You're the beat to my heart

by BronyRemixStar

First published January 24th, 2013 22:50

A Love story about Octavia and Vinyl
My first attempt at a fan-fiction hope you enjoy please if you don't like it tell me what is wrong and i will try to fix it in future stories! Thanks!

Chapters

prologue
A normal day
A nightmare broken into a dream
Is this love?
Happy birthday Octavia!
A happy vacation or an epic tragedy?
A world turned black
Epilouge
Meet the roomies
A new happy life

prologue
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prologue

PROLOUGE

Its not easy having a roommate which you have strong feelings for and you're afraid to share them with her.
She says were just friends.
I wish she wouldn't say that, it breaks my heart.
I just love her so much; I’m afraid she'll just reject me and state that heart breaking fact that only she believes.
"We're just friends!, I can't imagine us as anything else!"
We're just friends!
We're just friends!
Those words rang in my head as a chick tries to break from an egg.
Pecking and pecking away at my mind.
I just hope it changes...

Author's Note

Before i go anywhere let me thank my friend for editing the more adult scenes any hates or likes go to him. Tell me if you want more of him

A normal day
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CHAPTER 2
A normal day

I woke to the sound of beating.
Not like you know fist to face or anything.
Like dubstep...
"Oh not again." I groaned as i rolled out of bed.
I forgot to mention she cleans the dishes everyday in thanks of me removing her rent so she stays here for free.
Well I did that for obvious reasons.
But you would think its nice, a roommate that cleans the dishes its just she cleans, * i facehoove, with wubs.
As i wobble down the stairs the dubstep started to shake the house and seemed to vibrate the sleepiness right out of me!
I was now fully awake!
I went downstairs and said good morning to my roommate.
"Morning Vinyl, do you mind turning that down just a bit please?" i asked
"Morning Octavia, but if i turn it down the dishes will clean slower." she said
"Its nice enough that you’re doing them." i stated
"Yea but you were the one who took away the rent i had to pay.” she said with a smirk
"Well ill be gone anyway ive got some shopping to do would you like anything?" i asked
"Nahh I’m good, later." she said as she waved goodbye
"Alright ill be back soon,” i said as i waved back and headed out the door
I got to the local market without a bother as most ponies tried not to disturb me because I always seemed in a bad mood.
Which of course was not it just seemed like it because of my well-dressed appearance.
I went to my first stand to get some carrots with a polite "Morning ma’am what can i get yah?" the stallion asked with a caring tone
"Just a bundle please."
"5 bits"
I handed him his pay took my carrots and continued onward.
I went from shop to shop.
From food to clothing to quills and paper to soap.
By the time I got back it was about a couple hours after midday and Vinyl was watching some TV.
"I’m back Vinyl." i called
She turned around and I literally immediately noticed the band aid just below her eye.
"Hey Octavia, what’s did you get I’m starved?"
I almost sprinting ran over to the table and set down the groceries and ran over to Vinyl.
"Vinyl what happened?!" I yelled, a little too over killing it
"I cut myself when pulling a knife out of the dishwasher, geez it’s not a big deal."
"You could have gotten hurt!" i yelled, again over killing it
"Why does it matter its just a little cut."
I realized how bad i over did it and tried to start over.
"Im sorry i don’t like seeing people in pain, are you okay?"
"Im not in pa-
I cut her off "again are you okay?"
"Im fine."
"Good now im gonna go cook us up some of your favorite." i said
Her eyes widened and beamed
"YESSS!" she yelled catching me off guard
I walked away and cooked us up some dinner which if I may add I did a rather well job at.
Afterwards i noticed it was dark out so i decided to clean up and head to bed.
"Im going to bed when are you coming" i called down to Vinyl after getting out of the shower
"Ehhh Later" she called back "Night"
"Goodnight"

A nightmare broken into a dream
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CHAPTER 3
A nightmare broken into a dream

I woke up to the sound of a blaring alarm i quickly shut it off afraid of startling Vinyl.
I looked at the clock and then the calendar.
My eyes widened
"Oh no OH NO NONONONO" i screamed as i ripped my way out of my sheets
Vinyl woke with a fright
"WHATS WRONG!"
"Im late, im never late!"
"Late to what?" she asked now annoyed of being woken
"My concert for the mayor and all the high people in town!"
"Oh..."
I grabbed my chello and practiclly bust down the door still looking horrible and sprinted as fast as she could to town hall.
By the time she got there she was sweaty covered in dirt hair messed up panting for air and besides her attempt of sprinting she still managed to be ten minuets late.
She walked in her head down afraid of embarrassment.
They looked PISSED.
The first person to break the silence after Octavia had set up was the mayor.
"You know this was supposed to be a thirty minuet private concert?"
I nodded
"Now i want an explanation for why you were late, don’t take too long i want to hear good music to calm my nerves."
"Well its just that I had a long day yesterday shopping cooking and taking care of my roommate who cut herself my apologizes."
"Well this better be good then.” said one of the higher class ponies in the crowd
As I began i immediately noticed something was wrong.
Horribly wrong.
I was in too much of a rush to tune the chello.
I looked up and noticed they all were about to explode with anger.
The mayor looked me in the eyes and said
"We waited ten extra minuets to hear this horror? GET OUT!"
I started tearing as i picked up my chello forgetting the case and walked out as i got into the streets I couldn’t contain it any longer I heard the mayor's words again and just let it all out as i ran home my face in my mane.
I opened the door slowly and saw Vinyl heating up some of last night’s carrot soup.
"Hey Octavia how'd it g-"
I was still crying as loud as i could and ran to the sofa and berried my face as deep as i could into the pillows to keep Vinyl from hearing me choke out tears.
She rushed over and sat down next to me and put a hoof on my back
"What’s the matter?"
I looked up from my pillowy cave and hugged her hard and cried out.
"Oh it was horrible not only the fact I was ten minuets late but i looked horrible my hair still all bed mane and sweaty and covered in dirt and I forgot too tune it!"
Vinyl looked down then returned her gaze to me.
"You know what buck them. If they're gonna treat you like that they don’t need your awesome ability."
I let go of my hug and looked her in the eyes.
"You think so?" I barely choked out
"I know so."
That’s when my feelings took over i closed my eyes and slowly forced myself to connect my lips with her.
Her lips were so soft and smooth.
I held the kiss together for a while and then slowly realized that Vinyl was taking over!
She slowly lowered me onto my back and kissed my all over starting from my mouth down to my neck then to my stomach then well... you know where.
It was like a dream come true!
I let out a quiet yet loud enough to hear moan.
Vinyl looked up and asked, "You like?"
I nodded and closed my eyes again and let her do the work.
But almost as quickly as it started I noticed she stopped I opened my eyes to see Vinyl was just sitting there looking kind of sad.
I got up and asked, "What’s wrong Vinyl?"
She looked at me with tears in the eyes "Don’t you mean what’s up, what was that all about Octavia?!"
I looked down guiltily
"I mean i can’t have just had sex with my best friend."
"Vinyl..."
She looked at me with the saddest look on her face.
"You see- I looked away "You see ever since we met I noticed something in you I haven’t noticed in any other pony, I saw myself we connect we have so much in common I was afraid to tell you because i was afraid you’d say no."
"So your saying- she started
I finished for her "I love you..."

Is this love?
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CHAPTER 4
Is this love?

Vinyl could do nothing but stare into, as it seemed to be a pony that loved her.
"So what your saying is my life has been mostly a lie?"
"Well not exactly but why do you think I cared so much over a little cut?"
Vinyl's eyes widened.
"Octavia im going to bed I need to think about this, I mean for Celestias sake your my best friend, goodnight."
As she walked up the stairs i couldn’t help but crying.
I went outside to make sure not to disturb her and I cried out into the night
"I knew i shouldn't have done it now not only have i lost my chances with someone perfect I lost a best friend what is wrong with me!"
This actually disturbed the ponies of ponyville because Octavia was usually just a quite chelloist and to hear her scream and cry.
But as if on cue Vinyl walked out and put a hoof on Octavia's shoulder.
"What?! What I did was horrible and ive lost all your resp-"
I was silenced by a passionate heart warming kiss.
We stood there for a few minuets our lips embraced.
When she finally pulled away the first things too come out of her mouth was
"I love you Octavia..."
My eyes lightened and my heart seemed to explode.
"Y-Y-You do?"
"Yes i realized you were right about having so much in common and I realized how much that i felt the same way the entire time."
I fell forward and put her into a passionate embrace.
"Oh Vinyl! This is the greatest day of my life!"
"Ours, ours Octavia."
"Of course, I mean that’s what I meant"
She silenced me with another kiss.
"Now lets get inside and finished what you started."
I blushed as we walked inside to start a night of very passionate lovemaking. Before I knew it we were upstairs, lying down in bed staring into each other’s eyes. We could both feel the sensation of love swirling around us in our pitch dark room; the world around us was black, but vinyl’s eyes still glowed; we leaned closer to each other our body heat grew hotter every inch. We leaned in for a kiss licking our lips till they were soaked, as soon as we met lips the great indescribable sexual ecstasy kicked in; we were making out in the dark just the two of us there was no sound except the frantic sound of our moist lips and wet tongues smacking and vinyl’s silent moans as we made out. I could feel vinyl’s hoof moving down between my haunches, I broke the pleasure filled kissing for a moment as soon as I felt the sensitive jolt. From bellow it was quiet except for our heavy breathing, “are you sure you want to do this” I murmured under my exhaustion vinyl lowed her eye’s and gave a nod. she looked so cute that the sex fuel inside me took over I cried out as loud as I could, almost on the verge of tears “OH VINYL” I pushed her over and violently locked lips with her; swinging my hooves around her our tongues cuddled as we exchanged saliva. I moved from her mouth and began to suckle along her neck, my drool trickling down her body I could feel her getting wetter bellow. I licked her down to her… well… pussy before I dare enter her void, I looked up at her, her face was a bright rose sweat trickled down her face, she panted and locked her hind hooves around my head forcing me into her wet hot vag. I began to lick slowly I could hear small moans slipping through her soft lips, I couldn’t take It anymore I stood up and put my legs in-between hers and we began to make love, we didn’t even start slow we just got to it until we were both moaning together our vocals of pleasure grew louder until they escaped the windows and walls echoing the streets of ponyville. about half a minute into our ride of pleasure filled sex, we came, we both came we could feel the hot fluids collided. I fell into the bed us both panting, our eyes began to grow heavy we both snuggled up together and lifted the sheets over us we kissed under the sheets light giggles came from under our breaths and we drifted of to sleep and dreamt of each others beauty and love.

Happy birthday Octavia!
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CHAPTER 6
Happy birthday Octavia!

Months passed as the happy couple had more and more experiences together greater tightening their love.
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I woke up and saw there lying next to me with her beautiful rose red eyes and her silky perfectly groomed chocolaty mane and coat.
"Octavia..." I whispered
"Hmm?" she groaned
"Im going out for a walk"
"Okay"
She was too asleep to probably understand me or remember that it was her birthday.
I slipped out of bed and out into the chilly November morning with nothing but my saddlebags and about one hundred bits I intended to spend it all on my special some pony.
Until about midday I was out shopping for wine candles flowers everything romantic and my special birthday present.
I had set up for Rarity to take her to her shop and make her a dress, while i was setting up.
Then it was time.
I called Rarity to walk her back home.
When she walked in I could tell by her voice that she was a little upset.
When Rarity finally left i hopped out and turned on the lights and yelled "SUPRISE!"
Without skipping a beat i hopped on set and blasted a new beat I had come up with on the spot.
When i was done I got down and knelt down and asked for her to dance we slowly were dancing to a slow song and exchanging passionate looks and kisses.
I made dinner, I tried being fancy as it was kind of Octavia's thing, which ultimately failed in an ugly plate of carrot soup, ON A PLATE, with a leaf in it.
As ugly as it was I still won an amazing kiss from my lovely marefriend.
When all was said and done it was time for her present.
"Are you ready for your present sweetie?"
"Oh you didn’t have too." even though i could tell in her eyes she wanted to know so desperately what her gift was.
"Before I show you let me point out this cost about a forth of my life savings but it was all worth it."
Octavia's jaw dropped
"Okay now you shouldn’t really ha-"
"Shhh"
Then i pulled out two shiny tickets to the Love Festival in the Crystal Empire.
"Vinyl! I can’t believe you were so thoughtful!" Octavia happily yelled
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Overwhelmed with joy I gripped Vinyl and combined our lips and slipped my tounge it announcing it was go time!
We fell over on a couch and she started kissing me on my neck and sucking hard enough to leave a big red mark.
She slowly lowered her kissing and was eventually down there licking me furiously.
She even tried out using her horn.
I liked it, a lot.
I made sure not to be so loud this time. She pulled out her horn was dripping with pre cum I moved over to her and began to suck the cum of her horn, my cum was sweet and warm I moved my tongue down her horn and began to kiss her I could hear the sparkly fluttering of magic above me her horn was glowing I now knew that she was completely turned on so I said this will kind of be like the third time we’ve had sex I feel like a pig she looked at me with a look that told me that this was true love she began to speak in an angel like voice if you feel like a pig than you’re a beautiful pig we both are sweet celestia I shouted I LOVE YOU I FUCKING LOVE YOU I spread her hind hooves and connected hers to mine we began to make sweet love we were both moaning I managed to speak under the pleasure oohhhh I love you so much she looked up at me while biting her bottom lip oohhh I love you too Vinyl im going to cum she looked up at me with a look of slight worry oohhh I think im going to cum too and surely we did that same heavenly feeling from before and we both let out cries of pleasure.

A happy vacation or an epic tragedy?
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CHAPTER 7
a happy vacation or an epic tragedy?!

Well it was the day of our vacation and had woken up early to pack.
We finished packing a little early so we decided we should eat before we go.
We took our bags with us and locked up and headed out looking for a place to eat.
I was used too cooking so I didn’t really know where any restaurant was.
We eventually found a place we'd heard about that had amazing hay fries so we stopped there and ate.
Well the rumors were true we both stuffed ourselves.
Then I blurted a question that was bugging me all day.
"Do you think anything bad will happen Vinyl?"
"What do you mean?"
"Like ive heard that some crazy pony was there and i don’t want you getting hurt."
"Look there just rumors and its your birthday I would throw myself in front of any danger to save you." she sighed as she kissed me on the lips
"Wed better get to the train station before it leaves, don’t you agree?"
"Yea lets go" i agreed
The ride was fun with nice sights except seeing the insane asylum in the distance gave me chills.
Which to my advantage Vinyl noticed and we participated in more making out.
Upon arrival I was surrounded in lights and of course crystals.
Crystal houses, crystal ponies, crystal everything!
We walked to our hotel liked nothing special was about to happen.
When we got there something that i will never forget happened there.
Vinyl proposed!
I didn't know how it was supposed to happen considering we were both mares and i was planning on doing it but it happened!
We celebrated with a little horn play to my delight. We fell onto the bed and began to make out Vinyl held me down I looked up at her and whispered this will be the first time we make love while you wear your glasses she slowly took them of and looked down at me there were those eyes the ones that glowed the ones I loved she began to squirm her mouth around i could hear her saliva gargle under her voice do you want a taste she said to me in a wet beautiful voice I blushed and said in a funny school girl voice to play along yes please her spit lowered into my mouth oh the taste that taste so full of flavor so full of love after the great pleasure session we snuggled up and slept until the next day.

We woke up the day of the Love Festival excited as any other young couple would be we got ready and prepared to be off and so we set off.
Even though there would have been plenty of food at the festival we decided to eat anyway.
We stopped at a place that had a sign that read best muffins in the crystal empire!
We walked in and the first thing we noticed everypony was on the ground and a unicorn had his horn pointed at the cashier demanding to put all the bits in the bag.
We walked in on a robbery!
He turned around when we walked in and demanded us on the ground and gave us five seconds to do it we were to stunned to move.
When we snapped out of it, it was too late he shot a bolt of light from his horn straight at me and the last thing i saw before i lost consciousness was a blob of brown jump in front of me, getting hit by the bolt and getting knocked back into me knocking so much wind out of me i blacked out.

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CHAPTER 8
a world turned black

I woke up in a bed hooked up too a bunch of machines with pain coursing through my body.
To my left was the brown blob I noticed earlier.
OCTAVIA!
I fell out of the bed pulling many machines over and causing a lot of pain as I toppled over.
I let a quite loud scream of pain as everything happened which it did rather quickly.
The nurses barged in and managed to get me up and dragged me away as I screamed OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! but they wouldn’t let me go.
Sterilize her!
Was the last thing I heard before everything went black again.
I woke up in a different room this time strapped down.
All I could think about was Octavia and thinking about her made me tear a little
A stallion walked in and introduced himself.
"Im Doctor Hooves, but feel free to just call me doctor or anything you'd like because here our top priority is satisfaction.
"How bout doctor jerk face" I quietly snickered
He chuckled to my surprise
I couldn’t just tear anymore I started full out crying like a two year old and managed to choke out "Is she okay?"
"Who? Oh the other one, well she’s hanging in there she’s rather strong for such a small mare."
"Hey she’s not just a little mare she’s the most beautiful smart and strong mare I know!" I could barely yell now because of the pain
"Are you two together, I mean in a relationship?"
I nodded and said, "proposed last night."
"Oh im so sorry..."
"For what?"
"She may be here a few months if you want her to survive, her wound needs extreme care an-"
He was cut off by the sound of tears.
"Mam?"
I couldn’t hold them in anymore I was crying a lot not a little like before but a lot.
"Im sorry, ill leave you alone now."
Weeks passed and I was finally released.
I just took our bags they had brought from the hotel and i left back to ponyville.
Getting back was worse all our friends were just waiting for us and when they only saw me come out they all raced forward to comfort me but i wouldn’t talk.
"Oh dear what happened to your coat and mane?" Rarity asked
I did start noticing that ever since i got the news my coat was getting grayer and grayer.
I gave them a quick story and ran away in tears.
I was lying in bed crying for three whole days
my tears would only halt for a little when they would try to comfort me and brought me food and water.
I wouldn’t eat or drink after all why would I if I was trying to end my own life?
Days passed by like centuries and nothing ever changed, months later I was lying above our sheets when they ALL tried to visit i could only manage a few words i hadn't ate in a few weeks.
The only words I got out were "WHY CANT I JUST DIE ALREADY?!"
The room grew silent.
I think we all heard the sounds of hoof steps getting closer.

When i got off at the train station i was surprised no pony was there to greet me
the only pony who talked to me was a pony i think who’s name was Bon Bon?
She said "Bless Celestia your alive you got to get home Vinyl has been trying to starve herself since she got back!"
She didn't have to tell me twice.
I ran there as fast as i could ignore the pain.
Once i got in there I heard one voice Vinyl screaming WHY CANT I JUST DIE ALREADY?! And it grew quiet.
I could hear them breathing as i got closer and closer.
When I got there I noticed how crowded it was.
I pushed with all my might through it and saw Vinyl there on the ground extremely skinny and grey.
I screamed VINYL! And ran and gave her the biggest hug and kiss combo anyone had ever seen.

Epilouge
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EPILOUGE

Winter had passed and spring showed a tremendous sign of hope for Vinyl and Octavia. Just as spring flowers bloomed so did their relationship. Octavia looked out their bedroom and saw Vinyl in a warm blanket staring at the sunset. She quickly trotted down to approach her, when Vinyl turned out of curiosity she just turned back toward the sunset and Octavia sat next to her. A tear flowed down Vinyl’s face “I caused you worry didn’t I”? Octavia did not answer but instead gave her a kiss on the cheek and told her everything would be okay Vinyl opened the blanket and Octavia joined in watching the sunset of vibrant shades turn into darkness.

THE END

Author's Note

I know it was kinda short but thanks for reading tell me what you thought!

Meet the roomies
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CHAPTER 1
Meet the roomies

My name is Octavia a quite popular chelloist residing in Ponyville, Equestria.
I share a house with most likely my best friend Vinyl Scratch who is also a popular artist.
Its just that she’s a dj.
But, however despite our differences we get along really well to the point that i have noticed some things about her.
We have allot of similarities such as we both play music, we like the same drinks, foods etcetera etcetera.
We never hide secrets we tell each other EVERYTHING, and when I say that boy do i mean it!
We share a room, not the bed of course! Just have the same room is all.
I like to watch her when she sleeps...
I’m not being a creep or anything!
Its just, she’s so beautiful, so breathtakingly amazing.
Is it weird to have feelings for someone like this?
I’ve never felt like this before.
It has its ups and downs.
Sometimes if I had a bad day ill come home and she'll comfort me.
Tell me its okay and hold me as if trying to protect me from reality.
Once I thought she may have the same feelings for me.
But after some thinking I blurted "Nonononono that’s ridiculous! Listen to yourself Octavia!"
Once i said that Vinyl turned around from her show and gave me a funny look.
"You alright Octavia?" she asked
"Yes yes fine just thinking aloud."
But no matter what i always think about her.
She’s the only one ive ever dreamt of.
I do with all the honesty in my heart i do believe she’s the one for me.
No one else just her.
With her messy sky blue mane, her maroon eyes and her snow white silky coat.
But now that I think about it she’s so attractive and popular she probably had the stallions all over her!
Dang it! how did I not notice it before!

Author's Note

One more thing sorry about grammar I was in a rush to get this uploaded and my editor forgot to finish

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CHAPTER 5
A new happy life

The days after seemed like the beginning of a whole new life.
For the first time in each of our lives that we had a mare friend!
Also i vowed to myself that i wouldn’t ruin this, I mean she’s perfect!
She was so happy!
"Vinyl im going to go tell everyone!"
"Are you really that happy about it?"
I gasped
"What, was it something i said?" Vinyl asked
"Last night was the best night ever and i don’t plan on ruining it I love you so much and ill never let you go and i want everyone to know!" I happily sang
"Alright just be back soon I don’t want to loose you."
"Don’t worry ill be back soon." I called to Vinyl
"I hope so..." was all i heard before I left
Now outside i wondered whom to tell first.
Then it hit me.
I don’t even have that many friends.
I thought for a second "I'll just tell the only people i know with other marefriends!"
As I set out i only had two couples to tell
Twilight and Trixie, Rainbow dash and Lightning dust.
As I set out I started to notice how many other ponies had been angrily eyeing me.
Was it because of my happily humming?
I had not time to think because before i knew it I had arrived at the library.
Happily I bounced up to the door and knocked.
"Helloooo?" a voice called from inside the library
"Hey is Twilight there?" I called back
I heard the door unlock and open and saw Trixie on the other side.
"Hey Trixie, Twilight there?" I asked cheerfully
"Oh look the one that kept us up all night with her sexual moans of pleasure."
Trixie said in a very annoyed tone
"Oh is that why everyone seems to be staring angrily?" i asked
"Trixie guesses so and some words of advice keep it down but what do you want Trixie doesn’t have forever."
"Sorry is Twilight here?"
"Trixie believes she went to go see Rainbow dash and Lightning dust to wish them luck."
"Perfect because that’s where im heading next, nice seeing you Trixie later!"
"Goodbye Octavia." she called back as i skipped away merrily
"So that’s why everypony seems to be mad at me." I thought aloud
"Exactly don’t be so loud next time" I heard from above
I looked up too see Rainbow dash and her marefriend Lightning dust snickering
"Oh hey guys!" I called
"Sorry about keeping you guys up last night, you guys were probably doing your own thing." I said then winking
Both of them blushed
"Yea we kind of were." Lightning dust threw in
"Don’t tell them!" Rainbow dash yelled
"No its fine." I giggled
"I just wanted to tell you two and twilight and her marefriend good luck and let you know i have one of my own now!" I called back up
"Yea we kind of already know!" Rainbow dash called back down making the three of them crack up
"Ha ha very funny, well im going home maybe we could have a little get together sometime!" I called
"Sounds fun!" Twilight called
"Later!"