My name is... Ava Carter.
Chapter 3: Welcome to Canterlot... Maybe
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The polka-dotted train clattered along the warped tracks, the garish interior lit by the flickering glow of glittery chandeliers. Lyra sat awkwardly on a bench covered in sequins, Moondancer rummaged through her saddlebag for something useful, and Twilight was pressed against the window, staring out with her jaw clenched and her ears flicking with impatience.
Meanwhile, I was hyperventilating in the corner.
“I’m gonna die here,” I muttered, pacing—or rather, awkwardly wobbling—back and forth as my hooves clattered against the candy-striped floor. “I’m gonna die here in a magical pony world because a chaos god decided to throw a temper tantrum!”
“Ava,” Moondancer said gently, her voice laced with concern, “you’re not going to die.”
“Oh yeah?” I snapped, whirling to face her. “Tell that to Derpy, Moondancer! DERPY!”
Lyra, sitting nearby, winced. “Yikes. Yeah, that was… rough.”
“Rough?” I repeated, throwing up my hooves. “She got squished like a pancake! There was blood everywhere! And I’m next! I can feel it! He’s gonna drop something big and stupid on me, like a flaming grand piano or a sentient anvil!”
“Okay, that’s enough,” Moondancer said, stepping forward and putting her hooves on my shoulders. “Take a deep breath, Ava. You’re safe on the train.”
I tried to breathe, but my chest was so tight it felt like I was being squeezed by an invisible boa constrictor. “Safe? SAFE?! I almost died five times just getting to the station! This isn’t some wacky dream anymore, Moondancer! I could actually DIE here! Do you get that?! Dead! Gone! Poof! Never seeing my family again!”
Lyra glanced at Moondancer, clearly unsure of what to do. “Uh, should we… slap her or something?”
“No!” Moondancer hissed, glaring at her before turning back to me. “Ava, listen to me. You’re not going to die, okay? We’ve got your back. We’ll protect each other.”
“Protect each other?!” I barked out a hysterical laugh. “How? By chucking friendship bracelets at Discord and hoping he chokes on them?!”
“Alright, that’s enough,” Twilight snapped, not even turning from the window. “Ava, we all know the stakes here. You panicking isn’t going to help anyone, so could you please get it together?”
“GET IT TOGETHER?!” I yelled, my voice cracking. “I’m sorry, Twilight! Some of us aren’t magical prodigies with shiny crown necklaces! I’m just some schmuck who woke up in pony hell!”
Twilight finally turned to glare at me, her frustration practically radiating off her. “If you spent half as much energy helping as you do panicking, maybe we’d actually get somewhere!”
“Hey!” Lyra interjected, stepping between us. “Cut her some slack, Twilight. She’s freaked out! Honestly, I’m freaked out too, but you don’t see me yelling at everypony.”
“I’m not yelling,” Twilight said, her tone sharp and clipped.
“You’re totally yelling,” Lyra said, deadpan.
“Ugh, whatever,” Twilight muttered, turning back to the window. “I just want to get to Canterlot already.”
“Speaking of,” Moondancer said, her voice calmer now as she adjusted her glasses, “I think I know why the meteors happened.”
We all turned to her, even Twilight, who raised an eyebrow.
Moondancer cleared her throat, gesturing vaguely toward the window. “The moon isn’t where it’s supposed to be. Without it in its proper orbit, it’s not blocking meteors and debris like it usually would. They’re slipping right past it and heading straight for Equus.”
I blinked, momentarily distracted from my panic. “Huh. That… actually makes sense.”
Twilight nodded thoughtfully. “Of course. The moon’s gravitational influence is a crucial part of our planetary system. If it’s out of place—”
“Okay, nerds,” Lyra interrupted, holding up a hoof. “We get it. The moon is slacking, and now we’re all getting pelted by space rocks. Can we focus on not dying for a sec?”
Twilight huffed but turned back to the window just as the train began to slow. “Fine. But we’re here now.”
As the train screeched to a halt, I peeked out the window, hoping for a glimpse of the sparkling, regal city I remembered from the show.
What I saw instead made my stomach drop.
Canterlot was a wreck.
The once-pristine streets were cracked and warped, with fountains spewing glitter instead of water. The castle itself was tilted at an alarming angle, its towers twisted like candy canes. The grand spires were covered in polka dots, and one of them had been replaced with a giant ice cream cone that dripped molten chocolate onto the streets below.
“Oh, come on!” Twilight exclaimed, her jaw dropping as she stared at the chaos. “It’s worse than Ponyville!”
“No shit,” I muttered, pressing my face against the window. “I didn’t think that was possible.”
Moondancer adjusted her glasses, squinting at the castle. “I’m not sure what I was expecting, but… yeah, this is bad.”
“Okay,” Lyra said, cracking her neck as she stood. “We’ve got our clue, and we’ve got each other. Let’s figure out what’s going on before we all get turned into Discord’s next art project.”
“Right,” Twilight said, her expression hardening. “Let’s move.”
As we stepped off the train and into the madness of Canterlot, I couldn’t help but glance nervously at the sky. The meteors might’ve stopped for now, but I had a sinking feeling that things were only going to get worse.
The streets of Canterlot were unrecognizable.
The grand cobblestone roads were cracked and uneven, littered with debris and what looked suspiciously like oversized glitter bombs. The elegant fountains had stopped flowing, replaced by crude graffiti of Discord’s grinning face. Shop windows were shattered, and the once-regal buildings were twisted into grotesque shapes that defied physics.
But it wasn’t just the architecture. The air was heavy with tension, like the city itself was holding its breath.
“This is… horrible,” Twilight muttered, her voice breaking the silence as we cautiously made our way through the ruins.
“No kidding,” I said, stepping over what I hoped was a puddle of spilled chocolate syrup. “I knew Canterlot was fancy, but this is next-level chaos. It’s like someone threw a Mad Hatter tea party and forgot to clean up.”
“I don’t think this is a party,” Lyra said, her eyes darting around nervously. “It’s too quiet. Where is everypony?”
“Maybe they’re hiding,” Moondancer suggested, her voice low. “Or… worse.”
A chill ran down my spine at the implication, and I tried to shake it off. “Alright, can we not jump to worst-case scenarios? I’m already on edge.”
“Shh,” Twilight hissed, holding up a hoof. “Do you hear that?”
We froze, straining to listen. At first, there was nothing but the eerie sound of the wind whistling through the streets. But then… voices.
“...No, we have to stay sharp. He’s always watching.”
“Keep an eye on the streets. If you see anyone new, you know the drill.”
The voices were low and guttural, laced with a mix of paranoia and aggression. And they were getting closer.
“We need to hide,” Twilight whispered urgently, gesturing toward a crumbling alleyway.
We ducked into the shadows just as the first figure came into view.
The ponies who emerged from the foggy streets were filthy, their fur matted and their manes hacked into jagged styles. They wore makeshift armor—scraps of metal, leather straps, and bits of broken jewelry—and carried crude weapons: clubs, chains, and what looked like a frying pan with nails sticking out of it.
But what really caught my attention was their eyes. They weren’t scared. They weren’t desperate. They were wild, bloodthirsty, and full of something I could only describe as madness.
“Uh, Twilight?” I whispered, my voice barely audible. “Why do these ponies look like they just walked off the set of Mad Max?”
“I don’t know,” she replied, her voice tight with worry. “But we need to stay out of sight.”
“Too late,” Lyra muttered, pointing toward the alley’s entrance.
A pony with a jagged mohawk spotted us, his eyes narrowing. “Hey!” he barked. “What do we have here?”
Before we could react, more ponies swarmed into the alley, their weapons raised as they surrounded us.
“Well, well, well,” said a mare with a spiked collar and a torn tuxedo jacket. She grinned wickedly, revealing teeth that looked sharper than they should’ve been. “Fresh meat.”
“Wait!” Twilight said, stepping forward and raising her hooves. “We don’t want any trouble—”
“Too bad,” the mohawk pony interrupted, his grin matching the mare’s. “You’re coming with us.”
They herded us through the twisted streets, their jeers and laughter echoing in the eerie silence. I tried to keep my breathing steady, but my heart was pounding like a drum.
“Okay,” I whispered to Lyra, who was walking beside me, her hooves bound with a crude chain. “Any chance this is just a really weird welcome party?”
“Not unless your idea of a party involves clubs and chains,” she muttered back, her eyes darting nervously.
Eventually, we reached what used to be a grand plaza, now transformed into a makeshift camp. The elegant marble statues of Celestia and Luna had been defaced, their faces replaced with crude carvings of Discord’s smug grin. Tents made of tattered fabric and scavenged materials were scattered across the plaza, and a massive bonfire blazed in the center.
Ponies lounged around the fire, laughing and drinking from dented cans. They were just as filthy and savage-looking as the ones who’d captured us, their once-elegant Canterlot attire reduced to scraps and accessories that wouldn’t look out of place in a punk rock concert.
“Behold,” said the spiked-collar mare, gesturing dramatically. “The Chaosborn Resistance!”
“Resistance to what?” I asked, my voice dripping with sarcasm. “Hygiene?”
Twilight shot me a warning glare, but I couldn’t help myself.
The mare chuckled darkly. “You’ve got a smart mouth. That won’t last long.”
They pushed us toward the center of the camp, where a crude throne made of broken furniture and gold trim sat atop a platform. Above it, a massive banner bore Discord’s face, his mismatched eyes seeming to follow us as we were shoved forward.
A stallion with a patch over one eye stepped forward, his armor jangling as he moved. “New prisoners?”
“More like new sacrifices,” the mohawk pony replied with a sneer.
“Sacrifices?!” I yelped, stumbling as they pushed me toward the throne. “Whoa, whoa, whoa! What happened to the whole ‘friendship and harmony’ thing?!”
“Friendship doesn’t save you from Discord,” the patched stallion growled. “But if we serve him, maybe he’ll go easy on us.”
“Serve him?” Twilight said, her voice sharp. “You’re worshiping the Spirit of Chaos?”
The mare with the collar grinned. “Better to be on his good side than end up like the rest of Canterlot. Or Ponyville. Or anywhere else.”
Twilight’s face twisted in anger, but before she could respond, I cut in. “Alright, let me get this straight,” I said, stepping forward despite my shaking legs. “You’re willingly working for the guy who turned your city into a nightmare, just because you think he might leave you alone? That’s your big plan?”
The crowd murmured, and I saw a few of them exchange uneasy glances.
“Quiet!” barked the patched stallion, slamming his hoof down. “We don’t need lectures from some outsider!”
“Outsider?” I said, narrowing my eyes. “Buddy, you don’t even know the half of it.”
The tension crackled in the air as the crowd fell silent, their eyes locked on us. The patched stallion and spiked-collar mare loomed over us, their ragtag followers murmuring and shifting uneasily. Twilight looked ready to explode, Moondancer was trying to calculate her way out of the situation, and Lyra was shooting me looks that screamed, Fix this!
And me? I was busy trying not to hyperventilate.
The stallion raised his hoof, silencing the crowd. “These prisoners need to be dealt with. If we’re going to survive under Discord, we can’t take any chances.”
“Oh, you’ve got to be kidding me,” I muttered, glancing at Twilight. “Do you guys ever catch a break?”
Twilight gave me a look that could’ve melted steel. “Do you ever stop talking?”
Before I could shoot back a retort, a new voice rang out, slicing through the chaos like a blade.
“Stand down, everyone!”
The tone was commanding, sharp, and filled with the kind of energy that made every pony freeze in place. The stallion immediately dropped his hoof, and the collar-wearing mare took a nervous step back.
The crowd parted like the Red Sea, their muttering fading into silence as a figure emerged from the shadows. At first, I couldn’t make out who it was—just a silhouette moving with practiced confidence, their hooves clinking softly against the broken cobblestones.
Then she stepped into the flickering firelight, and my jaw hit the floor.
It was Rainbow Dash.
But not the Rainbow Dash I remembered.
Her mane, once messy but sleek, was now spiked and jagged, dyed with streaks of dark blue and red. She wore a black leather jacket covered in metal studs and spikes, the sleeves torn off to reveal her powerful wings, which looked sharper and more battle-worn than ever. Her hooves were wrapped in tattered cloth, and a pair of goggles hung loosely around her neck, the lenses cracked but still glinting in the firelight.
She was, in a word, badass.
“Is that… Rainbow Dash?” I whispered to Moondancer, who nodded numbly.
“Sweet Celestia,” Lyra muttered, her eyes wide. “She looks… cool as hell.”
I couldn’t argue. Despite the terrifying situation, I felt a wave of relief wash over me. If anyone could save us from this mess, it was Rainbow Dash.
“Who are these ponies?” Rainbow asked, her raspy voice sharp as she stepped onto the makeshift throne platform. Her magenta eyes scanned us, narrowing slightly when they landed on Twilight. “Wait a second…”
Twilight opened her mouth, but Rainbow beat her to it, a slow smirk spreading across her face. “Twilight Sparkle. I remember you.”
“You do?” Twilight asked, clearly confused.
Rainbow’s smirk widened. “Yeah, we met a few months back. You were the uptight unicorn who gave me that ‘important mission’ speech.” She chuckled, rolling her eyes. “You really know how to make an impression.”
My brain clicked into place. Of course Rainbow recognized her—she was talking about the first episode of the show! When Twilight (well, me) had met her in Ponyville!
“Oh, thank God,” I said, stepping forward despite myself. “Rainbow, you have no idea how happy I am to see you.”
Rainbow raised an eyebrow, her smirk faltering slightly. “Uh… do I know you?”
Crap. Right. Twilight’s body. Play it cool, Ava.
“I mean, you don’t really know me,” I said quickly, trying not to stumble over my words. “But I know you. And trust me, you’re just as awesome as I expected.”
Rainbow tilted her head, clearly trying to figure me out, but she didn’t seem hostile. Yet.
The patched stallion stepped forward, frowning. “Commander Dash, these prisoners—”
“What did I just say?” Rainbow snapped, whipping around to glare at him. Her voice was pure steel, and the stallion immediately took a step back, his ears flattening.
“Stand down,” she repeated, her gaze sweeping over the crowd. “We don’t sacrifice ponies unless I say so. Got it?”
There was a collective murmur of agreement, and the crowd slowly began to disperse, though a few ponies lingered nearby, watching us warily.
Rainbow turned back to us, her expression softening slightly. “Alright, Twilight. Spill it. What are you doing here, and who are your friends?”
Twilight hesitated, glancing at me, Moondancer, and Lyra. “It’s… a long story.”
“Figures,” Rainbow said with a sigh, rubbing the back of her neck. “Alright, come with me. We’ll talk somewhere private.”
As she led us away from the bonfire, I couldn’t help but marvel at how different she was. She still had that trademark confidence, but there was a roughness to her now—a hardness that hadn’t been there before.
“Rainbow Dash?” I said cautiously as we walked.
“Yeah?” she replied without looking back.
“I just want to say… you look cool as hell.”
She paused, glancing over her shoulder with a small smirk. “Yeah, I know.”
Rainbow Dash’s “headquarters” was a hollowed-out tower overlooking what was left of Canterlot. The top half of the structure had been blown away, leaving jagged stone walls open to the chaotic skyline. Inside, crates of scavenged supplies were stacked haphazardly, and a weathered map of Equestria was tacked to one wall, marked with pins and scribbles. A single lantern cast a flickering light over the room, its glow barely cutting through the gloom.
Rainbow sprawled casually in a battered chair near the edge of the room, her wings folded at her sides. Despite the rough surroundings, she looked like she belonged there, her spiked leather jacket and confident smirk adding to her aura of “don’t mess with me.”
“So, let me get this straight,” Rainbow said, leaning forward and pointing a hoof at me. “You’re a human who took over Twilight’s body, saved the world from eternal night with, like, zero magic skills, and now you’re back because you know the future and think you can help us stop Discord... because you saw it all on a TV show?”
“Pretty much,” I said with a shrug, trying to play it cool.
Rainbow’s face was unreadable for a moment, her eyes narrowing slightly as if she was trying to figure out if I was messing with her. Then, to my surprise, her grin widened.
“That... is... AWESOME!” she exclaimed, jumping out of her chair and flaring her wings. “I mean, come on! A human saving the day? That’s like something out of a Daring Do book!”
I blinked, caught off guard by her enthusiasm. “Uh, thanks? I guess?”
“No, seriously!” Rainbow said, circling me like she was sizing me up. “That’s the coolest thing I’ve ever heard. So, what’s it like being a human? You guys don’t have wings or magic, right? How do you even get around?”
“Uh, cars,” I said, scratching the back of my neck.
“Cars?” Rainbow tilted her head, intrigued.
“Big metal machines that go really fast,” I explained.
Her eyes lit up. “That sounds AWESOME!”
Twilight, sitting stiffly on a crate nearby, rolled her eyes. “Can we focus, please?”
Rainbow huffed but plopped back into her chair, still grinning. “Fine, fine. So, what’s the plan? Why’d you guys come here?”
Lyra stepped forward, her voice steady but tinged with urgency. “We think the princesses’ disappearance is connected to Discord’s riddle. ‘When the moon is lost and the sun fades away, seek the place where the shadows play.’ We figured starting where they vanished—here in Canterlot—would give us a lead.”
Rainbow’s grin faded, replaced by a somber expression. She leaned back, her wings drooping slightly. “Makes sense. But… good luck finding anything. This place has been a death trap since Discord took over.”
“We can handle it,” Twilight said firmly.
Rainbow snorted. “Maybe you can. But let me tell you something—. When Discord first showed up, I thought we could fight him. That’s why I started this resistance—to stand against him, protect the ponies who couldn’t protect themselves.”
Her voice grew quieter, tinged with bitterness. “But it didn’t take long for everything to fall apart. Ponies started disappearing. The princesses were gone. And then…” She gestured vaguely toward the camp below. “Well, you saw what happened. Ponies went feral. Stopped fighting for each other and started fighting for survival. I couldn’t stop it. All I could do was keep what was left of us alive.”
The room fell silent for a moment, the weight of her words settling over us like a thick fog.
“I didn’t want this,” Rainbow said softly, her gaze fixed on the floor. “I didn’t want to give up. But what was I supposed to do? Keep fighting until there was no one left? At least this way, some of us are still here. Barely.”
I felt a pang of sympathy as I looked at her. She was trying to hold it together, but the cracks were showing. This wasn’t the Rainbow Dash I remembered—the fearless, brash daredevil. This was someone who had been beaten down and forced to compromise everything she believed in just to survive.
“Hey,” I said, stepping closer. “We’re here now. And if there’s even a chance we can fix this, we’ll do whatever it takes. I don’t know how yet, but I promise we’ll try.”
Rainbow looked up at me, her magenta eyes searching mine. For a moment, I thought she might argue, but then she gave a small, crooked smile.
“Alright, Ava,” she said, her voice steadier. “If you think you can save the world again, I’m not gonna stop you. I want my life back as much as anyone.”
Twilight nodded, her expression softening slightly. “We’ll make it right, Rainbow. I promise.”
Rainbow’s smile grew, and she gave a sharp nod. “Then let’s do this.”
I couldn’t help but grin. Despite everything, there was a spark of hope in the room now.
“Well,” Lyra said, clapping her hooves together, “I guess we’d better get started. Where do we look first?”
Twilight turned to Rainbow. “You’ve been here longer than us. Is there anywhere in the city that seems… off? Somewhere Discord might’ve left a clue?”
Rainbow frowned, thinking for a moment. “There’s the castle,” she said finally. “I haven’t been able to get close—too many traps—but if Discord’s hiding something, that’s where it’ll be.”
“Then that’s where we’re going,” Twilight said, determination hardening her voice.
“Great,” I muttered, glancing out at the ruined city below. “Just a casual stroll through chaos central to infiltrate a booby-trapped castle. Totally easy.”
Rainbow smirked, slapping me on the back. “Welcome to the resistance, Ava.”
The few ponies in her resistance who still had a shred of sanity moved about, hauling crates and unpacking scavenged goods.
“Alright,” Rainbow said, nodding to the small pile of supplies in front of us. “Take what you need. Food, water, tools, whatever. The castle’s no joke, so make sure you’re ready.”
Lyra stepped up first, her eyes scanning the pile. “I’ll take this,” she said, picking up a length of sturdy rope with a grin. “Never know when you’ll need to tie something—or somepony—up.”
“Noted,” I muttered, eyeing her nervously.
Moondancer grabbed a grappling hook, her expression focused. “This should come in handy. The castle towers are probably crawling with traps.”
When it was Twilight’s turn, she gave Rainbow a polite but firm shake of her head. “Thank you, but I’ll rely on my magic. I know quite a few spells that should help us navigate and defend ourselves.”
Rainbow shrugged. “Suit yourself, egghead.”
Then she turned to me, a smirk tugging at the corner of her mouth. “And you, Ava? Got any preferences? You want rope? A grappling hook? Or maybe…” She reached into a pouch at her side, pulling out a dagger.
The blade was sleek and polished, gleaming faintly in the dim light. Its hilt was wrapped in black leather, and etched into the base of the blade was Rainbow’s unmistakable cutie mark: a cloud and a multicolored lightning bolt.
My jaw dropped. “Is that… your dagger?”
“Yeah,” Rainbow said casually, holding it out to me. “Figured you might need it more than I do right now.”
“Oh my God,” I breathed, staring at the blade like it was the Holy Grail. “You’re giving me your dagger? With your cutie mark on it?”
Rainbow chuckled, her grin widening. “Uh, yeah. You gonna take it or just keep staring at it?”
I grabbed it like a kid getting handed their favorite toy on Christmas morning. “This is the coolest thing ever. Thank you. Seriously. I don’t even care if I ever use it. I might just frame it and stare at it forever.”
Rainbow blinked, then burst out laughing. “Wow. You’re really into this, huh?”
“You have no idea,” I said, clutching the dagger to my chest.
Her laughter died down, but the sparkle in her eyes remained. I could see her standing a little taller, her shoulders squaring as her confidence seemed to creep back in.
“Alright,” Rainbow said, her tone softening. “Listen. I want to go with you guys—I really do. But… these ponies down there?” She gestured vaguely toward the camp below. “They need me. If I leave, they’ll tear each other apart before you even make it to the castle.”
I nodded, understanding. “You’re keeping them sane.”
“Trying to,” she said, sighing. “It’s not easy. But if you guys can fix this—if you can stop Discord and bring things back to normal—I’ll finally be able to get them out of this mess. So don’t screw it up, alright?”
“Don’t worry,” I said, holding up the dagger with a grin. “I’ve got your blade and your blessing. What could go wrong?”
Rainbow smirked, giving me a playful nudge with her hoof. “Just don’t go poking yourself with it, alright?”
We left Rainbow’s camp behind as the chaos of Canterlot loomed before us. The castle sat in the distance like a twisted crown, its towers leaning precariously and its walls warped into jagged, unnatural shapes. The sky above it swirled with storm clouds, crackling with faint flashes of purple lightning.
“Alright,” Twilight said, her voice steady as she led the way. “Stay close, and keep your eyes open. We don’t know what traps Discord might have waiting for us.”
“Yeah, no kidding,” I muttered, glancing nervously at the cracked streets and shadowy alleyways. Every sound made my ears twitch—a clattering can, a distant scream, the faint hum of magic in the air.
Lyra, walking beside me, glanced over with a grin. “You okay there, dagger girl? You’re looking a little twitchy.”
“I’m fine,” I said, gripping the hilt of Rainbow’s dagger tightly. “Just… not used to navigating nightmare worlds on foot. Or, uh, hoof.”
As we approached a narrow bridge leading toward the castle, a sudden voice rang out behind us.
“Hey!”
We all froze, spinning around to see Rainbow Dash standing on the edge of her tower, her wings flared as she yelled down at us. “Watch out for The PartY Poopers! They’re sneaky!”
“What?” Lyra yelled back.
Twilight rolled her eyes. “We’ll be fine. Let’s keep moving.”
Rainbow called out again, her voice tinged with something I couldn’t quite place. “Seriously, keep your heads down! And don’t trust anything that talks to you!”
“I said we’ll be fine,” Twilight muttered under her breath, trotting ahead. “Let’s go.”
I hesitated, glancing back at Rainbow one last time. She looked… worried. More worried than she’d let on before.
“Come on, Ava,” Moondancer said gently, nudging me forward.
I nodded and followed, my grip on the dagger tightening. Something about Rainbow’s warning sent a shiver down my spine, but I pushed the thought aside.
After all, how bad could it really be?
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