Devil in the Dust

by Nialias
A Stranger in a Strange Land wakes to red dust at the heart of all he used to know. HiE

Tartarus. It's an odd place. Silent storms, deep red dust and barely anything to eat. A prison island lost to the tumultuous heavens and the magic draining soil. Ponies who are sent here can't be redeemed. A last resort. A final choice. Maximum security with nary a guard in sight. Inescapable.

But then, this is the second time this giant island has been used this way. And the red dust remembers things ponies have long forgotten. How to bring in a new age, for instance. When a possibly falsely convicted earth pony by the name of Sturdy Gaffer finds out how it plans to do so, all hell breaks loose in Tartarus.

Fitting, isn't it? Read on...

First story on here, updates whenever. Give me all the critique you can.

Teen
On Hiatus
Adventure
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Dark
Human
 
POC

23427 words: Estimated about 2 hours to read

12 Chapters:

  1. Rain 2013-04-17 07:32:25 UTC
    1990
  2. Mud 2013-04-18 05:12:37 UTC
    2590
  3. Stone 2013-04-19 02:48:37 UTC
    2091
  4. Talk 2013-04-21 10:38:46 UTC
    1552
  5. Others 2013-04-21 12:19:19 UTC
    2208
  6. Exploring 2013-04-24 06:31:28 UTC
    2384
  7. Time 2013-04-25 15:13:38 UTC
    2402
  8. Diplomacy 2013-04-26 15:56:05 UTC
    2079
  9. Marks 2013-04-28 08:38:15 UTC
    885
  10. Meeting 2013-04-30 15:09:36 UTC
    1957
  11. Questions 2013-05-17 15:44:52 UTC
    2218
  12. Meanwhile 2013-05-18 00:09:20 UTC
    1071