The Great and Powerful Reward

The Magical Dentist

Colgate sat in the small waiting room, watching ponies stroll past the window with a bored expression on her face. Whenever anypony walked past, she’d focus on their teeth, giving a quick visual examination. In the back of her mind, she filed away a mental record of every pony that she saw, and how well they’d been attending to their dental hygiene.

There went Snowflake, his teeth looking worse than ever. He hadn’t been in to see her in ages.

One of the spa sisters trotted by. The one with the pink coat and blue hair. Colgate could never remember which was which, not that it really mattered. As always, the spa pony’s smile was bright, shiny, and perfectly white. The dentist looked forward to her next visit from the Blossom twins, hoping that both of them would come at the same time again.

Colgate’s previous patient had taken less time to finish than she had expected, and her next patient wasn’t scheduled to come in for another twenty minutes. So she waited, idly flossing her teeth and watching the busy street from her front window.

She sat and watched for another few minutes, making sure to floss thoroughly between all of her molars. From the corner of her eye, she noticed a pony galloping down the street at full speed. She did not immediately recognize the blue unicorn, but she remembered her from somewhere. As the pony’s path drew closer to the window, Colgate got a better view of the mare’s mouth.

Those teeth! She had seen those pearly whites only once before, but she would never be able to forget them. Her memory came flooding back as she recalled watching Trixie on stage, infatuated by her magnificent teeth. She hadn’t recognized Trixie at first because she wasn’t wearing her usual hat and cape combo, but there was no mistaking such a perfectly cared for mouth.

Colgate jumped to her feet. She had to get Trixie in to her office! She might never again get the opportunity to work on such perfection!

She dropped the length of floss she’d been using and bolted out the door. Seeing that Trixie had already passed her office, she called out in desperation.

“Hey Trixie! When was the last time you had your teeth cleaned?”

The galloping mare glanced backwards towards Colgate’s voice for just a second, but did not slow down or respond.

“Drat,” Colgate muttered to herself in frustration, “I hope she comes back sometime soon.” With that she turned and headed back inside to wait for her next patient.

***

“Ding ding,” the bell hanging over the front door exclaimed. Colgate drew her attention away from the window to greet the newcomer.

“Good morning Big Mac! You here for your appointment?” she asked, her mood improving. The fact that she had a stallion- and not just any stallion. Big Macintosh, no less- scheduled, almost made up for the fact that she’d missed her chance with Trixie. Mares were good and all, but they just couldn’t measure up to a capable stallion.

“Eeyup,” Big Mac answered, carefully removing the straw of hay from his mouth and depositing it in his saddlebag. He then removed his saddlebag and the harness he always wore around his shoulders, placing them on the row of coat hangers by the door. Most ponies didn’t usually wear coats, so they’d taken to hanging whatever they had on the otherwise useless pegs.

Colgate stepped behind the reception desk and quickly glanced at the list of scheduled appointments.

“Alright, for your usual check-up, it’ll be 15 bits.”

Big Mac was already digging through his hung-up saddlebag, and he soon pulled out a small pouch filled with the appropriate payment. He trotted over to the dentist and placed the money on the counter.

Colgate smiled warmly at him, beckoning him to follow her. “Okay, let’s head to the back room and then we can get started.”

“Eeyup,” Big Mac replied calmly, following her.

***

“Let’s get started, then.” Colgate positioned herself next to the chair that Big Mac was reclining in. She slipped on her mask as her horn started to glow, levitating a few tools closer to her patient’s mouth. “Open wide!”

The red stallion complied as the magicked implements began to scrape his teeth and poke at his gums. Colgate leaned over him to get a better view inside of his mouth. It seemed that Big Mac had been taking very good care of his teeth, which Colgate took to be evidence that her new reward system was working.

It had only been a few months ago when Big Mac came to her for the first time. His teeth and gums were a disaster. It seemed that being raised by a grandmother who had lost all of her teeth years ago had left the Apple family with very poor brushing habits. Ever since his first visit, Big Mac had shown steady improvement in his dental hygiene. Of course, it helped that Colgate’s reward system provided him with a little extra motivation. That was the point, after all.

Colgate continued to examine Big Mac’s teeth with pride, enjoying how much they had improved. Big Mac closed his eyes and allowed himself to enjoy the feeling of a mare leaning in so close to him. Their coats would occasionally brush together as Colgate worked, and Big Mac found the warmth to be thoroughly enjoyable. The repeated contact began to excite him, and he hoped that he’d done a good enough job cleaning his teeth to impress his examiner.

Eventually, the tools removed themselves from Big Mac’s mouth. Colgate placed them on a nearby table without separating herself from her patient. If anything, she pressed herself closer, creating a stronger contact between their bodies.

Big Mac opened his eyes to find Colgate bringing her face within inches of his. She slowly pulled the mask down past her chin while continuing to gaze into her patient’s calm green eyes.

“It looks to me like you’ve been doing an excellent job,” Colgate whispered to him, in a low, seductive voice. Her gaze drifted back to his slightly parted lips. “There’s just one last thing I need to test before I can give you your prize.”

She placed her front hooves on the table, one on each side of his head. Then she climbed onto the chair, positioning herself just a few inches over his body. Her back legs straddled his lower body, and she could feel his member start to expand out of its sheath. Lowering her head, she pressed her lips against Big Mac’s mouth. He opened his mouth further, welcoming Colgate’s advances.

The dentist slipped her tongue through the newly formed opening, rubbing it all around her patient’s teeth. After just a few seconds, Colgate sat up, breaking off contact.

“Good job, Big Mac! You’ve passed the taste test, and now it’s time for your prize,” Colgate declared, her rump barely making contact with Big Mac’s fully expanded cock.

She paused for a moment and glanced at the door, as if waiting for something. When nothing happened, she seemed satisfied and returned her attention to Big Mac.

She smiled at him and said, “It looks like it’s time for round one.”

With one hoof, she guided Big Mac’s massive cock towards her slit. As soon as they made contact, she lowered her body, forcing her pussy lips to spread apart around Big Mac’s meat. Every last one of the stallion’s muscles tensed up as soon as he felt himself enter the beautiful blue mare. He continued to watch as Colgate slid downwards, slowly taking in the entire length of his penis. He groaned when he felt Colgate’s rump press against his hips, and her pussy squeezed tightly on his shaft.

Then Colgate leaned forward, resting her body on top of Big Mac’s chest. She enjoyed the feeling of his dick sliding around inside of her as she shifted positions. She began to rub his coat with her hooves, all the way up and down his chest and sides. Continuing her light massage, she also began to buck her hips forward and back, sliding Big Mac’s cock in and out of her pussy.

She started moving faster, pressing down harder as she began to pant. Underneath of her, she could feel Big Mac’s breathing start to pick up speed, and she felt low rumbles as he groaned in pleasure. The strain on his face grew more and more apparent as she continued to buck.

Before too long, Big Mac inhaled sharply, crying out, “Ah’m cummin’!” Colgate immediately slid off of his dick and jumped off the chair. She then stuffed as much of Big Mac’s member into her mouth and down her throat as she could handle. Surge after surge of semen shot down her throat as she tried desperately to swallow it all. It proved too much for her to handle as she began to choke and some of his seed began to leak out of her mouth.

When he was finally done, Big Mac collapsed back on the chair, his head falling against the headrest and his eyes sliding partway closed. His penis fell limply out of Colgate’s mouth. He was finished. There was no way he could go on.

For any pony besides Colgate, this would have been a problem, for Big Mac had left her unsatisfied. However, the unicorn didn’t even seem to care as she trotted casually out of the room. She closed the door behind her and prepared to cast her special spell.

Many ponies found it strange that Colgate, the dentist and master oral hygienist, did not have a cutie mark that somehow related to dentistry. But that was simply because dentistry was not her special talent. It was her passion, true, but she had had to work hard to master it. It didn’t just come naturally to her like the professions of so many other ponies did. No, her special talent was something else entirely. And it made a lo--

“EVERYPONY PANIC! THERE’S A GIANT PENIS MONSTER HEADED THIS WAY!”

Colgate’s thoughts were interrupted as a screaming pegasus flew past her office. She paused for a second, unsure of what to make of the bizarre warning. But her mind soon returned to her dripping wet pussy, and the unfinished business she had to attend to.

She focused her mind, once again preparing her magic. She cast her spell: the spell that made it clear why she had an hourglass for a cutie mark.

***

Through the closed door that led to the back room, Colgate heard a voice.

“Good job, Big Mac! You’ve passed the taste test, and now it’s time for your prize.”

Colgate pushed open the door and peered into the room. She saw herself, sitting on top of Big Mac, her rump barely making contact with his fully expanded cock.

Colgate’s copy turned towards the recently opened door, as if she’d been expecting her to come in.

“Hey there, Colgate. How was round one?” asked the copy.

“It was just fine, Colgate. Though he left me kind of unsatisfied,” replied Colgate.

“Well then, come on in here and we’ll do our best to take care of that,” said the copy.

“Don’t mind if I do.”

Big Mac watched the interaction between the two Colgates with a sort of passive interest. The first time that Colgate mentioned a prize for taking care of his teeth, he’d assumed that he would get free toothpaste or something. Boy was he surprised when not only one, but two Colgates rewarded him through sex. At first it had scared him, especially with a second Colgate seemingly showing up out of nowhere then disappearing afterwards, but he’d gotten used to the process after the first couple times that he earned a prize. He still wasn’t sure that he really understood what was going on, but he didn’t really care. As far as he was concerned, two Colgates was better than one, so he always made sure to take good care of his teeth and to schedule visits as often as he could.

Colgate advanced towards the chair that her copy and Big Mac were using. She climbed on top of Big Mac’s face, placing her still-wet slit directly over his mouth.

She smiled at him and said, “It looks like it’s time for round two.”

Both she and her copy lowered their bodies at the same time, Colgate taking Big Mac’s snout, and her copy taking his cock. Big Mac did his part and used his tongue to reach deeper into Colgate’s pussy. The experience she’d had with him just a couple minutes earlier had left her already close to orgasm, so she immediately began to feel herself getting closer.

She soon heard her copy start to move up and down, causing Big Mac to jerk his snout a little bit inside of Colgate. As the copy sped up, Big Mac started pushing deeper with his tongue, bringing Colgate even closer to orgasm.

All at once, Big Mac tensed up and shouted something into Colgates slit. “Auhmf cummfn!” Colgate’s copy got the message and immediately climbed off the table, then turning around to suck Big Mac’s meat. Colgate herself stayed where she was as Big Mac gave one final push, driving her over the edge. She screamed as her thighs clamped down on both sides of the stallion’s head. Her juices poured down Big Mac’s throat and chin as she lost herself in wave after wave of orgasmic pleasure.

Her copy began swallowing Big Mac’s semen, trying to get as much as she could.

When both Colgate and Big Mac were finished, Colgate’s copy stood up and began to walk out of the room.

“You were right, Colgate. Round one was pretty good. I can’t wait for round two,” said the copy, closing the door behind her.

Then Colgate heard a familiar sound through the door:

“EVERYPONY PANIC! THERE’S A GIANT PENIS MONSTER HEADED THIS WAY!”

After another few seconds, she also heard a crackle of magic, indicating that her copy had performed her signature spell.

Fully satisfied with Big Mac’s performance, she rolled off of his chest and staggered out of the room. She would just leave him there until he was ready to get up on his own. That was why she always scheduled so much time between her appointments. If the patient earned a prize, then they usually took a while to recover afterwards. It was absolutely worth it, though. Ever since she first started rewarding her patients, they’d all started coming in more regularly, and they took much better care of their teeth.

Colgate silently congratulated herself. Before she’d come up with her unique reward system, she’d always been trying to think of a way to combine her love of teeth and her special talent. When the idea to motivate patients with sex finally struck her, she realized that it was a perfect plan. Better still, if she was ever left unsatisfied, she could just go back and do the whole thing again, and again, and again until she finally got off. And now dental hygiene in Ponyville was better than ever, all thanks to her. It was a dentist’s dream come true.

Checking her schedule, then the clock mounted on her wall, she realized that she had another half-hour until her next patient. Figuring that she’d earned a break, she decided to head outside and find out what all the screaming was about.

A/N: This was written for the Equestria After Dark speedclop challenge Prompt 4: My Own Clone. Once again, I was supposed to write it in 69 minutes, and again I failed that time limit horribly. Also, many thanks to Firefox69 for editing/story suggestions!