and it felt like I was being healed quicker. Then I noticed the bright golden aura healing my shoulder. I looked to my side to see a smiling anthropomorphic pegacorn thing? I just stared in shock with my mouth agape.
"hello" It spoke with a motherly voice, "are you okay?" it asked when I just stared. I quickly shook myself out of the stare
"you... talk?" I asked,
"why yes, I do" the... woman? responded,
"what are you?" she looked shocked at the question but answered it anyway.
"i am a alicorn, the leader of Equestria" she responded. 'Hmmm'
"what's Equestria?" she was completely shocked at the but still answered again "The country were in right now, and I am the leader of it" ahuh... right... WHAT!?!?!?
"A COUNTRY?" I yelled, as I had never recalled hearing of an equest- wait equestria, a female leader that's an alicorn, is this... mlp?!?! no that can't be! it doesn't exist. after my outburst and train of thought stopped I promptly passed out. It was gonna be awhile before I woke up
Author's Note
still looking for someone to draw my character plz
I revised the chapter because just couldn't let it be under 400 words, also the grammar was bugging me ;)
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter threestory start -
It was about an hour later as I looked at the clock after waking up. I got up and was about to sneak out when I heard a voice "where are you going?" I turned around and sure enogh it was Celestia. Although I had not told her that I knew her, the main six and everything else and she didn't know me or what my kind can do, she still took care of me while I was past out? She really was a motherly ruler. I walked back to the bed and sat down "you can leave if you want to you know" she told me, I already new this but I- I want to stay. This world has a lot more to offer and I want to stay. But I new I couldn't just leave now, There probably wasn't a way back anyways.
"I know this but I want to stay here" she seemed a little surprised and even if she suppressed it I could see the relief in her eyes.
"that's, nice to hear" she smiled, that smile... it, warmed me. I started to smile as well but a memory of the past brought my mood back down to just above neutral. She seemed to notice this "what's wrong? and that reminds me, I never got your name" oh, that's right
"Im alright, and my names Goku, Goku-Son" I replied,
"well... that's an unnatural name, but it sounds nice" she said as she smiled.
'I-I've never had anything nice said about my name' I thought as I went over to sit next to her she was a good two feet over me.
"no ones said anything nice to you have they?" she said as she leaned over and hugged me. 'How did she know that!?'. I didn't know how to respond to this, no ones really hugged me. I decided to just hug her back. We sat there like that for a good while. After we talked some more and she told me to go to Ponyville with her student as I already knew was Twilight. After that I was on a train and heading to Ponyville to wait in the library till twilight arrived.
While I was waiting I got bored and decided to test out my new strength. I don't know how I got these powers but I still plan to get as powerful as possible! That's when I felt it, there was a bulged all around my waist since I got here but I guess I ignored it. I took it out and as I suspected is was a tail. "A TAIL" I yelled as I saw it perk up from my excitement. Normal people would be horrified but I knew what this meant, I was a saiyan. I tried to fire a ki blast out of my hand to make sure I had powers, big mistake. It went through the window and hit a tree. 'This is bad no one here knows about me' I thought. Just then the door started to open as my heart started pounding. 'please don't be Lyra!' I thought.
Author's Note
that's all for tonight.
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Four-Story Start-
As the door opened I hid under A desk and got ready to sprint towards the nearest window if it was Lyra.
"come on everypony were behind schedule" wait, that voice 'Its Pinkie Pie!!' I yelled in my head as I peeked out of the desk. I didn't want any of them but twilight to know about me till later but I don't think I can hide from Pinkie. So I did what I could to stay hidden and think of a way out. 'Damnit I can't think of anything'
Pinkie came in with a ton of other ponies before yelling "somepony new is in town! we need to prepare for her party!" all the ponies nodded and got to work.
'Damnit if I'm found I'll have to reveal myself to ponyville sooner then I wanted' I needed a way out. I kept thinking for a few minuets till something came to mind, 'instant transmission' that's all I could think of from thinking of the powers of the real Goku. 'If I could just focus enough' I put my index and middle fingers to my forehead and concentrated on the upstairs room from the TV show. I felt my body go light for a second before falling on my head, when I looked around I found myself in an empty bedroom 'YES!!! it worked!' I yelled in my head.
I immediately hid under the bed to wait for Twilight to get home, a smirk appeared on my face 'I might mess with her for a bit before revealing myself'. with that thought I got comfortable and waited. I waited for a long while before I heard the door open "Ug I hate this, I can't even study now."
My smirk appeared again "So, you've finally decided to show up."
She became defensive rather quickly "Who's there!"
"oh just a friend, the princess sent me to help you."
"Help?" Twilight asked "why would the princess send help"
I silently crawled from under the bed behind twilight "I don't know, but you'd better turn around"
She snapped her head back and immediately ran to the other side of the room "What are you!?" she asked with fear yet curiously as well. 'heh either way I scared her shitless'
"I can't give out that info, I haven't even told the princess that... and no, I'm not gonna tell you anything about me till I trust you" I already knew I could trust her, but I wanted to piss her off.
Her cheeks puffed out with a pout but she stopped 'awww I wanted her to be pissed with me.' I thought sadly. "fine I'll respect that, but you have to tell me sometime." she said "now, what are you here to do again?"
"oh right, I'm here to help you but I won't be coming with you to check stuff" I thought about what to say next "I'm here for a reason that you'll find out about later"
"fine, I'm going to bed... you'd better not watch me sleep!" hmm that's new, Twilights acting more like an actual girl than in the show.
"that's a weird thought and you know it" I deadpanned. I then turned around and snuck into the guest room and locked the door. 'Hmmm I'll have to show up sometime at 5:50 to catch nightmare then fly to the castle... so I'll need to learn how to fly during the day tomorrow. That'll be easy!... right?
Author's Note
yes I know there might not really be a guest room but I didn't want to go the anime style bathroom gag, that's just stupid -_-
Anyways hope you enjoyed the chapter and seeya next time!
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Five-Story Start-
Wrong. I was terribly wrong. You know that long open field that was in the background of Ponyville in the show? Yea that one, Its not as big as it seems. Its got just a big enough hill for me to train without being spotted and that's it. Plus the fact that I guess me shooting that one ball of energy was a fluke. I couldn't even make a small one in my hand now. I was getting mad and tried making a ball with my aura flaring. It worked! for about 2 seconds till it got unstable and blew of in my face. 'I guess I'll have to train from the ground up like Goku did in dragonball'.
"wait a minute, if I'm a saiyan now then I should be able to do this no problem." That's it! a Kamehameha doesn't really have to be stable. I cupped my hands and brought them behind me while crouching a little to the side. "Kaaaaa... meeeee..." a small ball of blue appeared between my hands. "Haaaaa... meeeee" it got a bigger and pushed against my hand a bit. "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA" I shot my hands forward making a claw form with them while together at the base of each palm. With that a giant wave of blue exploded from my hands and flew into a mountain blowing it up. "... shit" I said, Tia is gonna be piiiisd .
"GOKUUUU!" I heard all the way from Canterlot
"...SHIIIIIT" I started running towards town to find somewhere to hide for a it.
'Why did I even try that, I should have known something like that would happen!' I thought while hiding at zecora's. yea I had decided this was the best place since no one new about her yet. "I'm sorry if I intrude but I must ask, Who do you hide from to save your ass?" 'wait what!' that shouldn't happen! I thought they all would be too good to cuss!
"one: please stop rhyming two: since when do you guys cuss?" I really liked how creative she was when rhyming but it could get annoying.
"Oh... alright" Damnit I think I made her sad.
"hey its alright, I just can't understand rhymes vary well" I said to try to cheer her up. she thought for a moment before she began to smile warmly
"I can teach you if you wish" ... shit
The next two hours were spent learning how to rhyme in a fast manner and to avoid the word "orange" at all cost while rhyming. after that I thought Tia would be calmed down and we said our goodbyes. By the time I got back to the clearing it was midday. 'Damn' I thought, 'I'll have to practice harder and get flying.' During the next three hours I got to the point where I estimate that I could fly around fifty miles per hour. After that I sent the last two hours of the day trying to mix four martial arts from the scrolls I... borrowed, from the Royal Archive while no one was looking.
After I finally got back I slept till five and got ready to sneak to the celebration. "heh, I'm coming for you nightmare."
Author's Note
Finally time for the first fight seen. I'm gonna out a lot of effort into it.
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Seven-Story Start-
I was about half an hour later when twilight and the girls arrived. By then Nightmare had made about 4 escape attempts and a half. The last one I counted as a half because she gave up halfway through when she finally realized she couldn't escape. "ah, twilight you've arrived. You hade me worried that you gave up."
She got pissed real quick at that "I would never give up!" she yelled.
"Just hurry up and blast her with the elements so i can meet Luna"
"Who" '... shit, I shouldn't of said that'
"never mind just make her taste the rainbow"
And then rainbow dash interred the equation "that's sick dude..."
did-did she just have a dirty thought? 'Damnit get over it Goku' "I didn't mean it like that loyalty just put this on" I said as i handed her a stone.
"um, what?" I facepalmed 'I'm just making this worse'
"Twilight will you just tell them already, I know that you figured it out." I said as she looked at me in suprize
"Hes right Rainbow Dash, your the element of loyalty. You stood with us even though you didn't have to." The rock in Rainbow's hand broke apart and formed a necklace that put itself on Rainbow Dash. "Applejack, the element of honesty you were honest with me when you told me to let go and you've never told a lie." Another rock broke into a necklace that connected to AJ "Fluttershy, the way you stopped us and found the good in that manticore's heart, you are the element of kindness." Another necklace formed and floated to Fluttershy to put itself on. "Rarity, You gave up your tail to that sea monster just to make him happy, you are the element of generosity." And again a necklace attached itself to Rarity. "Pinkie Pie, the way you laughed in the face of fear, you are the element of laughter." this time, and I still don't know how, the rock busted in confetti and the necklace seemingly teleported to Pinkies neck.
"You still don't have the sixth element you cannot defeat me!" Nightmare screamed 'shes doomed' I though and smirked with anticipation to finally meet the lunar princess.
"But we do nightmare, the spark required to obtain the final element happened when I met my friends, I am Twilight Sparkle, element of magic!" she said as the elements began to power up.
After they charged up for a second, the beam of rainbow thrust up in an arch and plummeted towards Nightmare. I couldn't resist and yelled, pardon my French, "TASTE THE RAINBOW MOTHERFUCKER!!! ." and with that nightmare moon was destroyed and as the smoke cleared I walked over to help Luna before Twilight grabbed my arm "stay away from here she may still dangerous."
I smirked "no shes not" I said as I continued walking forward. I bent down next to her and shook her gently "Luna, wake up"
There was a bright flash behind me and I turned around to see Tia "I'll take it from here Goku" I smiled and stood up.
"Hello to you Tia I trust the plan worked?" I asked with vigor.
"Yes, it did, now I must speak with my sister" The girls gasped as she said this. 'Drama freaks.'
"alright then" I said as I floated off the ground "I'll be going now, but I do want to meet Luna later." with that I flew as max speed back to my training grounds as it was now daylight again. I didn't much care for the mushy stuff in the show though I did watch enough to know when I should help and when not to.
After all is said and done I'll meet Luna, she was always my favorite character. But I can wait for Tia to catch up with her, she really needed it.
Author's Note
I'm sorry for not uploading yesterday so I tried my hardest to make this longer and I'll try to up my chapter word counts as mush as possible.
A lot of you might think I've planed a little but no, every chapter is off the top of my head then I listen to music or something for a bit to clear my head then revise it adding description and detail as I go while also fixing any mistake I find. I then publish and come back an hour or so later to check the response to it and check the chapter again for mistakes if you mention any.
hope that clears up a little bit. and thanks for the support! :D
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Eight-Story Start-
It has been about a week since Luna's return and nightmare night was tomorrow. I was getting ready to leave the library and out of town to let the story play out itself. Buuuut Twilight had other ideas as I was grabbed by a magenta flame "your not going anywhere till you answer my question." 'Ug I already gave an excuse.'
"I've already told you: It was just a lucky guess that the rocks were the elements." I said with anger as she had asked me about it way too much.
"And I said that can't be it, your hiding something." Damnit could it get any worse. '... Shit I just had to think that.'
All of a sudden AJ walked in "Shes right there's no way ya just knew the rocks were the elements." and with that I gave up with talking it out and used force
"Humph" my energy busted out pushing away AJ and breaking Twilights grip. "Listen to me when I say this: I am not your friends I am your protector and I am not going to answer any of your questions because I don't want to reveal my power and knowledge got it!" They nodded "good now I am leaving, I will be back when I'm needed." Once I said that I flew out the door and towards the mountains in the distance. 'Time for some real training!'
It had been 2 weeks of rigorus training with little rest. I wouldn't of rested at all If I had somthing to heal myself with. 'what I wouldn't give for a bag of senzu beams.' As I kept training it was near the middle of my third week I felt a powerful force aproaching. 'Damnit, I havn't reached super saiyan 2 yet' I knew I would need it for this if it turned into of a fight. It was getting closer, then all of a sudden I could feal the power infront of me but... nobody came . There was no one there, thats impossible!
But then I heard a voice "hello" '... WHAT. THE. FUCK .' "helloooo?"
"Whos there! Quit hiding!" I yelled as i loked in every direction. Theres no wa- ... SHIT! "*sigh* your invissable arn't you."
I heard a little chuckel before I felt a push to my forhead with little resistance. When I got up, I admit this without shame, I may off screamed when I saw me laying on the ground. "Oh quit screamin like a girl and come with me." I stopped and looked over at the voice. '...' standing in front of me, was the most shocking thing I've ran into so far. There was a stalian with black fur and a red mane and tail in front of me. The most shocking thing though, he was wearing a shimigame robe.
"You could of just told me you were a shimigami you know." I deadpanned. He looked shock for a moment before making a gusture towords a old japonese style sliding door and walked through. I asumed he wanted to be followed so I walked in as well. One thing I knew about this, I might see ichigo and that made it worth getting humiliated by a thousand year old dead pearson.
Author's Note
Yes, I made an Undertale reference. Whacha gonna do 'bout it.
Other then that,YAY I'm finally introducing the Bleach relevance. And sorry if there are a few mistakes, my computer is bugging out a little but I'll have it fixed by tomorrow.
Also you will learn when he transformed into a ssj later, I will say this: It was during his training
Plus(and this will be explained later) SPOILER ALERT --> he's not just a saiyan
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Nine-Story Start-
When I walked through with that pony I immediately recoiled in shock, There was almost every race here! I saw all kinds of ponies of both genders along with griffins, cats, dragons, and even a dog 'Wait... isn't that one of the captains? damn I can't remember his name!' I saw The pony I was with start walking towards what I think I remember to be the council building. On the way there I was shocked to see humans too 'huh, I might be able to see home sometime but I'm still staying here after.' The I realized something 'shitshitshitshit, I really don't want to talk to the old man himself! The pony leading me finally started to talk to me "I can tell your nervous, don't worry so much I'm sure you'll be fine" he frowned "but Ichigo is also here." '... so, he's here too. Well I'm fucked aren't I?'
"I hope hes not, hes too hot headed and might provoke me in which I would not hesitate too attack" I said. He looked shocked a lot more when I said that
he stopped walking and drew his sword "how do you know him" he asked with a stern face.
I just laughed "I'll explain it at the meeting, now I believe were late?" his face grew fearful and he quickly sheathed his sword and rushed in the doors with me in tow. As we made our way through the corridor we came up to a huge door that I assumed was the meeting room. As the door open I thought to myself 'hope Ichigo doesn't over react'
"Hello kid" It was Ichigo 'Damnit Ichigo.' I thought as I tried to ignore him. I guess he wanted to test me because I felt his fist inter my area. I turned and caught his punch "wow, you caught it, I'm impressed" I just gave him a scowl and started squeezing. "OW OW OW, OK IM DONE!" he said as I let go and he held hi hand in pain.
"next time don't attack your guest" I said coldly before turning to the old man himself "If that's how you great people no wonder I don't like you" I said. Ichigo just growled "aw shudup I'm kidding Ichigo." He looked shocked and was about to say something but I forced my hand over his mouth "just stay quiet for a minuet, I need to talk to the old man himself first." Everyone gasped at that and I could see a women about to start yelling but oldy stopped her "Now then, Why am I here and before you say anything I know about the shimigami and everything you guys do also I'm not joining you and if you attack I'll kill you all" I said as My aura burst out surprising everyone. The old man looked at me strangly before whispering something to the captain next to him.
The captain drew his sword as he walked to the middle of the room across from me "I will be your opponent" '... Damnit I didn't want to do this."
"I'm giving you one and only one chance to back down. I'm not in the mood to play nice right now as you interrupted my training." He just charged anyways. "*sigh* I guess I'll have to knock you out" I put two fingers to my head and teleported behind him before giving a sharp chap to his neck. He fell to the ground unconscious as all the other captains looked on in shock. except for one as he looked excited and walked out drawing his sword as well. I just did the same thing again nocking him out too though I had to do two teleports. Once in front of him before punching him in the stomach making him bend over. The next above him two chop his neck. "That's in I'm leaving" I said as I turned around. But standing there was Ichigo. "Aw come on I don't want to fight you too"
"too bad" he said with a glare before he charged. I just stood there waiting as he got closer. I looked as his blade to realize something. His blade was still in its first form "has he not awakened it yet?' Once he got closed enough he want for a vertical slash but I caught it. I then kicked him making him fly away but I held onto the sword.
I focused for a bit before I spoke to the blade in a whisper so no one else could hear. "Zangetsu" It responded to me and transformed into its true blade. Everyone in the room gasped as some of them muttered that this was impossible. Ichigo got up and looked at me in shock as wall "... It seems I have awoken your blade Ichigo" I said to him "Next time we meet you better know his name." I said before tossing the blade back to him. In the air it went back to its dormant form. 'I can't believe he responded to me' I thought as I walked to the door "I'm leaving and no I'm not gonna stay to answer your questions old man, figure it out yourself." I said as I put my fingers to my forhead and teleported to the spot outside where that door was. I was glad it was still there and walked through. When I stepped back into the living world I closed the door behind me.
"heh, I think I just pissed off a lot of people" I said to my self. 'Still why was Ichigo there with them and why hasn't he discovered Zangetsu's name yet.' I just brushed that thought to the side and decided continue training "I'll find out later."
-Story Stop-
Author's Note
Yay I think this is my longest chapter so far!
Also If you wondering about the whole bleach thing with Ichigo you'll find out soon enough >:)
Seeya next time!
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Ten-Story Start-
It was about two days after the soul society incident and I noticed I was running low on food. I thought about going to Canterlot for food but quickly decided against the stuck up city for ponyville. As I got ready I noticed a shadow moving around in the bushes and quiet crying. The cry sounded familiar, as if I had heard it a long time ago. No that couldn't be him... could it? I decided to check the bushes and instantly recoiled at the sight before me. laying in the middle of the bush was a baby with what looked like drawn on whiskers and a swirl on his stomach. I just sat there for a moment as I stayed as calm as possible. It was a little bit after my very smooth and not worried babbling that I fed him and decided to take him with me. I tied him to my back as tight as possible without hurting him and took off towards ponyville.
I was about halfway there when I realized something. This wasn't just any kid left out in the woods, I recognized him from when I was nine. It was the first anime that my dad introduced me to, it was... Naruto. I had the main character of Naruto, which was named Naruto, on my back, in equestria, with no other ninjas around... HOW THE FUCK DID HE GET HERE!! . No stay calm, so I have a baby Naruto, the soul society exists, and I have dbz powers somehow... "whats next, me using chak-" I said out loud.
Noooooo, nononono I couldn't use bleach powers during my trip to the soul society so how could I use chakra? Well, maybe I could but didn't really try seeing as I woke up Zangetsu without my own sword. Hmmm so I could use chakra, I'll have to look into that but first, food.
It had been a couple minuets before I got to the town. I guess the ride was comfy because Naruto was sleeping peacefully. As I walked into town I noticed the surprised looks I was getting "stop starring" I said loud enough for most of them to hear. They immediately went back to there own business and I kept on walking the giant gingerbread house. Speaking of which, who would even make something like th- oh wait I'm in a TV show... whatever. I strode in to the store and proceded to buy half there stock with bits I *ahem* borrowed as I walked through the town, assassin's creed style. no one questioned it and I was walking towards the town exit in a matter of minuets, until I heard something
"MINEMINEMINEMINEMINE!" I dodged out of the way as a purple blur rushed by me. It hit a wall and crumpled to the floor. Recognizing it as Twilight I immediately powered up and took to the sky rushing pass rainbow who was snickering at twilight's fail as I flew as fast as possible to his training spot.
Out of all that happened today the weirdest thing is when I got back. I went to untie the kid from my back, he looked like he was 2 years old already. I just stood there looking at the kid then he grew a couple inches in an instant to look like a 4 year old. The something I didn't expect happened, he said his first two words.
"Papa, ramen" he said then smiled at the instant ramen in one of the bags I got from the market.
...fuck, hes actually cute to me... that could be a problem.
Author's Note
Sorry I've been gone awhile but my updates gonna take a bit from now on. Mostly because of school, but also because I didn't know where to go from that last point. theres also going to be a time skip, a short one, but still a skip. Mostly to grow up Naruto, but it will also be explained in the next chapter. That's all I have to say.
Seeya Later. :)
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Eleven-Story Start-
-Two months later-
I've been doing most of the work since I got here, but now some of the load is carried by Naruto. I was initially going to name him after his father but decided against it for obvious reasons. We had been going into town every two weeks for supplies and I had gotten to know Fluttershy while Naruto got close with all of the main six plus extra. I didn't really mind since he doesn't know about my past and can't say anything about it. Most of the time I would have tea with Fluttershy while Naruto hung out with Spike and the rest of the main 6 minus Twilight. all Twilight really did was watch me and Fluttershy talk when she thought I couldn't see her. Unfortunately for her I never said a word about Naruto or my own power or our pasts and Fluttershy was very kind and wouldn't ask since she knew I wouldn't answer.
This was our last trip before he broke free and I wanted to know if anyone noticed yet as I could feel his power getting close to breaking the spell. Of course, as I thought, they did not feel the power and thus didn't have a care in the world right now. It was later than usual as I strolled up to Fluttershy's door, I had to get extra things for Naruto as his apatite was getting bigger. I went to knock on the door I hear voices inside, I recognized the as Twilight's and Fluttershy herself.
"I know your scared of going through with this but we need to find out," I heard Twilight's voice say.
"B-but I know he w-wont answer," she said "he doesn't want anyone to know about him, I still don't know why he opened up to me" she added shyly.
"*sigh* I know you don't want to but the princess wants them found and we can't get Naruto to say anything no matter how hard we try," Twilight said. Is that why they hang out with him, just to find our base! That's it, I'm cutting them off from Naruto... except for spike.
I calmly knocked on the door and heard an 'eep' from inside, there was a pop that I assumed was Twilight teleporting away. The door opened to a semi-smiling Fluttershy, I could see the fear in her eyes about asking me what they discussed.
"H-hello Goku, your here early," she stammered as she let me inside.
"No, I'm late for our tea and I apologize for that. I could see her fear rise at her mistake "Fluttershy" I said in a stern tone. She looked up immediately in surprise and fear "I overheard your conversation with twilight" her fear skyrocketed.
"p-p-please, I-I'm so sorry, I didn't mean to, for-" I put my hand over her mouth.
"Stop, there's no need to apologize to me I know it wasn't your idea" I said. She calmed down and I removed my hand "but I'm removing Naruto from contact with the others" she looked down in sadness. "Hey" I lifted her head up to me "don't worry you and spike are still allowed" she perked up and went to speak but I held my hand up "but, tell twilight that if she tells spike to start asking question I'll remove spike too ad only you will be allowed to see him."
"Ok, I'll make sure she hears this and don't worry about spike he would never dream of losing there friendship." she said with a smile
My face fell a bit "that's not what I'm afraid of, I'm afraid Twilight will force him to and you know he will do it for her."
Her face fell as well "I know and I'll try to stop that from happening as best I can"
I smiled at her and turned to leave "I know I can trust you Shy" I said as I opened the door "take care and see you next time."his power again, It was close I could sense it growing still.
Author's Note
YES!!! an update hope you all enjoy and another update is coming soon after this.
Seeya Next Time! :)
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Twelve(small edit)
Chapter Twelve-Story Start-
"DAMNIT" I yelled as I flew at max speed towards ponyville "how did I not feel his escape!" It was the next day and I had woke up and immediately tried contacting Fluttershy, She didn't answer and I knew she had to be in trouble. I turned super Saiyan And went as fast as possible speeding to ponyville in an attempt to help them. I knew he was there because I could feel his energy, it... it was overwhelming. I didn't think I could beat him, But I will still hold him off. He is not touching her damnit!
I finally made it to town only to see everything in complete chaos. But worst of it all was I saw that twilight was loosing her color as the other walked away in complete grey. I knew I couldn't help Twilight so I went for Fluttershy instead. I followed her to her house and through open the door to see her standing there looking at me. Her face was contorted into a frown she soon started to make fun of me, I paid no mind as I walked over to her. "Sorry about this" I said, I knew for a fact that this would snap her out of it even if she hated me for it afterwards. I grabbed her, pulled her towards me and kissed her. I found it was kind of warm and had a butter taste to it, go figure. I kinda... liked it, not that I would ever admit that. I soon felt her push into me and kiss me back my eyes opened in shock to see her color back while she still pushed more into it. She finally moved back and immediately started to apologize.
"I-I'm so s-so-" I cut her off when I pushed back into her lips, this shocked her but she got the idea and kissed back. I finally let her go after a while.
"go help the others I'll hold off him " I said, I then had a thought "go for twilight first, just make her read the scrolls and do a friendship whatever." Before she had time to say anything I flew out the door as I felt his power appear in the town square. When I finally got there he seemed surprised then started laughing like a maniac "Discord, shut the hell up." That stopped real quick and he seemed to be mildly mad now.
"Care to make me Mr. MonkeyTail" he said with venom.
... "THATS IT YOUR DEAD" I yelled and rushed him, I never did power down from Super Saiyan. I started punching and kicking from every direction, he was very surprised at this and wasn't ready. I kicked him into the air and landed five powerful punches and kicked him to the ground outside ponyville. I put my hands out towards where he fell and charged up. "Your going straight to hell" I said and started rapid firing my ki blasts. Soon all you could see was a ball of white light and I charged up a large ki blast and through it at the explosion. The explosion from it turned the white light into blue and grew two times bigger, when it finally died down he rose from the earth with large wounds all over his body. My smirk disappeared when he snapped his claw and the wounds faded away. He must just be hiding the wounds to make me think I'm too weak, I might not even need help.
-One Second Later-
OH GOD I NEED HELP! his power increased dramatically before he finally floated off the ground and stopped at my height. His power was about a half times my power and he problebly has more then that.
"That all you got, really?" he said as I just stared in shock "oh well time to put down the hurt" he then charged at me. ... I wasn't ready, I didn't even see him as I was slammed through multiple buildings then hit back to the square and kicked upwards the punched back down and hit another direction. I was rag dolled everywhere around the town before I has hit back to the square. I looked up to see him, walking? on his hands towards me and I couldn't fight anymore. suddenly a voice cried out, I recognized it as Fluttershy's.
"STOP IT RIGHT NOW!!!" ... holy shit she can yell pretty loud for a shy pers-pony. discord recoiled at the volume and looked in shock at the main six. They all had their color back and the elements with them, somehow they cad a rainbow behind them too. "Oh um, sorry" she said afterwards, heh still Fluttershy. Discord was still in shock as he stood back on his feet.
"h-how did you get back in order" he asked in disbelief, his face then went back to a cocky grin. "No matter, I'll just take them back" he snapped his claw and the elements were in his hands. I tried to get up but I only made it to a knee. He snapped again and Fluttershy was in front of him.
My eyes widened as he lifted his hand up "your the one who fixed this, I know it and I won't stand for it!" he hit her across the face sending her into a wall nearby.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9G-ssRmWPvE&list=LL1EUYkRjPTv3Won-xFCeTbA&index=8
"no" I whispered. I had just stood there and let someone get hurt, no not someone... Fluttershy. My anger started to cloud my mind "NO!" I will not let anyone get hurt ever again, especially Fluttershy! My hair started to spike up more and my muscles grew. My chest puffed out while the ground beneath me cracked. "I WILL MAKE YOU PAY!!!" I was not in control of my body anymore and I watched helplessly while my power increased a hundred fold. The ground started to cave in while larger chunks of rock floated upwards. I let out a scream of rage as my hair turned bright red while the whites of my eyes went completely black and only red irises remained. My body stood there growling at Discord while the other five elements cowered in fear of my new appearance. My body didn't give anyone any chance to talk before it practically teleported towards Discord. ... I had no control.
Author's Note
Finally to discord, I gotta say I'm I got this out along with an 800w chapter before it.
Seeya Next Time! :)
Equestria's greatest warior
Author's Note
I might not be able to write for a while, my computer said "fuck you" and wont load anything on the web. I'm on my phone and even writing this sucks ass. I'll try to fix my computer soon and get some chapters out.
power level sheet
Power Levels
Goku
Discord
Naruto: 70,000
main six
Applejack: 9,500
Rainbowdash: 9,500
Rarity:7,000
Fluttershy
Pinkie: ???
(elements)
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Fourteen: The Final Battle
Author's Note
YAY! I'm back!!!
Chapter Fourteen: The Final Battle
Chapter Fourteen
-Story Start-
Recap
"go help the others I'll hold off him "
"Care to make me Mr. MonkeyTail" he said with venom.
"STOP IT RIGHT NOW!!!"
I know it and I won't stand for it!" he hit Fluttershy across the face sending her into a wall nearby.
"I WILL MAKE YOU PAY!!!"
Present
My body practically teleported behind him before my right fist was burrowed deep into his back. He coughed up a considerable amount of blood as his body bent backwards around my fist, until my body kicked him up into the air. My body followed up by quickly catching up and spin kicked him to the left at insane speeds then started using instant transmission. With the help of that technique my body hit him back and forth in all different directions, while I just watched from the inside.
I still couldn't believe it, my body is acting on its own in blind rage and I'm unable to do anything but watch as Discord gets beat to a bloody pulp(not that I'm complaining). While the elements watched from way far back, Rainbow holding Fluttershy's head up a bit while Twilight preformed various healing spells. I looked back to the fight to see that is had stopped.
This is what suprized me the most, "Hmph, is this all you got you bastard." My body spoke... it spoke without me telling it to, "Where is all that power you had before huh? The power you used to strike Fluttershy!?." My body yelled out in anger. So, my body is still acting as I would... but on a smaller scale.
"You haven't won, whatever this power is and whatever you really are you are nothing to me!" Discord said with a scowl across his face. He then began to power up, he brought his arms out to the side as his power increased. Soon he was around two-thirds the amount of my power. But that seemed to be his max.
"You are still weak." All of a sudden Discard was buried in the ground below with my body above where he was. There was no expression on... you know what? his name is Bob now since he has a personality. Anyways Bob looked down at where he had kicked Discord with no expression on his face. As soon as Discord went to stand up he was already being held by the neck being pushed into a building wall. Apparently bob had a humorous side and also knew everything I knew including things from earth, and he used one of my favorite Youtube channels.
"Ima plant me a dumbass tree!" with that sentence Discord was slammed into the ground and pushed as far down as Bob could get him. As such Discord was put through rock,iron,gold,silver,all kinds of gems and lava before he broke his descent.
Bob decided to just wait for him to come back up and got ready for a kick. When discord finally recovered and started to float upward his thoughts were shattered, because as soon as he broke the surface he was kicked into the air again. With that he was stuck in Bob's instant transmission attacks back and fourth, side to side, up and down and left to right. Eventually Discord was kicked into the ground again causing a large crater, andBob floated down landing in front of him.
"I'm not finished with you yet" a smile appeared an Bob's face. "I'm gonna enjoy ripping you to pieces! " Bob's smile widened at the shock and fear that appeared on Discords face. "I can already see your horns above my fireplace" That finally broke him.
"P-p-please d-don'y hurt m-me! I-I'll do a-anything" heh, seems like hes never been threatened with actual de- ohhhhh. He's probably only ever been threatened with getting stoned by the elements. Never the less my body kept walking towards him.
"G-Goku?" That stopped Bob in his tracks, more by my doing this his. I forced Bob to turn us around by sheer willpower. There, only about 5 feet away, was Fluttershy. She had a look of caring look in her eyes, but I could still see the fear in them too and that's what really hurt me. She stepped forward "Is that really you Goku?" she asked. No, I didn't want her to see this, at least not in this state.
"Fl-Fluttershy" I managed to get out, I wouldn't let her think I was an animal. I started to push against the flow of this power as hard as I could. I can't lose her, not because of this. The red started to retract from my hair leaving the gold of it behind, along with my power decreasing a bit. The blacks of my eyes turned white again as my regular iris and pupils returned, the red of my hair had retracted three-fourths of the way. My muscles decreased a bit along with some of my power, my hair finally retracted all the way. I was back to normal and I couldn't feel Bob's power anymore either. When I felt it was all gone, I looked up at Fluttershy. She had gotten closer the caring look in her eyes had grown and overpower the fear. At that confirmation, I collapsed out of exhaustion.
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Fifteen - sneakpeek
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Chapter Fifteen: Finale(edit)
Chapter Fifteen: finale-Story Start- is there nothing to remember? Was all really just a long ass dream? NO, what I formed with Flutter was real... or was it?
As I drifted in the darkness questioning myself I didn't see the light I was heading towards till I heard voices. I looked up at the light, I could hear multiple voices. They all sounded panicked, but one in particular sounded as if it was sobbing in complete despair. Wait, I recognize that voice... but, I still can't remember who it is. As it got closer my head started to hurt. The closer I got the more the pain increased, pretty soon all I could feel was the pain. It felt as if someone decided to use my head as a golf ball, then a basketball,football, and a soccer ball till they finally ended it by skullfucking my brain to oblivion. ... Maybe that metaphor was too graphic at the end.
"Shut the fuck up, before I rip your heads off" I said as I held my head. all of a sudden the voices stopped, I realized I was in control my body again. I tried getting up but the pain in my body forced me down with a yelp. I decided that was a complete no go, instead I tried my eyes. The moment I opened my eyes I felt them burn. With that I closed them, totally not while screaming bloody murder. I didn't wait long to try again for fear of them going back to being used to the dark. I was able to open them, though it was slow going, I finaly got them open only to be looking straight at eight faces completely covered in tears. At that moment I remembered all the pain I felt... And all the pain I dealt back in that blind rage. I was instantly ashamed of myself, how could I try to kill someone that begged for mercy just like that? In Front of all those innocent ponies... in front of Fluttershy. I was a monster.
But then, why were they all still near me? Why were they crying, why weren't they afraid of me? I should be in the lowest part of the dungeon, hell I should be locked up with Tirek. Then, all at once, those thoughts were gone as I felt someone literally fall on me into a hug. I looked down to see that Fluttershy was now laying on top of me crying into my chest... what do I do? I've never been in this situation before, I mean, there was no person in my life that relied on me.
"I-I'm so g-glad y-your alive!" she said with her face still buried into my chest. What does she mean? I shouldn't be the one they are worried about.All of a sudden she looked up at me with a face full of tears "I-I t-thought I h-had lost you" I don't get it, why isn't she afraid of me!
... the pain has gone away, time for the animal to go where he belongs. In an instant my fingers were on my forehead and I had already locked on to the most powerful energy in the forest. Which was really hard considering the power was one-sixth my power when I wasn't even halfway to being a super saiyan. Everyones (or who was looking at the time) eyes widened at what I was doing
"WA-" before twilight could finish fluttershy was now standing next to Rainbow and I was in the middle of the Everfree. I figured as much when it was a manticore I had teleported next to, easily dispatched. Then I remembered something, I had my phone on me when I got here... so Tia must of kept it from me. Time to go get it back, I lifted my fingers to my forehead again and sighed happily when I found she was alone. I was in front of her in an instant, she was in the hallway of Canterlot Castle. She noticed my immediately and went to speak by I silenced her with my hand.
"I'm going to ask two question, you are going to answer them truthfully and without question or I will tear this place down to find what I want, Got it?" she nodded "First, did you find a rectangular object with a flat glass screen in the pocket of my pants when I got here?" her eyes widened but she sighed into my hand and nodded "good answer" I said in monotone "Second" I decided to sound more threatening to make her give in faster. I removed my hand from her mouth and continued "Where is it?" She noticeably flinched at my voice but gave in.
"Alright-" she gestured to the way she came "- its in testing lab three on ground floor 5." she said in a sad voice
"It better be in one piece when I get it" with that I flew at high speeds to the lab. There sitting on a platform about to get disassembled, was my phone. Before they even saw my I had grabbed my phone and flew out of the lab and towards the exit. Seconds later I was two minuets away from the Everfree because I didn't want to deal with another manticore.
Once I was back at where I had teleported to I decided to take a page from Dragon Block C (mod for minecraft) and use a large but overall week blast to make a hole in the ground. Once that was done i went down and used a blast a little stronger and a little bigger then me to make a giant room. I then went and killed a few manticores for their fur and meat, being careful not to hurt fluttershy's special manticore friend. I then chopped down about 6 trees and used it to make two crude chairs, a coach, and a bed(after going into to town and 'borrowing' a mattress). I then used the manticore fur (that I had washed off in a nearby river) as a sheet and two blankets. I used some more wood to make a fire and dried all the manticore meat except for two moderately sized slices. After cooking it, extra crispy, and stuffing my face I sat down for a bit.
With all that done I now had nothing to keep me from my thoughts which consisted of: me being a monster, all ponies besides the main six hating me, and the fact that there is internet somehow after checking my phone. Oh well, anyways I decided to go out into the forest to go check out the clearing I arrived in and see if I brought anything else (if anything even worked from being out here).
As Goku walked out into the forest a shadow loomed over the entire planet of Equis. A darkness that will begin to swallow this world, unless Goku can stop it, the end will come.
Author's Note
Time for the end of this all, or is it?
EDIT: this is now the final chapter as I thought this would work better for season two(If I create one) as it leaves us with an enemy, an emotional conflict, and a chance to do a time skip if I decide on it.
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter one: Arrival
It was just another boring ass day and Goku was walking down the street. He had gotten tired of the boring life at home.
But as soon as I touched it an extreme pain raked through my body. I couldn't move at all but I saw a shadow of a person walk up as it said "yes, he will do nicely" then it all went black. 'huh I think I just got kidnaped... FFFFUUUUUUUU'
After that I woke of in a clearing of a forest. I got angry pretty quick as I thought I had just been kidnaped. it was awhile of cursing at the world before I noticed something worrying... yet cool at the same time. I seemed to have an aura around me and it was flaring wildly. As I tried to examine it the aura disappeared. "That. was. AWSOME. I gotta do that again" I said, I began to think about past... events, to fuel my anger. Bursting outward a black aura with red outlining appeared.
"Ooook that's weird" I said, this wasn't a normal aura, it couldn't be an evil one... could it? NO im not a bad person, I'll never be a evil. I turned off the aura and looked around once more, then I realized something. I looked down, no im not wearing Goku's Training Gi Im still in my normal day cloths, black shirt and pants with a red jacket(unzipped) and red shoes with black lining. I felt my hair, not spiked still fuzzily layed down covering my left eye and looking slightly like bedhead, as always. Good Im not the real Goku that's a relief. "well better get going gotta find my way back" with that Goku walked out into the forest.
Author's Note
hello there! leave a comment if you would like to know more, also Im looking or someone to draw my character if you'd like to help message me please. well with that im going to right the next two chapters if I can and post them, yep you heard me, theres going to be tones of updates these two weeks as im on break from school. YAY! seeya later!
Equestria's greatest warior
Chapter Six-Story Start-
Alright its finally time, I had sneaked out and got ready near the celebration. I was more than ready for this, no I was ready for anything. They were getting ready to start as I charged up my power to a point just below aura activation so that Nightmare wouldn't sense me. '3' the curtains were pulled apart revealing nothing. '2' rarity ran out of the room and announced that Tia was gone. '1' they noticed the black fog that finally formed into nightmare. 'GO!' I jumped out activating my aura and punching nightmare in the face. She was launched towards the castle as I flew after her. 'My plan is working' I thought as I pushed her to the castle.
After I got her into the room that she was confronted in on the show I stopped. "What are thou doing? why have thou stopped?" She questioned me as I stood there with my guard up.
"I shall force you to wait here for the elements!" I said with venom. She looked appalled as she thought about something.
"what makes you think I'll not just destroy them" she asked with a smirk
"because" I said "That's impossible to do, you can destroy them physically but they will just reform when someone calls for them. You can't do anything to stop them, The bearers are coming and they will awaken all six elements and free princess Luna from you. You cannot do anything to stop it." I smirked with anticipation "because you can't get pass ME!"
"Hahahah" she started laughing hysterically "You still think your stronger than me? FOOL! no one is as strong as I am now."
"humph" I powered up to the maximum. She was pushed back and hit the wall from the pure pressure I was exerting.
"Wha-what is this power !? This shouldn't be possible!" she started to power up as well but she just wasn't at my level.
Flashback
I was halfway through my physical training session for the last 3 hours when I realized something. If I was a saiyan, then I get a zenkai boost every time I get injured enough. I ran back to twilight's tree, I refuse to call it a house, and asked her to heal me since I was pretty banged up from training. Once I was healed I could feel the boost in power and after I finished my traing she healed me again. after I abused the hell out of the boost I went to bed and slept.
-present-
"Now then we shall be waiting here for the bearers to arrive, is that clear?" she nodded and I went towards the door a little ways while I watched her try to form a plan of escape.
