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All I Had to do was Stop

by Caddy Finz
I learned the hard way why I should always stop for a school bus, and so did my whole town. Upon befriending the last pony I ever expected to, I'd also find out that it would be on us to save the world from a threat bent on capitalizing on my mistake

A thirty foot long bright yellow bus slowly comes to a stop. Red lights flash and a stop sign with even more lights on it sticks out of the side before the door slides open. What is a nearby driver to do? Pretty self explanatory, right? It should have been for me the day I decided to ignore the warnings. My name is Creampuff Lime and I took the life of another pony.

My whole life revolved around helping others, I could never even hurt a bug let alone one of my own kind. One day during spring break though, I decided that I was in too much of a hurry and a stopped school bus wasn't worth my time. Now, because of me, a precious little foal is dead and the town I grew up in, the town that I called home has been ripped off of its foundations and smashed to pieces. I cut short the life of a colt who had his whole life ahead of him and now I have to live with myself for the rest of my days.

On several occasions, I've been asked how I can live with myself. The answer is that I can't. Believe me, even I think the year I spent in jail was too good for the likes of me. I often thought of killing myself if it meant bringing closure to those who knew and loved that little colt. Fate would have other plans however, as I would be getting the help that I didn't deserve from a place I couldn't possibly have imagined and somepony I never expected to see. We end up becoming a pair of very unlikely friends whose hooves hold the fate of all of Upstate Manehattan and the world as we know it. This is my story. This is why I should have stopped.

Rated Mature for strong language, depictions of gore, and suicide attempts. The inspiration hit me one day when I was stopping for a school bus and a driver behind me whipped past me and nearly ran over the children getting off that bus. As an uncle with a niece who goes to school and another who will be soon, I take this very personally. Cover done by mix-up.

Cancelled
Suicide / Self Harm
Profanity
Gore
Slice of Life
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Death
Alternate Universe
Sad
Drama
 
OPP

59218 words: Estimated about 5 hours to read

14 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: The Day I Destroyed my Community 2018-05-09 01:32:03 UTC
    2876
  2. Chapter 2: Valedictorian to Felon 2018-05-11 17:53:33 UTC
    2787
  3. Chapter 3: Soft Iron 2018-06-05 04:49:40 UTC
    4874
  4. Chapter 4: One Year Later... 2018-07-13 01:30:53 UTC
    4123
  5. Chapter 5: A Different Way to Paint the Town Red 2018-07-31 03:21:13 UTC
    5591
  6. Chapter 6: Clutzy's Return 2018-08-13 20:46:12 UTC
    4132
  7. Chapter 7: Is it Madness? 2019-07-04 05:52:18 UTC
    4291
  8. Chapter 8: Okay, we've got a plan...now what? 2020-01-21 01:41:57 UTC
    3720
  9. Chapter 9: Neighborly Intervention 2020-02-01 04:21:11 UTC
    5218
  10. Chapter 10: The Devil Wears a Lab Coat 2020-02-12 03:19:36 UTC
    7330
  11. Chapter 11: A Survivor's Cry for Help 2020-02-26 04:15:47 UTC
    3502
  12. Chapter 12: By the Drill or the Slug 2020-02-28 01:07:17 UTC
    3430
  13. Chapter 13: If you Entrust your Life to a Ten Year Old... 2020-03-18 05:30:51 UTC
    3545
  14. Chapter 14: A More Transparent Blight 2020-04-18 03:27:49 UTC
    3799