Chapters Author's Note
I'm rewriting the story to have a more dramatic effect due to most of the comments
Chapter 1: Home?
The yautja ship, the ship of the creature known as the predators, who loved to hunt the biggest game, but also follow an code of honor to their enemies. On this specific ship, A Predator was seen on a table dead, this was known as Scar, the predator who killed the Alien Queen in the Antarctic with a human survivalist named Lex Woods. He lied down on a table for autopsy yet his body slowly began to move and a creature suddenly emerged from his chest.
The creature slowly began to form into a hybrid of a sort and grow and turn into a monstrous gigantic monstrosity
The creature began to move towards a door and suddenly it opened and a Yautja was seen piloting the spacecraft, unaware of its last second of life was to come
The yautja driving heard something and the moment it turned around, the hybrid decapitated it and ship began to fall and crash all the way down until it's vision was white.
(Unknown Location)
The predator on the autopsy table was surprisingly slowly getting up and sat up in a daze, it looked around and began to see the ship was trashed and trees were everywhere. As it got up, it looked at itself and saw its body was covered in a green blood like substance and gave a click as if he was in shock at what happened or as to how he was still alive. It got up on its feet and searched for its gear. It managed to find a mask,a cloak, a plasma like gun, a spear, a wrist-blade and a sharpened throwing disk. It began to walk around the ship and saw the dead bodies of both the hybrid and the driver predator, with the hybrid impaled on a tree branch and the driver predator's head on the controls. The beaten creature then limped out to investigate the damage and saw he and his ship were in a forest.
As the creature saw the damage and clicked as if it was annoyed, the ship ended up exploding, with the creature's eyes widening in shock. Knowing repairing it would take time, it decided to search for materials to aid in rebuilding the ships presumably irreparable damaged state. It walked off on one road for its search for any useful material.
(5 hours later)
The creature had found nothing of help and continued to keep searching, even crafting a few makeshift weapons such as wooden daggers and a large pointy spear. As it was making more weapons, it suddenly heard an scream and went to investigate. When it found the source it saw 3 small horse like creatures being threatened by a group of large wooden made like canines, reminding him of the hounds on his planet.
The predator saw the wooden wolves and hid in a tree, turning it's cloak on, it fired a plasma cannon that was on its shoulder at one of the wooden canines and succeeded in killing one with a charged blast, but the other two were still up and now more angrier.
"What the hay was that?!" The orange winged equine said in shock
As the two wooden wolves lunged at the three, the invisible creature jumped down and impaled the first one with its spear and threw it's disk at the other, slicing it on half, it then finished off the wooden wolves with the plasma blaster on it's shoulder. After they were dealt with, the 3 small equines gave surprised looks as to what just happened.
"What in tarnation just happened?!" The yellow coated equine wearing a bow on her head said.
"Is anypony there?!" The white horned one asked frightfully
The predator, still in cloak form, began to look at them and see if they were threats and saw no sort of weapon nor opposition and revealed itself slowly at the now surprised kids
"Oh my Celestia!" the white filly said
"What. Is. That?!" The orange one asked
The 3 equines trembled in fright from the tall predator as it simply continued to study them, most notably the marks on their flanks, the yellow one then asked while still trembling, only a bit less
"Um, excuse me sir, but..who are you?"
The predator didn't answer, but said in a garbled tone "..Sc...ar"
The yellow filly responded "Mah names Apple Bloom."
The orange winged said "I'm Scootaloo."
The white horned one said "I'm Sweetie Belle"
All 3 them said "And we are THE CUTIE MARK CRUSADERS!"
The predator, now known as Scar, gave an unreadable expression as it began to walk away, Apple Bloom asked
"Um Mr. Scar, where are you goin?"
"To....Ho....me" Scar said in distortion
"But...what about us?" Sweetie Belle asked in fear
"Hmmm?" Scar said
"We kinda got lost in here" Scootaloo confessed
"And we sorta forgot the way back" Sweetie Belle added
"Can you help us?" Apple Bloom asked
The predator only glared in dismay, only for the three to use cute puppy eyes and pouts and say all together
"Pwease?"
The predator, with a look of pressure, nodded it's head at the three fillies and walked with them searching for a way out, it used it's mask to scan if there was any exit out of the forest and saw a road leading up to be town and signaled the three with a click as they saw the town.
Apple Bloom said with relief " Look there's Ponyville!"
"Come on!" Scootaloo said
The 3 fillies began to run in the town as Scar proceeded to walk back in the forest, which all 3 fillies noticed.
"Where are you going?" Sweetie Belle asked
"To....ho...me" Scar said, pointing at the forest.
"But it's dangerous there!" Scootaloo said
"Plus, don't you wanna meet our friends?"
"No..me..need...fix....home....with...new....tools" Scar said in bad grammar.
"Wait, the town sells some tools to help rebuild stuff, how about you come there?"
Scar was slowly debating tgat on one hand, hevwas a foreigner technically, on the other hand, he needed tools to fix his damaged ship. After some debating, Scar nodded his head and Apple Bloom said
"Ok, follow me!"
Scar, along with Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo followed her, with Scar only hoping that nobody would attack him recklessly or kill him again.
Chapter 2: Bad Introductions
Something has gone wrong. We don't seem to have an archived copy of that chapter. Chapter 3: Scar the Hero? Part 1
The two had left the hospital and began to walk in town with Scar still in cloak form, leaving Apple Bloom confused as she asked
"Um Scar?, you don't have to hide."
Scar replied by growling with his mandibles flared
"Your still mad, huh?" She asked, Scar acknowledged this with a nod
Apple Bloom was silent in dismay as they walked to find some tools for Scar and first went to first Sweet Apple Acres to search for any usable tools. As they searched, Apple Bloom asked
"What kinda tools do ya need?"
"Nails, hammer, screws, screwdrivers and nuts with bolts."
They searched in the shed and Apple Bloom managed to find some nails, screwdrivers,nuts, a hammer and only a few bolts.
"Sorry there wasn't much bolts Scar."
"It's ok."
A voice was heard "Apple Bloom, are you in here?!"
She gasped and said "That's my brother, hide!"
Scar managed to hide in prone stance in the grass still in cloak form while Apple Bloom said "What's the matter Big Mac?"
"Applejack's in the hospital cause of some creature."
"I know, I heard from the nurse, she said to let her rest a little."
As the two conversed, Scar managed to put the tools in his holsters and began to keep look out for any other ponies. After a few minutes Apple Bloom went to him and said
"Ok, it's clear but I gotta go, it's dinner soon for me and my family."
Scar nodded and said "Goodbye Apple Bloom."
As Scar walked discreetly (still cloaked) to the forest, he began to use his thermal vision on his helmet visor to scan for the ship and saw the tree it was stuck in and managed to climb and fix his ship using the tools to repair the ship piece by piece.
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(3 hours later)
The ship was soon repaired and although the outside was fixed, Scar now had to focus on the inside of the ship and it's controls. He realized however that Ponyville may not have the materials or the tech for the controls however and decided he would continue tomorrow and left to Ponyville. To kill some time, he decided to fix his vocal translator, that way the ponies would understand him.
(4 hours later)
As he left the half repaired ship, he heard a howl and saw through the window it was night time, he thought that he should put traps in case one were to trespass his home, Scar began to set up a few traps near the tree and the ground such as a 3 rope traps, 2 bear traps, a log tied in vertical form on a rope and a few tripwires with either arrows or large logs and a covered hole in the ground with trap. He narrowly dodged each trap and went back in his ship to sleep.
(One day later....)
Scar was now awake and got up and went to his room to clean himself and to put his gear on and began walking to Ponyville, and had learned the route thanks to a few warnings from his helmet. He saw as he went into Ponyville suddenly ponies screaming and running in fear from a large bug/bear hybrid attacking the town and the same ponies he had fought earlier fending it off.
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Scar, using his cloak, managed to jump on the roof of one of the houses and blasted his smart disk
Leaning in for the kill, Scar jumped and impaled the creature with its Combistick. The now dead hybrid leaned and fell down, dead.
The 6 mares gave looks of horror and then saw the now uncloaked Scar killing the creature and then walked to the bugbear's head as Twilight asked in horror and surprise.
"You again!, what are.....wait, what are you doing?"
Scar didn't answer, as he simply continued to look at the dead creature and proceeded to pull out it's large wrist-blade and decapitated the creature, pulling it's head off and cleaning the blood spills.
"OH MY CELESTIA!!" The girls all said as Scar cleaved the skin off and exposed it's skull.
Fluttershy asked in shock "What have you done?!"
Scar didn't answer and merely cloaked away, with Rainbow asking as he left
"Where did he go?"
Scar began to secretly walk slowly away and Twilight said "Alright, hard way it is." and used her magic and began to track and see him. As she did, however she said with dismay
"What?, why can't my magic track him?"
Rarity noticed something and said "Girls look!"
The girls followed her and saw a blood trail of a glowing green liquid dripping with no means of visibility leading to the forest.
(Scar's ship)
Scar was putting his latest kill on his collection of skulls that he had killed, either they be human or alien, what matters to him was the hunt and how worthy or strong his prey was as an opponent, not to mention the creature was armed and technically dangerous, as he did so however, he heard a rucus outside his ship and hears to his annoyance familiar voices, with one saying.
"The trail leads here."
Scar looked and saw his green blood slightly steeping down his arm and facepalmed, he must have been hit on the arm while fighting the creature, he knew that healing it would take some time and began to slowly clean his wound up and restitch it with some of his tools.
(Outside the ship)
The 6 girls had began to walk around and investigate the trail, as they searched Rainbow Dash saw the ship of Scar and said
"Girls, you may wanna see this!"
The 6 did and looked astonished at the ship, Twilight asked
"What in Celestia's name is that thing?"
"It almost looks like Zecora's hut." Fluttershy said
"Let's go check it out." Pinkie Pie said
"I don't know, somepony might live in there." Fluttershy said
"Only one way to find out!" Pinkie said
The ponies began to search around for how to reach the ship and Applejack said pulling out her lasso.
"Hold on girls."
She threw and it coiled on a branch, as they each climbed, Pinkie accidentally triggered a trap and was punched away from a log trap
"Pinkie, are you ok?!" Rainbow said on concern as she flew down to her
"Ow..." Pinkie groaned
The moment she flew down, she fell in a hole trap and was covered in leaves and splinters.
"Rainbow!" The 4 said
They each rushed to the other two's aid, but were also trapped also, Fluttershy when she triggered a tripwire and was shot with a sleep arrow, Applejack when she triggered a log trap from a tripwire and made her walk in a rope trap, Rarity when she was caught in a bear trap when she tripped and Twilight when she was hit by a large branch on the head and fell into a rope trap unconscious. All 6 were trapped and beaten and tried in vain to get out, but stopped upon hearing an familiar voice walking up to them and saying while laughing
"What are you doing here?"
The girls ended up gulping in fear now that Scar had outsmarted them...
(To be continued in next chapter)
Chapter 4: Scar the Hero? Part 2
The 6 trapped mares saw the now annoyed armed Predator looking at them waiting for an answer and wielding his plasma castor. As the awkward silence continued, Scar said, this time in basic language.
"Well?"
The girls stopped trembling and Rarity said "We wanted to come see you."
Scar tilted his head in confusion.
Rainbow Dash said angrily "Let us outta here!"
Scar shot a warning blast at her, which narrowly missed and said now with impatience "That was a warning, next time I won't miss."
The girls, seeing the position they were in decided to not further anger the trained alien and Twilight, now conscious but bruised said "We wanted to talk about you killing the creature."
"That's it?" Scar asked
"Well, we also saw a green trail of liquid and thought we should investigate."
Scar, debating about whether or not he should help, decided to let them up and helped them out of the traps they fell into. After helping Fluttershy asked
"Why did you have to kill it?"
Scar answered "It was attacking your home."
"We could've handled it."
"Plus it proved to be a worthy opponent."
"What?" Twilight asked
"Let's talk in my ship." Scar said and led them in but not before warning them firmly "But...DON'T. TOUCH. ANYTHING."
(Inside the ship)
The girls and Scar were inside and Twilight was in awe and thought of the studies she could think of as she looked around the ship and its settings and interior, she was about to touch a nearby spear but Scar said grabbing her hoof
"What did I just say?"
"But-" Twilight protested
"NO. TOUCHING. ANYTHING." Scar said, no more dead serious
Twilight saw Scar was readying his plasma castor again and gave in with a pout and led the girls in a nearby room and sat down on a chair while the girls went in and saw a bunch of skull heads everywhere of different species all around on pikes or shelves. Scar decided to start off by asking
"Ok, let's start, who are you and most importantly what are you?"
Twilight was the first to answer and said "My name is Princess Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship. I'm an alicorn, a fusion of a pegasus and unicorn"
Applejack was next "Mah name's Applejack. Ahm an Earth Pony"
Scar added "And I take it your sister is the one known as Apple Bloom?"
"Yea, Thank you for saving her and her friends."
"It's fine."
Rainbow Dash was next and said "My name is Rainbow Dash, the fastest pegasus flyer of Equestria and soon to be WonderBolt!"
Rarity was next and said "My name is Rarity, i'm an unicorn who's the owner of Carousel Boutique and I must say, your clothes and armor are very messy!"
"Rarity!" Twilight said
Scar said "It's fine Princess Twilight, plus this was from saving your sister."
Rarity said in amusement "Sweetie Belle really seemed to see you as a hero, she always mentioned you."
Scar only smiled (in his own way) as Pinkie was next and said fast-paced "HIMYNAMEISPINKIEPIEDOYOULIKEPARTIESWHATSYOURFAVORITEFOODIVENEVERSEENYOUBEFOREAREYOUNEW?!-" Twilight put a hoof in her mouth
Twilight saw Scar tilt his head in confusion as Twilight said "Don't ask, It's Pinkie being Pinkie."
The last mare was Fluttershy as she said quietly "I'm...Fluttershy." Scar managed to hear her despite her voice and nodded his head
Scar seeing it's his turn said "My name is Scar, I am a Yautja from the planet Yautja Prime."
"Your an alien?!" The girls all said astonished
"Basically yes."
"This is so amazing, think of the studies, the notes and-." Twilight said but was cut off
"AHEM!" Scar said
"But-
Twilight saw his look of disapproval and pouted again as Scar continued "I am a warrior from my clan who fight to find the best hunt and capture my prey as my prize, such as the creature that attacked you."
"So they basically act as trophies to you?" Twilight said
"Yes and no, as it is bound by the Yautja code of honor to hunt lawful prey that is worthy of defense and attack, the reason i didn't attack the three kids you 3 know was because another rule is to never harm innocents or offspring."
"Are their more rules?" Rarity asked
"Yes, when personally fighting an opponent and given mercy as I did to you, you kill me or yourself to avoid shame, the most worse is killing another yautja, which is a high offense punishable by disownment and death." Scar explained
The girls were left shocked as Scar kept explaining while Twilight wrote down some notes of what he said as Scar said to her
"Princess Twilight, you may take notes, but NOT TOUCH THE EQUIPMENT."
"Very well, it's only fair." Twilight agreed
Twilight continued to write as Scar explained more of the code to her and the girls such as not harming the diseased, show honor to the wounded prey, hunt only the weak when hunting for food to purify the species bloodline, never interfere in another's hunt, being forbidden to use weapons that are too destructive for the sake of innocent lives and those who violate the rules are disgraced.
"The disgraced are given the name Bad-Blood."
"Why?" Rainbow Dash asked
Scar got up and pulled a head of a dead predator off the wall of trophies and showed the horrified girls.
"This yautja was a bad-blood because of dishonorably killing whomever stood in his way and disobeying the honor code, he died an well deserved death in his hunt, his name was Berserker." Scar said giving the head a look of hate.
The girls gave looks of horror and Twilight said "By the way, can you talk to us of your powers?"
"What?" Scar asked
"You disappeared in front of us remember?"
"That was not power, that was my gear, specifically my cloak."
Scar cloaked and then uncloaked in front of them as the girls gave looks of surprise
"That is all I will show you though, my weapons are too dangerous."
Twilight complied and said with a smile "You don't sound so bad. Maybe we can make the other ponies not see you as a threat."
Scar said "How can you do that?"
Twilight only smiled as she guided him out of the ship, but not before he put on his gear and weapons and followed.
(Ponyville)
In an office, a mare with a grey mane was seen and the door suddenly opened, revealing Twilight and her friends
"Oh Princess Twilight!" Mayor Mare bowed
"It's ok, but we need to make an announcement."
"For?"
"It's about a new...well...."pony"
"What?"
"Please, try to roll with me, this is really important."
Twilight began to explain to her the events
(2 hours later)
The town of Ponyville was gathering around a stage and were murmuring as to what was happening, then Mayor Mare came and said on the podium
"Hello citizens of Ponyville, you are all wondering why you are here, to answer your question, Princess Twilight Sparkle and the Elements of Harmony have a special announcement."
She left the podium as Twilight went up to it and said
"Hello everypony, we have a special announcement about a newcomer in town."
The citizens were whispering among themselves as Twilight continued
"Now when we introduce him, try not to panic." She continued as the ponies gave looks of approval as Twilight said next to her
"Ok, you can come out now Scar."
Scar suddenly uncloaked himself in front of the shocked audience.
"Everypony, this is Scar, he is a warrior who is a different species called yautja who saved not just the town from the bugbear, but also the Cutie Mark Crusaders when they were in danger.
The shocked ponies gave looks of surprise with some murmuring in amazement or fright such as
"He is really tall and scary!"
"What is up with his mane?"
"Why do I hear him clicking?"
The ponies continued to murmur and in a few seconds began to applaud as during the commotion an pink unicorn and purple small dragon came in and the unicorn said
"Twilight, what's going on?"
"Oh hi Starlight, hi Spike, we have a new visitor to Ponyville." She then motioned to Scar
Starlight and Spike gave looks of terror at the alien and his weaponry as Spike said "Are you gonna hurt us?"
Scar said kneeling to him "Relax boy, I don't intend to harm you or your friends, I only wish to show I mean no threat."
Spike was somewhat relieved, but still was nervous like Starlight at the tall alien as Starlight asked him in shock
"Um I don't mean insult you but....what are you?"
"I'm a species known as Yautja."
"Whoa." Starlight and Spike replied
Twilight said "Everypony, Scar here just says he wishes to not be a threat and that you treat him respect as he did with us."
A few ponies were reluctant, but some agreed and shouted with excitement and acceptance. After the event (Which Scar spoke personally, yet the ponies couldn't comprehend his grammar aside from Twilight.), the citizen ponies returned to their homes while Scar returned to his ship in the forest, but not before Twilight saw him and said "They must really like you."
Scar said "I see, I must go now, it's getting late, I'll see you soon."
Twilight nodded saying with a smile "Goodbye Scar."
The girls and Scar began to head back to their respective homes.
(Unknown location.)
An tall yautja was seen slowly infiltrating an abandoned mysterious environment in cloak mode. As it continued its trek, it saw a large bug like equine who said wrathfully
"Those blasted ponies and their Princesses crossed me the last time!, along with Starlight Glimmer!, this time I will have my revenge!" She then blasted a large rock during her rant and the creature witnessed this without her knowledge
As she continued to rant, the cloaked creature suddenly jumped behind her and beheaded her and took her head as a trophy and said in a garbled tone
"What...The....Hell...Are....YOU?"
The creature began to look around and left the scene in search for new prey, taking the dead changeling's head with him
Author's Note
Can anyone guess who the mysterious predator at the end was?
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Chapter 5: Honor or Disgrace? (Shadow Play Part 2)
Scar was slowly getting up drowsy and began to wake up and the moment he did, he saw himself in an endless void.
"What?" Scar said confused
As Scar looked around confused, he saw himself in an icy environment and saw an all too familiar figure. That was Lex Woods, the human he allied with to kill the creature.
The place suddenly exploded and a large xenomorphic queen appeared in front of them and attacked
As Scar had been fatally impaled by the creature, he witnessed his human ally and himself use their last amount of strength to outwit her and push her off a steep cliff using a large chain tied to a vat on the whaling station.
The scene began to fade out more as Scar said "What?!"
Scar had suddenly woke up and saw that he had merely suffered from an flashback when he was still alive and got up, he began to put on his gear and head out to Ponyville and saw the ponies doing their own things and began to walk among them, with some even waving at him.
As Scar walked, three familiar voices were heard and said in delight
"SCAR!"
Three fillies had knocked down the noble yautja and he looked and saw the Cutie Mark Crusaders looking at him with happy looks as Apple Bloom said
"Your back!"
"Of course, why wouldn't I be?"
"Well cause our friends attacked you and you pummeled them to the ground!" Scootaloo said
"And you even withstood them each with even getting hurt!" Sweetie Belle added
"I apologize, that is a part of my clan, whomever is armed, they might bring harm. That is also why i didn't harm you 3."
"We weren't armed?" Apple Bloom asked
"No, because it is an offense to kill offspring or children, i've seen a few do so and pay a terrible price."
The 3 fillies gave shocked looks as Scootaloo said "What do you mean?"
Scar, with a reluctant look as to what happened to evil Yautja said "You'll understand when you are older."
The 3 were confused, but decided to not argue and Scar got up and asked "So what has happened?"
Sweetie Belle said sadly "Our sisters have to go on another mission again to save Equestria."
Scar saw their looks of sorrow and said "They will be fine, they are strong, I have seen their strengths and might I say they are...impeccable."
The 3 fillies felt somewhat reassured and Scar decided to ask "So what has happened?"
"Well me and the crusaders were doing some crusading and when were we found this where Twilight and her friends were going." Apple Bloom said
"Wait...let me see that." Scar asked and saw the mask and upon examining it, gave a look of shock
The 3 fillies were confused as to what happened as Apple Bloom asked "Whats wrong Scar?"
'Where did you find this?" he quickly asked
The Crusaders were surprised at his tone as Sweetie Belle said "We found it where Twilight and her friends were going, and the weird part is, we saw some weird dog things."
Scar, hearing this, gave a look of confusion and then of realization and said "Can you take me there?"
The three nodded and led him to the castle of Friendship, as they did so, Scar felt that something was amiss, how did another yautja appear on this planet?, he knew there was only one way to find out. As they reached the Castle, Scar knocked on the door, but there was no answer, he knocked again, only this time, the door itself opened and when Scar examined it, the place was completely quiet and he began to investigate the rooms. As he did so, he saw the dragon known as Spike inside and said to him.
"Spike?"
The baby dragon turned and said in surprise "Scar, what are you doing here?"
"Where is Princess Twilight?"
"She had to go to Canterlot, she found something that can bring back the Elements of Harmony."
"What?"
"They are the things that protect the land, there are in total 6 that belong to my friends. Applejack is Honesty, Rainbow is Loyalty, Fluttershy is Kindness, Pinkie Pie is Laughter, Rarity is Generosity and Twilight is Magic."
Scar, hearing this said "Can you take me to their location?"
"I would, but I have to watch the Castle."
"It'll take a few minutes, I promise."
Spike thought about it and said "Ok, follow me."
Spike led Scar out the castle and led him through Ponyville to the Train station and paid the bits for his ticket, but Scar told Spike to come with him as he was still new and Spike agreed. As they saw the train coming, they went inside and sat down, waiting for their location.
(A few hours later)
The train was still going on to Canterlot as Spike was asleep on Scar's arm as the yautja stroked his head affectionately. As he did, the train stopped and reached Canterlot and Spike woke up from Scar's shaking and they left the train.
The two went into the city and saw the elegance and style of the city, and as they walked a few nobles said
"What is that lizard doing with that thing?"
"That thing looks awful compared to him!"
Scar and Spike ignored the insults (Scar however, shot a blade at one, causing them to run in fright.) and began to walk the castle of the royal sisters, as they did Spike asked
"Did you have to do that?"
"What?" Scar replied
"You almost killed a noble." Spike said
"So?"
"The princesses will probably arrest you or something!"
"Where I am from, Royalty is earned from respect and honor, not given out of pure greed or selfishness."
Spike gave an astonished look and said 'Your people must really be strict."
Scar only nodded, saying "Strict doesn't even describe it."
As they reached near the castle, they were unaware of a mysterious cloaked observer on top of the castle watching them and it said.
"Scar.."
The cloaked creature jumped down and sneaked behind the castle and left ominously.
Scar and Spike reached into the castle and saw the two sisters Princess Celestia and Princess Luna on their thrones as Celestia said and suddenly a bunch of guards said
'Intruder!"
They all readied their weapons at the yautja until Celestia said
"Spike, what are you doing here?, did something happen?"
"No Princess, it's fine, but my friend Scar here needs to speak to Twilight."
The two sisters gave a look at the predator as Luna asked him "What are thou creature?"
Scar only glared at her through his mask and said "I am a species known as Yautja."
The two gave looks at the creature and Celestia said "Guards, stand down!"
The guards did so as Celestia asked "Why do you want to know about Princess Twilight?"
Scar said "She is in danger and I must save her."
"From whom, might I ask is causing her danger?"
"One of my clan members."
Luna asked "What is he doing exactly that is putting Twilight in danger?"
Scar said "He wants to kill her."
The two gave shocked looks and Celestia said "Why is that?"
"Prize"
"Meaning?" Luna asked
"Kill for his own reasons I don't know aside from his own amusement, now tell me where she is, we're losing too much time."
"Why should we trust you, you could be helping him?" Luna asked with distrust
"If I was, why am I here?" Scar retorted
The two sisters noticed the Yautja's impatience and complied by saying "She has gone with her friends and student to return the Pillars of Equestria, I shall teleport you two there to stop your foe from killing her."
"Wait, two?" Spike asked
Scar nodded and said "Spike, I may need your help"
"What?, me?"
"Yes, Twilight and her friends might need you as well."
"But-"
"Trust me, i have a plan" Scar said and Spike was initially scared but said
"Ok "
The two were engulfed in a golden magic glow and suddenly disappeared.
(Unknown Location)
Scar and Spike fell on the ground and got up slowly, seeing he was in another sort of village, he began to walk around to investigate and saw magic coming from another location and turning on his cloak and went inside and saw them pushing inside a large creature shaped in black as a pony, with a grey unicorn head appearing out it's mass as Twilight said
"There's a pony in there!"
Twilight jumped in the creature and all went black
Scar and Spike continued to observe and saw the ponies saving the grey unicorn from the dark creature as they pushed it inside a large portal. After they managed to do so, Scar witnessed the ponies reconciling and happy looks and saw an cloaked creature on his bio mask appear behind them as the creature suddenly uncloaked in front of the ponies.
Twilight saw him and asked with confusion
"Scar, what are you doing here?"
The predator didn't answer and merely looked and said nothing, merely observing.
"Um, dude?, Are you ok?" Rainbow Dash asked
The unknown yautja again didn't answer and before anyone could react, he fired his wrist blade at them, hitting Rainbow Dash and sticking her on the wall as the ponies gave looks of horror as Twilight said up close to him
"Scar, what are you doing?!"
The creature backhanded her and whistled, just then a bunch of hounds appeared and attacked as Rarity said in horror
"RUN!"
Then the predator blasted his plasma castor and blocked the exit, followed by the growling hounds. Just as they could lunge, Scar appeared and blasted the predator with his plasma castor and uncloaked in front of the ponies and said
"Are you all ok?!"
"Scar, how did-wait if your Scar, then who's that?!" Applejack asked in shock
"He's a bad-blood."
The bad-blood predator saw Scar and asked in yautja tongue "(Scar, what are you doing here?)"
"(I can ask you the same question Tracker!)" Scar said in yautja tongue
"(Move now Scar, this isn't your hunt.)" Tracker said
Scar said in refusal in his language "(Not. Happening.)
"... (Very Well.)" Tracker said and readied to fight his honorable foe
(Fight theme)
The two Yautja's charged and fought one another with the ponies watching in horror as the two aliens fought. The ponies were left shocked and confused as to what was happening and the girls and Sunburst helped Scar fight Tracker and his hounds. As they did, the Hounds cornered them and the Pillars while Scar and Tracker still fought, with Scar's chest slashed and Tracker's mask destroyed, exposing a large gash on the right side of his face (with Tracker also losing his combispear in the process) Tracker, now more enraged let out a feral roar and blasted his plasma castor at the ponies, but was speared in the face by Scar. Tracker however still lived and lunged with rage using his spear and fought them all, knocking down the ponies into the Pillars and Scar by slashing his knee and said mockingly while readying his plasma castor
"Say goodbye!"
Just as the bad-blood could fire, his face was suddenly stabbed and a large spear was impaled in his face, the now dying predator fell on the ground, as the thrower was revealed to be Spike, having hid while the fight happened to avoid getting blasted.
"Spike?!" The ponies asked
"I..killed...him." Spike said in fear
As the baby dragon huddled in fear, Scar heard Tracker surprisingly still alive, but wounded and went to him and said in yautja tongue.
"(How did you get here?)
"(My ship crashed while I was hunting.)"
The ponies went up to him as Twilight asked "Why go after US though?"
Tracker said gargling in his blood "(What?)"
Scar said on yautja "(She said why did you target her and her friends?)"
Tracker only laughed and said "(WE weren't after them, we were after the true warrior that is known as "The Hero".)"
"(What?)" Scar asked
Tracker however, died of his wounds before he could answer again as Scar got up and Twilight asked "What did he say?"
"He said he was sent to find the true warrior"
"True warrior?" Rainbow Dash asked
"He said the true warrior is "The Hero""
The girls were even more confused as to what that meant and Scar even added "And he said WE aren't after them, that means there must be more bad-bloods."
The girls were horrified while Twilight was confused as to who the true warrior really was as Spike got up and reunited with them, ready to leave the scene.
(Far away from where the heroes are)
An unknown cloaked individual was seen watching the entire scene unfold and as it watched and gave a satisfactory look and said
"True Warrior, YOU..MINE."
Author's Note
I know this chapter sounded a bit rushed , but I'be been doing lots of school work lately, I'll try and fix the other chapters if possible
Ps can anybody guess who the true warrior is?
Ps again, can anybody guess which predator is seen at the end?
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Chapter 6: My Little Pony The Movie Meets The Predator Part 1
After the events with the Tracker Predator, Twilight decided to invite Scar over with her to the Friendship Festival in Canterlot with her friends. As they did so, Scar gave a uneasy glance at her and told her he isn't very social, but Twilight insisted, along with the other ponies. As they reached the festivities Scar was seen watching the ponies having fun with one another and gave (in his way) a small smile under his mask, as he did he went and spoke with Twilight and said.
"Was it a good idea for me to join this event of yours?"
Twilight smiled and said "Yes, it may help the other ponies think your not an villain to them."
Scar then said "But this changes nothing, you know that."
Twilight said "I know, and what we did was wrong. We'll try what we can to earn you friendship."
Scar still felt uneasy but rolled with it and saw the other girls and Spike along with the princesses in the festivities planning the games and other events. As they did, Scar however suddenly saw something in his visor and said to the ponies, who now saw the sky blackening.
"Something is coming!"
"What's happening?" Twilight asked
Scar, seeing three heat signatures in his visor said now in a combat stance "We have company."
The large ship then suddenly dropped down and as they did, the doors had suddenly opened and a small hedgehog like creature appeared and said in a lisp like manner
"Ponies of Equestria, we come on behalf of the fearsome, the powerful, the almighty...Storm King! And now, to deliver the evil, evil message, put your hooves together for Commander Tempest! And the ultimate hunters, Assassin and Falconer!"
At the moment he finished, an unicorn in black armor had appeared in the walkway and revealed herself to have a broken horn and scar on her face and behind her were, to the horror of Scar, two more predators, the first one looking as of average height and wielded the standard weaponry and the other was taller then him and surprisingly did not wear any of the standard equipment, Tempest and Grubber and wielded no weapons except for the ones on his wrist.
As they appeared the ponies gave fearful looks while Scar got ready to fight and Celestia asked
"What do you want?"
Tempest said in a dark tone "Oh I'm so glad you asked, how about we start with your complete and total surrender."
The tall predator behind her said to Scar in yautja "(We also wish to find the true warrior known as "The Hero, and the three rulers of the land)"
The ponies gave confused looks at what he said while Scar said while roaring his mandibles "(NEVER!)"
"(You always were the defiant one of us Scar)." the small predator said
The two turned to Tempest and she said "I take it that was a no?"
The two bad-bloods nodded in confirmation and Tempest readied and a green orb and flung it at the princesses, shouting to the guards "ATTACK!"
The first one had hit Celestia, then Cadance as she used a shield with her magic, but it failed and the last to be petrified was Luna as she fell and was caught in mid-air. Her next target was Scar and Twilight, yet as she and her soldiers attacked Twilight managed to run away with her friends with Scar, who seeing the situation and knowing she was in danger said to Twilight
"Go, i'll hold them away from you!"
Twilight said to Scar in shock "What?!, are you crazy?!"
Scar said "They said they want the rulers, which are you and the other princesses, we can't risk you being taken as well!"
Twilight, seeing the guards closing in said "Good luck, Scar." and escaped as Scar turned and saw the Storm guards and charged with an furious battle cry.
The trained alien fought wave after wave with his enhanced equipment and weaponry and slaughtered numerous amounts of soldiers in his way, as he reached the last wave, he saw the two dishonorable clan members in front of him along with Tempest and Grubber as the taller predator said while activating his vocal translator.
"(Where are they Scar?)"
Scar defiantly responded "(Away from you Falconer and Ultimate!)"
Tempest saw the exchange and said "I'm guessing he's not gonna tell us where the last princess is heading?"
Falconer nodded in acknowledgement and Tempest, with an evil grin "Then I guess will force it out of him."
She, along with Grubber, Falconer and Ultimate jumped and fought the lone warrior, although outnumbered, this would not stop Scar. He first started by blasting Grubber away, knocking him into a cake stand, Falconer and Ultimate attacked with their wrist blades and landed several slashes on Scar's chest, yet Falconer was knocked out with a blow to the face and Ultimate was impaled in the shoulder on a nearby wall. The last opponent was Tempest as she did numerous spins and jumps throwing green orbs at Scar, who dodged or evaded her every throw and blasted his plasma castor at her.
As they fought in ranged combat, they were eventually out of ammunition, the two were now face to face and began to fight in hand-to-hand combat, with Tempest fighting on the offensive as Scar dodged to time the right moment to attack. Just as she left an opening, Scar kicked her in the torso and dealt an savage roundhouse to her face, knocking her to the ground and slightly damaging her armor. Tempest got up and gritted her teeth and shouted to her remaining guards
"Destroy him!"
Scar saw the incoming guards and knowing that he was too beaten to fight back, began to run as Tempest and the Storm guards began to pursue him.
"Don't let him escape!"
The chase further increased Scar's adrenaline as he ran to the point where he couldn't see his enemy and just as he thought he was in the clear, he saw Tempest hurl an orb at him, causing him to dodge, yet fall near the bridge, as he was falling and landed on impact, he blacked out.
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Chapter 7: My Little Pony The Movie meets The Predator part 2
Scar slowly began to wake up with his vision blurry from the fall, he slowly woke up and the moment his bluriness, faded, he saw himself being carried by none other then Twilight and the girls along with Spike in a desert like environment, and said slowly while getting up and saw that his helmet was off and in Spike's hands, exposing his face.
"What happened?"
The 7 saw him waking up and went over to him as Twilight put him gently on the ground and said "When you fought them off, you were blasted and you fell off and landed near us."
Fluttershy added "We had to take your mask and armor off to see if you were that hurt."
Scar looked down and saw that his armor was removed except for his wrist-blades as Applejack asked in shock upon seeing his marked face and chest "Wow, you must have fought so many battles."
Scar commented "So many is so little."
The ponies saw his wounds started to heal a bit faster as he said "Don't worry, wounds for my race heal more faster when treated."
Scar managed to get up, but when he did his leg slowly hurt more as Fluttershy said while pushing him back down "No, you need to rest, you also hurt your ankle when you fell."
Scar, knowing his healing would take some time said "Can I at least put my armor and gear on?"
"Alright." Fluttershy said as Scar slowly began to put his gear and weapons and lied down as Twilight used her magic to strap and carry him on a magical stretcher.
As they walked they saw a nearby town and saw it was occupied with various other kinds of creatures and slowly began to enter the town, the moment they got in, they saw the creatures suddenly look at them with interest and started to ramble about them.
"Hey how much for the gecko?"
"I want that fancy purple hair, I'll give ya two storm bucks for it!"
"Forget that!, that large two legged thing looks way more valuable."
"Yeah!, let's take him instead!"
"And that mask, it looks like its worth alot!"
The moment Scar heard this, he saw a laser blast suddenly knock back all the vendors into walls or stands injured as Twilight asked in shock
"Scar, what did you do?!"
"That wasn't me!" Scar protested
A large thud was heard in front of the girls as a cat like creature was seen coming in and said next to something uncloaking himself "Was that really necessary?"
The creature revealed itself to the shock of the heroes, another predator, only this time, he was more armed.
Scar saw the creature and said in shock "(You?!)"
The creature said in confusion "(Scar?!)"
The two yautja stared as the cat like creature said "You two know each other?!"
"He is a traitor to my clan's code!" Scar said
The yautja in question suddenly pressed a button on his wrists and suddenly spoke perfect English.
'I had to!" The claimed traitor said in defense.
The two stared down as Scar now got up and stared with rage at the fugitive predator, just as the cat got in between them and said
"Now now, let's not ruin the town, you could make the place dirty!"
Scar turned to him and said "Who are you?"
"Capper's the name, Charming's my game. So...to the Hippos then?"
"What?" Scar asked
"He means the Hippogriffs, we need to find them to stop the Storm King" Twilight clarified
Scar said with a distrustful tone, mostly to Fugitive "Why should we trust YOU two?"
Fugitive said "Have you known the term "The enemy of my enemy is my friend?"
Scar gave a surprised look, he knew full well that there was only one person, or one human in this case, that said this to him, that was Lex Woods, whom he teamed up with to kill the aliens and the queen when they killed her team and his brothers and soon enough himself. Scar then nodded his head as Fugitive said
'Well right now, we must stop a tyrant from killing this land with two bad-bloods"
Scar said "Let me guess, Ultimate and Falconer?
Capper said suddenly and got in a song like stance.
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As Capper finished his song he along with Fugitive led them and Scar to his home. When they reached the house, they went in as Capper said
"Welcome my little ponies, to my little manor."
Scar observed the home and said "Comfy"
As the ponies went to talk to Capper, Scar turned to Fugitive and said
"So....how did you end up here?"
Fugitive said in a tone of dismay "When I was still in my ship, the controls began to short out and only then had I realized that I was played for a fool by the Bad-bloods. When i crashed here, Capper offered me a way of life in this town and I chose to agree."
Scar asked in curiosity "Who is the Bad-blood?"
Fugitive said "Ultimate, he did it because he said he is after the "Hero" of the land."
Scar replied in shock "That's what Tracker told me."
"Tracker is here?!" Fugitive said
"He was and he is dead thanks to the small dragon over there."
Fugitive then gave a relieved sigh and as he and Scar conversed, the door suddenly began to open and in it came in two familiar figures. The now 2 furious Bad-bloods came in with Tempest an Grubber as Ultimate said tauntingly
"Well, trusting strangers?, what a fatal mistake."
"It seems you two have..outlived your usefulness." Falconer said
"You two...were with them?" Rarity said betrayed
"Get them!" Tempest said and the guards attacked the ponies.
The ponies and Spike gave horrified looks and ran off while Scar covered them with his Plasma Castor and shouted.
"GO!"
The heroes complied and ran off in a rush as Scar fought them off and as he did, he was overwhelmed by the amounts of enemies in his way and was hit on the knee by Tempest. Just as she could attack again, Fugitive punched her away and shouted
"RUN!!"
Scar saw him hold them off and pursued the ponies and climb a giant rope onto a large boat and climbed up and saw the ponies hide in a hull and jumped onto the ship and cloaked himself saying to them.
"Hide!"
The ponies did so and just as they did a voice was heard
"Did you hear something?"
The ponies grew stiff while Scar remained alert in cloak mode, as the hull opened, the identity was revealed to be an avian like creature with a few others as he said
"Looks like we got some stowaways."
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"And I got YOU." Scar said
The now uncloaked Scar grabbed the bird and held him in a shield stance and held him as the other ones were confused until a brute force knocked him back and said in surprisingly yautja.
"(You mess with them, you mess with me!)"
The cloaked identity revealed itself to the surprise of the ponies, another predator, only this time, it was so someone Scar knew very, very well as the now revealed creature stared and saw Scar and said in shock.
"(Scar?!)"
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Chapter 8: My Little Pony The Movie meets The Predator part 3
"(Celtic?!)" Scar said in shock
The two predators went over to each other and shared a hug as the pirates and the heroes looked on in confusion and one of the birds said
"You two know each other?!"
"Yes, this is my brother, Scar." Celtic said
This statement suddenly left the whole scene awkward and shocking as the pirates and ponies and Spike gave looks of shock or disbelief as this made Celaeno say
"That's your brother?!"
Twilight even added "Scar, you didn't mention any family to us, let alone a brother!."
"Because he died, and that raises another question. How are you alive?"
"I do not know, all I remember is that when I died, I fell into a dark void, and then I woke up here."
"Plus, he met us a few weeks ago and he beat EACH of us when he wanted to join our crew, we let him in when he helped fix our weapons." Celaeno said
"So you are basically pirates or mercenaries?" Scar asked
"Of a sort yes" Celtic replied
"Pirates!?" The girls and Spike said on shock
"And worst part is, we have to help the Storm King and his two other friends of his that look like you two." Celaeno said in dismay while pointing at Scar and Celtic
"You mean...you met the Bad-bloods?" Scar asked
"Yes, they said they are with him because they want the true warrior known as The Hero." Celtic said
Scar, with a unreadable look, took Celtic in private as the girls spoke with the pirates, when the two were alone, Scar then said to his brother
"But wait.....Is there a chance Chopper is alive also?"
Celtic only gave a sign of sorrow and said "I do not know, I tried to reach him, but his signal was gone."
Scar layed his head down with grief and only hugged his brother, as they did, they heard rumbling coming and Scar went to them and said in shock
"Oh no.."
The heroes were shocked as Celtic said "How did they see us?!"
The girls and Spike gave looks of anger at Rainbow Dash, who sheepishly laughed in reply as Celaeno said
"RUN!"
The ponies did so with Scar joining as Celtic covered him, as the ponies ran, a crash came and they each fell to the sky, Celtic managed to stay on, but Scar did not. With Scar skydiving with enough velocity to catch Rarity, Pinkie and Applejack while Twilight used her magic to save Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. As they fell, Twilight managed to use her magic to comfort their fall while Scar jumped on a wall and backflipped still carrying the 3 mares. They all cheered, while Scar only continued to walk to find the next checkpoint and said to them
"Let's go"
As they approached, they continued as Twilight saw and said "This is it!"
"Whatever it was, it must have killed everything" Scar observed
The girls only gave looks of fear as they began to walk and just as they jumped in the water, bubble had come on them to help their breathing suddenly a singing voice was heard humming.
Twilight said "Hello?, we're looking for the Hippogriffs."
The voice said "How do I know I can trust you?"
Scar said "You must, two criminals of my clan have joined the one known as Storm King and must be stopped."
The voice gasped and said "The Storm King?!, I'm so glad I found you guys. I'm totally taking you too my mom!"
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As Skystar led the heroes into the city, they were greeted by sea cities and buildings and creatures such as sea shells and clams. As she led them, they were face to face with a large seapony creature as Skystar said
"Mom, guess what I found!"
"Skystar, if it's another sea shell-" The mother of Skystar said and saw the heroes and Scar and said "Princess Skystar, what have you done!?, you know surface-dwellers are forbidden here!, Guards!"
The heroes gasped while guards were suddenly summoned and were led by surprisingly another yautja who looked like a hybrid of a seapony and pegasus and said to Scar in shock "Brother?!"
"What?" Scar asked
The yautja hippogriff hybrid replied by revealing his face to be normal and dark black skinned but with the signature yautja hair bangs, and Scar said in recognition "Chopper?!"
"HUH!?!" The girls, Skystar, the queen and Spike all said in shock at the reunion as the two brothers reunited, Chopper asked "What are you doing here?"
"Me?, What are YOU doing here?, I thought you were dead."
"So did I." Chopper replied
"Ok, I can't take it, what is going on!?!" The queen said
"Oh sorry Queen Novo, this is my brother Scar."
This statement shocked the heroes and Novo and Skystar and made Novo and Twilight both say "You have another brother?!"
"Yes, Celtic is the oldest of us." Scar said
"Celtic is alive?!" Chopper asked
"Yeah, we saw him with a group of pirates as their muscle." Rainbow Dash said
"Well I'm happy you are both alive." Chopper said
Scar, however said "Yet that doesn't answer how you are here."
Chopper only gave a dismayed expression and said "Guards, leave, this is a personal matter."
The guards stood down and left. Chopper said with dismay
"I do not know, I only remember the Xenomorph killing me and then I woke up here, where Novo and her daughter saved me."
Novo then continued "Ever since, he was our lands protector and both mine and Skystar's personal guard."
"Whoa" the heroes all said
The ponies and Spike then went to them as Scar followed Chopper, but not before Novo said "Scar, can you come here?"
Scar did so and the moment he did, he turned into a seaponies like the girls, while Spike turned into a pufferfish. Scar looked the same as the girls only his face had a more pony like appearance and his gear did as well, as Scar looked over himself, he said
"Impressive. I shall speak with my brother if that's not much."
Novo nodded and went with the girls and Scar went with his brother, as he did the two spoke and Chopper said upon seeing the mark on his helmet "I see now you are a blooded warrior."
Scar nodded and said "I died killing the queen with an ooman's help."
"But how did you get here?"
"When the shop crashed, a chestburster killed everyone and crashed here in their villages forest."
"Wait, is it still here?!"
"No, but the worst part is, we must stop Bad-bloods instead. In fact, the Storm King has allied with Falconer and Ultimate."
"Oh no. Let's hope that there aren't more then there was last time." Chopper said in fear
Scar gave a grim look, but not wanting to ruin the mood, said in curiosity "So how have you been here?"
Chopper said "When I fell here, I spent time killing criminals of this world in their kingdom, as time passed I met Novo who used her pearl to see me. She offered me a place as her guard and I accepted since I did not know their customs, she used her magic to ensure the water didn't affect my gear.
Scar asked "Pearl?"
"It is the main possession of Queen Novo that is all I know."
The two continued to converse until an alarm was heard and Chopper, using his mask said in anger
"And the purple one proved my point."
Scar, realizing who he was exactly referring to said "Twilight!"
The two went to the pearl and saw the now enraged queen sending away the heroes, Scar saw this and said "What is going on?!"
"The so called hero tried to take the pearl, you will go now that you are here." Novo said and before Scar could say anything, she launched away as Chopper gave a look of horror under his mask.
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Chapter 9: My Little Pony The Movie meets The Predator part 4
The moment Scar was launched out, he was his normal yautja self, this time he was on the ground with the main 7 as he removed his mask and gave Twilight a look of of hate or disgust as he flared his mandibles angrily.
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"What were ya thinking?!, I mean, stealin their pearl?" Applejack said
Twilight replied "It was the only way to save Equestria."
"'Cept it wasn't, the Queen was going to say yes! We did what you told us and that's what made her realize we ponies are worth saving!, unless....you didn't really want us to show her the best time ever! You just wanted us to distract her!"
This made the girls gasp
"Well I never would've done it, but this isn't Equestria! We can't dance around with con artists! Make rainbooms in the sky and hope things would work out! It's not enough! We are not enough!." Twilight justified
"No Twilight!, we stuck together and we were gonna get the help we needed, the only one that stopped us, was you!" Pinkie said
"Well I'm doing the best I can!, it's all on me, I'm the one they want!, I'm the last Princess!" Twilight said
"Your also the only one who doesn't trust her friends!" Pinkie said
Twilight snapped and said "Well maybe I would gave been better off without friends like you!!"
Scar, now in pure anger flared his mandibles had suddenly shouted "WHO SAID WE WERE FRIENDS YOU OVERCOMPENSATED, SAD, LYING, HYPOCRITICAL, PATHETIC, TYRANNICAL BITCH!!!!!"
Twilight gasped in shock as Scar's words pierced her heart, the use of his language even shocked the girls and Spike. As she was about to retort, Scar proceeded to rant
"I NEVER ASKED TO BE HERE!!!, I ONLY WANTED TO DIE PEACEFULLY WITH MY BROTHERS, BUT NO!, I HAD TO DEAL WITH THIS SORRY FACADE OF A LAND THAT'S REALLY JUST RULED WITH A SINGLE CONCEPT THATS MOSTLY USED BY YOU AND YOUR HYPOCRITE MENTORS AS A WAY TO JUSTIFY YOUR CRIMES AND NEED I SAY AGAIN HYPOCRISY!, NOT ONLY THAT BUT YOU 6 HAVE THE DECENCY TO SAY YOU REPRESENT FRIENDSHIP WHEN YOU SHOWED ONLY TO USE THAT FRIENDSHIP FOR SELFISH GAIN!, NOT ONLY THAT, BUT I EVEN SAW YOU EACH ABUSE SPIKE SINCE HE IS THE ONLY ONE WHO SHOWED LITTLE TO NO FEAR TO ME BUT FOR A BETTER REASON!, YOU SAY YOU KNOW TRUE FRIENDSHIP, ALL YOU 6 PHONIES KNOW IS THE PURE DISHARMONY OF IT AND SHOW IT PHYSICALLY SO MUCH YOU ARE TOO STUPID TO SEE IT!!!!!!!!"
The now enraged alien warrior stopped his rant and saw all the girls giving him looks of pure shock and sadness, Rainbow Dash with a look of anger while in tears, Applejack holding her hat while her eyes were red, Rarity with her mouth open in shock as tears ran down her face, Fluttershy covering her face as she cried, Pinkie only gave a look of depression as she trotted away in tears and Twilight had the worst reaction, she heard every word, and they each pierced her heart emotionally as she broke in tears.
Spike, only gave a look at Scar as he walked away out of disgust at the ponies and said to Twilight
"Twilight, it's ok, you'll figure something out."
"No, I can't, he's right, we acted out so much we didn't even realize it." Twilight said in tears, but Spike didn't answer "Spike?"
The moment Twilight turned around she saw to her horror, Ultimate holding him hostage "Spike!"
She was punched out in the face by Falconer as he said "Gotcha!"
The two grabbed Spike and Twilight and hoisted them up onto the ship. Unbeknownst to the two, Scar watched the whole thing in cloak form and jumped onto the ship just as it activated a force field. As it took off, Scar struggled to hang on as the ship flew into the sky
As the ship flew away to its destination, he saw the ponies meeting with not just his brothers and Fugitive, but with the others they had encountered in their journey.
(Inside the ship)
Spike was being violently dragged into a cell by Ultimate as he protested, he was thrown in and the evil Yautja locked the door after he slammed it.
"Dude, what's your deal?!" Spike asked
Ultimate turned his head and ignored him as Spike continued
"You have a serious issue!, why is it your targeting me at most?"
Falconer, who happened to be guarding the cell said "Reasons you have yet to understand boy."
"Yeah, well I'm still confused why are you doing this?"
Falconer, in hesitation said "Ultimate, can you give us a minute?"
The upgraded alien complied and left the cell room as Falconer said to Spike "Listen up boy and listen perfectly, I fight for honor and I take it very seriously."
"But why, what did you do that caused it to make you this way?"
Falconer was silent for a second, but then said in a hesitant manner " When I was still on my home planet, I was training hard to become an true hunter, a capable warrior and be skilled in any situation possible in order to bring my clan honor. During that time, I was still training, I was to marry my beloved.."
"But?"
Falconer proceeded to sing as he circled Spike menacingly.
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Falconer
Scar (who's still on top of the ships roof sitting with a look of regret hidden under his mask)
Falconer
Scar
Falconer
Scar
Falconer
Spike asked in shock "So your bride only used you while parents only made you do it without even showing YOUR opinion of the matter?"
"Not only that, they said I disgraced them for her rejection of me."
Spike gave a look of pity as Falconer continued "We are the same you and I, both of our friends and families used and betrayed us for their own needs without caring about us, like you and that purple alicorn friend of yours."
"How do you know that?" Spike asked
"We've watched your race for years and we needed a planet for us to test our might, we chose many but the challenges were unworthy. After we found Equestria, we found a way to increase our gear and strength and while I did I saw your "treatment" and might I say your friends are just in my opinion pure selfish. Not to mention, we use that as a wau to train more abd increase our strength. But I can't say the same about your Princess."
"Where is she!?" Spike shouted
"Not here, with Tempest."
Spike laid down, but not before asking "By the way, why did you two want me anyways?"
"That is Ultimate's matter, not mine. But I guess one reason is to see if you are a true hero after all you went through."
Spike only said in pity "I'm sorry."
Falconer only turned his head away and went back to watching over him in silence
Author's Note
I edited the song lyrics to change the reason for Falconer's act of dishonor since the movie Predators didn't reveal a clarified reason
Song belongs to its rightful owner
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Chapter 10: My Little Pony The Movie meets The Predator part 5
As the ship landed in Canterlot, Scar got off the ship and saw that the whole place was pillaged and the citizens captured, with Twilight being in a cage while the other girls were being held captive by Storm Guards. As he watched, he gave a sad look and said
"I'm sorry."
He did not have time to mourn however, he saw that the ponies and knew that his other brethren should be in the area and scanned for them using thermal vision, he saw Celtic on one roof, Chopper on the other and Fugitive in the shadows of the alley. As he watched, he realized the ponies were playing the guards and decided he must also take part of the action and went to Chopper and said
"What did I miss?"
Chopper turned and said "We are going to create a diversion, they distract them and when the time comes, we attack."
Scar nodded and waited, just as he watched he witnessed a few ponies held prisoner being beaten and was about to jump, but Chopper halted him and said
"No, when the signal comes, we'll deal with them."
Scar, in spite of his desire to save them, nodded. As time was passing, Chopper asked Scar in curiosity
"What happened?" Scar said
"What?" Scar asked
"When I went to see them, they looked emotionally down, had something happened?"
"...When Twilight and me and the girls were sent back, she justified that what she did was a good reason."
"And?" Chopper asked
"She shouted at me and them for not being better friends, and I shouted at her back for being a dishonorable if not more disgraceful leader."
Chopper said "Brother, she only does it because she wanted to save not just herself, her friends, family or people, but this world, it's her home. Just like when we killed the aliens to stop OUR home from a similar fate."
"Your right, I let my fear cloud my judgement of them, yet that doesn't change the way they treat Spike as well as their own views of Friendship."
Chopper responded "Yet if he wasn't he would tell someone, plus they might have personal reasons."
Scar was about to argue, but realized that Chopper may be right, he went through the same thing along with his brothers when they fought the aliens and Scar himself had to die fighting the Queen. Just as he began to think again, Chopper saw the signal and said
"NOW!"
The 4 yautja jumped down and had fought all the storm guards, as the girls fought their way to save way to save Twilight while the 4 warriors cut their way to save Spike. As they did, they saw the ship that took Spike and entered, searching the control room and heard a voice
"Help!, I'm in here!"
They saw the small cryo chamber pod and saw Spike inside and activated the door, pulling him out and Scar said
"Hurry, your friends need your help to stop Storm King, we're going to stop Ultimate and Falconer."
Spike nodded and followed them out to reach the others while the 4 warriors followed to the castle and saw two obstacles, Tempest and Falconer
"Move, you two" Scar warned
"I don't think so" Tempest replied
The two lunged and fought, with Falconer fighting Celtic and Fugitive and Tempest against Chopper and Scar.
The 6 fought and Tempest and Falconer were both slowly getting more exhausted and Celtic landed a devastating blow to Falconer's face and Fugitive kicking him unconscious while Scar landed a roundhouse kick to Tempest as Chopper used his agility to toy with her and knock her out. After the two were knocked out, Scar said with a hurry
"Come on, we must stop Ultimate!"
The 4 ran into the castle and saw the Ultimate Predator and Storm King with the staff looking at them with killing intent and Ultimate said "You all have given me so much trouble, I promise in the end we'll make this quick, Tempest!, Falconer!"
The two then reappeared behind them aiming their wrist-blades at the 4 and gave looks of anger, despite their exhausted appearances, they were still able to keep up as Storm King said
"Now I'd recommend putting down your weapons."
"Or what?" Celtic asked
"Or your Princess dies along with The Hero, I've already taken the DNA from her and the other species of this planet. All I need is his and I will begin the first step to his species power." Ultimate said
Scar said "Wait....does this Hero look like a dragon?"
Ultimate nodded, and Scar said with realization "Oh no!"
"We won't ask again, drop the weapons!"
The 4, although reluctant, deactivated their weapons, but kept on their wrist-blades, as they did, Falconer said
"You were worthy foes, but the time has come."
"Time to die." Ultimate said as he and Storm King began to drain what little power they had as they had fallen down weakened, but Scar managed to stand slightly and grabbed the staff in vain, but was knocked away, with some sparks you going to the other 3, restoring ther weapons and power. But just as he could do anything, an explosion had occured, knocking the villains back. The girls had appeared and fought their way in and saw them.
Rainbow Dash, seeing the other yautja asked "You all ok?"
Chopper said while getting up "We're fine, we need to stop Ultimate!"
"We'll deal with Storm King and Tempest!"
The two groups separated and went in opposite directions, the 4 pursued Ultimate and Falconer and engaged battle with Falconer
"Why do you serve him?!" Scar asked
"He will help me regain my honor!"
"He will betray you for his own use!"
Falconer didn't listen as battled all 4 efficiently, as he did he was punched and skidded on the ground as he saw Ultimate running and said "Master, help!"
Ultimate only looked and gave a smirk, and left to pursue the ponies, Falconer seeing his master leave him said
"No!"
He turned to the honorable warriors and said "Well?, I'm right here, finish it!"
"No" Scar said
"What?" Falconer said
"You show your a Bad-blood, that is true, but you never show any mercilessness nor hate towards us and the ponies, you just want to be home."
"How do you know?!"
"I heard what happened, I was there, remember?"
Falconer was confused, until his mind suddenly clicked
(Flashback)
The two yautja's were seen in wedding clothing, and the bride was coming to a younger looking Falconer, as she approached she looked as happened he was
The bride soon reached the altar and faced her groom-to-be, the yautja at front said to Falconer
"Do you Falconer, take Eagle to be your wife?"
"I do"
And do you, Eagle take Falconer to be your husband?
"....No"
The crowd was shocked, and Falconer asked "Why?"
"I did it because your hunts were not only valuable, but more beneficial to my reputation, not only that but with you I could feel more beloved."
The crowd gave looks of shock or pity, while one familiar yautja looked on with sheer disgust to Eagle for her lack of faith to her groom.
(Flashback)
"That was you?"
"Yes, I just didn't do anything because I didn't want to embarrass you."
Falconer only layed his head down in guilt and simply left and cloaked away, not to be seen again
"Falconer?, Falconer?!" Scar asked, but there was no response, until a crash was heard and Fugitive said
"The ponies, their in trouble!"
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Chapter 11: My Little Pony The Movie Meets The Predator part 6
The 4 warriors rushed to the top of the castle to reach the girls and Spike and in pursuit of Ultimate, as he witnessed the girls personally retrieve the staff and hug after having defeated the Storm King and saving Tempest and freeing the other 3 Princesses. The now enraged powerful alien walked up and said in a garbled voice "The Hero", glaring with rage.
The ponies turned to the voice and got into battle stances upon seeing the alien and Twilight said "Guys, i love you"
She went in front of Ultimate and said "Hey, I'm the one you want!, come on, i'm right here!"
He only replied by grabbing her by the throat and looked at her and suddenly threw her away into Tempest.
The other 5 girls attacked, but their hits were ineffective against the alien and he elbowed them out of his way. The Princesses each used their magic against him, but he used his speargun to trap them and subdue their attempts to stop him.
Ultimate saw Spike behind them and grabbed him by the tail as he screamed saying in a garbled voice "The Hero" and ran off
"NO!, NOOOOOOOO!" Twilight shouted as the Ultimate Predator jumped off the castle with Spike in tow and fled
"SPIKE!" the girls all shouted
The 4 warriors came in and saw Ultimate run and Twilight said "I don't understand, he said he wanted one of us or me!"
"No, Ultimate said he wants The Hero!, Spike is the first step for his species to help get Ultimate power in the evolution process, plus you told me Spike is the Hero of the Empire! Spike is the true warrior!, Spike is the Hero!, not all of you!" Scar explained
The ponies followed the 4 warriors and pursued the upgraded Bad-Blood through the city of Canterlot where he ran to the ship him and Falconer went on, as they got in, Spike was placed in a pod and Ultimate manned the controls and started the ship, unaware that Scar and the other predators managed to jump on in time just as the force field had activated, but the ponies failed to reach the ship in time. Scar, Celtic, Chopper and Fugitive all managed to find a way inside the ship and see Ultimate manning the controls. They each cloaked themselves and attacked the upgraded warrior all around the corners, with Ultimate's arm being slashed by Fugitive, while Chopper and Celtic fired explosive spears at him, causing the ship to crash and fall into the city when the beaten Bad-Blood smashed the controls. Scar managed to free Spike and shouted
"Hold on!"
The ship was falling back into ground level and exploded. The ponies saw this and all the girls shouted
"NO!"
"SPIKE!" Twilight said in tears
"SPIKEY-WIKEY!!" Rarity screamed
They rushed to the scene and saw Scar and other 3 slightly bruised carrying an unharmed Spike. The girls gave looks of relief and happiness and hugged the 5 and helped them get up and get to safety and Twilight said to Spike
"Are you ok?"
"Yeah" Spike said with a relieved laugh
The Ultimate Predator had got out of the rubble and roared with rage at the ponies and looked at them and said
"If you all don't want to die, you will hand over the Hero to me!"
"Not even close creep!" Rainbow Dash said as the other girls and yautja nodded, enraging the Bad-Blood as he charged
The ponies and warriors had lunged and attacked the alien all at once, Ultimate was doing his best as he was put on the defensive against each of the heroes. As they fought, he managed to outmaneuver the girls one by one. First he fired his speargun at Rainbow, which didn't kill her, but stuck her on the wall, AppleJack tried to buck him, but his body was extremely resilient and he responded by throwing her near Rainbow Dash, Tempest when she tried to fight him, though a valiant warrior, the evil alien countered with a backflip and slashed her chest and face with his Wrist-Blade, Fluttershy, Rarity and Pinkie were both blasted and injured by Ultimate's Plasma Castor, and Twilight when he slashed her chest with his Smart Disk. Just as he was about to kill them, another yautja had appeared and slashed his face, that was Falconer, as Scar said
"Falconer, what are you doing?!"
"Showing this disgrace what honor really means!" Falconer angrily replied
"Team up?" Chopper asked
"Can I join?" Spike asked with a look of anger towards Ultimate and the 5 nodded as they charged
Falconer nodded as he and the other yautja gathered and fought Ultimate and managed to slash his chest several times, as they did however, each were heavily injured. Celtic's gear was visibly wearing out, Chopper was exhausted as there was blood coming from his arms and legs. Fugitive had tried to slash his opponent and although successful, Ultimate dislocated his arm and kicked him on the ground, stomping on his knee. Scar and Falconer saw their wounded allies and continued to fight, with Spike managing to burn the side of Ultimate's face that Falconer slashed and Scar seeing one of Ultimate's explosive spears near the ponies and shouted to the conscious girls
'GIRLS!" and pointed at the spear, Twilight saw it and used her magic to throw it, allowing Scar to catch it and fire, just as Ultimate was strangling Falconer, Scar said to Spike
"Hurry breath fire on the spear!" Spike did so and Scar aimed and fired at Ultimate and Falconer, engulfing them both in the explosion and severely burning Falconer, but mortally dismembering Ultimate.
Scar went to his wounded ally and said "Are you ok?"
Falconer nodded and then went to Ultimate's still moving body and fired his spear at him, which got green blood all over the dead alien's body and the ground. The yautja's went over to the ponies and helped them up as Twilght said
"Come on, we still have a party to catch up on." As the girls nodded and the heroes headed to their way point
The heroes had went to the party and all the ponies that had been freed from stone by the girls had celebrated and reunited with them. As Spike said on a microphone after he went to the stage
"Mares and Gentlecolts, today, we bring the one, the only Songbird Serenade!"
The ponies all cheered as the pony in question came in and slowly began to sing
The ponies were cheering at her performance as the yautja's even gave looks of happiness (In their way at least), even Capper, Skystar and Celaeno had came and Novo said to her daughter
'You are so grounded!" and laughed with Skystar giving a look of horror.
Twilight had looked on with a smile as the Pegasus singer flew, but when she flew, she saw the direction, the same direction where Falconer and Tempest looked away with looks of remorse and Twilight went up to them
"I guess that's one thing that never changes around this place, the parties." Tempest said
"This planet is truly unique like you said." Falconer added
"Well i hope you two can stay, More friends are definitely merrier." Twilight said
"But, my horn." Tempest said
"You know, you two are really powerful, you with your horn and Falconer with his gear, just like the two it belongs to."
"Well we did say we wanted to show Equestria what we could do right?" Falconer said
Tempest charged her broken horn and fired at the sky while Falconer used his plasma castor to fire as well, as they did fireworks came into the sky, with Falconer's even saying something in his clans language as Tempest asked
"What do those symbols mean?"
"Honor." Falconer replied
"Nice touch Tempest and Falconer!" Pinkie said
"Actually that's not my name."
"Oooh!, what is it?!" Pinkie said in glee
"It's Fizzlepop Berrytwist."
Pinkie's eyes glowed in surprise and glee and said "Ok, that is the most awesome name ever!"
(With Scar and the others)
Scar was talking to his brothers, who had agreed to continue their lives they had done so in Equestria, Celtic with the pirates, Chopper with Novo and Fugitive with Capper, as he did he noticed something in the sky and said
"Um, what's that?"
The ship suddenly came as all the ponies and heroes gave looks of shock and fear at the ship as it landed, the heroes got in fighting stances, but the yautja's gave shocked looks as Scar said suddenly
'Wait, is that the Elder's?!"
The ponies were confused as Celestia asked "Elder's?"
The ship hatch opened and the occupants in turn were a bunch of other yautja led by another without a mask and one with a cape.
The two ancients pressed buttons on their wrists and and the one in the cape looked at the princesses and The main 6 and the other 4 yautja and said to Scar in their language
"(Scar, what has happened?)"
Scar answered in yautja "(We stopped a Bad-Blood known as Ultimate masters, along with the true warrior and Falconer)."
The two Elder's gave shocked looks and the Greyback said "(Falconer?!, he disgraced us!)"
Celtic came in and said "(But it wasn't his fault!, he just wanted you to approve him!)"
The Elders saw Falconer come and said "(Forgive me Masters, I know my crimes are unspeakable, but I will accept any punishment you give me.)"
The two Elder's looked at each other and said "(We shall decide your punishment when you return.)"
Falconer however said "(I'm not going anywhere, I'm staying here, I believe banishment is fair for what I've done.)"
The Elder's looked at each other and back at Falconer again and nodded and turned to Scar and said "(As for you, who has aided you?)"
Scar pointed at the girls, Spike, Celaeno and her pirates, Capper, Novo and Skystar and the Princesses as they looked on with curiosity or fear or both as the Elders and their yautja's approached and looked at them and saw the scar's they had went through and said to Scar "(Who is the true warrior?)"
Scar pointed at Spike, who gulped as the Elder's approached him and suddenly, the Elder said "True warrior." and pulled out a Combi-Stick and a holster and activated it then deactivated it and handed them to Spike as the other yautja's went to the other heroes
The Predators then first went to Capper, Celaeno, Novo and Skystar and handed them weapons as Celestia asked Scar "What are they doing?"
Scar answered "We won against a Bad-Blood, the Elders must have heard and where we are from, when doing so or when your seen worthy as an opponent, they honor you with a weapon as respect."
Capper was given a flintlock pistol with some ammunition, Novo a bow and arrows, Skystar two sai with a belt to hold them and Celaeno a wrist-blade schmitar
The Predators went to the princesses next and Scar said "Your turn"
One predator handed Luna a scythe, Cadance an saber and Celestia a fauchard
The last ones were the girls and Tempest. Applejack gained a war hammer, Rainbow Dash was given a battle axe, Fluttershy a Staff with a blade hidden, Pinkie Pie a crossbow with some arrows that hold on her wrist, Rarity with two fighting fans, Tempest two daggers and Twilight a spear.
After all the heroes were given their respective weapons, the elders and their yautja had left and went bto their spaceship, taking Ultimates body with them. As they were about to leave, Twilight said
"Are you sure you guys wanna leave?"
The Elder in the cape tilted his head confused and Scar said in yautja "(She asked Are you sure you don't want to stay, there have party.)"
"(I apologize, but i have too many duties to cover, just promise me you will watch over them.)" Elder said as Scar nodded and he went in the ship activated it and flew off into orbit.
As the heroes watched the Elders leave, Pinkie said "Let's party everypony!" And the moment she said that, they all cheered and did so, with Scar and the other yautja joining in as Songbird continued to sing her song.
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Chapter 12: Spike's choice part 1
After the events with the Storm King and Ultimate, the girls and Spike returned home to Ponyville along with Scar, who decided to stay as well, while the other 3 yautja went to their signature homelands. As they were heading home, the girls each spoke of their weapons with Twilight saying to Scar
"Wow, your people must really have a strict honor code."
"These weapons we got are so cool!" Rainbow Dash said
"These fans could help with my new designs and even battles!" Rarity said, flaunting the fans with her magic
"I'm not sure if we should be playing with them now girls." Fluttershy said
"This spear is really fascinating, it looks as if it was centuries years old." Twilight said observing her spear.
"True, but compared to each of you, Spike's weapon is more stronger." Scar notified
The girls were shocked and Spike asked "What, How?"
"Remember what I told you, the true warrior is the one who shows honor, integrity and bravery. Spike showed he has these qualities and even aspects of the Elements you 6 possess, Honesty, Laughter, Loyalty, Generosity, Kindness and Magic. He is the true warrior because our race watched you for a long time and saw him and the times you six all showed levels of greed and selfishness, they deemed you inferior and him The Hero, that would also make you Bad-bloods yourselves in a way."
"WHAT!?" The girls said in shock at Scar's last statement
"Us, inferior?!" Rainbow Dash said with outrage
"Greedy?!" Twilight also said with shock
"And selfish?!" Rarity said in offense
"If you don't believe me, I can show you." Scar said
The girls and even Spike nodded and Scar immidietly activated something on his wrist and the moment he pressed some buttons, he showed a recording on his wrist and it showed a lonely and sad Spike with a banner that said Happy birthday Twilight!
"We forgot but-" Twilight said, but Scar cut her off with another recording, this time it showed her of the time when he was being a punching bag from Rainbow Dash and Applejack in their competition. This only made the girls looks have more disbelief, while Applejack and Rainbow Dash gave looks of shock.
"But that was just a-" Rainbow said, but Scar again cut her off, this time the worst memory Spike had. The time in Winter wrap up when he had been frozen and while doing so, flicked his mandibles angrily at them, while the girls only looked at the scene in shock or dismay while Spike said
"I remember that too!, you guys didn't even help me that time and I was sick because I'm vulnerable to cold temperatures!"
The girls only looked on as Scar further pressed "Do you now see why my clan has deemed you inferior?"
The girls only had looks sadness and Rainbow suddenly said " But wait, if we're Bad-bloods, why did we get weapons?"
Scar replied "I said that was respect, not redemption, whomever killed a Bad-blood or shows worth in their hunt showed courage, but that doesn't change your honor, let alone your social status, plus that reason was because of the battle cuts that showed you aided in their hunt."
The girls saw the point in his answer and Applejack asked "And how do we know that's not all lies?"
"Because if it was, I wouldn't remember wouldn't I?" Spike said in a tone of dismay
"But he could be playing a trick on us!" Rainbow Dash said
"Really?, and what would my motive be?" Scar asked in disgust
The girls only gave looks of sadness as they realized that not only was the alien warrior indeed showing a valid reason for his accusation towards them, but the argument he explained to them was more then enough to show not just them that hurt Spike, but even the friends they made over the years. The girls remained silent as they headed home. With Twilight and Spike in her castle, Rainbow Dash in Cloudsdale, Rarity in her Boutique, Fluttershy in her cottage, Pinkie at Sugarcube corns, Applejack at Sweet Apple Acres and Scar at his ship that was downed at the Everfree Forest. He used his visor to see his ship's location and went to the location, avoiding the traps he made, as he went inside his ship and went inside his bed to sleep.
(Later)
It was still night, and Scar was still sleeping, as he did, he heard a knock on the door and went to check it out, he opened the door to see none other then Spike who said
"Um...hi."
"Spike, what are you doing this late at night, and how did you find me?"
"Um, it's kinda complicated but..can we talk alone inside?"
Scar nodded and let Spike inside and the two went in and sat down as Scar asked " What is it you wish to speak about?"
Spike said "It's just..., when you said I was the true warrior, it wasn't because I had no amount of power whatsoever? I mean Twilight is really good at magic and Applejack is strong and Rainbow Dash is really fast and I'm only good at sending scrolls. "
"No, the title of the true warrior is earned, the reason you earned it was because out of all the girls and even Starlight, you show honor and that you will fight for your home. The other 6 had flaws of their own. Rainbow Dash tends to have a big ego, Pinkie's enthusiasm tends to get her in harm's way, Applejack's stubbornness of honesty can lead her to unintentionally lie not just to others but herself, Rarity may be generous yet uses that for personal gain like she does with you, Fluttershy may be nice and treat others nicely, but not equally when it comes to you and Twilight has always used you and used you as a tool."
Spike said "Wait, Twilight and Rarity don't use me!"
Scar, however replied by showing him recordings of some of the time Spike has gone through using a satellite of his kind to show the image, he revealed Twilight leaving him behind numerous times such as the time when they went to the Grand Galloping Gala or when Twilight kept Owliscious over him, then came Rarity constantly making help with her things and not even bothering to acknowledge him, such as when they went to Manehattan or when she too left him at the Gala. Spike only gave a look of tears, as if he knew but couldn't accept it and said
"But they only did that cause they were busy."
Scar said in a broken but matter of fact tone "Spike, it's obvious from what I've seen, they didn't view you as an equal."
Spike only broke down in tears, did they really not want him?, was a only just a tool?, he didnt know anymore as Scar picked up the now broken dragon and hugged him and said I'm comfort
"It's ok. It's ok."
Spike continued to cry as he didn't know the difference anymore, but Scar said
"How about you stay with me?"
"What?"
"I've seen the environment you suffered in, the acts that harmed you, your "friends" only benefiting from you. How about I be your friend. And I can teach you how to fight back more."
Spike only gave a look of tears with a smile and nodded saying "Yes, thank you" while hugging his new friend/teacher.
The two broke the hug as Scar showed a another room for Spike as he went in and said "Goodnight Spike, yoyr training starts tomorrow."
Spike nodded and replied "Goodnight Scar."
Scar had went to his room, but before he entered, he went to the control room and activated a force field. He then went to his room and went to sleep for the next day to come.
