Crime in Canterlot high Ver. 2.0

by parker_izing Pegasus

First published

Sunset Shimmer is suddenly suspect of murdering, herself… ¿Or not?

Story made just for improving my English, expect some inconsistencies here and there.

My English starts looking good, so I'l just try to make the best story from first episode premise (it would be fun to keep some sense on it, even if I fail, it would be such a good fun (also it can feature OOC moments for sake of fun

Warning ch3 includes some goreish description, but not much to even justify the gore mark, if you can stand CSI you would be fine the teen label stays because there's some swearing here and there.

Oh, also, edited by: Randome284, lots of thanks.
Expect quantum levels of improvement soon. Finally, It's ALIVE!! it's ALIVE!!