Rewrite the Stars

by CrimsonRose97

First published

THIS IS THE MAIN SEQUEL

Six months after that fateful cruise, Spike and Rachel had become closer than ever. Through trials and rough patches into the relationship, they're hold strong and so much in love.

So much so that Spike asked Rachel to move in with him in Ponyville.

In Canterlot however, it isn't peaches and cream. Chancellor Neighsay, after being kicked out of court, bringing up how humans were slowly invading their world, bringing drugs, sicknesses and taking advantaged of ponykind. His views of human kind was sickening. Wanting all humans to leave their world.

But when turned away, he meets a sympathetic ally who can help him with his cause, even if it means committing treason.

With all that going in fear of a war, can Spike and Rachel relationship last?


If you guys want to know how it all began, please read A Week On a Cruise. If not? Well, ENJOY ANYWAY, DUDES!

The picture is mine