Chapters Author's Note
i reset this story because one of my friends on here was right. i made the character too op and it was just too much. So i hope you guys enjoy this version more, bye my little deathsongs
Prologue
Summer in the Crystal Empire was close, but it was not going so well. The Princess wanted to know if any children were missing. The orphanages always were filled with the ponies that wish they could have a family, but were unlucky to have one. The princess was about to leave till she heard the cry of a baby come from an alley. She walked down the alley and found a strange looking foal in a box.
The foal had blue scaly fur, and his eyes were the colors of the Crystal Heart. His giggle reminded the princes of someone she loved, and his orange mane was messy which the princess thought was cute. She picked up he baby to find it had a diamond tipped tail and the jewel glowed like a glow crystal. But after she turned him, she started to bolt for the castle with the baby in her magical grasp.
"Princess Luna, Princess Celestia, i have just found this child in the streets." The two alicorn sisters started to examine the child, not knowing what to do.
"Sadly, we are just as lost as you are with this darling." The princess of the night started to rock the child as it tried to get comfortable with it's wings. Finally relaxing, the child started to sleep. The night princess asked if she and her sister could take care of it. The Crystal Empire's Princess nodded but before they could say another word, the baby floated out of the tower. The princesses were scared as the baby was now somewhere in the streets again.
Meanwhile...
"Where is our kid Torchtail? I thought you were going to bring him here." Chrysalis was pacing as the dragon alicorn was examining the coach that he had ordered bring his son here. He growled at one of the biggest drone as it stood proud to have lost the kid. "Seems like your hiding something drone, tell me what you know."
The large changeling marched to the front and spoke in a irritated tone.
"I got rid of him...he is not a pure changeling, so he is not fit to be here" he nodded to the rest of his group but they didn't move. "You fools, i'm the one who should be getting the throne, not him. I'm a pure changeling!" Before he could turn around the alicorn stabbed the him. The drone fell to the ground and his blood spilled onto the hard, rocky floor.
"I want at least one, honest drone tell me where he is." A small changeling walked in-front of the group and spoke up.
"He is at the Crystal Empire your majesties." The small drone bowed and waited for the king and queen to yell at her. Instead, the king brought her with him to a special room. When he exited, the drone was no longer a drone. She was like the king, dragon like wings and tail, but she had a horn and face like a normal pony.
"This is my new daughter. Everyone, welcome Princess Turquoise." The other changelings bowed and walked away after being dismissed.
"So, i'm your daughter?" He nodded and explained why he changed her: he wanted her to teach his son what his new species of pony could do. She nodded and walked off down the tunnels, only to be stopped by the queen.
"Turquoise, if Torchtail changed you, he must have seen you as a great future leader. I want you to run the hive when you are ready too. And Breakup will be able to run his own kingdom the way he wants to. Thank you for telling the truth, it helps Torchtail get used to being around us better." Chrysalis looked behind her as Torchtail put his foreleg around Chrysalis' neck in a hugging way.
Back at the Empire...
The child was walking around a small tree, apples lied on the ground and the child was hungry. After a long while of walking, the child stopped and bit into a apple. The child grew into the size of a filly and gained enough knowledge that he was able to speak. While eating the apple he bit into, a small colt walked into the garden crying. The small hybrid child floated a apple to the colt, who walked over to the hybrid and smiled. The hybrid wiped the tear from the colt's eye with his tail.
"Hello, i'm Sombra what is your name?" The hybrid was hesitant at first but he started to speak none the less.
"The last thing i remember someone calling me was Breakup, Breakup Tear. I am happy to know your name Sombra."
The child heard a familiar voice and climbed up the tree. Sombra watched him hide as the princesses walked into the garden. Fear rose inside of Breakup as the tall figures walked towards the tree.
"It's no use sister, we lost the child. We will head to Canterlot and hope that he will live a long, happy life."
Eighteen Years Later...
Breakup and Sombra were at the tree, eating apples as usual. Breakup never got adopted, but he was as civilized as a fancy man. Sombra was reading a bit, and he had said he found something claiming to be his mother. Breakup was happy for him, but he said he still had to do something before he wanted to leave. Breakup smiled but a tear ran down his face. He had fallen for the colt since the day they met, but he knew he would never love him back. Sombra walked up to Breakup and wiped the tear away from Breakup's cheek.
"Are you alright? You have been upset lately." Breakup looked up at Sombra and he nearly turned away, except Sombra brought him into a hug.
"Sombra, i...like you, but i know you never liked me back." Sombra quickly separated from him. "Somb-" He was going to ask Sombra something, but was interrupted by a kiss. Breakup eased into it and smiled. When they separated, he felt like melting into a puddle, but he watched Sombra tear up.
"I'm sorry about all of that, i should have waited a bit longer" Breakup just smiled and walked to the now grown-up stallion.
"Sombra, its alright. I actually wanted to do that for a long time." Breakup dragged Sombra into another kiss then seperated. "I'll stay here till you come back, ok?" Sombra nodded and walked away to do as he wanted.
1,000 Years Later...
Breakup sat underneath the tree and sulked about his lost love. Looking up at the sky, his tears were the only things he didn't want to lose. They reminded him of his lost love. For him to be alone, was like being in torture. A single pink mare walked into the garden and found where he was.
"Hi there, i'm Pinkie Pie! Whats your name?" The pink mare waited for a response, then walked over to Breakup.
"I'm...I'm Breakup Tear...what do you want?"
"Well...we just defeated King Sombra and freed The Empire of it's tyrant king." Breakup finally let the tears fly and sob out his worries. His love was consumed by dark magic, took over the Empire, and now he would never see him again
"Well...now i know where he was all these years." The pink pony cocked her head at his statement, then walked closer to Breakup
"What do you mean?" Breakup raised his head and got up, he was now almost at the level the leaves began at the tree.
"Because i love him, with all my heart." he continued his sobbing, but what he didn't notice was that their tree was glowing, and changed into a complete crystal.
"You fell in love with that varmint. If what you say is true, then how old are you? And why do you have that cloak on?"
The orange mare looked at him with anger. Breakup sighed but removed the cloak, revealing his entire large body to be exposed to the world. His legs were long and instead of hooves, he had small claws. His wings were a fading teal color, but his tail ended with the large diamond. His horn had grown long, as did his orange mane. His eyes emitted a pink mist that smelled of taffy. His cutie mark was a heart with a crack down the middle, it also had two pony heads looking away from each other. A single teal tear was at the center of his cutie mark.
The ponies looked at him with amazement, then one of the princesses walked out of the shadows. The princess gazed upon the large stallion. She smiled and greeted him.
"Hello, i'm Princess Cadence, who are you?"
"I'm Breakup, Breakup Tear, your majesty." Breakup bowed while still shedding tears. His tree started to glow again, but this time something amazing happened. The tree started to write on a slab. Breakup read the note aloud for everyone to hear as the tree finished.
"I write this letter as a sign of hope, Sombra will return Breakup. You have to have faith. Your mother and father are worried about you. King Torchtail and Queen Chrysalis need you, they want to know if you are still alive. You are destined to save Equestria, i hope you find The Eggs Of Truth and The Elements Of Life. If not, you might turn to stone. Don't fail us Breakup.
Yours Truly, Starswirl"
"I'M DESTINED TO SAVE EQUESTRIA!?!?!?" Breakup's shout could be heard across the empire. After his shouting he fainted and the group of ponies took him to the main castle.
Chapter One: Medical Truth
Something has gone wrong. We don't seem to have an archived copy of that chapter. Chapter Two: Artifact Revival
When they arrived at Canterlot, Rose gave Breakup the spell and let him do his own thing. As she left, Breakup moved the furniture so he had room. His magic aura was the color of emeralds and his eyes gave off a pink, wispy smoke as he looked for a table. When his search was complete, their was a knock at the door. He opened it up to reveal a trio of fillies, he invited them in and told them to watch the magic happen. The CMCs sat down and waited for Breakup to start the spell. Breakup started to charge his horn, but the spell was making him weak. When he recovered and continued his spell, the fillies were excited to see him blast the rock and a body form. The small foals watched the large stallion almost collapse when he stopped the spell.
"Um, sir? Are you OK?" Breakup cracked an eye open and tried standing up, but the ache in his muscles prevented it. He was giving up till another hoof touched his cheek, he felt weird about it as it was bigger than the fillies' hooves. Breakup opened his eyes wider and started to cry, his lost love was standing in-front of him. Breakup started to get up again, and after a few attempts he was on his feet. Sombra walked closer to Breakup, he noticed that Breakup was twice his size now. Sombra circled the stallion, looking at what a thousand years had done to his body. Breakup was nervous, Sombra knew Breakup by heart. The former king started to speak as Breakup shed a few more tears.
"It has been so long since i have seen you darling. I'm sorry for making you wait on me for so long. I should have listened to you. That power wasn't what i needed, what i needed was you." Breakup put Sombra's cheek into his claws and stroked his cheek softly.
Breakup breathed in deeply, try to fight back tears of joy. "Sombra, i am just so happy to have a second chance of working out our relationship. I mean, i have learned so much since i left the Crystal Empire. So i think we should settle where we can quickly head to the castles if need be. I'm just...still taking in that you are back." Breakup finished his rambling with a long kiss on Sombra's lips.
Sombra shot his eyes open, surprised to be kissed again. Instead of protesting, he started to get a bit rough with Breakup, then remembered they had an audience. Sombra separated the kiss, then nodded in the fillies' direction. The fillies were trying to hold in their screeches as the couple looked in their direction.
"OMSC! You guys are a couple?!?!" After Breakup blushed and scratched the back of his head, the two of them nodded. The fillies ran out of the room and screamed in joy, running to different rooms dragging out their owners. Breakup walked out of the room and his jaw nearly hit the floor as the royals of Equestria walked closer and closer to his room. Sombra sensed the fear in Breakup and held his hoof to comfort him. Finally, Breakup calmed down and the guests walked in to see Sombra holding Breakup's paw. The mane six gasped at the sight, but the princesses just smiled at their return.
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As the sun leaked through the large balcony window, light crept up a large blue tail. The tail started to twitch a little at the sudden warmth being applied to it. Breakup yawned and started to get out of bed till he realized a certain colt was laying out on his stomach. Breakup quietly chuckled then lightly put Sombra on the bed. After getting up, Breakup stretched and walked out of the room to get some breakfast. When he arrived, the entire room was quiet. He started to walk in he room more, then the lights were on and Breakup was surprised out of his old scales. Celesia and he other princesses laughed a little while Breakup was blushing. Rarity walked up to Breakup with a small little box and motioned him to open it. He smiled and opened it, inside was a little photo of Breakup when he was a hatchling, siting between his mother and father.
"This is just the beginning darling, we have more in-store for you. Happy Birthday Breakup Tear." Just as he was about to say something, a dragon alicorn and Queen Chrysalis walked into he room and started looking around till their eyes met with Breakup's direction. Breakup walked to them, then quickened his pace as they called his name.
"Breakup Tear, we thought we lost you all those centuries ago. Look at you, you look just like me when i was your age." Breakup hugged them tightly as he had finally found his parents. Afterwards, he led them down a hall, he busted the door open and woke Sombra up. Sombra stirred while groaning and opened his eyes.
"What is it babe, did i scare someone to death?" Sombra looked over in Breakup's direction and rubbed his eyes. "Are these your parents!?!?!?" Breakup nodded, giggling a little as Sombra was trying to get out of the bed and be polite.
"No need to get so worked up child, my son has good eyes to fall in love with you." The changeling queen was being more kind than usual around her son. Breakup slightly smiled as his parents accepted him for liking him.
"Breakup, there is one thing i must note to you before we leave for the hive. Our king usually give and "extra gear" to the first born of the next generation. Sombra will find it when you guys are active." He winked and walked with his wife out of the room. Breakup blushed when he realized everything his father meant. Sombra gave a devilish grin to Breakup which made him blush an even brighter red. Breakup walked into the side room of their bedroom, and started to play with his messy mane. Sombra walked behind him and hugged from behind.
"At least my parents like you Sombra"
Chapter Three: Rift Opener
After Sombra had met Breakup's parents, he wanted to be sure that Breakup would never have to think that he would leave him again. Instead of just making some random act of love, Sombra and the princesses all pitched in to make Breakup's Birthday one to never forget.
Meanwhile in the markets...
Breakup was having a tough decision on where he wanted to stay. He wanted to live like a normal pony, but he knew that royalty did not live in peasant houses. Breakup shook off the thought as his sister walked up to him.
"Hey big bro, want a few lessons on what you can do?" Breakup nodded and followed his sister to a abandoned courtyard. The courtyard was covered in vines and wildlife was all around as they entered the large garden. Breakup looked around more and found a tree that dropped rainbow apples. Without a warning, Breakup bucked the tree and knocked all the apples out of the tree. One apple bounced into Turquoise's paw as she was showing off the place. Turquoise glared in his direction, then dropped her jaw as he knock every apple out of the tree.
"You know, a simple thank you would suffice." He giggled and put the apple in her hand in her mouth. Turquoise just took a bit and glared at him. Breakup was about to pull a lever he found, till he had a question pop in his head. "So when did mom and dad have you?"
"I was created the day of your disappearance, your mom and dad really was happy when i told what had happened to you. When we got that letter that you were found, the entire hive cheered. We decided that i would teach you all that our kind can do."
Breakup smiled and looked in her direction as he pulled the lever. The ground started to shake as he walked over to Turquoise. Turquoise jumped, just as the floor gave way. Breakup was less fortunate as he fell through. Breakup tried to extend his wings, but something prevented them doing such a action.
This damn place has a flight spell, that means i can't even turn into a ball of fire. Breakup's thought were stopped as his face made contact with the stony floor of what appeared to be a tomb. Turquoise walked down a flight of stairs that revealed themselves right as Breakup plummeted to the bottom.
"Why is there a hidden tomb in a abandoned garden in Canterlot? And why was i the only one who knew how to open it!?!?" Breakup's loud rage was heard across the large room, resulting in a large group of wisps appearing out of no where. The small trail of blue ghosts made a path deeper into the tomb. "You know the rules Turquoise, we have to follow them. They will lead us to our fate."
As Breakup looked back to see Turquoise's response, he saw his parents and his coltfriend, looking behind Breakup at the trail of wisps.
"Um, Torch. He seems to be having a fate-changer. What do we do?" The changeling queen's sight ripped from her son's direction to her mate's direction. The Dracoris King kept his eyes on the wisps till his mate slapped him across the face.
"And why in the name of the current princess did you do that?" He said in a calm tone.
"Dad, you were staring out at the wisps, which i have to say look so cute." Turquoise was about to walk up to one, but Breakup stopped her. "What gives bro?"
"You get close to one, and we all will have to chase you to where the wisps are heading." Breakup pointed a claw at the trail, then traced it down the long tunnel. A long silence filled the tomb till the princesses and the main six arrived. As they walked of the stair to marvel at the site, they watched Breakup touch a statue then walk up to the two princesses as if he was giving battle instructions.
"This tomb was finished being built the day you were born Celestia. And was sealed off the day you were born Luna." The princesses looked at each other in disbelief. A tomb hiding Breakup's history was built and sealed off on their birthdays. As Breakup turned around, he motioned the others to follow him as he approached the wisps.
One by one, one wisp disappeared and reappeared at the back of the line. Breakup kept his entire focus on the wisp trail, ignoring any other distractions. As the dark, empty tomb walls got bigger, the wisps were more distant. After the long walk, they arrived to a alter holding a book. Breakup heard voices, but as he turned, they weren't coming from the group. He walked closer to the alter, resulting in him shivering as the voices grew louder.
"I hear...voices. But all that is here is a book." He walked up to the alter, and quickly regretted his decision. The book flew open, and the words started to glow. Lifting off the pages, they swarmed him like bees. As the words flew into his eyes, he only had one hope, use the spell so it would stop. Breakup did his best to understand the spell, when he completely knew the spell, he charged his horn and struck the center pedestal of the room.
With a crack of lightning and a gust of wind, cracks appeared around the room. As fast as they appeared, they burst open, releasing what ever was on the other side. Dragon eggs never seen before and a few items landed into Breakup's saddle bag. Then, gemstones started floating out of the other crack. Finally as the last gem floated to Breakup, the portals closed, the book closed, and Breakup collapsed from the overuse of magic.
"BABE!" Sombra and Rose rushed over to Breakup, carrying him to the castle's medical wing. The rest of the group ran close behind, being sure that nothing was going to stop them. As they reached the castle, the three princesses signaled for there to be a clear path to the medical ward.
As Breakup was set on a cot, nurses rushed in. Most holding water, others holding gauze. Sombra was taken back as he spotted a ton of scratches, bleeding across Breakup's body. As soon as he was patched up, it took a week before he finally woke up.
"Wha-what happened?"
Author's Note
i am running out of ideas people, please give me ideas
