Chapters I don't think anyone will believe this, but it's true. Discord must have wanted me to tell my story, or else he wouldn't have--wait, let's start from the beginning.
I'd say something about my life before, if it weren't completely boring. All you need to know is I was looking at pony pictures online. Totally safe for work, I swear! I got a message from a user I didn't recognize: dIsCoRd69. "Wouldn't you like to live in Equestria?" Duh. "Of course I would," I replied. Then my computer screen went all wonky, and some force pushed me toward the screen. But instead of hitting my head on it, I went through it. "Ooof!" I landed with my face on a stone floor in what appeared to be a dimly lit dungeon, only to hear mocking laughter echoing from above. I looked up, and saw...something unbelievable.
"Welcome to Equestria," the creature bowed, extending a clawed hand to indicate my surroundings. Iron bars walled off small cells, and a single candelabra lit the room with dim, flickering orange. I was too stunned to move, let alone speak.
He chuckled at my confused look. "What's the matter, pony got your tongue?" He transformed into a pony and waggled a tongue in my face. I reached into my mouth to discover my tongue was no longer there. In a flash, he transformed again and my tongue returned to its rightful place.
"I suppose you're wondering why I've brought you here," he paced, arms behind his back. "In a word, twobirdswithonestone."
I found my voice, "That's not one word."
"Try to keep up, won't you?" He examined me closely. "I suppose you know already know who I am."
"You're Discord, but..." I trailed off.
"You've been watching our little program. I'll have you know I am the reason it exists in your world. Just a part of my duty as agent of chaos."
"O-kay," I stammered.
"You have been watching the show for quite some time now, and doing a little bit of, shall we say, extra-curricular activities." He made a stupid face and shook his hoof up and down in a jerking-off motion, a clip-clop sound and whinnying coming from seemingly nowhere. And then he kept at it. For much longer than I was comfortable with. Just, jacking the air, and jacking it, his face getting stupider and stupider until, after a ridiculous length of time, his hoof moved too fast to see. He let out a cry and turned into an exploding puddle of white goo.
Okay, so maybe the pictures I was looking at weren't safe for work. Whatever.
He flashed back to normal and put a clawed arm around my shoulder, raising me to my feet. "The point is, I've decided you're perfect. You can bring joy and comfort to my dear friend Fluttershy. But I know you can also sow the seeds of chaos throughout Equestria. Twobirdswithonestone. And this might help with your mission." He pointed at my pocket, and my phone vibrated. "I've ensured that your little device will never run out of power, and you'll always have a connection back to your home. Not that anyone back home will believe you."
In a flash, he stood in front of me. "Just one more thing." He lowered his voice to a whisper. "Don't tell anyone how you got here. I'm supposed to be reformed." And with another flash, I was no longer in the dungeon, but among trees.
Author's Note
11/19/2015: I changed a few things here to add humor, and to recognize the fact Discord doesn't need any magical mirrors for interdimensional travel.
What Sort of Creature Are You?
Sunlight filtered through leaves. A bird chirped. I was at the edge of a forest, with a village in the distance. Well, nowhere else to go.
Walking toward the village, I saw a small chicken coop outside a quaint cottage. Shouldn't I be really disoriented right now? And shouldn't I also be a soldier or something, for some reason? There weren't enough cliches to make this seem right.
Then I heard the most beautiful singing I ever could have imagined. I stopped in my tracks as it brought a tear to my eye. There, in the distance, was Fluttershy. Carefree, gently flapping her wings as she made the rounds, feeding her animals. The sunlight glistened on her yellow fur, a gentle breeze rustling her long, pink mane, her matching tail happily swaying.
Mai waifu! I couldn't believe this was happening. The setup was so contrived and direct. The work of a fanfic writer, not realistic at all. And worse, a fanfic writer who didn't have the decency to check all the human-in-Equestria boxes. I bet the ponies won't even be freaked out by my hands. They'll probably just jump into bed with me. It was too good to be true.
I walked closer, hiding behind the coop and listening to her voice. She began flying toward the small outbuilding, eyes closed, and landed softly not ten feet away from me. She opened her eyes and addressed the chickens. "How is everybody doing this morning? I hope you're all well-rested."
I walked out from behind the coop and cleared my throat. She looked up at me in alarm, mouth open as if to scream.
"Wait! I'm not going to hurt you." I held out my hand in a non-threatening gesture, but her little legs trembled in fear. "My name is Jack. I'm not from here. This is going to be hard to believe, but I'm from another world. I was brought here by--" I stopped, remembering Discord's instructions. I can't reveal he brought me here. "I was brought here by magical means."
It didn't work. She screamed, and flew into her house. My heart sank in my chest. So much for "too good to be true." After a few quiet moments, the chickens looking at me quizzically, I decided to try again. I strolled up to the cottage door and knocked gently. "Fluttershy, I'm not going to hurt you. Really I just want to be your friend. Think of me as a lost creature who needs your help." Long moments passed before I heard her whimper behind the door. "Fluttershy?"
Well, if she wouldn't believe my words, maybe she could believe my actions. I went back out by the chicken coop, picked up a bag of feed, and began to spread their seeds around. The chickens rushed toward me and began happily pecking away, small downy feathers flying. Other birds and a few squirrels watched me from a safe distance.
Suddenly I felt hot breath behind me, and a deep snorting sound. I turned around to see a bear. A big fucking bear! I fell flat on my ass, nearly shitting myself. Its huge head moved in closer, sniffing at my chest and face, blocking out the morning sun. It smelled like a dog that's been out in the sun. Tentatively, I reached up to scratch behind its ear, and it licked my face with an enormous tongue.
"Well, I guess if Harry and the chickens think you're safe, then it must be okay."
The bear sat back on its haunches, revealing Fluttershy behind him, face pointing down, mane covering her right eye while she looked up at me with the other. She gently scratched at the dirt with a forehoof.
Sitting up myself, I got my first good look at her. In person, she is much more horse-like than she is in the cartoons. Muscles more clearly defined, but still with the same bright coloration. She sat down in place, wings folded at her sides, hoof still toying with a pebble. "Wha--what sort of creature are you?"
"I'm a human. I don't think there are any of my kind in your world."
"Oh," she stopped fidgeting and came up close to me. Her head reached just to my breastbone. Little pony, indeed.
"Well, I think you're kind of cute." Her eyes closed as her face lit up in a smile.
I smiled back. "I think you're really cute!" She blushed and looked away, nervously playing with her mane. Hoping to break the awkward silence, I offered, "I can help you with your chores. That way we can get to know each other."
She smiled at me, tentatively. "That would be lovely."
First Days at the Cottage
We fed the animals that morning, and I asked about her home. Fluttershy told me a great deal that I already knew (or thought I knew) from watching the show. She asked about my home, but I wasn't very forthcoming.
About noon, we were both hungry. I found I could cook oatmeal with raisins and honey, and there were plenty of fresh vegetables. She was a little alarmed when I told her that humans like to eat meat, but that evening Harry brought me a fresh salmon, which I was able to fry.
That first night, I prepared to sleep on the couch. A bunny sat in front of me, pointed at his eyes, at mine, and at his again, fixing me with a stern look. "Now Angel bunny, be nice to our guest." Fluttershy lightly hopped down the stairs, wearing a long blue nightgown decorated with pink butterflies. She laid out a pillow and blanket for me on the couch, and asked, "Do you have everything you need?"
"I don't really have any pajamas to wear. I hope it's okay that I sleep in my underwear."
She looked confused. "Of course it is. We ponies don't even wear clothes most of the time."
She trotted back up the stairs. As I watched the fabric of her nightgown clinging to the contours of her hindquarters, I was suddenly very much aware of her femininity.
The next day, it was more of the same, feeding animals and talking. She told me her friends were away in the Crystal Empire, but she stayed behind because she couldn't find anyone to care for her animals. It would be just the two of us for a little over a week.
At night, we sat on her couch together. I brought out my phone--magically powered by Discord--and read her some innocent jokes. I brought up some cat videos, and she sidled closer to get a good look. I watched the light of the screen reflecting in her turquoise eyes, and felt a tingling in my crotch. As a video ended, she realized I had absent-mindedly begun to stroke her fur. She blushed and scooted imperceptibly away from me, hiding her yellow face behind pink mane.
"I'm sorry. I was just admiring how beautiful you are."
"I, um--well, uh. I--I need to get to bed." It was still early, but I watched her flee up the stairs and shut the door. With a rush of longing in my chest, I washed up and laid down on the couch to watch more videos while I drifted off. After turning off the phone, I thought I could hear low, soft moans coming from her room.
The next day was awkward. Despite my embarrassment, I couldn't keep my eyes off her. I watched her flank as she trotted about. I couldn't keep my mind on my chores, spilling way too much food around for the squirrels. As she flitted up to the birdhouses, I admired her long, yellow feathers. But we spoke little, and she couldn't meet my eyes. I swear her vulva was swollen and winking at me, and her musky scent was overpowering. Worst of all, my balls were aching from being around her without any kind of release.
After a dinner with little conversation, she apologized for being rude (she wasn't) and promptly went to bed. I took a bath, and climbed onto the couch. I laid awake for a long time, doing nothing. I must have fallen asleep.
You Really Think I'm Beautiful?
You Really Think I'm Beautiful?
I awoke in the night to see Fluttershy sitting next to the couch, again hiding one eye behind her pink mane and looking down and to the side. Her ears were pinned back. I leaned up on my elbows and asked, "What's wrong?"
"Do...do you really think I'm beautiful?"
I reached out to stroke her mane as she looked away. "More than anything I've ever seen."
She sat without moving, but a slight smile played across her muzzle. She blushed, a deep red coming into her yellow, furry cheek. Her blue nightgown barely hid her form. "This is so embarrassing. When you were bathing, I, um, watched you through the keyhole." My dick woke up, half-hard at the thought of this gorgeous pegasus watching me in secret.
"That's okay. I didn't take my eyes off you all day."
"It's just that, since you came here, I started to go into heat. Seeing you, um," she trailed off.
"It's okay, Fluttershy." I cupped her muzzle in my hands, and she met my eyes with hers. "I feel the same."
"Even though you're a," she struggled with the word, "hu-man, I can't help myself. I--I think I love you." She leaned toward me, pressing her muzzle against my mouth in a gentle kiss. I kissed her back, and soon found our tongues entwined. Her wings stretched out to the sides and shook, then she folded her right wing over me, brushing it against my cheek. We kissed, and kissed, and kissed, with ever-increasing passion. I ran my fingers through her mane, then held the back of her head gently while we kissed more. My lips left hers, and found her jawline, while she breathed heavily. My hands worked down to her little ass, squeezing gently. We made out like this for quite a while, but it didn't seem to be going anywhere. My balls ached. I couldn't help it, I just had to press my crotch against her belly. Through my boxers and her nightgown, I could feel her soft teats against my dick. I pressed it in, grinding tentatively.
She pulled back suddenly and looked away, blushing. "I, um, I better go." But she didn't move. She was obviously at war with herself, wanting me but afraid. I decided to make it an easier choice. I slipped my cock out through the front of my boxers and pulled her close again, kissing her neck aggressively. I stroked her teats with my hand, rubbing the nipples between finger and thumb. Losing herself, she nibbled my ear. That sent chills up my spine, nearly making me lose my mind. I guided one of her hooves to my raging hard-on, guiding her motion. A dribble of precum stuck to her hoof. She pulled it back suddenly and looked at the glistening moisture on her hoof, sniffing it. Her cute little nose wiggled.
She looked with some alarm at my fully erect member. "Jack, I, I just don't know about this."
"Baby, you're just so beautiful. I want you."
She smiled slightly, blushing and looking away. I stroked the fur of her breastbone, and her neck. I could see an internal war raging in her eyes, and I couldn't tell which side would win. Tentatively, she peeked out the corner of her eye, and poked the tip of my dick with a hoof. The fur on her neck was standing on end. "Lie down," she instructed. I was all too happy to comply.
She sidled closer to me, on top of my legs, then gingerly took it between her smooth hooves. "I--I hope this is okay. I've never, been with anyone before." Then she began rubbing her hooves on me, slowly up and down, fur and smooth hoof alternately stroking me. Her movements were awkward at first, but gradually became smoother. I reached out but couldn't find anywhere to put my hands without interrupting her motion. She held my manhood in the frog of her left hoof, rubbing the head, while her right hoof toyed at my ballsack. She breathed from a slightly open mouth, and I could feel her hot breath on my junk.
As she took it between the sides of her hooves again, precum dribbled out onto her hoof. She tasted it tentatively, then lapped the rest of it from her hoof before returning her attentions to my shaft. She hovered her muzzle over my cock and dribbled spit onto it, lubing me up and making her hooves slide over my dick more easily, rubbing up the shaft and over the tip. I groaned. After being near her so long with no release, I knew I wasn't going to last long. Sure enough, the heat rose at my crotch. I began thrusting my hips slightly, in time with her. The sensation was building.
"I'm going to cum," I warned, but apparently she didn't know what to expect. She watched, unblinking with a lustful look. Hot cum shot out of me in spurts. A thick, oozing line of it splashed her forehead. She jerked back slightly, squinting one eye as more of it streamed onto her eyelid, muzzle, and cheek. But she didn't stop her attention to my shaft. She didn't miss a beat. More jets of cum reached across my belly, chest, and up to my neck, in the biggest load of my life. "Oh, sweet Celestia, that felt so good."
She cleaned the hot jizz from her face, wiping it onto her hooves. And then, fixing me with a look with both eyes, she began slowly licking it from her hooves and the nearby yellow fur. More stained the sleeve of her gown. Without taking her eyes off me, she slowly began lapping it off my dick (which twitched in appreciation) and working her way up to my neck. Before I knew what was happening, her small, quadrupedal body was on top of me. I kissed her neck, and her ear, short fur feeling strange but somehow wonderful in my mouth. I rolled her on her side and spooned her from behind, still kissing her neck as I felt my way up her nightgown, rubbing her chest, down to the soft, sparse fur of her belly, and finally to her teats. They were soft, and wonderful. I played with the nipples and she let out a little squeak. Even though our heads were near each other, her ass only reached my navel. I reached a little farther down, and felt hot air out of her vagina. Her feathers brushed against my abdomen, her twitching tail brushed against my already nearly-erect penis. I rubbed a finger on her pussy. Soft, and sticky-wet, She groaned, and I rubbed more. I put my middle finger inside her, and she bit down on a forehoof, eyes shut tight. I slowly moved the digit deeper, fingering her until her hot mare juices were pouring out. A strong, musky odor filled my nostrils, and she squeaked with pleasure. She couldn't hold her loud moans in anymore when I pulled the finger out of her vagina and discovered her soft clitoris, rougher in texture, and clearly more sensitive. I rubbed it gently, and slowly, in circular motions, and soon she began to buck at my hand. I held on, not releasing her until her convulsions stopped and my hand was covered in her juices. That sure didn't take long.
Exhausted, she looked at me out of the corner of her eye as I sat up on one elbow. I sniffed my finger, and licked some mucus from it. It tasted different from human women, but infinitely better. Her tail found my dick again, which was by now rock hard. "Somebody's ready to go again," she whispered, her eyes nearly closed in a wicked look.
Fluttershy laid me back down, and laid herself on top of my legs. She planted kisses on my shaft, holding it up with the last joint of her right leg. She licked from the base to the tip with an agonizing slowness before taking the head into her muzzle. The head in her mouth, she licked the tip, then gradually lowered her face farther down. Dimples formed in her cheeks from hard suction each time she slid back up to the tip. Each time she went down imperceptibly farther, until it was halfway in her mouth. She gagged a little, and took it out, "I'm sorry, I don't think I can put it all the way in."
"Oh, don't worry baby, you're doing great."
She smiled at this, and returned her attention to my throbbing dick. She took it back into her mouth, her tongue feeling its way along while her lips (are they lips?) provided friction. Soon I couldn't stop my hips from moving in motion with her, and even though she gagged a little a few times, she didn't stop. She bobbed her head up and down on me, taking it out periodically to hold it in the crook of her foreleg and lick the shaft, or the head, and once, my urethra. Her confidence built by this point, she took it into her mouth again, looking up at me with wide open eyes and begging me with those turquoise orbs to reach my limit. And soon I did. "I'm going to cum!" She never broke eye contact, never stopped her motions. The heat rose at my groin, and my twitching cock shot hot spurts of seed into her mouth. I could hear her swallowing sounds as my convulsions subsided, and feel the suction of her warm, moist mouth with every aftershock of my orgasm. When I stopped thrusting, and relaxed, she let it drop from her mouth and smiled at me, rubbing her jaw. There wasn't any mess--she had swallowed every last drop.
"Thank you, thank you, that was wonderful."
She smiled, then blushed, clearly embarrassed as much as she was pleased. She stammered, "G--Good night, I'm, uh, going to bed." Then she looked in alarm at the stain her juices had left on my erstwhile bed."Oh, my, I'm sorry, this couch is so dirty. Why don't you, um..."
"Can I come upstairs with you?"
She blushed even redder than before, brushing her mane away from her eye with a deeply contented look on her face. "I--think I'd like that."
That night, spooning my little pony all night long, her warm little body next to mine, was the happiest night of my life.
Author's Note
I've added quite a bit to this scene to help with the pacing and the level of detail in the narration.
11/19/2015: I changed this scene up a bit, to add more detailed descriptions and make Fluttershy a little less eager to begin, in keeping with her character.
As it turns out, a mare in heat is insatiable, and I don't know that my human body can keep up.
Fluttershy and I took a bath together. She showed me how to clean her feathers, and she was very interested in cleaning my penis. But then she frowned. "Why won't it, um, get hard? Don't you still think I'm pretty?" the last word was just a squeak, barely audible.
"It's not that, Fluttershy. Humans can't just keep going and going like that. We need time to rest."
She seemed disappointed only for a moment, wet hair drooping over her face. But then her ears perked back up. "Well, I'm still in heat." She leaned her forelegs off the side of the tub and shoved her hind end in my face. With a foreleg, she brushed her wet mane to the opposite side so she could look at me. "If you, uh, wouldn't mind that is."
Water dripped from the pink fur of her raised tail. Below that, her round anus, and below that, her marehood winked open at me. I could still detect her musk behind the clean smell of soap as she backed up to my face. I kissed her hindquarters, and stroked her yellow dock with my thumb. My kisses found their way to her vulva, and soon I buried my tongue inside her. Her legs went weak, but not so weak that she couldn't grind against my face. My chin, which by now had a good layer of stubble, brushed her clitoris, causing her to let out a moan. She bit down on her hoof while I began to gently lick her clit. Her scent was getting stronger, and juices poured out of her. I lapped them up greedily.
I wrapped my lips around her clit, sucking softly, then licked her again. I reached up between her legs, stroking and squeezing her teats, playing with her soft nipples. As she rocked harder against my face, crying out, I had to hold her by the legs to keep my face buried in her. "Oh, oh, Celestia!" she whispered. "Oh, lick me, drink me, oh!" She rocked even harder against my face, her ass humping up and down on nothing while I struggled to maintain my grip and taste her salty clit. She came prodigiously on my face, dripping down my chin, and moaning. As she relaxed, I kissed her ass gently.
She turned to me and smiled. "There, that was nice. Now let's get you all cleaned up."
Author's Note
I added some detail to this chapter.
I barely closed the door of Fluttershy's cottage before she jumped into my arms and pinned me against the door. She was lighter than I expected (Are pegasus bones hollow? I wondered). I held her up with my arms under her forelegs and her hind legs pressed against the sides of my abdomen. We kissed passionately, over and over. I kissed her long neck, and she nibbled my ears. I got hard as a rock, and her juices began to wet my shirt.
"Let's go upstairs," I said.
She practically pulled my arm out of the socket as she fluttered up the steps, leading me along while I held her hoof. Inside the bedroom, she jumped into my arms again. We kissed more, and I tenderly laid her down on the bed.
Suddenly she hid a turquoise eye behind her pink mane again, looking up at me with a nervous glance. "This, is, uh, my my my..."
"I know," I reassured her with the most serene look I could manage in my lust-engorged state. "I'll be gentle."
I pulled off my t-shirt and began kissing her. I started with the frog of her right hoof, slowly working my way up her hind leg. As my lips met the fur of her hock, I reached up with my left hand, cupping her left teat, and gently caressing. I worked my way up her inner thigh. I planted a few kisses around her dripping vulva, then one on her throbbing clit (she shuddered), before moving up to her right teat, sucking softly. She moaned with lust and sat up, using a forehoof to pull my pants down. My dick was harder and bigger than ever before as she kissed it and licked up my length. She looked up at me meaningfully, then grabbed my hips with her forehooves and laid down, pulling me toward her. Her face was at a convenient place to suck my nipples while I began to prod at her vagina.
"Fuck me," she groaned.
I slowly pushed the head of my cock, but it was tight. For a moment, I thought I wasn't aiming at the right spot. I had to push much harder than I expected, until finally I was inside her, tearing her open. She tensed in pain. "Are you alright?" I asked.
She nodded, lips pursed. "Mm-hmm."
I worked the head of my dick back and forth a few times. With each gradual thrust, I went in a little deeper, and she tensed in pain. Each time, she gritted her teeth, and her pussy tightened around my shaft. Soon, I was in her to the hilt, and she seemed to relax. "I'm going to start to move, okay?"
"Uh, okay, but do you think you could take it slow? If that's alright with you."
Resting on one elbow, watching Fluttershy's face under my chest, I began to move very slowly. Her pussy tightened each time as I worked my shaft out, and gave away easily as I thrust in. Each time she cringed less in pain and moaned more in pleasure. Her pussy felt so good. It sucked me in, and it felt way too good. I wasn't going to last long at this rate. I pulled out, putting a disappointed look on her face. "I want this to last a little longer. I straightened my back, looking down at a trickle of blood coming from inside her and staining the sheet. Rubbing my shaft between her pussy lips, I cupped her teats and pulled gently on her nipples a while.
When my excitement ebbed enough, I forced my way into her again, and she moaned in pleasure with a pained look on her face. I began thrusting slowly, very, very slowly, leaning over her and running my fingers through her mane. She looked up at me, in pain and love, with parted lips, her entire body tensed. As I neared the edge, I pulled out again, sitting up to rub her clit with my thumb. She gently rocked her haunches in response, juices coming out of her in increasing quantity. I lay down next to her, kissing her deeply, while I continued to play with her slippery pussy.
She pushed my hand away with a foreleg. "Fuck me, please."
I positioned myself over her again, grabbing her ass cheeks in either hand, and pushed my way inside once more. It seemed to hurt her a little less now, and as I thrust against her wonderfully tight folds, her body rocked back against me in response. I moved slowly, but she was still too tight for me to hold on as I reached climax all too soon. I whispered to her, "I'm going to cum."
She looked up at me, with a desperate, begging look. "Cum inside."
With a few more thrusts, I came. And came, and came. It poured inside her, but some wouldn't stay. It came splashing out around my dick, trickling down over her asshole and mixing with the thin, red blood.
"Fluttershy, you feel so good."
"It was amazing," she agreed.
"Did you?"
"No, but that's okay. It hurt too much this time. I'm just glad you liked it."
I laid down next to her again, putting my hand on her sloppy vulva. "No, it's not okay. I'm going to make you cum." I kissed her, our tongues entwining, as I began to stroke her clitoris. It didn't take long before she held my arm in place with her forehooves and started bucking at my hand. More juices poured out of her, mixing with the mess that was already there.
She kissed me on the neck, tucked her muzzle into the crook of my neck, and fell asleep. I listened to her breathing, my hand on her heart.
Author's Note
I added A LOT of detail and anticipation to this scene. I hope you enjoy the improvements.
The Sunlight Poured in the Window
Fluttershy snored softly, her mouth slightly open, as noon sunlight poured in the window. Her pink mane formed a halo around her head. I watched her breathing, lying next to her, stroking her yellow coat and feathers softly. I had only innocent thoughts as I began petting her, feeling the extra-soft fur of her equine ears and the rougher coat of her body. I was thinking about how Discord brought me here, to this world, and how quickly the little pony and I fell in love. We had just consummated our relationship the previous night. This beautiful little mare gave me her virginity...and thinking about that, well, you can imagine what it did to me. Her musky scent intoxicated me. But I didn't want to disturb her, so I did the only thing I could. I spit on my hand, and jerked it. She slept, oblivious, and I stroked myself with my right hand while stroking the lovely yellow fur of her body. I got to my knees to get a better look at her, watching her side rise and fall with each breath. I spit in my hand again, rubbing it around my dick for a proper lube, and stroked myself some more, noticing the way her long, pink tail lay in beautiful patterns across the bed, how it met her body in a small, fleshy part at her back, and below that, her round, puckered anus and full, yellow vulva. As I built to a climax, watching her tiny form, I realized that I hadn't put any thought into where I was going to cum. I looked around, but it was too late to find a towel. I jizzed on her flank, quantities of the liquid spurting out in lines across three pink and blue butterflies.
Rising to shaky legs, I went to the bathroom, and drew a bath for her. As I shut off the water, I heard, "That was so thoughtful of you." I jumped, and at first I thought she enjoyed having me cum on her while she slept, before her real meaning occurred to me. "Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to startle you."
"It's okay. I thought you might like a bath."
"Only if you're joining me," she beamed. Then she examined herself. "You know, I'm stickier than I thought." I didn't tell her.
We washed each other again, and drained the tub. She shook herself, sending mane and tail hair flying, spattering me with water.
I knelt down to kiss her, but she stopped me with a wing to my lips. "I--I'm not sure I'm, uh, ready to do it again. I'm still a little sore."
"That's okay," I grinned. I sat down behind her, my legs stretched in front of me, and drew her hindquarters to my face. Her vulva winked at me and I kissed the damp fur of her ass. Damp pink hair trailed down the back of my head and over my shoulders. I kissed her labia, teased her clit with my nose, and kissed up her rump, circling back toward the center. Holding her up with my right arm, I lifted her tail with my left hand, kissing and licking her dock. Her smell overpowered the scent of soap as she let out a soft moan. She rested her forelegs on my knees.
I kissed my way down to her anus, and she let out a cry. "Don't! That's not--" But It didn't stop me. I let her tail drape over my head as my tongue entered her nether regions. She bit down on a hoof, closing her eyes. With my left arm, I reached under to hold her up, and around to play with her clitoris, while I kissed and licked inside her asshole.
I brought her, face-down and ass-up, a little higher. I buried my face in her pussy, her hind legs over my shoulders. She reached her forelegs around my back, and took my cock in her muzzle greedily. This time, her gag reflex was in much better control, managing just over half of my length. I felt the suction of her lips and the roughness of her tongue across the top of my shaft as she slowly took me in and out, pausing to pay special attention to the head. But I couldn't focus on that. Before long, she was bucking at my face uncontrollably, her juices pouring out. At the same time, she lost some of her grip around my body, dropping her weight straight down and letting my cock slide to the back of her throat. I groaned at the sensation. Taking my cock all the way to the hilt, the tip well into her throat, she sputtered and panicked, her ears pinning back. But that only seemed to make her cum even more. Her throat tightened around my cock as her muscles attempted to swallow, spasms making her tonsils press and release their grip on my manhood. As the last of her juices sprayed out of her and onto my face and shoulders, her back tightened and wings extended in alarm. Her hooves reached out to find purchase. I knew she was in distress, but I was too close to the edge to care. I wrapped my right arm around her tiny body and used the left to hold her head in place, fingers mussing her pink mane while I thrust deep into her esophagus. She made choked noises of struggle and pounded the floor with a hoof as my excitement rose. Sloppy, wet noises and muffled cries of distress escaped her mouth.
I raised her body up for a moment. She coughed and spluttered, gasping for air. But I was very close now. "Oh, baby, your throat feels so good," I managed to croak, before dropping her down again, plunging my entire length into her muzzle. It was every bit as tight as her pussy, but it clamped down more firmly. I pushed her head down again. Her tongue squirmed at the base of my dick. Her forelegs scrabbled on the floor. I thrusted several more times, my orgasm quickly approaching. Then I exploded. My cum shot down her gullet in great spurts, quickly at first and then more slowly, until I was spent.
I pulled her off my member. She hacked and spit, a dazed look in her tear-filled eyes as the oxygen returned color to her cheeks. She must have swallowed most my seed, but a trickle of white ran mixed with snot from her nose. Still gasping, she reassured me in a hoarse voice, somewhat bloodshot eyes wide and submissive, "That was really nice."
Author's Note
I added some detail to the masturbation scene here. In fact, there's a lot of extra detail from the time this was first published.
11/19/2015: I extended the throatfuck scene and made some other minor changes.
Fluttershy brushed my ass with a wingtip as I went back out the door to care for the animals. The early afternoon sun was warm on my face as I watched her stepping lightly down the path. Eyes closed, she hummed a happy tune (roughly, with the condition of her throat). I followed behind, watching her pink tail swaying from side to side, revealing her round ponut and full, pink vulva.
Soon we were nearly finished with the day's work. She gave me a shy look, cheeks blushing, and hid her muzzle behind a wing. That was enough to make me half hard again. She cantered off toward the chicken coop, and I caught up to her there. I leaned down, kissing her full on the mouth for a very long time, brushing a hand through her mane and using the other to stroke her wing.
When I finally pulled my tongue out of her mouth, she smiled at me, then quickly looked away. Her whole face turned red. "What if somepony sees us?"
"I don't care," I whispered before kissing her again. I knelt down to be at her height. With my right hand I caressed the length of her yellow, furry body, running my fingers over her cutie mark. Accommodating me, she shifted, turning her head to the side so our lips wouldn't part while my fingers searched between her ass cheeks. I found her vulva, hot and already soaking wet, and slowly slipped my fingers inside. She moaned softly and broke our kiss. I moved behind her, unzipping my pants. "I'm going to fuck you, Fluttershy."
"It's--it's still a little sore down there. I think."
I prodded at her marehood with my tip and rubbed the length of my shaft through the outer folds of her labia, thoroughly soaking my cock in her slippery juices. The sun shone down on us, and I looked up for a moment to see a gray pegasus flying nearby, almost crashing into a tree when she saw us, then flying away.
Fluttershy didn't notice our observer. "I--I want you inside me," she cooed. I was only too happy to oblige. I slowly guided my rod down into her folds, each giving way easily. She took a sharp intake of breath.
"Are you OK?"
Through gritted teeth, "Pull it out, pull it out!" I did, but that didn't stop her from grinding against my crotch. She whimpered, "Oh, Celestia, I want it so bad." Her forelegs dropped, her right cheek rested on the dirt, a mess of pink hair surrounding her head, as she looked back at me desperately.
Reaching around her haunches to caress her teats, I considered my options. Her teats were too small to fuck, and anyway I didn't think that would be enough to satisfy her. I could tell by her eyes, she definitely needed my dick. And that left only one choice.
With my left hand I pulled her tail up, and used my right to guide my throbbing dick toward her round, puckered asshole. I prodded at her back entrance, and she stopped moving, holding her breath, her visible left eye wide and scared. I played around the entrance with the tip, circling around her ponut, then making smaller circles at the tight hole. I looked into her eye again, and saw a mixture of fear and anticipation. Then, I tried to push the tip in, but it wouldn't go. I used my left hand to stroke her pussy again, then spread more of her juices on my cock. She bit her lip as I made another attempt to enter her dark chamber. I kept my eyes locked on hers as I worked it in, side to side, pushing, trying to find a way. With another push, suddenly the tip was inside. Her eyes closed in pain and every muscle in her body tensed as she sucked air again.
"Just relax, my love."
"Mmm-hmmm," she nodded. Slowly she began to breathe again, eyes still shut, and her tight asshole relaxed slightly. It was the tightest place my dick's ever been. I stood frozen with only my tip inside her as she got used to it. Her cheek pressed further into the dirt as she reached a forehoof back to start rubbing herself. "Go slow, if you don't mind." She began taking small gasps of air, and I slowly pushed myself deeper into her anus. First, her round ponut wrapped tightly around me as the head disappeared inside. Then, I slowly pushed further in. I could feel some shit on one side of her anal wall, and guided myself past it. At this point I didn't care. Her ass was amazing.
With her right forehoof clopping slowly at her pink, she reached her left back and gently started rubbing my balls. Her breaths got quicker, and she started grinding back on me, slowly taking in more of my length with each motion. I stood still, hands softly brushing her pink butterflies, as she did all the work for a while. "Deeper," she whispered, so I pulled her asscheeks apart slightly and pushed myself all the way in. She rocked against me even harder at this, moaning and bucking furiously as she came, dripping juices on my balls and into the dry ground.
She opened her eye again, and locked mine with a coy look. Her pussy still dripping its moisture on the ground, she braced her right forehoof again, still using her left to play with my balls. More skillfully now, she rocked her haunches up and down. She brushed her tail against my face. Oh, sweet Celestia, Fluttershy's asshole is tight.
"You're going to cum inside me," she announced. "I want all of it." She moved her ass in circular motions, rocking up and down rhythmically, I gripped her sides as I neared climax, and began thrusting inside her. My nuts tightened up in her hoof as I began shooting my load inside her. She moaned in pleasure and excitement, still moving her body in rhythm to mine as each hot jet of liquid sprayed inside her darkest place.
When she was sure I'd finished, she brought herself off my dick, and lay down in the dirt. I lay down next to her. I kissed her neck as the sun slowly moved, bringing us into the shadow of the cottage. We didn't say a word, and I softly stroked her yellow fur until the stars came out.
Author's Note
11/19/2015: Added a little detail to the initial penetration passage.
When it got too cold to stay outside, we went back in. We bathed together, and she giggled as I tickled her. I cleaned her dirty face, and kissed her tenderly.
We ate in a happy silence, while the bunny Angel pouted at his neglect.
I climbed into her bed, and she slowly climbed on top of me. "I--I think I'm ready now. But I think it might be better if I'm in control."
I nodded my understanding. She brushed her nipple against my dick, which instantly hardened at the touch. She kissed my chest, and worked her way down to my crotch. She kissed gingerly along the length of my shaft, licked the head and then slowly took it into her mouth. I felt her tongue circling the head and playing in the slit at the tip, before she slowly took three quarters of my length of it into her mouth. With my cock just barely exploring the entrance to her throat, she licked my shaft, then brought her head up and back down, repeating the motion several times. She released me, then began stroking my cock with her hooves as she looked at me with teary eyes, kissing the tip softly. "I'm sorry," she husked, "I can't do it the way you like."
"Oh, baby, don't worry about that. Come here."
She smiled and climbed back on top of me, hind legs on either side of my body and forelegs resting hooves on my chest. Fluttershy began rubbing my cock with her teats. They weren't big enough to wrap around it, but they were soft and lovely. Then, using her left hoof, she guided me inside her. Her moist, pink folds, enveloped me slowly, first the tip, and then slowly, with gradual grinding motions, she took the whole thing inside her. She was clearly in some pain, but the look on her face was mostly pleasure. Her mouth open slightly, she gazed into my eyes as she moved on top of me, her teats pressing against my belly with each downward motion. She looked like a yellow angel with her wings outstretched, pink hair cascading over her face and down her muzzle. I brushed the hair away from her left eye and cupped her face with my hands, gazing deeply into her turquoise eye as she gazed back at mine. She leaned in closer and cupped my face with her soft, feathered wingtips.
I ran my hands down to hold her haunches in place. began to thrust slightly in time with her slow movements. The control she had over the tightness of her vagina was amazing. With each upward motion, she tightened, her body wanting to hold onto my member. An overzealous motion caused me to slip outside of her, and she stopped to gradually guide me back inside. We made love slowly, but our thrusts obtained more range of motion as our excitement built. She lost strength and lay down on top of me, stroking the top of my head with a forehoof as her head pressed against my chest.
I whispered, "I love you, Fluttershy," and began stroking her back, between her wings. With my right thumb I rubbed the place where her left wing meets her body, and she groaned at that. (I have to remember that spot.) With my left hand I got the same reaction when I stroked her dock. With the middle finger, I probed her anus up to the first knuckle.
Nearing climax, Fluttershy lifted herself up on her forelegs again, staring into my eyes. "I love you," she said simply. "I want you to cum inside me." She moved faster, and I held tight to both cutie marks so my cock wouldn't slip out at the crucial moment. "Please cum, cum for me," she begged, mouth open, mane mussed all around her face. "Cum for me, I want you to cum," and I did, thrusting deep inside, spraying my seed into her womb. "I'm cumming!" she shouted, the loudest noise I've heard her make. She bucked hard, and I had to hold her even tighter to keep it inside as the last jets of my semen emptied out of me and into her. I felt hot moisture pouring out of her, her own juices mixing with mine as she shuddered one last time before slumping on top of me.
She brushed hair out of her eyes as she looked up at me, smiling with some embarrassment. "It--it stings a little. But I want..." she trailed off.
"What do you want, my love?"
"I--I," her voice lowered, "I want you to fill me up with it. Everywhere. I--" she blushed "I don't ever want to stop. At least, um, until my heat is done. If that's OK with you."
I kissed her on top of the head. "Of course."
Satisfied, my cock shrank slightly, and fell out of her, making more juices spill out of her. She licked my nipple, kissed it, and softly kissed her way down. She lapped up everything from my balls and my shaft, making me hard again. "It looks like he still wants to play," she smiled at me.
Locking my eyes with hers, she slowly brought three quarters of my length into her mouth, with increased confidence. She choked on it, shutting her eyes, and came up for air while she stroked me with her forehooves. She went down again, gagging, bringing tears to her eyes as she forced it down her throat even longer. She came up gasping, "I want your cum," she told me. She playfully bit the tip before going down again, gagging, my dick past her tonsils. I gripped the bedsheets and locked my knees, tense with pleasure, trying not to force it on her more than she could handle. She bobbed up and down closer to the tip, then took it again, bobbing up and down even deeper. I groaned and panted as she came up for air again, looking at me with watery eyes. "Do you like that?" I nodded, unable to speak, and that seemed to please her. She started rubbing herself with a hoof. She smiled slyly. "If--if you wanted to force me down on it, I'm, um," she licked the head of my cock and kissed it, "I'm not really strong enough to stop you."
Message received. Shutting her eyes, she went down on me again, taking it as far as she could. I started thrusting into her face, but her head bounced up. I grabbed the back of her head and held her in place. She pinned her ears back, and her hoof slopped at her pussy more furiously than before. She really likes to be abused. Tingles of excitement ran up my spine and shot down into my balls. I forced my dick all the way into her mouth, the end going past her tonsils. Her throat tightened firmly around my dick, and spasmed as she tried to swallow. I brought her up for air, just for a moment, before making her take my entire length again, savaging her throat with my dick as I pumped deep inside her mouth. Tears streamed down her face. With my cock fully inside her muzzle, she managed to get her mouth open a little wider, licking my balls. After several more moments, feeling her muscles massage my dick, I let her go. She came up coughing, a wild look in her eyes, spit and snot running down her muzzle. as she gasped for air. She began humping at her own hoof, moaning, while she stroked me between her right hoof and left wing. My mind went blank and I grabbed her head. She only struggled a little bit before allowing me to push it in again, to violate her mouth. She choked on my cock again and again, and I let her up to catch her breath. Each time I pushed her down, I fucked more forcefully than the last, and she came up more red-faced and messy each time. I pushed her down once again. She licked my balls with my rod down her throat, and she came violently on her own hoof. With renewed focus, she held my asscheeks with her forehooves, and allowed me to push and pull her mouth up and down the entire length of my dick.
"I'm almost there--" I gasped.
I forced her down harder than before, keeping her near the base. She choked it down. My balls emptied down her throat as she gulped every last drop. I let go, finally. She brought her face up, breathing heavily, and frankly looking like hell--or as bad as such a beautiful pony could look, which still isn't bad at all. "Oh, sweet Celestia, Luna, and Discord, that was amazing." She just smiled, wiped her face with the sheets, and laid her head down on my lap. I stroked her mane and scratched behind her ear while we both drifted off to sleep.
Author's Note
11/19/2015: I decided to make it more of a masochistic throat-fuck fetish for Fluttershy here, giving power over to Jack to take charge and force it down her throat. I also added some detail and anticipation.
The morning after our first romantic encounter, I woke to find Fluttershy's tail toying at my crotch again. Still spooning, my face in her mane and her ass at my navel, blue nightgown clinging to her equestrian curves. My little pony was ready to go. She turned her head to the side to give me an eager look. "I'm so happy to see you awake." My dick began to grow as she rubbed her hind legs on it. She gently brushed her wings against my belly, and rubbed my manhood between the fur of her hind legs. With a forehoof, she pulled her nightgown up, and pressed her rump against my abdomen. I reached down to her pliant teats, stroking each one in turn while she continued to jack me with her legs. Her smooth, cold hooves closed on my shaft, and I fingered her already-soaked clitoris.
Her long pink tail brushed against my hip, my ass. She started grinding against my hand, her tight flank rocking seductively while her plot rubbed against my stomach. She lost some of her skill with her hind legs in the process, but my excitement didn't subside. She moaned during climax, bucking hard against me while I struggled to keep my finger on her most sensitive spot. Warm liquid gushed out of her onto my hand. I began caressing her body while she returned her focus to me. She seemed a seasoned pro, mouth slightly open, watching my eyes as my excitement built. Soft fur and smooth hooves stroked me in rhythm. Her hind legs stroked me, her mane tickled my face while her warm breath hit my face and her eyes held me rapt with an eager look. My pleasure built, and she sensed it, making soft cooing and squeaking noises and building her speed and range of motion. Soon, I couldn't hold back, and shot a load of white, sticky liquid onto her legs and teats.
She smiled at the stupid look on my face, biting her lip. "We should probably go clean up. Angel gets very grumpy when he doesn't have his breakfast.
Author's Note
I added a bit more detail to this scene to make it better.
I went out back to feed the chickens, and one of them caught my eye. Since when does a chicken have a horn and an antler?
"I see you're having some trouble keeping up with her," it said.
Discord. Of course.
I got defensive. "Humans don't mate like this. This is too much. Maybe if I was 13 again, but at my age--"
"Tut tut tut, nopony wants to hear your excuses." He flashed into his true form, stroking his chin. "Well, I suppose I can help you out." A gleeful giggle escaped his mouth. "Yes, that will be perfect." He snapped his fingers, and I felt something happening to my crotch. "There, I gave you the virility of a stallion. Now this should be interesting. Don't let me down." Light hoofsteps approached. "Well, that's my cue. Toodle-oo!" With that, he flashed away.
Fluttershy trotted along with a slightly wobbly step and a contented smile on her face. As she bent down to greet a badger, I was struck by her kind beauty once again. I watched her attend to all the other animals, one by one, greeting each one with a happy smile and a wordless song. She really is beautiful.
She cantered to me. Her head at the height of my belly, she looked up at me with the most guileless smile I've ever witnessed. "Isn't this a lovely morning, Jack?"
I knelt down and kissed her full on the muzzle. My eyes, I'm sure, glazed over, and she caught the cue. She flapped her wings, rising, and turned around to brush my face with her tail seductively. She looked back at me with a heavy-lidded gaze, and flew toward her front door. I followed. Of course.
