Chapters For about 2 months, I've been thinking of creating a sequel to Human of a Pony. Clearly, since it was my first story, it was badly written. Like, how it's typed. But, I'm remaking the story. But, enough of that. What you will read will be the sequel to HoaP.
If you think it's good, great.
If you think it's bad...meh.
Also, sometimes, in my stories, the first chapter won't always be good, so prepare for the cheesy writing ahead.
Enjoy.
Edit 4/12/15: This story is very old. Prepare for a cheesy mess of a story. But don't worry. I'll remake this story soon, and its original.
Chapter I: Good Morning
It was a calm morning on July 2, 2011. In the rock-made house in Ghastly Gorge, a certain, blue earth pony, and a shy, yellow pegasus were sleeping together in a bed.
Fluttershy was the first one to awaken, from the beautiful sounds of chirping birds. She turned around to see Thunder Ice still sleeping.
She giggled and blushed by how he looked. He looked so cute to her. She reached a hoof to him, and gently shook him.
"W-wakey, wakey," she calmly said to him. Thunder just slowly turned and twisted. She giggled again.
Her giggle was enough to slowly wake him up. "Huh?" Thunder looked up a little to see Fluttershy looking at him, giggling.
"Well, good morning," he said to her, smiling. "Had a good sleep?"
"Oh, y-yes. It was a r-really good sleep. Th-thanks to you." Fluttershy blushed after saying that.
"Hehehe...well, I slept well, too. With your good thinking, that is." The whole sex thing was her and Twilight's idea.
Wait...Twilight.
Thunder looked to where Twilight was just last night, but she wasn't there. Thunder figured she went back to the library.
"Huh." He looked back to Fluttershy. "Well, since we're awake, you wanna have some breakfast?"
"Oh, yes. I'm s-so hungry." She then began to rub her tummy, making Thunder D'awww in his mind.
The two slowly got out of bed, and began to walk out the door to downstairs, when Fluttershy spoke up again.
"W-wait!" she yelled out, making Thunder flinch slightly. He turned back to her.
"What is it?"
"U-umm, m-maybe we should s-shower first." Fluttershy blushed instantly.
Thunder smelled himself, and found out he still smelled from last night's 'party'. "Oh, right. Hehehe..."
The two headed into the bathroom, and closed the door. Thunder walked over to the bathtub, and turned the knob. Water came splashing into the tub.
Thunder moved aside. "Ladies first," he said while smiling. Fluttershy blushed and walked into the tub. Thunder went in after her. He then closed the door of the tub.
He looked back to Fluttershy and saw her beautiful body, wet and shiny. Her mane had fallen over her face and she tried getting it out of the way, making him chuckle. He walked in front of her and moved it from her face.
"Th-thank you," she said to him, smiling.
"No problem, my sweet mare." He leaned to her and slowly and gently pulled her in for a kiss. The two sat there in the water, kissing, their tongues exploring each other's mouths. The two then slowly pulled away.
Thunder grabbed a bar of soap, and gently began to scrub Fluttershy's soft, but wet body. Fluttershy closed her eyes as she felt the soap, and Thunder's hooves exploring her body. Eventually, she felt Thunder behind her, and wrap his forelegs around her, making them both stand up on their hind legs.
Fluttershy, this time, turned her head around and leaned in for another kiss. Thunder was surprised for half a second, but enjoyed it instantly. To make things more pleasurable, Thunder began to rub his hooves around her body again, making Fluttershy moan inside his mouth.
Then, slowly, he began to lower his hooves, until he reached her belly. He rubbed it slowly, causing her to moan louder, this time.
Again, he lowered them, to the point where he lowered them to between her nether region. He felt the lips of her femslit, and slowly began to rub one hoof up and down. Fluttershy gasped, causing her to break the kiss, and moan again, but shaky.
Thunder chuckled, and continued to rub her slit. Then, he began to see himself getting an erection. He chuckled, and decided to play with her for a moment. He took his erection, and slid it between her nethers, making it touch her slit, causing her to moan loudly.
"O-oh....my..." Fluttershy moaned. Thunder decided it was time to stop teasing her. Very slowly, he began to insert his member into Fluttershy's slit, causing her to gasp, this time louder.
After he inserted it, he took it out, and then slowly re-inserted it. He began to thrust it in and out of her. At this moment, Fluttershy began to pant hard.
Thunder rubbed Fluttershy's body with one hoof, while using his other hoof to rub her pussy as he penetrated her.
After penetrating her for a minute, he saw her clitoris begin to appear. He took his free hoof, and began rubbing her clitoris furiously.
"Ah! Ooh! That's...Hahh! It's....S-so...goood!" Fluttershy stuttered from the pleasure.
After a few more minutes of penetration, Thunder whispered into Fluttershy's ear. "I can't hold it any longer. I'm gonna cum."
"M-me...t-too..." she whispered back, still stuttering.
A few more moments later, Thunder slowed down his thrusting, and released his seed into Fluttershy's womb, causing her to cum as well. Just as she was about to scream, Thunder leaned his head quickly to hers, and kissed her deeply, stifling her screams and cries of pleasure.
Fluttershy's juices erupted from her slit, falling to the shower floor. Thunder's seed erupted from his stallionhood, into Fluttershy's womb.
After their orgasms died down, the two continued to pant for a few minutes, before Thunder slowly pulled himself out of her, causing his cum to drip from her love hole, going down the drain.
"U-uh...m-maybe we should clean up," Fluttershy replied, panting a little bit.
"Well, that should be easy," Thunder replied, panting, but chuckling.
Eventually, the two began to clean each other off with the soap they had dropped, and rubbed each other's mane with shampoo, like a couple.
After cleaning each other off, the two got out of the shower, and dried themselves off with towels. Thunder looked at Fluttershy drying herself off. She looked up to see him looking at her, and blushed, causing him to chuckle.
After drying off, the two came out of the bathroom, and proceeded downstairs. They were greeted by the smell of...well, pancakes.
Once they were downstairs, they headed to the dining room to see the table in there containing two, no, three plates of pancakes, topped syrup, and with a glass of milk on the side.
Thunder was even more surprised to see that the breakfast was made by none other than Twilight Sparkle, who was sitting at the table, eating her pancakes.
Twilight had noticed us enter the dining room, and looked up, smiling. She gulped down the piece of a pancake in her mouth.
"*gulp* Well, good morning, you two," Twilight spoke, smiling.
"Uhh, hi, Twilight," Thunder replied. He looked at the table again, and back at her. "Did you make this?"
"Uh-huh. You like it?" she asked, still smiling.
Thunder sat down in a seat where one of the plates were. He picked up a fork with his hoof, which was fairly easy, even though he didn't have any fingers.
He took a piece of a pancake, and placed it into his mouth. He chewed on it for a few seconds, and swallowed it. The amazing taste flowed through his mouth, literally hypnotizing him with it's deliciousness.
"Oh...my...Celestia! This is amazing!" Thunder yelled, causing both Twilight and Fluttershy to giggle.
"Glad you like it," Twilight replied.
Eventually, Fluttershy began to eat her pancakes. A few minutes later, after the three finished their food, Twilight was getting up to go wash the dishes, when Thunder stopped her.
"Don't worry, Twilight. I got it," he said to her.
"Alright." Twilight smiled. Thunder grabbed the rest of the dishes, and headed to the sink. He washed the plates and forks, and placed them on a rack.
Then, all of a sudden, a scroll appeared in front of Twilight. "Huh?" She picked up the scroll, and read it.
Twilight, I need you to head to Canterlot for an important talk. You are not in any kind of trouble.
Your faithful teacher, Princess Celestia
"I have to go, Thunder," Twilight said with a little bit of disappointment.
"Alright. I guess I'll see you later, then."
"Bye," Twilight said before running up to Thunder, and planting a kiss on his lips. The kiss lasted a few seconds, and Twilight began moaning. Fluttershy saw this, and quickly blushed while smiling.
Twilight released her lips from Thunder's, and trotted out of Thunder's home.
After Twilight left, Thunder sat there, dazed from the kiss. Slowly, he shook himself out of his daze.
Fluttershy giggled at what he did. "S-so, uhh, wh-what should we do while she's g-gone?" she asked.
Thunder rubbed his chin, thinking. "Hmm. I know, how about a picnic?"
"Ooh, that sounds wonderful." Fluttershy then looks at a clock hanging on the wall. "Oh, but, it's only 11:30. And, we just had breakfast."
"Oh, right." Thunder began to think of something else until it was actually time for a picnic.
"How 'bout we go around town for a bit?" he asked.
"Oh, yes. I love walks."
"Well, then..." Thunder said, reaching out a hoof, "Shall we?"
Fluttershy blushed. "Okay."
She headed over to him, and held her hoof out to him. He held hers, and the two walked to the door, holding hooves, but let go, due to losing balance.
Thunder chuckled, and Fluttershy giggled. After their giggles and laughs, the two headed out to Ponyville to meet the rest of the Mane Six.
Tired and bored. I will be updating tomorrow. Also, terribly sorry for the clop scene in the middle. I promise, if I make another story with many chapters, the sex scene will be later, or there won't be any...but there will be a few in this one.
If you are tired of clop scenes, scroll down, mah boi.
I'm outie. 'till next time.
This chapter basically focuses on the picnic. But, at the end of the chapter, there will be some hint to the rest of the story....or something.
Here's the chapter.
Chapter II: The Picnic
12:45 p.m.
Thunder's P.O.V. (will be for rest of story)
After we walked through town for a while, Fluttershy and I headed upwards to a hill that overlooked Ponyville.
Fluttershy flew up, but I walked up, holding the basket on my back. "Man, I wish I was a pegasus," I said to myself.
Once I reached the top, I lowered the basket to the ground, and sat next to it. I then opened it, and took out many foods, including sandwiches and cupcakes, thanks to Pinkie Pie.
Once I got all of the food out of the basket, I looked up to Fluttershy, who was standing towards the direction of Ponyville.
"O-Oh, my..." I heard her say. I stood up and headed over to her to see what she was staring at. My eyes widened.
We could see lots of the land beyond Ponyville. We could see Canterlot on the mountain-side, and we could see every single square inch of Ponyville. I could even see Cloudsdale.
"I-It's beautiful," I heard Fluttershy add.
"It sure is. But...not as beautiful as you," I replied to her, causing her to blush once more. We stared at the scenery for another minute, before I spoke up again.
"Well, miss, how about we dine now?" I asked in a fancy tone, causing Fluttershy to giggle.
"A-alright," she replied, smiling and giggling still.
We headed back over to the picnic blanket I placed onto the ground minutes ago. We sat down, and Fluttershy grabbed a sandwich with hay and cheese on it. I grabbed a sandwich with lettuce and tomato, adding some cheese on top.
We ate our sandwiches, eyeing each other at some points. After a few minutes, we finished our sandwiches, and had some chips. After eating the chips, we grabbed napkins, and wiped our mouths clean.
"O-oh my, I'm very full," I heard Fluttershy say. I looked up to see her rubbing her bloated tummy, which made me D'awww on the inside.
"But, are you full for..." I paused while taking the basket, and opening it, revealing cupcakes, pumpkin cakes, cookies, and much more, "...Dessert?"
I saw Fluttershy begin to lick her lips at the sight. "Oh...my..."
I chuckled. As Fluttershy laid down on her side on the picnic blanket, I took out a cupcake with frosting the same color as Rainbow Dash's mane.
The cupcake was in my hoof now, and I slowly lowered it to Fluttershy. I tilted the cupcake sideways, the frosting aiming at her. Once it reached her mouth, she slowly stuck her tongue out a little, and began to lick the frosting. I was rotating the cupcake, so that way, she could get all of the frosting.
She began to moan for some reason as she "collected" the frosting. For some reason, her moaning began to turn me on. Some sexual thoughts began to flow through my mind, but I quickly tossed the thoughts out. Trust me, getting an erection right here might ruin this picnic...or will it? Yeah, it will.
After she got all the frosting off, I slowly moved the cupcake away from her mouth. I could see her swallowing all of the frosting. Dayum.
After she swallowed all of it, I chuckled, then, lowered my head to her's. I placed my lips onto hers for a brief moment or two.
I then pulled away, causing Fluttershy to blush and giggle. Then, suddenly, she opened her wings, and flew onto me. I was a bit surprised for only a moment, but then I began to laugh as she giggled. After our little laugh, she implanted her lips onto mine.
It was longer than the previous kiss, about 10 seconds long. After our lips parted again, I looked into her eyes, as she looked back into mine. After a minute of staring into each other's eyes, I spoke up.
"I love you, Shy," I whispered to her.
"I-I love you, t-too, Thunder," she replied, blushing and smiling.
I smiled at her, then placed my lips onto hers. We stayed there for minutes, just kissing, hugging, loving each other.
It was the best picnic ever.
Canterlot Palace
Princess Celestia was sitting in her royal throne in the palace, when suddenly, the doors of the entrance opened.
"Princess Celestia! I got your letter!" Twilight Sparkle yelled as she entered the palace.
"Ahh, Twilight, you're here. I have some very good news to tell you. It is nothing that urgent," Celestia responded back.
"What is it?"
Celestia smiled. "It appears Fluttershy will be expecting something special very soon."
"Like what?"
"Well..."
Short, I know, but...this chapter was just focused on the picnic, with the scene at Canterlot. Nothing more. Like I said in Chapter I, there won't be any sex for possibly 2, maybe 3 chapters. Or, for dem clopperz, one in the next chapter.
Clopfics have POSSESSED MY SOUL!!
Now, before I go, I listened to The Brony Show at 10:00 p.m. tonight (May 7th), and there was a picture of Scootaloo...as a Seapony.
Now, I made a comment on there, "Damn, first Scootachicken, now, Scootaseapony?" Then, I saw something that looked like her and a potato mixed, and I instantly thought, "...Scootapotato."
Alright, enough of my randomness.
'Till next chapter, and remember!!! Stay outta mah shed.
OH, BOY! I'M SO EXCITED!! I'M SO EXCITED, I COULD CUM ALL OVER MY COMPUTER!!!!
...
Wait, what?
Uhh, forget what I said. But, yes, I am excited. You wanna know why? Well, fuck you! Trololol!
Just kidding. I will tell you why I'm so excited, but that will be at the end of this chapter. Also, I don't hate any of you. You are all mah children.
Okay, enough of my dumbass bitchiness. Enjoy.
Chapter III: The Grand Galloping Gala
After our picnic, and our fun, we headed to Fluttershy's home to check on the animals. Turns out, they've been keeping the house tidy while she was away.
"Good boy, Angel. Mama's so proud," Fluttershy said to the little bunny known as Angel, who was smiling in front of her.
"Aww. I love bunny rabbits. Who's a good little rabbit? Yes, you..." I spoke before Angel squinted his eyes at me. He then poked two of his fingers towards his eyes, then, to me, trying to signal that he was watching me.
I don't think I'm gonna like this bunny.
After we put away the picnic blanket, and put the basket in the kitchen, we heard a knock at Fluttershy's door. Since Fluttershy was assisting the animals at the moment, I decided to head to the door and open it.
I opened it to see Twilight, with a sheepish looking smile.
"Hey, Twi. You're back," I said to her.
"Hi," Twilight replied, before giving me a kiss on the lips. I blushed slightly, then spotted a satchel on her back.
"What's with the satchel?"
She looked back. "Oh, right. I almost forgot." She opened up the bag with her magic, and pulled out two tickets.
"What are those?"
"These are your tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala," she replied before handing me the two tickets. All of a sudden, Fluttershy had appeared next to me. I didn't even notice.
"Oh, the G-Grand Galloping Gala? Wh-when is it?" she asked Twilight.
"Tonight. Be ready," she replied before smiling.
"Hold on, are you coming, too?" I asked.
"Of course. I've got the others' tickets, as well."
"Wh-what should we wear?" Fluttershy asked.
"Just dress fancy. I gotta hurry and give the others their tickets. Bye," Twilight said, before kissing me again on the lips, and walking off.
I blushed and stood there, dazed again. Suddenly, I felt a tug on one of the tickets. I looked to see Fluttershy trying to grab her ticket. I chuckled and handed it to her. "Sorry 'bout that, Shy."
"I-it's okay."
Alright, time to dress fancy.
7:30 p.m. Canterlot
After we got ready, we hopped into a carriage and within about a half hour, we arrived at the Canterlot palace, all lit up for the Gala.
Once we were in front of the palace, we exited the carriage and entered the palace. Once inside, many other ponies were standing around, chatting with one another.
Eventually, I could see Princess Celestia walking towards us. As she neared us, she smiled at Fluttershy, Twilight, and I, for some reason.
"Why, hello, you three. Looks like you made it," she said to us.
"Hello, Princess Celestia," Twilight replied, smiling.
Celestia smiled at Twilight, then looked to me. "And, hello, Thunder. You're doing well, I assume?"
"Uhh, yes, Princess, I'm doing quite well, thank you," I replied, smiling as well.
Skipping a half hour of worthless bullshitting, dancing, and Pinkie doing whatever the hell she's doing
After about another 30 minutes, the lights in the palace dimmed as some lights focused to the stage. There, I stood. I told Fluttershy and Twilight I had a special surprise for them. Time to shine. No pun intended. You know, with the lights and...stuff.
There was a microphone placed onto the stage, and I calmly spoke into it.
"Hello, everypony. Tonight...I would like to sing a song for two very special mares here. This is for you two."
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I waited for the music to start. As it began, I sang the first five words of the song.
Let me be your hero...
I looked to Fluttershy and Twilight, who were smiling at me. I smiled back. I then began to sing once more.
Would you dance If I asked you to dance? Would you run And never look back? Would you cry If you saw me crying? And would you save my soul, tonight?
Would you tremble If I touched your lips? Would you laugh? Oh please tell me this. Now would you die For the one you loved? Hold me in your arms, tonight.
I can be your hero, baby. I can kiss away the pain. I would stand by you forever. You can take my breath away.
Would you swear That you'll always be mine? Or would you lie? Would you run and hide? Am I in too deep? Have I lost my mind? I don't care You're here tonight.
I can be your hero, baby. I can kiss away the pain. I would stand by you forever. You can take my breath away.
Oh, I just want to hold you. I just want to hold you. Am I in too deep? Have I lost my mind? I don't care You're here tonight.
I can be your hero, baby. I can kiss away the pain. I will stand by your forever. You can take my breath away.
I can be your hero. I can kiss away the pain. And I will stand by you forever. You can take my breath away. You can take my breath away. I can be...your hero...
Once I finished, the crowd of the palace cheered at my performance. I smiled, and bowed. I then walked off the stage and walked over to Fluttershy, who was smiling with tears in her eyes. Twilight was doing the same.
I walked over to them, and hugged both of them tightly. I whispered in both of their ears...
"I love you two...so much."
I heard them both sniffling.
"I love you, too," Twilight replied, her voice cracked.
"M-me, too," Fluttershy replied, her voice cracked as well.
Having these two mares with me right now, is the best thing that ever happened to me.
9:03 p.m. Thunder's home
The three of us, after saying goodbye to the others, headed back to my place and upstairs to my bedroom. The girls said they had something planned for me.
"Now just sit there, because we have a...special ...surprise for you," Twilight said before winking at me, and the two entered my bathroom, closing the door behind them.
After a few minutes, the door opened once more. The girls slowly walked out, wearing...Oh, sweet, merciful Celestia.
The girls were wearing french maid outfits. But, apparently, after reading some more of Twilight's books, they had called them Prench outfits. Y'know, from Prance.
"So, Thunder...Do you like them?" Twilight asked me with a sexy smirk.
I just sat there, blushing like crazy.
Fluttershy's wings were opened up, and she blushed as well. Twilight giggled. "Well, I see you like them pretty well."
She then looked down, causing me to look down as well. I had noticed that I was getting an erection from their little display.
Twilight walked over to me, and kneeled on her hind legs. She quickly extended her left foreleg out, and grabbed my member, causing me to gasp, only for it to be silenced by Fluttershy kissing me. My eyes widened, but slowly closed in pleasure.
As Fluttershy kissed me, Twilight began to stroke my member, causing me to moan in Fluttershy's mouth. My moans only got louder when Twilight placed my member into her mouth. She bobbed her head up and down on my erection, making some slurping sounds as she did.
As we kissed, my tongue had entered Fluttershy's mouth, and her tongue entered mine. Our tongues twirled and twisted around each other's, before I felt a sensation in my groin.
My lips separated from Fluttershy's lips. "T-Twilight, I-I'm g-gonna..." Before I could finish, Twilight placed her head down, and I released my seed into her mouth. I then heard gulping noises coming from her.
I sat there, panting as Twilight took her mouth off my erection. A trail of saliva and cum followed from my member to Twilight's purple lips.
I began to feel tired, that was until Twilight spoke up.
"Oh...you're not going to sleep, are you?" she asked me, staring at me with puppy eyes.
I chuckled. "With you two, I'm never tired."
She smirked sexily, and wiggled her flank in front of me, causing me to get hard again.
"U-uh...c-can I g-go first?" Fluttershy asked.
"Of course," I replied. Twilight looked at Fluttershy and smirked.
Fluttershy blushed and walked to me. Slowly, she began to flap her wings and hover over my member. She then descended onto me, causing her to blush more and squeal. Once she was fully on my shaft, she stopped flapping her wings.
I gently gripped her flanks, and slowly raised her up, before lowering her fast back down, causing her to squeal in pleasure. I did the same thing again, this time, faster. I repeated it over and over, fastening my pace, which made Fluttershy moan and squeal.
As I continued to thrust into her, Fluttershy laid her head onto my shoulder, and whispered into my ear.
"C-hah! C-could you-oh-sp-spank m-me? Hmmmm!" she managed to ask.
I smiled at her, and raised one of my hooves, and slapped her flank. Since I was a pony, I thought slapping with hooves would be painful, but Fluttershy was moaning, and literally screaming with pleasure.
I continued to slap her flank, and penetrate her marehood, until she let out one loud scream. Juices erupted from her marehood, leaking onto me, and the edge of my bed.
Her screams were enough to push me to the limit. I held her flanks tightly, and held her down as I released my seed deep into her womb. Her marehood squeezed and 'milked' my cock for every drop of cum it had.
We continued to pant for about half a minute, before I pulled myself out of Fluttershy, and laid her next to me. She soon began to snore, leaving me and Twilight, who was watching the whole time, hoofing herself.
"You ready for your turn?" I asked her, smirking.
She slowly opened her eyes, and stopped hoofing herself.
"Y-yes...p-please," she replied, literally moaning the response.
I then began to stroke my member covered with cum and Fluttershy's love juice, trying to get hard again.
"I've got a really good position," Twilight added. She then began to walk towards the wall of my bedroom, leaving a trail of her juices on the floor.
When she reached the wall, I already assumed what the position was.
After stroking for a few more seconds, I became hard again, and headed over to Twilight. Gently, I picked her up, and held her against the wall.
"You sure you're ready?" I asked one last time.
"Yeah. I'm ready."
I positioned my member with her marehood, and slowly began to slide it in. After ending her virginity 3 days ago, it was easy to slide into her.
What turned me on even more was that she moaned and squealed like a filly. (N-not the little fillies. Stinkin' Pedofoals....)
After I was fully inside her, I began to pump in and out of her, making her moan louder.
"T-Thunder..." she moaned.
After pumping into her for another minute, she moaned my name again.
"T-Thunder...spank me. Spank me like you spanked Fluttershy. Spank me like the dirty mare I am!" she yelled.
'Wow. Quite the naughty mare,' I thought to myself.
But, like Fluttershy, I answered her request. I raised my right hoof, and slammed it down onto her flank, causing her to squeal.
"Y-yes! Like that! Spank me again!" she yelled.
I smiled, and raised my hoof, and slammed it back down, but this time, when I spanked her, I thrusted into her harder.
"Oh, y-yes! Oooh!" she screamed. She then dug her face into my shoulder to prevent from screaming too loud.
After thrusting for some time, I felt the same orgasmic sensation in my loins again.
"T-Twilight, I'm g-gonna cum," I whispered into her ear.
"M-me, too," she replied.
I thrusted into her a few more times, hard, causing her to scream in absolute pleasure. I then made one, final, deep thrust, and released my seed into Twilight. Twilight's screams were muffed, and juices erupted from her onto the floor.
Once our orgasms were over, I slowly slid out of her, and carried her gently to the bed. I laid her down on the side. I got into the bed, and picked up Fluttershy. I then laid her next to me on the other side.
I felt exhaustion wash over me, but before I went to sleep, I looked at Fluttershy and Twilight, who had both fallen asleep. I kissed them both on the forehead.
"Goodnight, you two beautiful, sweet mares," I whispered into their ears. Finally, I fell asleep, resting for the next day.
Okay, you people remembered at the beginning of this chapter, saying I was excited? Well, here's why.
About around the beginning of May, I just heard that an Australian billionaire, named Clive Palmer, announced that he will make an exact, working replica of the R.M.S. Titanic.
*ULTIMATE SQUEE*
Yes, it's true. Google it if you don't believe me. Mr. Palmer announced that the Titanic II, as he calls it, will be ready for it's maiden voyage in 2016, and will set sail from England to New York, the same path as it's namesake.
Palmer said previous attempts to rebuild the Titanic failed because:
1: He didn't have the money.
But, now that he has the money, and a shipyard (in China), Palmer announced that the Titanic II will be ready for it's maiden voyage in 2016.
Also, there was a movie called Titanic II. Just...don't watch it. Save your money. But, I'll tell you one part of the movie that made me laugh.
There was a man running down the deck of the sinking ship. There were windows, and reflections IN the windows. Now, the ship is supposed to be sinking in the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. But, in the windows, you can clearly see the lights of Long Beach. Yes, they used the Queen Mary in some parts of the movie.
Just, don't watch the movie. Save your money, and save 90 minutes of your life.
Now, onto the story.
I just realized that Thunder had sex twice in the same day. Because, this chapter, and the previous two chapters, are the same exact day.
But, I promise, there won't be other clop scenes for a while. Trolololol.
Okay, I'm done. It's 2:20 a.m. here. Titanic...
Goodbye.
THE GAME
Hey, guys, sorry I haven't updated in a while. I've been busy...watching Minecraft videos, watching pony videos, and playing Mine Blocks, which is a 2D version of Minecraft. It's online and free. :D
Also, I've "come back to life" on Fanfiction, but, I'm not making a pony fic on there. I'm making one of Alvin and the Chipmunks.
...
What? They're awesome. Although, I've never seen the cartoon...I should check that out.
Anyway, enjoy this story nao. :3
Chapter IV: The Sex Pill
It had been already 4 whole months since I moved here. Well, about 16 weeks.
Anyway, as I was walking with Fluttershy yesterday, I noticed that her stomach seemed...a bit big. Could it be that...nah, she might just've put on a few pounds...
Dear Celestia, I'm a horrible pony.
At the moment, I'm sitting in my home, just chilling for the moment, when all of a sudden, Fluttershy comes in. I smile at her entrance, but my smile quickly faded when I saw her...crying.
"Fluttershy?" I asked her. "What's wrong?"
"T-thunder..." she replied. "D-do you love me?"
I smiled. "Of course I love you, Shy."
I walked up to her, and kissed her passionately on the lips for a few seconds. When I parted, I looked at her.
"Why would you think I didn't?"
"W-well..." Fluttershy walked over to the couch and sat down. I sat down next to her.
"I went to the doctor today, b-because of some stomach pains...a-and he said..." She was silent for a few moments.
"What did he say...?"
It was silent for a few more moments, before Fluttershy nearly began to cry again.
"...I'm...pregnant." She then buried herself into my chest, and cried.
I was stunned for a second, but quickly, I smiled.
"Fluttershy...that's great!" I exclaimed.
Fluttershy slowly stopped crying, and slowly looked up. "R-really?"
I looked at her, and wiped the tears from her eyes. "Of course. That's great news. Because...."
I leaned my face near hers. "Now...we can be a family." The most cheesiest thing I've said.
I then closed the gap between us and kissed her deeply. She closed her eyes, and eventually began to moan. I was pretty much almost laying on her, but was being careful not to hurt the still developing baby inside of her.
Twilight's Home
Twilight was still studying in her books, until she heard a knock at the door.
"Coming!" she yelled as she ran to the door. She opened it to reveal Fluttershy and I standing there.
"Thunder, Fluttershy, hi," Twilight said before smiling. "What's up?"
"Hey, Twi...I need to talk to you," I replied to her.
"O...kay, come in." Fluttershy and I walked in and sat down on Twilight's new couch.
"What is it?" Twilight asked me.
It was silent for a few seconds before I spoke up. "Fluttershy's pregnant."
Twilight's eyes widened for a moment, before she began to giggle.
"What?" I asked, confused. I'd thought Twilight would be a little upset, but she was giggling. That's good, right?
"I already know."
"How?" I asked stupidly. I should keep my mouth shut.
"Well, for instance, Fluttershy's belly." Fluttershy smiled and held her slowly growing belly. Twilight continued.
"And, the fact that the Princess told me about it," she finished. She then froze for a moment, before frowning. Her ears dropped down.
"You still love me too, right?" she asked me, her voice filled with sadness.
I smiled. "Of course, I love you, Twi. I love both of you, and nothing, not even a baby, will change that."
Suddenly, the clock struck 2:40 p.m.
"Oh, my!" Fluttershy exclaimed, "I promised Angel I'd go on a picnic with him! I gotta go!"
Fluttershy then flew towards the door, but kissed me first before leaving.
"She seems to be flying slower," Twilight said.
"That's probably one thing that isn't fun while pregnant, having trouble flying." I replied. Twilight giggled. She then spotted something in my fur pocket.
"What's that?" she asked.
I looked to where she was looking, and took the object out of my pocket. It was a small pill of some sort.
"What's with the pill?"
"Well, Rainbow said you've been having some headaches, so I went to the store to get something, hoping it will help." I then handed it to her.
"Here."
"Thank you," she replied, and placed the pill in her mouth. She then swallowed it.
She seemed fine for a moment, and then, for some reason, her face began to turn red, and her backside hunched up.
*some of this was part of Rape Train's story on pastebin.*
"Twilight?" I asked, completely confused and afraid of what was happening to her.
Her backlegs were moving about uncontrollably. She then began to bite a pillow on the couch, trying to suppress her cries.
"Twilight, what's happening?!" I asked, completely afraid.
I saw her rubbing her marehood with one of her hooves.
Suddenly, Twilight began to laugh insanely.
"Twi?" I asked, afraid of what was happening.
She quickly turned her head towards me. "Ooh! You better be ready to have some fun! 'Cause here's TWILEY!"
"Wait!" I yelled. She lunged at me and tackled me to the floor. She instantly moved her head down to my stallionhood.
"Nice...big...PERFECT!" She yelled, and quickly placed my stallionhood into her mouth, sucking very...very fast. She still somehow managed to keep my hooves pinned. Damn, she's strong. Pinned down by a mare. I'm so pathe-Ahh!
I felt my orgasm hit, and Twilight removed her mouth from my member, and I released squirt after squirt of cum onto her face.
"I'm not finished juuust yet!" She yelled as she hopped onto me. My member was still hard.
"Don't get soft on me, now!" Twilight laughed crazily again. What the fuck kind of pill did Rainbow give me!
She then forcely sat completely on my member. I was all the way inside her. She didn't even flinch, she just giggled crazily like some insane fuckhead at the loony bin.
I moaned as she sat on me. I was still very sensitive from cumming seconds ago. Instantly, she began moving up and down very fast. Her insides felt like a furnace. It was literally burning my member.
I swear I'm going to kill Rainbow when I find her. Or make her feel what Twilight is feeling. Either pain, pleasure, or both.
Suddenly, I gasped and held Twilight down as my second orgasm hit me. I released my cum into her once more. Twilight let out a scream of pleasure and crazy giggle, just before passing out.
My mind was a complete blur. What the hell just happened?
So many things happened in less than a few minutes. First, I give Twilight a pill. Then, she has some kind of sexual seizure. Now, I'm cumming inside her.
My mind was still fuzzy. When it calmed, Twilight gained consciousness.
"O-oh...what happened?" She then noticed me laying on the floor. She could feel me inside of her.
"Th-Thunder...what's going on...?" She asked, confused.
"I...honestly have no idea...but when I find Rainbow...She is dead. But, first...I think we should clean up," I replied, looking at the mess we made.
"Oh. Okay." Twilight then got off, my member being exposed to the cool air. But, I got up and cleaned the floor. Then, Twilight and I headed up to the shower to wash off. I explained everything to her.
"RAINBOW DASH!" Twilight's yell echoed through the house.
WORST. CHAPTER. EVER. But, that's what I get for being up at 3 in the morning. Oh, well, better just look at some porn and clop before I go to bed.
So, yeah, my birthday was 2 days ago. H4pp1 B1rthd4y t0 m3! :D
Okay, I'm done. I might change this chapter later.
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Telling the girls (and seeing their reactions)
Hey, everypony. Sorry I haven't updated in a while. I've been too busy playing....
M I N E C R A F T !!
That's right, using my money to buy the points, I finally got Minecraft for my Xbox 360. *squee* I built a boat the first few days after getting the game, then I built a cobble wall around it, and filled it with water, thus sinking the boat. I made a larger ship a few days ago, and soon, I will be sending that underwater, as well.
Once the adventure update comes sometime in July, I'm updating dat bitch! :3
Okay, I'm getting off topic here. But, yes, that's why I was gone these past couple of weeks. Sorry to keep you waitin. Anyway, here's the chapter.
Chapter V: Telling the girls (and seeing their reactions)
(Yes, the girls will always group there, why? Because it's fucking Sugarcube Corner! >:D)
As the others sat in Sugarcube Corner, eating some of Pinkie's delicious cupcakes, Twilight and I walked in.
"Well, howdy, you two," Applejack said to us. She then noticed Fluttershy was missing. "Hey, where's Fluttershy?"
"She's having a picnic with Angel," I replied. "Oh, and Rainbow Dash."
"Yeah?"
I took out the rest of the pills and held them out. "I believe you gave us the wrong pills."
She gasped. "Hey, those are my sex dru-uh, I m-mean, p-pain pills." She blushed. I chuckled and handed her the "pills". I then saw Twilight shoot a glare at Rainbow, making her nervously smile.
"Oh, and girls, I have some great news!" I added.
"Like what, darling?" Rarity asked.
"Fluttershy's pregnant." I grinned. Twilight smiled.
Suddenly, Pinkie burst in.
"Ooh! Did I hear Fluttershy was pregnant! Does that mean you're gonna have a boy foal! Or a girl! Because I wanna make a party just for you two! And I should also make some cupcakes, and cookies, and cakes, and brownies, and muffins, and all sorts of food for the baby-waby! And, I'll make a banner, that'll say, "Happy baby shower, Thunder and Fluttershy!" And everypony will be invited, and it'll be the biggest-!"
She was cut off when Rainbow covered her mouth with her hoof. But, accidentally, she ended up making Pinkie swallow two of the sex-me-up pills.
"Uh-oh," Rainbow said out loud.
"What?" I asked.
And, just like what happened to Twilight, Pinkie's rear end hunched up, and she started panting and moaning loudly. She also rubbed her marehood, as well. Applejack, Rarity, Twilight, and Rainbow blushed at the site of Pinkie hoofing herself.
I facehoofed. "You gave her the drug, didn't you?" I looked at Dash, with a little bit of frustration.
She smiled nervously at me, still blushing. Pinkie then looked up and looked straight at me.
"Party party party! All mine!" She yelled very fast, before jumping straight at me.
"Pinkie?" I asked before she tackled me to the ground, and began to furiously kiss me. I grabbed both of her shoulders, and managed to remove her lips from mine.
"Pinkie, stop!" I yelled.
"Ooh! You don't want kissy kissy?! Oh, well!" She began to laugh crazily, and lowered herself down to my stallionhood.
"Nice and big, just for Pinkie!" she yelled just as she began to put me in her mouth. When suddenly, a purple beam shot at Pinkie, and instantly, she was out cold.
I sighed, then quickly gasped and moaned. I looked at my member, and saw that Pinkie passed out, with my member inside her warm mouth. The feeling felt great, and after cumming minutes ago from the other incident, I was still sensitive, but tried my best not to cum inside Pinkie's mouth.
Suddenly, a purple aura covered Pinkie, and lifted her off me, and onto the floor. My member was wet from Pinkie's saliva, and cold from the air.
"Th-thank you, Twilight," I said as I looked at Twilight. When I looked at her, her ears were down, and she was blushing. I looked at the others and they were all blushing, as well. I then remembered my stallionhood was still standing tall in front of them.
"Uhh, girls?" I said. They looked up at me. They then quickly apologized. I just chuckled.
"So, when's yer baby comin'?" Applejack asked.
"Well, depending on the last time her and I...well, did it, and that a pony is pregnant for 11 months, that gives us 7 months to prepare."
Suddenly, I flinched.
"Are you alright?" Twilight asked.
"Sorry, I keep thinking Pinkie's gonna suddenly wake up and say something about the baby." I looked to where she slept.
"Because, you never know when she will wake-" I was shocked to see that she wasn't there.
I looked all around. She was no where. "Where'd she go?"
I then shrugged. She's somewhere. I know it. "She'll probably turn up somewhere. Anyway..."
"YAY! 7 MONTHS!"
"AAH!!" I screamed as I fell to the floor. Behind me, Pinkie stood tall, then began to hop around.
"OOH! I need to get some...Party favors! Eee-hee-hee! " She then bounced out the door, leaving all of us in confusion.
"I'm not even gonna question her," I said.
Then, I decided something. If Pinkie's going to have a party for Fluttershy and I, maybe I should give Fluttershy and Twilight a present. They're gonna burst with tears, I know it. Tears of joy, that is.
"Well, I gotta go, girls. I need to get something for Fluttershy." I then looked to Twilight. "And, don't think I forgot about you, Twi. It's also for you."
She giggled and slowly kissed me. After we parted, I waved to them, and left Sugarcube Corner, seeing Pinkie running around, getting all sorts of things to MAKE all sorts of things.
Crazy Pony.
I'm not...fond of this chapter. Or whatever else you say that means you don't like something. But, I'm not that proud of this chapter. If you guys are, then...alright.
Oh, and I typed this with one hand. I'm readin' an Applejack clopfic right now. Almost done with both. Mmmm....
Chapter VI: Finally, I can fly!
A day had already passed since the...uhh...incident with Pinkie and I, and I headed to Twilight's house, and sure enough, when I opened the door, she sat on a couch, reading. Or studying. Whatever you prefer.
When she heard the door open, she looked up to see me, and smiled. "Hey, Thunder."
I then smiled back. "Hey, Twi. You busy?"
"Not really. What's up?" Twilight asked as she got up from her couch and kissed me.
"Well...I was wondering...since Fluttershy's pregnant and all...and that it's getting harder and harder to fly...I was wondering if...well, if you have a spell for it...you could turn me into a pegasus?"
"Ooh, I have the perfect spell! Pony transformation," she said as she ran to her bookshelf, grabbed a book, and flipped to a page that read "Pegasus Transformation. "
"Okay, stand still," she said to me.
Obeying her orders, I stood still, not moving, as she pointed her horn at me. Suddenly, I stopped her.
"Wait, Twilight. Are you sure this spell is safe?" I asked.
"Of course. I practiced it with Spike a few times. Don't worry, you'll be fine. Now, hold still, okay?"
"Alright, Twiley." I called her by a nickname I thought of. Twilight then blushed.
She pointed her horn back to me. Within a second, it began to glow, then fired a beam of magic at me.
As it hit me, I felt myself slowly floating in the air. Then, in an instant, wings sprouted from both sides of my body. They quickly opened, and I flapped them freely.
Once they appeared, the beam of magic disappeared, and Twilight looked up, and was surprised seeing me now with wings.
"How do I look?" I asked. She stood there for a moment. Then, all of a sudden, she ran up to me and kissed me passionately. I instantly gave into the kiss. Suddenly, I felt Twilight's hooves rub my...my wings? Instantly, I felt pure pleasure from her rubbing them. I shuddered into our kiss.
Quickly, our kiss ended, and Twilight stopped rubbing my wings. "I'm sorry. They're perfect," Twilight said, blushing.
"I can tell," I chuckled. She giggled quietly.
"Oh, I forgot, how's Fluttershy?" Twilight suddenly asked.
"She's doing fine, I guess. Had some food cravings, mood swings and such. I made her a sundae once, and she scarfed it down in half a minute. It takes me 5 minutes to eat a sundae! Then, she had a dress Rarity gave her and asked me if it made her look fat. I didn't even answer and she already started crying. She ran into the other room. A few minutes later, she let me in, and I just sat there, hugging her. Then, all of a sudden, she pinned me to the bed and we...Well...you know."
I smiled, still feeling the pleasure of that moment last night.
Then the door opened to show Spike walking through, only to see Twilight and I standing there, and seeing my new wings.
"Whoa, Thunder, you've got wings!" Spike exclaimed.
I stretched them out. Pure pleasure. "Yes, and they feel great."
I then looked up to the window to see Fluttershy in the distance flying difficultly with a basket. Suddenly, I saw her begin to fall as her wings gave up on her.
My eyes widened. "Fluttershy!" I yelled as I sprinted out the door, dodging Spike. I quickly opened my wings, and bursted into the air, hoping to catch Fluttershy in time.
Fluttershy managed to flap her wings slowly, but she kept falling. I thought of a way to catch her without ending up hurting the baby.
Eventually, I reached her, and gently caught her in mid air. Her and the baby were okay.
"You okay, Shy?" I asked her. She nodded, but was quickly surprised to see that I caught her, in the air, with wings!
"Th-Thunder. H-how?" She quickly saw my flapping wings.
"H-How did you get those?" She asked.
"Twilight found a spell that can transform anything into a pony, or a pony into a different type of pony. I knew you were having trouble flying, so I decided to give you some extra help, more than I've already been helping. So, you can stay at home, safe, and I can go get the things you need."
She kissed me, squeeing. "Thank you. U-um, can we g-go back down now?"
"Oh, right. I forgot." I smiled, blushing. Slowly and gently, I lowered to the ground. I gently placed Fluttershy down, allowing her to stand up. Once I stood, I closed my wings.
"Are you alright, Fluttershy?" Twilight asked as she walked towards us.
"Oh, yes. I'm very fine."
"You were falling pretty fast there," Spike exclaimed in worry.
"Don't worry. I'm fine now."
"And I'm glad," I replied as I hugged her gently, causing her to blush. Suddenly, she pushed me back.
"Why haven't you talked to me in a while?"
"What?"
"Do you hate me? Are you seeing someone else? Tell me!" She yelled loudly.
Twilight and Spike were confused and shocked at Fluttershy's sudden change in action. I just stared.
"Don't want to tell me? Fine!" She yelled in my face and stormed off.
"Thunder? Are you okay?" Twilight asked, worried about me. I smiled lightly.
"Don't worry, Twilight. The doctor told me it was just the mood swings...EXTREME mood swings. She can be happy one second, then furious the next."
"Are you sure?"
I looked over to Fluttershy who was still walking away, only to see her knock over a carriage with some ponies inside.
"Yeah, definitely," I said while running to the carriage to help the ponies out.
Once I reached the carriage, I jumped up to the door, and took it off. The ponies inside managed to climb out and looked at Fluttershy.
"What a rude mare! Does she not know manners!" The mare asked angrily.
"Sorry about my marefriend. Pregnancy. Mood swings, that sorta thing," I replied to her while smiling nervously, only to be slapped with her purse.
"What the buck, lady!" I yelled.
"Control your disaster of a mare." she said while passing by me. "Pathetic stallion."
"Stupid, ugly looking bitch!" I yelled, making her gasp.
"What profanity!"
I just ignored her and walked away. "Pfft, she doesn't know real profanity."
A few minutes later
I walked through the door of Fluttershy's home. Once I got near the bedroom door, I could hear sniffling from behind the door.
I slowly opened the door, until I could see Fluttershy covering her face with her hooves and weeping on the bed. Slowly, I reached the bed and sat down.
It was silent for a moment, as Fluttershy stopped crying. Suddenly, she held me tightly into a hug, and began to cry again.
"I-I'm s-so sorry..." She whimpered.
Shortly, I hugged her back. "Shhh...it's okay, Shy. You didn't mean it."
I tried my best to calm her down, which I succeeded in doing.
"You feeling better now?" I asked calmly.
She slowly nodded with tears still in her eyes. I wiped them from her eyes and looked at her. "Hey...Shy...don't worry about it. It was just mood swings. No biggie."
"Did I...h-hurt anypony?"
"No, they were okay...but, they slapped me with a purse."
Fluttershy giggled and looked at me for a moment. Then she pulled me in for a kiss. she wrapped her forelegs around me, and I wrapped mine around her as we embraced each other in a romantic kiss.
Then...suddenly...Fluttershy changed once more. She moaned, then quickly grabbed me and threw me onto the bed.
I ended up hitting the head board of the bed hard, and was knocked out.
When I came to, Fluttershy was sitting on me, slowly and gently rubbing her hooves through my mane, and...um...sniffing it.
"Uh...Fluttershy?" I asked.
"O-Oh, you're awake now..." she whispered very seductively.
"Wh-what's going-" I was interrupted when she put her hoof up to my lips.
"Shhhh....relax."
She slowly moved down to my stallionhood, which seemed to come out in the past few seconds.
Fluttershy gently took my member in one hoof. She lowered her mouth to it, then slowly licked it from the bottom to the tip just like a popsicle. I gasped and moaned in surprise and pleasure.
"Sh-Shy..." I whispered.
Then, very slowly, she placed her mouth onto my stallionhood and began to slowly bob her head up and down. The warm feeling of her mouth was so...amazing.
After a few moments, I already felt my orgasm approaching. "Shy...I'm gonna...I...." I couldn't finish. The pleasure was too much as I released my white fluid into Fluttershy's mouth, which, I guess, had no trouble swallowing it.
I felt completely exhausted, and just wanted to sleep right there. But, Fluttershy wasn't done with me just yet.
She got back up on the bed, got up above me, and lifted my still hard member.
"You won't have to worry about getting soft. While you slept, I gave you some....um...Ponagra . Please don't be mad."
I actually chuckled while still exhausted. "O-Oh, you dirty, naughty mare," I managed to say.
Fluttershy ended up blushing. She still held my member in place. Then slowly, she lowered herself onto it.
"O-ooohhh, I m-missed th-this f-feeling!" She moaned.
"We did it last night," I replied, chuckling.
Once I was completely inside her, she began to bounce slowly up and down, her belly jiggling a little.
I decided to help her a little bit, so I gently gripped her flanks, and moved her up and down.
"Hooohhhhh...." she moaned, making me move her faster.
My pace quickly picked up.
By now, I was thrusing upward into Fluttershy, and began to feel my second orgasm reaching. But, I felt a liquid begin to run down my shaft. I then heard Fluttershy moan, "Yesssssss... " So, I guess she already came.
"Sh...Shy....I'm gonna cum..."
"D-Do it...o*gasp*o-outs-side..." Surprising. The first time Shy or Twi wanted me to cum outside. But, I listened to her, and pulled out just as my fluids squirted out. Squirt after squirt, my cum covered Fluttershy. By the time I finished cumming, cum covered Fluttershy's torso, wings, and face.
Fluttershy and I panted for a moment, before Fluttershy began to collect the cum from her face, and into her hoof.
Once it was collected, she began to slurp it up.
Once she swallowed all of it, I slowly brought my lips to hers. We sat there kissing for a moment, before we began to hear a...rather...weird noise.
"Wh-what is that?" Fluttershy asked nervously.
"I'm not sure..." I replied, curious to what that sound was. It sounded slick.
shlick shlick shlick shlick shlick shlick...
I looked to the window of Fluttershy's bedroom to see Rainbow Dash doing...Oh my Celestia, is she hoofing herself? ...OH MY CELESTIA, WAS SHE CLOPPING TO US?!
"RAINBOW DASH?!" I yelled, snapping Rainbow out of her clop happy session. Her eyes widened when she saw us looking at her, and blushed before flying off.
"U-Uh..." Fluttershy was completely confused about this.
I just facehoofed. "What is up with that mare...first she gives me the wrong pills, then she makes Pinkie almost rape me, now she was clopping to us having sex?" I then looked at Fluttershy, who seemed to be already sleeping.
"That...was...quick." I swore she was awake just a moment ago. Well, sex can tire anypony out. I then wrapped my foreleg around Fluttershy, and quickly fell asleep.
Mmmm...I love these Dashie clopfics...Oh, God....Oh, God! Dashie....DASHIE....DASHIE!! AAAH!! *SQUIRT SQUIRT SQUIRT* *panting and sigh* *grabs paper towel and wipes off screen* *sees viewers* OH SHI-!
So...uhh...yeah. I know this chapter went from a simple "changing to a pegasus" type thing to a "SEXY SEX TIME" type thing. But, I was horny...for Dashie...and AJ...and Pinkie...You know what, fuck it. All the Mane Six.
If I could go to Equestria, I'd probably choose Dashie, Pinkie, Applejack, Twilight, Aloe and Lotus, Carrot Top, Lyra, Bon Bon, Colgate, and Fluttershy. Y'know, because harems and such. Spike could keep Rarity. Even though she's hot. :3
So, I'm gonna go and read another Dashie clopfic. I'm already typing with one hand. Oh, Dashie....Mmmmmmm......
Okay, before I start this story, I just want to point some things, and tell you about my day today on July 4th (like that wasn't obvious). Okay, tonight, the fireworks were a complete disappointment. There was so much traffic, we couldn't see them. We were far from them, and they were out of sight from us. We were left in traffic for the next half hour, then had some Krispy Kreme. Mmmm... After that, we came home, and greeted mah fuzzeh kitteh. If only my other cat was still alive...died 5 months ago... :'(
Anyway...about my story. You might wonder why this chapter is titled "Shocking The Rainbow." Well, it has Rainbow, and Thunder. Y'know, because Thunder is the sound from lightning, and it shocks...things....
...
I couldn't think of a title. But, enjoy! :D
Chapter VII: Shocking The Rainbow
Rainbow Dash flew slowly through the sky, feeling determined to accomplish any obstacles in her path...except me.
I flew right in front of Rainbow, stopping her.
"Uhh, h-hi, Thunder. What's up?" Rainbow asked, nervous.
I stared at her, raising an eyebrow.
"We need to talk, Dash."
"Uh..." She looked at her foreleg. "Ooh, look at the time, gotta fly!" Rainbow said before she flew right past me.
"Hey!" I yelled as I flew after her.
As I flew after her, she began to swerve around, either trying to get loose from me, or was getting tired.
Suddenly, she stopped in mid flight, and I ended up flying right by her.
I tried to stop, but I kept flying foward. Eventually, I saw a tree coming up ahead.
"Oh, Scheiße!" I yelled in german as I crashed into the tree.
Rainbow found this as a chance to get away. She flew low down to Ponyville, where she hid behind a house. She looked around to see if anypony was there. There wasn't.
"Phew," she said in relief. She turned around and screamed to see me there. Quickly, I put a hoof on her mouth to quiet her.
"Shh, it's okay...look...Dash...all I want to know is why you gave us those sex pills instead of pain pills, accidentally, or purposely making Pinkie swallow some of them to make her almost rape me, and the fact that while Fluttershy and I were...doing it, you happen to be outside the window, mastur-"
I was cut off when I felt a pair of lips connect with mine. I was very surprised to see that it was Rainbow's lips. She was kissing me.
The kiss lasted for at least 10 seconds flat before Rainbow disconnected her lips from mine, leaving me shocked and surprised. I looked at Rainbow, and noticed that she turned her head away and was blushing furiously.
"Th-That's why I did it...I...I like you, okay? I gave you the pills on purpose, and...well, I was...doing that because...well...because I should've been the one in Fluttershy's position...feeling you thrusting upward into me...feeling you, not wanting the pleasure to end, riding you to climax... "
My jaw dropped. I can't believe what I just heard. So many things were going through my head, and eventually, it was too much for me, and I passed out.
I awoke hours later, about, 6:00 p.m., and I noticed that I was in Twilight's home again. I found myself on her couch, and looked around. Outside the windows, the sky was a bright orange, claiming that Celestia was lowering the sun.
I eventually heard Twilight's voice. "Thunder?"
I looked to the direction of the voice to see Twilight standing there. She headed towards me and hugged me sweetly. In the shadows where Twilight stood just a moment ago, Rainbow stood there, blushing at the sight.
"Uhh...Twi...I need to tell you something." I said to her.
"It's okay, Thunder. Rainbow told me the whole thing."
"She...did, huh?" I asked, blushing.
Rainbow then came out of the shadows, and towards us. "L-Look, Thunder. I know I kinda got carried away with what I did earlier, but, I want to...well...join you guys."
"Well, Rainbow, I really don't think that's possible. Y'know, having 3 girlfriends."
"Of course it's possible. In a harem."
"A...what?"
"A harem. It's where you can have more than one mare," Twilight replied.
"So...You...and...Rainbow...and Fluttershy?"
Twilight and Rainbow nodded.
"Uhh...Okay, Rainbow. Welcome to the...uh, harem," I said awkwardly to her. She quickly flew up at me, and kissed me. Then, suddenly, she began to grind on me, moaning as she went. Somehow, I didn't even notice my member begin to emerge.
"Looks like somepony's getting excited," Twilight said, causing me to blush.
Twilight began to lower her head down to my member as Rainbow grinded herself on me.
Suddenly, the door opened, revealing Fluttershy. When she saw the sight before her, she gasped in surprise.
Rainbow then stopped grinding and turned around to see her yellow, pregnant friend.
"Uh, Fluttershy!" Rainbow yelled as she fell off of me. "What's up?"
Fluttershy smiled rather...seductively at Rainbow as she shut the door. She then began to slowly walk towards her.
"Uh, Fluttershy?" Rainbow asked nervously.
"So, you wish to join us, huh?" she asked Rainbow. Fluttershy surprises me in some ways. When I first came here, she was very shy, then became loving, then angry, then mourned from my death, then loving again, then umm...horny, then loving again, then angry for a few minutes, then horny, then loving, and now seductive. And that's just two months. Most of that was from only 1 week. That's why I love her.
"Well, you're going to have to pass the test." Fluttershy smirked at Rainbow.
"What test?" Rainbow asked.
Fluttershy then moved head closer so that her and Rainbow were face to face against each other.
"The sex test," Fluttershy whispered. The sex test...sounds like an...interesting name...
Fluttershy then connected her lips with Rainbow's lips, causing Rainbow's eyes to widen, and her wings to spring open.
When their lips disconnected, Rainbow stood there, surprised and shocked.
"Flutter-" she was cut off when Fluttershy's hoof was placed on her mouth.
"Shhh..." Fluttershy whispered as she slowly lowered her head towards the juicy area between Rainbow's hind legs.
Slowly, she rubbed a hoof around Rainbow's slit, causing Rainbow to shiver in delight, and moan quietly.
"I'm very sure you've been waiting for somepony to help with your itch, " Fluttershy said, making Rainbow blush.
"We're here to make it better."
Fluttershy then slowly inserted her tongue into Rainbow's pussy, causing Rainbow to gasp and moan in pleasure. Fluttershy then began to lick around inside, causing Rainbow to stir a bit and quake with pleasure.
"Flutter...shahhh..." Rainbow moaned as she laid her head on the couch.
The whole time, Twilight and I sat there, surprised, but turned on. Slowly, I moved towards the two enjoying each other, and slowly began to kiss Rainbow, leaving Twilight by herself. I didn't want her to be out of the action, so I stopped kissing Rainbow, and spoke to her.
"Hey, Twi..."
Twilight looked up at me.
"I've got an idea."
Twilight already knew what the idea was before I even said it. I sat up on the couch, my member still standing. Twilight walked over to me, and managed to kneel down. She slowly grabbed my member and placed it into her mouth.
I moaned and grunted as she went, but I was suddenly pulled into a kiss by Rainbow, who was still being pleasured by Fluttershy.
Eventually, Rainbow felt her orgasm approach, as her moans got louder and louder as I continued to kiss her.
Finally, her orgasm hit. She squealed in complete ecstasy into my mouth, Fluttershy's face was covered in Rainbow's juice, and I felt my orgasm approaching as well. I released my lips from Rainbow, who sat there, panting from her orgasm.
"T-Twi...I'm close..."
Twilight increased her speed as she sucked harder and faster. I grunted and moaned loudly. Finally, I felt my orgasm hit. I shuddered and sighed. Twilight released her mouth from my member, and I began to squirt cum all over her face, most of it getting onto the floor.
Once I finished cumming, I felt Twilight's hot breath on my member as she licked it once more, squirting out a little bit more of cum onto her face.
She collected the cum in her hoof and began to lick it.
"Maybe we should let Dashie have a turn," Fluttershy whispered seductively as she looked at Rainbow.
"A turn with what?" Rainbow asked, a little confused.
Fluttershy moved up to Rainbow's ear.
"A turn to ride him," Fluttershy whispered as she looked to me. In an instant, my wings sprung out. Rainbow giggled as they opened, and slowly began to crawl onto me. She then hovered over my still hard member. Then slowly, she began to lower herself onto it.
The one thing that surprised me the most, however, was that I reached her hymen. She's still a virgin?
I then grabbed Rainbow's sides, and gently brought her closer to me, sort of like a hug. Her head was resting on my shoulder, and she held me tightly.
"I'll be as gentle as I can," I whispered into her ear. Then slowly, I began to lower her more as I slowly and gently tore through her hymen. She squealed quietly, and tried her best to hold in her cries. She might be the fastest, bravest, and toughest mare in Ponyville, but you have to admit, that can hurt.
Once I was fully inside her, I allowed Rainbow to rest for a few moments. The whole time this happened, Twilight and Fluttershy were...well, kissing.
"I-I'm ready n-now," Rainbow whispered.
Slowly, I began to gently thrust into her. Rainbow's moans were a mixture of pain and pleasure. Over the past few minutes, they were only moans of pleasure.
"D-..Dashie..." I moaned.
I was at a steady pace, and looked back to see that the others were just watching now. Suddenly, I got an idea.
"G-Girls," I managed to say. "I've g-got an id-dea...T-Twilight, you *gasp* y-you stand on the r-ri-hah!-right s-side of m-me. Flutters-*grunt*shy, go on the l-left."
The girls listened, then Twilight sat on the right, and Fluttershy on the left.
"Ok-kay, Dashie, do you think you can handle this n-now?"
"Y-yeah," she responded. Slowly, I let go of Rainbow's sides, and she began to ride me, no problem. I then brought my left hoof to Fluttershy's slit, and my right hoof to Twilight's slit.
I then began to rub both of their slits at the same time, causing both of them to gasp and moan.
"Thunder.../Yes!" They both moaned.
Then, unexpecting it, Rainbow began to kiss me again. I just sat there, as Rainbow kissed me as she rode me, and as I hoofed Twilight and Fluttershy. This was a very unexpected day. And that's what I love about it.
Eventually, a few minutes later, I felt a liquid run down both of my hooves, and Twilight and Fluttershy hissed in pleasure. I also felt a liquid run down my shaft, but Rainbow kept riding. After they all came, I felt myself getting ready to cum as well.
"G-Girls...I'm cl-close..." I said shakily to them.
Quickly, Rainbow hopped off of my shaft, and began to stroke it very fast. I gasped and took ragged breaths.
I then saw Twilight and Fluttershy sit right next to Rainbow as she...did her thing.
"Girls, I...I..." I then gasped as I felt my orgasm hit. Loads of cum came squirting out of my member, and onto Rainbow, Twilight, and Fluttershy's face. Squirt after squirt, cum got into their manes, all over their faces, and most of their torso.
I sat there, panting for a few moments, when I saw the girls begin to collect the cum, and slurp it from their hooves, swallowing it.
"So..." Rainbow asked. "H-How was I?"
"The best. A-All three of you. You were all...g-great," I said as I still panted.
"U-Uhh, girls? M-Maybe we should clean up," Fluttershy replied, now back in her normal mode.
"O-Oh, r-right, I forgot," Rainbow replied, blushing at the fact she was still covered in her own cum, as well as mine.
"Y-Yeah," Twilight replied.
Eventually, we got up and headed to the shower to wash each other off. As we washed each other off, the girls kissed me on the cheek, but Rainbow kissed me on the lips, deeply.
I was surprised by her sudden change, from brave and fearless, to loving and passionate, but I was glad I could make her happy, and fix her itch.
*Thrusts hard and fast* Yeah, Dashie, get that fuckin' cock up there!
*pumps harder* Oh, Dashie.....Dashie!! I'm....I'm cummin!!! AAAAAHHHH!!!
*cums into RD plushie*
*pants and pulls out of cum-filled plushie*
*begins to finger plushie*
You dirty, dirty mare...
*wipes self off and looks up to see viewers*
Oh, god dammit!-
Sooo, yeah. Hope you enjoyed it. It took at least 3 days to do this chapter, mainly becasuse I was busy watching some videos of Happy Wheels, then playing Happy Wheels, then watching some pony vids, and other such things.
But, hope you at least enjoyed the chapter. I also noticed that chapter 2 is the only chapter that doesn't have sex in it. For now, that is. :3
Chapter 1, 3, 4, 5 (partial), 6, and this chapter have sex in it.
Anyway, I'm out. Gotta go back to some...business... *grabs plush and turns off screen*
Oh, Dashie...are you ready? *puts dick in plushie once more*
Mmmmmm.....
Alright, I'm back with another chapter. With the rest of my birthday money, I'm going to be buying GTA IV for the computer (for the mods :3), and Virtual Sailor 7 (TITANIC!! WOO!!)
Also...GODDAMMIT, SCHOOL STARTS IN A MONTH!! FUUUUCK!!
Alright, I'm done. Also, something very romantic, erotic and terribly tragic happens in this chapter, so, enjoy! :D
Chapter VIII: The Party
About a week after the girls and I had our "fun", Pinkie finally had everything for her party, and invited much of Ponyville to it. I made it a few minutes after it started.
The place was crowded, so it was difficult for me to move around everypony. Finally, I managed to reach the doors that lead to the kitchen. Once I went through, I was greeted by all six girls.
"Ooh, Thunder! You're here, you're here! You made it!" Pinkie yelled with excitement as she hopped towards me and hugged me.
I chuckled as she hugged me. After she hugged me, Twilight and Fluttershy came up and kissed me on both cheeks. Rainbow stood there, smiling and blushing at me. I smiled back at her.
Twilight then looked at the satchel I had on me.
"What's with the satchel?" She asked.
I then smiled at her and Fluttershy. I cleared my throat. "Girls..." I opened my satchel, took out two small boxes and quickly hid them from the girls.
"During the first week that I arrived here, you girls have been by my side, in good times and bad, and we got through, together. Even now, we're still accomplishing that. But, now, I believe we could take that to the next level. Fluttershy...Twilight..."
I revealed the two boxes and opened them. Inside both of them was a ring, as wide as a hoof. All of the girls gasped. Rarity gasped the loudest. Finally, I asked the most meaningful question to them...
"Will you marry me?"
Suddenly, Fluttershy and Twilight's eyes began to water. They closed their eyes and reopened them, smiling.
"Y-Yes...Thunder..." Fluttershy said.
"Yes we will..." Twilight added.
They then ran to me, and both began to cry in my shoulders. I put my hooves around them and hugged them. I still carried the boxes in my hooves as I hugged them tightly with happiness. I was quite surprised that I was going to be marrying the mares who fell in love with me a few months ago.
I looked over at the others. They all had tears in their eyes. Rarity had a hoof over her mouth, but I could tell she was smiling. Pinkie suddenly had a tissue and was crying loudly, but surprisingly, the ponies outside the kitchen didn't hear.
Applejack had taken off her had and had it over her face, but her eyes were visible. I knew she was smiling too. Rainbow had her wings sprung out and smiled with tears in her eyes.
I smiled back at them. Twilight and Fluttershy were still crying into my shoulders with tears...tears of joy...
About 15 minutes later, the girls stood around, enjoying the party.
"Pinkie, darling, this is an amazing party you threw," Rarity said to Pinkie.
"Wanted to make it amazing for the groom and his two bride-to-bes!" Pinkie exclaimed and hopped up in excitement.
I stood near them and sipped some punch. Suddenly, I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned around to see Rainbow in the air.
"Rainbow?" I asked. Quickly, she grabbed my foreleg, and took me somewhere away from the party. Once she stopped flying, she closed the door of a room we were in. I shook my head from the slight dizziness for those few seconds. I then could see that the two of us were in some sort of storage room. It was quite empty, but many things were in one area of the room.
I then felt Rainbow land on me. She stared deeply into my eyes. I then looked at her eyes. There were tears in them. But, they didn't look like tears of joy.
"Rainbow? What's wrong?" I asked with concern and worry.
Quickly, she kissed me deeply. She inhaled raggedly through her nose during the kiss which lasted about 10 seconds. During it, she moaned and also sounded like she was about to cry.
When she removed my lips, she gently touched my face with her hoof.
"I love you, Thunder, I love you so much."
"I-I love you too, Dashie," I said to her.
"Please...make sure you'll remember me. Remember me while you're with them," She said, tears in her eyes.
So that's why she was crying.
Slowly, I began to chuckle.
"Dash...You think that just because I'm marrying Twi and Shy, I'm gonna forget about you? That's silly," I replied chuckling.
Rainbow then began to giggle slightly. "I...kinda went overboard a little bit on that, didn't I?" she asked, scratching the back of her head, and smiling sheepishly.
"Yeah, a "little"." I chuckled again. I then nuzzled her nose to make her smile.
"Uhh...can you...like, not tell anypony about that?" Rainbow asked, blushing.
"Of course, Dashie. Let's go. We should get back to the party now-" I was cutoff as I was pushed down again by Rainbow's hoof.
"Whoa, wait a minute," Rainbow said before whispering into my ear.
"I'm didn't bring you in here just for that."
I was confused for a moment.
"Then wh-what did you bring me here for?"
Rainbow then brought her mouth up to my ear and whispered into it.
"I want you to fuck me."
My eyes widened.
"I want to feel you inside me again. I want you to fuck me deeply. Make me cum. I want you to fuck me 'till I cum."
I was completely surprised by Rainbow's change in personality. When I came here, she acted like a friend, that day at the cliff, she completely hated me until I fell off. Now...she wants me to fuck her. Not that I didn't fuck her last week.
I then felt my member begin to come out in front of Dashie.
"Atta boy," Dashie said to me. She then grabbed my member with her hoof, causing me to gasp in pleasure. Then slowly, she began to stroke it. As she did, I ended up drowning out the constant chatter from downstairs with my moans and grunts.
"Da....Dashie..." I moaned as she began to stroke me faster.
"Dashie...Oh, Scheiße, Dashie..." I moaned again as she stroked faster.
I then felt myself getting ready.
"D-Dashie, I'm gonna cum..." I moaned. Quickly, Dashie removed her hoof, brought her mouth down onto my member, and began to suck quickly.
I then widened my eyes, and gasped as I felt myself cum. I saw that Dashie had kept her mouth on my member as I release my cum into her mouth. I saw her then swallow it. She took her mouth off of my member and looked at me seductively.
"Delicious..." she said.
I had my eyes closed, and I was breathing hard. I could fall asleep right here.
Suddenly, Dashie took hold of my cock again and hovered over me with her wings.
"Don't get soft on me now," she said, smiling at me.
I then held my cock into place, and she let go. Then slowly, she lowered herself onto me, making a 'squee' noise as she lowered. She then moaned loudly and gasped when she went all the way down.
I allowed her to relax for a few moments. When she nodded to continue, I gently held her flanks, and began to thrust in and out of her.
While I was pumping into her, Dashie moaned and squealed in pleasure.
"Don't....Don't stop, Icy..."
Icy...never been called that before. I'd like that nickname.
I then decided to change positions.
"Stand up," I said gently to her. She listened and got off of my cock. She stood up. I then stood up next to her.
"Put your hooves against the wall," I said playfully.
"Ooh, have I been a bad mare?" Rainbow asked seductively as she put her hooves against the wall.
"Yes you have, Rainbow Miriam Dash. A very..." I paused as I entered her once more, causing her to gasp and moan.
"Bad..." I paused again and thrusted into her, causing her to giggle in her moans.
"Mare." I thrusted into her again. After that, I went back to my usual thrusting. Rainbow's moans became louder, and her gasps became shorter.
"Icy...Oh, Icy...I'm gonna cum..." She laid her head back so it rested on my shoulder.
"I'm gonna cum, I'm gonna cum, I'm gonna cum..." she moaned and quivered in pleasure.
"I'm gonna cum, too," I replied as I pumped into her again and again.
"I-Icy...Icy, Icy, ICY!!! I'm cumming!" Rainbow tried to yell as loud as she could, but I kissed her deeply to stifle her cries of pleasure. I then felt a warm liquid run past my shaft. I heard it drip to the floor. But, it didn't stop me from continuing my thrust. Everytime I thrusted into Dashie, her legs began to wobble, she moaned tiredly.
"D-Dashie...I'm cumming..." I whispered into her ear.
"You can cum inside if you want," she moaned.
Gently, I held her chest and felt it, making her moan once more. Her moans sent me over the edge. Finally, I stopped pumping, and said Dashie's name as I released my liquids into her.
"D-Dashie!" I yelled as I began to release my cum once more into Dashie. Squirt after squirt, my cum coated the walls of Dashie's love hole.
I stood there, panting. Dashie panted tiredly, then looked back at me and smiled.
"You...were great, Icy..." Dashie said tiredly. Dear Celestia, I love that nickname.
"I'm...glad you...liked it, Dashie..." I said her nickname once more.
I then slowly pulled out of her, causing her to moan once more.
"U-Uh, maybe we should clean up and head back down." Dashie added.
"Right, the others must be worried sick 'bout us," I replied. We then headed to the bathroom, washed each other off, and headed downstairs where we originally were.
We came right out the door where we entered before. Surprisingly, the others were still around here, but Fluttershy was missing. I looked into the crowd to see her walking around. I sighed in relief.
"Thunder, Rainbow, where in tarnation were you two?" Applejack asked as she neared us.
"We were just upstairs. Rainbow wanted to show me a cool trick she did," I lied. Rainbow looked at me and smiled. I winked at her.
"What were you winkin' at her for?" Applejack asked.
"Huh? Oh, sorry, my eye tends to do that sometimes..."
Applejack chuckled, causing me and Rainbow to chuckle.
Suddenly, we heard a loud thud, and a faint squishy noise, followed by a loud scream, which sounded just like...
I looked to where the scream was made to see Fluttershy laying on her stomach...the baby...
"Fluttershy!" I yelled as I sprinted to her.
What happened just a few moments ago
Regular P.O.V.
Fluttershy was walking through the crowd of ponies who were dancing to the music played by Vinyl Scratch after Octavia had fallen off the stage and broke her leg, then was sent to the hospital.
Fluttershy was very careful to avoid all of the ponies who were moving around. She wanted to make sure the baby would be okay, as well as her.
Accidentally, she ended up bumping into a large, douchebag looking stallion.
"Hey, watch where you're walking, bitch!" The stallion said without looking, and ended up hitting Fluttershy, causing her to tumble downwards, and onto the floor. But...Fluttershy ended up falling directly on her stomach, causing the baby inside her to be crushed. The baby, as it was crush, also began to press against her organs, moving them around, as the fall was very fast and hard.
Fluttershy gasped, her mouth agape. She slowly rolled over on her back to see her stomach was a little flat, and blood slowly began to drip out of her slit. Fluttershy then screamed loudly, causing many ponies to turn their heads and gasp at the sight.
Fluttershy then began to cry.
"Fluttershy!" she heard a voice, but couldn't look as she lost consciousness...
Thunder's P.O.V.
I quickly sprinted to Fluttershy to see what happened. That was when I saw her fall back down again. Finally, I reached Fluttershy and gasped at what I saw: Blood was seeping from her slit, and her stomach was a little flat and bloody. I put my hooves on Fluttershy and shook her to wake her up.
"Fluttershy, Fluttershy, wake up, please!" I then looked up to the crowd who just stood there.
"Somepony get an ambulance! Now!" I yelled. I then looked back at Fluttershy.
"Don't worry, Shy, You're gonna be fine. You'll be fine..."
The only thing that worries me at this moment is what will happen to my wife, and my baby.
I'm back, bitches. Just kidding, but seriously, I'm back. I was taking a break from making stories for a while, and have been looking at Titanic videos, Porn, Pony 34, and such. It's normal!
...
Sorta.
Anyway, I want you to know that the next 3 chapters will possibly be the final chapters. The last 2 chapters will be A and B choices. For what, you say?
Well, I'm not gonna tell you until I write it. After this story, I'm gonna work on my new story, "A Night To Remember." It's pretty much taking place after chapter 3 of "A Lover's choice" by Crowley. Check it out and make your choice. Also, check out my story too. Titanic is back, bitches.
Also, I would like to point out AGAIN that Clive Palmer announced on April 30th, that he will be building Titanic II. In China...Fucking China. Why not just Belfast, where the grand lady herself was built? Whatever, at least it's being rebuilt, and you know what? That movie called "Titanic II" doesn't bother me one bit. Seriously, go watch it. It's hilarious. The Asylum can kiss my fuzzy blue plot. Because, you know...I'm Thunder Ice, dammit.
Okay, that's it. Goodbye.
P.S. I fucked all the Mane Six! 8D
The Fate of My Wife and Child
This chapter will be probably maybe less than 500 words. Why so short? Well, because you get to make two choices at the end. Choice A and Choice B. What are they for? Well, read and see, silly (DOUCHEBAGS) ducks. :3
Anyway, enjoy.
Chapter IX: The Fate of My wife and Child
It had been nearly an hour since Fluttershy was taken by an ambulance carriage to the hospital. I sat in the carriage, holding her hoof as she laid unconscious. The pain she must've felt after that stallion...THAT STALLION....
*Flashback*
I sat next to Fluttershy as she laid on the floor, out cold. Tears came down my eyes as I waited for the paramedics to arrive. Suddenly, I began to feel rage....nothing but pure rage growing inside of me.
Quickly, I turned to the stallion that pushed Fluttershy down...and lunged at him. I could clearly see fear in his eyes. Suddenly, I yelled into his face...
"NOPONY EVER HURTS MY WIFE! NOPONY!!!" I screamed into his face as loud as I could, hoping I hurt his ears.
Instantly, I began to punch him straight into the face, also clawing at it with my hooves. I hit him a couple of times with my elbow for good measure.
"Thunder, stop!" Rainbow yelled. I slowly looked over to see Rainbow, tears streaming down her face, crying as she saw me like this.
I...I couldn't stand seeing her cry like that, so I did what she said, but I looked back at the stallion.
"You win this round, stallion...but next time....hehehe....YOU MIGHT NOT BE SO LUCKY."
I then slowly got off the stallion, who was looked at in disgust by other ponies.
Suddeny, the door of Sugarcube Corner opened to reveal a stallion and mare paramedic. They quickly spotted my unconscious wife and gently picked her up. They then carried her and placed her onto a gurney. They gently, but quickly, rolled the gurney into the ambulance. They didn't even notice the stallion I beat the shit out of, luckily.
I then quickly got into the back of the ambulance and looked at the girls, who were standing at the door of the shop.
"We'll meet you there," Twilight said to me.
I nodded. The paramedics then shut the back doors of the ambulance, then got into the front seats of the carriage.
"Alright, go!" One of the paramedics called out to the two stallions in the front of the carriage. Once they started running, the carriage started going. It had already started to downpour.
As we moved along, I held Fluttershy's hoof, and whispered into her ear, hoping she would hear.
"Don't worry, baby...you're gonna be fine...I know it..."
*end of flashback*
That was nearly 40 minutes ago. The paramedics had entered the medical center nearly 20 minutes ago. The rain had slowed us down during the trip.
I sat in the waiting room and looked out the window. The rain had still continued. Lightning bolts came down in the distance, the sound reaching me just a few seconds later. Just then, I could hear the sounds of many hooves on the floor. I turned around to see all of the girls, and even Spike, soaking wet from the downpour outside.
Pinkie, somehow, managed to dry herself off pretty quickly. Rarity whined as the rain soaked her precious mane. Spike tried to fix Rarity's mane, but sadly, failed.
I was then greeted by a hug from both Twilight and Rainbow. The cold water on both of them didn't bother me one bit. It kind of turned me on to see them both wet like this, but I realized it was not the time for that.
"You girls are freezing," I said to them.
"Here." I then handed them all towels I had grabbed from a storage closet near the waiting room.
After they all dried themselves off, they placed the towels on their heads to dry their manes and sat down on the comfortable seats in the room. I sat down in a seat between Twilight and Rainbow.
"So..." Twilight spoke. "What happened after the carriage arrived here?"
"Well...we entered here, then they brought her to the E.R. One of the doctors told me to wait here until I could see her again."
I then covered my face with my hooves.
"This is my fault." Suddenly, I felt a hoof touch my shoulder.
"Thunder, you didn't know it would happen. You couldn't stop it," I heard Twilight say to me.
"Yes I could, Twi. If I had been right there next to her, I could've stopped that stallion from ever pushing her down and hurting her and the baby."
Gently, I felt Twilight hugging my left side, followed by Rainbow hugging me on my right side.
"Don't worry..." Rainbow said.
"She'll be fine. I know it. She'll be fine, right?"
"I don't know, Dashie...we'll just have to wait...hope....pray." I then gently kissed the top of Rainbow's forehead, and gently brushed her mane with my hoof. I then looked to Twilight and kissed her forehead, and gently brushed her mane.
All seven of us just waited...waited for what seemed like hours, when only, it hadn't even been an hour...until a doctor came in.
"Mr. Ice?" The doctor said.
I looked to see him at the doorway.
"I need to speak with you alone, out here, please."
I slowly nodded, and gently let Rainbow and Twilight, who had both fallen asleep hugging me, rest their heads on my chair, while I walked outside with the doctor.
Once we were outside, he shut the door of the Waiting Room and looked to me.
"I have some news..."
My eyes widened a little.
"Wh...What happened, Doctor?"
Scratch that, maybe more than 500 words.
Anyway, this is time for YOU to choose between two choices: Choice A or Choice B .
...
For those of you who don't know, you can choose what happens to Fluttershy and her baby.
Now, If you'll excuse me, I'm off to find the elements.
Funny Joke: Looks like I... *drops sunglasses* ...dropped my glasses. FUUUUUUUU-
Congratulations! You have chosen: Choice A: Life! This will be a happy ending of the story, but something tragic, mysterious, and sort of happy...ing event happens in this chapter. Enjoy! :D
As I waited for his answer, he lowered his head, sighed, then lifted his head back up to reveal a faint smile.
"Do not worry about Ms. Fluttershy. She is going to be okay. She has lost a large amount of blood, but she should be ready to leave in the next couple of months."
I sighed in relief. Thank you, Celestia.
I then smiled in happiness at the doctor. But, that smile quickly faded when I realized I had forgotten something.
"But...what about my baby? Is it okay too?"
The doctor sighed and frowned slightly.
"I'm afraid not. When she landed on her stomach, the baby was crushed on impact. It didn't make it."
My head lowered in sadness at the news. But, I was still happy knowing my wife was still okay.
I looked up to the doctor. "Is she awake right now?"
"Yes. She is. She's waiting for you right now in room 23."
"Thank you." I slowly ran to the room where she was. Once I reached the room, I opened the door to see Fluttershy laying in a bed, a little pale, but okay.
She looked to the door to see me standing there. Slowly, I walked over to the side of the bed. She smiled, tears forming in her eyes. Tears also began to form in my eyes.
Quickly, but gently, I embraced her into a hug, the two of us crying in happiness.
We sat there, hugging for about half a minute before Fluttershy asked a question.
"U-Uh, what about the b-baby? I-Is it okay?"
I slowly sighed in sadness, then looked at her with tears.
"I-I'm sorry, Shy...it didn't make it."
Fluttershy froze in shock and sadness. Slowly, she began to cry once more. Tears fell down her face as she realized that she had lost her only child. I hugged her tightly, comforting her in this time.
"Shh, shh, shh, shh...it's okay. Calm now..."
"Mr. Ice?" I looked back to the door to see the same doctor sitting there.
"I need to talk with you again. It's important."
I began to get up when I suddenly felt a tug on my left foreleg. I looked back to Fluttershy. Tears formed in her eyes again.
"N-No, please...don't leave me..." She whimpered. Gently, I kissed her on the lips.
"Don't worry, my love...I'll be back in a minute," I said to her. She slowly smiled and blushed when I called her "my love".
I slowly got up and walked outside. The doctor closed the door when I exited the room.
Inside the room, Fluttershy could hear muffled chatter between the doctor and I. After about a half a minute of chatter, I walked into the room again to see Fluttershy with a confused face, the tears still in her eyes.
I sort of kneeled down next to the bed and looked at Fluttershy.
"Do...you want to try again?"
The question kind of dazed her for a second before she answered.
"Uh...I...I guess we can..."
"You don't need to," I said, smiling.
Fluttershy became confused. "But, wh-why?"
I then gently placed my left hoof on Fluttershy's belly and rubbed it gently.
"Because in just 7 months...you're going to have a beautiful, healthy foal."
"B-But you said that the baby was..." Fluttershy couldn't finish her sentence.
"I know...but...the doctor came back with some results...he said...you were going to give birth to two foals."
Fluttershy's eyes widened a little.
"S-So, I had t-two?"
"You did....but when you fell...one of them was crushed on impact...the other one...well...survived. I guess the other one was kind of a...shield for it."
Fluttershy rubbed her tummy that was still slowly growing and smiled.
To surprise her, I leaned in towards her and kissed her deeply on the lips. She wrapped her forelegs around me as we embraced each other into a deep, passionate kiss.
Once we removed our lips, I whispered something to her.
"I love you, Fluttershy."
She smiled and whispered back.
"I love you too...Thunder Ice."
4 more months passed along pretty quickly, but Fluttershy was finally allowed to leave the hospital. About a week after she left, the wedding day came.
I stood at the altar as the two beautiful mares walked down the aisle. After the speech was made, I placed the rings on Twilight and Fluttershy's hooves.
Many of the ponies in the crowd were a bit surprised that I was marrying 2 mares, but others were proud. Including Rainbow.
"I now pronounce you husband and wives. You may now kiss the brides."
I then passionately kissed Fluttershy, and many of the ponies cheered. I then began to kiss Twilight happily. The crowd roared in happiness.
3 months later, Fluttershy went into labor. Once again, we were all back at the hospital. A few hours after arrival, Fluttershy gave birth to a beautiful, healthy baby girl.
Fluttershy and I tried to pick a name for our new daughter. Fluttershy wanted to call her "Little Fluttershy." It was perfect.
We had exited the hospital with our new daughter. The girls and Spike all stood there in happiness, making foal noises to her. She giggled at the faces they made.
Suddenly, Fluttershy placed her onto my back. She began to nibble on one of my wings with joy. I laughed at the response.
Just a year later, Twilight also went into labor. She had given birth to a beautiful baby boy. Twilight and I thought of names for him as well. She had chosen "Thunder Sparkle."
I thought the name was perfect for him.
I think Fluttershy and Twilight will be good mothers. Hehe...
20 years passed by. Fluttershy and I celebrated our birthdays today. I celebrated my 41st birthday, and Fluttershy celebrated her 40th birthday. Twilight celebrated her 41st birthday last week, and Rainbow celebrated her 39th birthday last month. Time had gone so fast...
Suddenly, Thunder Sparkle came up next to me and asked me something.
"Hey, Dad."
"Son, hey. What's up?"
"Nothing. I just need to ask you something."
"Sure. What is it?"
"How did you and Mom meet?"
Little Fluttershy came around behind me and stood next to your brother.
"Y-Yeah. Could you tell us? I-If it's okay with you, D-Daddy." Little Fluttershy said shyly. Even after 20 years, she still referred to me as "Daddy." Even now, I still find it adorable and cute.
I looked at Fluttershy and Twilight who were both napping on the couch. Rainbow was off cleaning the skies again. I chuckled then looked back at my kids. "Alright. I'll tell you...It all started about a year before you were born, Thunder..." My voice trailed off as I told them about Fluttershy and Twilight Sparkle.
Their mothers...and my wives.
A little bit of a cheesy ending, but nonetheless, there ya go, folks! The official ending of Mother of a Foal. Well maybe not the actual ending. There are, of course, two endings, like I said before. This is just the first one. You can read the second ending. I warn you, though...It will be sad...Actually, I'm horrible at making sad stories. My Little Dashie wins at that. Making me cry, that is.
Anyway, to see death, click here.
Also, I was asked if this is the conclusion of the series with Thunder and Shy. Well...it's not. Their lives are split up into many stories, so their journeys are going to be many stories long. So...this is far, and I mean FAR, from over, my friends.
I'm sorry...but you have chosen Death. Something very tragic happens...and mysterious...and lucky happens...so...grab your tissues if you end up crying.
The doctor lowered his head, sighed deeply, then looked back up at me with a large frown.
"I...I'm sorry...but your wife...she didn't make it..."
No...it can't be...Fluttershy can't be...dead.
No! No! It's not true!
"Y-You can't be serious," I said to him, my voice cracking. I felt a tear fall down my face.
"I'm sorry..."
"What happened to her?"
"She had lost too much blood. One of her lungs collapsed. We did get the baby out...but she had lost too much blood. There was nothing we could do...I'm sorry."
I lowered my head in sadness. I proposed to her...I promised I would keep her safe...
"I want to see her."
The doctor nodded. "Very well. Follow me."
He walked down a hallway. I followed behind him. Eventually, we reached a room with the number 23.
When we entered...Fluttershy was in a bed...pale...cold.....dead.
"I'll give you some time alone," The doctor said behind me as he closed the door.
I turned around as the door closed. Then I slowly looked back to Fluttershy. I slowly walked to the side of the bed, and kneeled down next to it.
I put my ear up to her faintly warm chest. No heartbeat.
This wasn't a dream...this was real. The mare that had loved me so much, that was so happy and alive just nearly 2 hours ago...was laying in a hospital bed...dead...and still.
I looked at her. I started to speak after a minute of silence.
"Fluttershy...I...I know that I...I promised to keep you safe...that I promised to make sure nopony would hurt you..."
I paused for a second. Tears streamed down my face as I continued.
"I'm sorry....but I want you to know...no matter what...I love you, Fluttershy..."
I couldn't say anything else. I immediately broke down into tears. I sat there, next to my deceased wife, crying as I lost the one of the three mares that gave me happiness.
She was so young...so innocent...so fragile...
I slowly looked up to her, then gently leaned towards her...and kissed her gently on the lips...they were no longer warm as I remembered they were...they were cold...lifeless...still. I knew that this was the last kiss that I would ever share with her for a long time...until my time comes...
Once I pulled away from her, I brushed her mane for the final time, and whispered into her ear, even though I knew she was long gone.
"I'll love you forever...my sweet, beautiful angel..."
"Mr. Ice?" I heard a voice at the door.
I looked to see the same doctor sitting there.
"I think you need to see this."
I turned around to Fluttershy.
"Goodbye, my love..."
I then turned to the doctor and began to follow him. I looked behind me at Fluttershy one last time before leaving the room.
Eventually, we reached a room which was about 10 rooms down from where Fluttershy was. When we entered, we were greeted by some pony looking machine.
I was...surprised to see this in a hospital.
"Look inside this machine."
I saw that the pony looking machine had a fetus inside of it.
"Who...who's baby is that?"
The doctor placed his hoof on my shoulder.
"...It's yours."
I slowly looked at him. "What?"
"While we...while we worked to get the baby out...we had realized that...well...she was carrying twins."
My eyes widened. Twins?
I quickly looked back to the one in the machine.
"How is this one alive?"
"Well...that one seemed to have been protected by the other one on impact, like a shield."
I continued to look at the fetus. It was smiling. It caused me to smile as well. Tears began to build up again.
"We...also found out that it's a female foal....so...have you got a name for her?"
I faintly grinned at the baby. I had the perfect name for her.
"Fluttershy. "
About a week later, we had the funeral. It was a sunny day. You may be wondering why to have a funeral on a sunny day...Well...Fluttershy would've wanted it.
We all had arrived first. Eventually, much of Ponyville arrived, even the stallion who caused her death. Many ponies were still disgusted by him.
One by one, Fluttershy's friends went up to the front to make a speech about her. Behind the podium they stood at, was the coffin where Fluttershy would rest for eternity.
Once they all went up, I went up last. I told everypony about how beautiful, gentle, fragile, and passionate Fluttershy was as a friend, a marefriend, a wife, and a mother. I only finished halfway before I broke down in tears.
Twilight and Rainbow were the most affected. Pinkie's mane was deflated, her face showing complete sadness. Applejack buried her face in her hat, crying silently. Rarity tried her best not to cry while Spike sat next to her, comforting her.
Twilight and Rainbow hugged each other and cried silently as well. Once I came down and sat next to Twilight and Rainbow, I hugged them tightly, telling them I loved them very much.
Once the speeches were done and over with, we slowly began to lower Fluttershy's coffin into the ground. I gently tossed flowers onto the coffin as it lowered 6 feet down.
Soon, everypony left. The hole was filled with dirt, and many flowers were placed in front of a tombstone. It read:
Fluttershy Ice
I smiled at the word "mother."
She would've been a great mother.
About 7 months later, the foal had fully developed inside the machine. I headed to the hospital to retrieve my now born daughter.
She slept as I brought her home. She looked so adorable when sleeping.
just 4 months later, Twilight had gone into labor. We were back at the hospital once more. After a few hours, Twilight finally gave birth to a healthy baby boy. We had thought about the name for a minute. Twilight came up with Thunder Sparkle. I thought it was perfect. He looked just like me.
My daughter looked just like her mother...and my son...looked just like his father.
It was 20 years later, and I was visiting Fluttershy's grave once again. I had visited her grave many times, more than her friends did.
I placed flowers in front of the tombstone, which had many dead flowers around it. Some of them from the funeral were still around, but little remained of them.
"Dad?" I heard the sound of a stallion say behind me.
I slowly turned around to see my son, Thunder Sparkle, and my daughter, Little Fluttershy standing next to him. I had given her the Little part of her name 2 years after she was born. The two of them both looked at me. It had been 20 years since they were born. They already graduated from college, and owned houses in Ponyville, which was now a slowly growing city.
Over the years in Ponyville, Fluttershy's house was demolished. I took in the helpless animals. I had since then destroyed my home, and moved into Twilight's house. Rainbow still lived in her cloud home.
"Oh...hey, kids. Didn't expect you to be here," I said to them, my voice very deep.
"Why wouldn't we want to visit our m-mother's grave?" Little Fluttershy asked shyly. She had the same personality as her mother.
"I just...kinda...thought that...you guys had plans today..." I said.
"We canceled them."
I slightly smiled.
"So...Dad...do you think you can tell us a little bit more...a-about Mom?" Little Fluttershy asked me again shyly.
I chuckled. "Alright. Your mom was an...amazing mare..." My voice trailed offward as I told them all about Fluttershy, as well as Twilight...their mothers...and my wives.
Again, some kind of cheesy ending just like the good ending, but anyway, you have chosen the bad ending. Fluttershy loses her life from blood loss and a collapsed lung. That's all there is to kill her. Chavis54 in Chapter IX had an idea where the baby could stay alive in some sort of machine. I just made a pony looking machine. That's good enough, right? :D
Anyway, you got to see Thunder's children. I do realize their names are completely different in the previous chapter and this chapter. I'll rename them in the other chapter. They will be in future stories.
Anyway, that's all. Hope you cried and liked it. Well...I'm not that good at sad chapters, but what the hell. I tried. :3
