The Great and Powerful Reward

Satisfaction Guaranteed, Only If You Clean Your Teeth

“So, this is where you first saw the penis monster?” Twilight asked Rainbow Dash, gesturing at the edge of the forest. She seemed a little bit nervous, as if another terrible creature was waiting just behind the trees.

“Yeah, but that’s really not important right now. It’s not like it’s still there waiting for us,” Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes at her friend’s nervousness. It was just the edge of the forest; there was almost never any animals this close to town.

“Alright, but if I even THINK that I see a giant penis, I’m teleporting both of us as far away as I can.”

“Sure, whatever. Let’s just find the flower.”

Just a few days after the gigantic penis monster attacked the town, Rainbow Dash had come to Twilight asking her to help find a magical flower in the Everfree Forest. She’d said that it was called the Brushicus Flower, and a unicorn’s magic made it easy to detect the plant’s magical aura. Rainbow Dash hadn’t explained why she needed it, but Twilight didn’t really mind. She was always happy to help out her friends.

Twilight had done a little research at the library, finding out that the flower could be chewed by a pony in order to thoroughly clean their teeth. She also learned exactly what kind of magic she had to search for in order to locate the flower.

The two ponies entered the forest. Rainbow Dash glanced around, keeping an eye out for any magical looking flowers. She felt pretty useless, since she didn’t even know what it looked like. Twilight, on the other hoof, closed her eyes and probed around with her magical presence. Finding the flower turned out to be a very easy task, as Twilight detected it within seconds. She led her pegasus friend to a nearby bush, pushing aside the leaves. Inside the hollow plant grew a leafy blue flower. Rainbow reached inside the bush and grabbed the flower in her mouth.

“Thanksh Twilight! I’fe gotta go,” she spoke with the flower in her mouth. She immediately jumped into the air and flew back to town, dodging around trees and hanging vines.

“Well, that was kind of rude,” Twilight huffed to herself, realizing that she was now alone inside the Everfree Forest.

***Day of the Giant Penis Monster Attack***

“What do you mean, no reward?” Rainbow Dash practically shouted, her voice starting to crack.

“I mean that you haven’t been to a check-up in years, you haven’t been taking proper care of your teeth, and it shows. You don’t deserve a reward for behavior like that.” Colgate replied coolly.

“So, you’re saying I came here for NOTHING!?!”

“No, you came here to get your teeth cleaned. The reward is just an added bonus for ponies that have good dental hygiene.”

“Ugh, this is ridiculous! I sat here and let you stab my gums and drill my teeth and I don’t even know what else you were doing, and I don’t get anything? I’m outta here.” the pegasus jumped out of the chair and stormed towards the exit.

“Rainbow Dash, wait. I do have a reward.” At this, the angry pony stopped and looked back at her dentist. “It comes in the form of advice.”

Immediately losing interest, Rainbow Dash rolled her eyes and continued towards the door. She didn’t need advice, she was fine on her own.

Colgate continued, undeterred, “Seek out the plant known as the Brushicus Flower. It’ll help you with your problem.”

The pegasus left without saying another word.

Colgate began cleaning up, in preparation for her next patient. The dentist quietly thought to herself, “She’ll be back.”

***

A rainbow-maned pegasus flew over town, making a beeline for her destination. She slowly worked her jaw up and down, chewing on a flower. At the same time, she used her lips to pull the flower farther into her mouth.

A sort of minty flavor flowed out of the petals when she crushed them between her teeth. It washed all around her mouth, cleaning even the deepest crevices.

She’d been brushing her teeth like crazy ever since she was rejected by Colgate, but she’d never been able to get them as clean as this flower was making them feel. It was fantastic. She loved the feeling of her mouth being so perfectly fresh, and the coolness of the mint rushing all around her tongue. She began to wonder how she’d gone so long without taking better care of her teeth.

She landed right in front of Colgate’s office. She swallowed the last few pieces of the flower with a determined look on her face. She quickly ran her tongue all along the inside of her mouth, making sure that she hadn’t missed any scraps of the flower. When she was certain that her mouth was clear, she took a deep breath to build her confidence, then walked in the door.

Colgate was sitting at a chair near the front window of the building, and her attention was directed towards Rainbow Dash as soon as she came in the door.

“I’d like to schedule an appointment for right now, please,” Rainbow Dash smirked.

“Well... I don’t normally have time for walk-ins. But it looks like today is your lucky day,” the dentist gazed out the window, looking bored. “Everypony is so busy cleaning up after that monster attacked, that they seem to have forgotten about their appointments.”

“Yeah, lucky me,” Rainbow Dash agreed impatiently. “Can we get started now?”

“Sure, I don’t see why not. Go and take a seat in the back room. I’ll be with you in a minute.”

Rainbow Dash looked for the door to the back room, the same door she’d used during her visit just a few days ago. She made her way across the room and pushed open the door, making her way inside.

It was a very simple room. A single chair was placed in the middle, and a small desk along with a few file cabinets filled a majority of the floor space. She sat in the chair, not feeling the slightest bit nervous.

She knew she’d done a good job cleaning her teeth. There was no way that Colgate could refuse to reward her this time. Of course, that was what she’d thought the last time she came in for an appointment too.

Colgate stepped through the door that the pegasus had left open. She was now wearing a surgical mask, and she was levitating a few small implements in the air in front of her.

“Okay then, Rainbow Dash. You’re here for your check-up?”

“That’s right!” The patient spoke so confidently that she somehow managed to make it sound like a boast.

“You do remember that you had a check-up just three days ago, right?”

“Duh, how could I forget? Especially after you left me so unsatisfied! Don’t worry, though. I’m ready this time, and I WILL get my reward.”

“Ah, I take it you found the flower, then?”

“Yeah I did! And it was awesome!”

“Well, let’s see how well it worked. Lean back and open wide.”

Rainbow Dash did as she was told, more than happy to show off her recently cleaned teeth. As soon as Colgate peered inside, she noticed a significant improvement from her patient’s visit just a few days ago. A more thorough inspection confirmed her initial reaction. The tartar build-ups were nowhere to be found. There was no trace of plaque anywhere, not even deep between the molars where most ponies have a hard time brushing. Not only that, but Colgate could smell the powerful minty freshness of her patient’s breath even through her mask. The whole check-up only took a couple minutes, and the dentist was quite impressed with the results.

“Well now, that flower seemed to do the trick. You’ve made a huge improvement for such a small amount of time,” Colgate declared, much to her patient’s delight. “I’m guessing you already know what that means, right?”

Rainbow dash eagerly nodded. Her eyes lit up, and her wings began to stiffen, sticking out awkwardly from the sides of the chair. Her dentist acknowledged her nod, “You’ve earned a prize.”

“Alright! I knew it,” Rainbow Dash shouted victoriously. Her mouth broke into a huge smile as she pumped her hooves in the air.

Suddenly, the door opened, and Colgate walked in. Only, Colgate was already in the room. There were two Colgates. the pegasus froze in mid hoof-pump with a puzzled look on her face. Her friends had mentioned that Colgate’s reward came with a special surprise, but this was a bit more surprising than she’d expected. She looked at the new Colgate more carefully. It was clearly the same pony, except she was sweaty, and some liquid seemed to be running down her back legs.

Unable to piece together what was going on, Rainbow Dash asked the obvious question. “Um... How are there two of you?”

Both Colgates smiled at each other, as if silently sharing some inside joke. Then they both turned to her, seductive smiles appearing on their faces. Approaching the patient, they spoke simultaneously.

“Don’t worry about it.”

Both unicorns reached her at the same time. The old Colgate began to playfully lick Rainbow’s slit, moistening it with saliva and Rainbow’s own juices. The new Colgate joined in, just a few seconds later, only she didn’t bother with licking. She went straight in with her horn.

New Colgate plunged inside of the pegasus pussy, earning a tiny shriek from her patient. Rainbow Dash was certainly a bit confused, but the pleasure she was beginning to experience made up for it. It was funny, she thought, one of them had started with foreplay, while the other one went straight to the good stuff. Any further thought was cut short as the entire length of New Colgate’s horn sunk into her vag.

Old Colgate began to quickly flick Rainbow’s exposed clit with her tongue, while her copy nodded and shook her head, wiggling her horn inside of her patient’s increasingly oozing pussy.

“Oh Celestia,” the pegasus panted, “I never thought going to the dentist would feel this good!” When she finished speaking, she let her head fall back on the chair and her tongue hang out of her mouth.

New Colgate soon began to thrust her horn in and out, bringing Rainbow Dash to all new levels of pleasure. Old Colgate pitched in by sliding her tongue into Rainbow’s slit whenever her copy withdrew her horn.

It didn’t take long at all before Rainbow Dash began to feel pressure build up deep inside of her. Fortunately, at the rate that the Colgates were going, She wouldn’t have to do anything but sit there and enjoy the ride. And she did just that. The pleasure between her thighs steadily increased as New Colgate thrusted faster and faster. New Colgate even began to pant with pleasure herself, her horn was greatly enjoying the use. Old Colgate began to lick and suck harder, lapping up as much of Rainbow’s lubrication as she could.

As soon as Old Colgate started nibbling on Dash’s clit, stars exploded in the pegasus’s head. She screamed in pleasure, her voice cracking more than it ever had before. New Colgate joined her as she reached her climax as well. The thrusting stopped, and Old Colgate slowed her licking.

Rainbow Dash’s wings flopped to her side as her eyes slid part-way closed. She saw Old Colgate walking out the door with a mischievous smile on her face. Then she heard a crackle of magic from behind the closed door. She idly wondered what exactly had just happened, but her mind couldn’t handle too much thinking. Instead, it slowed and she fell asleep, a satisfied customer in more ways than one.

A/N: Woohoo! I did it! This week’s speedclop prompt was Customer Satisfaction. That’s what I wrote this chapter for. And guess what... I ACTUALLY STAYED WITHIN THE TIME LIMIT!!! Now, as a result, this may be my worst submission yet, but I’m still proud that I wrote it in 69 minutes. So, yeah, the actual clop part was shorter than I intended, but I was running out of time. Oh well, it’s not like you could actually clop to it anyway.