A Nightmare-ish World Part Two

by Sweetutahcrimson

Chapter 1

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Darkness swooped across the sky. Ponies looked up at the full moon. A shadow came over the entire town. Ponies ignored the shadow and continued what they were doing. A group of pure white alicorns floated over the city. A pony walked down the street towards the alicorns. Two stallions stepped out from an ally. They started walking behind the mare. The mare in the front had a fedora sitting on her head. She had a pink mane with blue streaks down the sides. Her coat was a bright pink. She had a black dress  on. One of the stallions behind her had a green coat. He also had a gray mane. The other stallion had dark red coat. His mane was a lighter red.

The white alicorn in the front of the army swooped down and landed in front of her. The pink and blue mare smiled. The white alicorn frowned, but then sat down. The mare sat down and motioned for the stallions to sit, too. The four ponies talked for a little.

The alicorn spoke up. "Did you bring the plans?"

The pink mare nodded and replied, "It's all done."

"Good," The alicorn said.

The pink mare turned to the red stallion. He gave her a black case. She took off her fedora and placed the case in front of the alicorn. The mare opened the case and took out a scroll. It was slightly wrinkled. She hoofed it over to the white alicorn. The alicorn scanned over it. She used her magic and gave it to one of the other alicorns.

"This will do," The alicorn said.

The mare nodded and stated, "I'm glad you think it's a good plan. The king will be happy."

The white alicorn narrowed her eyes. "You will not trick us like last time."

"Pinkie Pie swears."


I squinted as darkness washed over my sight. I could make out my bedroom in the darkness. My purple bed. The bright yellow door. There was one thing that seemed different though. Before I could figure out what it was three ponies walked in. The pony in the front was pink and blue and wore a black dress. The stallion to her right had a red coat and mane. The other stallion had a green coat.

"Graze Plate," the mare said,"did you get away without anypony following you?"

The green stallion sighed and said, "Of course Pinkie Pie."

The red stallion sat down on my bed. "What're we doing here?"

"Golden Eyes needs us to get to the snow dimension," Pinkie Pie said.

"The snow dimension?" Graze Plate asked.

The red stallion got off my bed and gasped, "There? B-but that's where the Snow King lives!"

I watched them talk for a few minutes. They never noticed me. I walked over to pink pony. I couldn't believe they called her 'Pinkie Pie'. I waved a hoof in her face. Pinkie Pie didn't even blink. Pinkie Pie took out another one of those pink cubes. She threw it at a wall in my room. It bounced off and created a white portal.

Pinkie Pie glared at the stallions behind her and said, "Let's go. And don't mess around."

They stepped through the portal. I tried to follow them, but I couldn't move. I tried to use my magic to move myself. Nothing happened. The portal closed and I saw a bright light come in to the room. I squinted as the light got brighter and covered my line of sight. When the light faded, I saw the three ponies jump out of a white portal. I glanced around. I couldn't see anything through the snow. Pinkie Pie walked right by me. I followed the group down a tunnel of rocks. The three ponies disappeared in to darkness. I galloped after them. As I walked out of the tunnel, I saw a castle made of clouds floating above me. The three ponies were walking up a bridge made of ice. The red stallion slipped and almost fell off the side. I flew up towards the castle. I landed on a street made of water vapor. White alicorns walked around me. One of the alicorns walked straight through me.

Pinkie Pie and the stallions walked past me. They whispered to each other. I couldn't make out what they were saying. I trotted behind them, admiring the city.


I gasped as Golden Eyes marched towards me. He didn't speak. He towered over me. His eyes glowed golden. He gritted his teeth. The light started to flicker. When his eyes stopped flickering, he lunged at me. Just before he could tackle me Pinkie Pie high kicked him in the face. I stumbled back, surprised. Pinkie Pie motioned with her hoof for him to attack. Two more stallions walked in. One started to sing and the other pushed a juke box through the door.

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Golden Eyes dove for Pinkie Pie. She did a flip backwards and pushed off Golden Eye's face. She got launched into the air. She stuck a landing behind Golden Eyes. He turned around and growled. I stood there stupidly. Pinkie Pie grabbed Golden Eye's hoof and flipped him over her. The door burst open. Princess Celestia and Luna stood there. They both wore brown detective coats and fedoras. Celestia wore sunglasses where you couldn't see her eyes. Luna wore moon shaped glasses. Princess Celestia stepped forward. She lifted Golden Eyes into the air. Pinkie Pie smiled and Celestia hoof bumped her. Luna nodded to Pinkie Pie then all three of them marched towards Golden Eyes.  He stood up glaring at them.

Luna slammed into him. He hit one of the back walls of the castle. Pinkie Pie ran at him then kicked him in the face. He fell backwards, but then flew into the air. He smiled.

"My turn," He said.

He dove at Celestia and knocked her to the ground. Pinkie Pie laughed creepily. Luna frowned and gasped as Golden Eyes barreled into her. Pinkie Pie took off her fedora. She jumped into the air. She spun in a circle and landed next to Golden Eyes. She kicked him in the stomache. Fluttershy burst through door. She wore a cowboy hat.

"What is going on?" I shouted.

Pinkie Pie laughed and exclaimed, "How I handle things!"

I gave her a confused look. She laughed again. Celestia, Luna, Pinkie, Fluttershy, and me surrounded him. His eyes flickered another time. The door opened again. A white alicorn walked in. She looked at Celestia. She flew into the air and landed next to Golden Eyes. She flapped her wings. She lifted Golden Eyes into the air. She slammed him into the ground.

"Stop playing!" She screamed.

Magic flowed out of Golden Eyes. He gasped as a white alicorn came appeared next to the other alicorn. The small alicorn apologized. Then the two alicorns growled at all of us.


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