Chapters Hey everypony this is Kmaj27...should change the name to somethin more pony...Any way this is my first story ever being posted so don't get to mad at me. I'm trying my best when it comes to writing in this form of style any hope you enjoy the stroy. Leave me some constructive criticism thanks Everypony
Chapter 1
Exile
*BAM, THWACK, CRACK*
Rover just punched one diamond dog that was held by two of the guard dogs. The dog went by the name Fetch he was bigger than the rest of the diamond dogs, both taller and muscular. He was different from the other dogs, he looked like a mix of a German Sheppard with Rottweiler. He had a scar on his right eye which discolored his eye to gray.
"Speak you lousy excuses of a dog!"
He was being punished for letting some ponies come on their land to dig for diamonds. Fetch was bleeding from the mouth and snout barely able to breathe as Spot kicked him in the stomach.
"I said SPEAK !
Fetch was coughing up blood along with his two back teeth.
"Your mother burns in the depths of hell. "
He looked at his blood and raised his head, only for Fido hit him with a strong right punch to the jaw, knocking him out cold.
“What should we do with him boss?” asked one of the Guard dogs
“I don’t care as long as this traitor doesn’t come back I don’t care what you do with him. Now MOVE IT! ” Rover screamed at the two Guard dogs making them flinch.
They carried Fetch out of the cave, while on the way the picked up a few more guards…like four more guards. They carried him to the entrance of the Everfree forest, were they beat him to an inch of his life by kicking punching and even breaking his hind legs and they left him there to die slowly.
In a Dark void of Black
"What has become of my life? I've been nothing but good to those wasteful idiots and what do I get. I get punished for something that I had no power over when other dog lets ponies on the grounds they get a slap on the wrist and a scolding while I nearly get beaten to death. *Sigh* I should be mad but I can't really...Its weird I want to bite their necks clean off but I couldn't with all those damn Guard dogs. Sure i can take a good three or five but, never mind I should see if I can find somewhere else to stay."
Back to Reality
An hour has passed and Fetch started to stir. He found himself on the skirts of the Everfree forest and Ponyville hopefully there would be somepony there to help him. He tried to stand up but came to a painful conclusion that both of his legs were broken.
“So those Dumbshits finally figured out to paralyze me huh? Oh well I just have to get into town maybe I could get some help.”
Fetch crawled his way to Ponyville, it was a long and painful trip but he finally made it to the market place.
“Now if I could just find somepony to take me to the…”
“AAAAAAAHHHHHH, DIAMOND DOG! ”
A mare screamed before fainting, two mares came rushing to her side to pick her up while everypony was running wild everywhere.
“Wait I’m not here to do anything. I was just…”
“Hold it right th’re partner!”
“What?”
Fetch’s face was met with two orange back hooves to the face making him skid into a cart making it crash on him. He crawled out of the wreckage with a piece of the cart jabbed into his right side.
Fetch grabbed the broken wood and slowly pulled it out and threw it to the side. The wound was starting to drip blood on the
dirt road and formed a small puddle.
“Ah…Look…ow that’s smarts…I’m only here to look for…”
“Look for more hostages to take back to your cave, so they can dig for diamonds.”
Yelled somepony, Fetch looked for the source of the voice only to see a bright rainbow streak come and hit him in the face sending him flying into a building almost killing him in the process, but he was a resilient Diamond Dog.
As he started to crawl away from the building until he heard a sound, a sound of something moving, no something breaking. He turned around to only see what seemed to be part of the roof of the building he hit.
He held his arms in front of his face hoping for the worst, but nothing came he heard the crash but nothing happened to him. He looked around to only find that the roof missed him by a few inches.
Fetch sighed in relief and turned around only to see two crimson hind legs rear back and buck him in the snout breaking it and knocking him out cold. His head snapped back and he fell face first.
“Thanks Big Mac ah appreciates it.”
“No problem Sis.”
Big Macintosh left to go attend the apple stall after that kick, everypony had calmed down and went upon their business like nothing happed. Rainbowdash came back and landed next to Applejack.
“So Applejack what do you think that Diamond Dog wanted.”
“Ah don’t kno’ Rainbow, but ah don’t want ta find out.”
“What do you think we should do with him?”
“Shot we beat tha creature somthin’ fierce, ah say we take’m to the hospital, makin sure we didn’t hurt ’em to bad.”
“Yeah…that doesn’t sound as fun, why don’t we just leave him here, you know let him get what he deserves.”
“He deserves medical attention now. Who knows fer all we know he could...ya know ‘Kick the bucket’ .”
“UGH fine but you owe me for helping him.”
“Fine.”
And with that Applejack and Rainbow dash carried Fetch to Ponyville hospital leaving a thin trail of blood along the way.
Three Hours Later
Applejack and Rainbow told their friends what had happened in the town market with the Diamond Dog. Twilight wrote a letter to the Princess on what her friends just told her and that he was being held in Ponyville hospital ER. They all waited outside in the waiting room for the doctor to tell them on the condition of the Dog.
They all had a conversation on why was he here? What did he want? Why was he crawling instead of walking? Everypony was asking question except Fluttershy she just sat there quiet as usual, thinking to herself hoping that he was alright. The doctor came out and seen the mane 6 and spike waiting eager to here on his condition. Twilight was the first to speak.
“So doctor is he okay?”
“Yes. He’s fine he just suffered from a massive puncture wound to his right side, his snout is broken but we were able to fix that, and his hind legs were broken but not to damage to where he unable to walk again. He should be able to walk within the next week. I’m quite surprised actually…anypony that comes in here in critical condition like that would be lucky to get to the hospital at all. He’s in recovery right now you can go see him if you would like.”
“Thanks Doctor we will.”
“Oh? One more thing don’t go too hard on him remember he just survived through all that trauma.”
“Don’t worry Doctor we won’t go hard on him.”
They all walked into the room and seen him sitting in front of the window where he was separated from every other pony in the room. While walking to him they heard the other patients talking about him calling cruel and hurtful things.
“Umm Hello.” Twilight said a little bit scared on what the Dog may retort with. He Only let out a deep sigh and turned his head to her.
“What do you Want?”
Hey everypony how was the first chapter good/bad/? well hope you are least enjoying this story so far chapters may come out a day or two after the previous chapter just to let you know on a waiting period. Any way here's chapter 2 hope you enjoy until then see-ya everypony.
Chapter 2
A New Home
"What do you want."
"we were just coming to see..." Twilight started
"Why were you in Ponyville HUH? Looking for some helpless ponies to dig in your diamond mines! " Rainbowdash interrupting her friend.
"RAINBOWDASH! THAT'S NO WAY TO TREAT HIM, HE HASN'T DONE ANYTHING WRONG. NOW APOLOGIZE! " Twilight yelled.
"YEAH RIGHT I'LL APOLOGIZE WHEN THEY STOP KIDNAPPING PONIES! "
"RAINBOWDASH! " they all said in unison
"No...she's right." said a voice that was coming from the Dog.
"WHAT?! " they all said confused on why he would even agree with her. Despite how wrong it would be to falsely accuse anypony.
"All my life...I was told that ponies were inferior to Diamond dogs, but you all know that's not true. Plus I was the one who had always had go get the ponies so they can dig for us. It was a horrible job for me to do...I wouldn't think anyless if you all think like your friend there."
Fetch started to roll pass the mane 6 & spike with his head hung low.
"We'll I'll just get out of your way, you all probably have better things to do then talk to the likes of me." Fetch started to roll towards the door.
"...but wait."
"Hmph serves him right."
"Rainbow don't act like that."
"Wait. " said a soft and kind voice
"D-do..do you have a place to stay."
"Fluttershy what are you doing. By the time he gets better he might take you back so you can dig for diamonds!" retorted Rainbow.
"No he wouldn't do that...w-would y-you?"
"No i'm very tired of doing all that also...no I don't have a place to stay. I was exiled from Diamond Dog territory."
"Oh...i'm sorry to hear that...would you like to stay with me...you know i-if that's alright with you."
Fetch just gave a reassuring smile. "Sure that sounds lovely. Fluttershy was it."
Fluttershy just hid her blush behind her hair and nodded.
"Well should we get going."
"Oh...um sure."
It took the two about half a hour to get to Fluttershy's house...you know with Fetch being in a wheel chair and all.
"So..um..this is my house..I hope you don't mind all he animals everywhere." Fluttershy said while pointing out her house with various animals all around.
"No it's not going to bother me at all..really I always wanted to be near other creatures then those..Dogs."
Fluttershy seen he did not like those other Diamond dogs. Also he looked different from the others, something about him made him stand out from the others.
"Why does he look..well different, he looks more...muscular then the other dogs..I think he maybe even taller then the rest and his voice..its more angelic then rough and scary sounding..I-I think he even looks cutier then the other...Wait whats wrong with you Fluttershy, you can't be falling for him...Could you? oh what should I do?
"Hmmm I wonder why I didn't see this place when I needed help. Oh well must have been a bit further from were I was...Why is she looking at me like that...Wait she can't possibly..No, no she can't i'm a Diamond dog for Celestia's sake..then again she does look cute with her lovely teal eyes and the way she..Get a hold of your self you were born a Diamond dog and will die a Diamond dog, *Sigh* feelings. "
They both stayed there looking at each other as an awkward silence came across the two. Fluttershy blushed and hide behind her hair and was the first to break the silence.
"So..um..Do you want to come in side?"
"Huh...oh yeah sure."
It took a whole hour for Fluttershy to show Fetch her entire house even the up stairs which he had to crawl up. Fluttershy offered to help but he just declined it.
"So..you can sleep in my bed..I'll just sleep down stairs on the couch." said Fluttershy.
"No." said Fetch
"I'm use to sleeping on the floor so you can have your bed. I'll just sleep on this floor mat."
"Oh. No. I insist you must take the bed I really don't mind. Really."
"Nah i'm good i'll just lay here.*Yawn* good night Fluttershy."
"Well...if you insist..." Fluttershy said while get into her bed.
"Good Night Fetch."
Well...when it come to Grammar I honestly have no clue on how to make it good . That aside I know I said that Fetch might be bigger then the other dogs I was referring to the Original 3. He's about six inches shorter then the Guard dogs. Just want to throw that out there for this chapter...anyways here is the next chapter
Chapter 3
The Next Morning
It was a great morning the sun was out and everything was good, not a single worry in the world. Fetch sat up and stretched his arms and stood up.
"*Yawn*
Fetch looked down and realized that he was actually standing, his legs weren't broken or had a sharp pain while trying to stand up.
"AAAAHHHH! Help somepony, anypony! " screamed somepony downstairs.
"That sounds like Fluttershy. I hope she's alright."
Fetch ran down stairs were he saw his fellow Diamond dogs kidnapping Fluttershy from her home.
"Guards Stop Him! screamed Rover while five guard dogs came rushing into the house.
"Fetch please Help!
"Shut Up Pony! "
*Smack*
Rover slapped Fluttershy making Fetch go into a berserker's rage rushing to Help his new friend. The guard dogs did what they were told to do, they had stopped him before he could get close to Rover. They shoved him back, but that only pissed him off. Fetch Snarling
Fetch ran towards the guard dogs punching two of them in the face knocking them down. He was then grabbed by two other guards, and was punch by the last guard in the face. Fetch shook off the hit as if it was nothing. He jerked himself free from two guards and kicked them both towards the one that just punched him.
While they crashed Fetch went and grabbed a knife from the kitchen counter. Until he was meet by one of the previous guards that he punched. The guard threw various punches that were blocked and countered by Fetch who threw a devastating punch to his trachea.
Crushing it and killing in him a mere five minutes. Fetch grabbed the knife and looked at it seeing his reflection also the guard that was running up to get him.
He turned the knife upside down and thrust it into the guards neck and punched him in the face twice before slamming his throat into the counter sending the knife through. The guard dropped to the floor only leaving three left.
Fetch grabbed the knife from the guards throat and rushed towards the three guards who were now standing up from being knocked down. They saw him coming and got ready for any attack he had.
As he ran towards them he threw the knife which caught the guard in the back off guard (Ha a Guard caught off Guard) as it went into his throat. He wrapped his paws around his neck while blood was dripping out of his mouth. The other guards didn't know what was going on until one was kicked in the face and fell to the floor hitting his head hard enough to crack his skull open.
Fetch was on the last guard holding onto his helmet throwing a punch that toppled the guard onto the floor were Fetch took a bite out of his neck and ripped his flesh clear off. Blood shooting out the side while Fetch keep tearing away at his neck until he wasn't moving any more. Fetch stood up and wiped the blood off his mouth to only see the five guards' bodies spread across the house, blood almost covering the entire floor.
Fetch bent down to guard with the knife in his throat and grabbed it and let out a Howl and ran to Diamond Dog territory.
Fetch finally arrived to his old turf only to see that there were a few guards out on patrol.
"So they knew I was coming huh..Well they forgot one major detail. * DON'T.FUCK.WITH.ME!***"
Fetch saw that there was one guard far off from the others by the looks of it he seems to be...
"Really right on the tree. Oh well time to show him a thing or two. "
Fetch snuck up on the Guard who just got done water the tree. The guard grabbed his speared and turned to only be punched in the face spinning and knocking him to the ground face first into his own pee. Fetch jumped onto his back were he repeatedly slammed his face into the ground enough to daze him and stomped his face into the ground knocking him out.
Fetch took him to a bush near the tree and stole his armour and spear...but not before stabbing him of course. He walked around the top surface until he found a hole that was close to him yet far from the other guards. He jumped down the hole and found himself close to the diamond mine where they first take the ponies for their harnesses and carts.
Fetch walked around the corner to see Rover, Fido and Spot standing at a X on the floor.
(It goes Spot Rover & Fido just for those who don't know.)
But what really broke Fetch's heart was Fluttershy...she was crying the whole time and was being told to shut up while being hit by Rover. Fetch took off all the armour he was wearing and charged at the three only to be crushed by two guard dogs. Rover just looked at him and just laughed at his futile attempt of a rescue.
"Ah you thought we weren't expecting you? You really thought it would be that easy?"
"Actually...Yeah I did...Kill you three get my friend and just leave." Fetch was being held up by four Guards.
"Well looks like your plan has failed just like you have your entire life."
*SMACK* Rover just slapped Fetch, who just looked at Rover laughed, *SPIT* and spit in his face.
"Ahhh Guards! "
Numerous Guard dogs Surrounded Fetch but left some room so Fluttershy could see.
"What Rover can't do your own dirty work so you have these Lame-Fucks do it for you..Haha...you fucking make me sick...just look at you. You were nothing then and your nothing now."
"AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! That's it. GUARD HAND ME THAT SPEAR!
One of the guards handed Rover his spear and pointed it at Fetch's neck.
"Fetch...N-No..No you can't leave me now "
Fluttershy said to herself while tears were running down her face.
"Hehehe. Any last words FOOL. "
"Yeah just three. FUCK.YOU.BITCH. "
"I've had enough of you!! DIE! "
Fetch woke up violently, and was breathing heavily. He checked his whole body to see if there was any damage. The only thing there was the stitches he received earlier on his right side. Fetch just sighed in relief.
"It was only a dream."
"What was a dream?"
Fetch turned to face Fluttershy, who had a concerned look on her face.
"Oh it's nothing you can go back to sleep."
"Oh i'm sorry I can't you were..um..screaming and it wok me up...D-do want to talk about it?"
Fetch just looked at her. Why was she so concerned on why he was screaming?
"*sigh* I'd rather talk about it in the morning if that's alright with you."
"Oh..um..okay..d-do want to sleep in the bed with me. EEP."
Fluttershy realized what she just said and hid behind the blanket
Fetch just look at her with a confused look on his face.
"Um...d-did you just ask me...t-t-to sleep with you?"
"Yes..I mean not in that way, I just want to make sure if you were alright is all, EEP."
Fetch was still confused on why she said and didn't know who to respond.
"Um..sure? I mean if you're fine with that is all."
"Oh..I don't mind..d-do you need help getting in?"
Fetch just chuckled while shaking his head..
"Nah I think can get in. I mean, I made it up the Stairs didn't I."
Fluttershy just giggled and moved to the side.
"Yeah. I suppose you did."
Fetch got his body to the bed but had some problems getting on.
"Hey..Fluttershy, you think you can help..you know...my legs and such."
"Oh..right..my bad."
Fluttershy held out her hoof which he grabbed. She pulled her hardest which ended up with him crash into her. They both opened their eyes to find out that Fetch was on top of her. Both blushed deeply and turned their heads to the side. They laid on the bed not wanting to looking at each other, but then their gazes met, both were staring into the others eyes.
"Wow her eyes they're really..Beautiful..why haven't notice this before. "
"He's eyes there so..Mesmerizing..they look..So different but in a good way. "
They both stayed silent not want to say anything to ruin this moment. Fluttershy broke their gaze and Fetch rolled off of her nervously chuckling.
Fluttershy snuggled into Fetch's chest and wrapped the hooves around him. Fetch was surprised at what she just did, but he just ignored it. He just smiled and wrapped his paws around her and rested his chin and her head.
"Goodnight Fetch."
"Yeah..Goodnight. Fluttershy.
Oh my typing this was just such a pain, but hey looks like there is so love interest coming on. Before you ask: No I don't know where I get these ideas from for all the blood, but then again I've been playing video games with tons of blood so that might be it... Any ways keep calm and watch (or in this case) read about ponies
Got nothing to say but this...Fetch should be able to walk in, I say about 2-3 chapters.
Anywasy here's the next chapter.
Chapter 4
The Next Morning
It's morning time, Celetia's sun is shining down on this wonderful world, birds are chirping. Fetch started to stretch form a really good rest that he hasn't had in a while. He looked Down to find Fluttershy sleeping on his chest with a smile on her face. Fetch could only smile and wait for her to wake up.
"Hmm. Normally I would never imagine I could possible fall for a pony but...Wait the hell am I talking about. I can't fall for her...but then again."
Fetch looked down to see Fluttershy still asleep her breathing and heartbeat, it matched his it was kind of weird.
"She does look very attractive for a pony and all...You know I just might want to give this a try, ask her out see what can happen..... HAHAHAHAHA! OH THAT'S HELLA FUNNY OH...HAHAHAHA! *Sigh* .....Then again who knows it might just work. "
Fetch ran his fingers through Fluttershy's hair thinking what he could do...Oh the things he could show her. She started to stir and Fetch just smiled as she awoke from a comfortable nights rest.
"*Yawn* Mmm...morning Fetch."
She said, looking directly into his eyes.
"Morning to you too. Have a good nights sleep."
"Yes I did acutally. What about you?"
"It was amazing I haven't slept like that in years."
"*Giggle* Well I'm glad to hear that. Do you want some breakfast?"
Fetch Just placed his arms behind his and smiled.
"Nah I think I'm fine for now."
Fluttershy put her hooves on his chest and raised her body just above his.
"Oh but you must eat. You can't go out unless you eat something."
"*Chuckle* Okay I'll take something so you don't have to worry."
"Thank you. Come on, lets go get you something to eat."
Fluttershy got off the bed so she can get breakfast ready. When she hopped off Fetch just starred as she started switching her flank side to side which he thought it was in a seductive manner.
"WOW she has some nice flanks. "
Fetch was thinking to himself and didn't even see Fluttershy turn her head to look at him. She just giggled and went down stairs. As Fetch sat up and placed he's paws on his legs. He felt something...something wet. He wiped the liquid off and smelt it. He just had a smirk on his face and crawled Down stairs to eat.
30 Minutes Later
"So..um..Fetch..what was wrong last night you kind of scared me."
"*Sigh* Th..the dream I had..i-it...it was horrible."
"What was it about?"
"*Sigh*... I had a dream that my former so called 'Friends' came and kidnapped you...I-I...I killed I believe six guards. When I finally found you.."
Fetch hung his head low and started to break down in tears. Fluttershy went to his side and gave him a comforting hug, she started to tear up. She didn't like it when other ponies cried it made her do it as well.
"I...I found you chained up...They were beating you...I just lost it and tried to save you but ended begin crushed by two guards...I said somethings that ended up with me having a spear almost jammed in my neck...then I just woke up. "
"That sounds horrible i'm just glad it was a dream." Fluttershy was started crying but she kissed Fetch on the forehead. She didn't know why, probably because she was so motherly with the Cutie Mark Crusaders. Fetch just smiled and held her close.
"Yeah..I'm it was a dream too...So what about you what was your dream about."
"*Sniffle* What?"
Fluttershy looked at him wiping the tears from her face. He just sat there and smiled
"I said what did you dream about last night..because I remember you were on my right side when I got in the bed with you."
Fluttershy panicked she wasn't expecting him to ask her that question. Truth be told she had a dream about them. She was to embarrassed to tell him.
"Okay Fluttershy you have to come up with something you can't tell him that you had...well you know with him. How would he react. Oh I got. Um.."
Fluttershy hide behind her hair not wanting to look at him.
"I-it..it was about...EEP."
"Well you don't have to tell me if you want to. Just tell me when ever you think its the appropriate time."
"Thank you Fetch. Do you want go see my friends I'm sure they would be happy to see you."
"Yeah that sounds good on paper, but after what I said yesterday I don't think they want to talk to me."
"Oh, right...well we'll never know unless we try right?"
"Yeah I suppose your right."
"Great but first, I need to feed all the animals before we go. If that's alright with you."
"Yeah that's fine."
Fluttershy Just gave him another hug in which he returned and they went off to feed all of her animals.
Jesus writing is really hard I think I should have like a web for each chapter or like a series of event. Any way next chapter Fetch gets a new look how will this work
Hello everypony it took me a whole four days to write this. Reason one the site was down for two days. Reason two I didn't know were to go with this chapter.
Chapter 5
New Clothes
"Come on Fetch not everypony here is that mean."
Fluttershy said as they were walking down the streets of Ponyville.
"Yeah I can tell by all the screams and people calling me things. Yeah everypony here is a good kind soul. "
"Oh come on, just try to ignore them, pretty please."
Fluttershy begged him with her puppy dog eyes.
"Okay i'll try to, but I can't make any promises."
"Okay that's fine with me, anyway lets see what my friend Rarity is doing she is always looking for a new project."
"Wait, are you talking about getting me some new clothes?"
"Yeah..why you don't want any new clothes to wear?"
"Well the thing is.."
"Well, well, well if it isn't Cluttershy ."
Said a voice come from the air as it landed in front of Fluttershy herself. It was Dumbbell and Hoops.
"Hows it going Cluttershy ?!"
"Yeah how's it going?"
"Oh..um h-h-hi..h-h-how are you two doing?"
"Oh were fine Cluttershy , who's your new pet. He's pretty ugly for a dog."
"Yeah Really Ugly Hahaha!"
Fluttershy didn't know what to do. She always had Rainbowdash to make them go away. Fetch had enough of them, their name calling and making funny of him. Calling him a 'Pet'. He rolled Right in front of the two who stopped laughing.
"You two better get going before I do something I won't regret."
Hoops and Dumbbell looked at each other and feel on the floor laughing. Fetch just sat there with and look of anger clutching his fist, wanting to punch them both in the face. Fluttershy came to his side and said something but he didn't hear it, he was to busy controlling his anger.
After a good minute of laughing they finally got up off the floor wiping the tears off their faces.
"Oh...I haven't laughed like that in a long time..."
Fetch still looked at them not blinking keeping that pissed looked on his face.
"Hey Dumbbell I think he's serious."
"Oh come on you think he can do anything look at him, he's in a wheelchair.
Hoops flew on the Opposite side of Fetch in which he turned to face Hoops. Dumbbell took the opportunity to push Fetch out the wheel chair. He fell to the ground ,but turned to his back quickly and growled at the two.
"Hey Hoops look at him."
"Yeah what a loser."
Fluttershy was mad and was about to stepped in front of the two, but was taken back when she heard one of the two scream in pain.
"OOOWWW! YOU SHOULD WHATCH YOUR PET CLUTTERSHY! "
"YEAH L-L-LOOK WHAT HE DID."
She seen Dumbbell holding his face. He had three long cuts across it.
"Yeah that's only what I can do while i'm not on my feet. So I suggest you leave...NOW! "
With that, they both fled from the Dog. Fetch crawled back to his chair, and sat back down and contiuned to go to Rarity's. He passed Fluttershy and stopped and turned his head around to look at her.
"Hey. Are you going to stand there all day or are we going to your friend's house."
"Oh..right. Its just over there."
A Few Minutes Later
"Well Fetch here we are, Carousel Boutique."
Fluttershy said standing next to the building. She knocked on the door three times she heard her friend saying 'One minute Darling ' and what sounded like somethings falling over and glass objects breaking.
After a few seconds Rarity opened the door.
"Oh well hello Fluttershy and what brings you...Wahahaha! "
Rarity screamed and ran back inside slamming the door in their faces.
"Well that went exactly how I thought it would."
"What do you mean?"
"I knew she would react that way just like every other pony has since I've been here."
"Oh come on you don't really think that do you?"
"I don't think, I know...*Sigh* oh well lets get going."
Just like that the door opened to revile Rarity.
"I'm so sorry darling I wasn't expecting company to come right now. My shop was just simply a mess so I had to clean it up. Now what brings you two here." she said with a smile on her face.
"Oh we came here to get Fetch some new clothes..I mean if your not to busy that is."
"No not at all darling. I would be happy to do that, plus I get to put my seamstress skills to the test. Now please do come in."
Rarity walked back into her shop letting the others to walk in. Before they did Fluttershy looked at Fetch and smiled.
"See I told you she'd be happy to see you."
Fetch just smiled and rolled in behind her and shut the door and rolled next to Fluttershy.
"Now darling do you know what you want?"
"Um..I really didn't think about that on the way here...Hmm, what about something formal and something casual."
"Oh that sounds marvelous. Now if you could just come over here to this stand so I can get your measurements."
Fetch rolled to the stand and use his muscle to pull himself up. He sat down while Rarity took his measurements.
"Um..Rarity."
"Yes what is it Fluttershy."
"Can I use the bathroom.
"Why of course no need to ask.
"Oh..right
Fluttershy went up stairs to use the restroom. Rarity got done doing her measurement and went to get white and black fabric.
"So...Fetch was it. What is going on between you and Fluttershy she has never been that close to...how can I put this delicately..A ruffian who kidnaps ponies for their diamond mines. Did you do something to her, are you telling her lies that you will never hurt her, or that..."
"Now hold up. We came here to get me some new clothes not play 20 questions."
"So you have been lying haven't you."
"Look what I said back in the hospital was the truth, i'm tired of those countless hours of kidnapping ponies. I even saved her from two Pegasus jerks that were harassing us both. Why can't none of you believe me like Shy does."
"You do not call her that, you are not her friend she just taking care of you because she is always helping an animal in need."
"Oh so now I'm an animal huh?"
"Yes, you are, and I would appreciate..no demand that you call her Fluttershy or I'll."
"You'll what!" Fetch said growling at her. Rarity just stared daggers at him.
"Just don't hurt her. If you do all of us are coming after you."
"Pft...whatever don't you have some sewing to get too."
It was a good minute before Fluttershy came back down and she could see that something wasn't right.
"Um..is there something wrong?"
"Oh nothing is wrong here darling. Isn't that right Fetch
Rarity said putting emphasis on his name while looking at him. He just rolled his eyes.
"Yeah everything is fine..Shy."
Rarity's eye twitched when he said her name like that again. Fluttershy just smiled and walked over to Fetch and gave him a hug. Rarity saw this in the mirror, showing the two of them in a warm embrace. Her eye twitched even more and she started to grind her teeth. Fetch saw her in the mirror he smiled and laughed to himself. Rarity finished his Dress shirts and started to work on his casual clothes.
"So Fluttershy were are you going after here?"
"Oh.. Well we were going to go see Twilight after this...Why?"
"Oh no reason just wondering were you would be."
After a good five minutes Rarity finished his clothes and gave them to Fluttershy.
"So Rarity what do we owe you?"
"Oh nothing it's free of charge."
Fetch looked at her skeptically and shook his head.
"Oh, thank you Rarity. Come on Fetch let's go see Twilight i'm sure she would be happy to see you."
"Yeah i'm coming."
"Oh Fetch can I talk to you for a minute." said Rarity
Fetch rolled to Rarity who whispered in his ear.
"That will be 175 bits. "
"Here my wrist band has a pure diamond in it that's worth 1000. Take it and leave us alone. "
Fetch ripped of his wrist band and threw it on the floor in front of her and rolled out of her shop.
Well let's see what's going to happen at Twilight's house.
New set of legs & Oh..A Party.
Well all i can say is this Enjoy the chapter.
Chapter 6
A New Set of Leg & Oh..A Party
"Hey Fetch..What did Rarity want with you back at the shop."
"Oh..That..*Sigh* your friends thought..we, were..well you know..Dating. "
"Oh..my..w-why would she think that."
"I have no clue probably when you were hugging me."
"Well I was just happy that you two were getting along..I don't know where she'd get an idea like that."
"Pft...me neither."
"I really wouldn't mind..dating Fetch. He's so nice, kind, handsome,and helpful...Also that dream I had. I don't normally have dreams like that with anypony I liked. Oh look, we're here. I'm sure Twilight will have many questions to ask you."
"Oh great more questions to answer."
Fluttershy knocked on the door and a small baby dragon answered.
"Oh hey Fluttershy what brings you he...AAAAHHHH!!! "
The door was slammed in their faces again.
"Is everypony here just terrified to see me or something."
Fluttershy just shrugged and heard the door open to revel Twilight.
"Oh hi Fluttershy and...Um. I'm sorry never got your name." Twilight said holding out her hoof.
Fetch took it and shook it. (Ha rhyme time)
"Name's Fetch nice to meet somepony who hasn't screamed at me all day."
She just giggled and side-stepped so they could walk in.
"Well that's good to hear."
Fetch was amazed by just how many books she had.
"Wow..you must have over at least a thousand books in here.'
"Well yes I do actually. Now Fetch I want you to meet somepony very special."
Twilight pointed to a specific pony in the room. It was the princess goddess herself, Princess Celestia.
"Why hello there Fetch, its finally nice to meet you face to face."
"*Gasp* Princess Celestia." Fluttershy said while bowing
"No need to be so formal Fluttershy I just came to see are new friend here. So Fetch how is your stay here in Ponyville going?"
"Well...let us recap what has happen the past two days shall we.:
I've been beaten to an inch of my life. TWICE.
I've been exiled from my homeland.
Had both hind legs broken.
Been Hospitalized.
I've been made fun of.
I've been pushed out my wheelchair.
I scratch some asshole's face.
and I've made more then thirty of the local residence scream in terror.
My stay is going Fantastic.
"Well I'm sorry that all that has happen to you in the past two days, but I have something that can make that all better."
"Yeah..and what can that be?"
"How would you like to walk again?"
"That would be fantastic...wait..are you giving me my legs back."
"Yes I am is that a problem."
"No..no its not it's just.."
"Yes, what is it Fetch"
"It's just you would be so kind to give me my legs back even though I was the one who kidnapped those ponies."
"Well Twilight told me that you were sick of doing that..You weren't lying when you said that were you? Cause I know a nice place you can go if you do that again."
"Yes I meant it. I can't stand those countless hours I wasted doing that."
"Well that's Nice to here. Now just roll over there and I'll fix your legs."
"Thank you Princess."
Fetch Rolled in the middle of the room were Celestia ordered him to be at. Her Horn started to glow and engulfed Fetch in a golden aura. There was a bright flash of light that blinded everypony. The light dimmed and Fetch started to descend to the ground. He landed on his feet as light as a feather and opened his eyes.
He looked at Celestia and clutched his fist and put it across his chest and knelled down.
"Thank you Princess Celestia you have my Gratitude. If there is anything you need just ask"
"Your welcome Fetch and you can start by answering my student's questions."
"Yes your Highness."
"Well Twilight, I'll see you soon. I have some important business that needs my full attention in Las Pegasus."
"Okay it's always great to see you Princess."
And with her good bye Princess Celestia was gone in a bright flash.
"Hmm..Las Pegasus..I wonder what's there, that needs her full attention...Oh she going to.. "
"Fetch?"
Fetch was broken out of his train of thought when he heard his name and seen Twilight wanted something
"Hmm. what?"
"Do you want to answer the questions I had? So you can get out of here."
"Sure. What do you want to know?"
"Well, first what are you doing later on today?"
"I don't know probably nothing..Why."
"Well I wanted you to meet me at SugarCube Corner later on."
"Yeah sure l'll be there. got any more questions."
"Yes I have plenty actually. Shall we get started."
"Yeah fire away."
One Hour Later
"Okay Fetch that's all the questions I had you can go now."
"Thanks, come on Fluttershy let's..."
Fetch was about to tell Fluttershy that they were done and could go home. He seen her on the couch asleep, she looked so peaceful.
"I Think you two should get going it is starting to get late."
"Yeah I think we will. Hey thanks for not judging me like every other pony in this town."
"Oh no need to thank me anyway I'll see you two at SugarCube Corner later right?"
"Yeah we'll be there, thanks Twilight."
"No, thank you."
Fetch walked over to Fluttershy and picked her up. Her head was resting on his shoulder, she wrapped her hooves around his neck and snuggled up to his neck. He just chuckled with a smile on his face. He walk out of Twilight's house and walked all the way back to Fluttershy's without anypony noticing him.
Another Hour Later At Fluttershy's House
Fluttershy started to stir from her nap, she was confused.
"Wait I thought I was at Twilight's house."
"You were." Said a voice familiar to her.
There sitting on the side of her bed was Fetch, in his unbuttoned white dress shirt.
"What happened? All I remember was I was at Twilight's with you then everything else is fuzzy."
"While we were at Twilight's you fell asleep, I didn't want to wake you so I carried you all the way back here."
He smiled at her and she gave him a hug. They let go of each other and Fetch got off the bed and walked over to her bedroom door, he stopped and turned his head to her.
"Well, are you going?"
"Where?"
"Don't you remember? Twilight told us to meet her at SugarCube Corner."
"Oh, right. Okay let me get ready first then."
"Alright I'll met you down stairs."
Fetch walked out her room and went down stairs. Fluttershy went into her bathroom to get ready for the party that she knew about to bad Fetch didn't know.
"Oh he's going to be so surprised. I just hope not to much because he might do something like he did earlier today with Hoops and Dumbbell. OH I just hope he isn't mad that I didn't tell him."
Fluttershy was washing her face when it hit her. Why did Fetch Carry her all the way to her house? Why not just wake her like any other pony would? Did he care to much to not wake her?
"Hey Fluttershy. You Ready?"
Fluttershy would just have to answer her questions later.
"Yes Fetch I'm ready."
"Okay then."
Fluttershy descended from her stairs to see Fetch waiting for her in the frame of her door leaning on it. The setting sun hitting his body giving him a glowing outline. He turned his head to her and just smiled.
"So you ready to go?" he asked Holding out his paw.
"Yes." she put her hoof on his paw. "Yes I am."
Fetch raised her to his face holding her side with his free paw.They looked into each others eye with there faces getting closer.
"You look very stunning."
"*Giggle* And you look very Handsome."
"Shall we be off then."
"Yeah let's go."
Twenty Minutes Later
"Well Fetch her we are SugarCube Corner."
"Hmm..looks like nopony is in there.'
"Oh, I'm sure somepony is in there you just have to go in to see."
"Alright then."
Fetch opened the door it was pitch black he couldn't see two feet in front of him that was until.
SURPRISE!!!
Fetch looked amazed there was a party going on for...Him. He turned his head to see Fluttershy who walked up to him.
"I hope you liked it."
"You knew this was going to happen didn't you."
"Yes I hope your mad at me."
"Ha..Why would I." he said kneeling down to hug her "This was the best thing anyone has done for me."
"Well I wasn't the one who did this for you."
"Oh really. Then who?"
And just like that on Que popped out in between the two was a bright pink pony.
"Me,silly. I was the one who threw you this super duper fantastic party. Hi I'm Pinkie Pie." said the pony sticking out her hoof.
Fetch grabbed it with his paw and shook it.
"Thanks for throwing me this party but you didn't have to."
"Of course I had to silly, I always throw parties for anypony new in Ponyville."
"Well thanks Pinkie Pie."
"Your welcome. Come Everypony let's PAR-TAY! "
The party went on till Midnight everpony was having a good time even Fetch. Nopony was terrified of him any more like they used to be. They all played games, ate tons of food, danced, and even sang a couple of songs. Hell even Rarity and Rainbowdash started to warm up to him but were still skeptical.
There was one thing that caught everyponies eye. It was when Fluttershy and Fetch had a slow dance together. Her head laying on his chest, his head laying on top of her's, and their arms wrapped around each other, everypony found this cute and adorable. Everypony started to leave home and Fluttershy and Fetch went after helping Pinkie clean up.
The two finally arrived to the house. They opened the door and shut it quietly so they wouldn't disturb any of the sleeping animals. They both climbed the stairs and went into the bedroom...Were they locked the door behind them.
OMC the bedroom door being locked who knows whats going to happen...(I raise my hand)...I DO.
Also, yes all of the mane six will be an ass to Fetch except Twilight, Pinkie and Fluttershy. Maybe Applejack but i got to see were this goes first. So deal with it God Damnit!
Yes there is SEX in this chapter actually it is the whole chapter. Also i'm using instrumentals Except R.Kelly. Because someone singing while your trying to read kind of throws it off. Pretty Straight forward chapter from here.....So...Yeah...Enjoy.
Is it wrong that I was listening to Little Red Corvette while typing this?
Chapter 7
After the Party
Fetch locked the door behind them and Fluttershy turn on her radio to the 'Love making Station' (Smooth jazz, R&B,Marvin Haye {Gaye} all those good songs.)
"This is your your DJ Smooth Jamz here bringing you the best songs for you and your lover. Here's a song for all you ponies out there making love tonight. Here you go let's start off with some Marvin Haye. Let's get it on Instrumental .
She climbed on her bed and laid on her back waving a hoof slowly at Fetch, beckoning him to come over. He walked over and got on top of her their eyes and noses meeting, they both smiled at each other knowing what was going to happen.
Fluttershy wrapped her hooves around Fetch and slowly started to place small kisses on his lips, Fetch did the same. He place one of his paw on her face giving her a long and passionate kiss, where their tongues meet and start to dance in each others mouths, both in which tasted like sweets, cake, and punch.
Fetch broke the kiss so they could get some air and went back at it again. Fluttershy started to slip his dress shirt from his body. He started removing it, one arm at a time not wanting to break the kiss. After his shirt was removed Fetch threw it on the floor. They broke the kiss again having a small bridge of saliva form from their lips.
Fetch started to kiss her neck which got her breathing more harder. Fluttershy started to moan with each kiss he place along her neck giving her a gently nibble here and there. He started to move one of his paw down south. Caressing her body as he went down, his paw enjoying every single curve she had.
Fluttershy couldn't take it the sensation she was feeling, it was to great for her to stay silent she grabbed Fetch's head and pressed her lips hard against his wanting to taste him, Fetch wanted to taste her also using his tongue to massage hers. She started to move her hooves down his back moaning into the kiss.
He took his paw off of her flank and slipped it down her thighs until he reached his destination. Fluttershy let out a moan of pleasure as Fetch's hand passed over her hot and wet marehood. Fetch started to rub it up and down getting his finger in the middle of her folds wanting to pleasure her as much as possible.
"Mmm...Fetch...that feels so..."
"Shhh." he said before kissing her on the lips. "Let me work my magic."
Fluttershy nodded and Fetch went back to work rubbing her pussy. He started to rub faster making Fluttershy's tongue roll out of her mouth. Fetch slipped in his middle finger in to her getting her to moan louder in pleasure. He started to insert his finger in and out rubbing her vaginal walls with each insertion.
Fluttershy grabbed Fetch by the neck and brought it on the side of her neck as the pleasure was very sensational. Fetch started to kiss at her neck again and slipped in another finger making her moan louder and hold him closer and tighter. Fetch could feel her walls tighten around his fingers she was getting close.
"Hey Fluttershy, you gonna cum for me."
Fluttershy couldn't answer him she just nodded her head furiously. The feeling was like she was going to explode. Fetch slipped both his fingers out licked them, tasting Fluttershy's juices. He broke away from her grasp and moved his head down to her pussy.
Fetch could feel the heat coming from her, when he got down there he saw her clitoris.
"Well hello what's this? Is that for me." he said before flicking with his tongue making Fluttershy moan louder from the sudden shock of pleasure.
"Well everypony I hoped you enjoyed that song because i'm going to be here all night brong you the best Smooth Jazz and R&B on this side of Equestria, here's some more Marvin Haye. Sexual Healing Instrumental
Fetch started licking and sucking on her clit making her spasm under him, he got an idea while doing this. He knows his fingers were still wet, so he moved his paw down to her plot hole and slipped an finger in. Gasped at this new sensation she was feeling.
This is was made Fluttershy moan and spasm in pleasure, she was almost close to her climax, but after that finger entered her it, it was enough to set her off the top. Fetch received the whole orgasm. He placed his mouth on her pussy as her juices started to shoot out, he drank all of it.
He moved up to Fluttershy's face and kissed her deeply. She put her hooves on both sides of his face holding him there tasting her own juices. Fetch broke their kiss, both were breathing very heavily.
"So Shy...how was it?..Was it better then your dream?"
"Ye...wait..How did you..?"
"You leaked on my leg, but I really didn't mind.So was it better."
"Yes, it was."
"Well that's good to know because it only gets better from here."
"What do you mean?"
"I mean I can fulfill your fantasy, and this this."
Fetch got off Fluttershy to revile his throbbing cock. Fluttershy gasped on how big it was. She thought a dog's penis was a lot smaller then what she was looking at, but what surprised her the most was it was the same size; just like in her dream an whole 11 inches (Knot to the tip). She moved close to it and grasped it in her hoof, making Fetch let out a little moan of pleasure. She started to rub it slowly in her hoof before stroking it.
"Never done this before Shy?"
"Um..no it's my first time actually."
Fetch just smiled at her, he remembered his first time he was messing up everything, especially when he put it in the wrong hole. Fetch just laughed at himself on his own inexperience.
"Don't worry then." he said before laying her on her back. "Let me do all the work."
"Wait! " she screamed at him making him get off of her. She reached into her nightstand on the side of her bed, and pulled out a box of condoms. (That's right safety first kids. ) Fetch smiled and pulled one out the box and slipped it on. It fit perfectly, he went back down and started to kiss Shy again.
"W-will you be gentle?"
"Yeah..I'll be as gentle as you want me to be."
With that Fluttershy kissed him on the lips wrapping her Hooves around his neck, while he placed his cock at her entrance. He started to enter till he hit a small barrier that was preventing from going any further. He looked at Shy, "Do it Fetch, make me a mare..make me yours. " Fetch started to push a bit harder until.
*POP*
He tore through her hymen. He looked at his lover and realized she was in a lot of pain and was starting to tear.
"Hey Shy you alright?"
She just looked at him and smiled. "Yes...I'm okay." she moved her head to his ear and whispered. "Please continue I want you so much right now. "
Fetch smiled and nodded as he started to slowly pump in and out of her; her walls squeezing every time he thrusted.
"Well everypony I hope you're having a fantastic time with your lover, now it's time to play some Smooth R&B here's some R.Kelly for you all. Bump and Grind
"Oh...Fetch..mmm..I love this song."
"Then it'll be our song, to remind you of your first time, and me."
"I love you Fetch."
"I love you to Shy."
The couple engaged in a deep romantic & passionate kiss while Fetch was slowly thrusting in and out of Fluttershy making love to her, getting her bed sheets wet from excitement. They were in a great world of pleasure. Both breathing heavy from their love making. Fetch feeling how tight she was, and Fluttershy feeling how big he was, she felt like cumming again.
"F-F-Fetch."
"Mmm...Yeah..Sh-Shy"
"I-I..I'm so close!"
"Yeah. Want me...to go faster?"
"YES! Please G-Go Faster! " Fluttershy screamed at him, holding close as possible.
Fetch started to pump faster making her scream his name in pure pleasure. Squirming underneath him biting him on the neck. Fetch grunted when she did this making him pump faster and harder slamming his knot into her, making her scream while she climax. He felt her walls tighten against his cock.
Fetch kissed her neck while slowly pulling out. He moved her hair from her face and looked at her. OH wow she looks so damn beautiful.
"You know what you look so beautiful words can't describe you know that."
She blushed at him moving her hair and his comment, she placed her hoof on his chest and rubbed it up and down.
"And you are the best lover in all of Equestria."
"No that would be you."
She giggled and kissed him deeply. He grabbed her by the waist and fell on his back, Fluttershy on top of him.
"You ready to go again?"
She nodded, he grabbed his cock and placed it back in making her moan. He grabbed her flanks and started to pump again. Grinding his cock into her making her roll out her tongue. She put her hooves on his hind legs and started to buck in rhythm with him. Fetch arced his head back from the satisfaction.
"F-Fetch."
"Y-yeah."
"I-I..ahh..want you to..Mmm..m-move in with me."
"S-sure Shy..Fuck..I'm gonna cum."
"No, not yet i'm so close."
Fetch grunted while grinding his teeth he was going to explode. He started to pump deeper into her to stop himself from bursting, it was working. Fluttershy put her hooves on his chest and arched her back slamming her plot on his cock. Fetch moaned as this was not helping his cause, he tried his best not to release not yet she was so close, each and every time her flanks meet his thighs a jolt of pleasure shot through him.
Fetch grabbed her by her back and started to slam his cock inside of her making he moan very loud. The sound of her juice slipping off the condom was a motivation which made Fetch go faster, harder and deeper. The loud moans & grunts coming from each other filled the air, enough to wake the animal outside. Both were sweating and the air filled with the musky smell of love which fogged up the windows, and with one more final thrust...
"FEEEEEEEEECTH! "
"SHHHHHHYYYYY! "
They both climaxed at the same time screaming each others names. Fluttershy's juices dripping down Fetch's legs like a river, and Fetch had over-filled the condom with his cum from hold it that long and releasing it all in one powerful burst, it also dripped down his legs. They both laid there sexual exhausted breathing heavily. Fetch's cock started to go soft and fell out of her. He rolled Fluttershy on her back and kiss her on the lips and removed the condom and threw it in the little trash bin she had in her room.
"That was...way better then I dreamed it would." She said.
He just smiled and kissed her again. "I'm Glad to hear that, here." He removed his collar and put it around her neck.
"F-Fetch..why did you."
Fetch gave her a small kiss then laid on his side.
"My mom told me to give it to the one I loved before she died, and that one just happens to be you."
"Oh, Fetch. You making me the most happiest mare in Equestira."
"And you make me the happiest Diamond dog in the whole world."
They held each other close in a loving embrace and shared one more kiss before falling asleep in each others arms. Little did they know there was somepony watching outside their window the entire time.
"I need to tell them what I just saw." said the mysterious shadow.
Ooo who was that mysterious pony or was it a pony at all. Ooo mystery well hope you enjoyed this chapter might not have another for a while who know...Only Me.
Okay now that sex is out of the way for awhile let's see if I can get the rest of the mane six to like him. Also I've wrote over 10K words. Fuck Yeah!
Chapter 8
The Morning After
The sun shined into the room where Fluttershy and Fetch were. She slowly opened her eyes to see that her lover wasn't there next to her. She got out of bed trying to find him, realizing that her room was a mess from all the 'Activities' they done last night.
"Oh wow we really made a mess in here last night."
She looked outside her window and seen him outside in the meadow. "I wonder why he's outside?"
Fluttershy walked outside, it was windy. She seen him standing with his arms out his shirt blowing in the breeze with bits of grass and leafs flying past him.
She walked to where he was, but she didn't get to close he was in his white dress shirt.
"He must of washed it, or he threw it back on..I hope he washed it "
Fetch looked up at the sun and was crying to himself mumbling about something. Fluttershy want to comfort him, but something kept her from doing so, then she heard it. The most beautiful and saddest thing she'll ever hear her entire life. A song that will never leave her mind no matter how hard she would try.
Dance with my father
Back when I was a child, before life removed all the innocence
My father would lift me high and dance with my mother and me and then
Spin me around ‘til I fell asleep
Then up the stairs he would carry me
And I knew for sure I was loved
If I could get another chance, another walk, another dance with him
I’d play a song that would never, ever end
How I’d love, love, love
To dance with my father again
When I and my mother would disagree
To get my way, I would run from her to him
He’d make me laugh just to comfort me
Then finally make me do just what my mama said
Later that night when I was asleep
He left a dollar under my sheet
Never dreamed that he would be gone from me
If I could steal one final glance, one final step, one final dance with him
I’d play a song that would never, ever end
‘Cause I’d love, love, love
To dance with my father again
Sometimes I’d listen outside her door
And I’d hear how my mother cried for him
I pray for her even more than me
I pray for her even more than me
I know I’m praying for much too much
But could you send back the only man she loved
I know you don’t do it usually
But dear Lord she’s dying
To dance with my father again
Every night I fall asleep and this is all I ever dream
Fetch feel to the ground crying deeply. Fluttershy ran up to him and hugged him crying into his shoulder. He wrapped his arms around her holding her tight not wanting to let her go.
"I miss them....so, so, much...I-I can't do it."
"Shh it's okay Fetch you have me know." she said looking him in the eyes a small smile forming across her face. She was right he did have her, and only her. A small smile formed on his face and he held her even tighter. They stayed like that for five whole minutes.
"Come on Fetch let's go get cleaned up. Then we can go where ever you want. How does that sound?"
"Yeah...that sounds nice."
The two got up and went back into the house. They arrived in the bathroom were Fluttershy started the shower. Fetch jumped in followed by Fluttershy. The water ran down their bodies, Fluttershy grabbed her body wash and started to apply it on Fetch. She started at his shoulders standing on her hind legs, moving down to his chest and arms.
She traced his muscles with the wash losing her self on how well built he was. Fetch was switching his tail back and forth from her doing this reminding him of when his mom use to bath him. She finished lathering his stomach with soap and asked him to turn around. When he turned Fluttershy let out a gasp. On his back was a tattoo or some kind of brand.
"What's wrong Shy?"
"When did you get that?" she asked touching the marking.
"Oh I got this when my father passed away."
It was a Brand of his father's head burned onto his back in the middle of his shoulder blades.
"It's there to remind me that he is always with me when ever I feel lonely or when I need to defend myself or those I care about."
"Well I'm glad you have some reminder of your father he seemed to be a nice Dog."
"He was, my parents would of adored you."
Fluttershy just blushed and finish lathering him in the soap. He stepped into the water and let the soap wash off, his was now clean. He grabbed the soap and did the same for Fluttershy, but he did it his own way. He asked her to stand on her hind legs. She found it weird for her to stand on her hind legs, but she did it anyway.
He walked behind her and started to massage the wash on her body starting with her chest. He placed kisses on her neck making her tilt her head back. He started to lather the soap lower going to her stomach wrapping his arms around her gently rocking side to side humming a tune. Fluttershy wrapped one of her hooves around his neck, his plan was working.
One of his paws went lower reaching in between her legs massaging them. The bathroom started to steam and fog, for some reason Fluttershy was getting extremely hot and bothered, she didn't know why but she didn't care. She placed her free hoof on Fetch's sheath slowly rubbing it getting him aroused. Fetch started to rub her folds while he was becoming erect.
"Ever wonder what its like to have sex in the shower Shy?"
"No, but i'd like to find out." she said kissing him on the cheek.
"*chuckle* You are one naughty Pegasus, you know that?"
"Well you started it, now lets see if you can finish."
She placed his cock at her entrance and he pushed himself in, she moaned while placing her fore-hooves on the shower wall. He leaned in next to her face, and grabbed her by the flanks and started to thrust.
Shit while typing this I added a small sex scene FUCK.
Thirty Minutes Later
The two exited the shower and went to the room, where they were getting ready. Fetch put on one of his casual shirts and walked over to the mirror where Flutterhsy was. She just got done brushing her mane and making sure she didn't forget anything. Fetch walked behind her and gave her a hug. She place her fore-hooves on his arms and looked back at him.
"So did you like your shower Fetch?"
"Yeah I did, probably just as much as you did, but wait..you're missing something."
"OH what is it?"
"This." Fetch grabbed his collar from the nightstand, and placed it around her neck. The diamond was shining very bright.
"Looking good there Shy, I love you." He said placing a small kiss on her cheek.
She turned around and kissed him on the lips. "I love you too. Now you ready to go?"
"Yeah, but don't you think we should feed your animals before we go we forgot to last time."
"Oh my I totally forgot to feed them yesterday!"
"Hey no need to panic we got all the time in the world to go where I want to. Now lets go feed to animals...Together." Fetch held out his paw.
"Yeah." She grabbed his paw. "Together."
SOME WHERE IN A DARK ROOM
"YOU SAW THEY DO WHAT!!! "
"They were having..*Gag* ..intimate relations."
"Thanks for bringing this to are attention here take these as your reward.
The mysterious shadow threw a bag to the ponies. They grabbed it and looked inside and smiled with satisfaction and left.
"So, what do we do?"
"Get.The.Mare. "
OH SHIT!! who are these mysterious shadows talking and what are they planing on doing. Fetch can sing I wonder where this will lead. Till Next chapter everypony read on.
Okay Let's see where fetch use to live before the caves. Also when i have more then two ponies in a conversation I'll be using colors so you can recognize who is speaking. Recommend you read this in dark setting then light. It hurt my eyes trying to pre-read this.
Chapter 9
Fetch's OLD home
"So where are we going Fetch?"
"It's somewhere I've always wanted to go for a while, since I lived in that cave."
"Can you give me a hint."
"Yeah it's my old house."
"*giggle* That's not a hint Fetch."
"Yeah I know but I just wanted you to know where I was taking you."
They walked down the streets of Ponyville get some hello's and hi's as they passed by, even a mare said 'Look at the cute couple.' making Fluttershy blush, and Fetch chuckle. They walked to SugarCube Corner to get some treats for the walk there. They entered and were surprised when Pinkie popped out in front of the two, scaring Fluttershy.
"Oh hi you two, how are you two doing today?!"
"Oh you scared me Pinkie."
"We're doing good Pinkie." Fetch said grabbing Fluttershy and bringing her close to his side which she nuzzled his chest.
"Real good."
Pinkie got excited and started hopping around the couple making Fluttershy hide her face in his chest from the embarrassment. Making Fetch laugh as Pinkie started making a song about the two. Pinkie hopped next to Fluttershy and grabbed her head to face her. Pinkie had her signature grin on going from ear to ear.
"Oh Fluttershy I'm so happy you finally found your special somepony or would it be special somedog but then that wouldn't make any sense I need to find out what Diamond dogs call it."
"Pinkie!"
"Yeah Fetch."
"We call them, The One."
"Well that makes more sense then special somedog, so Flutters is he, The One?"
"Yes Pinkie." she replied kissing him on the lips in front of her friend making her 'Awww' . "He is."
"Well I'm glad to hear that I can't wait to tell our friends."
"No Pinkie." Fluttershy interjected. "I think we can do that on our own...if that's alright with you."
"Okie Dokie Loki anyway why are you two here?"
"We came to get something to take with us on our trip to my old house."
"Oh okay give me a sec." Pinkie disappeared and re-appeared in a blink of an eye with a box on her back. "Here you go a bakers dozen of the best cupcakes we have to offer."
"Thanks Pikine what do we owe you."
"Oh it's on the house, now you two love birds have fun now."
"Oh we will thanks Pinkie."
The two left the bakery and seen three little fillies running towards them They came to a screeching hault when they saw Fetch.
"Hey Fluttershy who's your friend, or is a friend?"
"Oh hi Scootaloo, Sweetiebell, Applebloom I want you to meet my special someone. Fetch." she said pointing towards Fetch.
"Hey girls nice to meet you."
"Hey I know you, You were in my sister's shop yesterday."
"Yes I was, so you must be Rarity's little sister." he said messing up Sweetiebell's hair making her giggle.
"Wait, yer goin' out wit a Diman'd Dog."
"Yes I am Applebloom. He is the most nicest one I've ever meet."
"So what are you three doing?"
"We'r tryin' tha find ar cutiemarks."
"Well how's the search coming."
"Not very well, we tried like ten different things, but none of them were are special talent."
"Well I'm sorry to hear that, but it's just like my mother always said. 'Never give up because there is always a way to get to your goal no matter what it maybe."
"Thanks Fetch."
"You know what your one pretty cool Dog."
"Come on girls let's go to tha club house."
"OKAY!"
The three fillies gave Fetch's legs a quick hug and ran off to their club house
"Well that was very nice of you to give them that information."
"Hey what can you do, I like kids, I always wanted some but never got the chance to have any."
"You...you always wanted to have a child?"
"Yeah. Its just that...I never got around to doing it, you know."
"Wow he always wanted to have a child and so have I, but...we can't have any. He's a whole other species... *Sigh * I guess we both won't get what we want.*"
"So Shy. You ready to go?"
"Yeah Fetch I'm ready."
The two left for their destination not knowing there was somepony Listening to their conversation.
"So he's going to his old house, will I think I should pay it a 'Quick ' visit."
At Sweet Apple Acres
"So Fluttershy found her ah special somepony who a'nit no pony at'all?"
"Yup sis and he's very nice too."
"Well i'm glad fer her. Come on Granny is makin her apple pies right now."
Carousel Boutique
"She's dating WHO?! "
"She dating Fetch."
"Fluttershy is dating HIM! "
"Yeah isn't that great."
*FAINT, THUD*
"Rarity are you alright?"
A Hour Later
"So Fetch how long do you think it'll take till we get there?"
"We should be their in a few more minute...Is that ...Smoke."
"Yeah it seems to be coming that direction." Fluttershy said pointing North West
"OH FUCK THAT'S THE SAME DIRECTION AS MY OLD HOUSE!"
Fetch ran down the dirt road hoping and repeating to himself "Please don't be on fire." He finally arrived to the source of the smoke. His old home...it was on fire. He dropped down to floor as the he watched his Childhood home burn down in front of him the ashes falling down like rain. Time seemed to slow down as everything around him moved in slow motion all the ponies that live in that area tried to douse the fire with storm clouds and buckets of water.
Flutteshy finally caught up with Fetch and saw a house burning down and Fetch on the floor. She walked up to him and seen tears falling from his face, his expression not changing. He stared blankly at the house as all his childhood memories ran through his mind. All the good times he had there now going up in flames.
"Hey. Did anypony catch who ever did this."
"Yeah we have him right over here."
Fetch's attention turned to the one who started the fire. It was somepony he'd hoped he'd never see again. It was Dumbbell trying to fight his way from the ponies that were holding him. Fetch's eye started twitching, nose flaring, arms shaking, teeth showing, and fist clutched.
He lets out a howl so loud that everypony had to stop what they were doing cover there ears. Fetch sprinted towards Dumbbell who was holding his ears from the loud howl only to open his eyes to see Fetch tackle him into a near by building breaking his wings from the sudden impact.
Dumbbell tried to scream in pain but was hit in the face numerous times. Fetch was releasing all of his anger out on him not caring what may happen to himself. Some ponies regained the composer to see Fetch beating the life out of Dumbbell. They all ran over to pull Fetch off and drag Dumbbell some where safe. Fetch was a good thirty feet from him.
Before he broke free from all the ponies that were holding him and ran back over to Dumbbell wrapping his paws around his neck choking the life out of him. More ponies came to get Fetch off him which cause him to start attacking other ponies that were keeping him away from Dumbbell.
The struggle lasted for a whole thirty minutes. Fifteen ponies were harmed and injured, before the royal guards came. They had their swords unsheathe and pointed towards Fetch. He was covered in blood his shirt had three long cuts on it. One of the Guards was covered in steel amour instead of the regular gold. The unicorn stepped out in front of all the guards and faced the raged filled Diamond dog.
"I am Shinning Amour, captain of the royal guard, cease and desist at once."
Fetch lowered his head and started to laugh maniacally raising his head towards the unicorn smiling like a psycho.
"Well Shinning Amour have you ever dreamed of what is was like to take a life or what its like to die."
"No I haven't. I would never take the life from anypony, even if its from somepony like you."
"Well looks like I have and advantaged over you. You see, I have lived both of those all ready, so neither of them scare me. I could kill you with out blinking"
Fetch walked closer to Shinning Amour who raised his sword towards Fetch.
"Tss tss tss. Didn't your mom tell you it isn't safe to be playing with swords."
Fetch grabbed the edge of the blade, laughing as he slowly drew his paw back leaving a small trail of blood on it.
"You, Me, and your men know, you don't have what it takes to kill me, but we all know I have what it takes to kill you. "
"No...Your wrong...I do have what it takes."
"Then prove me wrong." Fetch grabbed the sword and moved it right at his throat. "Do it...If you can." Fetch put his paws behind him bringing his claws out.
Shinning Amour hesitated to thrust the blade into Fetch. "No then I would be doing you a favor."
"Just as I expected." Fetch threw one fatal swipe across Shinning Amour's throat letting the blood shoot out like a fountain. Fetch drank his blood as he dropped down to the ground picking up his sword and cutting off his head.
Fetch took in a deep breath as he came back to reality as his house was no longer on fire. Everypony that was there had left, Fetch was in a trance for what seemed to like thirty minutes Fluttershy holding him in a tight hug.
"Fetch what happened to you. You didn't respond to me when I was calling you."
"How long have I been here?"
"About a whole forty-five minutes. I was scared you would of done something really drastic."
"What was the cause of the fire?"
"An old gas stove. Apparently it was leaking and it must of reached a candle in the house."
"Let's go home I have nothing here anymore."
"But, Fetch we came all this way don't you think we should..."
"I don't want to talk about it."
"But maybe you can.."
"I said No."
"But Fetch."
"I said, LET'S GO! "
Fluttershy winced at his outburst he never yelled at her.
"Fetch are you sure you don't want to talk about it."
Fetch looked at her a look of disgust on his face. He shook his head in disapproval and walked back to her house.
"Why is he acting like this I mean yeah his house burned down but yelling at me isn't going to solve anything. I should just give him his space. "
The two walked home not saying a word to each other. Once they arrived home Fetch laid on the couch with his back turned to her. She put a hoof on his shoulder but he shook it off.
"Well we can talk about when your ready."
She started to go upstairs and stopped half way to look at him.
"Good night Fetch."
"..."
"I Love you."
"..."
"*sigh* I see you in the morning."
She went up stairs and cried herself to sleep wondering why he was acting this way.
IN A DARK ROOM
"So not only is his old house burned down, but he's not talking to her now?"
"Yes that's correct."
"You've really out done yourself you two maybe you can get what you both want when this is over."
"You mean her right?"
"And a cart load of Diamonds?"
"Yes you can have what you two please."
Three shadows leaned into the light in the middle of the room. The two ponies where Hoops and Dumbbell. Laughing evilly with the Leader of the Diamond Dogs...Rover.
OH SHIT. Now we know who these mysterious shadows are. Why are the doing this to Fetch. Well he ever talk to Fluttershy or will he leave and never be seen again Find out Next chapter 'The Dog with a Soft Side' till next time everypony.
The Dog with a 'Soft' Side
Okay I have no idea what is going to take place in this chapter I just came up with some random bullshit and some how it all came together. So hope you enjoy this Chapter
Chapter 10
The Dog with a 'Soft' Side
It was 12:39 am, Fetch woke up thinking about the way he acted towards Fluttershy
"All she wanted to do was talk about it and I just rubbed her off like it was nothing. I didn't even say I loved her yesterday. She must think i'm horrible."
Fetch got up from the couch and stretched popping his back in the process. "Ahh that felt good. I should go and apologize. She was only making sure I was alright I shouldn't of yelled at her like that."
Fetch went up the stairs and heard what he assumed was crying. He slowly opened the door and seen Fluttershy on her bed face buried in her fore-hooves crying. He walked over to her and tried to give her a hug. She pushed him away not wanting to see him.
"Get away fr-from me."
"Shy. What's wrong."
"Y-you c-can't s-see what's w-wrong with m-meeeeee."
"Shy I just."
"STOP CALLING ME THAT! I THOUGHT YOU LOVED ME BUT YOU COULDN'T EVEN SAY THAT! "
"*Sigh* Look I just came in here to apologize for the way I acted towards you, it wasn't acceptable. I was so upset about my house that I completely ignored the fact that you were only trying to comfort me but I was just to Fucking stupid to see that...I'll get my stuff and leave if that's what you want."
Fetch grabbed all of his things and walked to the door about to leave Flutterhsy forever, when a hoof grabbed his arms dropping his clothes to the floor. He turned around for Fluttershy to tackle him to the ground kissing him on the lips deeply. He wrapped his arms around her kissing her with as much passion. She pushed off his chest catching her breath. The both looked at each other and smiled.
*Slap*
"Ow what was that for.
"That was for being a meanie earlier, but this is for apologizing."
Fluttershy kissed him again and started to grind her rear into Fetch's crotch.
"So how bout we get off this floor and go to the bed...Shy"
"I'd love to."
She got off him and went to her bed followed by Fetch. The two got on the bed, Fetch grabbed Fluttershy and laid on his back starting another kiss.
"So how do you want it..Fetch?"
"I want it your way Shy."
"*Giggle* If that's the way you want it."
The two made love for what seemed to be like hours till they feel asleep in each others arms. A smile on both lovers faces.
"So Rover what should we do next?"
"Well his old House is now ashes, He argued with that Filthy pony. I say we take his friends next."
"How do we do that."
"Be...creative."
"Got it."
The next Morning
"*Yawn* 'Shit who knew she was that kinky...Oh wait * I DID.***' Shit, I need to stretch and go for a run or something."
Fetch looked over to Fluttershy who just had a smile on her face. Fetch gave her head a quick kiss before getting out of bed and writing her a note on where he'd be.
Hey Shy went for a quick run around Ponyville don't worry I should be back by the time you wake up. Just remember
that I always love you no matter what happens
Your one & only love, Fetch
Fetch finished writing the note and left it on his pillow next to Fluttershy. He went outside and stretched before he started to run around. He passed by a few ponies who gave him a few dirty looks he didn't pay any attention to them. He was running through the park where a couple of Stallions were playing a game of Hoofball. They all had gotten an idea, they all lined in postion.
"Hut Hut Hike!"
"I'm open!"
" Hey Fetch Catch! "
The stallion holding the ball threw a long bomb to Fetch who turned to see where the ball was, not know there was a fully charging stallion coming at him. Fetch caught the ball and turned around to get tackled at full speed from the on coming stallion knocking the wind out of him. He laid on the floor breathing heavily trying to catch his breath only to cough and gasp for air. Everypony that was there was either laughing or say 'OOOOOOOHHHHHH! '
"You got knock the FUCK OUT! "
The group of stallions just laughed and some kicked him in the gut for extra measures. They left him on the floor as ponies walking by said things like Serves you right , or That's what you get . Fetch picked himself off the floor only to see two hind legs rear up and buck him in the face. He rolled a good twenty feet before blacking out.
The stallions that were playing Hoofball picked him up carried him towards the lake where the beat him till he was bleeding and threw him in the lake. Fetch's body started to sink to the bottom of the lake leaving a trail of blood.
Fetch's Mind
"So they just think they treat me nice one day then shit the other...Well that's not going to fucking happen. They want to treat me like the bad guy. Okay, then I'm the Bad Guy now. They fucked with me for to long and now time to show this fucking town what The FUCK I CAN DO! "
Play this It goes perfect
(See I'm not all Hip-hop & RnB)
Fetch eyes shot open as he seen he was in the lake. He slowly walked to the shore water dripping from his body. He flung out his claws walking down the same path towards the park. Blood was dripping out of him like a miniature waterfall. He saw the Stallions who beat him. He walked into their vision with his head hung low.
"Well well well look who's back fellas come for an other ass kicking."
"..."
"I take that as a yes. Go get him fellas."
Two stallions came charging towards him, He let out a small smirk before side stepping the first stallion and punched the other in the throat before throwing him over his shoulder, punching him in the face twice, pulled off a back flip landing on his stomach and stomping his foot into his face knocking him out instantly. Foot for Breakfast (Yes i do see that the video says Food but it's foot.)
The other turned around to see another stallion charge towards Fetch. He had a plan let the other stallion get hit then sneak up on him. The one charging got close to where he tried to grab Fetch but failed to. He ended up getting hit over the head with Fetch's fist together kicked in the chest then bucked in the face sending him flying thirty feet before stopping. M.A.D.E.
Fetch turned his attetion to the one that threw his the ball he started to walk up to him but heard hoofsteps coming after him. He turned to see the stallion that tackled him. He got close to Fetch and got uppercutted into a standing position Where Fetch unleased Five heavy punches to his face leaving him unconscious standing up. Fetch walked over to him and pushed him over like it was nothing. PushOver
Fetch Finally turned his attention to the ring leader of the group who stood there in shock.
"Come on fellas get...Him!?" the leader turned around to see that the other stallions left him all by himself to deal with Fetch they wanted nothing to do with him after what they saw.
The leader turned around to only be picked up off the floor by the neck. Fetch smiled at the stallion before punching him in the sack three good hard times, and throwing him on the floor. The stallion was holding he sack like no tomorrow. Fetch looked around the park seeing that everypony was now terrified of him, he just smiled and turned back to the stallion and kicked him in the balls real hard making him flip over and groan in pain. Balls to the Wall
Fetch looked over the damage he had done and you know what he felt pretty fucking good after doing it. He walked back home having a good sense of satisfaction on his face.
Fetch kicked open the door to her house and walked in trying to find her. He walked into the kitchen to find Fluttershy on the ground.
"Oh it's only you Fetch you scared me."
He walked over to her picking her off the ground and kissed her deeply, shocking her.
"Oh..my..Fetch whats gotten in to you?"
"I don't know, but I do know what's about to get into you."
"Fetch what are you doin..mmmmmm"
Warning Hard Sex Ahead..Very Short.
Fluttershy started to moan as Fetch kissed her and rubbed her slit, getting her wet in her own kitchen. Fetch picked her up and placed her on the counter moving everything out the way. He started to lick her pussy getting her more excited, tilting her head back against the cupboard moaning as Fetch massage her walls with his tongue. He saw her clitoris pop out and he started the rub it in between his fingers making Shy moan even louder.
Fetch took his tongue out her pussy and kissed her square dead in the mouth and slipped his fingers in thrusting them in and out as fast as he could. Making Fluttershy's tongue roll out her mouth, making her breath harder, her face flush with blush Fetch took her tongue into his mouth and played with it.
Fluttershy was so close her juices were dripping onto the counter and the floor. Fetch keep finger fucking her knowing she was going to blow any second now. Fluttershy screamed in pleasure as her juices shot across the kitchen. Fluttershy was breathing heavy as Fetch picked her off the counter and laid her on the table.
He thrusted his cock into her not giving her the chance to breath he fucked her as fast as he could slamming his knot in and out of her making her scream louder then all the ponies in ponyville. She just came not to long a ago but the way he was going, made her want to do it again. Fetch kept thrusting not losing any energy. Fluttershy came a second time, but Fetch never stopped thrusting he keep going. Fluttershy's orgasm was a very long one it lasted for a whole minute making her pass out. Fetch pulled out and realized he fucked her to sexual exhaustion.
"Damn I must of Fucked her to well. Better go put her in the bed then just let 'this' go away all by itself."
He carried her up the stairs and placed her on the bed.
In The Dark Room
"He did WHAT TO THOSE PONIES! "
"He did some moves that just knocked them out, on top of that he picked one off the ground with only one hand. I'm just glad he didn't do that to me."
"Yeah me to."
Rover slammed his paws on the table. "You two are Idiots! "
"Hey you want to get rid of him fine, do it yourself."
"Fine...what do you want?"
"Double are pay."
"No way!"
"Okay have fun then dealing with him yourself."
"Okay fine here."
Rover clicked his finger and spot came with an other cart full of gems.
"Do we have a deal."
Both Peagsi looked at each other and shook their heads. "DEAL."
"Good now get going."
Back in Ponyville
Fetch was walking down to the Carousel Boutique everypony hiding or screaming like they were when he first arrived. He entered the shop not caring on what Rarity had to say.
"Oh Fetch you just can't come barging in like that."
"..."
"Anyways what do you want? As you can see I'm very busy."
"...You know what I want."
"Darling if I did why would I ask.."
"Give me my wrist band."
"I'm sorry what did you say?"
"I said give me MY FUCKING WRISTBAND " he raised his voice causing someponies to come to aid but only leave once they seen who was the one raising their voice. Sweetiebell came down the stairs to see what all the yelling was about.
"*Gasp* Fetch what are you doing here?"
"Oh just came to see if your sister here finished my wristband, isn't that right Rarity?"
"Oh yes of course. It's just over here Fetch good as new." she said lying through her teeth.
"Hey fetch do you want to walk me to school today Rarity usually dose it but, she's really busy?"
"Sweetiebell I'm not.."
"I love to Sweetiebell."
"Great just let me get my saddlebags real quick."
Sweetiebell ran back upstairs to get her bags.
"Cute kid...Wish I had one."
"What do you mean you wish you had one?"
"I'm saying I always wanted a kid I just never got around to doing it. I was just to busy.."
"Taking ponies?"
"Yeah...Look I'm sorry for the way I came in here and started to make demands. It's just that everypony here looked at me as if I was different even though I am. Then a few days ago everypony here started treatingme nice as if I was part of the community, then today they treated me as if I don't belong here...Did anypony tell you that they beat me till I was bloody then threw me in the lake trying to drown me while I was unconscious ."
Rarity only shook her head in disbelief. Fetch came in her shop making Demands and now he's opening up to her.
"Maybe this is why Fluttershy must like him so much he's so open forward to her. Maybe I should apologize after all I did treat him Horribly. "
"But I ended up letting my emotion get the best of me I don't know what took control over me but, I just vented out all that pent up aggression it felt so good you know."
"What are you taking about Fetch."
"I ended up beating up the stallions that tried to kill me."
"*Gasp* Fetch!'
"I know I shouldn't of acted that way but I was just so pissed that it just happened and it was easy to take them down even though there were eight. I only took down four the others ran away."
"Well Fetch you need to control your aggression issues or this may happen more often and then the royal would have to come and get you."
"Yeah I really don't want Fluttershy to worry because I got taken away."
"Speaking of Fluttershy. I heard that you two were dating."
"You heard that huh?" Fetch said nervously chuckling while rubbing the back of his head
"Yes my sister told me. Please Fetch just keep her happy and safe not for me but, for her and her friends."
"I can do that."
"Also I wanted to apologize for the way I acted towards you. It wasn't right of me either so to make it up you can have back your wristband you don't have to pay me for those outfits and i'll make you more if you want."
"That sound real nice Rarity thank you."
"So do you know what you want before you leave?"
"Yeah I'll take a Hooded Sweater."
"Oh well that is some thing completely different from any order I've ever heard of. Come over here and show me what it looks like?"
Rarity and Fetch walked over to her drawing table and she drew a quick sketch of Fetch. He drew the what he wanted. Rarity gasped at what it looked like. It truly something completely different then what she is normally accustomed to.
"So that is what you want, it looks so..."
"Yeah I know it looks pretty simple huh? but it'll be a challenge."
"Okay Fetch I'm Ready."
Fetch turned around and seen Sweetiebell run up to him.
"So your ready to go?"
"Yup I got everything I need."
"Okay then let's go."
"Okay, bye Rarity."
"Bye Sweetie have a nice day at school."
"I will."
The two walked outside and started to walk to the school house. Sweetiebell was thinking of an idea that she'd thought would be fun.
"Hey Fetch."
"Yeah Sweetiebell?"
"Can I ride you to school? I was thinking that it would be fun"
Fetch smiled and laughed at Sweetiebell's question it was silly, but he remembered when he use to ride on his father's shoulders
"Yeah that does sound fun. Come on get on."
Fetch lowered himself to the floor where Sweetiebell sat on his shoulders.
"Now hold on to my shirt so you don't fall off okay."
"Okay Fetch, now let's go to school...In style."
Fetch started to run on all fours through town with Sweetiebell laughing on him giving him directions. The citizens found this cute and funny. The whole time Fetch was running and dodging Ponies and jumping carts he was thinking to himself
"Is this what it is like to have a child. to have fun and make them laugh and feel safe. Now i know why my parents were happy when I was born. "
Fetch keep running through town till he arrived to the school house all the little fillies and colt were amazed when they saw Sweetiebell arrive.
"Thanks Fetch that was fun."
"Hey any time kid."
"Hey Sweetiebell, hey Fetch." said two other voices. It was Applebloom and Scootaloo.
"Hey you two how's it going."
"Pretty good what about you?"
"Just had fun with Sweetiebell on the way here."
"Well that's nice but we outa get ta class befor' miss cheerlie get's mad at us."
"Alright then have fun you three."
"We will." said the three before the ran off towards the school, them and the rest of the children went in for a good days worth of education.
"I wish I could have a child with Fluttershy, *sigh* but I know that will never happen."
Well hope this made enough sense to everpony. Shout out to DefJamWarriors because that's where i got those videos for the Fight scene. Also Fetch wants Children and is starting to feel Kind off sad about not being able to have one. What will happen next chapter. Shit i don't even know I come up with Ideas as I write so the next chapter might be out in the next three days or so. Anyways Keep reading on everypony.
DefJam Fight For NewYork is the Shit
CMC Sleepover with Fluttershy & Fetch
The chapter title says it all. Also I gave Scoot some parents, because every other author uses her as an orphan.
Chapter 11
CMC Sleepover with Fluttershy & Fetch
*RING*
"Okay everypony I'll see you all Monday." said miss Cheerlie as all the foals left school to go home.
"So what are we going to do for our sleepover at my sister's house."
"I don't know doesn't she always find somepony else to take care of us."
"Yeah she does...OH. How about we sleepover with Fluttershy and Fetch?"
"That sounds lik'a great idea. Lets go see if we can."
"YEAH. CUTIE MARK CRUSADER SLEEP WITH FLUTTERSHY AND FETCH! "
Mean While at Carousel Boutique
"Just let me add the finishing touches, annnnnd. Done."
Rarity finished Fetch request for an outfit.
"Here you go Fetch tell me what you think."
"It looks perfect Rarity thanks."
"Well Try it on Darling. Tell me how it fits and feels."
Fetch threw on the Hooded sweater it fit perfectly and was really cozy.
"It's fits perfectly and it so cozy. Thanks Rarity."
"Well I do aim to please."
"Well you did please. It looks exactly like the drawing. How can I make this up to you."
"Well Sweetiebell and her friends were going to sleepover here tonight but I have so many orders to fill so can you.."
"Take them off your hooves sure."
"Thanks Fetch your a life saver."
Rarity and Fetch started to become friends even after their differences when he first arrived. Fetch leaned down and gave Rarity a hug who was shocked at first but then returned the hug.
"Hey Rarity their is a specific spot in Diamond dog territory where none of the guards ever go by."
"What are you getting at Fetch?"
"Out near the oldest tree near the caves is a field that has grass. Under there are the most valuable gems this side of Equestria."
"Fetch why are you telling me this?"
"Think of it as a thank you gift..from a friend."
"Fetch thank you that sounds lovely we'll have to go there one day."
"That sound nice when ever you're free just come and get me I'm always at Fluttershy's."
"Thank you Fetch I'll take you up on that offer."
Fetch went to the door and before he could get ten feet from it busted open reviling the CMC.
"Oh hi Fetch have you be here the whole time?"
"Yeah Sweetiebell me and your sister were getting to know each other a little bit better."
"That's nice. Oh Rarity can we have the sleepover with Fetch & Fluttershy?"
"Isn't that a coincidence I just told Fetch if he could take care of you three while I get my work done."
"YYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYY, CUTIE MARK CRUSADER SLEEP WITH FLUTTERSHY AND FETCH! "
Fluttershy House
"Oh wow I don't know what got into Fetch. I hope he can do something like that again. I didn't even know that was possible to have somepony to passout from sex."
Then she heard the door open and close.
"Hey Fluttershy I have a surprise for you."
"I hope it was like this morning."
"No it's not that just come see."
"What are they talking about? " Sweetiebell and Applebloom just shrugged
Fluttershy walked out the kitchen and seen the CMC there with Fetch. They ran to her and gave her a big group hug.
"*Giggle* So this was your surprise Fetch."
"Yeah, their going to sleepover I hope that's alright."
"Oh Fetch I love it when ever they come over."
"Yeah It's going to be fun Tonight." Fetch walked over to Fluttershy and whispered in her ear. "But not as fun as we're going to have tonight. "
"Fetch the kids will be here. "
"So I guess cuddling is out the question."
Fluttershy giggled and booped Fetch on the nose.
"That we can do. Now girls what do you want to do?"
The CMC and Fluttershy walked by Fetch. Fluttershy bushed her tail along side his jaw.
"My my my....Tonight going to be to fun. "
Three hours later
"Okay you three time for bed."
"Awwww...Okay."
The three little fillies jumped into the Fluttershy's bed where all three got comfortable while Fluttershy tucked them in and gave all of them a kiss on the forehead and turned around to leave. Fetch watched from the door leaning on it.
"Can you sing us a lullaby."
"Well I guess it wouldn't hurt."
"Shy I got this."
"Really Fetch. Do you know any lullabies?"
"No, but I do remember this one song that my dad always use to sing to me so I could fall asleep."
"Can we hear?"
"Yeah can we?"
"Please."
"Yeah i'd like to hear it to."
"Okay girls calm down. Now the song was called I Believe I can Fly . It's still the most beautiful and peaceful song I've ever heard in my entire life and it goes something like this."
I used to think that I could not go on
And life was nothing but an awful song
But now I know the meaning of true love
I'm leaning on the everlasting arms
If I can see it, then I can do it
If I just believe it, there's nothing to it
[Chorus:]
I believe I can fly
I believe I can touch the sky
I think about it every night and day
Spread my wings and fly away
I believe I can soar
I see me running through that open door
I believe I can fly
I believe I can fly
I believe I can fly
See I was on the verge of breaking down
Sometimes silence can seem so loud
There are miracles in life I must achieve
But first I know it starts inside of me, oh
If I can see it, then I can be it
If I just believe it, there's nothing to it
[Chorus]
Hey, cause I believe in me, oh
If I can see it, then I can do it
If I just believe it, there's nothing to it
[Chorus]
Hey, if I just spread my wings
I can fly
I can fly
I can fly, hey
If I just spread my wings
I can fly
Fly-eye-eye
Fetch finished singing and realized that the three Fillies were fast asleep. Fluttershy walked over to him. She stood on her hind legs and put her head on his shoulder and her fore hooves on his chest. He wrapped his arms around her and smiled as they watch the children sleep peacefully. The two went downstairs and started to cuddle on the couch.
"You would make a great father you know that. "
"And you'd make a great mother. The way they were responding to you it was unbelievable.....Let's adopt a child. "
"Fetch...you want to adopt a child. "
"Yeah why not I always wanted a child and seeing how we can't have one why not make some kids life better by give them loving parents. "
"Fetch. "
"Yeah? "
"I was thinking the same thing. I always wanted a child too. Every time I watch those three I feel something. You must think i'm silly for thinking that. "
"No your not silly I can understand. I only spent a few hour with them and I actually felt like a father you know. "
"Come on Fetch it's getting late we should go to sleep we'll discuss this in the morning. " She kissed him on the lips. "Love you Fetch. "
Fetch smiled and returned the kiss. "Love you too Shy. " and the two fell asleep in each others arms.
"Okay they're asleep. "
"Should we really be doing this you do remember what happened last time don't you? "
"Stop arguing both of ya'll now lets get goin' be'for they wake up. "
The CMC snuck past Fluttershy and Fetch who were asleep on the couch Fluttershy on top of Fetch. They went out the front door as quite as possible and ran towards the Everfree forest. Fetch's eye shot open and laid Fluttershy on the couch he heard the door close. He went up stairs to check on the CMC, they weren't in the bed.
"So looks like the kids went somewhere."
"Come on Scoot. "
"Well I'm stuck hold on. "
Fetch looked outside the window and seen the CMC help Scootaloo free from the chicken wire, and ran into the forest.
"Those kids are going to get themselves killed going out there. I should tell...No. I got this. They're my responsibility so I'll deal with this."
Fetch went out the window and rolled when he hit the ground. He ran into the forest to look for the girls
"I think we should turn back."
"Nothin's gonna get us like las time."
"Yeah stop being such a baby."
"I'm not a baby! "
"Prove It then."
"Fine! "
Sweetiebell was about to prove to Scootaloo that she wasn't a baby, but before she could a mysterious shadow fell down in front of them scaring the living daylight out of them.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! "
"Well that should teach you girls not to run off when you're supposed to be asleep."
"OH Fetch Its jus' you. We thought you wer' some type of monster."
"No but you girls know not to be out here. Especially with all the creature that come out at night."
"Fetch."
"I'm shocked that you girls would even sneak out like that."
"Uhh...Fetch."
"You're lucky i'm not going to tell Shy about this little..."
"AAAAAHHHHH! "
"What's the matter with you three."
They all pointed behind Fetch, he turned around to see a Manticore.
"Oh SHHHHH..IT."
*RAWR*
"Girls Run I'll Keep Him Distracted! "
The CMC all ran behind a Tree and bush where the Manticore couldn't see them. Fetch punched the Manticore in the face and ran towards a tree. The Manticore chased him once at the tree Fetch jumped off of it onto the Manitcore's back Digging his claws into it's back. It rose onto its hind legs trying to shake Fetch off, while trying to grab him with it's paws. Once Fetch saw the opportunity he flung off it's back and sliced it across the throat three times to make sure it was down.
"That takes car of that. Now Where are you Three? "
The CMC came from their hinding place and slowly walked towards Fetch. They all had looks of sadness on thier faces.
"Do you three know what kind of danger you put yourselves in. Huh!? What if I wasn't here. Can you imagine what could of happened. You all could of been killed, and me & Shy wouldn't know what happened to you until we looked every where for you three. All of your families would have been extremely sad if you three wouldn't of came back. I want all three of you to go back to the house and think about what you've done here, then you're going to apologize to your families, me, Fluttershy, and your friends all at the same time....Do I Make Myself Clear! "
The three fillies started to tear know what would of happened if he wasn't there, they all nodded their heads and gave Fetch a hug Crying into his fur. Fetch's anger subsided and he hugged them back.
"*Sigh* Come on lets get you three back in bed."
"Oka..Fetch Look Out! " they all screamed.
Fetch turned around to see the Manticore's tail come right for him. He grabbed it but not quick enough the tip of it's stinger punctured him in the chest. Fetch screamed in pain while braking the stinger off the tail, and shoved it into the Manticore's eye killing it instantly.
"Fetch! are you alright?" the three said in concern
Fetch held his chest having shaky breaths. He removed his hand from his chest to see blood on his hands. He looked around to find anything he could use to cover his wound. He found a palm fond and some vines. He folded the fond into a small rectangle and placed it on his chest.
"Can one of you hold this in place real quick?"
Applebloom went over and held it in place. Fetch started to wrap the vine around his body securing the fond in place.
"There we go. that should hold me till i get back to the house."
"Fetch we're really sorry for what we did."
"Yeah we promise not to do it again."
"Never ever again."
"Don't worry about it I'm just glad I came in time. Now lets go back before Fluttershy wakes up."
They all went back to Fluttershy's house and snuck back in with out making a sound. Fetch tucked the girls back into bed and went into the Bathroom where he took care of his wound with proper equipment. He cleaned it out with rubbing alcohol and peroxide, stitched it up, placed gauze around his chest, and covered it in medical tape. He went back down stairs where he fell a sleep on the couch with his chest against Fluttershy's back.
Next Morning
"AND." said Fetch with his arm folded across his chest.
Everypony was there Scootaloo's parents (Dad Mom), Applejack, BigMac, Rarity, Pinkie, Fluttershy, Twilight and Rainbowdash.
"We'll never do it again because somepony won't be there next time."
"Good now you all can receive what ever punishment your siblings and parents have for you."
"Thank ya mighty kindly Fetch."
"Eeyup."
"Yes Fetch who know what could of happen to my little Sweeitebell if you weren't there."
"Yeah Thank for watching over are little Scootaloo."
"Yes you are our Hero."
Everypony hugged Fetch, who just blushed. Fluttershy giggled she never seen Fetch blush the entire time she been with him. Everypony went home feeling that they don't have to worry about the kids because of their new hero.
"So Fetch you said something about adoption?"
Hey everypony sorry for the long what I've been hit with a sever case of lazy ass and writers block but i'm back on it baby. Any way Fetch and Fluttershy want to Adopt a child what will happen.....You better read to find out. Shit gets real here, not as real as the other chapters but just as real.
Chapter 12
Adoption & a new Job
"So Fetch you said something about adoption?"
"Yeah I want to adopt a child because we can't physically have one do to species issues."
"Well we can go right now if that's alright with you. After that we can get him or her enrolled in school."
"That sounds great lets go."
Fetch and Fluttershy went of to Ponyvillie adoption center. They entered and the place was very colorful the wall was colored a skyblue with a picture of a rainbow coming out a cloud. The approached the front desk where they were greeted kindly by a cream colored unicorn mare. She wears a white vest and bow. Her mane and tail are short with streaks that resemble her coat color. Her cutiemark is two flowers.
Blossom Forth
"Hi welcome to Ponyville's adoption center. My name is Blossom Forth how can I hekp you two today?"
"Hi we came here looking to adopt a child due to...complications."
"Oh soldiers not marching."
"What?! No different species."
"Oh okay well let me show you that backroom."
Blossom to the two into the back where they saw tons of little fillies and colt running around, shouting, and playing. Blossom was tell them about all the children that were running around, there was one child that caught Fetch's eye. In the cornor was a small colt starring at the wall with a smile on his face.
Ottotune
"Who's that little guy right there."
"Oh that Ottotune are special little colt."
"What do you mean special?"
"He's kind of slow and the other kids don't talk or play with him as much as they do each other. He was supposed to be adopted a few other times, but after they figured out that he was a bit slow they picked out another child. He'd always comes in my room at night and cry himself to sleep. I'd adopt him but i'm only a teen and I don't have a house at the moment, I live here taking care of these little ponies, but don't feel sad he's very talented when it comes to music he always had some new rhythm or beat he can entertain me and himself with I treat him as if he's my little brother."
"Huh?...Can you give us a mintue."
"Sure." Fetch pulled Fluttershy over to the side.
"What's wrong Fetch."
"What do you think about that one? " Fetch said pointing towards Ottotune. "He looks like a very nice boy and the other kids aren't even talking or playing with him. He probably feels really sad not being adopted after those other attempts. "
"I know I was tearing up from the story. "
"Then let's give actual hope no more crying about not being adopted. Let's give him a home and real loving parents not caring on what condition he may have. "
"Okay Fetch. "
"Blossom Forth."
"Yes sir?"
"We'll take him."
"You'll take Otto?"
"Yes he needs a nice place with loving parents."
"That's great let's just go fill out the paper work."
They all went back to the front where they all started to fill out the paper work.
"Now do you two have a job?"
"Yes I sell pets and exotic animals."
"Okay and you sir."
Fetch reached behind his head and started to rub the back of his neck.
"Uh...I'm currently unemployed."
"Okay. Do you two have a house?"
"Yes."
'"Okay last question. Are you two legal residents of Ponyville?"
Fetch face went completely white, he wasn't a legal resident in Ponyville. He couldn't hear anything every sound around him started to become a murmur or a high pitched sound. Fluttershy started to shake Fetch light saying his name bring him back.
"No....I'm not a legal resident....."
Blossom's heart had nearly stopped when she heard this. She couldn't give a couple a child especial when one of them wasn't a legal resident of Ponyville she could get fired. They all stayed silent for five minutes Fetch's head hung low in shame he knew he was supposed to be come a legal resident but he never got to it.
"Sign here please."
"What is this?"
"Just sign and you can have Ottotune as your new child."
"But, im not.."
"It's alright I just want him to be happy with loving parents. Just promise me one thing."
"Yes what is it?"
"Please...take care of him...for me."
"We can do that...thank you Blossom."
"No thank you."
Blossom and Fetch hugged each other over the table. She went into the back where she went and grabbed Ottotune. He burst through the doors crying that someponies finally adopted him. He ran to Fluttershy and gave her a hug crying into her chest. She did her best to comfort him, wrapping her free fore-hoof around him crying also. Fetch came and wrapped his arms around the two feeling like tearing himself, Blossom came and got into the hug as well. They all stayed like that for two whole minutes.
"Com on little guy lets get you to your new home, also Blossom your welcome to come visit anytime your free and if we need a foal sitter I know who to go to first."
"Thank you sir. I'll come see him when ever I have free time."
"No, thank you."
They all went home Otto falling asleep on Fluttershy's back while Fetch carried all of his stuff up to Fluttershy's room where she laid him on her bed and kissed him on the fore-head.
"Well Fetch...We're finally parents. "
"I know I just can't believe that she would just do that, but I need to find a job. "
"Fetch you don't need to. "
"I know but I want him to be proud of his new father. "
"I'm sure he's already proud of you after all we did adopt him. "
"I know but I want him to feel proud not because what I did but who I am. "
"Well if that's what you think then go ahead. "
"Thanks Shy your the best. " Fetch kissed her grabbed his Hooded-sweater and ran off to Canterlot to find him a specific job.
Canterlot
Fetch was running around Canterlot with his Hood over his head scaring the residents and attracting some of the Royal guards' attention.(Sounds Familiar ) He had about five unicorn guards and two pegusi guards on his tail. He started to run off objects, running up wall and off roofs (Yeah this is starting to sound really familiar. ) He finally made it to his destination...Canterlot Castle .
"You there freeze and put your hooves behind your head."
Fetch was surrounded by over fifty guards, all having spears pointing towards him. There was a guard standing on top of the castle gates with six of his soldiers. he had the voice of a grown teenager. He was a White unicorn wearing purple armor with gold trim, with a blue mane and tail.
Shining Armor
"Halt who goes there."
"I want to see the princess."
"Most ponies do. State your business."
"that's of none of your concern."
"Protecting the princess and Canterlot is my concerc. Now state your business or be dragged out of this fair city."
"Ha...I'd like to see you try." Fetch flung out his claws ready to fight the royal guards.
They all charged at him at once he easily dodging every single attack the threw at him. He punched a few before getting into the actual fight he punch kick and grabbed some guards to take full hits from them. If it was a spear thrust he'd let go of them and deflect or grab it with his paws and throw a monstrous right paw to the face or jaw knocking them out cold.
Fetch grabbed one guard and lifted him of the ground only to slam him face first back into the ground and flung him around hitting multiple guards around him. Once most guards backed up Fetch had the guard in between his arms on his back. Fetch looked around to see what the other guards were going to do.
"If any of you take a step closer it won't end well for your buddy here."
All the guards don't fall for his bluff three guards stepped forward....bad idea..Fetch leaned forward and brought his arms forward. A loud sickening snap was heard by all the guards Fetch dropped the guard he'd been holding letting his body colapse on the floor almost lifeless like. Call the Ambulance The guards that step forward went and checked on the guard on the floor. He was still alive but he couldn't move. Fetch walked towards the gates, where he was stopped again.
"So can I see the princess or do more of your men have to suffer like the one on the floor right now."
"You can see her but I will escort you to her. If you so as to try something funny you will face the wrath of the princess herself."
"Deal."
Shinning lead Fetch through the palace, he was amazed on how many rooms there were in the castle. They finally arrived to a large door. Fetch presumed this was either the throne room or Celestia's room, because there was two guards waiting outside the door. The guards open the doors to the throne room as Celestia sat on her throne.
"Hello it's good to see you again Fetch."
"It's good to see you also princess."
"So what brings you here Fetch?"
"I came looking for a job, and I was wondering if I could be enlisted into the Royal guard?"
"Well if you can show me you have what it takes to be in my royal guard I well enlist you. Shinning...see if Fetch can go one on one with you in Hoof to...paw combat."
"Let's do this. I've always wanted to fight someone more...challenging then those other guards."
"Well Fetch Shinning here is Captain of the royal guard I think you'll get more then you bargained for."
"Can I get an audience I want someponies to witness this."
"Like who?"
"Everypony you know."
"Okay then Fetch."
Celestia closed her eyes and focused really hard to conjure all the ponies she had knew. With a bright flash the mane six with Ottotune holding onto Fluttershy's back, her sister Luna, her niece Cadence, most of the royal guards, the room was filled with other ponies from the Canterlot, Ponyville, Appleloosa, Las Pegasus, and Cloudsdale council. All the ponies were confused on why they were all there.
"Fetch wanted an audience for his one-on-one match with Shinning Armor."
They all asked why he wanted an audience then again most ponies haven't seen anything like this ever before maybe it would be interesting to watch. Fetch cracked his Knuckles and his neck getting ready for a fight he soon won't forget. Cadence, Twilight, and Fluttershy ran to their respective lovers and sibling to get them to stop this right now neither want them to get hurt or...worst .
"Fetch please stop this; think of our son we just got not to long ago."
Fetch looked at her then Ottotune. Otto gazed into his father's eyes with worry. Fetch smiled at him, and took off his hooded sweater and put it on Otto. He smiled and held his hooves out to him with the sleeves hanging down. Fetch gave his son a hug and told him that he was going to be alright and that he has nothing to worry about.
"Well this is to see if I have what it takes to be in the royal guard then so be it. If going one-on-one with him is it, then i'm up for the challenge. I have nothing else to lose I already beat down some of the guards out there earlier how hard could he be."
"So you're going through with it aren't you?" she said looking down in disappointment.
He took his hand and placed it under her chin and lifted her face towards his, and gave her a passionate kiss.
"Don't worry I'll be fine. I have almost die more then five times my entire life. I believe I can survive a simple fist fight."
"Pleas just be careful for us."
"Yeah pease be careful daddy."
"I will son."
"Shinning you can't fight him."
"She's right what do you know about him despite what you told us on what happened outside."
"Sorry girls it's a pride thing, that you mares will never understand. He defeated most my soldiers with out breaking a sweat, I can not let him get away with that."
"Please Shinning your better then this. Your letting pride take over for what...a Hoof fight."
"She telling the truth just decline the offer. I'm sure princess Celestia won't get mad."
"I'm sorry, but when you two become stallions and figure, out what it feels like to have your pride, broken...come see me."
Shinning walked away from his sister and wife to fight Fetch, Cadence stopped him and pulled him into a kiss.
"Just try to stay safe and make sure you don't get hurt to bad."
"I can do that."
Twilight gave him a hug which he returned.
"Be safe B.B.B.F.F."
"Can do Twilly."
"Now go and show him why, your the Captain of the royal guard."
The two walked into the middle of the throne room where everypony was on either side of the hall. Getting ready to watch these two throw down. They started to circle each other in the middle.
"So...Shinning, how long do you think you'll last."
"I believe that question is how long are you going to last."
"Well lets find out."
The two took the fighting stances. Shinning was on his to hind-legs. He looks as if he had done something like this more than once. Fetch ran towards him and threw various punches which were all blocked, Shinning did the same but resulted the same as what happened to Fetch they pushed off from each other trying to find a weak point in their opponent.
Fetch came charging again, and Shinning side stepped which was a good idea in theory, but Fetch knew he would do that. He grabbed Shinning by the side knocking some air out of him and charged him into a marble column and threw three punches two in the stomach and one to the head.
Fetch lifted his body a foot off the ground and cocked back his fist. Shinning saw the opportunity and kicked him in the throat which caused Fetch to drop him. Shinning threw six consecutive punches to Fetch's jaw and head. Shinning turned around to buck him in the face but his legs were caught a few inches away from Fetch's face. He smiled and kicked Shinning in the gut.
He flipped over on the ground and held his stomach gasping for air. Fetch picked him up from his lower back, Shinning's head was now in-between his body and the floor. Fetch unleashed ten heavy punches to Shinning's face hoping to knock him out. Fetch dropped his body and watched as he fell over and rolled on to his stomach.
Fetch turned around to walk away, but was grabbed by his feet causing him to fall on the floor face first. Shinning got on top of him and threw punches on his head and lower back and finished with one hard punch to the head.Front to Back
Fetch laid there and started to get up slowly once he was up he wiped the spit and blood from his mouth. Shinning turned around to see Fetch standing there laughing with a bloody smiling.
"So your not finished huh?"
"Far from it."
"Well looks like i'll have to try my hardest to get rid of you."
Fetch charged at Shinning again grabbing him by the neck and charged towards the window where they shattered it upon impact. All the ponies watching came running towards the window to see if they were all right, the two fell into a large fountain where they were hurt but not to bad, the drop was at least a good ten/fifteen feet.
Everypony ran down stairs to go see the fight while the rest either teleported or flew down, once everypony finally got there the two were throwing punches back and forth, blood dripping down both of their face, neither wanting to fall over to let the other win.
"I.will.NOT.Fall.To.Somepony.like YOU
"Ha....ah yo...I'm 'bout ta tear yo azz up like a bad check, BITCH !"
That was enough to let Shinning's training go out the window he came charging at Fetch where he stabbed Fetch with his horn. Fetch screamed in pain and punched Shinning in the temple three times. Shinning ripped his horn out of Fetch as blood came out as he dropped to the floor of the fountain, the water started to red around him. Shinning walked over to him where he picked him up and bucked him out the fountain.
Fetch flew out the fountain a good twenty feet towards everypony was gathered, they all circled Fetch who started to get up slowly surprising everypony on resilient he was. Shinning came towards Fetch who grabbed him and unleashed a bone breaking punch to his snout making him stand up, scream and hold his snout as it was broken. Fetch grabbed one of his legs dropping him the the ground, elbowed him in the side, break his hind leg, punched him in the head which caused him to lay face first into the ground, he grabbed his other leg and flipped over him and slammed his face into the ground.The Show
Everypony gasped at this the never seen anything like that ever in their entire life even Princess Celestia and Luna and they been there for the longest. Their all confused on what happened Fetch put a bunch of moves together and knocked out Shinning in a mear six seconds. (Yes i did sit there and count.
"You know what...You look like a derange mixture of colors right now. Your black, blue, purple, and orange and shit, ha It don't look to bad on you partna."
Then Fetch took a few steps toward everypony then passed out due to massive blood loss. He awoke 5 hours later in a medical room, with Fluttershy, Otto, and....Armor! Fetch grabbed it and a note fell out.
Dear Fetch
If you are reading this then that means you are okay from all the damage you have taken. We sped up your recovery so you can train our new recruits for mine and Luna's guards. You start tomorrow at dawn. Can not wait to see how you can teach the guards your way for hoof to hoof combat.
P.S.
Heard you were not a legal citizen don't worry me and Luna took care of that for you.
Sincerly
Princess Celestia
Fetch folded the letter back up and looked at his little family he was starting, They were cuddled upon the chair next to his bed.
"I finally did it....I'm finally in the royal guard...Dad. "
Jesus this took fucking forever but I finally finished it now I have to come up with the epilouge for this damn story, don't worry every pony the Next story takes place through Otto's POV. So it's a continuation to this story. Now i need to get started on that story but most likely I will get hit with lazy ass again so we'll see what while happen.
So...here we are the last chapter of this story. Sorry got lazy and didn't know who to write this chapter...I was going to do Like a whole time line with it but seen that was to much work and with me helping with track season at my old High school there was no way I would of finish this chapter the way I wanted.
Epilogue
Two Years Later
There was noise and commotion going on in on of the towers at Canterlot Castle. The Mane six were helping Fluttershy get ready for her big day. She was going to get married Fetch.
"Thank you girls so much I was so nervous and over excited when he asked me to marry him."
"No need to thank us darling we're all just happy that he decided to settle down with you most stallions won't do that."
"Yeah most just want to buck and leave we're just glad you found somepony who wants to be with you forever."
"Yeah I'm just so excited that your getting married I've never been so excited it feels like i'm about to explode with excitement! Well except for that one time when we were Cadence's Receptionist's and Bride's maids."
"We're all proud of ya sugercube. Ya finally found somepony tah tie the knot with."
"We sure are I wonder how the groom is doing? He must be just as nervous as you."
With the Guys
"So Fetch you nervous at all. I mean you are getting married to Fluttershy. One of the nicest and shyest pony in all of Ponyville."
"No Spike I'm not, but she is probably freaking out right now probably wondering if I'm just as nervous as her." Fetch said fixing his tie in the mirror making sure he looked his best for his wife to be. "Hey thanks for throwing me that awesome bachelor party Shinning."
"No problem it was the least I could do for 'The Royal guard head Combat Trainer'. Besides I consider it some what of mine seeing how I didn't get one when I got married."
"I said I was sorry how was I supposed to now what a bachelor party was."
"You should of asked."
Fetch looked over to the door and there leaning on it was his son Otto dressed in a white dress shirt with a black tie and black jacket over it. He wore a black beanie with a white doo-rag under it. His cutie mark was a sound wave
"Son do you really need to wear the beanie?"
"No I suppose not, but I do have one question?"
"What's that son?"
"You two weren't married when you adopted me?"
"No...Why is that a problem?"
"A little I've been calling you two mom and dad this whole time because I thought you were married."
Fetch walked over to his son and hugged him and patted him on the back.
"Listen what ever what happens whether, we get married, or not. Your our son not by birth, but we raised you as if you were are own."
"I know but it still bothered me."
"I know... but take off your hat I don't need your mom to tear our heads off."
"Sorry dad."
"Anyway what did you think of the Bachelor party son?"
"Oh so much flank everywhere I was havin' a hard time controllin' my self."
"That's good checking out some of the mares but don't tell your mom she'd kill me. Anyway do you have your eye on a specific mare?"
"No, not yet but the ladies can't get enough of your boy here."
"Kind of cocky, just like your old man." Fetch teased jabbing Otto in the left fore-hoof. "You're still going to perform for us at the reception? Right."
"Come on Dad you know I aint gonna let you down."
"Ha..I know just making sure. So are you guys ready to get this show on the road?"
"Yes."
"Yeah."
"Fo sho."
"Alright then. Lets go get Married."
1 Hour Later
"The bride and groom have written their own vows and will now recite them."
Fluttershy placed her hooves in Fetch's paws who gently held them. She took a deep breath and looked him in the eyes.
"Fetch before you came into my life I was scared to have a relationship with anypony or anything in that matter. Then you come along and whisk me off my hooves. You made me feel like all the worries in the world didn't matter because you were always there to protect me from the things that would bring me pain. I never felt like that with any other pony, you made me into mare I am today. Strong, brave, and no longer soft spoken. If I were to ever lose you I wouldn't know what to would do. With out you I wouldn't have the two beautiful children we have today Blossom Forth and Ottotune, and want you to know that I will always love you."
Fetch smiled and was think of what to say, he didn't right his down but he was always good at making things up on the fly.
"Fluttershy...words can't describe the way I feel about you. You were that one pony who didn't care for may appearance, race, or past. You make me feel as if I was King of the world ruling with a beautiful queen that is always at my side. With you everyday is the best day of my life when ever I am away from you for more then two minutes I can't wait till I see you again. I won't have to worry about something happening to you. I would die if it means protecting you and the kids. You make me complete Fluttershy, and I couldn't say that about any other being in the world. You are the love in my life in this life and the after life. I will always love you no matter what may happen."
"That was lovely now if the ring barer can give the couple the ring and bracelet."
Otto walked over to his parents were they took the ring and bracelet and placed it on each other.
"You may now kiss the bride."
They kissed and everypony cheered releasing doves as they did it. The Reception was one for the ages. Otto performed for his parents which got him some looks for some producers that were there. The Couple had their second slow dance. After the reception Fetch carried Fluttershy to their carriage locked in an other kiss. The Carriage flew towards the sun leaving Canterlot castle in a blaze of glory everypony waving, cheering, and crying with joy as they flew away.
Hey everypony as this story come to a close I wish you all a good day, Hope you Enjoyed the Story and Stayed tune for my next story.... The Life of the Pony Named OttoTune I'll give a brief Summary of the next story. It Revolves around Ottotune in Five years after Fetch and Shy got married. Ima write that shit down so I don't have to write off the top of my head should make it a whole lot easier