My Grave Error

by iShatYouNot
The first and maybe last human to court with Luna. Will the human be able to keep his promise of love and devotion towards Luna or focus on getting back to Earth, his true home?

Here is Dave and he doesn't know how or when he got here. And here is a magical land called Equestria filled with talking ponies, talking cows, talking everything. And he has feelings for Princess Luna and Princess Luna has feelings for him they Love each other, simply put. But Dave has problems deciding whether he should accept or reject those feelings, and will he figure out his mysterious past? And get back to his real home Earth?


How will it end?
You choose in the comments!


Credits:

Edited by: An anonymous user who doesn't want to be known
Cover art by Me, put together lazily and in like 3 minutes on Photoshop
Story Idea Story inspiration from a certain royalty x human writer, who, sadly moved on from MLP and onwards to the SVTFOE (Star vs the forces of evil) fandom.


(Edits and/or updates)
1 - Better punctuation and words used, hope you enjoy the new found glory!
2 - Looking for someone to 'Donate' A cover picture!
3 - Some chapters may be rushed, from this point onwards (24/07/2017)
4 - Got bored, made a badly photoshopped picture of Luna and some guy.
5 - Desperately Looking for someone to 'Donate a pic' ASAP!
6 - 150 views! Wow! Thanks! Be sure to tell me what I need to improve on!


[size=2em]STORY IS ON MASSIVE HIATUS AND WILL NOT BE UPDATED FOR A VERY, VEEERY, LONG TIME![/size]

Everyone
On Hiatus
Tragedy
Random
Human
Sad
Drama
 

5309 words: Estimated 27 minutes to read

5 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1 - Love at first-(ish) sight 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1036
  2. Chapter 2 - I don't know what to name this chapter. 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1084
  3. Chapter 3 - Kissing THE Night 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1114
  4. Chapter 4 - Blast to the past 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1006
  5. Chapter 5 - Tub full of descisions 1970-01-01 00:00:00 UTC
    1069