
Crime in Canterlot high Ver. 2.0
When pony Sunset Shimmer gone trough the mirror to CHS, what did happen to the EQG universe Sunset Shimmer?
Sunset Shimmer is suddenly suspect of murdering, herself… ¿Or not?Story made just for improving my English, expect some inconsistencies here and there.
My English starts looking good, so I'l just try to make the best story from first episode premise (it would be fun to keep some sense on it, even if I fail, it would be such a good fun (also it can feature OOC moments for sake of fun
Warning ch3 includes some goreish description, but not much to even justify the gore mark, if you can stand CSI you would be fine the teen label stays because there's some swearing here and there.
Oh, also, edited by: Randome284, lots of thanks.
Expect quantum levels of improvement soon. Finally, It's ALIVE!! it's ALIVE!!
15248 words: Estimated about 1 hour to read
12 Chapters:
- 2. "Joyride" 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC256
- 3. "Morgue in Morgue St" 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC349
- 4. 5140 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC505
- 5. Need no help with the "pigs" 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC352
- 6. Teen love Hot love. 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC552
- 7, Barbara 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC633
- 8. Twily 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC704
- 9. where stuff happens and a pissed hen ends in space. 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC494
- 10. Two... Light 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2710
- 11 "The Big Blank Theory" 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC3110
- 12. Aftershocks 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2753
- 13. end of first Book 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC2830