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Foomph

by Scriblits Talo
Pinky Pie and a Kirin

Basil Burst, the Kirin, is dealing with some dangerous feelings, weather luckily or unluckily a certain pink pony arrives to distract her.

Originally Written for the 2023 Everfree Northwest Iron Author contest,
Also an examination of how editing and rewriting can make a story better.

Everyone
Incomplete
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Slice of Life
 
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5342 words: Estimated 27 minutes to read
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6 Chapters:

  1. Foomph! Edit the Fourth 2024-07-13 18:32:26 UTC
    913
  2. Foomph!( Third Edit) 2024-07-11 04:06:45 UTC
    905
  3. Foomph!(Second Edit) 2024-07-10 05:38:43 UTC
    894
  4. Foomph!( First Edit) 2024-07-08 21:28:38 UTC
    914
  5. Original Version 2024-07-08 21:29:39 UTC
    906
  6. Judge notes and Letter 2024-07-08 21:30:44 UTC
    810