Saten Twist Adventures

by AlphaDog21

Seasn 1 Episode 3:

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"Sweetie Belle, I adore having you help me, truly I do, but ..."

"Guess I got a little carried away. It's just that I know how important it is for you to finish this wardrobe in time for Sapphire Shores and her backup dancers." Sweetie Belle admitted.

"This is without a doubt my most prestigious order ever. After all, Sapphire Shores is ''the'' pony of pop, and her Equestria-wide tour launches in Canterlot next week! Which means she must have these outfits by day after tomorrow at the latest!" Rarity replied.


"I'm here!.. I'm here!.. I brought the costumes." Rarity said, running in with a trey of costumes on hooks.

"You made it!" SB cried excited.

"Yes, sorry for cutting it so close, but out of all my business. I somehow found enough time to work on your costumes as well." Rarity replied.


"Hey. Nice perfamance." Saten says to Sweetie Belle after her play.

"Really!?. Everyone only cares about the stupid dresses. *sudden anger* This always happens! Rarity always outshines me." Sweetie Belle complained.

"Hey. Siblings do that.. In fact.. When I was your age. I won a ribbin at a science fair, my project was called "do Lima beans nurture under classical music". But my unimpressed mother simply just pointed out that it was a rip off of my older brother's project "do Lima beans grow better in rock and roll". And well.. I ended up losing the ribbon and it was given to my stinkin brother ..."

2 HOURS LATER

"First off, the projects were completely differenty. I was showing the classic music 'nurtures' Lima beans. But my stupid mother didn't lesson.. If your like to see the relationship between nurturing and growth, I'd like to point out that my brother is EIGHT INCHES TALLER THAN ME!" Saten Twist ranted angrily. But than takes a moment to calm himself down.

"Anyway. I hope that helpe- (sees that Sweetie Belle must of ran off quite some time ago).. Oh."


SweetieBelle stormed home and started confronting her sister.

"Honey. If this is one of those emotional talks about you wetting the bed, I really don't wanna hear about i-"

"That's not what this is Rarity!.. It's about about those stupid dresses!" Sweetie Belle cried angrily.

"Oh.. Were they hated? Cause I make new ones." Rarity insisted.

"No! They were perfect! TOO perfect!.. Nobody watched it for anything else! Only the outfits!"

Rarity is confused and doesn't reply.

"It's like my fifth birthday all over again!"

"I.. Don't understand... Why are you angry sweetie? Are you constipated?" Rarity asked.

"This is nothing to do with water!" Sweetie Belle cried, obviously not understanding what it actually means.

"Darling, I think you miss heard m-"

I hate you!" Sweetie Belle cried angrily.

"But why?" Asked a confused Rarity.

"I'm gonna go eat 20 buckets of ice cream. And not gain any weight, due to this being a cartoon! Good day Mr White!" Sweetie Belle cried, referencing Breaking Bad at the end.

"You really need to stop watching that show." Rarity replied.


Sweetie Belle was too angry to sleep, and decided to take revenge on Rarity.


SweetieBelle plans to ruin one of Rarity's hats. But she starts having second thoughts. At which point a small verison of Sweetie Belle appears on her shoulder, dressed as an angel.

"No! Don't do it!" The angel cried in protest.

"Don't lesson to that sissy. Do it!" Said a second mini Sweetie Belle, dressed as a cliche demon.

"Who you calling a sissy!" Angel Sweetie Belle cried angrily.

"Guys this isn't helping." The real Sweetie Belle said.

"ook. Look.. Rarity didn't mean it." The angel said,

"Wow.. Guess your right." The real Sweetie Belle said.

"That's right. Now just go back to bef-"

Before angel Sweetie Belle finished, devil Sweetie Belle pulls out a handgun and shoots it dead. Angel Sweetie Belle hits a nearby wall and slides down, leaving a train of blood behind her.

"Holly crap!" The real Sweetie Belle cried in shock.

"Do it! Do it now!" Devil Sweetie Belle cried, pointing the tiny gun at the real Sweetie Belle, who puts her hands up in surrender.

"Okay. Okay. Take it.. Take it easy" Sweetie Belle said, and nervously goes back to ruining the hat.


"Princess Luna!? Is it really you?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"Yep. I'm the princess of the night. And it's my duty to come into your dreams." Luna explained.

"What about him?" Sweetie Belle asked, pointing behind Luna.

"Hey. Hey. I'm not involved in this" Freddy Krueger said, smoking a ciggerate under a tree not doing anything villainous for once. He's just there.

"Forget him. Listen dear, I too have a sister who often shines more brightly than me, and with this, I have struggled." Luna explained.

"Please don't have this turn into a scrooge like plot." Sweetie Belle said.

"Too late." Luna replied, sending them back in time.


"I remember this. This is my fifth birthday party! I decided to make a grand entrance. I made myself all beautiful, just like my big sister."

I'm pretty sure they wanted you to just show up in general." Luna said in a very deadpan tone.

"Anyway. When I finally finished. I kept posing at the top of the stairs, waiting to be noticed ..."

"Now your sounding like Paris Hilton." Luna said in the same deadpan tone.

"That a good thing?" Sweetie Belle asked.

"No. Not even a little." Luna replied.


"See! Even at my own birthday! Rarity outshined me." Sweetie Belle said sadly.

Or maybe you didn't get the full story." Luna replied.


Sweetie now realised that Rarity was never trying to outshine her. She was just buying time, till Sweetie Belle arrived. If she arrived.


Luna ended up showing SweetieBelle, that ruining ONE design, would ruin all of Rarity's would end becoming the plot of the creepypasta "Rarity's Dress".


"I was upset at you for stealing the spotlight from me at the play, so I pulled out the center stitch to the headpiece so it would fall apart. But then I realized I didn't want your future to be ruined forever and ever, so I came back to change it before it was too late! So... here it is. It's all fixed. Please forgive me." Sweetie Belle explained to her older sister.

"Forgive you!? How could I forgive yo-"

Sweetie Belle is seen puppy eyes.

"Okay fine." Rarity groaned.

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