Chapters Of course Rarity knocks first. She being the most confident and in a hurry of the trio, she is not anticipating anything major might tie them up.
Our hero would of laughed at this if the dark humor weren't at his expense, or if any pony were in on the joke
Then, it started. a hooves length apart, it started>
A Spell to End All Spells
As the magic swirled like a snake to the tip of our hero's horn, a small heart shape formed.The taxing effect was evident to everypony in the room. The facial contortions making him completely unrecognizable.The magenta magic sending pulses of soft light in a several meter radius. Through gritted teeth he was able to mumble
As their horns touched the magic flowed. Our hero's eyes turned a mystic white as his psyche was channeled into Twilight.
Twilight was quick to recover and rushed over to Fluttershy and Rarity who were already in the commotion
He slow blinks turned rapid as he came to
The fit subsided and his hooves rested. As he looked up he was confronted by the slack-jawed faces of his new friends
The blood stained carpet looking back at him filled him with a dread so dear it made him sob
Fluttershy put her hoof on Twilight's shoulder, realizing she wasn't helping let her take over
And with that he jumped up to embrace Fluttershy as tightly as he could
A Fatefull Encounter
Our story begins with our hero outside the gates of Pony-ville,. He is in awe of the size of the city being from a land far away. He is troubled, and in a search for maybe his last hope for help. It is night, a few hours before dawn, there is a chill in the air. Our hero has come along way to Pony-ville in search of help for his affliction. He has traveled many miles, done many things he is not proud of. But his life was on the line so he had to make peace with his timid nature and forge on and at last, his goal is close at hand. Let us hope we are not to late
"Oh no, what am I going to do this place is enormous" he lamented. "But I have to find her, she'll know what to do, she just has to....just...has..."
Fumbling from pain or exhaustion, he searches his saddle bag for a spell book. Resolute, he removes his locator spells from his bag
He started the spell and the pink aura surrounded him as it searched for it's target. The familiar pain began immediately, making him wince
But it was to late, the spell extinguished the moment a heading was received and our hero fainted, with nothing to show for his efforts but a slight bloody nose. Unconscious he lay there. As if he was waiting, waiting for no-pony.
Several hours later, around mid morning, our hero is gently jostled out of his stupor by the kind hoof of a yellow mare with a pink main. It takes him several minutes to get his bearings
At the realization of what was going on our hero fled to a nearby bush, this startled the mare until she saw how the the bush was trembling with fear just as the injured pony was who used it as an escape
Sensing that this mare meant him no harm, he slowly peeked his head out of the bush, trembling he manages to mutter.
Our hero fully emerged from his hiding place, his suit is tattered, but that was normal, its been through a lot. His saddle bag was not any worse for ware, well no more worse. A slight trickle of blood from his last spell was still visable
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At the end of chapter one we find our hero en route to the library with Fluttershy in search of a cure to the curse his magic has become.The targets of his magic were always filled with pleasure, for that was the usual side effect of his special talent, and now to bring this joy to others fills him with pain. Even simple spells like levitation cause him harm. Critiques and advice are appreciated for this is my first Fanfic. Hope you enjoy
So now our hero, with Fluttershy, are on their way through town. The timid colt following his savior as fast as he can until she stops to say high to a friend would like her help.
Chapter two ends with the trio at the front gate of the library. Our hero is about to meet the mare he hopes can save his, magic. He is a little nervous but after the kindness of Fluttershy's guidance and Rarity's generous offer, fear subsides to anticipation. Maybe all hope isn't lost. Maybe