CHAPTER 2
Twilight woke to the urgent nudge of Spike. Looking outside she noted that it was still night probably around 3-4 AM. Turning back to Spike she said, "You better have a good reason for waking me up so early." as she said this she slowly got out of bed, and was making her way to Spike to better hear his answer.
" I just got a letter from princess Luna." replied Spike in a frantic voice, " It says that something has happened to her sister Celestia and she requests yours, and the other elements presence at the castle immediatly."
"Here Spike, give me the letter." Twilight told him in an annoyed voice. As she read over the letter she let out a small gasp,faint as the wind,and almost fainted. Scrawled inside was the worst news she had ever gotten, ever.
Dear Twilight Sparkle,
Somethinghas happened to my sister Princess Celestia. We do not know where she is, and I belive that something terrible has taken place. We found the faint reminiscence of a teleportation spell, it seems to have been cast from a place far from here, but we cannot track it. We request yours and the other elements assistence in out court as soon as possible.
Sincerely,
Princess Luna
"Umm... Twilight? do you have any idea of what has happened to Princess Celestia?"
"No Spike, I don't, but we need to get the others and to Canterlot." Twilight replied quickly grabbing her saddle bag, her and Spike headed out into the dark, gloomy night to get the others.
authors note- please give input, and if it needs to be longer please say so. First story, so be as harsh as possible.
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Proloug
There is a reason we sleep at night, a reason why Celestia herself was scared to stay up and protect her subjects during the night. It is supposed to be an old mare’s tale, because everypony that has seen it never lives to tell their story. It is a demon trapped inside a pony’s body, warping it beyond belief… He is Dark Thunder, with powers strong enough to usurp the princesses Dark thunder is a pitch black pegasi stallion, with one bat wing, one changeling wing, and fangs. His mane is darker than the void of space would be without the stars or moon, his tail is the purest white, supposedly to show that there is always a light to look to. His only weakness is the light of the sun, during the day he is powerless, just another creature with wings. That is why he lives in the night, and stays in the shadow of day.
CHAPTER ONE
Celestia woke up to a terrible headache, that reminded her of the first time she had drank hard cider. Slowly getting up she realized she wasn't in her chamber, or in Canterlot for that matter. As Celestia took in her surroundings she saw that she was in a forest, slightly similar, though she could not place her hoof on it.
"What... What happened?" Celestia thought to herself, " Where am I?"
While Celestia was looking around she heard a deep, ominous, bloodcurtling chuckle. Reminding her of steel grinding on stone.
"Dear Celestia, your not going to find your way out." said a faintly familiar voice, it sounded amused, but was layered with sorrow. "We're in the exact cneter of the Everfree forest."
"Whose there!" shouted Celestia with slight panick leaking into her voice. "I command you to show yourself, demon!" she shouted into the darkness.
"If I must." It said walking out of the shadows. Upon seeing it Celestia gasped, both in horror and surprise. Standing directly infront of her was an enemy as old as time, old as her even. Standing infront of her was Dark Thunder.
"How are you here?" Celestia managed to say, recovering from the shock of it all. "I banished you to tartarus!"
"I am stronger than you give me credit for." was the simple reply
"No matter, I banished you before, I can do it again." While Celestia was saying this she had been warming up the spell. Quickly consuming Dark Thunder in a light as bright as the sun, she felt her power draining much faster that it should have. "What- what's going on?" she gasped as the spell broke to reveal a pnting Dark Thunder.
"It's simple, Celstia." said Dark thunder, slowly walking up to her prone bolde, " you need the elements of harmony. Which you have so foolishly givin to six weak mares."
The last thing Celestia saw before she blacked out was the back hoof of Dark Thunder, coming dow onto her head, the last thing she heard was his low, bloodcurtling chuckle. Taunting her with the simplicity of what had just happened.
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