Lend me your wings

Rarity was finishing Max's new clothes.

She had a hard time guessing what was the purpose of the fly on the upper side of the pant, but she didn't mind it much.

"Rainbow? Could you go upstairs and check how is our guest doing? Tell him I'm nearly done with his new clothes and that I'll start to wash his old ones."

"Yeah, sure."

It took her a few seconds to get in front of the door.

*Knock*

"Max? Rarity's finishing your new clothes, and she's washing your old ones." Dash wasn't hearing the water flowing, so she guessed he already finished his shower.

"You okay in there?"

"Y-Yeah! Thanks Dashie, but..."

"I... Eh, how to put it... I have a little problem here." I was having a hard time keeping a composed voice.

"What is it?"

"Well, ehm...”

"Come on, tell me what's wrong!" She was clearly uneasy now.

"I-I think Twilight's spell is... working... partially."

"Wh-What? How... I mean, 'partially'?"

"Oh! Don't tell me your front tail transformed too!" My mind took several seconds to completely process what she just said.

But she didn't wait for me to start laughing.

She was laughing so loudly I thought she would scare Rarity.

"HARR HARRR HAARRRRRR! This is sooooo funny!"

What the fuck was that?! Is it too late? Maybe I corrupted their entire world when I entered or something...

Emmet, send me a sign please.

"Come on, don't be grumpy! It was a good one, admit it." I could nearly see her self-confident grin shine through the door.

"Well, kinda... But that doesn't help me in any way." Changing the subject.

Thumbs up Max.

"You're no fun. So, what's the problem then?"

"W-Well... I was under the shower and my hands... Suddenly transformed."

"Transformed? In what?"

"In hooves."

"Oh... So, what's the matter?"

"W-... I have hooves. HOOVES. No more hands, with fingers, just... Hooves."

"Okay... Let me see. I'm comin’ in." She slowly pushed the door open.

"N-NO!" I forcefully shut the door closed using my back.

"W-What was that for?! Let me see!"

"No way."

"Why?!" She was getting impatient and was trying to push the door open once more.

"I'm kinda bare-assed now..."

She immediately stopped her skirmish with the doorknob.

"J-Just put something on then!"

"I'd like to. Oh god knows I tried to." I sighed.

"But that's the problem. How do you use these things?! It's... It's just HOOVES! How can you grab something with these... Things?! I really don't get how this world works."

I really don't get how I got myself in this sort of situation.

I'll write a fic once I come back.

"I can't even scratch my back anymore!" She snickered.

"That makes you laugh heh?! Good thing, but it doesn't help me. I can't even loop a towel around me!"

"I still can come in and-"

"No way! I'll do it with my teeth if I must to! Even if it takes me the day to do it."

I let go of the door to try to loop a towel again.

She giggled again.

"Maybe, but we have to talk to Twilight about your hooves as soon as possible. It could get bad if you stay in there too long..."

"Maybe but..."

It's true that it could get out of control.

And I just can't do shit without my hands.

"Come on, don't be so shy. It can't be THAT terrible, I mean, I've already saw porn magz and all."

"Wh-What?! You have porn here too?!"

Okay, so they DO have sexual organs...

"Here I come!" She slammed the door open.

"W-Wait!"

I had just enough time to turn around.

"Wow, you really have hooves!"

"Y-Yeah... J-Just get on with it."

"Oh, but of course." What was that tone?!

She grabbed the towel and approached me.

"Your back was itching, right?" Her hoof softly scraped against my back.

"J-Just loop that damn towel!"

Her hoof is so soft. God.

She snickered before moving her muzzle inches away from my right ear.

"Come on! I'm just trying to help..." Her whisper made my ear twitch and I couldn't help but gasp at the surprise.

"You're quite beefy... Are all humans like that?" She wasn't stopping her rubbing.

"I-I'm not that beefy... I-I'm not skinny either, but there're peoples who are like... Two times larger than me."

"That's enough; i-i-it's not itching anymore..."

I'm not sure if she was even listening to me.

"I'm sure your muscles feels sore after having slept so much..." She was still whispering in my ear.

She was pushing her hooves in the flesh of my back, massaging my shoulders and circling around before sliding them down my arms.

A wail escaped my mouth.

She giggled.

"I didn't think you'd be so sensitive."

I wasn't looking at her, but I could feel her grin in my back.

She was having fun.

I was having a hard time focusing on what to say or on how to get out of here.

More precisely, I couldn't focus on anything but her hooves sliding on my skin.

My heart was hammering in my chest, and I could feel the blood rushing through my veins.

No way! Not this. It's just a pony for fuck's sake!

This is bad. This is fucking bad.

I was doing my best to hide my hardening boner.

"O-Okay, I think you had your fun, i-it's enough now." I was mumbling and shaking.

Well, it's not like I wasn't having fun too. Far from it.

But...

"Oh, but you teased me so much earlier, ever heard of 'give and take'?" I groaned as I felt her hooves sliding down my waist.

She gave a soft tug at my tail.

The surprise made me gasp.

"D-D-Don't pull my rear tail!"

"Oh..." She positioned herself beside my ear once again, pushing her whole body against my back.

"Does that mean I can pull your front one?" Her sultry tone nearly made me wail.

I was feeling powerless.

"D-Dash! Stop here! Please. It's too much."

She couldn't suppress her chuckles anymore.

"Okay..."

She looped my waist with the towel using her legs.

"I'm already having a hard time looping your entire body, if you don't move your arms I won't be able to do it at all."

"O-Oh, sorry." I slowly pushed my hooves away, leaving my member freely pointing upwards.

She was pressing herself against me, struggling with the width of my hips.

The moment she started to draw her hooves closer, I knew what was going to happen.

She bumped into it.

More than this, she grabbed it and I gasped, once more.

My body reacted on its own, bucking my hips forward slightly.

"D-D-DASH! What are you doing?!"

"I-I'm sorry! I didn't know it was your-"

"J-Just loop it in front and make the knot behind me!" I wasn't yelling. Not really yelling. Just saying loudly.

She did so in silence.

"I-I'm sorry, I didn’t want to upset you..." She said softly, while she landed behind me.

"It got a bit too far, I don't know why I did that..."

"I-I'm not upset! I'm... I-I don't know!" I groaned loudly.

I can't be upset about something like this.

I'm a man after all.

But I couldn't find the courage to turn around to face her.

"You're a pony. And I'm not. It's already hard for me to believe something like that would be possible, and here you are... Oh god."

"I'm... I'm just scared. Scared that next time you would do something like that, I wouldn't find the strength to stop you..." I sighed heavily.

"I can't believe what I'm saying... I'm so going in hell for this." I chuckled.

I still could feel my heart beating like crazy.

I rubbed my eyes and my forehead to clear my mind using my hooves.

Fucking hooves.

She grabbed my right hoof and pulled me out of the room.

She was blushing madly.

"Y-You got new clothes to try!"

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The bell of the boutique rang.

"Oh, my, I forgot to place the closed sign." She whispered while making her way to the main room.

"I am very sorry, but the boutique is actually closed." Fluttershy was there.

"Oh, it is you darling, I am sorry but the spa will need to wait a-" She stopped as she approached her friend.

The cream coated pegasus looked terrorized. She was tackled against the wall, looking through the window, seeming worried something would come after her.

"Fluttershy? Are you okay dear?" Rarity said, closing the distance with her friend.

"O-Ohhh Rarity, I'm so happy to see you! T-T-There is a monster running in town!" Rarity raised an eyebrow in surprise.

"A monster?" Rarity asked.

"Yes! He's very big and very tall! And he walk on two legs and he have blood all over his chest! Oh, I hope he didn't harmed anypony..." Fluttershy was clearly horrified at these words.

"And I heard it kidnapped Dashie! We have to look for her!" The usual shyness of her tone was gone.

Rarity chuckled.

"A monster? walking on two legs?"

"What's so funny? Dashie may be in danger right now! You shouldn't laugh... If you don't mind..." Fluttershy's tone was back.

"Oh, darling, don't worry! That 'monster' is-" Rarity stopped as she saw Fluttershy's eyes flashing open and glaring at something behind her.

"What is it?" Fluttershy pointed her hoof to the backroom before taking off in that direction right away.

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I was still following her, my right hoof squeezed by hers.

I couldn't calm my heartbeats.

Nor my mind.

What with all these situations?!

We started to go down the stairs.

The moment my foot got off of the last stair, a loud noise caught my attention.

I turned to my right to meet a shouting Fluttershy.

"YAAAAAAAYYYYY!" I didn't have the time to dodge her, the shock knocked the air out of my guts.

I fell backwards, instinctively grabbing her in my fall.

I opened my eyes and lifted myself up, slowly recovering from the fall.

"What was that?!"

An angry Fluttershy was sitting on my legs.

"D-D-Don't you even dare touch my friend you thug!" She was intensively staring me.

Oh god, is that 'the stare'?

Or not? At least it doesn't seem to work.

I chuckled.

"Ohhh there, I'm no thug! I swear." I lifted my hooves in the air to show my surrendering.

"Fluttershy! What was that for?! It's Max!"

Fluttershy stare lost intensity.

"What? B-But I thought you got kidnapped and that you were in danger..."

"Dang! Don't charge peoples like that! That's my job! You could've hurt him! Or yourself!" Dash stomped the ground using a hoof to add weight to her scolding.

"Eep!" Fluttershy jumped off of me.

"Damn Shy'!" Fluttershy ‘eeped’ once again, crouching and hiding herself behind her hooves.

"Don't blame the poor thing too hard, it isn't her fault." Rarity commented.

"Not her fault?! She even shouted before hitting him!"

"I don't mean that, but this seems to be the word around town. That you've been kidnapped by a strange monster walking on two legs and covered in blood."

"W-What?! But, it's his own blood! And I was the one pulling him around town! And he's not a monster, he's weird but he's not that scary! Why would somepony say something like th-.... Bonbon! I'm sure it's Bonbon! I swear I'm gonna slap that b-"

It's getting out of hand.

"Dash! Don't worry! I'm okay, it's fine, everything's cool. Nobody got hurt or anything. Don't be angry about something so pointless." I smiled to support my case.

"But she charged you!"

"She's not even weighing half of mine. I couldn't be hurt by something like that."

"I"m a hero after all." I grinned madly while looking at her.

She just huffed before pouting and looking aside.

I chuckled.

Rarity suppressed a laugh too, and Fluttershy was only watching me with a worried eye, still hid behind her hooves.

I smiled to try to reassure her.

"Okay, I have to try these new clothes then."

I stood up using a dummy on my right.

"Where do-" I felt the fabric slide along my skin.

Shit!

I tried to catch it in time but it was too late.

The arousal coming from Dash's massage haven't decreased one bit, and my phallus was proudly bouncing towards the firmament.

I lifted my head to check how deep in shit I actually was.

Rarity was softly clearing her throat while calmly looking around.

Fluttershy ‘eeped’ when my stare met hers.

And Rainbow was grinning, an eyebrow suggestively raised.

Right up my eyeballs.

I turned around and got behind the dummy to hide my lower parts.

"I-I'm sorry..." What the fuck was that?!

It's not a fucking cartoon!

Does lady luck hate me or something? Maybe I'm haunted?

"I-I didn't mean to expose myself like that..."

"Would you mind...?"

Rarity cleared her throat once again.

"O-Oh, but of course darling! Come on girls."

Fluttershy was still blushing furiously but got up and followed her friend.

But Dash stayed there, proudly grinning.

"So... You really liked my massage heh?"

"J-Just get out of here!"

"Okayyy..." She said playfully, before exiting the room.

I hope I'll be able to put those damn clothes on...

I won't survive another massage from her.

I looked around and found the new clothes Rarity just made on a table not far from the dummy.

It took me several minutes, but I still managed to put everything on.

Everything was exactly the same.

Well, it felt lighter, and the colors were a bit different, but still.

Well, nearly everything.

Why does Rarity have to be so pointy on these details?!

I couldn't zip the fly nor button up my jeans.

Fuck you Mr. jeans.

I can't walk like that!

She's going to tease me again...

I can SMELL IT.

"D-Dashie? Can you come here a sec please?"

She slowly stepped inside the room.

"What is it?"

"W-Well... I need a hand here. I mean, a hoof." I can't believe I'm asking that.

I'm feeling like a five years old kid.

She trotted to me.

"How?"

I pointed my fly with my right hoof.

I guess I was blushing because her grin from earlier was back.

"I-I just can't zip it nor button it up without my hands..."

I just can't look at her when she wears that expression.

"Oh, sure..." She placed her front hooves on my waistband.

She then slowly moved her head forward and grabbed the end of the fly using her teeth.

I gasped at the sight and she chuckled.

After having zipped the fly, she looked up at me and buttoned my jeans without even looking.

How does...

"W-Were you forced to use your mouth?" I just can't look.

"Why? It was easier that way!"

"T-Thank you anyway."

I peeked and she was still glaring at me.

"W-What is it? What do you want? I-I said thanks!"

My heart was starting to pound again.

And I know it's not by arousal this time.

I looked again, and she wasn't grinning anymore. Just warmly smiling.

My arm moved on its own and I started to stroke her cheek using my hoof.

She slightly pushes back against my touch.

"L-Let's go."

I force myself to look towards the entry room before letting her go.

"W-We're expected."

She just grunted and rolled her eyes before following me.

I'm sorry Dash but...

Is it unhealthy?

Is it wrong? Why...

Fuck.

We got to the main room.

"Oh! Splendid! It seems to fit perfectly..." Rarity eyed me up and down.

Fluttershy was still dodging my eyes.

I can't blame her...

"Yeah! Thank you very much Rarity! They're just perfect!"

I approached Fluttershy.

"We didn't have proper introductions." I smiled, trying to reassure her.

It wasn't working of course.

I don't hate Fluttershy, but she's really... Too shy.

"My name's Max."

"Um... I'm Fluttershy..." But she's still kinda adorable.

"It's a pleasure, Fluttershy."

"Okay, it's getting late. We're on our way!" She dashed through the front door.

Several seconds later, she popped her head in the door.

"What are you waiting? We need to see Twilight!"

I looked at my hooves.

"O-Oh yeah, I'm coming."

I turned back before getting out.

"It's been a pleasure. And thank you again for the clothes."

I tried to bow but Dash grabbed my arms and pulled me out.

Author's note: Okay, I tried to do things slowly again, I don't know if that worked but I think I like it.

Also, I tried to put some third persons in it while talking about Max, because it's sometimes easier to explain things that way.

And some other times I need to talk in first person again...

It's pretty weird but I hope it didn't bother any of you.

Thanks again for reading!

Reworked on 25/10

Author's note²: Oh god.

I'm so going in hell for writing all of this.

Was it a bit too early for the story?

Damn, it's so hard to judge oneself.

• I removed the third person thing.

I’ll still put 3rd person with scenes without Max, but adding a 3rd dimension WITH Max was kinda weird.

And, I’m not sure about this sentence “I lifted my head to check how deep in shit I actually was.”

If someone could help me with this.

Thanks again everyone!