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Saw 2: Detective Twilight's Trial
Test 2: Scalping Camera (Sometimes It's Better Not To Save Them)/Test 3: The Cupcakes Trap (Feel What I Feel)
Once Twilight And Cadance made it out of the Caves below Canterlot, the detective kinda just drop her off there for the Royal Guards to do the rest and hopefully get her back to The Crystal Empire safetly.
After that Twilight was just completely lost there wasn't anything like graffiti a voice recording tape nothing else to tell her where to go next after a few minutes of wondering around she took a breather in a alleyway before getting attacked by a mysterious hooded pony with button sunglasses and stitched up mouth face mask and injected with a needle knocking her out.
Twilight woke up in what looked like a small cave with small cracks letting sunlight in ''Shit Please don't tell me another FUCKING CAVE!'' the detective said to herself then she put a hoof against the cave's walls causing the entire cave to collapse which revealed the cave wasn't actually a cave it was a pile of books and the sunlight wasn't sunlight coming from the windows but was light come from stagelights
This is when the unicorn detective noticed that there was even more stagelights down the hall, the Golden Oak Library was also a mess, furniture was everywhere either knocked over, broken or destroyed and there was also graffiti on the walls saying Sometimes It's Better Not To Save Them . When she checked the time she was relieved a little since around this time Spike was gone to fetch supplies and would be back in a couple of hours guess. ''Guess The Hacksaw Killer knew about Spike's Schedule and took advantage of it.'' Twilight said to herself
Once getting to the staircase there was a TV sitting on a small table all of a sudden the TV turned on and Stichy appeared on the screen. ''So that's how you want to play it Twilight Sparkle outsmarting my traps in unexpected ways well your next test will put that to the test.'' Stichy said before the TV shut off
Twilight went downstairs using her horn as a light source to find it even more of a mess the windows were boarded shut there was stains of ink on the floor. Almost all the furniture was destroyed, the ones that weren't destroyed were broken with a huge part of them missing. There was also stuff that looked like sticky notes covering the walls and objects that looked like mailboxes sticking out of the ground.
The only source of light downstairs beside the detective's horn was a staticky TV this is what made Twilight realize that a single chair wasn't destroyed or broken when she approached it from behind it turned out there was a pony strapped to the chair wearing button sunglasses and stitched up mouth face mask. Thinking this was the mysterious hooded pony that injected her with a needle, the detective charged up a blast only to get interrupted by staticky TV turning on and Stichy appearing on the screen causing the unicorn tomisfire destroying a piece of broken furniture
''Hello once again Detective Sparkle i wanna play a game the pony you see infront of you is in desprate need of help but it isn't your job to save them Sometimes It's Better Not To Save Them underneath the dollhead mask is a criminal undeserving of the life they were given and those who don't appreciate life don't deserve it sometimes it better not to save them, you either save the victim or walk away the choice is yours.'' Stichy said before the TV cut back to static
Twilight use her magic to take the button sunglasses off the ponie's face and pulled down the stitched up mouth face mask revealing the pony was Photo Finish and she was also gagged. Twilight found a tape on the chair and played it ''Hello once again Photo Finish i wanna play a game, you've raped multiple stallions and mares and taken pictures of your actions.'' The object that looked like mailboxes turned on a revealed they weren't mailboxes they were lights and the sticky notes weren't sticky notes but photos of Photo Finish raping stallions and mares. ''I've turned your camera into a scalping device that once activated will pulled your mane back until it's completely ripped off your head and you'll bleed out live or die make your choice.'' Sitchy explained
The unicorn detective removed the gag from Photo Finish's mouth ''Are you a cop?'' Photo asked sobbing ''Yes i'm a cop i'm a detective.'' Twilight told her using her magic to pulled the stitched up mouth face mask over Photo's face pulling and releasing a metal cord setting off a 1 minute timer. Twilight didn't want to use magic on the Scalping Camera or else it'll make it worse which she learned from The Rack.
''What is that, What did you do? AHHHHHHHHHHHH!'' Photo yelled as the scalping camera started pulled back her mane ''THE CODE IS IN THE GEARS'' Photo yelled sobbing
''The gears right'' Twilight said looking at the gears unfortunately the gears were turning very slowly which wasn't good for saving time. Twilight trotted off ''Where are you going'' said Photo sobbing as her mane started get stretched ''AHHHHH COME BACK''
Twilight trotted over to her self-defense cabinet where she kept all here weapons like knifes and blunt objects in case anypony broke in the Golden Oak Library. In hopes of cutting Photo Finish's mane before she gets scalped but when she used her magic to open it the detective found a note saying. ''Nice Try you're wasting time'' Twilight decided to run back to Photo Finish in the Scalping Camera
''HURRY GET THE CODE!'' Photo yelled as blood started coming out from her scalp. This is when Twilight saw a number on 6 one of the gears ''Got one'' the detective said typing 6 onto the number pad ''HURRY'' Photo said as blood flowed onto her face and into her eyes. Suddenly the gears all showed their number at the same time ''There's the code'' Twilight said typing in the last of the code.
Photo mane was released from The Scalping Camera the straps also came off causing Photo to fall to the floor. Twilight trotted off to grap a rag too wipe the blood off her face but Photo Finish reached into a cabinet and pulled out a knife.
When The unicorn detective came back Photo was gone ''The Fuck'' Twilight said before getting attacked by Photo with a knife in her hoof ''WHAT ARE YOU DOING DROP THE FUCKING KNIFE!'' Twilight yelled grabbed Photo with her front hooves ''PUT THE KNIFE DOWN'' the detective yelled before Photo tried stabbing Twilight in the neck causing her to throw Photo through a mirror.
Twilight found a tape in Photo's saddle and played it ''Hello Photo Finish i wanna play a game if the detective saves you from the Scalping Camera[ she'll arrest you for your crimes and the only way to stop here is by killing her.'' Stichy explained
Twilight went looking deeper into Photo's saddle she found a key Twilight headed upstairs and swearing she saw a box sitting on a table and she was right. When she opened the box she found 2 keys on was a candy key with a tag saying Sugarcube Corner and the other was a lockpick to a warehouse the unicorn decided to take both keys just in case
Time Skip
Once Twilight got to Sugarcube Corner she came across A.K Yearling wirting something down''What the fuck are you looking at huh, hey you.'' Yearling asked her angrily. The unicorn detective trotted down a small flight of stairs without even going over to the counter. ''Um excuse me can i help you'' Pinkie Pie Asked
Twilight found the door she was looking for it was covered in candy saying candy room when the detective used the key and opened the door all it was a supply closet. There was a box on the floor on top of the box was a picture of Rainbow Dash when Twilight opened it she found a Dollhead mask which is just button sunglasses and a stitched up mouth face mask finally she found a picture of Pinkie Pie.
''What the fuck is this stuff'' Twilight said to herself before playing the tape in the box ''Hello Mrs. Sparkle i wanna play a game the pony you see in front of you is in desprate need of help in the next room is the tools to her salvation her life is in your hooves but only she can save herself but to do this you'll have to hide your identity.'' Stitchy explained
Twilight put on the Dollhead mask briefly before taking it off ''I think i got a better idea'' she said to herself leaving the candy room
A Few Moments Later
Twilight camr back to entrance area of Sugarcube Corner finding Pinkie Pie talking to A.K Yearling telling her that she has to leave. Twilight pulled out a box of chocolate chip cookies from her saddle and putting down a trail of them. Pinkie's pet crocodile Gummy noticed the trail of cookies and followed it eating the cookies along the way which leaded to the candy room.
Once Pinkie got Yearling out of Sugarcube Corner she walked back to the counter just to realize that Gummy's gone ''Gummy where'd you go Gummy where are you'' Pinkie called out to Gummy before noticing the trail of cookie crumbs when she found Gummy he was chewing on the stitched up mouth face mask ''There you are Gummy'' Pinkie said going to pick up her crocodile only to see a charged up horn aiming at her
Another Few Moments Later
''Why are you doing this'' Pinkie asked Twilight ''Why'' The unicorn then handed Pinkie a picture on Rainbow Dash ''This was a mistake it was a long time ago i stopped doing this.'' Twilight started trotting back and forth ''no,no,no,no,no,no,NO!'' Twilight muttered under her breath ''You see that door'' the detective said pointing a hoof at the door with Feel What I Feel painted on it.
Twilight then handed Pinkie the candy key ''Here try this open that door'' the unicorn told Pinkie. Once the pink earth pony opened the Feel What I Feel Door she found the same torture chamber she used on Rainbow Dash, she tired to trot past Twilight only to be stopped by her. ''STOP STOP GET GET IN THERE'' The unicorn detective yelled charging up her horn smacking Pinkie in the face.
Once they were both in the room Twilight found the torture chamber had red lights and there was fish hooks with pictures of other pegasi Pinkie had tortured. Twilight found a tape and played it ''Hello Mrs Twilight for your third test the pony you see before you is a perpetrator of violence.'' ''You Sick Fuck'' Twilight said before resuming the tape.
''Her salvation is out of you hooves it's your choice if you want to put it into her own hooves and once you do you'll be a step closer to saving Princess Celestia and without you this pony's game can't begin, get her into position to face her demons she must feel what her victims felt.'' Stitchy explained
All of a sudden the TV in the room turned on showing footege of Pinkie torturing Rainbow Dash slicing off her cutie mark ''GET IN THE RACK'' Twilight yelled at Pinkie. The Pink Party Pony climbed onto the torture rack try to explain her action to the detective even though Twilight just igornerd her ''HURRY UP GET STRAPPED IN!'' The unicorn detective yelled at Pinkie
Twilight then walked up to the torture rack and put on the head cuff (or strap idk) ''What the hell's going on i'm sorry'' Pinkie said sobbing. Twilight then handed the pink earth pony 2 remotes with a single button on them, then played a tape she found on a cart before leaving the room.
''Hello Pinkamena i wanna play a game'' Stitchy said voice activating multiple saws coming down circular saws, chainsaw and buzzsaw blades ''You've tortured, caused trauma to multiple pegasi making them go through endless suffering, tearing their lives apart over some cheap baked treat. So you must feel what they felt but there's a chance you don't have to go through everything they went through but you'll have to sacrifice your eyes which had blinded you of the suffering these pegasi had to go through but if you don't in 60 seconds you'll be torn apart by all these saw live or die make your choice.''
Pinkie started sobbing uncontrollably pressing one of the remotes causing a blade to come down and stab her in they eye ''AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH'' The pink party earth pony yelled but before she could muster up the willpower to blind herself completely.
3..2..1
The circular saws, chainsaw and buzzsaw blades launched forward tearing straight into Pinkie's chest tearing apart her digestive system causing parts of the large and small intestines to fly everywhere. the saw then moved onto the rest of her body causing blood and other organs to fly everywhere around the torture chamber.
Twilight left the candy room and headed back to the entrance area where she found Gummy on the counter and decided to leave him the rest of the chocolate chip cookies in the box before leaving Sugarcube Corner and heading for the warehouse.
Author's Note
In This AU Pinkie Pie actually owns Sugarcube Corner instead of just working and living there
Reminder: I based Detective Twilight Sparkle on Eric Matthews and Daniel Rigg from Saw since according to the Saw Wiki both of them have a temperamental and focused personality. Eric is one of my favorites characters from the Saw series but it kinda suck he was a corrupt cop so that why i made Twilight one of the only non corrupt law enforcers in her department
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Saw 2: Detective Twilight's Trial
The Dentist Chair Trap A.K.A The Dentist Chair Of Death
''Welp Jigsaw Puzzle looks like your teeth are all nice and healthy.'' Dr. Colgate said
''Thank you Dr. Colgate'' Jigsaw said who's a Yellow unicorn with a Silver mane ''So glad the Crystal Empire gave me a day off. Guess I can mark dentist check up off my bucket list.''
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''First patient of the day done, still got the rest of the day to look forward to.'' Colgate said
As for the rest of the day it was pretty normal there was a couple of cavities here and there but overall nothing to major, this day has gone by pretty fast for Colgate's standards. As she locked up the place she took Lyra over to a cafe where they were greeted by Detective Twilight Sparkle who was drinking a coffee and examining some pictures.
''Hello sorry can't talk right now i'm trying to find some clues.'' Twilight said as she put the bubble pipe back in her mouth and started blowing on it.
''Ohhh Bubbles'' Lyra said trying to pop as many bubbles as she could
''Why do you have a bubble pipe?'' Colgate asked
''The Crystal Empire didn't let me have a actual smoking pipe and I didn't want to use the candy pipe i got from Sugarcube Corner so i went with the next best thing a bubble pipe.''
''Good choice a candy pipe really doesn't sound good for your teeth.'' Colgate said
''Whatever'' Twilight said as she took a sip of her coffee before blowing on her bubble pipe.
The waiter pony then came to take their orders, Colgate ordered first ''Just a plain burger with diet a diet pop.'' As for Lyra she ordered '' I want a donut, a piece of cake and a glass of pop.''
''You do realize that stuff like donuts, cake and pop are VERY bad for you teeth.'' Colagate told Lyra
''Fine'' Lyra sighed ''Change the donut to a bagel, the cake to a pretzels and the pop to diet.''
Besides the staff, the both of them and Detective Twilight Sparkle there was only one other pony in the cafe it was a blue unicorn with red mane. Sitting next to him was a voodo doll of a black unicorn, black button eyes, red mane and the size of a colt.
''You do realize you're to old to be playing with dolls'' Twilight said
''You do realize there's technically no age limit to be playing with dolls'' Hacksaw explained ''There's ponies out there who collect dolls and sell them to make a living.''
Colgate stared at Hacksaw's teeth and saw that they weren't as white as she hoped so she walked over to his table and asked ''Hey excuse me but do you brush regularly.''
''Oh it's you'' Hacksaw said giving Colgate a menacing look ''Why do you care so much i can you're just dentist.''
''Oh you'll see, you'll see. '' Colgate said
"PONIES HAVE OTHER HEALTH PROBLEMS THAN THEIR TEETH YOU KNOW THAT!'' Hacksaw said before using his magic to pick up the voodo doll and walked out of the cafe.
We'll see about that we'll see. Colgate said.
Colgate started following Hacksaw home she made sure she made as little noise as possible. The neighborhood where Hacksaw lived in was very shady looking Colgate could smell smoke from smokers and vapers. And there was very little light there was the occasional street light but besides that there wasn't any other sources of light.
Once Hacksaw got to his house and was getting out his keys Colgate charged at him with a needle of the most powerful sedative she had. All of a sudden she got attacked by a hooded pony wearing button eyes sunglasses and a stitched up mouth face mask. Colgate got knocked out by a hoof to the face.
Colgate woke up the next day with her horn surgically removed. Strapped to a dentist chair which looked pretty similar to the ones in her basement. It had nails on the chair instead of spikes. It also had the full pad at the end to lay both legs on. It had separate pads to place the legs and both the legs and arms had hoof cuffs. This chair didn't have the feature for the arms and legs to move around. Showed when Colgate tried move the arms and legs pads which didn't react to her movements.
Colgate then heard a creaking noise, when she looked she saw the same voodo doll from the cafe, black unicorn, black button eyes, red mane and size of a filly and it was riding a scooter similar to Scootaloo's.
The voodo doll then spoke ''Hello Colgate'' the doll said in a deep voice ''I want to play a game, my name is Stitchy your whole life you've criticized other ponies based on their dental hygiene alone without considering other problems in their lives and even worse you've also inflicted endless suffering on those with the worst kind of dental hygiene. Well guess what KILLING IS DISTASTEFUL!'' Stichy shouted
''HOW DO YOU KNOW ABOUT THAT!'' Colgate yelled
''Me and my apprentice ran a investigation on you and guess what we found.'' Stichy explained as ropes with pictures of colgate's basement were lowered down.
''STOP ACTING LIKE YOU'RE NOT A MURDERER YOURSELF!'' Colgate yelled
''I've never murdered anypony. I'm not a murderer, you see i put ponies in life threating traps and i give them a chance escape their fates, make them choose to live or die.
''YOU ARE A SICK FUCK!'' Colgate yelled
''You're right i am sick...sick of this illness that is slowly eating me away inside, sick of this illness that will one day take me away from this world we live in.'' Stichy said
''YOU BASTARD'' Colgate yelled
''Your task is simple'' Stichy explained ''See that that device thing infront of you, bite down on it and it'll cause the hoof cuffs to start crushing your hooves. The hoof cuffs will only start crushing your hooves if you lean against the pointy nails on the seat. Right above you is a drill that will lower down until it drills right through your mouth. You will have to sacrifice your hooves in order to escape you fate, you have 1 minute live or die it's your choice Colgate.''
The chair then leaned back Colgate started biting down on the device infront of her before realizing at the hoof cuffs weren't moving. She started leaning against the nails on the chair they inflicted plenty of pain on her. And to add insult to injury the hoof cuffs started crushing her hoofs like crumpling up paper.
3..2..1
The clock hit zero the drill went all the way into her mouth going into the back of her head and drilling right through it before turning off which creates a hole in the back of her head causing blood to spill out it.
''My actions were justified.'' Colgate said before taking her last breath
Author's Note
You know you're fucked up if Hacksaw/Stichy Personally appears and introduces you to the game
Colgate's Practice was one of the first fanfics i Actually read on this site
And also Storm Luna the way Colgate blocked magic is kinda weird to me a horn cap and enchanted chains. That is what inspired me to come up with the concept of Hacksaw and his apprentice surgically remove ponie's Horns and/or wings
And also what i meant by inescapable traps not all of them are inescapable only 2 are this one and another one which is important to the plot and it's for another pony who actually deserves it
Saw 2: Detective Twilight's Trial
Introduction/Return To The Temple
Author's Note
Since this one focuses more on the Guard/Cop Plot If you're wondering what alternate universe this is it's one where Twilight, Shining Armor, Princess Cadance and Flurry Heart aren't related in ANY WAY
Introduction/Return To The Temple
Detective Twilight Sparkle blew on her bubble pipe as she examined some photos looking for clues. Unfortunately the background of the pictures were to blurry to tell a location or to notice a detail that might give away a certain location.
''Found any leads, any clues ANYTHING?'' Princess Cadance said while using her magic to pull out the evidence folder.
''Like I told you, no leads, no clues nothing. Not even sure if we can even call these pictures evidence anymore.'' Twilight explained before blowing on her bubble pipe.
''Looks like there doesn't seem to be anymore evidence we can get out of this case.'' Cadance said as she used her magic to pick up the photos and put them back into the evidence folder.
''Guess i have no choice but to quit this investigation looks like it's up cold case team now to figure this one out.'' Twilight sighed before going back to blowing on her bubble pipe. Then all of a sudden her horn glowed yellow ''Uh oh code yellow looks like i'm needed at a crime scene!'' Twilight explained before using her magic to throw away her coffee cup away and trotting off. Only to return of couple seconds later ''Woops forgot my bubble pipe.'' Twilight said before using her magic to put the pipe in her mouth.
''Why don't you just telport there it's way faster'' Cadance suggested before using a teleportation spell to get to the other side of the room
''If i try to teleport there this will happen.'' Twilight explained before trying to use her teleportation spell, she was only able to get to the part with the forcefield before getting shocked with yellow lightning ''OUCH!'' Twilight yelled ''Apparently the magic thinks i'm trying to get away from the crime scene so it shocks me. I'm trying to work on a spell that will get around this.'' Twilight explained before trotting off to the crime scene
''Maybe i should try to alter a spell a little.'' Cadance thought about putting her left front hoof on her muzzle ''Better right that down on my notes'' She said while writing it down on her notpad before teleporting off to the crime scene.
Jigsaw was doing a jigsaw puzzle of a Bucket with a Chain attached to it since it was his special talent according to his Cutie Mark which was a Red Jigsaw Puzzle Piece with a silver outline. All of a sudden the rolling cart his jigsaw puzzle was on was rolled aside for a stretcher with Colgate's dead body.
''Sorry about the body's condition it was a bumpy ride over here.'' Dr Chemical Beaker said
''Don't worry you don't have to do a autopsy report if your wondering just take this body to the morgue and use a bodybag cause we don't want the body to get more messed up than it already is.'' Shining Armor
''Yes Captain'' Jigsaw said saluting using his magic to put the dead body into the bag and onto the stretcher pushing it along
At The Crime Scene
Colgate's body was discovered in a abandoned toothbrush factory the body it self had already decomposed so a autopsy report had to be done ''Looks like this ponie's name was Colgate'' Dr Chemical Beaker said
''Hey look what i found'' Twilight said as she showed them a hacksaw with a note attached to it saying ''KILLING IS DISTASTEFUL'' Written in all caps
''Looks like this is the first time we actually seen the trap itself nails on the chair, hoof cuffs, device thing to bite down on and a drill hanging from the ceiling.'' Shining Armor said examining the trap
Flurry Heart scanned the hacksaw for clues ''Huh there doesn't seem to be any hoof prints or any signs of biting so looks the pony were looking for is a unicorn.''
''Huh guess we were so focused on the Hacksaw Killer himself we forgot to check what type of pony he is.'' Shining Armor realized
All of a sudden Cadance jumped into the conversation ''Are you saying that the Hacksaw Killer could Just be a stallion for all we know it could be a mare.'' She pulled out her notepad again ''Could be a mare'' she wrote down
Time Skip at The Crystal Empire
''All right your majesty'' Flurry Heart said using her magic as to lower down a smart board. ''This is all the evidence, Captain Shining Armor and the Cold Case Team were able to gather.'' Flurry said showing Cadance a slideshow ''These include of some pictures that were found on the Royal Sister's Thrones which Detective Twilight Sparkle examined. Then there was the crime scene besides the dead body and the trap setup itself one thing we do know is that The Hacksaw Killer's games take place in abandoned building which could be a clue. Finally there's the Hacksaw i found which i examined and found no signs of biting down on it meaning that we have to be dealing with a unicorn who has magic he can use against us.''
''What about Princess Luna she could be a reliable source'' Cadance argued
''That's the thing Princess Luna even though she along with Celestia were abducted, Luna doesn't really remember a lot about the whole incident all she said when we interrogated her was that the game took place in a abandoned temple and that she was able to retrive her magic along with her horn and wings.'' Flurry explained
''So that seems to be as far as the case has gotton so guess it times for some theories. The first theory the one i believe in is that the Hacksaw Killer isn't just one pony but a whole group of ponies which would explain why the dentist chair trap looks so unique it must've been a team effort.'' Flurry explained
''As for the second theory Captain Shining Armor thinks we're dealing with a much BIGGER problem than a killer pony or even a group of them he think we're dealing with the shady side of Equestria as in ponies making illegal torture like traps and selling them on the black market.'' Flurry explained before gasping for air
''Sounds a bit far fetched but it's plausible, i'm also suprised you were able to say all that in one breathe Detective Flurry Heart.'' Cadance said before she heard a loud bang coming from the scroll/message room ''It must be one of those darn Royal Guards'' She said angrily, trotting off to the document room.
When Cadance got there she found a bunch of scrolls on the floor and noticed that one of them was open. ''Are you kidding me only thing worse than dropped scrolls are dropped open ones.'' Using her magic to pick up the scroll she noticed it didn't have paragraphs instead having 5 big words ''I KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE!''
''What that hell does that mean?'' Cadance wondered, then all of a sudden a smoke bomb got dropped in the middle of the room making the room all foggy. Cadance started doughing and tried to fire blasts blindly into the smoke to no avail ''Motherfucker'' she said weakily before collapsing to the floor from smoke inhalation.
Meanwhile
Flurry Heart was checking through the mail and found a lot of letters adressed to Cadance but then found a envelope adressed to her. ''Why and how did a letter adressed to me get into the mail?'' Flurry wondered, when see opend it she found a scroll with 5 big words. ''I'VE KNOW WHAT YOU'VE DONE'' Flurry Realized what the scroll was referring to, ''HOW DO THEY KNOW ABOUT THAT!'' Flurry yelled before a mysterious hooded pony,button sunglasses, and stitched up mouth face mask, knocked her out with a blunt object
Time Skip
Flurry Heart woke up in a dark room she got up and try to move only to trip when she felt something tug at her hoof. Her vison was blurry at first but when she could see better the ailcorn detective saw light coming from a flashlight in the middle of the room, she was just barely able to grab it with it almost out of her reach.
Using the flashlight it revealed the thing tugging at her hoof was a chain tied to a rusty pipe. She shined the flashlight at the rest of the room revealing that it was the same temple that Princess Celestia and Luna were tested in. There was no more graffiti anywhere in the room and it turns out that she was on the other side of the room where the working bathtub is and the dirty fountain.
The flat screen TV on the wall was also removed from the room and was replaced by a small TV barely out of Flurry's reach a little further away from the middle of the room where the flashlight was.
The small TV suddenly turned on and appeared Stichy he was facing the wrong direction before turning towards the camera. ''Hello Detective Flurry Heart i want to play a game you along with many other Detectives, Informants and Royal Guards have been corrupted from the power you have as law enforcement.'' Stichy explained
''I knew going after all of you ponies one by one will take forever with recording and creative traps so me and my apprentice decided to only go after the major ponies in the department, you being one of the major corrupt Detectives in the department killing many Crystal Ponies, Earth Ponies, Pegasi and Unicorns in movement to drop the crime rate as much as possible'' Stichy said
Flashback
''That sure is something weird for the Princess to tell me to do but guess i'll just roll with it.'' Flurry said walking into town ''Kill i mean shoot anypony who look suspicious.'' Flurry then noticed a Crystal Pony observing the Crystal Heart ''Huh looks a bit crooked'' The Crystal Pony said
''Hey are you trying to touch the Crystal Heart?'' Flurry asked the Stallion
''Uh no i was just saying how it looked a bit crooked that's all.'' The Crystal Pony explained as he pointed to the Crystal Heart with his hoof getting pretty close the Crystal Heart
''SO YOU ARE TRYING TO TOUCH IT!'' Flurry shouted ''Step away from the heart'' She repeated 6 times
''No like i said i was just saying how the Crystal Heart looked a bit crooked'' The Crystal Pony
"STEP AWAY THIS IS YOUR LAST WARNING!'' Flurry shouted
''I was just saying that-''
''THAT'S IT!'' Flurry shouted before firing a blast at The Crystal Pony hitting him in the neck instantly killing him creating a puddle of blood. Flurry then fired another blast that telported the body and blood puddle away getting rid the evidence.
Later That Day
Flurry Heart flew up to Cloudsdale ''Huh this place looks like better than i imagined.'' Flurry thought, she then dumped out a bag with a bunch of diffrent supplies hoofcuffs, tazers for Earth Ponies and Pegasus law enforcement, a bunch of paperwork the last thing in the bag was a speed camera.
''Woah never seen this before guess they didn't tell me about this device during my training.'' Flurry said as she used her magic to pick it up. ''Better test this out'' She then turned it on a transparent laser appeared then read a paper saying that the average speed of a Pegasus was 55mp. (Speed Limit on rural highways)
All of a sudden the Pegasus Hoops flew pass the speed camera hitting the laser the speed camera showed that he was flying at a speed of a 150 mp Flurry made her horn flash red and blue and flew after him.
Once Hoops landed he was approached by Flurry Heart ''Hey excuse me you were flying at a speed of 150mp i'm afraid i'm gonna have to give you a speeding ticket glad i brought them with me.''
''OH FUCK YOU!'' Hoops Shouted
''I'm not dealing with this again'' Flurry said before shooting Hoops in the neck the blast was a lot more powerful than Flurry thought with it decapitating him and blasting off a chunk of his wing off creating a even bigger blood puddle.
Back To Present
''You've killed many innocents ponies for your own personal gain that's why i put you in here, just try to find a way out of her the door's unlocked live or die make your choice'' Stichy said before the TV turned off
Flurry Heart started feeling around the darkness in hopes of finding something of use, "Better find something to break my hoof with'' Flurry said before realizing to use the flashlight. There was a lot of stuff on the floor like sticks, pebbles, acorns and pieces of cloths but nothing was heavy enough to break her hoof.
Flurry then noticed a hacksaw and reached for it ''Do i really want to cut off my hoof.'' Flurry asked herself she then grabbed a branch and bit down on it then started sobbing at the idea of going through the pain of slicing off her hoof with it hurting more with each stroke of the hacksaw,
''NOOOO'' Flurry shouted throwing the hacksaw aside ''That's something i don't want to do.'' Flurry said ''There's gotta be a less painful and quicker way to smash my hoof'' she said to herself then she noticed a piece of stone (The same piece Celestia used to kill Nurse Redheart) She bit down on the stick again and started smashing it against her hoof it hook 5 hits to get her hoof broken enough to slip out of the chain but at least it was less than the strokes she had to do if she used the hacksaw.
Flurry started to limp to the door and once getting there turned on the lights revealing the rotted corpse of Nurse Redheart below the night switch ''AHHHHH WHAT THE FUCK!'' Flurry shouted ''Guess this was the temple Princess Luna told me about, i'm suprised The Hacksaw Killer didn't get rid of the dead bodies, what a minute if he doesn't get rid on the bodies that must mean Princess Celestia is still alive'' Flurry realized before opening the door.
She didn't get very far before getting attacked by the same mysterious hooded pony,button sunglasses, and stitched up mouth face mask, and injected with a causing her to pass out.
Saw 2: Detective Twilight's Trial
''Entrance Exam'': Reverse Bear Trap 2.0
Detective Twilight Sparkle was at the Golden Oak Libary researching these disappearances hoping to find some that she didn't investigate before, she then found a newpaper and looked into it ''Dissapperacne at the Grand Galloping Gala, some strange activity was seen at last year's Galloping Gala according to some reports a wealthy earth pony passed out after drinking something while others say it was donut or some other baked treat the pony passed out from.''
''Even though the case was looked into, it never really got anywhere and it was eventually abandoned all together''
''Something tells me that case has something to do with The Hacksaw Killer but why would he or she go after a wealthy pony?'' Twilight asked ''Oh here's another one, Remains of Ponyville Schoolhouse teacher Miss Cheerliee was discovered in one of the classrooms pierced with glass shards with her eyelids, teeth and skin under her hooves missing hanging on chains. Now THAT sounds like a trap The Hacksaw Killer would setup'' Twilight realized
All of a sudden she heard rummaging around the library ''Um hey Spike if you're looking for something maybe keep the noise down'' Twilight yelled she then heard hoofsteps coming towards her ''What the-'' Twilight turned around before getting knocked out with a big book by a hooded pony, button eye glasses, and stitched up mouth face mask
Twilight woke up in this dark room with dry blood that came from behind her right eye ''Hello anypony here'' The unicorn detective said, she felt something metal around her head. She used her horn to light up the room revealing that she was in the caves below canterlot and the thing on her face was a Reverse Bear Trap. ''AHHHHHH WHAT IS THIS THING!'' Twilight shouted she tried to use her magic to remove the trap off her head but it didn't seem to budge. When trying to shoot the trap the blast just dissappered it didn't refract off it shooting her back in the face or even leave a mark on the trap.
The TV sitting on a chair turned on and Stichy greeted Twilight ''Hello Detective Twilight Sparkle i want to play a game but this isn't any ordinary game this is a trial, your trial to be exact, Princess Celestia is still alive and my apprentice have captured your partner Detective Flurry Heart.'' Stichy explainedl, The TV then showed footage of Princess Celestia in trap where she was gagged, had a chain around her neck and standing on a ice block moving her hooves around. Flurry Heart on the other hoof was gagged and strapped to a chair (This Trap will be described in more detail in the last chapter)
Stichy came back onto the screen ''In order to save Celestia and Flurry you'll have to go through a series of test but before you could start the trial and the first test you'll have to pass a entrance exam which in this case is a reverse bear trap that's immune to magic i call it The Reverse Bear Trap 2.0 .
''And to make sure you don't try to get back up on me and my apprentice i have planted a bomb behind your right eye and i'll blow you up along with any pony around you if you try to get backup so keep that in mind.'' Stichy explained showing footege of a large mysterious pony putting a small bomb behind Twilight's right eye which explains the dry blood that came from Twilight's right eye, ''live or die make your choice.'' Stichy said before the TV shut off
Twilight trotted off only for a metal cord to get pulled and come off setting off a timer 1 minute and 30 seconds. ''AHHHHHH
Twilight eventually found a pile of rocks and dug her hooves into it and luckily found the key. ''Wow It was that easy to find the key nothing like sharp or pointy objects OH RIGHT!'' Twilight said using her magic to put the key into the lock. Unfortunately the Reverse Bear Trap 2.0 didn't unlock turns out the blast the refracted off the crystal that almost hit her in the face was able to destroy the lock and jammed the Reverse Bear Trap 2.0. ''NO NO NO NO COME ON UNLOCK!'' The unicorn yelled twisting, turning and shoving the key into the lock trying to unlock the trap. ''FUCKING UNLOCK!'' she yelled again, and there was only 20 seconds left on the timer.
''THERE'S GOTTA BE A ANOTHER WAY TO GET OUT OF THIS!'' Twilight yelled before seeing a couple of rusty pipes ''Hopefully this works!'' The unicorn detective said before putting the jaw part of The Reverse Bear Trap 2.0 between 2 pipes the timer reached zero and activated cutting off a chunk of Twilight's cheek.
Twilight knew the pipes weren't gonna hold it so she quickly pull herself out of The Reverse Bear Trap 2.0 right before the 2 rusty pipes broke and the jaw part fully opened the broken pipes falling along with the trap.
''Woah that could've been me'' Twilight said using her back to pick up the activated Reverse Bear Teap 2.0 she had gotten a chunk of her cheek cut off from the trap on but besides that nothing to major. Using her horn as a light source Twilight made her way around the cave before coming across Stichy in person riding a scooter similar to Scootaloo's.
''Congratulations Detective Twilight Sparkle, you've passed the entrance exam able to escape The Reverse Bear Trap 2.0. Now you can start your trial but in order to start the first test you must blast away the wall but be careful your eyes can deceive you, not everything that shines are crystals, so look carefully.'' Stichy said before teleporting away
''How did that Unicorn Doll teleport away, how does that work?'' Twilight asked ''Looks like the Unicorn behind this knows a lot more magic and spells that the average unicorn which goes above the limit of unicorn magic.'' Twilight said before trotting off.
Author's Note
I based Detective Twilight Sparkle on Eric Matthews and Daniel Rigg from Saw since according to the Saw Wiki both of them have a temperamental and focused personality. Eric is one of my favorites characters from the Saw series but it kinda suck he was a corrupt cop so that why i made Twilight one of the only non corrupt law enforcers in her department
I Think a huge reason why Saw 1: Escape Temple has 6 dislikes is because everypony dies from their trap this might make people hate the story because they think all the traps are Inescapable/Unfair/Rigged so ponies will escape their trap but this will be VERY RARE since it only applies to ponies important to the plot and if a trap doesn't kill a pony it'll recycle it for another pony usually for a introduction trap since i don't waste GOOD TRAPS
You can alos request your own trap ideas as long as they're not to complicated
Saw 2: Detective Twilight's Trial
Test 1: The Rack (See What I See)
Twilight trotted and looked around the area she was in using her horn as a light source ''Not everything that shines are crystals?'' The detective repeated six times ''What the hell does that mean?'' Twilight asked herself ''Guess i'll have to wing it'' she said before firing a powerful beam, which ended up bouncing off multiple crystals before landing right next to the unicorn detective creating a small crater. ''Maybe i should try a less powerful beam.'' Twilight said to herself before firing a less poweful beam, even though this one was less powerful it still ended up bouncing off a crystal and almost hitting Twilight.
''GOD FUCKING DAMM IT!'' Twilight shouted dropping to the floor putting her front hooves over her head. ''There's now way out of here unless i beat the first test that i can't seem to find.'' The detective said starting to sob a little, then she noticed something about the crystals in the cave. They were shiny and all showed a reflection of the light coming from her horn this is when Twilight noticed that a set of them weren't shiny and showed the reflection. ''Not everything that shines is crystal That's what it means!'' Twilight said as she charged up her shot aiming at the sets of crystals before.
When the set of non reflective crystals were destroyed behind them was a metal door Twilight walked up to the door and tried the handle it moved but the door didn't seem to open. ''Looks like this requires more firepower'' The unicorn said to herself before firing a beam only for it to once again bounce off and almost hit detective. ''Guess i'll have to do this the old fashioned way'' she said before charging at the door trying to force it open. Once being able to get the door open a metal cord got pulled and come off activating a trap.
The lights all of a sudden turned on revealing Princess Cadance was in the trap. The lights ended up waking the ailcorn up ''Huh what the...WHAT THE FUCK SOMEPONY HELP ME'' Cadance yelled. Her body was covered in scratches and marks and her mane was all messy and all over the place, her horn and wings weren't surgically removed instead her horn was broken and wings were tied down.
Twilight walked up to Cadance in the trap and noticed a tape player wrapped around her neck and decided to play it. ''Hello Detective Twilight i wanna play a game for your first test you must see what i see witnessing a pony struggle trying to escape but in the end only she can save herself. The trap Princess Cadance is in it's my personal favorite i call it The Rack even wonder how far a hoof can twist? It will slowly start twisting her hooves one by one before getting to her head and slowly twisting it as well but there is a slight chance she might live if she-'' The tape was suddenly cut off
''If she Whats, IF SHE WHATS'' Twilight yelled pressing the play button then pressing the rewind button revealing the tape player didn't die "WHAT THE FUCK'' Twilight yelled
All of a sudden the gears on The Rack started moving ''No..no..no..no..no..no..no AHHHHHHHHH!'' Cadance yelled starting to sob.
Twilight looked around the cave area she was in hoping to find something like a key or lockpick to free Cadance. She eventually gave up on the idea and decided to go with jamming the gears to either stop The Rack or buy herself some time. ''DO SOMETHING!'' Cadance yelled sobbing as her left front hoof was starting to get twisted. ''Forget jamming the gears'' The detective said firing a beam at The Rack but this only ends up with Cadance's left front hoof getting twisted 360 degrees. ''AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!'' Cadance yelled in pain sobbing as The Rack started slowly twisting the right front hoof.
The Unicorn Detective tried to use her telekinesis to stop The Rack from twisting her right front hoof the same thing happend here with her hoof getting twisted 360 degress and stabbing through the skin again like The Rack was immune to magic or had a bad reaction to it. ''STOP THAT DETECTIVE YOUR MAKING IT WORSE!'' Cadance yelled sobbing as The Rack started to slowly twist her left back hoof.
Twilight looked around once more to double check for something then noticed a hacksaw behind the door. ''Guess i didn't noticed that when i came in'' The detective thought before trotting over to the hacksaw picking it up with her magic. She noticed a note tied to it and it said Confess on it ''Confess i'm not corrupt like all the other Royal Guards, Detectives and Informants'' Twilight said as she ran over to The Rack about to use it to jam the gears.
''HELP ME!'' Cadance yelled sobbing making Twilight realize that The Rack has managed to twist both her back hooves and moved onto her head. Twilight then noticed that all the wires were exposed, she went for the wires easily being able to cut the first couple of wires but when gettiing to a mess to wires it was a struggle. ''AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH'' Cadance yelled her neck starting to get twisted a little. ''Almost got it'' Twilight strained being able to cut the last wire turn off The Rack.
Once The Rack was deactivated the restrains were released causing Cadance to fall onto the cave's floor unconscious from all the bone twisting the door had also opened back up. Twilight checked for a pluse and found that the ailcorn heart was still beating ''Come on let's go'' Twilight said putting Cadance's left front hoof around her neck carrying her out of the room.
Flashback how The Movement to lower the crime rate as much as possible by killing innocents ponies started
Princess Cadance was looking writing a scroll to a couple of detectives before all of a sudden Royal Guard Jigsaw burst through the door using his magic to pick 3 lassoed up earth ponies ''Your majesty i found a earth pony terroizing a flea market unfortunately he was able to break my hoofcuffs somehow.'' Jigsaw said showing Cadance one part of the broken hoofcuff before showing the other part of the hoofcuff on the earth pony. ''Later on i learned he head 2 accomplices so i have to lasso them up.'' Jigsaw explained
Informant Ocellus flew in through a window ''Your majesty while disguised as a salespony i've seen some suspicious activity in areas of ponyville with very little ponies could be something shady going on here.'' Ocellus explained
Detective Silverstream walked in she had handcuffed a hippogriff ''Pretty sure i was this hippogriff with a illegal substance can't say for certain since as soon as i saw her she threw it into the lake so a investigation will have to be runned'' Silverstream explained before realizing the hippogriff's gone ''OH COME ON!'' Silverstream yelled
I'll GO GET HER!'' Ocellus said flying after the hippogriff.
Once every creature was out of the Throne Room Cadance check the crime rate showing that i went up A LOT in the past few weeks. ''Welp guess it's time for Plan B'' Cadance said walking into the evidence room opening a file cabinet and using her magic to pick up files. ''Give a speech nope failed 5 times, publicity stunt to raise attention nope failed 2 times both times lead to chaos. Ah here it is the last resort lower the crime rate as much as possible by killing innocent ponies didn't think'll come down to this.
Author's Note
The Rack will be used again
Reminder: I based Detective Twilight Sparkle on Eric Matthews and Daniel Rigg from Saw since according to the Saw Wiki both of them have a temperamental and focused personality. Eric is one of my favorites characters from the Saw series but it kinda suck he was a corrupt cop so that why i made Twilight one of the only non corrupt law enforcers in her department
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Saw 2: Detective Twilight's Trial
Test 4: Hangmare's Noose And The Iron Pig (Survival Linked To Salvation/Hear What I Hear)/Test 5: Oxygen Crusher (Toxic Society)
Twilight was trotting down the street looking for a warehouse called ''Royal Storage Units'' unfortunately none of the warehouses or storage units she found seemed to match that name. And Hacksaw didn't even bother to give her any clues after her last test nothing like a clue in the box or in one of the tapes she found in that test or messages in the photos
Flashback A Day Before Saw 1 Escape Temple
''So what storage unit can i store all my engineering supplies?'' Hacksaw asked ''Well almost all of the storage units are used up right now'' Sharpend Horn told Hacksaw ''What seriously but you're one of the biggest storage units in Equestria'' Hacksaw complained
''That's the thing the reason why this is one of the biggest storage units in Equestria is because me the owner of the place i'm a Royal Guard which means i'm connected to Canterlot royalty which is why everypony stores their stuff in here ,this isn't called Royal Storage Units for nothing.'' Sharpend Horn explained ''As for what i was saying how almost all of the storage units are used up well there's is one that not used up.''
The Unicorn Royal Guard then led Hacksaw to this storage unit at the end of a hallway and when he opened the storage garage the room had, rusty leaky pipes on the walls, less rusty but still a little rusty pipes on the ceiling, chains hanging from the ceiling and finally there was light bars on each corner of the room.
''Sorry if this looks like one of those rooms you'll see in a horror movie it was one of the very few quality storage units still available the others were full of rust or fallan apart.'' Sharpend Horn said using his magic to hand Hacksaw the keys to the storage unit before trotting back to the counter.
''Better value what i have, I can work with this i mean in the end it's still a storage unit'' Hacksaw said using his magic to put down the first toolbox of his engineering supplies.
Time Skip
Once Hacksaw unpacked everything a alarm went of catching the unicorn off guard and almost causing him to knock down a box of engineering supplies when he looked over there turns out a storage unit has been broken into with a chunk of the garage door broken off.
Sharpend Horn tackled the stallion peagsus robbing the storage unit and smacked the pegasus with hoof ''HOW DARE YOUR ROB THIS PLACE'' Sharpend yelled before smacking the stallion again
Hacksaw moved his head back into his own storage unit and closed the garage door before walking over to a box of engineering supplies opened it and pulled out a smaller box and opened that and pulled out a Reverse Bear Trap. ''Looks like i'm dealing with a corrupt Royal Guard but if i want to do this i'll need more information about this unicorn.'' Hacksaw said to himself before setting the Reverse Bear Trap down on a table
Around Closing Time
Hacksaw has gotten a file about Sharpend Horn and went to looked through it finding out he's been responsible for 10 cases of assault but never arrested or charged for them. ''So the power he has as a Royal Guard really has corrupted him.''
A Few Moments Later
Sharpend Horn was checking to make sure all the garage doors were secure, once he did he started packing up his supplies, this is when he noticed a hallway light was turned off ''That's weird i never remember turning off that light.'' Sharpend said walking over to the light switch and when he turned on the light he saw a hooded pony at the end of the hall for a second before it hid behind a corner
''HEY STOP RIGHT THERE'' the Royal Guard said trotting after the hooded pony but when looking behind the corner the figure was gone. Sharpend look behind him and saw no pony there, after taking a sigh of relief the hooded pony got the drop of him literally as he fell from the ceiling
Sharpend tried to fight back only for the hooded pony in a Dollhead Mask (Button Sunglasses and Stitched up mouth face mask) knocked him out with a hoof to the face.
Back to the present
Twilight eventually found the warehouse except it was on the outskirts of Ponyville where barely any ponies lived or where there was a lot of buildings ''Guess this is why the warehouse went out of business.'' Twilight thought as she used her magic to use the lockpick and open the door.
Once inside the unicorn detective found a lot of tools on the floor some had a little rust of them, the place reminded Twilight of a mechanic garage. Not only because of the tools also because of stains of something on the floor and because of pieces of a dismantled cars and carriages scattered across the floor.
In the storage unit warehouse there was also chains and broken lights hanging from the ceiling which reminded Twilight of a butcher shop and defiantly gave the unicorn detective a urban explorer vibe. Twilight eventually found a door saying Survival Linked to Salvation ''Pretty sure those two mean the same thing'' Twilight though then she noticed the door also said Hear What I Hear.
''Maybe Hacksaw what me to go in there when in reality i have to go in here'' Twilight stated before breaking down the door next to the spray painted door with a pipe but this just resulted in the unicorn almost getting shot with a shotgun which managed to only graze the side of her cheek which peeled off some skin. ''Oh my fucking god that was a close one'' Twilight stated before walking over and lockpicking the spray painted door.
Once in the room there was more pieces of dismantled cars and carriages on the floor ''Hello can any pony hear me?'' a pony asked. When the detective went to look where the voice came from she saw it came from inside a furnace looking device ''Don't worry i'll get you out'' Twilight said before walking over to the furnace looking device only to get a electric shock ''What the fuck?'' the unicorn swore before firing a beam only for a bolt to wrap around the beam and reach the detective's horn and getting another electric shock. ''Do you know where my marefriend is?'' the pony asked ''Don't worry once i get you out of there i'll find your marefriend.'' the detective said
Twilight then turned her attention to the other side of the room and saw a pony at the end of the room with a blindfold over her eyes that was connected to cable, there was a huge hole in the floor with wood boards scattered around. The unicorn then found a tape and which two ponie's name on them and played it
''Hello Lyra and Bon-Bon or in your case Bon-Bon Agent Sweetie Drops i wanna play a game you've have been spying on many diffrent ponies without their knowledge, and your marefriend Lyra Heartstrings knows all about it but refuses to say anything about it so it's up to you Lyra to hear what i hear reach the key by feeling around with a blindfold on since you've been blinded from Agent Sweetie Drop's acts live or die make your choice.'' Stichy explanied
Twilight then found a tape on a shelf and played it ''Hello Twilight Sparkle i wanna play a game for your 4th test you'll learn that sometimes someponie's Survival Is Linked To Another's Salvation the mares in this room are in desprate need of help their names are Lyra Heartstrings and Bon-Bon or Agent Sweetie Drops. Sweetie Drops has been spying on many different ponies and her marefriend Lyra know about it but refuses to say anything about it. All you have to do is reach the key and hand it to Lyra but if you don't do it under 60 seconds the cable around Lyra's neck will hang her and a fire will start under The Iron Pig and burn Agent Sweetie Drops to death. Lyra's Survival Is Linked To Bon-Bon's Salvation it's your choice.'' Stichy explained
Lyra was lowered down causing her to wake up ''WHAT THE FUCK I CAN'T SEE ANYTHING!'' Lyra yelled ''Hey CALM DOWN LISTEN TO ME TRY TO GET CLOSE TO ME AS POSSIBLE!'' Twilight yelled trying to get Lyra's attention all the whille trying to reach the blindfolded unicorn by walking on the side planks of the room her back against the wall ''WHERE'S BON-BON!'' Lyra yelled as she started moving across a board ''OKAY THERE A SECOND PLANK FEEL IT WITH YOUR HOOF!'' Twilight told Lyra.
When the blindfolded unicorn felt the second plank and started making her way across it she knocked down a glass bottle causing her to panic when it hit the floor and shattered ''WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT!'' Lyra yelled ''THAT'S JUST A GLASS BOTTLE THERE'S A HUGE HOLE IN THE FLOOR!'' Twilight explained once the key was in magic range she picked it up and moved it towards Lyra's blindfold but due to where she was standing she couldn't she where the keyhole was.
3..2..1
With a click Lyra got hoisted up and she started thrashing around before dieing from hanging. ''Wait so that means'' Twilight said before all of a sudden a fire started under The Iron Pig ''WHAT THE FUCK!'' Bon-Bon yelled as she started yelling in pain. The unicorn detective jumped back to the safety platform and then tried to jump over the invisible electric shock to recieve another electric shock as Bon-Bon's skin started to get peeled off and burned to a crisp as blood started drippong from her body as she was burned to death.
Twilight then used the key to open a door next to the Iron Pig and she opened it she was tackled and knocked out by Dollhead.
When Twilight woke up she found herself with a oxygen mask on her face which was connected to a oxygen tank, all her legs were held in place by chains on her hooves, she struggled against her restrains and tried to shake off the oxygen mask, she also noticed that there was two big metal clamps on her sides, after a while of struggling a TV turned on and Stichy appeared
''Hello Detective Twilight Sparkle i wanna play a game for your 5th test your last test before the final one you'll have to put your life on the line like the entrance exam. As you know we live in a pretty Toxic Society so many criminals and bad ponies in this world and what i mean by bad ponies is that there's are ponies like Berry Punch.'' Stichy explained voice activating as light showing Berry Punch on the other side of the room in the same contraption as Twilight.
''She's a alcoholic a apple cider addict doing literally anything to get her hooves on a sip of apple cider basically wasting her life on it. These two big metal clamps will touch your sides which are connected to a very sensitive pump that when even detected the smallest breath will cause the metal clamps to press deeper into your sides with every breath. The only way for one of you to escape with your life is if one you die. If you Twilight die Princess Celestia and your partner Flurry Heart are doomed and will die, live or die make your choice.'' Stichy explained before the TV shut off and the two metal clamps pressed in Twilight's and Berry's sides.
Twilight before and a little after she became a detective had have some experiences with alcoholic apple cider or apple cider containing alcohol but overall wasn't considered a alcoholic. Twilight realized she needed to hold her breath to survive, she tried to perform mirco breaths but this didn't work out since she ended up taking a gasp of air causing the clamps to press into her sides a little.
Berry on the other side of the room was somehow managing to hold up better than the unicorn detective despite being a alcoholic. Twilight went to back to holding her breath trying to not even make the smallest peep but ended up taking another gasp of air causing the metal clamps to press into her side further.
Twilight was about to give up on holding her breath before all of a sudden. Berry took a long gasp of air causing the metal clamps to dig into her sides pretty far, before taking another breath due to the pain, followed up by 2 other breaths the metal clamps caused blood to come out of Berry's mouth killing her.
The pump then stopped and the metal clamps were removed from Twilight's sides and the chains were removed causing the detective to fall to the floor, she then removed the oxygen mask from her face and found the scars that the metal clamps had left.
Twilight noticed that she had bracelets on her front hooves something she brushed off earlier as part of the chains. All of a sudden another TV turned on and Stichy showed up ''I see you survived Detective Twlight Sparkle and if you're wondering about those bracelets i'm putting you on a time limit if you can't track down the abandoned temple under 30 minutes this will happen.'' Stichy said before showing footage of a pony mannequin with these bracelets on which end exloded destroying it arms causing Twilight to freak out. ''You're one step closer to saving both Princess Celestia and your partner Flurry Heart.'' Stichy explained before the TV shut off.
Author's Note
Reminder: I based Detective Twilight Sparkle on Eric Matthews and Daniel Rigg from Saw since according to the Saw Wiki both of them have a temperamental and focused personality. Eric is one of my favorites characters from the Saw series but it kinda suck he was a corrupt cop so that why i made Twilight one of the only non corrupt law enforcers in her department
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Saw 2: Detective Twilight's Trial
Test 6: Learn To Let Go/Test 7: What You're Looking For Is Right Under/Final Test: The Ice Block Trap (Patience,remember WHO you are saving, time is on your side)
Twilight tried to forget about the threat of the explosive bracelets that once they explode will leave the detective without front hooves and will lead to Princess Celestia and her partner Flurry Heart with a death sentence and once Celestia dies Equestria might fall into some chaos once learning on of the Royal Sisters are dead and will take a while for it to get used to the fact there's only 1 Royal Sister.
''Guess it's not that easy to forget about this threat after all.'' Twilight realized, the unicorn detective was able to get to the Everfree Forest pretty quickly, and once trotting in she realized how creepy the place actually was ''This place is a lot more scary than i thought, looks pretty dreadful, and doesn't look natural at all not even sure if any creature had come out of this place alive.''
During Twilight's career as a detective she had volunteered in searches for missing ponies and creatures according to the records the most searched place in Equestria is the Everfree Forest. Unfortunately none of the missing creatures cases the unicorn volunteered in are notable enough to get a flashback, with every search being a sucess so no flashback here.
Once Twilight got to the edge of a cliff she saw Stichy on a tricycle similar to Scootaloo's, this made her frustrated and causing the detective to grab Stichy off his tricycle and slam him against the ground but this seem to trigger a bomb explosion. Leading to Twilight to slide down the cliff but luckily being able to bite onto a branch, all of a sudden Stichy wearing rock climbing equipment which a rope tied around his chest came down.
''Hello Detective Twilight Sparkle i wanna play a game i decided to add 2 extra tests to your trail it's to remove the explosive bracelets off your front hooves for your 6th test all you have to do is Learn To Let Go it's your choice.'' Stichy explained before ascending up.
Twilight had no idea what Stichy meant by learn to let go she wasn't a corrupt detective so she wasn't responsible for anything bad, she didn't have any guilt in her life and she didn't lose any creature important in her life. ''Learn to let go'' The unicorn repeated in her mind before realizing something ''That's it'' the detective realized before letting go of the small branch aiming for some vines in hopes of them being strong enough to break her fall.
And what do you know they actually manage to be strong enough to break Twilight's fall. Twilight then saw a key hanging from one of the vines once she grabbed the key the vines broke causing the unicorn detective fall to the ground after she brushed herself off she unlocked one of the explosive bracelets
Eventually Twilight made her way into a field full of creepy looking tress, it eventually got to the point where there was just darkness, and when the detective used her horn as a light source tree came out of the ground with messages spray painted on them. These include of Learn to let go, What you're looking for is right under, Final Test, and Time is on your side all of a sudden Stichy came out of a tree stump with a explorer outfit on this time.
''Hello Mrs Sparkle i wanna play a game for your 7th test the key to the second and final bracelet is in one of nature's cabinets let me remind you that what you're looking for is right under make your choice.'' Stichy explained before going back into the tree stump.
Twilight looked at the tree with what you're looking for is right under but then decided to go for the tree stump Stichy went into after charging up a beam from her horn she completely destroying the stump but only finding plush stuffing with no key. With that out of the question Twilight destroyed the tree she was looking at a few moments ago and went she searched around the remains she didn't find a key.
With only 2 minutes left until the other bracelet explodes she destroyed the remaining trees only to once again, find no key. This is when Twilight thought of the clue what you're looking for is right under, then the unicorn detective noticed a single rock standing between the now destroyed trees.
Using her magic to remove out of the ground was a bit of a struggle due to the amount of magic she used to destroy the trees. Once being able to remove the rock with only a couple of seconds left Twilight found the key and unlock the other explosive bracelet with 1 second left before it exploded.
''Huh looks the Explosive Bracelets have been removed time to start the second countdown'' Dollhead stated who spoke out of a voice box designed to make him sound like Stichy The Doll, the hooded pony wearing button sunglasses and stitched up mouth face mask turned on a 20 minute timer ''If this other creature pass it's test the 2 of you's traps will be deactivated
Speaking of the trap, Princess Celestia and Flurry Heart were on a seesaw platform Celestia was gagged standing on a iceblock that was already half melted once the entire block melts Celestia will be hanged by the chain around her neck the water from the melted ice will drip into a tank. On the other side of the seesaw platform Flurry Heart was gagged and strapped to a electric chair and once Celestia is hung the electric chair with exposed wires sticking out will touch the water in the tank from the melted ice block and electrocute Flurry to death the voltage is powerful enough to make her eyes to explode.
Twilight trotted off past the destroyed trees and a couple of seconds later found the abandoned temple she was looking for and used her magic to break down the door to the place. Once inside the unicorn detective found a box and when she opened it all she found in the box was a note saying Patience,remember WHO you are saving, time is on your side ''RIght i'm saving on of the Royal Sisters one of the rulers of Equestria.'' Twilight thought ''But Time is on your side, what the fuck does that mean'' the unicorn said to herself she also found a tape inside the box and didn't hesitate to play it.
''Hello Detective Twilight Sparkle i wanna play a game all you need is Patience,remember WHO you are saving, time is on your side.'' Stichy concluded
Princess Celestia was in a pretty strange situation never in her reign would she expect to be abducted by a serial killer be in one of his ''games'' only to fail it and get trapped in complete darkness for who knows how long, only to be put into a trap and be part of some other creature's game. The sun princess then decided to hang herself she walked off the ice block in hopes of hanging and kill herself which unstabilized the seesaw platform causing the electric chair to slowly start falling into the water below.
''Hey,HEY!'' Dollhead yelled trotting over to the trap and using his magic to put Celestia back onto the ice block which was able to restable the seesaw platform. ''You move off that ice block you electrocute her got it?'' the hooded pony asked all he got as a reponse was a simple nod from the Princess.
Once going back to the monitors to check Twilight's progress she saw that Celestia had somehow manage to pass out ''HEY YOU LOOK WHAT HAPPEND!'' Flurry try to say behind the gag ''Oh come on'' Dollhead replied once again trotting over to the trap and trying to shake the sun princess awake only to get smacked across the face almost getting his button sunglasses knocked off.
''HEY STOP!'' Dollhead yelled stablizing Celestia on the ice block ''Look i'm not the one you have to worry about in fact all you have to do is wait and let the timer reach zero.'' Dollhead explained before tieing a chain to the doorknob of a door with Final Test spray painted on it ''The other creature is the one you have worry about but this other creature passes it's test your traps will be deactivated and you 2 can go free.'' Dollhead explained pointing at the chain.
Cadance realized that being in Hacksaw trap was a huge clue and also realized that Detective Twilight Sparkle could have something to do with it so she decided to track down the purple unicorn detective with her magic and found that she was at a random abandoned temple in the middle of the Everfree Forest.
Once teleporting there she grabbed a gun just in case there's a threat to magic in there and also decided to write a letter to Captain Shining Armor for backup and a raid of the temple. Once inside Cadance explored the other areas of the temple she eventually the same temple room the Royal Sisters were Originally tested it so she examined the place in hopes of finding clues.
Twilight was making her way through the temple and found how abandoned the place actually was there was huge chunks of the ceiling missing showing the night sky there was stuff like rusty fountains with dirty water inside them and rusty pipes some even broken off. There also seem to be new stuff inside the temple like a boxes of supplies, toolboxes and paint on the wall which was something that a temple normally doesn't have.
Dollhead came to Celestia and handed her a gun and a single bullet ''Live or die you make the choice'' Dollhead explained. When the sun princess got the gun she didn't know what she could do with it, she could shoot herself to stop her suffering or shoot Dollhead she remember that the other creature was the one the she should worry about so she focused on shooting the other creature in this game.
Twilight say the timer and thought ''Crap better get there and FAST '' before trotting off knocking down a bunch of the supplies in the hallway in the process.
Dollhead then grabbed a remote labeled release which would release and deactivate the trap once the timer reach zero. "If the other creature comes through the door beforethe timer reaches zero the chain will be released and the 2 ice blocks above you will swing down and crush your head.'' Dollhead explained
The unicorn detective Twilight Sparkle made it to the door. ''WHO IS THAT DON'T COME THROUGH THE DOOR!'' Celestia yelled trying to get the attetion of this other creature only for it to get muffled due to the soundproof wall and door with the timer reaching 20 seconds.
Twilight saw the timer reach 20 seconds and she forgot about the plan and went for it she charged at the door Celestia tried to shoot Twilight but this just ended up shattering the glass on the door window when the unicorn detective charged into the room she shoot Dollhead in the face knocking him to the ground.
This released the chain causing the 2 ice blocks above the Princess's head to swing down and crush her head shattering the ice blocks, causing blood, chunks of flesh and some bone to go everywhere, and shards from the ice blocks to fly into Twilight's face badly injuring her causing a lot of blood to come out and even causing a little chunk of flesh to fall off.
Once Celestia's body fell off the ice block the electric chair with exposed wires Flurry Heart was strapped to tipped over and touched the water electrocuting Flurry to death causing her eyes and horn to explode killing her.
''NOOOOOOOOOOO!'' Twilight yelled realzing she lost one of the Princess Of Equestria and her partner ''Put your hooves where i can FUCKING SEE THEM!'' the detective yelled at Dollhead, who reached into a bag. Twilight was able to gather enough energy to shoot Dollhead through the head killing him but it turns out what he was reaching for wasn't a gun but a tape.
''Hello Detective Twilight Sparkle all you needed to do is have patience but you failed to do this which resulted in the deaths of Princess Celestia and your Partner Detective Flurry Heart all you had to do is see what is see, sometimes it's better not to save them, feel what i feel, survival is linked to salvation, we live in a toxic society, learn to let go, what you're looking for is right under and have patience without those you failed your final test.'' Stichy explained
All of a sudden she saw a green beam of energy flash before her eyes and Dollhead when she crawled over to it and removed the button sunglasses and stitched up face mask it turned out Dollhead was a innocent changeling and the reason why it couldn't say anything was because it had it's mouth literally stitched shut and the voice box wasn't a box it was a small speaker meaning the real Dollhead was speaking through it with the voicebox.
Twilight tried to get up this is when she saw the real dollhead come into the room causing her to collapse to the floor,''Hey guess what detective i've also captured your daughter and she's in a room where she's slowly running out of oxygen'' Dollhead explained before showing footage of it on a monitor. ''I'll FUCKING KILL YOU WHERE IS MY DAUGHTER!'' Twilight managed to yell before getting shot in the back by the real Dollhead
With that he just simply walked pass the purple unicorn detective ''GAME OVER!'' Dollhead said before trotting off to the temple room that Cadance was in and shut to door ''What the hell'' the alicorn said causing the her to point her gun at the locked door.
Twilight not only didn't have energy to produce magic she was starting to lose energy in general and eventually passed out and died
Author's Note
If you want to complain remember that my Saw Series is the Saw Movies with MLP characters but incredibly simplified
