Chapters "Nathan. Why do you summon me?" A heavenly voice calls out.
I open my eyes to a pure white landscape no other visible colours.
"I'm here to make you a deal, My soul for the ability to help others. I want to heal those around me mentally and physically." I demand.
"Why come to the lord of the hell for something that would help those that sin? It's my job to punish them yet you expect me to give you this power for one puny soul? You have clearly lost your mind." The voice replies in a venomous tone. "Actually Nathan. I have just the trade that I will see as worth it." The voice hums. " You can have your wish but there's a catch to it...."
The landscape then fades to black.
"I accept the trade, even with your special addition."
I awaken in my bedroom my body surrounded by a faint black glow that slowly shrinks in size until it finally stops just over my heart where it starts to blink for a few seconds before disappearing.
"*Chuckle* *Sigh* I just successfully made a deal with the devil himself. I can finally be useful instead of just being in the way. I have to keep this a secret.... If anyone found out about this I'd be screwed, my plan would be over before it even began." I say to myself.
I sit up in my bed stopping for a second to look at my chest. I then kick the covers off of me and twisted myself around so that my legs where hanging over the edge of my bed. I then stand up and went to the shower where I got cleaned up and ready for the day ahead.
-20 minutes later-
I put on my coat and head out of my house to the nearest hospital to test my new abilities. First stop, the A&E.
-Inside the Hospital-
"Sir? Excuse me sir you can't go in there!" A female nurse says as she grabs my sleeve.
"I was hired to see a person here about a broken leg that needs seeing to." I reply as I give her a happy smile.
"Oh sorry sir go right ahead." The nurse ways nervously as she lets go of my sleeve.
'Wow.... That was easy.' I think to myself as I take a second to remove the creases she had put into my sleeve.
"Can you lead me to the room filled with the injured? I'm ready to do my work." I ask.
"S-sure they're right through here." The nurse says as she leads me into a dull white walled room.
"Thank you. Now I'll need you to go for about half an hour." I say with a serious tone.
"Absolutely sir. If you need anything then feel free to contact the main desk." She says as she turns to leave the room.
'Now then.... Him. Broken tibia AND fibula.... Time to test this shit out.' I say as I pull a small textile doll out of my trouser pocket.
"Oh sir before I forget you need to put your uniform on before operating. As you well know about hygiene." The nurse says as she quickly walks into the room and hands me a surgeons uniform and mask,
"Ah thank you, I was just looking for these." I say with a fake embarrassed chuckle.
"No problem." She says with a light giggle.
"Right, now I have to get changed then operate so could you please leave and I'll come and collect you when I am finished." I ask,
"Sure thing and I hope all goes well." The nurse says happily as she leaves once again.
-10 minutes later-
'Someone sedated him.... He must've been under a lot of pain and stress.... Well here goes nothing.' I think to myself.
I grab the doll in my hand tightly and press my hand against his forehead and hold it there for a few seconds. A few more seconds pass. Nothing.
'I can't believe it.... Nothing.... Was it all a dream?' I think to myself as I remove my hand from his forehead.
The moment my hand leaves his head me the bottom half of my left leg starts to faintly glow black and the tibia and fibula in my left leg snap causing me to grunt as I collapse onto the floor in tears. I bite onto my hand to stop myself from crying out in pain.
After a few more seconds pass the pain in my leg starts to fade as the doll's left leg starts to faintly glow black.
'OH MY GOD! I-IT WORKED!' I scream in my head.
I stand up and carefully put weight onto my left leg.
'It's fine.... I'M FINE!' "Hahahahaha." I laugh to myself.
I take a second to calm myself down and put the doll back into my pocket.
'Right.... I've got to go get changed and leave.' I think to myself as I take a second to look at what I'm wearing.
-10 minutes into the future-
I leave the room with the doll in my pocket.
'Nathan. Time for you to stop meddling in my business and meddle in someone else's.' A voice in my head laughs.
'What do you mean?' I ask.
'This.' The voice replies as my vision goes blank.
I wake up in a field surrounded by trees with a bright red apples in them.
"What tha hay is that thing!" A woman with a southern accent shouts.
"Is there something behind me?!" I shout in a panic as I turn around to see what looks like a scared orange pony with a yellow mane.
"Someone just tried to scare me over a pony.... Asshole." I mumble to myself.
"I....It can TALK! G-Get away from the trees you...! Whatever you are!" The pony shouts at me.
"A TALKING PONY WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON!" I shout in fear as I start to scramble away from it.
"Of course ah can talk ya weird hairless minotaur!" The pony shouts at me.
"I'm a human you stupid pony looking creature!" I shout at it.
"Ah am a pony ya fool!" The pony shouts back at me.
"APPLEJACK?! WHO YA SHOUTING AT?!" A young sounding voice shouts from a small distance from us.
"GET BIG MAC APPLEBLOOM!" The pony shouts.
"I'm out of here!" I shout as I stand up and start to run away.
"Oh no ya don't!" The pony shouts as it starts to run after me.
I slalom between the rows of trees.
"Get back here!" The pony shouts as it chases me off of the farm land and into a small colourful town.
Ponies are everywhere staring at me as I sprint down the street trying to avoid the pony chasing me. One pony a purple one with a purple, blue and pink mane stands in front of me. A horn on her head starts to glow, the surprise of seeing one of these creatures with a horn on it causes me to trip over and fall onto the ground hitting my head on a rock in the middle of the dirt road causing me to black out the instant I hit the ground.
Author's Note
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More than just a Repairman
"It's coming to! Get the guards ready to capture it!" A feminine voice calls out.
I hear what sounds to be 15 horses run into around me then surround me.
"It's awake my Princess." One of the voices says.
"What are you and what is your name?" A motherly voice asks.
"I'm a human, and my names Nathan Terez." I answer with a splutter as a strange fluid fills my mouth.
"Human? I've heard of Humans before but I thought they where long gone since the war." The motherly voice says with venom and the sound of grinding teeth is heard next. "Tell me, why have you returned to where you are not welcome?"
I push myself onto my hands and knees.
"I didn't return, I was forced here by a force of pure evil." I reply after spitting out the strange fluid.
"Guards.... Arrest him. I will not have another senseless killing by one of the beasts." The voice growls.
"Hold on a minute! I'm not here to hurt anyone! I was teleported here without my consent! Just hold up a sec and we can talk about this!" I plead as I turn to face the voice.
In front of my is a tall white pony with a blue, green and pink flowing mane.
"Since I see no weapons I'll let you talk." The tall pony says.
"Okay. Listen I'm not here to cause any harm, I have no idea what your previous experience with humans is but I don't want to hurt anyone!" I explain.
"I don't believe you." The white pony says with a scowl.
"W-Wait! Let me prove myself! G-Give me something to do.... And I-I'll prove to you I'm a good guy!" I plead.
"Okay then. I'll give you a nice simple task. I've chipped the tip of one of my hooves and I want you to help the spa workers in repairing it. Something so simple to you humans. I hope you brought your tools." The white pony smirks.
"As a matter of fact I have." I reply with confidence.
"Good. Guards! Escort him to the spa please." The white pony says with a smile to the guards around her.
"Yes Princess Celestia." The guards say as they grab my arms and lift me up.
"You don't have to drag me." I say as I shake off their hooves.
"We shall do what we think will help keep the safety of Equestria. Now get moving." One of the guards demands as he drags me forwards.
"Okay, okay. Just calm down on the pulling." I groan. "Also watch where your grabbing. Any higher and I'll be telling Celestia you touched my
"Shut up and get moving." The guard says as he grabs a little lower on my trousers.
-At the spa-
"Ah Celestia." One of the spa ponies says with a bow.
"It's nice to see you today, I'm having a creature visit here in the near future and I will require you to work with it." Celestia says with a smile.
"Y-Yes Celestia!" The spa pony says as he runs off.
"*GIggle* They always get so worrisome when I arrive. *Sigh* I wish they wouldn't though.... It would be nice to be treat like a normal pony for once." Celestia mumbles to herself.
"Celestia we've arrived with the Human." The guard says as he enters the room.
"Bring him in." Celestia demands.
The guards enter dragging me along next to them.
"Finally. My knees are hurting from the weird walking you made me do." I groan.
"Guards you may leave now, please take your positions at the door." Celestia says with a calm, caring voice.
The guards bow then leave the room.
"You can start work when the spa attendee returns." Celestia says with venom.
"I can do it before they get here." I say with a serious look.
"And how would you do that?" Celestia says with an interested look on her face.
I pull the doll out of my pocket and show it to her.
"It's a doll.... I still don't understand how you're meant to fix mu chipped hoof with a doll." Celestia says with a confused look on her face.
"I need you to keep this a secret, hand me your hoof. The one with the chip." I say as I squeeze the doll in my hand and take a deep breath.
Celestia holds out her front right hoof which I take in my hand and close my eyes. A tremendous pain rushes through my right hand causing my to open and tears race down my cheeks. A black glow starts to spread across Celestia's hoof and across my hands as my finger nails are ripped from their position in my hand.
"Nathan? What's happening?" Celestia asks in a panic.
Celestia looks at her hoof to see that the chip is starting to fill out and return to normal. She gasps as she sees blood starting to pour from my hand. I let go of her hoof as soon as it's finished healing and fall to the ground clenching my teeth together as the pain starts to become unbearable. I grab the doll in both hands and push the injury into the doll using all my might. With the pain gone I put the doll back into my trouser pocket.
"There. *pant* *pant* It's gone." I pant as I regain my composure.
"That's amazing! Why would you want that to be a secret?" Celestia asks.
"Because if this power was discovered then who knows what type of lunatics would try to use me for their own gain." I groan as I stand up.
"I understand. A wise choice actually. There have been quite a few villains over the years. Excuse my excitement from a moment ago, I guess my youthful side got out for a moment." Celestia says with a light giggle.
"Youthful? Come on, you must be young. You look like a teenager." I say hoping my smooth talking would get on her good side.
"Is that mild flirting? You really are a remarkable human I'll give you that." Celestia giggles.
'It seems to have worked. Thank god for that.' I think to myself.
"Anyway. I would like to keep you under mine and my students watchful eyes for a while, so you'll be staying in Ponyville with my student so that we may keep an eye on you and see what your intentions are." Celestia says as her horn starts to glow.
"This is gonna be interesting." I chuckle before being enveloped in a bright golden light.
Author's Note
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"So.... You're the human?" A purple pony with a horn asks.
"Wow that was quick. WAIT A MINUTE! That means magic exists...." 'This is unreal. Does this mean I was sent here.... Because the powers I surrendered everything for.... Are useless? Have I just traded all of my previous life for some stupid fucking power that is useless?' I think to myself as my vision becomes blurred as tears well up in my eyes.
I blink the tears away and shake myself out of my thoughts.
"Yeah. I'm the human. The names Nathan Terez, what's yours?" I ask putting on a fake smile.
"My names Twilight Sparkle, I guess I'll be looking after you for a while. Do you want a tour of the house or do you just want to explore?" Twilight Sparkle asks with a friendly smile.
"I'll just explore for a bit. Thanks for taking me in, I have no idea where I would be staying if it weren't for Celestia and you." I say as I scratch the back of my head.
"It's okay. From what I've read in the libraries you humans where a nasty race. But if Celestia says you're okay then you're fine by me." Twilight says.
"Thanks, I guess. I'm gonna look around now, I'll be back here before it gets dark." I say as I look around the room.
"Okay then! I've got to go meet some friends so we'll meet back here tonight." Twilight says as she turns away and leaves the room.
'Time to have a look around where I'll be staying.' I think to myself I as I look around the room again adding it all to my memory.
'Now that I've seen the tree.... House? Treehouse? Whatever this place is called, I better take a look around the surrounding area.' I think to myself as I head towards the front door and leave the house.
I take a second to look around. The houses all look like old Irish cottages connecting to a cobblestone road by small cobblestone pathways.
'It's a beautiful place.' I think to myself as a genuine smile spreads across my face.
"Hey Human!" A voice calls out.
"Yes?" I ask turning around.
As I turn around a tomato hits my face, I bring my hand to my face cupping where the tomato hit me.
"Buck off back to where you came from you vile creature!" The voice says again.
I turn to the voice to see a black pony with a black mane.
"What are you looking at?" The black pony asks again as it throws another tomato at me.
I try to dodge the tomato but end up tripping and falling over.
"Ah fuck." I hiss through gritted teeth.
I rub the knee part of my trousers trying to soothe the pain.
"What's going on here?" Another voice asks.
"This human attacked me and I was defending myself but he wouldn't go." The black pony says in a fake panic.
"No I didn't! Ah my leg. I came out of the house behind me and he started throwing tomato's at me!" I say as I struggle to my feet.
The next thing I see are a pair of green hooves heading towards me.
Black. That's all I can see at the moment.
"How do you like my little performance? Do you think the ponies will be scared of you? HATE you? Or both? I sure hope it's both. You got the powers you wanted but now no one will go near you. You traded everything for this remember? You made a deal with me and I have made sure you understand why a deal with my isn't a good idea." The recognisable voice of the devil says with a laugh.
"Even if they hate me I'll still help them! Fuck you mother fucker! I have a dream and this dream is coming true!" I shout back into the darkness.
"Tell that to Celestia." The devil laughs.
His laugh slowly fades away as my vision comes back.
"Ow. My head." I say as I bring my hand to my head and try to rub the pain away.
"Nathan." Celestia's voice says filled with venom.
"What happened?" I ask.
"It would seem that my original fear of you was correct. Humans are just an evil race. I'm banishing you to the Everfree forest. And I will be placing a shield around it so that you can't escape it. My ponies will be safe from your violent nature." Celestia says as her horn begins to glow.
"No wait plea..." I try to beg.
My vision is covered in gold.
The gold begins to fade and is replaced with a view of a forest I'd see back on earth.
"Fuck." I mumble as a tear streaks down my cheek. "Fuck! Fuck! FUUUUUCK!" I shout as I punch a tree.
I fall back onto my butt and sob into my hands.
"I guess my dream is over. I traded everything for.... For this. The fucking devil screwed me.... How did I not see that coming? FUCK!"
I flop onto my back and stare at the treeline above me. The suns rays battling with the leaves to get through causing small shafts of light to poke through between the moving leaves.
"Listen guys Ah'm tellin' ya, last time was a fluke! This time we'll get our cutie marks! Right Scootaloo?" A child like voice with a southern accent asks.
"If you say so Apple Bloom. I just think maybe we should've gone with sailing instead." A child like voice replies.
"I second that." A high pitched voice replies.
"Quit your bellyaching and let's do this!" The first voice says with determination.
'Now's my chance! I can still turn this around!' I think to myself as I struggle to my feet.
"Apple Bloom look out!" The second voice calls out in fear.
A stabbing sound is heard through out the forest.
'Holy fuck!' I shout to myself as I burst through the foliage.
In front of me are a pair of ponies shaking in fear and in front of them is a huge lion with wings and a scorpion stinger, on the end of the stinger is a small pony coughing up blood.
The sight of the small pony causes me to grab the doll from my pocket and squeeze it as tight as I can. The next noise to be heard is the sound of bone breaking followed by the screeching of the creature.
"Thank you devil for at least letting me have this." I mumble to myself.
The creature then falls onto it's butt in pain as it holds the bottom part of it's left leg.
I burst through the bushes scaring the two ponies little ponies in front of me. I then rush to the tail of the lion which it had laid against the ground as it dealt with it's leg.
I grab the small pony of off the lions tail and run back to the two other small ponies and pick them two up as well. I head back through the bushes and run deeper into the forest.
"Help!" One of the small ponies shouts.
"Shut up, I'm trying to help." I say as I lower the ponies to the ground.
I grab the doll out of my pocket and put my free hand against the small injured ponies forehead.
I can feel a tearing in my stomach as my shirt and body are ripped where the small pony was stabbed. I start coughing blood. I look up to the small pony as my vision becomes blurred due to the extreme pain. A ringing noise then fills my ears as the other two small ponies stand in front of me. I then blink and in front of me stand three blurred blobs of colour.
I look to my hand and put all of my energy into the doll, causing a black glow to surround the blurred blob of the doll.
My vision starts to slowly come back as the ringing starts to fade.
"Hey! Creature are you okay?! Answer us!" One of the small ponies in front of me shouts.
"I'm *cough* fine. Just let me catch my breath." I say through panting and coughing.
"It's okay. Thanks for saving us.... Whatever you are. I'm Sweetie Belle." A small white pony says with a smile.
"I'm Nathan. *Pant* Nice to meet you." I say as I take a deep breath.
"My name's Scootaloo." A small orange pony with a purple mane says.
"And Ah'm Apple Bloom. Thanks a ton fer savin' me there Nathan. I owe you my life." A small orange pony with yellow hair and a red bow says with a large smile.
"You're welcome. Now you ponies need to get out of here. It's too dangerous in this place for you." I say as I sit back against a tree and catch my breath.
"But what about you? You need to come with us!" Sweetie Belle says.
"I can't. I've been exiled here and then they placed a barrier so I can't get out." I say with a sigh.
"Why would ya be exiled?" Apple Bloom asks.
"Listen you guys need to get out. I won't always be able to save you." I say with a smile.
"Okay, C'mon cutie mark crusaders. We need to get back and have Apple Bloom checked out at a hospital." Scootaloo says as the three of them runaway.
"Fuck you Devil. I still helped someone." I chuckle.
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I've been here for about two weeks going on the amount of times days changed to night. It's a strange world. Every time I sleep I'm consumed in nightmares that I can never awake from. All of the painful times in my life relived, all of the emotional pain re-experienced.
I blink my the tears from my eyes after just waking up from one of the nightmares.
'This fucking place is ruining me. This forest is breaking my will. I need to get out before I lose myself completely.' I think to myself as I push myself onto my feet.
"Nathan?" A voice I recognise asks.
"Back here again? I keep telling you. Go home Scootaloo. This place is evil." I say with a sigh.
"But you're all alone, you need someone to be here with you." The little filly says with a nod.
"I'm here to be alone. Well.... Since you're here, how are the other two?" I ask as I wipe some sweat from my forehead.
"They're great! Apple Bloom keeps wanting to come visit! So does Sweetie Belle! That's why I'm here. They wanted to know if they could come visit some time? They wanted to see where you lived." Scootaloo says.
"Where I live? I live under the tree I decide looks comfortable and sleep among the bugs. It's not really worth looking at is it? If they really want to come visit they can, I won't stop any of you." I say as I take my shirt off and start heading towards a pool I discovered in my first week here.
"Mind if I join you? I got a load of leaves in my coat and it's bugging me." Scootaloo asks with a smile.
"Sure you can. I don't own the lake so use it all you want." I reply with my own smile.
Scootaloo then runs ahead towards the pool and a splash can be heard shortly after.
The pool then comes into view and Scootaloo can be seen in the pool scrubbing at herself with her hooves.
"Is the water okay?" I ask.
"Yep! It's actually quite warm! Here! Have a feel!" Scootaloo says as she flicks water at me.
The water hits my belly button and below causing my trousers to become wet.
"I see how it is." I smirk.
"Oh no." Scootaloo says as her smile drops.
I run forward and dive into the pool of water and keep myself under the water line as I slowly swim towards Scootaloo. Through the water I see Scootaloo looking around the water with a nervous expression on her face. I then swim upwards and grab Scootaloo's rear hooves, causing her to scream in shock.
I start laughing as my head leaves the water and I use my arms to keep myself above water.
"You're such a meanie!" Scootaloo says as she blushes.
"You got my trousers wet." I say with a shrug and a smirk.
Scootaloo then splashes me again.
"Fine then!" I say as I start splashing her back.
We played like that for what felt like hours, just us two splashing, racing and laughing.
"Scootaloo it's getting late, let me walk you to the bubble. It's too dangerous with the creatures here. Especially after last time." I say as I climb out of the pool.
"I can handle myself! I'll kick the butt of whatever wants to try it!" Scootaloo says as she starts kicking the air like an action movie character,
"Sure you will, now come on." I say as I pass her my shirt to dry herself with.
"Won't this make it smell again?" Scootaloo asks as she holds it in her hoof.
"How do you think I dry myself? For some reason it doesn't make it smell. Must be the pool or something." I say as I shake my hair to dry it.
"If you say so." Scootaloo says as she starts to dry herself with my shirt.
After 20 minutes of drying and conversation with Scootaloo we start our journey to the edge of the forest.
"How do you manage it? Living in a place like this I mean." Scootaloo asks.
"It's not much different then a forest where I'm from. Besides the big creatures who aren't that friendly of course." I answer.
After traveling for what felt like half an hour we finally arrive at the edge of the forest.
"Hey Nathan!" Scootaloo says.
"Yeah Scootaloo?" I ask.
"Why don't you come with me to go see Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle? They want to see you again!" Scootaloo asks.
"I can't, remember?" I answer with a shake of my head.
"Oh yeah." Scootaloo nervous giggles and blushes.
"You guys are always welcome to come visit me. Just make sure to tell me what day so I can meet you here. It's not safe for three ponies to be traveling in here." I say.
"It's not safe for you here either." Scootaloo points out.
"You're right, but you get a choice, I don't." I remind her.
"I guess." Scootaloo says with a sad look on her face. "Can I come back tomorrow with the Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle?"
"Of course you can. I'll meet you here in the morning." I answer with a smile.
"See ya tomorrow Nathan!" Scootaloo says as she climbs onto her scooter.
"See ya." I reply with a wave as Scootaloo rides away.
*Hooooooooooowl*
'I've gotta get back to the tree pretty quickly.' I think to myself as I start running back into the forest. 'I had fun today. I hop tomorrow will be just as fun.'
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"Wake him up! It's nearly noon!" A voice says as I feel a pair of hooves start to shake me.
"Don't worry. I got this!" Scootaloo's voice says as something starts to jump up and down on my stomach.
"I'm awake god damn it! Stop jumping on me!" I shout followed by a groan.
"Told you I got this!" Scootaloo says as she comes to stop with a cocky smile on her face.
Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom both look at each other and shake their heads.
"That's good and all but can you get off of me I need to get up and get cleaned." I say as shoo Scootaloo off of my stomach.
"That reminds me. Me and the girls wanna swim, mind if we join you?" Scootaloo asks.
"Sure. If you don't mind a butt ass naked human in the water." I say with a shrug.
"We're always naked so it doesn't matter." Sweetie Belle replies with a smile.
"That's true. Lets head to the lake then." I say.
I start to walk towards the pool followed closely by the girls.
"Wow Nathan! This place is mighty strange looking. How did the lake get here?" Apple Bloom asks.
"That's what I thought when I first found this place." I reply with a smile.
I push through some bushes bringing the lake into sight.
"Wow! This place is beautiful!" Sweetie Belle says as she looks at the surrounding area.
"LAST PONY IN THE LAKE IS RARITY'S ASSISTANT FOR A WEEK!" Scootaloo shouts as she runs towards the lake.
"NO FAIR!" Apple Bloom says as she runs after Scootaloo.
"I'M NOT BEING HER ASSISTANT AGAIN!" Sweetie Belle says as she chases after the two.
I turn around and climb into the bushes behind me so that the girls couldn't see me getting undress. My plan was to sneak in while the three played and hide my penis from being poked and the awkward boner that would inevitably happen.
"Hey Nathan you coming!" I hear Scootaloo shout.
"Yeah! Just give me a minute!" I shout back.
I groan internally and start undressing. I start with my shirt. As I drop my shirt to the ground the air around me starts to get warmer and thicker making it harder to breath. The trees around me start to sway heavily in the wind. That's when I realised what was happening. I've been caught in one of these before as 13 year old boy. My mom died protecting me and my dad was wheelchair bound for the rest of his life.
"A tornado." I mumble. "GIRLS! GET OUT OF THE WATER!" I shout.
"Huh?" Scootaloo shouts back.
I see the funnel start to head towards them. I burst out from the bushes I was hidden behind. Using all my speed I rushed towards the water and dived in, I swam towards the three girls as fast as possible. I finally reach them and I grab them all to my chest. The tornado above us finally touched down directly on top of us. I grab the three girls against my chest as hard as possible and bend my knees so that I'm curled in a ball around them.
"Nathan what's happening?" Sweetie Belle asks in a panic.
"A tornado. Just hold on as tight as possible." I shout over the sound of the rushing winds.
"Are we gunna die? I don't wanna die! NATHAN AH'M SCARED!" Apple Bloom shouts in tears.
"I won't let you die. Just hold on!" I shout.
I can feel my back being whipped and scratched by what feel like branches that are being thrown around by the tornado.
"Girl I promise that no matter what I'll get you out okay." I say as I tighten my curl around them.
"Do you promise?" The three girls ask.
"Yes, I do." I say with a gulp as the winds start to die down.
The tornado then immediately dissipates.
"Nathan please don't let me die." Sweetie Belle says as she cries into my chest.
We start plummeting towards the ground at high speed.
"I already promised I wouldn't." I say with a smile.
I aim my back towards the ground and prepare for what will probably kill me.
"Adrian.... Tha...." Was all I heard from Scootaloo before having a huge spike driven through my back and out my stomach.
I landed on a broken tree stump. The three girls are silent and unmoving.
"G... Girls." I cough.
The three of them don't move nor do they even breath. They're dead. I press my arm across the back of their heads and reach into my pocket to get the doll. No doll. The wind must have sucked it out and thrown it away.
'Fuck it.' I think to myself.
I use all of my remaining strength to suck all of the injuries from them. They wake up and stare at me.
"Nathan what happened?" Scootaloo asks me.
I stare at her. I can't speak, I can't breath. I can't do anything.
"Nathan?" Sweetie Belle asks.
My body starts to melt away where the damage to the girls where previously. My left arm snaps. I can't hold it. My right eye bursts. I can't feel it. The middle of my torso bursts. I can't do anything.
The girls all look at me and dry heave.
"Nathan *pant* what's happening to you?" Scootaloo pants.
"Oh mah god." Apple Bloom mumbles.
The two girls look at her and then follow where she's looking. My arm is still behind them, bloodied and broken. A black aura surrounding it.
"Nathan? It's enough stop you've already saved us." Scootaloo says as she ties to pull away only to realis she's missing her right back leg.
Her leg then starts to grown back. She looks down at my right leg and she sees it melting away.
"Nathan...." She mumbles as a tear drops down her cheek.
A flash of black and the girls are back to there full health. My body is left broken and dead. I can see everything but I can't do anything.
My right leg is missing, my right eye is now just mush, my right arm is broken and limply holding onto them, my left arm is by my side in a puddle of blood, my jaw is a broken mush of bone and teeth.
"Nathan please don't die...." Scootaloo says as she presses herself against my chest.
Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle start to nudge me as if expecting me to wake up. They start checking my pockets for the little doll. It's gone.
"The dolls missing. Where is it!" Sweetie Belle shouts in a panic.
"G...Gorn." I mumble.
"N-Nathan!" Scootaloo shouts in joy as a huge smile covers her face.
"Dawl, gorn, wund tay et." I gasp.
"You.... You knew...." Apple Bloom says with a grim expression.
"Eye.... Key..... Keep... Promise?" I groan.
"Nathan...." The three girls mumble as a fresh wave of tears streak down their faces.
"Ponies.... Say.... Sa.... Safe.... Eye.... Die.... Key.... Yow.... A lie..... Alive....." I groan.
"Nathan.... Nathan please!" Scootaloo says as she stomps her hooves.
"Eye.... eye.... Say..... Save....................... You.... Live.... Ha.... Happy..... Four.... Four..... Forget me...." I say before finally succumbing to the cold darkness.
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Scootaloo's scream is the last thing I hear.
Author's Note
What did you think? Nathan got his wish. He saved lives. Three young fillies lives.
"Wake up Nathan. I need you to listen to me. Everything you know about everything is lead by those who are blinded by misguided faith. I am the good guy. God is the bad guy." The devil says in a deep monotone voice.
"Yeah.... Sure you are. After the deal you made with me I'll never believe that you're the good guy! You are a FUCKING ASSHOLE!" I shout at him.
"Open your eyes. I will prove to you that I am the good guy."
I open my eyes. I see nothing but darkness.
"Blow away the darkness Nathan. Show yourself the truth."
I blow as hard as I can causing the darkness to be blown away like a cloud of smoke. In front of me is a man who appears to be 6ft 1inch and is wearing a pair of black jeans with rips at the knees and a grey T-Shirt with a red flannel overcoat which casually unbuttoned.
"You're not.... Anything like I'd thought you'd look like." I say with a confused look on my face.
The devil smiles at me then takes a step closer to me.
"You're right. I'm not. I've seen how those that blindly follow 'gods book'. They have everything in reverse. God is the evil one, in fact he's not even the original god. He killed the original one and took his place. It's a long story that I'll explain to you in the future, but for now I want you to understand what I've done and why I've done it." The devil says as he pulls a pair of wooden chairs from out of the darkness. "Here. Sit and I'll explain it all."
I take the chair and sit down.
"Two thousand years ago the original god was watching over as his creations roamed around, living as was intended. Asastramas was his name. A kind soul. I'm his son, Ferititus. The new god was his assistant. His name was Oestericus. A suspicious man from the start..... My dad was the god who believed everyone deserved a chance. So, he gave the man a job as his assistant. Oestericus took him up on the offer and sat by his side watching the world as it developed. That was until the humans arrived." The devil says with a sigh.
The devil reaches into the darkness and grabs a pair of mugs filled with coffee. He hands me one and proceeds to take a sip from his mug.
"All was well in the land of god. Leseros. The people where happy, everything was like heaven. In fact, Leseros IS heaven. The idea behind heaven was built by Oestericus and is an exact copy of Leseros. That man. He was evil from the start. *Sip* He saw how humanity was evolving. He saw something that must have sparked something inside of him or something, because as he watched humanity fight he took his chance and while Asastramas was putting a stop to the fighting Oestericus.... The fucker killed my dad while he worked. *Sigh* He killed him and forced his position as god by sending me here. An eternity to solitude. Or so he thought. I rule over Loseros, or as you know it to be. Hell. *Sip*" The devil explains.
"Wow. So what you're telling me Ferititus is that the god we know now. The one who answers no ones prayers and leaves everyone to starve and whither away.... Ferititus. Why did you make the deal so broken? Why did I have to suffer?" I ask taking a sip of coffee afterwards.
"I needed to test your resolve and to see where your heart lays. Luckily you are on the side of good. Which is why you're here. With me. The one true human who gave everything to help and protect a race of creatures he'd never met before. They banished you to the forest yet you still helped them. That's why I took away the doll. I wanted to see if you'd follow through with the healing, even if you knew you'd never heal. You went a step further. And healed even though you knew you'd die an agonising death. That's why I removed all of the pain and made your body parts just melt away painlessly instead of breaking or ripping themselves off. Nathan. You're keeping your powers. You need to help them. Oestericus is coming after them. I will be there to help when the time is right. But YOU must protect them and keep them alive. Nathan, I'm removing the doll from you. Instead you will still feel the pain of the injury but it will go after 10 seconds. If you where to take their emotional pain. It would be everlasting. I'm sorry. No amount of magic will ever change that." The devil says as he takes another sip of his coffee.
"I'll protect them. Oestericus will not win." I say as I stand up.
The devil stands up as well and makes mine and his mugs disappear.
"You ready to go back?" The devil asks with a smile.
"Yeah, let's make Asastramas proud." I say as I ball my hand up into a fist and extend my arm out.
The devil smiles and fist bumps me before clicking his finger causing me to pass out again.
I wake up. I take a look around to see that I'm in the forest. I look at my body to see it glow black for a second before the glow fades away.
"Why did he have to give his life. He was a cool stallion." I hear Scootaloo's voice through the bushes followed by a set of three crying ponies.
I stand up. I'm still weak so I stumble a little but I catch myself on a tree stump. My hand gets coated in a liquid. I look at the tree stump. It's the tree stump where we died. The three girls first, then me. I push myself off of the stump and balance myself before making my way towards the bushes.
"Ah wish he was still here. He saved my life twice." I hear Apple Blooms voice cry.
I push myself through the bushes
"And I'd do it again and again." I say with a smirk as I watch over the three fillies.
"NATHAN!" The three girls shout as they jump towards me tears pouring from them.
I catch them to my chest hug them.
"How are you alive? We saw you die!" Sweetie Belle says as she wipes away her tears.
"I'm here to help ponies. For as long as I'm needed. I'll be here for a long time." I say with a smile as I hold them tighter.
"Don't ever leave us again!" Scootaloo shouts at me.
"I won't. From now on. I'll be right here. Always here for you." I say with a smile as I lower them to the ground.
I then ruffle Scootaloo's hair then stand back up.
"Come on. It's time for us to play in the lake don't you think?" I say with a wink.
The three girls then smile and press themselves against my legs. Apple Bloom to the right, Scootaloo to the left and Sweetie Belle in the middle.
"Last one there is Rarity's assistant for a week." I say as I start running.
"HEY!" The three fillies shout before running after me.
Author's Note
What do you think? It's far from the end and the journey is just beginning.
It's been 4 weeks since that day. The day I died then returned. The Devils the good guy, God's the bad guy, well. The new one is. My life's been turned upside down. I won the race by the way. Apple Bloom had to be rarity's assistant for a week, it was hilarious.
I climbed out of the lake after getting washed and ready for the day. My facial hair had grown from just a light stubble to a full blown beard.
"NAAAAATHAAAAAN!" Scootaloo screamed as she ran towards the pool.
"Scootaloo!" I shout as I jump to my feet and sprint towards where the voice came from.
Scootaloo burst through the bushes and sprints towards me fluttering her wings as if to make her run faster. I grab her in my arms and hold her there.
"Scootaloo what's wrong?" I ask as I start stroking her mane.
"I can't take it anymore Nathan." Scootaloo says as she cries into my arms.
"Take what? What's happened?" I ask as I hold her tighter in my arms.
"They where making fun of me again!" Scootaloo sobbed.
I looked down at her and noticed cuts on her forelegs just above her hooves. I close my eyes and take as deep a breath as possible and hold her as tight as I can around me.
"N-Nathan I.... I can't b-b-b-breathe." Scootaloo says as she tries to push me away.
I then focus all of my strength into Scootaloo's heart. I can feel a darkness start to grow in my heart. I can feel my heart breaking. A tear rolls down my cheek. I let go of Scootaloo who falls to her hooves and starts to pant.
"What was THAT about N.... Wait a minute.... I FEEL BETTER! In fact I FEEL FANTASTIC! Hahahaha!" Scootaloo starts to dance on the spot.
The vision in my right eye is darker then the one in my left. I crawl on my hands and knees towards the lake. As I arrive I stare at my reflection and what I see causes my stomach to turn. My right eyes is black. The whole eye even the white in it had turn to black.
"Nathan? Are you okay?" Scootaloo asks as she nervously steps towards me.
"No Scootaloo. I'm not. I can't get this feeling to go away. I don't *cough* I don't want to live anymore, and it won't go away." I say as I punch my reflection in the lake.
"WHAT! NO! STOP THINKING THAT!" Scootaloo says as she pulls my face away from the lake.
Scootaloo lets go when she sees my face.
"What.... What happened to your eye?" Scootaloo asks with a worried expression on her face.
"What do you think? I took your heartache.... And now I have it." I snap. "I'm sorry Scootaloo I didn't mean to snap."
"Why? How?" Scootaloo asks.
"Because you mean a lot to me Scootaloo. I can't stand to see you sad." I say with a smile.
A tear slides down my face and slips between the cracks of my lips and a salty taste fills my mouth.
"Nathan...." Scootaloo says with a neutral expression on her face. "Wait.... Why can't I feel sad? What's going on Nathan?"
Scootaloo looks down and sees he holding onto her hoof absorbing the cuts to her forelegs and her sadness at the same time.
"Let go Nathan.... Please you've suffered enough for us already...." Scootaloo says as she tries to pull away.
I bite my lip as two long cuts appear on my wrists.
"Nathan...." Scootaloo sighs. "Good enough is never enough for you is it? Even if it costs you your life."
I shake my head and look back at her hooves. My finger tips start to darken.
"Your bodies going black Nathan. You need to stop." Scootaloo says as she yanks herself free.
"I'm doing it to make sure you stay. My happy little pony." I say with a smirk.
"Nathan. Your lips are black." She says as a tear builds up.
"I'll be fine. It's not like I'm dying..... Again. I'll be fine." I say as I stand up.
"How do you know?!" Scootaloo shouts at me.
"Geez Scootaloo I know we're friends and all but you need to calm down a bit." I say as I sit back down.
Scootaloo looks at me with a determined look on her face.
"What?" I ask.
Scootaloo bursts forwards and presses her lips against mine. I can feel cold tears against my cheeks. I push her away. She looks at me as more tears build up.
"You don't want me Scootaloo. I'm a human.... and you're a pony. You need a nice stallion to keep you happy. I'd only let you down." I say as I stand to my feet.
I put my right hand over my right eye. As if shielding it from Scootaloo.
"I don't want a stallion.... I want you Nathan.... I want you." Scootaloo mumbles as she stomps the ground as hard as possible.
Tears are now freely flowing from her eyes. She looks up at me then turns around and runs away.
'She really will be better without me....' I think to myself.
A black aura starts to glow around my hands.
'She'll be happier.' I think to myself as I can feel my hair being pulled.
I drag a hand through my hair only for my hair to not be there. I grab where my hair should be and bring it in front of me. In my hand is what looks like Celestia's hair but dark grey with streaks of blood red. I let go of it only to start to flow backwards over my head.
'What the fuck is happening to me?' I think to myself as I feel the pain in my heart increase.
Author's Note
What did you think? Something's happening to Nathan? What do you think is gonna happen to him? Try and guess in the comments!
"She doesn't need me." I mumble to myself.
I walk over to the lake and look back at my reflection. A discoloured version of myself looks back at me. The right half of face is a pure black, including the eye and that half of my lips.
"She's better without me. Everyone is." I choke as a tear streaks down my face.
My body feels heavy. My knees collapse and I fall backwards. A thump can be heard as I land against the floor, as my head hits the ground a black shockwave is sent out across the forest. The trees are blown backwards, a few even collapse in the strength of the shockwave.
"No one needs me."
I feel a tugging sensation in my chest, I tilt my head to look down only to see a black aura leaking from my chest. I raise my hand up to touch the black wisps that are now raising into the air.
"Why does it hurt so much?" I mumble as my mouth fills with the salty taste of my tears.
Around me walls of black start to grow upwards. I can then hear the sounds of concrete scraping against concrete as a roof of black grows over me. I drag myself onto my feet. A door way is opened in front of me. I stumble towards it only to walk into a huge hall with black walls with long pulsing veins of red. I rest my hand against the wall to keep my balance as I stumble towards the exit. The veins of red pulse constantly, as if this building had a beating heart in it. I take my hand off of the wall and sprint towards the exit.
I come to a stop at the doorway and rest my hand on the frame. In front of me is a bedroom. With black walls with blood red furniture that emits a light glow to the same beat of the veins in the halls.
"What the fuck?" I mumble as I walk towards a desk and brush my hand against the surface of it.
It feels like wood. Damp, Mouldy wood. I lift my hand off of it and look towards the bed. The bed has a glowing red frame with a black bedsheet and pillows, both with a trimming of glowing red. I walk towards the bed taking a second to look at the weird pulsing veins on the walls. I arrive at the bed and take a second to stare at the blackness of the covers. The blackness makes me want to climb into it and sleep. I decide to listen to it and start to get undressed. First I took off of my shoes and socks then took off my shirt and jeans. I then lift the covers up and climb into the bed. I pull the covers over myself and start to close my eyes. As my eyes close a blackness creeps over what's over my eyes before I completely close them. I completely close my eyes and let sleep take me.
I'm cold. So cold. As if I'm sleeping on a rock outside. Something inside me tells me to stay asleep. I listen and decide to stay asleep in the bed. I shudder under the covers but force myself to stay asleep.
"Good boy." A deep voice says in a happy tone.
I try to wake up, but I can't.
"You're too late. You've already welcomed the darkness into your heart." The voice chuckles.
I wake up panting and sweating. I look around and I'm still inside the black and red room. I see a balcony near the corner of the room. I run towards it and look outside. I'm high above the ground in the forest. I run back into the room, then down the long hallway, down a set of black stairs with red glowing, pulsing trims, and through a huge black hall with red veins and glowing trims. I see an entrance way and sprint towards it. I burst out of the dark hall and into the light of the sun. I have to shield my eyes from the sun. I turn around to look at where I came from. I nearly fall backwards in surprise. It's a tall black castle with red pulsing trims. I fall onto my backside and crawl backwards away from the castle. But as I try to run I immediately feel an urge to return to the castle. The urge is so strong I can't help but start to crawl back the castle. My heart starts to race in fear. As my heart rate increases the pulsing of the red trim speeds up as well. I look behind me and see a grey version of Scootaloo with red pulsing hair.
"NATHAN!" She shouts as she runs towards me.
"Scootaloo?" I ask with a worried look.
"Of course it's me! Who else would it be?" She says with a smirk.
"That's true...." I mumble as I try to grab a clump of my hair only to grab the weird gooey feeling moving mess.
"Come here." Scootaloo says as she holds her forelegs out.
I lower onto one knee and pull her into a hug.
"I'm sorry Scootaloo. I love you and I should never have told you to find someone else!" I sob into her.
"It's okay Nathan. I'd never find somepony else." Scootaloo says as she holds me tighter.
"Scootaloo?" I ask.
"Yes Nathan?"
"Let's go home." I say with a smile as I pick her up and walk back into the castle.
"Yeah, let's go home." Scootaloo says with a happy smile.
I walk into the hall and sit at the bottom of the staircase just holding Scootaloo in my arms.
"Nathan?" Scootaloo asks with a happy voice.
"Hmm?" I question.
"Can I bring my friends? I'm sure they'll wanna see our home." She answers as she rubs her head against my chest.
"Of course. Why don't you go get them while I wait here?" I say as I lower her to the ground.
"Okay! I'll be back in a short while!" Scootaloo says as she happily skips out of the castle.
"I'm so glad she came back." I say with a happy sigh.
Author's Note
Well then..... What do you think? Got questions? Feel free to discuss in the comments what you think is happening to Nathan. Thanks for reading and I'll see you next chapter!
It's been 5 hours since she set off for her friends.
'Maybe I should go looking for her.' I think to myself.
"No. Stay put. She'll arrive soon don't you worry." A deep menacing voice resonates through the room.
"Who the fuck?! Come out. I want to see who roams my castle!" I shout as I stand up from my throne.
A tall black silhouette walks into the doorway.
"You should've stayed in the chair." The figure growls.
A pair of large black wings burst out from his back spraying blood across the door.
"What are you?!" I shout in a panic.
"Me? Why, I'm the guy who gave you all of this, changed your memories and changed what you are." The voice chuckles.
"WHAT! THE! FUCK! ARE! YOU!" I shout at him.
As my anger grows I can feel my body changing. A burning sensation grows across my back as a coldness spread across my face and arms.
'The infection is taking all we loved, and is burning it to the ground. He's the one who did it.... Kill him.' A voice shouts at me.
"Him? Who is he?" I ask the air.
'His name is Oestericus. He is the current god. Kill him. So we can stop this infection!' The voice groans.
"He is correct by the way." The figure says with a laugh.
I look towards him and feel the burning in my right half of my back change into a feeling of my skin being torn.
"Ah! The infection is growing quickly. You see. I need more angels to do my bidding and someone with your powers would be perfect. You could heal all of my soldiers. I could be an invincible god. Unlike the pussy who was god before me. Niceness never got anyone anywhere." Oestericus laughs.
"We'll finish first. Me and Nathan. We'll kill you and repair existence." I growl.
A muscle on my back I never knew I had clenches then loosens. I look behind me to see a huge black feathered wing.
"Can you feel it? My darkness is infecting you at a pace I once thought to be impossible! Hahahahaha! You're going to be mine before the day is over!" Oestericus laughs. "Just give in. It'd make it easier for both of us."
"I was gonna say the same to you." I say as I push the injuries I had accumulated at him.
His body can be heard breaking and being torn to shreds. After a few seconds all that remains is a crumpled corpse on the floor.
"That was easy.... Too fucking easy. Get up mother fucker!" I growl as I get into a position ready for a fight.
"Ah.... You're smart too. You'll be a perfect addition. But since you've been a naughty boy. I'm gonna have to punish you." He says with a smirk.
"Do your worst. I'll never be scared of you!" I growl as I dig my feet into the black marble floor.
"I'm not going to hit you. That would instantly kill you. Instead I'm gonna make you hate yourself, to the point where you'll give in off of a broken mind." He smiles, a set of yellow teeth glowing like a golden ray are visible in his dark figure.
"That'll never happen." I say as I relax my stance.
"Nathan. Say hello to your new wife." He says as he steps to the side.
A deer is behind him.
"A.... Deer? Dude just no.... It's an animal that's fucking weird and creepy." I say as I facepalm.
"Are you ready to become a 'Weirdo and a Creep'? Because I see the way you're looking at her." He says with a laugh.
"WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO!?!?!?" I scream.
"The emotions you had for Scootaloo.... You remember those? Well I changed them to feeling for this little doe. I can already feel a hatred towards yourself. Let it grow. Let it consume you. Now I'm taking my leave.... Enjoy the new wife. I'll be waiting. And don't worry. I made sure she knows how to kiss and EVEN the little kinks you have. Crumble for me Nathan. Let that disgust you have towards yourself build. Let it overflow until you are like my angels. Blackened and heartless. You will be my brainless slave and do as I say." He laughs a laugh so loud that it shakes the ground around them both. "Oh and before I go.... Her name is Scoot. After what used to be your precious Scootaloo."
Oestericus laughs as he disappears in a cloud of black smoke that enveloped him.
"This isn't right. A....A Fucking deer?! No. I feel sick." I collapse to my knees as I hold my stomach.
I can hear the clopping of the deer's hooves.
"H-H *dry heave* Hi sweetie. How are you today?" I ask as I try to hold down my breakfast.
The deer rubs it's cheek against mine.
'I'm gonna throw up. I'm gonna fucking throw up. FUCKING THROW UUUUUUPPPPPP!' I scream at myself in my head.
The deer puckers it's lips and lightly places a kiss against my cheek.
"Aww thank you. But I'm feeling a little sick right now. Can you meet me at the entertainment room? I need to get a drink." I say as my body against my will plants a kiss onto the deers cheek.
'I'M GONNA CRY! I CAN'T FUCKING TAKE THIS! I'M GONNA BE SICK! I'M GONNA BE SIIIIIICK!' I cry into my hands.
I can then feel Scoots rub her nose against my hand.
"I'm sorry you had to see me like this. If you want after I've had a drink of water we can watch any movie of your choice." I say with an involuntary smile.
Scoots then starts happily dancing, hopping from hoof to hoof.
'She really is cute. WAIT NO! I need to get out of here!'
I stand up and start to walk towards the kitchen. I enter the kitchen and immediately head towards one of the many cupboards, grabbing a pint glass out of it before walking over to the sink.
'I'm the luckiest man in existence to have such a beautiful wife.' I sigh. 'NO! Oestericus I'll make you scream in agony for this!'
I fill the glass to the brim then start to down in the drink. A tear streaks down my cheek.
'Why can't I look at her with disgust.... I can't help but love her. Fuck.... I.... I'm starting to feel fine with it. His fucking infection is doing this to me! I'll fucking kill him!'
I put the glass down as I pant after downing a large amount of water without taking a break to breathe.
'Enough nonsense. Time to get back to Scoots.' I smile as I leave the kitchen.
'Please save me.'
Author's Note
What did you think? The story is taking a weirder turn as Nathan is slowly being dismantled starting with his self confidence. Please leave a comment so that I know if you guys are enjoying the story so far.
It's been a week since me and Scoots had the talk. Everything's been going great. I'm happy with our position and she's started smiling more. If I could change just one thing. One thing at all. It would be to change myself back to normal. I want to be back to what I used to be. I don't want the half toned skin. I want one or the other. It's weird looking like a human barcode. The wing is also a huge pain. It doesn't even work, so it's basically just making life more annoying. But I have Scoots to make me happier.
I wake up to a fuzzy head resting against my chest. I smile as I can hear and feel Scoots breath wash over my skin.
"It's time to wake up Scoots." I say as I gently nudge her.
She groans then rolls off of the bed, landing with a thump.
"You okay?" I ask as I look over at where she fell.
She's laid on the floor on her belly with her legs laid out like a starfish.
*Snigger*
Scoots looks up at me with a cross look on her face.
"Sorry, sorry." I say as I clear my throat.
She smiles and lets out a laugh of her own.
We laugh together for what felt like hours.
"What do you want to do today?" I ask as I start getting dressed.
"Mmm-Mmm-MMM-MMMMMMM-MMMMMOVIE!" The voice of a young woman in her 20's shouts in frustration.
I immediately drop my shirt to the ground.
"S-Scoots? Did you just.... Talk?" I ask as sit down on the corner of the bed.
She nods her head. "Mmmm-MMM-MMMMMOVIE!" She shouts happily.
"You said a word! A WORD I CAN UNDERSTAND! Hahahahaha! This is AMAZING! Scoots! THIS IS FANTASTIC!" I shout as I start to laugh in happiness.
"IIIIII-IIIIII LLLL-LLLL-LLLLLLOVE YOOOOOUUU SSSS-SSSSSCOOOOTS!" She says as she dances happily.
"I can't believe that you're learning this! THIS IS A DREAM COME TRUE! Hahahaha!" I laugh happily.
"Ttt-Ttttt-TTTTTITTTTTANNNNNNNICCCCC!" She sounds out the words.
"THIS IS AMAZING!" I say as I start to jump around the room in happiness.
"Ddd-Ddd-DDDDDINNER!" She says as she dances in place.
"Scoots. You have no idea how happy this makes me!" I say as tears of happiness streak down my cheeks.
"IIII-IIII-III Lllllove y-y-y-yyyyyyou Ssssssscootsssss!" She says as she wraps her forelegs around me in a hug.
"Nearly Scoots, nearly!" I say as I hug her back. "*I point at her* Scoots. *Then point at myself* Nathan. Now you try." I say with a heart filled to the brim with hope.
Scoots points towards herself "Sssscootsss. *She then points at me* Naaaafennn!" She squeaks happily as she happily hops in place.
"YES! This is amazing Scoots! You're amazing!" I say as I plant a kiss onto her lips.
After a few seconds I pull away and fist pump.
"Sssscoootsss LLLL-LLLL-LLLLLLLLLLLL-LLLLoves Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnaffffffennn!" She says as a blush creeps across her cheeks.
"Scoots we've got to celebrate this! This is amazing!" I say as I pull her into another hug.
"Did somebody say celebrate?!" A pink pony says as she pops up in the hug between my and Scoots.
"AHHHHH THE FUCK! WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU!" I shout in terror.
"I'm Pinkie Pie! Celebrator extraordinaire. I also throw a great party! You know! For celebrations! Now.... What are we celebrating?" She asks as she looks at the deer. "Why are you hugging wildlife? Oh! Oh! Are you like Fluttershy?"
"FlutterShy? Who dat?" I ask as I stand back up and grab my shirt. "Also how did you get in?"
"Fluttershy is the kindest pony in Equestria! She also likes animals! Not as much as you do it seems." Pinkie Pie says as she gives me a strange look.
"What?" I ask as I a few beads of sweat build up on my forehead.
"Nothing! I just thought I saw a bird fly past your window behind you but it was just a pony." She says as she shrugs. "ANYWAY BACK TO PLANNING THE PARTY! WOOOOOO!"
"There's a pony out there?" I ask as I walk over to the window and look out. "I don't see anything.... Are you sure you weren't just imagining it?"
"it was just Fluttershy. Anyway back to the PARTY! What kind of cake? OOOOOOO! How about carrot cake! Or! Or! Banana Nana Rana Dana! OOOOORRRR! Wait.... What's that noise? It sounds like a stampede...." Pinkie Pie says as she rubs a hoof against her chin.
I look back out of the window to see a stampede of 20 deer charging towards my front door.
"WHAT THE HELL!"
A yellow pony with a pink mane opens my front door then ushers the deer in.
"OH FUCK NO!" I shout as I run out of the bedroom.
I sprint down the stairs, nearly tripping down the stairs. As I reach the bottom of the stairs the stampede of deer screech to a stop in front of me. Behind the deer the yellow and pink pony hovers in the air.
"HEY PONY! WHY ARE THERE A FUCK TON OF DEER IN MY CASTLE!" I shout at the pony.
The pony squeaks then hides behind the deer.
"HEY! I'M TALKING TO YOU!" I shout.
"I'll ask her if you want?" Pinkie Pie asks.
"Yes please. I'm confused about the deer." I answer as I scratch my head.
Pinkie Pie then dives head first into the deer like an Olympic diver would.
A few minutes later she pops out of the collection of deer.
"She was gonna ask you if you could look after the deer? They have no place to graze right now and she saw how you where with the deer upstairs and was hoping you would be able to help." Pinkie Pie relays.
I look behind me and see Scoots looking at me with a smile. She nods her head and walks to my side and starts to rub her head against my waist.
"Fine. God damn it. I'll look after the damn deer." I groan as I pinch the bridge of my nose.
"Okay I'll go tell her." Pinkie Pie says happily as she dives back into the deer.
"Really Scoots? Why did you say yes?" I ask.
"Ssshhhhaaarrreee happpppppinnnnnesssss wiffffff dddddddeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrr" She says with a smile.
"I don't think these deer are like you though Scoots. I think they're like the deer I explained earlier." I reply with a sigh.
"Dddddeeeeeer.... NNNNN-NNN-NNNNnooo smarrrrr?" Scoots asks.
"I don't know yet. But I don't think so Scoots." I say as I stroke the back of her neck.
"Mmmm-MMMme ddooooooo baaaaaaaaad?" Scoots asks.
"No, it's okay. We'll just have to find a place for them to live." I answer.
"Sssssscoooootssss sorrrrrrrreee." She mumbles as she sits down.
"Hey hey! It's okay Scoots don't worry about it. We'll find somewhere for them." I say as I kiss the back of her head.
Author's Note
"Sssscootssss ssss-ssss-sssayyys Ssssssoreee!"
The room is dark, lit only by four torches. One on each wall. A tall black figure is sat at a table and another black figure who stands a little shorter is stood at his side.
"Are the deer in place?"
"Yes sir. They are in place, what should we do with the ponies?"
"Get them out of there. They will have some use in the future."
"Yes sir."
A black figure with a pair of black wings walks out of the room.
"You should've just joined by choice. Ah well. Not everyone is as smart as I am." The tall black figure says as he presses a button on his desk.
"Scoots are you nearly finished in there?" I ask with a sigh.
"NNn-Nnn-NNNN-NNNN!-NNNOooo." Scoots replies.
"Well I need you to hurry up. The deer are starting to eat the cushions." I groan.
"Aaaaaa LLll-LLLLL-LLLLLLaaaaaayyyyddddeee Nnnn-nnneeee-nnnneeedddsssssssss toooooooo LLLLL-LLLLLOOoook hhhhh-hhhh-hhhhhhheeerrr beeeeesssssst." Scoots chuckles through the door.
"I know you're not doing your makeup in there! That's the kitchen! Stop eating all of the snacks and help me!" I shout through the door.
I knock on the door a few times only for her to make a "Hmph" noise.
"Fine! I'll do it myself." I groan.
"Yyyyay!" I hear Scoots shout.
I facepalm then start my job of herding the deer together.
"God you guys really ate all of the cushions.... Jesus."
*Ping*.......... *Ping*............. *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping* *Ping*.... *Ping* *Ping*... *Ping* *Ping*
"The fuck was that?" I ask as I look around the room.
I look towards the deer. Their eyes are glowing black.
"Of course not.... Why would there be anything normal anywhere near me." I mumble followed with a facepalm. "Well.... What's so special about you guys then? You gonna be my wives too? Might as well be with how fucking weird my life has become." I groan.
One deer takes a step forward.
"Well then. Let's get this over with. Do your special bullshit and let's see what you've got."
A tall black figure is stood on top of a cloud above Nathan Terez's house looking down and watching his plan unfold. An explosion can be heard, followed by a mans scream. The castle starts to crumble. The once pulsing veins of red are now lifeless amongst the rubble of the castle walls.
"If only you'd become one of my angels by choice Nathan. But that's fine. You may have been protected by Ferititus, but now you're mine." The black figure chuckles.
The top half of Nathan's body is hanging limply out of the rubble. Scoots can be seen nudging Nathan, as if trying to wake him up. Tears start streaming down her face.
The normal half of Nathan's body starts to change. The veins starts to turn black, making it look as if black tentacles are crawling over him. A second black wing bursts through the back of Nathan flinging black blood into the air. Nathan can then be seen pulling himself out of the rubble. The normal part of his skin can be seen darkening. White.... Grey.... Black.... Jet Black.... Pitch Black....
"Good. NOW COME TO ME MY ANGEL!" The black figures voice shouts in a voice so loud that the ground where the castle fell rumbles, as if hit by an earthquake.
Nathan looks up and begins to flap his wings. Nathan starts to leave the ground and flies towards the black figure.
"What do you require Master Oestericus?" Nathan asks.
"I want you to stay by my side for now. I want to watch what your little wifey will do." Oestericus laughs.
"Yes sir." Nathan bows.
"Www-wwhhheeeere? Nnnn-Nnnn-NNNNNAAAFEEEN! Sssscooootss www-www-wwwwannntsss NNnnnafffeeeennn b-b-bbbbbackk." Scoots cries.
Scoots falls onto her belly.
"Ssssscooootsss LLLLLLL-LLLLL-LLLLLOOOOVEEEEEESS NNNNAAA *Sniffle* NNNNAAAAFEEEENN!" Scoots cries into the ground.
Scoots curls into a ball and cries louder.
'No! Scoots pull yourself together. Find Nafen!' Scoots thinks to herself as she stand back up.
She then starts to sprint into the forest.
Scoots spots the bubble that's been keeping Nathan here.
'Scoots find weird animals that weird creature that give us mean deer.' Scoots thinks to herself as she pushes herself harder.
Scoots easily and gracefully dances around low hanging branches and logs that lay on the floor. The tears have dried on Scoots face leaving her with matted fur near her eyes. A house comes into view not far past the bubble.
'Scoots will go there first.'
Scoots bursts through the bubble and sprints towards the house.
"HHHHHHELLLLP! SSSSCOOOOOOTSSSS NNNN-NNNNEEEEDSSS HHHEEEEELLLLLLLPPPP!" Scoots screams.
"Did you hear something Angel?"
"HHHHhhh-hhHHHHEEELLP SSSSCOOOOOTSSSS!" Scoots screams again as she arrives at the front door.
Scoots starts to bang on the door with her fore hooves.
"I-I'm coming!" A voice quietly shouts.
Scoots stops banging the door and starts looking around the area in a panic.
'Scoots needs help now! Hurry!' Scoots thinks to herself as she starts to shake.
"H-Hello?" A voice asks as the door opens.
"NNnn-nnNNNASSSSSTYYYY C-CRREEEEAAAATUUURRREEEE!" Scoots growls.
Author's Note
What did you think? Deer bombs.... What a weird guy Oestericus is....
"O-Oh my! A talking deer!" A yellow pony gasps.
"NNnnnAAAASSSTTYYYY C-C-CCCCREEEEEATURRRREE! GGGGEEEET NNN-NNNN-NNNNN-NNNNNNAAFFFFFFFEEEN HU-HURT!" Scoots half cries half growls.
"M-Me? I don't remember doing that.... W-Where is Nafen?" The yellow pony asks.
"Nn-Nnn-NNNAFFFFEENNN! G-G-G-GOOONE! YYYYYYOOOOOOU GEEEET NNNNAAAAAAFFFEENNNNN HHU-HHHUUUURTTTT! NNNN-NNNNNOOOOW NNNNAAAAAAFFFENNNNN G-GONE!" Scoots whimpers.
"I-I don't know a Nafen. S-Sorry." The yellow pony says as she nervously shuffles in place. “B-But I can help you look for him! T-That is if you w-w-want me too of-of course.”
“Yyyyyou wwwwillllll hhhhhheeelllllllppppp mmmm-mmmmmeeeee f-f-f-fffffinnnnnd hiiiimmmmmmm!” Scootaloo says happily.
“O-Okay. Where w-was Nafen last?” The yellow pony asks.
----2 Years Later----
“Are you ready Nathan?” Oestericus asks.
“Yes sir. I’m ready to help you control the lands.” I say with a salute.
“Good. From what my angels have told me, they have a large army of weak ponies. Kill them all instantly. Got it?” Oestericus asks.
“Yes sir. They won’t even be able to gasp.” I mindlessly drone.
“Fantastic.” Oestericus says before turning away and exiting the war room.
I follow him out onto a balcony looking out onto a cloud field spanning multiple acres, filled with what looked like millions of black deformed ‘angels’.
“Angels! This is our time! We will control these pathetic creatures! Crush there corpses beneath your talons! DON’T LET ONE CREATURE SURVIVE THIS ATTACK! I want to make sure we can create another war zone! A place for my armies to train and gather! Black the sky! Blacken the earth! BLACKEN ALL OF IT! NOT ONE BRIGHT COLOUR IN SIGHT OR I’LL CRUSH YOU ALL WITHIN MY FIST!” Oestericus shouts.
The angels all release an ear piercing high pitched war cry.
“NOW! I want all of you to follow Nathan’s command! He will be leading this attack! If even ONE of you doesn’t follow his order I’ll kill you MYSELF!” Oestericus shouts causing the air to blur for a split second before disappearing.
“YES SIR!” The angels caw.
“Sir?” A feminine voice calls to my left.
I turn towards to see an angel. Not a typical angel like the others. She has a crow head but her body and legs are that of a human but covered in feathers. she has a very curvy body. Almost like that of a model back on earth. Her feet are like that of crows and her arms have been replaced with her wings. but other then that she looks like a feather coated woman.
“What do you want?” I ask emotionlessly.
“I will be your advisor during this battle. I’ll be doing what I can to make sure all goes to plan. My job is to give you intel that the spotter angels find, making sure you have all of the required equipment and to make sure that if they plan something we didn’t expect that we can crush that plan before it can even be finished.” She explains.
“Okay then. You’re help will be needed if we are to crush these vermin on our masters land.” I say as I ball my hands into fists.
She bows then walks out of the room.
“She is a fine specimen isn’t she? She came out wonderfully in my head. She is exactly the right amount of human to make her attractive. Wouldn’t you say Nathan?” Oestericus asks with a smirk.
“I wouldn’t know sir. All feelings and thoughts have been removed for the betterment of our cause.” I drone.
“Ah yes, yes. You are correct. Wouldn’t want you seeing the doe and confusing feelings with your mission.” He nods.
He nods towards the door. I bow before leaving the balcony and re-entering the war room.
“Sir, are you ready to go over the plans?” The feminine angel asks.
“Yes, but before we continue I’ll need to know your name. Calling you angel will get confusing as I’m pretty sure all the angels here are just called ‘Angels’.” I point out.
“Right, you are correct sir. My name is Paene (Pie-Neigh) .” She says as she bows.
“Well Paene there is only one plan and it is guaranteed to work. I go in and kill them all in a blinding flash of black. That black will linger forever in there vision as they die before they will ever be able to see again. Death will be so quick, blink, and you miss it. So painful that no words will ever be able to describe it. I guarantee this victory, we will win without your plan. You’re only wasting you time making these plans. Now if you don’t mind, I was going to relax in the hot-tub before the battle begins.” I say as I brush her off.
“Y-Yes sir.” She says as she bow and leaves the war room.
I follow her into the next room, I watch her head to the right towards the barracks. I sigh and head left towards the captains rest area. A tall dark mahogany door separates the captains area from the rest of the mansion that Oestericus had the angels build. I push open the door and I’m greeted to a sight that every time I look I still feel a small amount of amazement, which itself amazes me since Oestericus removed my emotion and thoughts. In the room is a solid gold floor, a black hot-tub, a grey sauna room and a silver swimming pool.
I look around the room taking a second to decide what I wanted to do, then I remembered I said I was going to use the Hot-tub, so I start to disrobe starting with my shirt.
“Sir! The battles starting earlier then anticipated!” Paene says as she bursts through the door.
“Interesting. Well I’d better get ready.” I sigh.
I pick my shirt up and but it back on, I then turn towards Paene and nod, signalling that I’m ready.
“I’ll see you on the battlefield sir.” She says before running out of the room.
I follow her out of the door and walk down the hallway towards the front door. I open the doors and step onto the clouds outside.
“Today. Today I will rule Equestria!” I laugh.
Author's Note
Well then.... What did you think to this chapter? Here’s a little secret about me and my way of updating. If a chapters get’s comments I’m more likely to update it quicker.... I’m surprised this hasn’t been noticed yet.
'Scoots is perfect.' I think to myself as I sit on the sofa cuddling with my wife.
Scoots is resting her head on my chest as she lightly squeaks in a light snore. A tear streaks down her cheek. I start to stroke her head gently, she stops crying and starts to rub her head against my chest.
"Beautiful." I chuckles as I lightly place a kiss on her forehead.
'Please save me'
Scoots ears flop over her eyes as a blush covers her cheek.
'Wait a minute.... I think Oestericus fucked up.... She's just like the ponies here.... She isn't an animal.... Well she is but.... But she's sentient she just can't talk! I... I'm fine with this.... She's sentient.... She knows what's happening....'
I smile as I finally accept that she isn't just an animal. The same way the ponies here aren't animals. She may not talk but she's just like a mare. I gently rest my hand on the top of her head. Her right ear raises up so she can look at me, which she closes the instant she notices I'm looking back at her. She then uses her forelegs to cover her face as she lightly squeaks into her hooves.
I blush a little at this adorable display.
The movie had stopped a few minutes ago but I was to busy thinking about my situation.
"Hey Scoots?" I ask causing her to peek through her forelegs at me. "Wanna watch another movie?"
She climbs off of the couch and starts to quickly shake her head.
"Which one do you want to watch?" I ask as I stand up and walk towards a tall bookcase filled with Blu-rays, DVD's and VHS tapes.
She walks towards the bookcase and starts to look through them. After a few minutes she finds a movie she likes the look of. She picks up a DVD case and walks over to me with it in her mouth.
"You want to watch Titanic?" I ask.
She nods quickly and does a little dance, hopping from hoof to hoof with a smile on her face.
"You go get comfortable and I'll put the movie in." I say as I bend over and press the eject button on the DVD player.
I can hear her skipping towards the sofa.
I take out the movie we finished watching and put it in it's case, then place Titanic into the DVD player. I stand up and turn around. On the couch Scoots is laid on her side, she winks at me. Immediately afterwards she squeaks then hides behind her forehooves.
I chuckle as I walk towards the couch. As I arrive at the couch she pokes her head out from between her forehooves. As she does this I place a kiss onto her nose. Causing her to flail her legs around and fall off of the couch.
"What's wrong Scoots? What's got you so nervous?" I ask as I crouch down to her.
She looks around the room as if trying to find anything to distract herself. When she can't find anything she sighs then looks towards me and points at me with a hoof.
"Me? What could I have.... Oh.... I know. Scoots. I was in a weird place earlier. Where I'm from Deer are.... What's the best word for it?.... Unintelligent? Yeah, that's the word. You shattered what I thought of deer. Don't get me wrong they're beautiful creatures. But not beautiful as I'd find them attractive. They had no personality.... No.... Intelligence.... But you.... I look at you and my heart thumps.... I look at you and I can't help but smile. You may be a deer but you're not one of the deer I remember. You have a beautiful personality.... You're intelligence.... You may not be able to talk. But there are humans where I'm from who can't talk but they still get love. Scoots.... I want to be with you.... I'm not confused anymore.... I love you Scoots.... Just because you're not human. It means nothing to me anymore now that I know more about you. I fell in love with Scootaloo. She's not human but she's sentient.... Just like you.... Scoots.... Will you give me another chance? To love you? To show you how I really feel?" I ask. "If I'd have said that where I'm from I'd have been arrested.... *chuckle* Scoots..... To me. You're worth prison. But luckily we're here. We don't have to worry about it." lower onto my knees. "Scoots.... Will you love me? One more time?"
Tears build up in her eyes. She springs to her hooves and jumps towards me. I throw my arms out making sure to catch her. She sits in my arms in the princess position. She looks at me with teary eyes then plants a passionate kiss onto my lips. I smile before closing my eyes and start to kiss her back.
A full minute later our lips part.
"I'll *pant* take that as a yes. *Chuckle*. I love you Scoots. Now let's watch that movie you wanted to watch." I say as I wipe away her tears.
She nods then nuzzles against my chin.
I carry her towards the sofa laying down with her still in my arms curled into a ball on my chest. She lightly places a kiss on my cheek then blushes and hides behind her hooves. I chuckle and stroke her head.
Author's Note
What did you think? I think Scoots is an adorable character.... Am I the only one?
