Marathon

If you've read through the entire fic to this chapter, I am amazed that you actually put up with it. Thanks.

If you just skipped to this chapter to learn why it was cancelled, I hope you can take the lesson here and apply it to yourself.

There are a few reasons why this fic has been cancelled, but the essential reason is:

This fic is too difficult and complex for me to write.

I am not a good enough writer for it. I'm amazed I actually came up with something like this. It could easily hit 200k words. There's an absurd amount of possibility to this, especially if you incorporate the Doctor (which was in the plan) and especially if Evan goes home without remembering to get his body back. Or you could just say that the portal did that as well. And then of course with improved (though rather expensive) internet shopping you could buy almost anything.

This might actually make an interesting game... a much more action-oriented Scribblenauts.

If you want to have a go at this plotline, message me and I'll tell you the rest of the plotline that I've come up with.

Oh and one final note, the reason I stopped here and finally realized this is because I can't write Celestia to save my life.

Or anyone else's for that matter. Or even a penny probably.

I'll go get a few more fics under my belt and if nobody writes this themselves then I'll take a crack at it again.

Goodbye.