Chapters A dark past, a light future
Sorry if this story is missing a lot of a's and n's because on the keyboard I'm using those keys don't work well, and the other keyboards are loud. FYI I'm writing this a 5 a.m. pst.
Running. That is all I can think about. I need to run. They can't catch me. Brother would want me to run. So I ran. Ran for hours. The people I am running from killed my parents, killed my brother, and now are trying to kill me. I ran for years. I ran until I was 20 years old. About 6 years of running. From 2014 to 2020. And now, I need revenge. I know where they live. I am watching them. Waiting for just one to be in the house.
As the father and one of the sons leaves the house, I sneak up to the gate of the house. It is a big 3 story house with an electric fence around the perimeter. At the front, there is a heavy stainless steel gate that goes 10 feet up with electric barbed wire at the top.
As the father and son get in their limo, I stand ready near the gate. When their limo opens the gates, I wait for the it to pass, then quickly rush inside, before the gates close. I look up at the mansion, and thinks of where the eldest brother might be. I climb up the walls of the mansion, and get in on the second story window. I look inside the room. Just a bedroom. It has a twin bed and a drawer in the middle, like you see in hotels. I slowly walk to the door. I grab the golden handle, and turn it slowly. When I peek out the door, the hallway is empty, except for the eldest brother who is looking out a window. I start to sneak up to him. I grab the weapon I brought from outside.
I put it on my right hand, and then get behind him. I should just kill him quickly, make it easier for me, but he made my life terrible. So i grab his shoulder, turn him around and punch him the the stomach with the brass knuckles. Blood starts gushing out from the holes I made. I punch him again, and again, over and over. His stomach is riddle with holes, all the while he is choking on his own blood, and holding his stomach. I quickly cut both of his hands with the side blade, then with my left hand, I grab some of the holes in his stomach, and pull them off. *TEAR * I hear him scream in pain as I tear his flesh off his stomach. I reach my left had into his stomach, grab his small intestine, pull it out, then wrap it around his neck. "I've always wanted to do this," I say. Then i pull on it, choking him with his organ. He starts struggling after he realizes he is being choked, but it's too late. With the lack of blood, he can't get enough oxygen to his muscles to fight back.
I hear sirens. Sounds like someone heard his screams. I quickly cut his throat, then try and run away I run to the bedroom, grab one of the pillows, and then put it on my right arm. I run out the bedroom window, and when I hit the ground I roll. I get up and shake the little shock I have from jumping. I run to the front gate, press the green button, and the gate opens. I run out of the compound, and start to run to the forest behind it. Before I could get to it, the police showed up. They drove their cars in front and behind me, then got out and held their weapons at me.
"Drop the weapon!"
"Drop the weapons sir, or we will shoot!"
I drop the weapon. Not like I can do much else. So I let them cuff me, take me to their police station, and discuss what my sentence will be. Not like it matters. All criminals get sentenced to testing nowadays. I just relax while I can, because once they start testing, I will never rest again.
They throw me into a chamber, and then tie my arms and legs to the chair that resides in the middle. I laugh and say,"Called it!" The guards just look at me and shake their heads. Ha. I don't care, I'm about to be tortured to the point where I can't even be called a human. So it doesn't matter if some guards hate me.
As I wait, I start to whistle. The guards respond with a punch to the face. I laugh. Then the 'Doctor' walks in. He is pushing a cart full of syringes. Each has a different color liquid in them. "Let's see which one we should start with. Mr.-
"Ace. Everyone calls me Ace."
"Well then Mr. Ace, which one do you want first?"
I look at all the the colors. Red, orange, orange-yellow, red-orange, royal purple, purple, green, yellow-green, green-green, etc. I look and say, "I want red, because that's what color you'll be when if I get out of here."
"Red it is Mr. Ace."
He grabs the syringe, flicks it a bit, then grabs my arm, and injects the liquid into one of my veins. I start to feel a fire in my body. I start to scream. The pain was like having a knife stabbed completely through you, which I know of course. Suddenly, my sight starts to get blurry. I close my eyes and try to endure the pain. About 10 minutes late, the pain goes down. I open my eyes and get freaked the fuck out. I see a thing, with a black robe covering it's body, and it's head covered by the hood. In his right had he has a scythe. Behind him I can see something that looks like wings.
I say the one thing that comes to my mind, "Sup Death." Everyone in the room looks at me like I'm a madman. "What?"
"You can see me?" asks Death.
"What are you talking about? Are you having hallucinations?" asks the 'Doctor'.
"Of course I can fucking see you, otherwise I wouldn't be talking to you. Now can you please kill these people, and get me out, or am I dying?" The 'Doctor' looks at me like I just lost my mind, which I probably did.
"You have a destiny, and it doesn't end here, I will release you, then you will come with me." He grabs one of the guards who drops instantly to the floor, dead. The other guard, starts to shoot everywhere, but the bullets go right through Death. He grabs the guard, and he dies too. He cuts me free with his scythe, then tells me, "You said you would make him red when you got out, so here is your chance."
I look at the 'Doctor', who is standing there horrified. I grab the empty syringe just used on me, walk up to the 'Doctor', and stab him in the stomach. I keep stabbing and stabbing. Even Death turned away. Blood was flying everywhere. When I finished stabbing the 'Doctor', he was in two pieces. Upper body, and lower body. I look at the floor, and it is covered in blood, and me? I am red. My entire body is red.
I look to Death and say,"Let's go."
I get up and Death opens the door to the room. We both walk out of the room. The hallway we walk into is littered with dead bodies. I bet it was Death. As we walked I looked at the guards. I see one that has a nice sized combat dagger. I grab it and hold on to it while we walk. When Death and I walk outside. I start to laugh. Death looks at me with a 'What the hell is wrong with you?' look and so I say," I'm the only person to ever escape that prison. And I can see Death. What more could I ask for?"
"You could ask for a paradise to live in. That's why I am here. To send you there so you can live a better life. One without pain or misery." He looks at me and I give him a 'You fucking kidding me?' look. "What?
"All paradise has a downside. Like heaven for example. Only good people can go there, even though bad people can change. I bet you that the place you want to send me to will have bad in it, because all good comes at a price."
"Well yes it has downsides, but that place is much better than here. I can assure you of that."
"Okay, then send me."
"First I will give you something to help you, the forests in there are very dangerous, and we don't want you to die prematurely, so I will give you powers, that of a god, so you may live your life however you want. One more thing, try not to kill anypony."
"Anypony? What do you me-" *FLASH
"-an?" I say, then realize that he's not there so I look around. I see trees, that look like cartoons. And Death said anypony. I start to remember something from my childhood that looked like this. Ah yes. My Little Pony. Wait, I'm in a forest, and the only one they show in there is the Everfree. "Aww, damn it."
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This is in red because it is my favorite color. And black is my favorite shade. Anyway editor required. Also I will be making these chapter at random because I write just because I'm bored. Last I like OC characters. Send me name, colors, personality and stuff, and if you can provide a picture I will be grateful. That's it, aside from the fact that this is my first fiction. Also to the moderator if he is reading this. Do I need more MLP stuff in here or is it good?(put this here to see if i could avoid the scolding it says in the rules) :D
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too much happens in here so I just typed a random title, and an awesome game
Bonjourno my friends. I require auxilium. I will need OC's so I need your help. For a fuego like this needs help to grow. I will have many problems, but that is just the things are. I will need your auxilium to help me do this. Vale.
"Aww, damn it."
Of course I would end up here. Well might as well search for Ponyville before I die. Well then onward, to Narnia! (My friend will probably kill me for saying his line. Don't be surprised if this is the last chapter.) I start to sneak around. I normally would yell out and hope someone hears, but after years of being on the run, I learned you can't expect anything of people. No matter who it is they can still betray you. (true story) A friend is like a bomb. You can do all you want to stop them, but eventually they will explode, and the closer you are to them the more it hurts. I had a best friend once. Then he killed my family, and so I killed him right before I came here. His name was David, the eldest child I killed.
I always played games with him. We always played games like Left 4 Dead 2, Team Fortress, Terraria, Minecraft, and my favorite, League of Legends. We always used mics to talk to each other. But the his family learned that my family had a bounty on our heads. Them, being a hit family, decided we had to go, and that friendship is worth nothing compared to money. The next school day on my way back from school, I saw David. I walk up to him and was about to talk to him, when he pulls a knife from his backpack ad puts it against my throat.
"David, what are you doing?"
"You gots money on your head, so my family are here to claim it."
"David, you always forget one thing about me. I know the human body." As soon as I said that I grabbed his hand, pushed my finger on the vein in his wrist and then wretched the knife from his hand. Then I kicked him in the face when he tried to pry my hands off his wrist. I ran away. I ran home to tell my parents about what happened when I see a note saying, 'You're next.' I look around for traces of my family, and find blood trails leading to the basement. I go down the steps and see a pile of my 2 brothers, one who was supposed to go to college next year, and my other brother who taught me to read, and my parents dead. I start to cry. I was like that for maybe 5 minutes when i hear car doors closing outside.
I quickly go upstairs to my parents's bedroom, reach for the top drawer of the dresser, open it and pull out my dads p22. I also grabbed the key in there. I quickly load the gun, then run downstairs to the gun safe my dad had in the closet. I unlocked it and pulled out the ak-47 (that gun is fun to shoot) and the ruger22 hunting rifle. I grabbed as many bullets as I can, put them in a backpack, then run out the back door.
I hear shouting from the front door, so I ran. I ran for 6 years. Committed many murders within that time, and then killed David.
1 week later
"I slowly wander around the Everfree forest, watching and listening for anything that might prove harmful. I slowly look around and decided that it is time to rest for the day. I start to think that it might be a good idea, but the other part of me says it would be bad, because after one week of wander, I have to have made some progress."
My self-loathing monologue is suddenly interrupted by an eep from a bush nearby. I suddenly hold my hands out in a position as though I have a gun, and when I look, there is a good old fashioned p22 with a laser-sight. I smile, and approach the bush. When I am close enough to move the bush, I quickly push the leaves away, revealing a cowering little yellow pegasus with a pink mane. My mind shattered. When I come back to reality, she is gone, and all that is left to show that she is was there is a pink hair.
I decide that since I'm close to ponyville, unless she now lives in the middle of the Everfree, I should climb a tree and see if I can see it. I climb the nearest tree, and spot a small town and come to the conclusion that it is Ponyville. I slowly walk towards it thinking I'm lucky for not encountering anything in this forest when I suddenly think of a quote from an old Left 4 Dead 2 comic. "You jump into a lake full of piranhas and you ain't gettin' attacked? Means there's a shark nearby. So what is following me?
"Awoooooo!"
"Shit that sounded like a werewolf."
I start to get worried and get walking to the town. As I'm walking I hear panting nearby and I try to pinpoint it, but it seemed to be coming from everywhere. I started to panic. I heard stories of werewolves and how they tear their victims limb from limb. I start to sweat thinking that I haven't experienced all there is to experience in Equestria, when suddenly i see a shadow behind me, and then I feel what it's like to face plant. Hurts like a mother fucker. I then feel something warm moving down my back, then I pass out like a real man, with a groan, fart, then darkness. Beat that guys.
Anyway I woke up some undefined time later, and boy was I angry.
Warning excessive swearing here. I am censoring it cause it is too profane for me
"A f█king werewolf f█king f█ked the shit out my f█king a$$ while I sat there shi++ing my pants! What the f█k!"
(according to Death, who can break the 4th wall, told me that my profanity has reached it's limit today.)
I look in many directions, trying to clear a fogginess building up in my head. Suddenly I feel a sharp pain in my bones, as though something was tearing them to pieces. I start howling in pain, crying for someone to save me from the pain. I start to cry out again, when I only let out a growl. I start to realize that the pain is subsiding and that my skin is itching. I start to scratch it when I feel fur. Wut? Fur, excruciating pain, and (looks at hands) paws. "I, sir, am a badass werewolf." Then I realized, why do I always talk to myself? Wait, 6 years of solitude, oh yeah.
Anyway I start to think about weird things, chewing on sticks, bury a bone, chase my tail, bury a bone, sniff another animal's ass, eat a pony, sniff a-. Wait, eat a pony? Eh, thought worse stuff. Wait, (so much waiting, my patience is wearing thin Ace!) how am I in control of my body?
I dunno? Maybe you should SHUT UP AND JUST GO TO PONYVILLE ALREADY! I don't want to spoil everything yet.
"Umm okay red voice." How can a voice be red? I start to walk down to Ponyville thinking I've gone insane, wait, (*growl*) I already was insane. Nevermind. I walk down to Ponyville, and see a group of 6 ponies. 2 earth ponies, 2 pegasi, and 2 unicorns. I walk up to them slowly so if they see me I wont look like some predator running at them to eat them.
When I walk all the way up to them, 5 of the ponies are in front of the purple one. One saw me, then passed out. The other saw me then gawked at me. The purple one, seeing the other ponies all with weird faces on their faces, turns around to see me, then screams out monster, and all the ponies run away.
I tried to think how I looked threatening to them, then I remember, I am a fucking werewolf. No duh. Then I sigh. Life in Equestria is not turning out how I wanted it to. All I want is friend, I thought to myself. Suddenly I hear bubbling. I look around for the source, and see that it is a red pool of god knows what on the ground. I think to myself, what is the worst that could happen, and dip a finger in to taste the liquid. Well I'll be damned. It's Kool-Aid. I start to wonder how it got there when suddenly, I see something starting to rise from the Kool-Aid. As it rises the head pops up and I notice it has a horn. Hmm, maybe a summoned unicorn or something, I thought to myself. Then as it rises to the chest, I notice wings.
"Well I'll be damned. An alicorn." Then it fully formed. It was a fully formed alicorn. I poke it once, and notice how I feels like dough. "Hmm. *GASP* BEST NAME EVAR FOR YOU!" I called him Doughboy. Original huh. Then I see it looking at me. "Um. Hi?"
"Hello."
"What's your name?"
"I don't have one."
"HELL YES! YOUR NAME IS NOW DOUGHBOY!"
"Your very original aren't you."
"Shut up. I created you."
"Fine... You can call me Doughboy but I want a real name to use around other ponies."
"Then we will have to decide on that now wont me
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We're off to see the dungeons! (and finally a description)
"Hmm. What names do you want?"
"Justin?"
"Who the hell are you, Justin beiber?"
"What?"
"Nevermind. So got any other names?"
"How bout Claudio?"
"Sure, I guess. But I will always call you Doughboy." Then I decide that we should go, before a monster from the Everfree tries to get us. When we walk into town, I see all the doors locked and streets clear. Kind of like in a western showdown. Then I hear a *GASP* from a tree near the middle of town. Hmm. Must be my werewolf ears. Anyway, I go to said tree, and then see it's a building.
"Ah, yes the library."
"HEY, A LITTLE HELP BACK HERE!"
I turn and see Doughboy collapsed on the floor, and laugh. "Dude, why are you on the floor?"
"Cause I need to learn how to use my body dumbass. I have the mind of a demon, not the body."
"Well I'll carry you, and we'll go to the library, cause I really want to go." When I pick him up he feels real. "Hey Doughboy, your a real pony now!" (Get the reference? No? You make me unhappy)
I carry him up to the door and then knock. The response I get is, "No one is here mister monster. Please leave a message after the beep. BEEP."
I whisper to Doughboy,"Do they have phones in Equestria? Cause I don't think they do."
Doughboy whispers to me, "I don't even think they have cars, so no."
"Then Pinkie just broke the fourth wall, right?"
Eeeyup.
"GOD DAMN RED VOICE GET OUTTA MY HEAD!"
"I heard it too Ace."
"Yeah... Wait, how do you know my name? I never told you." I decide to glare at him.
"Umm I have your mind, well most of it."
"But you said you had the mind of a demon."
"Yeesssssss."
"Wha- Oh you jackass."
I look at the door. "Hey Doughboy, you wanna break down the door or shall I?"
"You because you can stand up you ass."
"Allrighty then. " (Ace Ventura right there) I look to the left, and to the right. Still the same barren ghost town, except it's inhabited by pussies. I take a few steps back, then charge at the door. The impact shook the tree, but the door still fell. I laugh at how easy that was. They didn't even have a deadbolt on that door. I stop laughing at them and then look at the ponies inside. I expected to see the mane 6 all ready to use their elements of harmony on me or something. All I get is gawking. I see that they are not looking at me, but behind me.
I turn around and see Claudio there, except he is bigger. He is about the size of me, or taller, and I'm 6 foot 2. (finally a description of what I look like) I have black shaggy hair, I have a little muscle built up, but not like a body builder (they look disgusting). I always wear black, helps hide in places. Lastly my shoes are steel toed, but on the inside so no one knows, and have a knife on the bottom part of the shoe. (end of description. Please draw a picture, if I like I will eventually change description to match)
Claudio is standing there like he is a badass, and walks past me, then says, "Thank you my pet for opening that blasted door."
"Claudio, your my minion, I'm not yours. So go try and calm down those ponies. Oh and Claudio?" Claudio turns around. I punch him across the face and say, "Screw you." Then I start looking at some books.
Claudio
I approached the mares, but they kept scooting away from me. I tried to talk to them when I hear a boom outside. I look out one of the libraries windows, and say "Hey Ace?"
"Yeah?"
"You think you could take out an army of armored ponies?"
"Probably not, why?"
"Well we better hope that I have strong powers then."
"Claudio, why did you ask me that question?"
"Look out the door."
Ace
Jesus, can't a man get some time alone? I start to walk to the door, when I hear someone outside yelling commands. I walk to the door and look at what is happening. I look out and see this.
I saw all that, minus the stormtrooper armor. One song came to mind as I decided to charge . I quickly raised my arm to shove them out of the way when a shield appeared on my arm. I got surprised by this, but still used it to smash the royal guards aside. Blood flew everywhere. I let go of the shield, and 2 katanas appear in my hands, I grab them tight and start swinging. One after another the royal guards fell. I started to laugh maniacally. I started to get angry that there were so many of them. I start to heat up. Then I burst into flames. The royal guards all back away. Then I exploded. My flesh flew everywhere. I scream as my life slowly faded away.
Claudio
When I saw Ace catch on fire. I realized I needed to help. I started running towards him, but the guards stood in my way. Most were on the ground but there were still maybe 1-2 hundred of them. I start running as fast as I can to stop them from getting to what remained of Ace. I knew he couldn't have died. I would have faded away if he did. I ran at the guards, then as I drew near, they burst into flames, and slowly started to melt. The screams of pain from them were deafening. I still ran, trying to reach my friend. Many things around me exploded, even a guard. The bloodshed and fighting had scorched most of the library behind me. When I reached Ace, I saw a skeleton, that was slowly rising.
"Ace?"
"Can't let you do everything."
We ran at the remaining guards. I saw Ace tear the head off one, then his werewolf instincts kicked in, making him eat it. He started to grow his flesh back. After a few more minutes, all the guards were either dead, or bleeding to death due to loss of limbs. When I looked back at Ace, I saw him inside a glowing white cage. I look up and see somepony wearing gold armor, who is an alicorn like me.
"Beast, what is thou doing within our lands?"
Oh crap, if Ace's memories are correct, that's fucking Celestia and Luna. I see Ace, who is starting to change back to human. Celestia and Luna see him change to human and stand back. "HAHAHAHA, you think you can hold me back with your 'cage'? I will tear you limb from fucking limb, then watch as you bleed to death. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!"
"Ace, what the hell man, your going way past what you normally do."
"That's because when I blew up, I spoke with Death, and I can do ANYTHING!"
"What madness is this creature speaking. You I demand that you explain this to us," said Luna.
I take a breath to start talking, but when I look up I see Ace, standing behind Celestia and Luna. When they see me staring past them, they turn around, and see Ace.
Ace
"Hello there," I say with a smirk. They both just gasp at me, and I laugh. "Man watching you be afraid of me is so funny. Anyway sorry about what I said before, I have a terrible sense of humor. So yeah also sorry about your guards. You know, I'm thirsty." I raise my hand, and one of the guards on the guard suddenly regrew his limbs, and looked around warily. When his eyes reached me, he started cowering. "Hey, I'm thirsty, get me some water and I might not kill your princesses, except maybe Luna. She is the best pony EVAR!" Luna blushed at that. The guards looks at Celestia, and she just nods, then the guard starts running to a random house.
I look at Celestia and think, Man, that is one nice ass, not as nice as Luna's, but nice. I see Celestia blush. "Oh, fuck you heard that didn't you?" All I got was a nod from Celestia.
Luna looks at me and asks, "Heard what?"
"You don't wanna know."
"I am the princess of this land so y-"
"Look princess, I think you look great, and what not, but your a princess because you are an alicorn. Hey! Claudio, get out of that stupor and come here." He shakes his head and starts walking to me. When he reaches me, I grab his wings and hold them out. I hear a gasp from both Celestia and Luna. "See Luna, you are a princess because you are an alicorn, but looky here. I got an alicorn too. So he should be King not prince because of Monarchy. His is the heir because he is an alicorn and all alicorns are royalty. Like you, Celly here, and Cadence. You are actual royalty according to your rules. He is a male, and even here males still have a little more 'power' over others, so all hail fucking king Claudio."
"Can I actually be king?"
"No screw you, you are my bitch forever."
"Damn..."
"Anyway, Luna, your pretty, your powerful, but man can you be such a, whats the word, ah yes, 'stuck up'"
Luna looks at me angrily while Celestia is still staring at Claudio in shock. Then I see the guard I sent away running at me with water. I see him and decide to fuck with him, so I summon up some water and start drinking. The guard keeps running at me with the water, until he sees me already drinking water. I look at him and ask him, "Problem? (Troll Face)" Then I burst out laughing. I raise both of my hands, and all of the royal guards heal and come back to life. "Alright, I'm ready to go to the dungeons, but only if Claudio is allowed to live and is given, hmm, 1 million bits."
Everyone but Claudio looks at me in shock. "What? Is 1 million bits a lot? If it is, I don't care. "
I see a guard who is wearing like a brush on his helmet, signifying rank. "We don't give anything to monster like you."
"Fine." I open one of my palms, point it and the Moon (it's night btw) Then close my hand. Suddenly the moon and all the stars are gone. Everyone around me gasps, except for Luna, she passes out. "If you think that is strong, wait till morning, the sun is going too."
Everyone, Claudio included in this one, look at me in shock. I see Celestia say something to one of the unicorns, and then the unicorns teleports away. A few minutes later, the unicorn is back with a large sum of money in some bags. I laugh and say, "Well your part of the deal is done, so now for mine." I put my hands out and watch as they clip some magic cuffs that are supposed to cut off magic.
As we start walking to the edge of town, I see a few chariots fly toward us. We get into the carts and start flying away. I wave goodbye to Claudio, then realize how high we are. Vertigo go away >:P. Then I decided to start singing to distract myself.
We are off to be locked in some dungeons!!!
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Hi umm. yeah. OCs please tell me bout some of something. Kinda boring with only 1.