no spoilers it involves sweetie's fate with how it affects the CMC/no spoilers granted this is too short a description so| sweetie finds she has only scratched the surface of her destiny but what price did she pay for it she's not the same any more she can do things that other unicorns might say were unnatural and that's the least of her worries.
can she come out to her sister about taking lessons with discord of all creatures and what trouble will keeping everything secret bring; her friends already found out now she has to make sure they give her tie to tell them on her own or just make sure they don't spill the beans

The story has grammar problems, past and present tense, and having the characters be in character is really difficult. i plan on revamping this story in the future so mind the grammar and don't let my spelling hit you on the way out

update it got to long so it continues in CMC the balefire prophecies

i would like to have more than three tags so the invisible drama tag is for rarity who else.
scene changes need some work and I'm working on changing it to where its written in play script format where each chapter instead becomes an act and each horizontal line becomes a scene